KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE ~Sore wa Akatsuki · forum

Bearizm

Joined October 2013

Bearizm 2016-03-09T02:18:16+00:00

Avishay wrote:
[Expert]
00:07:599 (1,2,3) - I don't think it's that good tbh, there's nothing on the sliderend in terms of instruments and the movement is really sharp, I couldn't figure why this pattern felt so wrong until I got into the editor and looked, the music simply does not support it that well. better than having a stop and then a double because the slider end is a good indication to when to click that double.
00:13:074 (4) - Overmap is not always bad, but I feel like it simply doesn't fit here, my fingers didn't felt forced to press on those notes, especially with the almost non-audible hitsound, applies to all of these notes like 00:14:274 (4) - 00:15:474 (5) - (Although this one felt okay since it was part of a tripet and I did not have that odd feeling of a unfitting 1/4 right after a slider.) and so on. ok so i man up'd and removed every triples in this part. I agree it does look forced.
00:36:999 (4,5,6) - This triplet actually exists in the song, but why the odd placement? Just because 6's instrument is stronger it doesn't mean you have to increase the spacing here, the emphasization for the note happens right after it occurs with the sharp movement into the next note, a single spaced triplet would be nicer and great. i wanna be the new edgy mapper. I'd like to keep it in all seriousness I don't see why not. I think it's a pattern that people are so afraid of using because it has a change of DS in a triple, and I want to make it common somehow. Besides, it's a good way to emphasize the sudden increase of tone in the vocals.
00:51:549 (4,5,6) - Is the linear placement necessary? Placing 6 a bit further down creates a nicer pattern. looks random if i move it anywhere else. I have no reason to move this downwards. 00:51:849 (6) - is a stronger drum sound so i'm gonna emphasize it with an even larger DS in which people could see as obvious since it's back and forth with larger DS.
00:54:699 (2,3) - Not really a fan of those, feels honestly forced and taking the momentum from the song itself, as the movement is linear and the strong drum doesn't get anything in terms of emphasization. uhh, I know I'm mapping the instruments and shit but I use the vocals to determine the DS of these. 00:53:649 - when she says "chino!" it's very strong, and 00:53:649 - when she says "yukue" here it's a lot more... calm(?) not sure what the right word is but it's less powerful I guess. 00:55:299 - while this is also calm, there's a crash at 00:55:599 - so I want to increase the gradually increase back the intensity of the map by making jumps. I hope this part is justified.
01:18:399 (1,2) - This is spaced waaaaay too close, not only the degree of movement changes in a way that takes some strength from the movement, the spacing suddenly gets so low and it ruins the momentum of the stream. yes, but it's a triple, not a jump. I don't want to make a spaced triple with a massive DS as they play like shit in general, and they gradually increase of course because like u said, the DS dropped by a lot here and I wanna bring it back up.
01:21:474 (4,5) - I find it bad for the same reasons I listed above, music does not warrant such placement. huh?
I guess I am fine with the triplet overmaps as long as they are not following a sliderend. I don't quite understand what this means sorry.
I'm done.

sorry about the reds :C. Don't take it too personal or anything. Thanks for modding!

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Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2016-03-09T08:31:55+00:00

Avishay wrote:
I fucking hate my life, I was about to finish the mod, accidently pressed mouse4 and a draft was not saved for some reason so I had to rewrite the mod from Fury's diff, hopefully I didn't forget anything as I am too tired to actually mod it completely again, goddamnit.

13.5 mins drain time yay

[Kib Insane]
00:04:599 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Is reducing the slider towards the downbeat like that is really the best movement? I felt like it has to be spaced more. better structural emphasis imo
00:07:599 (1) - Why is this snapped on 1/8? It's awkward as hell lol. something happened i forgot
00:13:149 (3) - CTRL+G give bigger emphasization towards 00:13:449 (4) - and a nicer movement overall. ruins the kind of pattern i was going for, spaced it out though to compromise
00:15:249 (2,3,4,1) - Movement from 4 to 1 is lacking, the degree is awkward and spacing should be revised too, try something like this: http://puu.sh/nztgk/bf027f6605.jpg it plays really well did something
00:30:249 (5,6,1) - That caught me off-guard, mainly because of the reduced SV in this section, how about a slightly more forgiving pattern, like this - http://puu.sh/nzttm/10bc75f623.jpg err ur image makes it unrankable lol.
01:24:849 (2) - Why the whistle with drum addition? :O It sounds wrong.

I'm done.

no comment is fix

dunno didnt do hs lol

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Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2016-03-09T09:31:53+00:00

Xexxar wrote:
i literally dont know what 1/4ths you're refering to. 00:22:674 00:24:324 00:26:274 -

okay but what are you looking for then? spacing is easy on 3 due to slider leniency so what am I to do? Change the slider placement's, perhaps something like that - http://puu.sh/nAbXU/b78a509198.jpg?

similar situation, this is an easier difficulty so I didnt want to make too nuts of a stream. idk what would make this better. Some 1/4 sliders could be used, others diff have made it executed it in various interesting ways, try to come up with something that does that too, if you can't, I'll try to help.

@Bearizm, on the last 2, I was referring to 00:07:599 and the overmaps at the beginning (which you did remove). And why wouldn't you just use a 3/4 slider rather than end the slider on nothing and have a double jump right afterwards?

Bearizm

1,213 posts

Joined October 2013

Bearizm 2016-03-09T14:19:12+00:00

http://puu.sh/nAnyr.zip

update. missed a lot of claps and shit, fixed em.

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2016-03-09T20:17:40+00:00

@Kibbleru I prefer my NCs as they are because I really dislike if a map has low combos everywhere, I will keep NCs at every 2 measures and sometimes to emphasize some special patterns.

@Avishay Fixed the pattern, great suggestion! The gaps after the spinners should be fine as this is a Normal+ difficulty, the recovery time is between the recommended time for Normal and Hard. The high BPM doesn't really matter in that case because the mapset is upper tier of difficulty anyway.

