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Hatsune Miku - Star Story [Osu|Taiko]

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kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
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kanpakyin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年12月29日 at 20:24:05

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Star Story
Source: VOCALOID
Tags: kino77 Hatsune miku project diva Kz livetune
BPM: 140
Filesize: 7290kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.86 stars, 160 notes)
  2. Hard (4.09 stars, 282 notes)
  3. kino's Normal (2.88 stars, 234 notes)
  4. Relaxing Taiko~ (4.75 stars, 545 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Star Story
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Well...
Hatsune miku-Star story
Thanks kodomonoyume's storyboard and kino's Normal
Change MP3..Please re-download if you download it before 21/12/2010
*Thanks #Chinese for New MP3

5/4/2014:
In case if you want to try full ver of this song: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/99550#
Last edited by kanpakyin , edited 25 times in total.
serenity103
13 posts
Joined November 2009
serenity103
I love this song ;) ;)
kodomonoyume
243 posts
Joined June 2009
kodomonoyume
lyrics done.

SPOILER
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add the code to all diffs except taiko.
and in [kino's Normal], change "lyrics30.png" to "lyrics31.png".

maybe i'll add something later.

ps. don't forget to add "kino77" to tags :)
Miu Matsuoka
662 posts
Joined May 2008
Miu Matsuoka
hi :3 let me help u do some modding

[General]
Great map~ but it needs a some hitsound editing, coz' the beatmap is a bit boring without good hitsounds~ :D

[Timing]
BPM: 140.000 (is ok~)
Offset: 180

[Easy]
Change Circle Size to largest?
2:59:751 What are those green lines for? If they are for volume changing, please make the gaps between them balance, like [kino's Normal]

[kino's Normal]
The Overall Difficulty can be smaller (by 2)
1:54:629 (2-5) A long stream is not suitable for [Normal] players, deleting (5) may be a good idea~
2:02:722 (5-8) ^ (delete 8?)

[Hard]
Well-arranged notes ;)
0:00:201 I recommend you to arrange the combos in this way:
SPOILER
1:21:822 (2,3) Is it a bit surprising with the sudden jump?
1:32:751 (7,8,9) distance problem?
1:56:322 I suggest you to add one note here
2:52:618 (4,5) put them on the place where the slider starts
2:59:751 What are those green lines for? If they are for volume changing, please make the gaps between them balance, like [kino's Normal]

kds plz~ :P
Lizzehb
645 posts
Joined March 2010
Lizzehb
Easy is perfect.

kino's Normal~

01:14:129 - (5,6,7) Make these note into a repeating slider. they look to clumped for a normal.
01:54:629 - (2,3,4,5) ^
02:02:772 - (5,6,7,8) ^
02:28:915 - (2) Move one grid left.

Hard is fine.

And I don't mod taiko.

Star~
KanaRin
1,886 posts
Joined April 2010
KanaRin
hEYOO! Star!
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Hope it will be N :o

Download: Hatsune Miku - Star story (kanpakyin) [kino's Normal].osu
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

cheukhin1985 wrote:

[Timing]
BPM: 140.000 (is ok~)
Offset: 180
[Easy]
Change Circle Size to largest? Sorry..no
2:59:751 What are those green lines for? If they are for volume changing, please make the gaps between them balance, like [kino's Normal]
>_>

[Hard]
Well-arranged notes ;)
0:00:201 I recommend you to arrange the combos in this way:
SPOILER
1:21:822 (2,3) Is it a bit surprising with the sudden jump?So..I add a new combo here
1:32:751 (7,8,9) distance problem? It is a Jump
1:56:322 I suggest you to add one note here
2:52:618 (4,5) put them on the place where the slider starts
2:59:751 What are those green lines for? If they are for volume changing, please make the gaps between them balance, like [kino's Normal]

kds plz~ :P

Thanks
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
IRC modded. Below are excerpts.

Overall:
Except for kino's diff, try to use more soft-finish (you can use kino's diff as a reference)
Offset too late. You've said 180.

[Easy]
01:58:486 (1) - no clap on reverse

[kino's Normal]
Excellent

]Hard]
No technical error, but I have some suggestions on style.

The triplets at the beginning of song don't feel right to me.
00:14:108 (2,3,4) / 00:23:322 (4,5,6)
Personally I'd attempt triplets during kiai times or other sections of faster beats.

