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Crystal

[Crz]Sword wrote:

摸4摸
我的 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/445836 等Nino的ex到了再摸吧qwq刚好你也忙
[Posthumous Romance]
  1. bg不错
  2. od9 有点高 这图拆分多 建议od8-8.5 就要 od9
    小星星Crystal
  3. 00:01:880 - 00:02:562 - ??这俩绿线去掉后面那一个吧
  4. 00:18:584 (4,1) - 让我搞我估计不会让这俩有重叠qwq http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5231654 不过无所谓啦 感觉没事
  5. 00:31:587 (1,1,1,1) - 白线上的音都是vocal吧,听了下4个finish的效果比较好 后面两个有前面没有的重音
  6. 00:51:652 (1,2,1) - 这两个节奏对换一下,00:52:042 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这四个一组的柑橘patterns统一一下比较好 单独的那个音高是低的
  7. 01:08:892 (2) - next 2.46x 01:09:087 (2) - next 2.82x
    虽然不是问题,但是我还是觉得让next间距差不多(+-0.1x)为好。这里节奏比较松,算休息段之类的,这里的拆分可能别人没有准备好,01:09:087 (2) -稍微有一点大了
  8. 01:25:938 (1,2,1,2,1) - hw你好01:26:229 (2,1) - 这里真的能打到么。。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5231709 我觉得这样不错也 没事 我能接上
  9. 01:38:210 (1) - 这个我觉得不用NC,4个圈占两个滑条的位置,前面都是两个滑条一NC的,况且这里不是拆分而是308的跳,像这个01:43:081 (1,2,3,4) -
  10. 01:39:964 (2) - 01:40:158 (4) - 不NC嘛 不用
  11. 01:45:418 (7) - 这滑条我建议你放根绿线弄短点,我试了一下停在滑条头上会断掉,而且好像很容易100
  12. 03:35:678 (1) - 弄成滑条比较不错
  13. 03:38:795 (1) - ^ 故意的
  14. 04:56:327 (3) - NC细一点,NC
  15. 04:57:691 (3) - ^
    红白神yoru
  16. 01:59:834 (5) - NC下?02:02:951 (1) - 你这个NC了,前面最好统一一下也NC
  17. 02:03:730 (4) - NC,02:00:613 (1,2,3,4) - 这个NC了,统一一下
  18. 02:02:561 (2,3) - 跳的稍微有点大,建议小一点 感觉还好
  19. 02:03:730 (4) - NC
  20. 02:17:951 (3,1) - ......我是不喜欢这种串里突然空一拍的,太容易爆头了。。。要这样排也建议把这两个串离开一定距离 稍微改了下 但是还是空拍的 节奏就是这样
  21. 02:49:704 (1,2,3) - 这个1/4钢琴从这里开始的 02:49:899 - 所以这样节奏才对 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5232077 不是很懂红白神 keep
  22. 02:54:379 (1,2,3,4) - 建议换成4个滑条,这里节奏比较密
  23. 02:55:353 (2,3) - ?????确定真的要搞bpm308的跳么。。这里还是间距小一点为好
  24. 02:55:743 (5,6) - ^ 这里大概可以这样? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5232109
太神摸不动qwq

Kencho wrote:

  • Black is Personal comments.
    Bold Black is Highly recommended to fix.
    Red is Unrankable that you should fix.

[General]
  1. PreviewTime弄在01:33:632 - 吧

[notice][Posthumous Romance]
  1. 01:36:847 (3,4,5,6,1) - 不如弄點像↓
  2. 01:43:081 (2,3,4,5,1) - 好難呀
  3. 01:43:860 (2,3,4,5,1) - 好難呀
  4. 01:45:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 好難呀 哎呀
  5. 02:49:801 (2,3,4) - 這個不如把4 ctrl+G 感觉原有的不错
  6. 02:56:132 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 好難呀,感覺首先是因為前面滑條1去2的距離太遠,其次是因為頭三個連打不夠flow,所以可以把02:55:938 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 整串移近一點,然後可以試試這樣↓
    難了不能pass能不能不點呀 /快哭了
fixed issues in yoru's part for him
no comment = fixed
thanks for modding!!
Vert
啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊才想起来,连续两天被老师叫走干活然后就忘了