Thanks for modding! :3

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Anxient

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Anxient 2016-03-09T23:30:05+00:00

update for asphyxia-chan-sama-dono's mod: http://puu.sh/nAVds/0489d3c45a.osu

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2016-03-09T23:53:37+00:00

ヽ(〃･ω･)ﾉ

[Mercury]

Most of the sliders (00:01:599 (1) - ) aren't really appealing visually, but since that seems to be your style choice, I wont nitpick about them.
00:03:999 (1) - Is there a specific reason this is moved more down from the actual stream? It'd be better off if it was consistent with 00:05:199 (1) - .
00:09:549 (1) - You could put this note at x:167 y:48 so it forms a straight line with 00:09:249 (1,1) - , alongside with being more consistent how you made 00:09:399 (2,2,2) - , looks off currently.
00:24:399 (1) - Could curve this slider more, so it creates this nice, symmetrical-ish feeling with 00:23:949 (3) - , and both of those sliders would blanket nicely with 00:23:199 (1) - 's head. That, and you'd slider would look nicer with 00:24:849 (2,3) - because they use heavier curves.
Example
00:32:049 (2,3,4) - Triplet is at the wrong place, you should listen to the song with 25~50%. The triplet starts actually on the red tick at 00:32:199 - . Also, playing white tick triplets is somewhat unintuitive.
00:42:699 (2) - Maybe just me, but visually speaking here would be better if you'd copy 00:42:399 (1) - and then CTRL + H'd so it would look like an actual copy of the previous slider.
00:48:399 (1) - Forgot to mute the sliderend? It's quite noisy, and you seemed to do it elsewhere so add it here as well!
00:59:949 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - If you want to, stream could be a bit more blanket-friendly, would make it nice visually!
Example
01:17:499 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Even though the part is intense, I don't think jumps this huge are necessarily needed. I'd reduce them by a little, but up to you.
01:27:399 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The stream, visually, isn't the best, mainly because the curve around 01:27:624 (6,7,8) - isn't as smooth as it could be. Try this one instead? Would be a lot nicer.
Example

[Bearizm's Expert]

00:09:999 (1) - Would be fun to see an SV increase here, but no idea if you want to play with SV changes at all. It'd make the transition to the slow part more interesting!
00:36:999 (4,5,6) - Is this a mistake or not? Assuming it isn't, I can kind of see the idea of it, especially if you want variation, but it just ends up being really inconsistent and weird. I'd stick to the normal triplets and how you've spaced them, would be better.
01:16:299 (2) - Seeing how you've made some of your previous patterns, try moving this to x:297 y:110 for the straight line with 01:16:599 (4,7) - ?

[Extra]

00:06:099 (4) - I wouldn't recommend ending a slider on a really strong beat, feels really underwhelming while playing. I'd just make it a 3/4 slider and then adding a note at 00:06:399 - so the strong beat gets the emphasizing it needs.
00:21:999 (1,1) - I don't see the reason for two new combos, wouldn't it be better if 00:22:299 (1) - was with 00:21:999 (1) - ?
00:54:849 (2) - In your highest difficulty, whenever there was an extended slider, you'd make the end soft, do it here too? If so, would apply to similar ones.
I liked this difficulty a lot more, I feel like the jumps were perfectly spaced to the music, and not over-the-top, nice!

[Fury's Insane]

00:07:299 (4) - You should try placing this at x:367 y:41 so it gets visually the same amount of spacing as 00:07:449 (5) - has, and it forms a better straight line, similar to what you have at 00:05:799 (3,4,5) - .
00:11:049 (1) - Is this NC really necessary? I really don't see the point in it, you could just remove it, pair it up with 00:10:749 (3) - or 00:11:349 (1) - because they have similar sound to the slider.
00:26:049 (2,2) - I assume your intention was to stack both of these, and if so, they're a bit off so you could adjust it a tad bit.
Sorry, couldn't point out much because the difficulty isn't to my own liking and I can't really get the idea behind it.

[Kibbleru's Insane]

00:06:849 (2) - Just an idea, but you could move it to x:196 y:234 so the transition from 00:06:399 (1) - feels a bit smoother and 00:06:849 (2) - forms a blanket.
00:07:599 (1) - I think you fixed this already, looking at your response post, but here it is again. Snap it to 1/4.
00:30:699 (1,1,1) - Could silence sliderends because they're annoyingly noisy.
01:20:049 (1) - Is the NC here necessary? Wouldn't it be just fine to pair it with 01:19:599 (1) - ?

[Anxient's Hard]

