seems you remapped some parts too . . .
okay there is nothing wrong if i give you a little mod again then xD
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okay there is nothing wrong if i give you a little mod again then xD
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- 00:30:205 (30205|3) - better to move this into first column to emphasize the vocals more better, since you didn't give enough balance after pressing this one 00:29:718 (29718|3,29880|3) -
- 00:53:637 (53637|2,53880|2) - they're actually have different sound/pitch, try to re-arrange them into different column too
- 00:54:610 (54610|0,54772|1) - move to 4 and 1 . . . that would be give better sequence with this pattern 00:54:529 (54529|1,54934|2,55096|2) -
- 01:02:313 - http://puu.sh/rb6nI/45b549ffcc.jpg
- 01:11:718 (71718|2) - move to first column, seems you've leaving that blank in long period of time . . . please make it more balance to plays
- 01:40:907 (100907|0) - why not end the long note at here 01:41:718 - seems the vocal itself is still going on, same as like you did on this part 01:38:313 (98313|0) -
[Another] - 00:21:123 - seems this feels so bad for me because you didn't express the instrument flows well . . . my suggestion http://puu.sh/rb6TY/f2de97e65c.jpg
- 00:24:853 (24853|3,25015|3,25177|3,25340|3) - this pattern are not really works well with vocal imo, try to arrange them like this http://puu.sh/rb72T/28ac310c02.jpg it can be applied start on here 00:25:191 -
- 00:49:502 (49502|3) - doubled whistle hitsound here . . . delete one sample
- 01:04:745 (64745|2,64907|2) - they're have different sound/pitch . . . so you can Ctrl G this 01:04:907 (64907|2,64988|1) -
- 01:10:177 (70177|2,70340|1,70502|2) - re-arrange to 1 3 2 column for more balance
- 01:12:772 (72772|2) - move to first column, same reason as above ^
- 01:13:988 (73988|2,73988|3,74150|2,74150|3) - they are really different sound type . . . highly recommended to arrange them with different pattern form too
- 01:26:799 - try this http://puu.sh/rb7kW/4b743576ea.jpg it's far more fit with current rhythm flows imo
- 01:28:096 (88096|2,88259|0,88421|3) - to 1 4 3 and 01:28:988 (88988|2) - to 4 . . . same reason as above ^
- 01:30:205 (90205|0) - if you decide to add a note in here . . . then you should add a note in here too 01:30:367 - to make the flows more perfect to hit, like example http://puu.sh/rb7vY/ccf37a8096.jpg
- 01:48:529 - you've missing a note for kick + clap sound here . . . please add that (also add clap hitsound too)
- 01:50:150 (110150|1) - move to 4th column for better balance pattern
[Black Another] - 01:02:718 (62718|2,62880|2) - this plays more balance at 2nd column
- 01:07:664 - seems you've missing a note for clap part here . . . do the same like you did at previous part 01:06:367 (66367|1,66367|3,66367|0,67015|3,67015|2,67015|0) -