Some jumps are, IMO, too sudden and may not fit the music. Examples:
01:32:751 (1,2,3) - spacing a bit too large
02:28:894 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'd arrange these stacks using accelerated spacing
02:49:037 (1,2,3,4,5) - not optimal, but I like the pattern though

00:27:608 (1) - make volume a bit smaller (to make soft-finish not so obtrusive)
01:07:894 (1) - I'd just use a regular triplet and combine with the 4 after to make a 7-plet
01:36:608 (1) - the timing section near the end of spinner cuts off the volume too suddenly. I suggest gradual decrease of volume.


Good song and nice maps.
Star!
subarasikibuta
559 posts
Joined May 2009
subarasikibuta
miku的歌最喜欢这首了～加油～
kodomonoyume
243 posts
Joined June 2009
kodomonoyume
some effects added.
SPOILER
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sometimes sb load is more than 5, i'll deal with it later, maybe. :roll:

p.s. in [kino's Normal], kiai lines should be put on notes, and please delete the bookmarks. :)
Last edited by kodomonoyume , edited 3 times in total.
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
[Hard]
大方向上没什么问题 要讲也就一些细节
sliderslide的声音在开始略有点吵 考虑要不要用sliderslide.wav静音 或者绿线再压一点

00:02:01(T) 这个绿线可以没必要 可以直接在第一根红线上改音量
00:03:629 (1,2,3,4) - 间距? 如果是刻意的越来越小 建议明显一点 如果不是 摆再好看点
00:07:058 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:08:772 (5,6,7) - 567之间间距不等
00:23:343 (4,5,6,7) - 我实在不喜欢白线起手的三连 还是觉得红线起手舒服
00:54:629 (4) - slider再往下拉点? 挨太近显太挤 01:20:772 (1) 02:16:486 (2) 02:36:201 (3) 同
01:07:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这边不太适合 建议删掉01:08:451 (4)
01:10:058 (2,3) - 对齐1或者斜更明显点
01:32:772 (1,2,3) - 这个跳有点不太适合 虽然能打
01:51:843 (3) - 间距突然变小
02:28:915 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这串蛮难点到
02:56:772 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这串跳...突然就不说了 可以摆更好看点o.o

其他难度没什么要讲>_>
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123

eveless wrote:

考虑要不要用sliderslide.wav静音
隨然目前沒定論
但是安全起見最好不要把sliderslide/slidertick靜音...
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[Relax taiko]
skip :/

[Hard]
0:09:608 (7) down 1 grid
0:22:680 (2) right 1 grid lv4
1:30:394 (2,3) (2) down 2 grids, (3) left 1 grid
1:51:180 (2,3,4) uneven spacing
1:54:822 (3) right 1 grid

[Kino's normal]
0:12:180 (3,4,1...) up 1 grid
0:20:751 (2) left 1 grid
1:04:465 (4) left 1 grid
1:23:751 (3,4) up 1 grid
2:06:608 (4,5,1) left 1 grid

star~
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77

wmfchris wrote:

[Kino's normal]
0:12:180 (3,4,1...) up 1 grid 0 0?
0:20:751 (2) left 1 grid
1:04:465 (4) left 1 grid
1:23:751 (3,4) up 1 grid
2:06:608 (4,5,1) left 1 grid
Other fixed~
Thanks~ :)

Edit:I forgot this~
Download: Hatsune Miku - Star story (kanpakyin) [kino's Normal].osu
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
[storyboard]
中間staff的sb字之間間距太大 縮短?
staff放intro那裡?...

[Easy]
00:01:894 (2) - 1 grid up
00:05:322 (1) - ^
00:08:322 (1) - remove new combo
00:08:751 (2) - New combo
01:13:037 (5,1,2,3) - 點解(1,2,3)不摆成弧线?整個沒有成正方形= =
02:17:322 (1) -
SPOILER
02:19:037 (3) - ^
02:30:608 (4) - ^