Modded IRC, log's here!
Log
00:59 Asphyxia: sup
01:00 Anxient: suup
01:00 *Asphyxia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/913592 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE ~Sore wa Akatsuki no You ni~ (TV size) [Anxient's Hard]]
01:01 Anxient: gotcha
01:01 *Anxient is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/913592 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE ~Sore wa Akatsuki no You ni~ (TV size) [Anxient's Hard]]
01:01 Asphyxia: do you pay attention to visuals or do you just map to playability
01:01 Anxient: mm both why
01:01 Asphyxia: because the beginning is really messy visually, but if you don't pay attention to those
01:01 Asphyxia: I'd rather skip those suggestions
01:01 Anxient: 00:08:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - if youre talking about this, ill try to fix it
01:02 Anxient: but thats the only i see that looks messy
01:02 Asphyxia: well
01:02 Asphyxia: 00:01:599 (1) -
01:02 Asphyxia: and the one you pointed out
01:02 Asphyxia: and then uhh
01:02 Anxient: oh
01:02 Asphyxia: 00:02:799 (1) - feels out of place with the rest
01:02 Asphyxia: doesnt fit
01:02 Asphyxia: 00:17:199 (1) -
01:02 Asphyxia: stuff like that is just
01:02 Asphyxia: meh
01:03 Asphyxia: 00:24:849 (2,4) -
01:03 Anxient: are we still talking about visuals
01:03 Asphyxia: yeah
01:05 Asphyxia: I can include all this to the actual mod if you want to, along with a brief explanation why I think they don't work
01:05 Asphyxia: but if you already disagree, I don't think it's worth it to push these for you
01:05 Anxient: changed the 1st slider to this http://puu.sh/nATPR/ea60aae772.jpg
01:06 Asphyxia: the old one had a nice idea behind it, but the issue was that it wasn't symmetrical
01:06 Anxient: 00:02:799 (1) - changed to [http://puu.sh/nATRI/0f1f8362c3.jpg this]
01:06 Asphyxia: thus it looked sloppy
01:06 Anxient: nah i didnt really like that slider anyway
01:06 Asphyxia: short explanation for the red point sliders: I don't think they fit to the map as a whole, mainly because you tend to use very soft curved sliders
01:07 Asphyxia: and whenever you use red pointers, they tend to be curved a lot
01:07 Anxient: okay ill revise them
01:07 Asphyxia: or have these really sharp angles
01:08 Anxient: 00:24:849 (2,4) - http://puu.sh/nAU0f/f848d81e8e.jpg
01:09 Anxient: 00:17:199 (1) - http://puu.sh/nAU0P/7aa204e8ed.jpg
01:09 Asphyxia: yeah that's a lot better imo
01:09 Anxient: mk
01:09 Anxient: im still figuring out how to fix 00:09:175 - this part
01:10 Asphyxia: do you want me to mod your diff fully while we're at it or should I mod the rest on the actual mod?
01:11 Anxient: if you wanna irc this mod then sure i dont see why not
01:11 Asphyxia: sure
01:11 Anxient: its 6:11 in the morning and i have way too much time in my hands
01:12 Asphyxia: 00:07:149 (3,1) - this applies to similar cases, but I see this as you trying to blanket 00:07:599 (1) - with 00:07:149 (3) -
01:12 Asphyxia: but it's a bit off
01:12 Asphyxia: if you wanna, you could just adjust it slightly to make the blankets perfect
01:12 Anxient: 00:09:249 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/nAUb5/a638262fcb.jpg
01:12 Asphyxia: some are already, some aren't
01:12 Anxient: ooh
01:12 Anxient: blanketting issues
01:12 Asphyxia: if you dont care
01:12 Asphyxia: just skip
01:12 Asphyxia: lol
01:12 Anxient: i care lol
01:13 Anxient: i just fixed em
01:13 Asphyxia: 00:07:599 (1,2,1) - second thing is that even tho this is really small
01:13 Asphyxia: they aren't paralell
01:13 Asphyxia: or were you going for that exactly?
01:14 Asphyxia: imo they'd look neater if they were, or if they would be angled in a way that you could tell they werent supposed to be parallel
01:14 Asphyxia: idk if that makes sense but uh
01:14 Anxient: mm
01:14 Anxient: okay
01:14 Anxient: made them parallel
01:15 Asphyxia: 00:29:649 (2,3) - transition visually from 2's end to 3's start isn't the most nice thing ever, but thats really small
01:15 Asphyxia: up to you xD
01:15 Anxient: my hero!
01:15 Anxient: ill keep that :l
01:16 Asphyxia: 00:55:599 (1) - wouldnt necessarily overlap this with the previous slider, looks kind of messy and seems inconsistent
01:16 Asphyxia: maybe do the classic blanket or then stack with 00:55:149 (3) - 's head?
01:17 Asphyxia: 01:05:199 (1) - would be a really cool idea if you could curve this slider in a similar way that you did 01:06:399 (1) - so you'd stay consistent
01:17 Asphyxia: because all of them have this similar sound to them
01:18 Asphyxia: 01:19:599 (1) - NC doesn't seem that necessary, I'd just pair it up with 01:20:049 (1) - but up to you as always
01:18 Anxient: 00:55:599 (1) - where do i put this .-.
01:19 Asphyxia: puush is being slow, sigh
01:20 Anxient: .-.
01:20 Asphyxia: you could blanket it with https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4690082
01:20 Asphyxia: for example
01:20 Asphyxia: or stack with 3's head
01:20 Asphyxia: or rotate it enough to make it symmetrical with 00:55:149 (3) -
01:20 Anxient: i went with the blanket
01:20 Asphyxia: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4690087
01:20 Anxient: http://puu.sh/nAUGg/3462cbf45e.jpg
01:21 Asphyxia: all of those seem better than the overlapping one imo
01:21 Asphyxia: iight
01:21 Asphyxia: but that's it
01:21 Asphyxia: playability-wise seems nice
01:21 Asphyxia: oh actually
01:21 Anxient: changed up the rest of the pattern to http://puu.sh/nAUJz/f7c3dbe0ca.jpg
01:22 Asphyxia: 01:06:849 (2,2) - if you want to, you could take these notes and place them in the middle of the sliders
01:22 Asphyxia: but I see your logic behind the current pattern so its fine
01:22 Asphyxia: e.g https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4690096
01:22 Asphyxia: but it's w/e
01:22 Anxient: gotcha
01:22 Anxient: ill keep the old pattern
01:23 Asphyxia: kk
01:23 Asphyxia: 00:02:799 -
01:23 Asphyxia: also the intro has a loooot of claps
01:23 Anxient: the middle of the sliders?
01:23 Asphyxia: I know they're prob intentional but maybe you could reduce some?
01:23 Asphyxia: sounds weird imo
01:23 Anxient: i copied the hitsounds from bearizm's diff
01:24 Anxient: 01:06:849 (2,2) - wdum by this again
01:24 Anxient: 01:06:399 (1,2,1) - make the DS equal?
01:24 Asphyxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4690096
01:24 Asphyxia: like currently, you have the orange slider + note mapped in DS
01:24 Asphyxia: but the picture that I linked, I moved the note in-between of those two sliders
01:24 Asphyxia: so the spacing looks equal
01:25 Asphyxia: instead of http://puu.sh/nAUXt/551c4a4138.jpg
01:25 Asphyxia: but it's fine because the small jump into 01:06:999 (1) - and 01:07:599 (1) - and make sense because they're the strong beats
01:26 Anxient: http://puu.sh/nAV15/1f96767a04.jpg
01:26 Anxient: i used 1.5x ds for the two notes
01:26 Asphyxia: yea like that, but your current one is fine too so it's w/e
01:26 Asphyxia: but thats all for your diff
01:26 Anxient: yeah higher spacing = higher sr
01:26 Anxient: my target was supposed to be 3.75
01:26 Anxient: LKK
01:26 Anxient: :LL
01:27 Anxient: but that didnt budge the sr for the map at all so w/e

[Desperate's Advanced]

00:23:199 (1) - Why does this slider have the distance increase, yet any of the next ones don't? I'd prefer if you kept it consistent with others.
I really like the style you used to map this, super good diff!

[taku's Normal]

00:01:599 (1,3) - Blanket is a bit off.
00:09:999 (3,1) - The break between is quite long, you could add a note on the crash sound which is at 00:11:649 - , would be quite nice.
01:19:599 (1,1) - Again, don't think NCs are necessary.

