1. Basic - 4Key (1.26 stars, 247 notes)
2. Hyper - 4Key (2.34 stars, 592 notes)
3. Standard - 4Key (1.68 stars, 382 notes)

Lenfried- wrote:

i dun liek pink hats

General:

Remove the "4k" in diff names. If you will not make diff of other keycounts in this mapset, just remove the 4k.
Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/376340

Find some metadata for this.

col 1-4

Hyper

00:01:900 (1900|1,1900|0,2067|2) - ctrl h then 00:02:067 - add in col 1
00:02:400 (2400|1) - more expressive to move to 1
00:03:067 (3067|3,3067|1,3067|0,3234|2,3234|0,3234|3,3567|2,3567|0,3567|1,3734|2,3734|1,3734|3) - too early for triples, convert to doubles
00:04:567 (4567|2,4567|3) - move to 1 and 2 then 00:04:734 (4734|1) - move to 3
00:05:067 (5067|2) - ^if done, move to 2
00:05:400 - add in 3 if ^ is applied
00:06:067 - maybe add 1
00:06:567 (6567|1) - move to 4 for that cool jack effect
00:06:734 (6734|2) - ^ if done, move to 2
00:06:400 (6400|0) - move to 2
00:07:067 - add 3
00:07:400 - add 2
00:07:734 - ^
00:08:067 - add 1 and 2
00:09:900 (9900|2,9900|3,10234|3,10234|1) - should be singles
00:10:734 - might want to chart the stream here
00:12:400 - must be doubles only
00:13:067 - add a note
00:13:400 - add doubles
00:16:067 - add a note
00:17:400 - ^
00:18:234 - should be single
00:19:734 (19734|1) - move to 4
00:20:900 - add a note
00:21:234 - chart stream or 00:21:400 - 00:21:567 - add doubles
00:18:567 - add note
00:22:567 - ^
00:22:734 - add doubles
ill stop right here

You might want to keep a more consistent layering. Since I'm the type of mapper who charts everything in a layer i chose to chart, I threw all those kinda of suggestions. Could have broken your style but idk. If you did chart vocals, my mod wont be that much of a help but yeah im not really good w/ anime stuff.
Good luck!
Breakdown:
Mod focused on these sounds:
Percussion and synth. No vocals.

lejel wrote:

(from queue)
Hi~
I'm sorry if it's not that good
But I've tried my best and here's what i found

Column 1|2|3|4

Basic

OD should be 7 cause there are few sliders
00:02:400 - add single
00:04:734 - add to col 2
00:15:234 (15234|1,15567|2) - move to the white line below them
00:18:234 - If you follow the vocals you need a single here
00:19:400 - add single
00:23:234 (23234|2) - move to 00:23:067
00:26:734 - add single col 1 or 2
00:27:400 - add single col 2 or 4
00:32:400 (32400|0,33067|1,33734|2,34400|3,35067|2,35734|1) - ctrl+h to make variations
00:36:067 - add single
00:55:400 (55400|0) - move to col 2 or 4
00:57:067 (57067|0) - move to col 2 or 3
01:08:400 (68400|0,68900|1,69400|3,69900|0) - add singles at the end each of them

Standard

00:04:567 (4567|3) - Make double (from previous pattern)
00:14:400 (14400|0) - ends at 00:14:734
00:16:734 (16734|1) - Double because it's louder in the song (there's electric guitar sound) while instead 00:17:067 (17067|3,17067|2) should be single
00:18:067 (18067|0,18400|3,18400|2) - Same as ^
00:17:400 (17400|0) - If you follow the vocals, this isn't needed
00:22:734 (22734|3) - Same as ^
00:44:400 (44400|1,44400|2) - According to your HS, this should be single then 00:44:734 (44734|3) should be double, and do for the following same pattern XD
00:46:067 (46067|3,55400|3,56734|3) - you forgot to change into clap?
00:48:067 (48067|0,48067|1) - should be single and instead 00:48:234 (48234|2,48567|3,48900|2) - are doubles
00:51:567 (51567|2,51567|1) - single
01:01:234 (61234|0,61567|2,62234|3) - what are they doing there ._.