[moekino]
00:18:179 (6) - 摆到这里?
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:09:394 (6) - 這個circle的位置好怪異...好像從00:10:465 (1)這開始1/2拍..delete it?
00:36:608 (2) - 將佢反個方向會跳少少(喂
00:40:465 (7) - 擺成直線..好扭曲stress
00:59:965 (8) - 好像有點不對稱?
01:15:179 (4) - 1 grids left
01:20:537 (1,2,3) - 這個連打好嚇人..刪左2?
01:30:394 (2) - 位置怪怪的..關掉gird snap修一修會好看點..
01:32:751 (7) -與01:31:037 (4)相對 擺成直線
02:13:251 - 加一個circle..好似有點難讀
02:35:965 (2,3) -
SPOILER

[Taiko]
唔識mod太鼓..sry

~good


kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>yangzd88

Fix some...Thanks>"<
aabc271
osu! Alumni
1,315 posts
Joined August 2009
aabc271
Hi~
Here is my taiko mod~
Mod request by kanpakyin

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Relax Taiko~]

I prefer diff name [Relaxing Taiko~] because Relax is a verb. Not really an issue though ~

Try offset 193 ? By using 25% playback rate, i can hear that 180 is too early. Remember to resnap all notes after changing offset ~

00:13:894 ( 38 ) Use big note ?

00:27:608 ( 78 ) ^

00:55:037 ( 43 ) ^

01:08:751 ( 1 ) ^

01:22:465 ( 42 ) ^

02:44:751 ( 152 ) ^

00:58:144 ( 52 ) Delete this note ?

No errors found, nice job ~ :)
I think this song is too relaxing, so it is not very suitable for a Taiko diff
But anyway, the current Taiko diff is fine ~
Star and good luck~ ;)
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77

yangzd88 wrote:

[moekino]=///=
00:18:179 (6) - 摆到这里?
SPOILER
[attachment=1:f487a]2.png[/attachment:f487a]
可素..可素..这样会挡道后面的1也> <
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
Hi~

我的建议:

[General]


  • 加个spinner-approachcircle.png
[Easy]


  • 00:55:050 (1): Finish
    00:44:764 (5,6): 会误导新手
    01:08:764 (1,2): ^
    01:27:192 (1): 重复+1
    02:08:335 (1): ^
    02:58:050 (5): 这里的Finish去掉
[kino’s Normal]


  • 01:08:550 (9): 加Clap
    01:20:550 (4): 开头加Whistle
    01:25:478 (6): New combo 后面的1去掉New combo
    02:06:621 (4): ^
    02:20:335 (4): ^
[Hard]
好简单的Hard啊

  • 00:30:193 (3): 开头加Whistle
    00:55:050 (4): 这里加Finish
    01:29:764 (5,1): 有点近
    01:36:621 (1): 转盘提前一下 例如到01:36:330
    01:55:264 (5,6,7): 整张图唯一的1/4连打吗…
    02:22:264 (1): Slider 向后移并缩小半拍 在这里加个Circle
    02:28:050 (4): Whistle

Star and Kudosu Star for perfect mapping~
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

impossiblexu wrote:

[Easy]


  • 00:55:050 (1): Finish Fix
    00:44:764 (5,6): 会误导新手Fix
    01:08:764 (1,2): ^Fix
    01:27:192 (1): 重复+1Fix
    02:08:335 (1): ^Fix
    02:58:050 (5): 这里的Finish去掉Fix

[Hard]
好简单的Hard啊 Stress..這歌太難就不好玩了0.0

  • 00:30:193 (3): 开头加WhistleFix
    00:55:050 (4): 这里加FinishFix
    01:29:764 (5,1): 有点近Fix
    01:36:621 (1): 转盘提前一下 例如到01:36:330這個...我覺得還可以..
    01:55:264 (5,6,7): 整张图唯一的1/4连打吗…加了幾個可行的連打
    02:22:264 (1): Slider 向后移并缩小半拍 在这里加个CircleFix
    02:28:050 (4): WhistleFix

Star and Kudosu Star for perfect mapping~ Thanks>_<
Thanks a lot
kodomonoyume
243 posts
Joined June 2009
kodomonoyume

yangzd88 wrote:

[storyboard]
中間staff的sb字之間間距太大 縮短?
staff放intro那裡?...
fixed the size and space.
but i think it's better to put them in the break >.>
thank you~

also changed some other things.
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no kds for this.
Last edited by kodomonoyume , edited 1 time in total.
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
Add "Kz" to source. If not, add him to tags. Also, add to tags "livetune"

