Mami Kawada - Contrail ~Kiseki~

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Title:Contrail ~Kiseki~
TitleUnicode:Contrail~軌跡~
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Yuria
Version:Moeka's Insane
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
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Doyak
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M4M입니다~

[General]
* 맵의 마지막 부분이 스냅이 다르네요. 이지 / 노말은 흰 틱, 하드는 1/8 틱, 인센 2개는 1/16틱에서 끝냈는데 소리가 정확히 어디서 나는지는 모르겠습니다만 아무튼 하나로 통일을 해주셔야 됩니다. 제가 듣기에는 흰 틱 아주 조금 전부터 빠르게 스르륵 훑어서 흰 틱에 끝내는 게 의도로 보여지는데, 판단하시기에 달렸습니다.
* 하드 빼곤 전부 담요 손질 해주면 훨씬 깔끔해 보일 듯합니다.
* AudioLeadIn을 1000~1500 정도 설정해주세요. .osu 파일들을 메모장으로 열고 맨 윗부분에 숫자 수정해주시면 됩니다.

[Easy]
* 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - 따라가는 소리가 좀 혼잡해보입니다. 00:06:347 (1,2) - 에서 했듯이 00:07:597 (3,4) - 도 http://puu.sh/nKbU0/c9f9657200.jpg 처럼 하거나, 그냥 전부 정박을 쓰시는 걸 추천합니다. (전자를 더 추천)
* 00:26:347 (1,2,3) - 이지에서 약간 읽기가 힘들 수 있습니다. 1.5박 뒤에 서클이 있는 것 자체가 이미 뉴비가 좋은 판정을 받기는 어려운데, 지금은 2보다도 3이 시각적으로 더 가까이에 있는 상태기 때문에 순차적으로 리딩이 안 되고 혼란을 느끼기에 충분한 모습입니다. 가능하면 http://puu.sh/nKcac/625863644f.jpg 이쪽 박자를 쓰시길 추천합니다.
* 00:29:918 (2,3) - 00:32:775 (2,3) - 00:41:347 (2,3) - 아무리 이지라지만, 여기서의 흰틱 박자는 매우 안 어울린다고 생각합니다. 다운비트보다 반 박씩 빠른 곳이 훨씬 더 강한 모습이기 떄문에, 모두 http://puu.sh/nKclo/ecbf8ad7bc.jpg 이런 박자로 쓰길 추천합니다.
* 00:32:775 (2,3,4) - 의 경우는 http://puu.sh/nKcsh/5a8750aa8d.jpg 가 뒷 배경음도 살려주고 좋습니다.
* 00:44:740 (3) - 너무 지루합니다. 다음 파트로 넘어가는 징검다리 역할을 하는 부분이라 텐션이 꽤 높기 때문에, 박자를 쪼개어 쓰는 게 좋습니다. 앞에 http://puu.sh/nKcsh/5a8750aa8d.jpg 처럼 해도 됩니다.
나머지는 괜찮아 보이네요.

[Normal]
* 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이지와 마찬가지로 뭘 따라가시는지 좀 혼잡합니다. http://puu.sh/nKd27/d59691d816.jpg 이 정도 박자를 추천하는데 어떻게 생각하시나요?
* 00:12:061 - 슬라 끝에 두기엔 너무나 아쉬운 소리입니다. 00:11:168 - 도 가능하면 클릭이었으면 좋겠네요. http://puu.sh/nKddo/1e5fbf83f0.jpg 를 추천합니다.
* 01:01:347 - 이지/인세인에서는 안 빼셨으니 노말도 채우시는 건 어떨까요?
* 01:06:704 (4,5,6,1,2) - 노트가 매우 위축된 모습입니다. 밝은 분위기이기 때문에 노트를 이렇게 한쪽에 뭉쳐놓는 것보다는 멀리 퍼져나가게 하는 게 좋다고 생각합니다. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4738460 뒤는 조정을 해야겠지만 이런 식으로 이전의 노트들과 거리를 두어주는 것이 깔끔합니다.
* 01:18:490 (6,7) - 여기도 각각을 Ctrl+H,J 한 모양으로 배치하는 것이 위축되지 않고 자연스럽게 돌아들어간다고 생각합니다.
* 01:24:025 (5,6,1) - 매우 불편한 패턴입니다. 완전히 중앙으로부터 멀어지면서 거의 귀퉁이까지 갔는데 그 직후에 스피너가 있다면 중심을 제대로 잡기가 힘들 수 있습니다. 사실 이지에서도 조금 보완을 해줄 수 있는 부분입니다.