[Mikii's Easy]

00:01:599 (1) - Would be better if you'd extend the slider by 1/2 more, because the red tick has the most important beat. Sure, ending the slider on the important beat isn't cool, but considering this is an easy, and you can't really go for 1/2 rhythm's here, covering the important beats with anything is better than not covering them at all.
00:08:349 (1) - Rhythm-wise, doesn't fit that well, mainly because the 00:08:799 - sounds like it starts a new section. Better to go for a rhythm like this.
Example
00:11:949 (1) - NC seems really unnecessary, consider removing it?
00:16:749 (1) - Same as above, because the reverse starts a new section in the music, it really doesn't fit. Consider something similar rhythm-wise here too?
00:18:849 (3,1) - This goes inconsistent with how you mapped the previous part. The strong beat that you should follow is on 00:19:599 - , just like 00:14:799 (1) - . Remove the repeat of 00:18:849 (3) - and you can either leave the rhythm as it is, or then extend the slider to 00:19:299 - . Both work better than the current one.
00:23:949 (4,1) - Same here, the beat that should get emphasized is at 00:24:399 - . Feels really awkward now. ;
00:31:299 - You could add a note here, the beat is quite important.
00:37:749 (1) - NC necessary? Would be better if you'd just remove it, feels spammy which isn't great.
00:38:799 (1) - ^
00:47:949 (1) - You should end your spinner 00:49:599 - here instead, because the red ticks have the beats, not the stanza. This way, the gap between the spinner and the slider gets to the measure that's needed as well.
00:56:949 (4,5,1) - Same here, if you listen closely with 25~50%, you can clearly hear that the beats are on the red ticks again, making this awkward to play.
01:14:349 (4,1) - ^
01:26:349 (4,1) - ^
01:28:899 - Why'd you skip the beat, definitely add a note here, it being the last beat of the song.
Difficulty is good, but rhythm needs work, you skipped a ton of the important beats.

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2016-03-10T04:25:20+00:00

man none of these were an issue b4 xexxar got the diff q: keepo

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taku

254 posts

Joined February 2011

taku 2016-03-10T21:26:52+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
taku
00:56:799 (1,1) - NC's a bit overdone imho but. uhm.. fixed
01:06:399 (1,1) - ^ ^

Avishay wrote:
[Normal]
I don't know which default clap you have on the soft soundset, but please use the normal-hitclap at the kiai, just like you had at 00:50:799 (1) -, it sounds much great compared to the current clap I hear. somehow my hitsounds changed, so i redid it
Great diff! thankyou!

Asphyxia wrote:
ヽ(〃･ω･)ﾉ
[taku's Normal]
00:01:599 (1,3) - Blanket is a bit off. fixed
00:09:999 (3,1) - The break between is quite long, you could add a note on the crash sound which is at 00:11:649 - , would be quite nice. note added
01:19:599 (1,1) - Again, don't think NCs are necessary. hmm i feel like there needs to be a nc because of the kiai refresh if you know what i mean

thx!

caode

osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:岸田教団&THE明星ロケッツ
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Source:GATE（ゲート）自衛隊　彼の地にて、斯く戦えり
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321,297,58749,2,0,P|327:327|321:351,2,50,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
290,257,59199,6,0,P|302:201|298:137,1,100,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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503,92,60399,6,0,P|502:141|491:190,1,100,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
475,237,60849,2,0,P|475:286|486:335,1,100,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
447,366,61299,2,0,P|414:378|390:375,1,50,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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211,372,62049,1,0,1:0:0:0:
119,332,62349,2,0,P|126:364|128:403,2,50,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
90,291,62799,6,0,P|68:235|90:191,1,100,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
111,160,63249,2,0,P|179:170|217:172,1,100,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,176,63699,2,0,P|289:176|332:168,1,50,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
358,163,63999,6,0,P|380:107|358:63,1,100,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
335,32,64449,1,0,1:0:0:0:
236,51,64749,2,0,P|168:61|130:63,1,100,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
88,47,65199,6,0,P|52:97|63:150,1,100,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
73,179,65649,1,0,1:0:0:0:
121,266,65949,1,0,3:0:0:0:
121,266,66099,2,0,P|144:257|175:259,1,50,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
218,267,66399,6,0,P|260:280|357:238,1,150,4|0,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
380,198,66999,2,0,P|393:156|351:59,1,150,4|0,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
313,33,67599,6,0,P|271:20|202:43,1,100,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
175,59,68049,2,0,P|108:55|67:49,2,100,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
218,84,68799,6,0,P|244:134|234:187,1,100,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
227,225,69249,1,0,1:0:0:0:
204,322,69549,2,0,P|266:326|323:338,1,100,0|2,3:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
353,326,69999,6,0,P|349:276|374:234,1,100,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
415,206,70449,1,0,1:0:0:0:
428,106,70749,2,0,P|439:84|470:57,2,50,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
382,126,71199,6,0,P|326:136|284:116,1,100,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
247,90,71649,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,109,71949,2,0,P|140:77|140:44,2,50,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
157,158,72399,6,0,P|146:201|144:257,1,100,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
154,305,72849,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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281,276,73599,6,0,P|322:251|375:257,1,100,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
418,275,74049,1,0,1:0:0:0:
486,201,74349,2,0,P|509:229|514:252,2,50,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
461,156,74799,6,0,P|453:94|450:46,1,100,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
444,6,75249,1,0,1:0:0:0:
365,67,75549,2,0,L|370:118,2,50,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,44,75999,6,0,P|262:40|213:79,1,100,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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383,203,88899,1,4,3:2:0:0:

I Must Decrease

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I Must Decrease 2016-03-10T22:01:52+00:00

Avishay wrote:
Xexxar wrote:
i literally dont know what 1/4ths you're refering to. 00:22:674 00:24:324 00:26:274 -

okay but what are you looking for then? spacing is easy on 3 due to slider leniency so what am I to do? Change the slider placement's, perhaps something like that - http://puu.sh/nAbXU/b78a509198.jpg? Applied

similar situation, this is an easier difficulty so I didnt want to make too nuts of a stream. idk what would make this better. Some 1/4 sliders could be used, others diff have made it executed it in various interesting ways, try to come up with something that does that too, if you can't, I'll try to help. tried something dank