Also, consider using the oficial artwork made for this song as the background.
Oficial Artwork here:
SPOILER

(don't kudosu)
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
Easy的lead-in是2001其他是2000这该吐槽吗

[Easy]
00:39:621 (4,6) - 建议是4的whistle换到折返，6的去掉
01:12:192 (3) - 从这开始不是很理解，明显的慢歌clap没有必要如此密啊。。。毕竟这实质是70BPM的曲目（或者如果可以用音量区别一拍和三拍的clap？
02:34:478 (4,5) - 4折返的whistle去掉，5的第三折返加上whistle (xxoxo)

[Kino's Normal]
00:36:192 (2) - 尾whistle？（和前面的音调对比）
00:49:907 (2) - ^
01:08:764 (1) - 尾whistle
01:25:478 (6) - 去whistle
02:06:835 (5) - 去whistle
02:49:478 & 02:49:693 - 加音？

[Hard]
00:28:050 (2) - 这里开始为什么是S不是S1。。。我听不出哪里需要slider音orz
01:07:907 (8) - 开头的那个clap漏了？
之后仍然是觉得clap太紧了
01:22:050 (4,1) - 距离建议远点
。。。整体感觉略挤orz

[Relaxing Taiko~]
犯困。。。没什么问题吧大概
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
Easy的lead-in是2001其他是2000这该吐槽吗 Fix

[Easy]
00:39:621 (4,6) - 建议是4的whistle换到折返，6的去掉 Fix
01:12:192 (3) - 从这开始不是很理解，明显的慢歌clap没有必要如此密啊。。。毕竟这实质是70BPM的曲目（或者如果可以用音量区别一拍和三拍的clap？Fix
02:34:478 (4,5) - 4折返的whistle去掉，5的第三折返加上whistle (xxoxo)Fix

[Kino's Normal]
00:36:192 (2) - 尾whistle？（和前面的音调对比）Fix
00:49:907 (2) - ^Fix
01:08:764 (1) - 尾whistleFix
01:25:478 (6) - 去whistleFix
02:06:835 (5) - 去whistleFix
02:49:478 & 02:49:693 - 加音？留給mapper自己修改

[Hard]
00:28:050 (2) - 这里开始为什么是S不是S1。。。我听不出哪里需要slider音orzFix
01:07:907 (8) - 开头的那个clap漏了？Fix
之后仍然是觉得clap太紧了Fix
01:22:050 (4,1) - 距离建议远点Fix
。。。整体感觉略挤orzLol

[Relaxing Taiko~]
犯困。。。没什么问题吧大概
謝謝
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
基本上沒什麼問題

把各難度的Enable countdown取消掉吧,這次不挑出來,後面幾個BAT/MAT還是可能會叫你關掉的

再來就是有辦法再找一個好一點的mp3嗎?

因為音樂有點小聲,我要把音響開很大聲才聽得清楚 .. :

先star.
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77

impossiblexu wrote:

[kino’s Normal]


  • 01:08:550 (9): 加Clap
    01:20:550 (4): 开头加Whistle Fixed~
    01:25:478 (6): New combo 后面的1去掉New combo
    02:06:621 (4): ^
    02:20:335 (4): ^
谢谢~~ :)

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Kino's Normal]
00:36:192 (2) - 尾whistle？（和前面的音调对比） 感觉不是重音就没改了
00:49:907 (2) - ^ ^
01:08:764 (1) - 尾whistle Fixed~
01:25:478 (6) - 去whistle Fixed~
02:06:835 (5) - 去whistle Fixed~
02:49:478 & 02:49:693 - 加音？ Fixed~
谢谢咯~~ :)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Star story (kanpakyin) [kino's Normal].osu
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
wait wait. Where is Insane? =/
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Louis Cyphre wrote:

wait wait. Where is Insane? =/
Sorry of this...I'm not decide to map a insane of this song...
Because this song is not appropriate to map a Insane..This song is too soft..
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Hi~ :)


[Hard]
Great, nothing to point out to me. ^^
Just one thing. Resnap all green lines for perfection.


[kino]
Here is no Tags! D:
01:36:625 (1) - Add new combo at this spinner because of the bug.
02:58:911 (1) - ^
Nice map.