[Len's Hard]
* 00:01:704 (3) - 00:04:561 (3) - 인세인 2개에서도 안 쓴 소리입니다(저건 소리라고 보기도 어렵고 그냥 울림의 한 부분...). 빼고 다른 패턴으로 거리를 맞추시는 게 좋을 듯합니다.
* 01:04:382 (3) - 빨간 틱에 강한 소리가 있는 것도 아닌데 01:04:561 - 를 슬라 끝에다 둔 거랑 대조되서 어색하네요. 몇 가지 제안해보자면... 3, 4를 올서클로 쓰거나, 서클 - 슬라로 바꾸고 대신에 다음 다운비트 사이에 점프를 넣거나( 01:15:811 (3,4) - 처럼), 01:03:847 (2) - 부터 1/2 슬라 - 1/2 슬라 - 서클 - 서클 조합을 써도... 키아이니까 서클 비중이 좀 많아지는 건 괜찮다고 봅니다.
* 01:24:918 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 표현은 좋습니다만 역시 인세인 2개에서는 나누지 않은 1/2 비트를 전부 사용하고 있습니다. 슬라이더 끝들이 명확한 소리들이 아니기 때문에 굳이 이렇게 쪼개 쓸 필요도 없다고 생각합니다.

[Insane]
* 00:23:668 - 명확하게 소리가 들리는데 노트 넣어주셨으면 좋겠습니다.
* 00:28:490 (1,2,3) - 여기는 디스턴스를 좀 더 줄이고, 00:28:847 (3,1) - 만 확실한 점프로 했으면 좋겠네요.
* 00:41:525 (4,1) - 이렇게 살짝 건드리는 건 외관상 별로라고 느껴지네요. 지금의 경우라면 완전히 피해서 가는 게 낫지 않을까요.
* 00:42:954 (4) - 너무 아래로 내리는 것보단 http://puu.sh/nKf4x/7056519d97.jpg 정도로 하는 게 더 안정감 있어보입니다.
* 01:03:847 (3) - http://puu.sh/nKfrP/feea252172.jpg 이쪽이 더 안정감 있어보입니다.
* 01:10:454 (7,1) - 개인적으로 저기 보컬은 다운비트를 약화시켜서라도 강하게 표현해 줄 필요가 있다고 생각합니다. 01:10:097 (5,6,7,1) - 를 보면 저 보컬이 연속점프의 그냥 일부로서 들어있는데, 이렇게 해서는 저 특정음이 강조가 안 됩니다. 모에카님 인센처럼 박자를 써보시는 걸 추천합니다.
* 01:16:168 (6) - 음이 특별히 높아지기 때문에 점프의 중앙으로 모아서 내리는 것보다는 특출나게 보이게끔 (284,16) 정도로 올려주시는 것도 좋아 보입니다.
* 01:20:097 (4,5) - 노트 순서를 바꾼 게 더 어울린다고 봅니다. 물론 보컬 강조를 위한 것입니다.

[Moeka's Insane]
* OD 8.5라... 거의 5성 중반은 되는 엑라급이군요. 조금 낮추는 걸 고려해보시지 않겠습니까
* 00:36:347 (1,2) - 이렇게 강조하고자 하는 음에 뒤로 점프를 넣는 것이 정말 통하는 것인지 여쭙고 싶습니다. 예전에 제가 제 맵에 그렇게 했다가 손닉님한테 혼났었거든요. (물론 그 때는 일관성 문제도 있었지만)
* 00:42:954 (4,5,6) - 1/4 소리가 명확하지도 않고 드럼 소리가 1/2로 또렷하게 들리는데 그냥 점프가 더 나은 곳이 아닌가 싶습니다.
Momoka