Hyper

HP drain change to at least 7
00:03:067 (3067|3,3067|0,3234|3,3234|0) - only to be persistent, dont make jacks
00:08:067 (8067|0,8067|1) - ghosts?
00:11:567 (11567|2) - move to col 1
00:12:734 (12734|3) - move to col 3
00:13:400 (13400|0,13400|3) - ghosts?
00:20:900 (20900|1) - ghosts? if you want to keep it, keep persistent and add to 00:21:234 which has the same sound
00:55:734 (55734|0,55734|2,55900|1,55900|3,56067|3,56067|2,56234|3,56234|1,56400|3,56400|0) - Whoa those doubles
01:02:734 (62734|2) - move to col 4
01:09:900 (69900|1,69900|3,69900|0,70067|2) - Keep the double-double instead of triple-single
01:12:067 (72067|0,72067|1,72067|2,72234|2,72234|1,72234|0) - Still sound the same, don't use triple
01:12:567 (72567|2,72567|3,72567|1,72734|0) - use double-double but don't jack them
01:23:400 (83400|0) - double

I feel some more unnecessary doubles here.. I suggest to see which part should be emphasized and not~

The song's good, keep working on it ^^
Anyway thank you for queuing in my page!

hikikuman wrote:

Mod request from where.
Column : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Hyper

00:02:067 - add note. just make it like 00:00:401 (401|0,401|2,567|1,567|3,900|3,900|1,1067|2,1067|0,1400|0,1400|3,1567|2,1567|1) -
00:05:067 (5067|2,5067|3,5067|0) - i think double is better. delete 3
00:07:067 - add note 2
00:09:067 - ^3
00:09:150 (9150|3) - move to 3
00:09:234 (9234|0) - ^2
00:09:317 (9317|3) - ^1
00:14:400 (14400|2) - ^1
00:14:567 (14567|3) - ^3
00:14:650 (14650|0) - ^4
00:15:067 (15067|1,15234|2) - move 1x to right
00:17:400 - add note 2
00:17:567 (17567|0) - delete
00:20:067 (20067|2,20234|3) - ctrl G
00:24:900 (24900|2,25234|2) - delete
00:27:067 (27067|1) - move to 3
00:31:400 (31400|3,31400|1,31567|2,31567|0) - ctrl H
00:40:900 (40900|1) - move to 4
00:41:234 (41234|1) - ^4
00:43:734 (43734|0,44234|3) - delete
00:45:234 (45234|2) - move to 4
00:46:400 (46400|3,46567|1,46567|0,46734|2) - make double? like 00:45:067 (45067|2,45067|0,45234|1,45234|3,45400|0,45400|3) -
00:52:400 (52400|3) - move to 2
00:53:067 - add note 1
00:53:234 (53234|0) - move to 2
00:55:400 (55400|3) - ^3
00:57:400 - make it double like 00:56:067 (56067|3,56067|1) -
00:57:400 - ^
00:58:067 (58067|0) - move to 2
00:59:567 (59567|2) - ^2
01:08:067 (68067|3) - ^3
01:13:067 (73067|1) - delete
01:14:067 - add note

Standard

00:01:900 (1900|2,1900|0,2067|3) - ctrl G
00:04:567 (4567|1,4567|2,4734|0) - ^
00:10:734 (10734|2) - move to 4
00:19:400 - add note at 4
00:23:734 (23734|1) - delete
00:29:067 (29067|3,29067|1) - ctrl H
00:36:900 (36900|0) - move to 2
00:37:734 (37734|1,38400|2) - move 1x to left
00:39:234 (39234|3) - move to 3
00:39:734 - add note 4
00:40:400 - ^1
00:48:900 (48900|1) - move to 1
00:55:400 - 00:56:734 - add note 3

Basic

00:02:067 (2067|3) - make single note
00:15:067 - add note 1
00:15:400 - ^4
00:28:234 (28234|3) - move to 3
00:28:734 - add note 1
01:08:400 (68400|0,68900|1,69400|3,69900|0) - make single note

Good luck and have a nice day><

Cipse wrote:

Random mod
Feel free to reject stuff, especially since I haven't modded a lot
Unless I use editor links, I'm referring to the columns as |1|2|3|4|

Basic

00:07:400 (7400|2) - This is inconsistent with 00:12:734 (12734|3) - Fixed
00:10:734 (10734|3) - Maybe move this to 00:10:734 (10734|2) -, as it avoids the repeated note Fixed
00:36:400 (36400|3,36567|2,36900|0) - Would change to {1, 2, 4}, to avoid the repeated note Fixed

Standard

00:25:900 (25900|3) - What the heck I didn't even realize that!
00:49:567 - it feels right to have another note here (preferably at {2} ) Added

Hyper

00:08:400 (8400|2,8400|0,8484|1,8567|3,8650|2,8734|0,8734|1) - Isn't this too hard for the difficulty level? Maybe change it to {1, 2, 3, 4, 1+2}, or something similar. Was a bit too hard. Fixed
It's kinda unfortunate, because those were the most fun parts for me to play

As above

00:09:067
00:13:734
00:14:400
01:16:400
01:17:067
01:21:734

01:22:734 (82734|2) - Would add another note at 01:22:734 (82734|3) - Added

00:26:234 (26234|0) - This note feels slightly out of place I think it's alright.