[Easy]
AR +1 / Resnap all green lines.
02:02:340 (3) - Its direction looks a bit weird. Fix it to vertical or horizontal?
Also nice~


Sorry, I can't mod taiko. >_<
Anyway the map is very good. I enjoyed it. :D
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi~ :)

[Hard]
Great, nothing to point out to me. ^^
Just one thing. Resnap all green lines for perfection. Resnap it :D

[Easy]
AR +1 / Resnap all green lines. Fix
02:02:340 (3) - Its direction looks a bit weird. Fix it to vertical or horizontal? Fix
Thanks
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
add a approachcircle.png to your maps folder

Easy
00:19:483 (4) - newcombo here to follow your pattern
01:00:625 (7,1,2) - newcombo the (7) remove the combo off (1) and put it onto (2) creates a very nice combo flow ;)
(suggestion) 01:06:625 (5) - newcombo
01:22:054 (4) - mover closer to (3) its abit far away
01:55:483 (4,5) - if you wanna flow to the music put a newcombo on (5) if you wanna flow to your current combo pattern put a new combo on (4)
(suggestion) 02:54:626 (3,4) - to me it plays better with the 2 repeats on the (3) rather than the (4), your choice though

Hard

at the start of the map you break your combo pattern, you can do one of 2 things

1) 00:19:483 (3) - newcombo // 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo
or
2) 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo // 00:22:911 (1) - remove new combo
either of them will work nice

01:57:625 (2,3,4,5,6) - only a small thing but (2,3,4) has different spacing to (4,5,6) i advise to make them the same
02:34:911 (6,1) - put the new combo on (6) insted i say

------------------------------------
nice maps anyway ;)
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
irc modded..
kanpakyin
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Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

jericho2442 wrote:

add a approachcircle.png to your maps folder Fix

Easy
00:19:483 (4) - newcombo here to follow your patternFix
01:00:625 (7,1,2) - newcombo the (7) remove the combo off (1) and put it onto (2) creates a very nice combo flow ;)Fix
(suggestion) 01:06:625 (5) - newcomboFix
01:22:054 (4) - mover closer to (3) its abit far awayFix
01:55:483 (4,5) - if you wanna flow to the music put a newcombo on (5) if you wanna flow to your current combo pattern put a new combo on (4)Fix
(suggestion) 02:54:626 (3,4) - to me it plays better with the 2 repeats on the (3) rather than the (4), your choice thoughFix

Hard

at the start of the map you break your combo pattern, you can do one of 2 thingsFix

1) 00:19:483 (3) - newcombo // 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo
or
2) 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo // 00:22:911 (1) - remove new combo
either of them will work nice

01:57:625 (2,3,4,5,6) - only a small thing but (2,3,4) has different spacing to (4,5,6) i advise to make them the same Fix
02:34:911 (6,1) - put the new combo on (6) insted i sayFix

------------------------------------
nice maps anyway ;)
Thanks=v=
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

我是来骗KDS的


Hard

01:22:911 (1) - 换个方向（ctrl+j）？捅来捅去的……（喂）
01:34:911 (2) - 这个我觉得你可以换成3个circle了
02:12:197 (1,2,3,4) - 12叠，34叠._. 我感觉这样舒服点，整拍的时候鼠标移动


kino's Normal

01:02:340 (1,2,3,4) - 间隔有点大，感觉还应该加点NOTE
02:29:768 (1,2) - 感觉这两个中间用一个slider拖一下比较好？从1到02:30:197


Easy

还好


想要星星就说嘛 8-)
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
咔嚓咔嚓~

Easy
00:17:768(3) - New combo?
00:19:483(1) - remove new combo
00:55:483 - 這note調大聲點吧...
01:32:768 - 不對稱大丈夫?
02:17:340 - 7 combo 大丈夫?

kino's Normal
AR-1 better

mod的時候被wmf催SB 所以沒看得很清楚 D:
SB很美Map不錯 就醬
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
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Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>sandpig Fix some
>karenying Fix

Thanks a lot
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77

Sandpig wrote:

kino's Normal

01:02:340 (1,2,3,4) - 间隔有点大，感觉还应该加点NOTE
02:29:768 (1,2) - 感觉这两个中间用一个slider拖一下比较好？从1到02:30:197
No change shall be done~ :D
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