Doyak wrote:

[Moeka's Insane]
* OD 8.5라... 거의 5성 중반은 되는 엑라급이군요. 조금 낮추는 걸 고려해보시지 않겠습니까 생각중
* 00:36:347 (1,2) - 이렇게 강조하고자 하는 음에 뒤로 점프를 넣는 것이 정말 통하는 것인지 여쭙고 싶습니다. 예전에 제가 제 맵에 그렇게 했다가 손닉님한테 혼났었거든요. (물론 그 때는 일관성 문제도 있었지만) ㄱㅊ음
* 00:42:954 (4,5,6) - 1/4 소리가 명확하지도 않고 드럼 소리가 1/2로 또렷하게 들리는데 그냥 점프가 더 나은 곳이 아닌가 싶습니다.
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204,278,78490,5,10,0:1:0:0:
469,217,78668,1,10,0:1:0:0:
304,103,78847,1,10,0:0:0:0:
358,369,79025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
382,105,79204,6,0,P|326:25|237:60,2,180,12|10|8,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
318,221,80097,1,2,0:1:0:0:
466,130,80275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
386,312,80454,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,118,80632,5,10,0:1:0:0:
490,247,80811,1,2,0:0:0:0:
278,233,80990,2,0,P|327:229|376:223,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,74,81347,2,0,L|178:176,1,90,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
297,108,81704,1,10,0:0:0:0:
201,292,81882,1,2,0:0:0:0:
201,292,81972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,292,82061,6,0,L|101:271,1,90,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,82418,2,0,L|424:205,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,227,82775,1,8,0:1:0:0:
334,84,82954,2,0,P|269:52|231:56,1,90,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,223,83311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
254,334,83490,6,0,P|348:318|440:308,1,180,10|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,199,84025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
281,115,84204,2,0,L|301:225,1,90,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
371,51,84561,1,10,0:0:0:0:
193,120,84740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,256,84918,5,12,0:1:0:0:
146,207,85275,1,8,0:1:0:0:
279,30,85632,1,8,0:1:0:0:
364,256,85990,1,8,0:1:0:0:
167,316,86347,5,8,0:1:0:0:
396,184,86704,1,8,0:1:0:0:
205,86,87061,1,8,0:1:0:0:
269,309,87418,2,0,P|323:308|284:271,1,135,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Yuria

Doyak wrote:

Placeholder for 2 kudosu

M4M입니다~

[General]
* 맵의 마지막 부분이 스냅이 다르네요. 이지 / 노말은 흰 틱, 하드는 1/8 틱, 인센 2개는 1/16틱에서 끝냈는데 소리가 정확히 어디서 나는지는 모르겠습니다만 아무튼 하나로 통일을 해주셔야 됩니다. 제가 듣기에는 흰 틱 아주 조금 전부터 빠르게 스르륵 훑어서 흰 틱에 끝내는 게 의도로 보여지는데, 판단하시기에 달렸습니다. 이거는 다른분들에게도 한번 물어보고 하나로 통일하도록 하겠습니다
* 하드 빼곤 전부 담요 손질 해주면 훨씬 깔끔해 보일 듯합니다.
* AudioLeadIn을 1000~1500 정도 설정해주세요. .osu 파일들을 메모장으로 열고 맨 윗부분에 숫자 수정해주시면 됩니다. 일단은 1000으로 설정해놨습니다.