Asphyxia wrote:
ヽ(〃･ω･)ﾉ

[Mercury]
Most of the sliders (00:01:599 (1) - ) aren't really appealing visually, but since that seems to be your style choice, I wont nitpick about them. thanks darling
00:03:999 (1) - Is there a specific reason this is moved more down from the actual stream? It'd be better off if it was consistent with 00:05:199 (1) - . applied but i liked previous just cause it looked cool
00:09:549 (1) - You could put this note at x:167 y:48 so it forms a straight line with 00:09:249 (1,1) - , alongside with being more consistent how you made 00:09:399 (2,2,2) - , looks off currently. applied
00:24:399 (1) - Could curve this slider more, so it creates this nice, symmetrical-ish feeling with 00:23:949 (3) - , and both of those sliders would blanket nicely with 00:23:199 (1) - 's head. That, and you'd slider would look nicer with 00:24:849 (2,3) - because they use heavier curves. adjusted
Example
00:32:049 (2,3,4) - Triplet is at the wrong place, you should listen to the song with 25~50%. The triplet starts actually on the red tick at 00:32:199 - . Also, playing white tick triplets is somewhat unintuitive. wow im bad mapper
00:42:699 (2) - Maybe just me, but visually speaking here would be better if you'd copy 00:42:399 (1) - and then CTRL + H'd so it would look like an actual copy of the previous slider. adjusted
00:48:399 (1) - Forgot to mute the sliderend? It's quite noisy, and you seemed to do it elsewhere so add it here as well! i am bad mapper
00:59:949 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - If you want to, stream could be a bit more blanket-friendly, would make it nice visually! applied
Example
01:17:499 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Even though the part is intense, I don't think jumps this huge are necessarily needed. I'd reduce them by a little, but up to you. idk, I kinda agree but i'll leave them for now probably will nerf before qualify.
01:27:399 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The stream, visually, isn't the best, mainly because the curve around 01:27:624 (6,7,8) - isn't as smooth as it could be. Try this one instead? Would be a lot nicer. ok so i applied this but i really dont think it looks that good. would like other opinions.
Example
[Extra]
00:06:099 (4) - I wouldn't recommend ending a slider on a really strong beat, feels really underwhelming while playing. I'd just make it a 3/4 slider and then adding a note at 00:06:399 - so the strong beat gets the emphasizing it needs. applied
00:21:999 (1,1) - I don't see the reason for two new combos, wouldn't it be better if 00:22:299 (1) - was with 00:21:999 (1) - ? fixed in non updated version already
00:54:849 (2) - In your highest difficulty, whenever there was an extended slider, you'd make the end soft, do it here too? If so, would apply to similar ones. fixed
I liked this difficulty a lot more, I feel like the jumps were perfectly spaced to the music, and not over-the-top, nice! top is more fun tho

for the diff below I will be applying these mods since mikii = mia but not at this time

[Mikii's Easy]
00:01:599 (1) - Would be better if you'd extend the slider by 1/2 more, because the red tick has the most important beat. Sure, ending the slider on the important beat isn't cool, but considering this is an easy, and you can't really go for 1/2 rhythm's here, covering the important beats with anything is better than not covering them at all.
00:08:349 (1) - Rhythm-wise, doesn't fit that well, mainly because the 00:08:799 - sounds like it starts a new section. Better to go for a rhythm like this.
Example
00:11:949 (1) - NC seems really unnecessary, consider removing it?
00:16:749 (1) - Same as above, because the reverse starts a new section in the music, it really doesn't fit. Consider something similar rhythm-wise here too?
00:18:849 (3,1) - This goes inconsistent with how you mapped the previous part. The strong beat that you should follow is on 00:19:599 - , just like 00:14:799 (1) - . Remove the repeat of 00:18:849 (3) - and you can either leave the rhythm as it is, or then extend the slider to 00:19:299 - . Both work better than the current one.
00:23:949 (4,1) - Same here, the beat that should get emphasized is at 00:24:399 - . Feels really awkward now. ;
00:31:299 - You could add a note here, the beat is quite important.
00:37:749 (1) - NC necessary? Would be better if you'd just remove it, feels spammy which isn't great.
00:38:799 (1) - ^
00:47:949 (1) - You should end your spinner 00:49:599 - here instead, because the red ticks have the beats, not the stanza. This way, the gap between the spinner and the slider gets to the measure that's needed as well.
00:56:949 (4,5,1) - Same here, if you listen closely with 25~50%, you can clearly hear that the beats are on the red ticks again, making this awkward to play.
01:14:349 (4,1) - ^
01:26:349 (4,1) - ^
01:28:899 - Why'd you skip the beat, definitely add a note here, it being the last beat of the song.
Difficulty is good, but rhythm needs work, you skipped a ton of the important beats.

All diffs have been updated to the latest provided version I have received.

Those who haven't responded to Asphyxia's Mod:

Desperate-kun
Bearizm
~~EchoingFury~~

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EchoingFury

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EchoingFury 2016-03-10T23:56:34+00:00

Thanks for the mod at first, comments and changelog below:

SPOILER

00:07:299 (4) - You should try placing this at x:367 y:41 so it gets visually the same amount of spacing as 00:07:449 (5) - has, and it forms a better straight line, similar to what you have at 00:05:799 (3,4,5) - .
Good Idea, I also moved 3 a little to the left so they have equal spacing.

00:11:049 (1) - Is this NC really necessary? I really don't see the point in it, you could just remove it, pair it up with 00:10:749 (3) - or 00:11:349 (1) - because they have similar sound to the slider.
Removed NC, good point.

00:26:049 (2,2) - I assume your intention was to stack both of these, and if so, they're a bit off so you could adjust it a tad bit.
Sorry, couldn't point out much because the difficulty isn't to my own liking and I can't really get the idea behind it.
It's fine, I didn't even realize the stackability there, they are so far apart that it didn't matter to me, changed it in retrospect, looks better now.