[Crz]Sword wrote:

学妹Vert
[*]04:00:029 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - .......................妈的这能读清楚么 没问题,这东西是我和猪尾巴老师学的
[*]05:09:964 (5) - 这个折返。。滑条有点太长了,大概很容易断,03:48:145 (1,3) - 我觉得这种是极限的接受范围了 没啥问题吧,某鬼畜麻婆的某怀古那个折返也是很长的哦,我看了一下光标放在滑条中间是不会断的[/list]

Kencho wrote:

[*]04:02:171 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 好難呀,我的建議是04:03:243 (1,2,3,4) - 改簡單點讓人加加血[/list]
難了不能pass能不能不點呀 /快哭了 可以,不过把前面的梗也稍微改了一下
thx for modding XD
.osu超字数了,发qq咯
Kencho



#1
Bubbled!
Pata-Mon
算了
我还是 不搞笑了
说正经的:
小星星无敌
Yuii-
Since you changed the BPM, using Tick Rate 2 would be nice for some beats audible in the non-Kiai sections as well as the kicks in the Kiai.
Topic Starter
Crystal

Yuii- wrote:

Since you changed the BPM, using Tick Rate 2 would be nice for some beats audible in the non-Kiai sections as well as the kicks in the Kiai.
sure thing, fixed
thanks!
pishifat
real 1

SPOILER
2016-09-30 23:44 pishifat: 02:16:197 (4) -
2016-09-30 23:44 pishifat: g
2016-09-30 23:45 Crystal: mmmmmmm
2016-09-30 23:45 Crystal: LOL
2016-09-30 23:45 pishifat: thinking about bpm
2016-09-30 23:45 pishifat: i get why u used 308
2016-09-30 23:45 pishifat: would be better off halved tho tbh
2016-09-30 23:47 Crystal: mm
2016-09-30 23:47 Crystal: yea
2016-09-30 23:54 Crystal: fixed both
2016-09-30 23:58 pishifat: only other concerning thing
2016-09-30 23:58 pishifat: certain snappings
2016-09-30 23:59 pishifat: 02:25:158 (1) - 01:45:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 03:57:691 (1,2,3) - 04:59:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -
2016-10-01 00:00 pishifat: pretty much all 1/4 or 1/8 things
2016-10-01 00:00 pishifat: where ur doing 1/3 1/6 for some reason
2016-10-01 00:02 Crystal: o
2016-10-01 00:02 Crystal: okay
2016-10-01 00:13 Crystal: changed all of them
2016-10-01 00:14 pishifat: updatepls
2016-10-01 00:15 Crystal: done
2016-10-01 00:19 pishifat: o um 02:48:925 (1) - too
2016-10-01 00:20 Crystal: ok
2016-10-01 00:26 Crystal: shall i update now?
2016-10-01 00:26 pishifat: ya
2016-10-01 00:26 pishifat: that shoudl be everything
2016-10-01 00:26 pishifat: at least of what i have to say lol
2016-10-01 00:28 Crystal: done
2016-10-01 00:28 Crystal: :D
2016-10-01 00:31 Crystal: o wait
2016-10-01 00:31 pishifat: are u gonna reply to
2016-10-01 00:31 pishifat: yuii;s thing
2016-10-01 00:31 pishifat: '
2016-10-01 00:31 Crystal: yes
2016-10-01 00:33 Crystal: i changed TR to 2
Karen
nice111
Pata-Mon
妈的无敌
Topic Starter
Crystal
thanks all! ;)
sahuang
gratz :)
Garden
cool
Deif
If pishifat's post count as a rebubble, and I believe so due to the timing/snapping changes, there should've been a bubble #2 after his post and not a direct qualification. It's missing one nominator, so let's try again.
Topic Starter
Crystal
lo
ok

my bad i didn't know exactly about that qualification rule lol
besides, deleted an unnecessary NC and reshaped 1 long slider
thanks for ur concerns!
Kencho
Real
#1
Rebubbled!
Rizia
2
Karen
real 3
pocket-Gao
算了
我还是 不搞笑了
说正经的:
小星星无敌
Nakano Itsuki

pocket-Gao wrote:

算了
我还是 不搞笑了
说正经的:
小星星无敌
Winnie
Approved by Winnie 8-)
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