[Easy]
* 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - 따라가는 소리가 좀 혼잡해보입니다. 00:06:347 (1,2) - 에서 했듯이 00:07:597 (3,4) - 도 http://puu.sh/nKbU0/c9f9657200.jpg 처럼 하거나, 그냥 전부 정박을 쓰시는 걸 추천합니다. (전자를 더 추천)
* 00:26:347 (1,2,3) - 이지에서 약간 읽기가 힘들 수 있습니다. 1.5박 뒤에 서클이 있는 것 자체가 이미 뉴비가 좋은 판정을 받기는 어려운데, 지금은 2보다도 3이 시각적으로 더 가까이에 있는 상태기 때문에 순차적으로 리딩이 안 되고 혼란을 느끼기에 충분한 모습입니다. 가능하면 http://puu.sh/nKcac/625863644f.jpg 이쪽 박자를 쓰시길 추천합니다.
* 00:29:918 (2,3) - 00:32:775 (2,3) - 00:41:347 (2,3) - 아무리 이지라지만, 여기서의 흰틱 박자는 매우 안 어울린다고 생각합니다. 다운비트보다 반 박씩 빠른 곳이 훨씬 더 강한 모습이기 떄문에, 모두 http://puu.sh/nKclo/ecbf8ad7bc.jpg 이런 박자로 쓰길 추천합니다.
* 00:32:775 (2,3,4) - 의 경우는 http://puu.sh/nKcsh/5a8750aa8d.jpg 가 뒷 배경음도 살려주고 좋습니다.
* 00:44:740 (3) - 너무 지루합니다. 다음 파트로 넘어가는 징검다리 역할을 하는 부분이라 텐션이 꽤 높기 때문에, 박자를 쪼개어 쓰는 게 좋습니다. 앞에 http://puu.sh/nKcsh/5a8750aa8d.jpg 처럼 해도 됩니다.
나머지는 괜찮아 보이네요. 모두 수정했습니다

[Normal]
* 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이지와 마찬가지로 뭘 따라가시는지 좀 혼잡합니다. http://puu.sh/nKd27/d59691d816.jpg 이 정도 박자를 추천하는데 어떻게 생각하시나요? 이건 메인 기타소리를 따라간것이기때문에 그냥 두겠습니다
* 00:12:061 - 슬라 끝에 두기엔 너무나 아쉬운 소리입니다. 00:11:168 - 도 가능하면 클릭이었으면 좋겠네요. http://puu.sh/nKddo/1e5fbf83f0.jpg 를 추천합니다. 고쳤습니다 00:11:168 - 는 그대로 할게요
* 01:01:347 - 이지/인세인에서는 안 빼셨으니 노말도 채우시는 건 어떨까요? 지금 박자에 넣기에는 조금 애매하다 생각됩니다
* 01:06:704 (4,5,6,1,2) - 노트가 매우 위축된 모습입니다. 밝은 분위기이기 때문에 노트를 이렇게 한쪽에 뭉쳐놓는 것보다는 멀리 퍼져나가게 하는 게 좋다고 생각합니다. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4738460 뒤는 조정을 해야겠지만 이런 식으로 이전의 노트들과 거리를 두어주는 것이 깔끔합니다. 이쪽부터 마지막까지 노트배치를 바꿔봤습니다.
* 01:18:490 (6,7) - 여기도 각각을 Ctrl+H,J 한 모양으로 배치하는 것이 위축되지 않고 자연스럽게 돌아들어간다고 생각합니다. ^
* 01:24:025 (5,6,1) - 매우 불편한 패턴입니다. 완전히 중앙으로부터 멀어지면서 거의 귀퉁이까지 갔는데 그 직후에 스피너가 있다면 중심을 제대로 잡기가 힘들 수 있습니다. 사실 이지에서도 조금 보완을 해줄 수 있는 부분입니다. ^ 이지쪽은 괜찮다고 생각됩니다.