Mikii

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Mikii 2016-03-11T01:01:59+00:00

placeholder

Making an easy for this map is so difficult, I'll work on it

http://puu.sh/nFoLl/198138aa8f.txt

Last edited by Mikii 2016-03-13T20:52:44+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Yoshimaro

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Yoshimaro 2016-03-11T18:08:00+00:00

:C

Anxient

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Anxient 2016-03-12T02:14:58+00:00

- Yoshimaro - wrote:
:C

>:c

Bearizm

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Bearizm 2016-03-12T02:53:27+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
[Bearizm's Expert]
00:09:999 (1) - Would be fun to see an SV increase here, but no idea if you want to play with SV changes at all. It'd make the transition to the slow part more interesting! agreed. !goodshit
00:36:999 (4,5,6) - Is this a mistake or not? Assuming it isn't, I can kind of see the idea of it, especially if you want variation, but it just ends up being really inconsistent and weird. I'd stick to the normal triplets and how you've spaced them, would be better. auauauauuauaua idk I really like this one but people have been pointing this out.
01:16:299 (2) - Seeing how you've made some of your previous patterns, try moving this to x:297 y:110 for the straight line with 01:16:599 (4,7) - ? oOOoooo nice

Thanks for the mod! :d
http://puu.sh/nDpUs.zip

I Must Decrease

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I Must Decrease 2016-03-13T00:20:59+00:00

waiting on mikii or until i get fed up and map an easy

and i guess im also waiting on the other set to rank (OR DQ MUAHAHAHAHA?!?!?!?)

Rizen

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Rizen 2016-03-19T12:31:35+00:00

_handholding

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_handholding 2016-04-04T02:44:22+00:00

4 extras 1 Insane

Feels about right

I Must Decrease

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I Must Decrease 2016-04-05T02:01:42+00:00

Kisses wrote:
4 extras 1 Insane

Feels about right

just get better and you can play more!

Avishay

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Avishay 2016-04-09T12:37:53+00:00

Ermmmmm, rechcking, why is this such a long set damn, will focus on Easy

[Easy]

Hitsounds are really odd to play.. Don't copy them if you did. Some exmaples -
00:03:999 (3) - Clap on sliderend lands on a regular drum that is part of a stream, nothing special.
00:13:599 (3) - Why the drum addition? It sounds odd, regular clap just like at 00:12:399 (1) - works well.
etc etc
And some places where movement / placement could be more friendly for beginners -
00:09:549 (4,1) - 00:29:199 (1,2,3) - 00:56:799 (3,1,2) -

I will recommend getting more mods on this first >.>

After you've done so, please catch me in game so we can actually push this forward.

Coin

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Coin 2016-04-13T19:58:49+00:00

[Easy]

This is gonna be a short mod, as the diff is quite well executed. General timing and spacing is on point, but I got one major and two minor issues with the diff.

Major = Bold font
Minor = Normal font

Rhythm/flow

00:26:499 (4) - I'd suggest to have this object on the next, upcoming red beat. Makes it fit to the rhythm. I'd suggest you relocate this object too in this case, to make it fitting to the change.

00:28:149 (3,1) - Tried to map according to the previous and ongoing rhythm. This section is kind of awkward though. The singing starts about between the sliders in timing, but map doesn't have any element here. I'd suggest making the sliders longer, as adding a new object here would make it kind of hard for a easy diff.

01:17:049 (1) - I see why was chosen for a short spinner here, but it leaves a gap inbetween the next section and the spinner. Maybe add some spice inbetween?

Arusamour

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Arusamour 2016-04-14T08:18:27+00:00

quick mod

00:18:399 (2) - kinda awkward transition to 00:19:599 (4). http://i.imgur.com/LzfZP2H.png ??
idfk this is easy diff, practically perfect map

I Must Decrease

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I Must Decrease 2016-04-14T19:06:38+00:00

deleted easy diff due to request of mikii

will have either have anxient map it or myself.

hopefully then we can move the set forward

Feb

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Feb 2016-04-18T14:05:37+00:00

u still need the ez?
if so i creat sum

Anxient

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Anxient 2016-04-18T14:08:50+00:00

xexxar pls let feb map it i dont want to neck myself over the hell beat of kisida kyodan

I Must Decrease

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I Must Decrease 2016-04-21T01:30:09+00:00

k on hold till i remap top diff cause its anus to me now

Anxient

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Anxient 2016-04-21T03:39:59+00:00

end me

Doj

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Doj 2016-05-03T21:25:02+00:00

nice

I Must Decrease

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I Must Decrease 2016-05-07T20:38:23+00:00

thanks

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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SnowNiNo_ 2016-05-11T04:25:36+00:00

:<

Anxient

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Anxient 2016-05-18T06:24:58+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

:<

xexar stp being lazy fk and fix metadaTa you already ranksd soda war nmqknjbvgijoke'l
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I Must Decrease

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I Must Decrease 2016-07-10T20:27:23+00:00

Anxient wrote:
SnowNiNo_ wrote:

:<
xexar stp being lazy fk and fix metadaTa you already ranksd soda war nmqknjbvgijoke'l
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sa

It's time.

MaridiuS

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MaridiuS 2016-07-10T21:26:38+00:00

Mod from modreq ;d

[Mercury]
00:04:599 (3,4,5) - It would be nice of these 3 circles to have same spacing as 00:02:349 (1,2,3) - as they're essentially the same sounds
00:05:649 (2,3,4,5) - I really dislike those clap sounds on easy and slow parts..
00:07:149 (4,6) - i'd ctrl+g them for better flow and adjust spacing if necessary. It also makes a nice blanket with 00:08:049 (3) - if 6 is placed on (4)
00:41:949 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - my suggestion is to make some sick 2stacks skystar 2012 mapping right here xd since it's the highest difficulty anyways
Another things that i noticed is that the easy parts are way too easy, i'd recommend increasing spacing a bit on them, because compared to the hard parts they are way too easy xd
00:52:749 (4,5) - imo this jump should be larger than 00:52:899 (5,6) - because Ma-Ka happens on these two beats
00:58:449 (3,2) - is there really a need for this pattern to be one of its kind in the whole section with this kind of overlap ;v
00:58:899 (2,1) - blanket it?