00:37:900 - I would probably remove one note from this chord Fixed

As above

00:38:400
00:38:900
00:39:400

00:44:400 (44400|3) - I would probably remove this note, as it comes from a triple note chord and is a "jack" After thinking about it; removed.

01:00:400 (60400|0,60400|1,60734|1,60734|0) - I'm not really sure about this part. There's nothing really wrong with it but it feels a bit off to me. I would move some notes so that they aren't the same as the last chord (which I like the way it is ) Shifted slightly

01:18:567 (78567|0,78650|3,78734|1,78734|2) - would change this to {1, 2, 3+4}, {2, 3, 1+4} or something similar

General Stuff

Basic has a HP of 6. Standard has a HP of 4 Didn't even realize!

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Pretty well made beatmap. Wouldn't be surprised if you managed to get it ranked Thanks!

Wonki wrote:

HEYY XD

Basic

00:23:400 - 1
00:23:567 - 2
00:24:400 - 2
00:24:567 - 1


00:25:900 -00:26:734 - Maybe it is better to re-map(i think )
00:25:567 - 00:25:900 - 2(long note)
00:25:900 - 1
00:26:067 - 3
00:26:234 - 4
00:26:400 - ~00:26:734 - 2(long)
00:26:734 - 1


00:29:734 - 2
00:30:067 - miss 1
00:36:400 - 2
00:36:567 - 1
00:36:900 - 3or4
00:54:567 - 3

Standard

00:09:067 - ~00:09:734 - 4(long)
00:09:734 - 2
00:31:900 - 2
00:32:067 - 3,4
00:37:234 - 1
00:37:400 - 2,3
00:50:567 - 1
00:50:567 - 2,3
00:50:984 - delete
00:51:900 - 3
00:52:067 - 1,2
01:18:734 - 1,2

Hyper

00:13:400 - 4
00:22:400 - 00:22:734 - 3
01:15:900 - 2
01:16:067 - 1,3

AlisceaSparku wrote:

Hello, Doug Dimmadome! how's your son? Still making lemonade...
Aliscea here, from TechNoir's Neo-Plaza Mania Modding Queue
NM Mod as requested!

Please note that the mod inside this spoilerbox are only my suggestions and you are free to reject them. Just explain the reason why you rejected them so that I can learn more about your mapping style

I also tend to give wrong screenshots, so kindly inform me if I did send a wrong screenshot xD

If I suggested something like ctrl+g, please remember to take care of the hitsounds :p

Columns: 1/2/3/4

[General]

Artist: 田村ゆかり, then put in the romanised artist the English Version, which is Tamura Yukari
Title: MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね! (yes, according to the std ranked version metadata, the "ne" is translated.)
I probably should have paid more attention

[Basic]

why is hp so low, please buff it into 6.5 ((
od also make it 6.5 for brutality to newbies >:) p.s i am no noobpwner
turn off widescreen support also (unless you have a video. idr if you have a video lol)
Alright.

00:05:400 - slider here plz, for the long clap Done

00:09:734 (9734|2) - cut these into 1/2 sliders?you made 1/2 single notes in 00:15:067 - 00:15:734 - so it could be consistent. I actually like this a lot, added. (http://puu.sh/pBfVX/a1a40db5f9.jpg) suggestion there

00:15:067 (15067|0,15234|1,15400|3,15567|2) - turn into sliders!! slider fun Sliders are fun!

00:29:400 - strong sound here. I suggest adding Done

00:31:900 - here also ^

00:32:067 - ^ ^

00:37:234 - ^ ^

00:37:400 - ^ ^

01:13:400 - add slider for more fun!! DDDDDD also for long clap Sliders!

01:17:734 - 01:18:400 - into 1/2 sliders for slider overdose ^

01:18:400 (78400|3) - cut slider at 01:18:734 - and new note here. Plays better this way. Added

General Mod:
=Well, it's understandable that this is a basic difficulty and it needs to be as easy as possible // however i think it's still important to emphasize strong sounds like cymbals by using note counts, such as putting 2 notes for cymbals, etc. Will look into it.

-you kinda missed a lot of very, very, very audible sounds. I suggest putting notes on them. ^

i'm kinda tired now, i'll mod it again soon Can't wait!
please PM me if I forget your map ( i won't i hope, because me and Han have gdocx to fill up )

Good luck with your map!!
Thank you!