[Insane]
* 00:23:668 - 명확하게 소리가 들리는데 노트 넣어주셨으면 좋겠습니다.
* 00:28:490 (1,2,3) - 여기는 디스턴스를 좀 더 줄이고, 00:28:847 (3,1) - 만 확실한 점프로 했으면 좋겠네요. 저는 지금모양이 좋은거같습니다
* 00:41:525 (4,1) - 이렇게 살짝 건드리는 건 외관상 별로라고 느껴지네요. 지금의 경우라면 완전히 피해서 가는 게 낫지 않을까요. 수정했습니다
* 00:42:954 (4) - 너무 아래로 내리는 것보단 http://puu.sh/nKf4x/7056519d97.jpg 정도로 하는 게 더 안정감 있어보입니다. 이것도 수정했습니다
* 01:03:847 (3) - http://puu.sh/nKfrP/feea252172.jpg 이쪽이 더 안정감 있어보입니다. 저는 지금이 괜찮은거 같아요
* 01:10:454 (7,1) - 개인적으로 저기 보컬은 다운비트를 약화시켜서라도 강하게 표현해 줄 필요가 있다고 생각합니다. 01:10:097 (5,6,7,1) - 를 보면 저 보컬이 연속점프의 그냥 일부로서 들어있는데, 이렇게 해서는 저 특정음이 강조가 안 됩니다. 모에카님 인센처럼 박자를 써보시는 걸 추천합니다. 이거는 생각좀 더 해보겠습니다
* 01:16:168 (6) - 음이 특별히 높아지기 때문에 점프의 중앙으로 모아서 내리는 것보다는 특출나게 보이게끔 (284,16) 정도로 올려주시는 것도 좋아 보입니다. 괜찮네요
* 01:20:097 (4,5) - 노트 순서를 바꾼 게 더 어울린다고 봅니다. 물론 보컬 강조를 위한 것입니다.
모딩 감사합니다 :)
Inversal
NM as requested from my Queue!

[Easy]
You should add a circle at. 00:01:525 - and 00:04:382 - to make the rhythm like 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - . Even this part 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - Has a bass sound but you still follow the guitar sound. So make it the same.

Looks fine here.

[Normal]

I think it's fine.

[Len's Hard]
00:09:561 - Try this rhythm? Since 00:09:561 - is a strong beat http://puu.sh/nLXNk/1ef128dd5e.jpg
00:11:525 (4,5) - Stack 4 on 5 and add one circle between 4 and 5? Like This?
00:38:847 (3) - Try Ctrl+G?

[Insane]

Really well mapped1 :D

[Moeka's Insane]

Really well mapped! :D And this diff is really fun to play since it's a long jump but it didn't too difficult to play.

And That's all! Really nice mapset! Sorry for couldn't find anything much. And here's STAR Maki-Chan Feels really goooodd
IntellectualBoy
딩모

[General]

앞에서 잘집어줘서 엄쯤
[Easy]

■ 00:14:025 (3) 박자 몇군데와 힛사 나오는부분을 몇개 빼먹으신거같은데.. 이지같은경우는 박자 리딩이 애매하거나, 엉성하게해놓으면 리딩하기 어려워져요 이부분이랑 똑같은게 00:14:918 (1,2,3,4) 여기인데 여기랑 일관성있게 해주시는게 더 좋을듯 해요
■ 00:21:525 (1,2) 박자를 좀 애매하게 끊으셨네요. (1)번같은경우는 드럼소리가 끝나는게 00:21:347 여기인데 그 앞부분에 끊으셔서 헷갈릴듯해요 (2)번도 마찬가지구요
■ 00:26:347 (3,1,2,3) 앞에서부턴 가사따라가셧는데 왜 이부분은 갑자기 뒷 휘슬부분을 따라가셧는지 약간 이해가 안되네요.. 박자도 애매하게 읽기 힘들고.. 여기도 가사를 따라서 매핑하는게 앞에나오는 부분과 자연스럽게 이어질거같아요
■ 00:30:454 (3,4) 어떤 소리를 따라간건지 구별하기 힘든 박자네요.. 엉성하게 (4)번노트가 무거운 드럼에 맞춰서 놓으신것 같기도하고.. 여기는 앞에
■ 00:29:740 (1,2) 여기랑 똑같은 부분인데 일관성이 없는 것 같구요.. 앞에 부분이랑 똑같이 해주시는게 박자 읽는면에서 더 쉬울 것 같아요
■ 00:41:882 (3,4) ^
[Normal]