[Extra]
00:07:224 - unused beat
00:11:049 (4,1,2) - imo they should have the same shape
00:15:249 (2,3) - This is too close
00:18:399 (1,2) - blanket spacing compared to 00:19:149 (3,1) - bleeds my eyes ;d
00:22:749 (4) - I'd make it a cirlce and 1/2 slider for vocals
00:24:849 (2) - make it 1/2 and add a 2stack after it
00:32:799 (1,2) - slidershape is not identical
00:32:049 (2,3,4,5) - I see no particular reason for this jump to be much larger than any other in the section
00:31:599 (1,2) - also this kinda denies the nature of your map, u usually place circles on the completely reversed flow of the slider
00:40:299 (2) - I'd make it similar to (1) but change appearance to 00:40:599 (3) -
00:51:999 (1,2) - too close
00:51:999 (1) - i''d consider changing shape as it is on the same shape as 00:51:399 (3) - but follows guitar vs vocals
00:54:099 (4,5) - i'd increase spacing a bit here
01:10:449 (2,3) - it isn't perfect blanket but u were close lul
01:12:399 (1,2) - i think the blanket spacing is too close compared to your usual spacing, it's especially unusual for closer blankets in a hard part of map
01:20:799 (1,2) - ^

I Must Decrease

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I Must Decrease 2016-07-10T21:47:03+00:00

MaridiuS wrote:
Mod from modreq ;d

[Mercury]
00:04:599 (3,4,5) - It would be nice of these 3 circles to have same spacing as 00:02:349 (1,2,3) - as they're essentially the same sounds they already do
00:05:649 (2,3,4,5) - I really dislike those clap sounds on easy and slow parts.. fits in my opinion
00:07:149 (4,6) - i'd ctrl+g them for better flow and adjust spacing if necessary. It also makes a nice blanket with 00:08:049 (3) - if 6 is placed on (4) maybe but not atm
00:41:949 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - my suggestion is to make some sick 2stacks skystar 2012 mapping right here xd since it's the highest difficulty anyways what do you mean by this?
Another things that i noticed is that the easy parts are way too easy, i'd recommend increasing spacing a bit on them, because compared to the hard parts they are way too easy xd
00:52:749 (4,5) - imo this jump should be larger than 00:52:899 (5,6) - because Ma-Ka happens on these two beats disagree, clap plus overall feeling before cymbal is raising intensity
00:58:449 (3,2) - is there really a need for this pattern to be one of its kind in the whole section with this kind of overlap ;v but its not even full overlap
00:58:899 (2,1) - blanket it? done

[Extra]
00:07:224 - unused beat not even a beat, plus, jumps fit better here anyway
00:11:049 (4,1,2) - imo they should have the same shape applied
00:15:249 (2,3) - This is too close applied
00:18:399 (1,2) - blanket spacing compared to 00:19:149 (3,1) - bleeds my eyes ;d
00:22:749 (4) - I'd make it a cirlce and 1/2 slider for vocals following guitar here, i think it fits nicely
00:24:849 (2) - make it 1/2 and add a 2stack after it following guitar here, i think it fits nicely
00:32:799 (1,2) - slidershape is not identical applied
00:32:049 (2,3,4,5) - I see no particular reason for this jump to be much larger than any other in the section applied
00:31:599 (1,2) - also this kinda denies the nature of your map, u usually place circles on the completely reversed flow of the slider
00:40:299 (2) - I'd make it similar to (1) but change appearance to 00:40:599 (3) - adjusted
00:51:999 (1,2) - too close applied
00:51:999 (1) - i''d consider changing shape as it is on the same shape as 00:51:399 (3) - but follows guitar vs vocals adjusted
00:54:099 (4,5) - i'd increase spacing a bit here applied
01:10:449 (2,3) - it isn't perfect blanket but u were close lul applied
01:12:399 (1,2) - i think the blanket spacing is too close compared to your usual spacing, it's especially unusual for closer blankets in a hard part of map applied
01:20:799 (1,2) - ^ applied

Shiro

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Shiro 2016-07-11T20:32:55+00:00

2016-07-11 22:06 Xexxar: hi
2016-07-11 22:06 Xexxar: did i ever show you my gate map a while back
2016-07-11 22:06 Shiro: don't think
2016-07-11 22:06 Xexxar: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/912697 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE ~Sore wa Akatsuki no You ni~ (TV size)]
2016-07-11 22:06 Xexxar: basically my top diff is questionable
2016-07-11 22:07 Shiro: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/912697 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE ~Sore wa Akatsuki no You ni~ (TV size) [Mercury]]
2016-07-11 22:09 Shiro: I'm not sure how I nearly FC'd this
2016-07-11 22:09 Xexxar: what do you think of that
2016-07-11 22:09 Shiro: that was very uncomfortable to play
2016-07-11 22:11 Shiro: offset is probably off too
2016-07-11 22:11 Shiro: overall imo the spacing is too big
2016-07-11 22:11 Xexxar: it is
2016-07-11 22:11 Xexxar: think i should give up on the set then?
2016-07-11 22:16 Xexxar: lower my maps spacing
2016-07-11 22:16 Shiro: for the mercury diff
2016-07-11 22:16 Xexxar: im guessing?
2016-07-11 22:16 Shiro: 00:09:249 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - these are really REALLY uncomfortable to play
2016-07-11 22:17 Shiro: reduce their spacing and change their angle to a less
2016-07-11 22:17 Shiro: 45°ish
2016-07-11 22:17 Shiro: in this direction, it's hell
2016-07-11 22:17 Shiro: control+H would make them play better
2016-07-11 22:17 Shiro: 00:36:099 (4,5) - space those out a bit
2016-07-11 22:17 Shiro: like 00:35:949 (3,4) - 
2016-07-11 22:18 Shiro: maybe a triangle
2016-07-11 22:18 Xexxar: already planned on that
2016-07-11 22:18 Shiro: 00:45:099 (2) - id rather you split this in 1/2 slider+circle
2016-07-11 22:18 Shiro: the triple is really odd to play
2016-07-11 22:18 Shiro: cause it starts on a sliderend
2016-07-11 22:18 Shiro: i never got it right
2016-07-11 22:19 Shiro: 00:49:899 (2,3,4,5) - this is fine imo but id recommend to rotate 2,3,4 so they face upwards ish and the jump is less sudden
2016-07-11 22:19 Shiro: 01:08:049 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - bit uncomfortable too
2016-07-11 22:20 Shiro: 01:09:249 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - very very very confusing
2016-07-11 22:20 Shiro: shorten the slider to 1/2
2016-07-11 22:20 Shiro: 01:17:499 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - too big imo although I could hit them fine, if you change the others I pointed out remember to change these too
2016-07-11 22:20 Shiro: 01:19:449 (7,1) - i'd rather this be circle+circle -> slider without a jump
2016-07-11 22:21 Shiro: would fit better, the 1/4 sliderjumps feel a bit random
2016-07-11 22:21 Shiro: this diff reminds me of ikusa a bit
2016-07-11 22:21 Shiro: I have no big problem with this
2016-07-11 22:21 Shiro: it's the first bigass jump map I've seen that's intuitive enough for me to play comfortable
2016-07-11 22:21 Shiro: and even do well on
2016-07-11 22:21 Shiro: so kudos for that
2016-07-11 22:22 Xexxar: `ay
2016-07-11 22:22 Xexxar: well i think
2016-07-11 22:22 Xexxar: i might do what you say
2016-07-11 22:22 Shiro: try to fix the ones i pointed out, should be fine
2016-07-11 22:22 Shiro: though lots of people are gonna scream OVERSPACED
2016-07-11 22:22 Shiro: up to you but it's really terrible
2016-07-11 22:22 Xexxar: its just dumb pp
2016-07-11 22:22 Xexxar: also
2016-07-11 22:22 Xexxar: can you savelog this
2016-07-11 22:22 Xexxar: and post on the thread