■ 00:00:633 (1,2,3) 여기 힛사가 좀 밋밋한 것 같아요.. 약간 지루한 느낌인데 (1)번 슬라이더 끝에 휘슬 넣어주시고 (2)번에도 마찬가지로 슬라이더 끝에 넣어주시고 (3)번은 머리부분 휘슬 빼주시고 가운데에다가 휘슬 넣어주시면 소리가 괜찮아질 것 같아요
■ 00:04:740 (1,2,3) ^
■ 00:07:240 (1,2,3,4,5) 뭔가 이어지는 느낌이없고 단조롭고 딱딱한 느낌이 드는데.. 소리 몇개 무시한것도 보이구요.. 여기는 이렇게 바꾸시는게 리딩면에서 더 좋을 것 같아요
■ 00:18:490 (2,3) 앞에와 동일하게 리핏슬라로 해주시는게 일관성있고 쉬울 것 같네요
■ 00:46:882 (2) 노말샘플 힛사소리보단 커스텀 휘슬 힛사 소리가 더 강조되네요.. 노말샘플 지우시고 휘슬 넣어주세요
■ 00:47:418 (3) 중간에 노말 샘플 지워주세요, 노말 소리도 안나고 곡이랑 안맞아요
■ 00:49:740 (2) 위에 말한 00:46:882 (2) 랑 같아요
■ 00:50:275 (3) 위에 말한 00:47:418 (3) 과 같습니다
[Len's Hard]

■ 00:00:990 (1,2) 여기 슬라이더 힛사 좀 밋밋한 거 같은데.. (1)번이랑 (2)번뒤에 휘슬넣어주는게 더 나아보임
■ 00:04:025 (1,2) ^
■ 00:12:240 (1,2,3) 이런 애매한 점프 넣는것 보단.. 초반 부분이니까 리딩면에서 신경을 써주는게 플레이 할 때 더 좋을 것 같은데..
■ 00:14:561 (4,5,1) 점프를 넣을거면 약간 동선면적인 부분도 생각을 해줘야 할 것같은데, 여긴 좀 불편한느낌이 있음.. 오른쪽이 아니라 왼쪽부분에 노트를 넣었다면 괜찮았을텐데.. 4번에다가 5번을 스택시켜주는게 오히려 괜찮지 않을까 생각함
■ 00:17:775 (1) 애매한 점프보단 Ctrl+G 로해서 약간 대칭적인 면으로 만들어주는게 flow 면에서도 좋다고 생각함
■ 00:20:275 (4) 마찬가지로 Ctrl+G 해주는게 동선면에서 더좋음
■ 00:22:775 (1,2,3) 그냥 디스턴스에 맞춰주셈, 하드라고해도 티가나게 디스턴스 무작위로 하는건 아니라고봄
■ 00:38:847 (3) 직선 슬라보단 곡선으로 동그랗게 해주는게 동선이 부드럽게 될거같음
■ 00:43:847 (2) Ctrl+G 하는게 더나아보임
■ 00:52:775 (2) ^
■ 00:53:847 (2) 직선슬라로 놓으니까 뒤에 나오는 3,4 노트들 치기에 약간 딱딱하고 불편해보이는데 곡선으로 하는게 더 좋을듯
■ 01:02:775 (3) 직선성애자가 아니시면 곡선으로 해주셈 제발 ㅋㅋ 딱딱해보임
■ 01:21:704 (4,5) 음.. 4번과 5번 위치를 바꿔주는게 동선이 좋아보임



인세인들은 플레이랑 맵을 본 결과 손볼게 별로 없어서 한 나지나 모양모딩 1~2개만 받으면 될 듯해요
Topic Starter
Yuria

Inversal wrote:

NM as requested from my Queue!

[Easy]
You should add a circle at. 00:01:525 - and 00:04:382 - to make the rhythm like 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - . Even this part 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - Has a bass sound but you still follow the guitar sound. So make it the same. this part is quiet. so i think it is fine.

Looks fine here.

[Normal]

I think it's fine.

[Insane]

Really well mapped1 :D

And That's all! Really nice mapset! Sorry for couldn't find anything much. And here's STAR Maki-Chan Feels really goooodd
thanks star and modding~ :)

Gloria Guard wrote:

딩모

[General]

앞에서 잘집어줘서 엄쯤
[Easy]

■ 00:14:025 (3) 박자 몇군데와 힛사 나오는부분을 몇개 빼먹으신거같은데.. 이지같은경우는 박자 리딩이 애매하거나, 엉성하게해놓으면 리딩하기 어려워져요 이부분이랑 똑같은게 00:14:918 (1,2,3,4) 여기인데 여기랑 일관성있게 해주시는게 더 좋을듯 해요 저는 지금 박자가 길게 흐르는듯한 배경음과 기타소리도 같이 따라간거라 괜찮다고 생각됩니다
■ 00:21:525 (1,2) 박자를 좀 애매하게 끊으셨네요. (1)번같은경우는 드럼소리가 끝나는게 00:21:347 여기인데 그 앞부분에 끊으셔서 헷갈릴듯해요 (2)번도 마찬가지구요 이거는 지금 되있는 박자 쪽이 더 강하기 때문에 이곳에서 끊은것입니다
■ 00:26:347 (3,1,2,3) 앞에서부턴 가사따라가셧는데 왜 이부분은 갑자기 뒷 휘슬부분을 따라가셧는지 약간 이해가 안되네요.. 박자도 애매하게 읽기 힘들고.. 여기도 가사를 따라서 매핑하는게 앞에나오는 부분과 자연스럽게 이어질거같아요 가사 따라간것 맞습니다. 00:37:775 (1,2) - 이쪽과 같은 박자라고 보시면 될거같네요
■ 00:30:454 (3,4) 어떤 소리를 따라간건지 구별하기 힘든 박자네요.. 엉성하게 (4)번노트가 무거운 드럼에 맞춰서 놓으신것 같기도하고.. 여기는 앞에가사를 따라간겁니다 4번부분은 기타나 드럼소리 같이 들리는 큰 박자기때문에 넣어준것이구요
■ 00:29:740 (1,2) 여기랑 똑같은 부분인데 일관성이 없는 것 같구요.. 앞에 부분이랑 똑같이 해주시는게 박자 읽는면에서 더 쉬울 것 같아요
■ 00:41:882 (3,4) ^ ^
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■ 00:00:633 (1,2,3) 여기 힛사가 좀 밋밋한 것 같아요.. 약간 지루한 느낌인데 (1)번 슬라이더 끝에 휘슬 넣어주시고 (2)번에도 마찬가지로 슬라이더 끝에 넣어주시고 (3)번은 머리부분 휘슬 빼주시고 가운데에다가 휘슬 넣어주시면 소리가 괜찮아질 것 같아요 기타 음의 높낮이에 따라서 휘슬을 넣어준겁니다
■ 00:04:740 (1,2,3) ^ ^
■ 00:07:240 (1,2,3,4,5) 뭔가 이어지는 느낌이없고 단조롭고 딱딱한 느낌이 드는데.. 소리 몇개 무시한것도 보이구요.. 여기는 이렇게 바꾸시는게 리딩면에서 더 좋을 것 같아요 메인 기타소리를 따라간 박자입니다. 저는 지금도 괜찮다고 생각됩니다
■ 00:18:490 (2,3) 앞에와 동일하게 리핏슬라로 해주시는게 일관성있고 쉬울 것 같네요 수정했습니다
■ 00:46:882 (2) 노말샘플 힛사소리보단 커스텀 휘슬 힛사 소리가 더 강조되네요.. 노말샘플 지우시고 휘슬 넣어주세요 저는 지금 힛사가 더 좋게 들리는거 같습니다 커스텀 휘슬소리만 넣으니 너무 쿵쿵거리기만해서 재미없는것 같구요
■ 00:47:418 (3) 중간에 노말 샘플 지워주세요, 노말 소리도 안나고 곡이랑 안맞아요 음이 높아지는것이 있어서 그것을 노말샘플로 표현해본겁니다
■ 00:49:740 (2) 위에 말한 00:46:882 (2) 랑 같아요 ^
■ 00:50:275 (3) 위에 말한 00:47:418 (3) 과 같습니다 ^


인세인들은 플레이랑 맵을 본 결과 손볼게 별로 없어서 한 나지나 모양모딩 1~2개만 받으면 될 듯해요
모딩 감사합니다
Ujimatsu Chiya

유리아님 인센중에 00:51:882 (5) - 이놈 리폿으로 바꿔서 리핏슬라로 해도 괜찮을거 같네요. 완전히 소리가 꺼지는 타이밍은 00:52:061 - 여기가 맞긴한데 그렇다고 늘리면 역시 어색하니 저거 리핏으로 바꿔도 괜찮아보임. 플레이 할때 저는 00:51:882 (5,1) - 이거 공백이 1/4인줄알았어요 순간..