additionally, in beazrim's diff, these 00:07:599 (1,2,3) - 00:24:849 (3,4,5) - 00:34:449 (3,4,5) - 00:38:049 (2,3,4) - 01:11:649 (3,4,5) - 01:14:049 (3,4,5) - 01:21:249 (3,4,5) - 01:22:449 (3,4,5) - are FUCKING AWFUL to play and unintuitive as can be especially when you couple them with things like 00:27:099 (2,3,4,5) - then they become unreadable
also I know you like these pp juicy jumps but 01:17:649 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - are horribly out of place in the diff, their spacing is about double the biggest jump in the rest of the diff
the diff was a bit odd, overall spacing is really low and that makes it uncomfortable to play

The highest diff is fine imo save for the jumps I mentioned that are very uncomfortable

Rizevim

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Joined December 2014

Rizevim 2016-07-14T19:45:53+00:00

I love this song *-*
no spinner?D: , i'd like to see spinner in this bm D:
btw there's no vid in this bm?D:
I can send it to you if you want D:

taku's Normal

00:11:949 - add slider like this / make slider like this at 00:11:799
00:50:499 - you can add circle/slider here

01:00:399 (1) - it says that Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds.
01:09:999 (1) - same as above^
01:19:599 (1) - same as above^

Arusamour

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Joined April 2014

Arusamour 2016-07-15T00:22:32+00:00

General

mmmmmmyes rori mercury is my type of girl

Fury's Insane (5.25 stars, 352 notes)

00:13:149 (3,4,5) - a tad bit big. also, for arc linear patterns like this, it's better to have consistent ds throughout
mmm delicious! fun to play and prettiest looking map in the set

Bearizm's Expert (6.02 stars, 506 notes)

00:04:899 (6,7,8,9,1) - difficult to read. after the kick-slider the stream feels clumped in a way. rather than going up (which feels clumped) go down or stack on 00:04:599 (4). like this:
00:07:974 (2,3) - confusing read. i believe these doubles are too far off from the slider end. either move the slider higher up so you can stil maintain that stack on 00:07:299 (6) - or forget about the stack and move the doubles closer to slider end.
00:36:999 (4,5,6) - random. lemeow :33 nyaa kyaa. where else do you repeat this type of pattern? that's right, you don't.

~~Mercury (6.58 stars, 430 notes)~~ Extra (5.52 stars, 408 notes)

00:33:399 (3,4,5,6,7) - think this triangle could be a little bigger. possibly the smaller triangle of this map.
01:14:499 (5) - prefer using 1.13x ds to stay equal spacing to (3,4) . although it doesn't read bad, it kinda makes no sense. maybe to emphasise 01:14:799 (1) better? same with 01:16:599 (3,4,5).
01:15:549 (3,4,5) - think this is too huge, more of (5) being way too out of a jump to 01:15:999 (1).

Last edited by Arusamour 2016-07-15T00:48:09+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

I Must Decrease

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Topic Starter

I Must Decrease 2016-07-15T00:41:46+00:00

Arusamour wrote:
General

mmmmmmyes rori mercury is my type of girl　:^)

Mercury (6.58 stars, 430 notes)
00:33:399 (3,4,5,6,7) - think this triangle could be a little bigger. possibly the smaller triangle of this map. is this link right? doesnt point to objects logically
01:14:499 (5) - prefer using 1.13x ds to stay equal spacing to (3,4) . although it doesn't read bad, it kinda makes no sense. maybe to emphasise 01:14:799 (1) better? same with 01:16:599 (3,4,5). i moved things slightly but did not do what you suggested
01:15:549 (3,4,5) - think this is too huge, more of (5) being way too out of a jump to 01:15:999 (1). is this link right? doesnt point to objects logically

Bearizm

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Bearizm 2016-07-15T02:29:58+00:00

Arusamour wrote:
Bearizm's Expert (6.02 stars, 506 notes)
00:04:899 (6,7,8,9,1) - difficult to read. after the kick-slider the stream feels clumped in a way. rather than going up (which feels clumped) go down or stack on 00:04:599 (4). like this:
00:07:974 (2,3) - confusing read. i believe these doubles are too far off from the slider end. either move the slider higher up so you can stil maintain that stack on 00:07:299 (6) - or forget about the stack and move the doubles closer to slider end. i just moved the 1/1 slider upwards.
00:36:999 (4,5,6) - random. lemeow :33 nyaa kyaa. where else do you repeat this type of pattern? that's right, you don't. do I need to repeat it anywhere else? I'd like to keep it just because of the drastic change in the vocal's tone.

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Thanks for the mod. cba to fix codes cuz fuk it

@Xexxar i fixed the 1/4 1/2 spacings. Lemme know if i missed any. http://puu.sh/q27JM.osu

EchoingFury

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EchoingFury 2016-07-15T15:25:21+00:00

Arusamour wrote:
Fury's Insane (5.25 stars, 352 notes)
00:13:149 (3,4,5) - a tad bit big. also, for arc linear patterns like this, it's better to have consistent ds throughout
adjusted and overall decreased the ds between 3,4,5, also made sure that 3 and 4 have the same distance to the starting point of 2 for optical purposes
mmm delicious! fun to play and prettiest looking map in the set I am flattered, hope you enjoy playing it if it ever gets ranked :3

Link to .osu because xexxar is a busy workhorse. http://puu.sh/q2Dzz/a280f295c1.osu

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