노멀에선 01:05:632 (2,3,4,5,6) - 이거 열차 좀 심한거 같으니 http://puu.sh/nMnVF/af46170dea.jpg 이런식으로 뛰어놓는편이 더 좋아요
하나 더 말한다면 01:10:454 (1) - 이놈도 분명 피니쉬 자리는 아닌데 뉴콤오는데다가 잘 들어보시면 드럼 소리는 있어요. 그니까 클럽은 무리더라도 휘슬로 보컬 한번 잡아주시면 개꿀 ( 분명히 다른곳에도 이런식으로 열차나오는곳있으니 바꿔보시영 )

크흑... 노래 개 꿀... 마미 목소리에 취한다..... 아 저도 만들꺼임 비기너 만들어 드림 ㄱㄷ...
Topic Starter
Yuria
@eINess 좋은의견 감사합니다 인센은 수정했구요
노말 01:05:632 (2,3,4,5,6) - 이정도 열차는 저는 괜찮다고 생각됩니다. 앞이나 뒤에도 이런구간은 충분히 있었구용
01:10:454 (1) - 이건 가사를 따라간건데 흰틱에서 드럼소리가 나서 힛사를 안넣은겁니당
Len
거의다 고쳤어요 바빠서 리플은 못달은 ㅠ
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Skylar
Shooting Star~
Underforest
Hi, from modding queue

Your map is very clean so I won't mod.
GL :)
Natsu
From my queue

Shioi's Insane:

  1. Reduce OD to 8, this diff is really easy to play, BPM is low, current value feels exaggerate for this kind of map
  2. 01:27:418 (4) - after checking ranked versions and listen to this multiple times, I think it should end at 1/8


Insane:

  1. 00:23:490 (1,2) - this feels alot better as a slider than two circles
  2. 00:56:168 (5) - add finish on the head
  3. 00:55:454 (3) - same as above
  4. 00:59:025 (1) - ^
  5. 01:06:168 (1) - whitle on head
  6. 01:09:025 (1) - finish in the head
  7. 01:16:704 (2,3,4) - rhythm is super weird here, just use something like:
  8. 01:24:025 (3,4) - Remove 4 and make 3 a repeat slider, fit better with your vocal mapping
  9. 01:24:918 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you can make a better pattern, the current one looks like your placing objects randomly IMO
  10. 01:27:418 (4) - this should end in 1/8


Hard:

  1. AR is too high, bpm is low and your map isn't jumpy, use 7,5 max


Normal:

  1. 01:10:454 (1) - whistle on head
  2. 01:24:918 (1) -should end in 1/8 check hard diff, I think that's the correct way
  3. Hitsound suggestions at your insane apply here


Easy

  1. Hitsound suggestions at your insane and normal apply here
  2. 01:24:918 (1) -should end in 1/8 check hard diff, I think that's the correct way
  3. 00:10:454 (2,3) - too confused for an easy, you following different instruments with different gaps in the timeline, just go safe and do:


If bold things are fixed you can call me back
Momoka
all fixed thank you~

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Title:Contrail ~Kiseki~
TitleUnicode:Contrail~軌跡~
Artist:Mami Kawada
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254,334,83490,6,0,P|348:318|440:308,1,180,10|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,199,84025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
281,115,84204,2,0,L|301:225,1,90,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
371,51,84561,1,10,0:0:0:0:
193,120,84740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,256,84918,5,12,0:1:0:0:
146,207,85275,1,8,0:1:0:0:
279,30,85632,1,8,0:1:0:0:
364,256,85990,1,8,0:1:0:0:
167,316,86347,5,8,0:1:0:0:
395,183,86704,1,8,0:1:0:0:
205,86,87061,1,8,0:1:0:0:
269,309,87418,2,0,P|323:308|291:273,1,126,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Yuria
@Natsu
all fixed~ thanks!
Natsu
seems fine , GL :D~
Topic Starter
Yuria
wow~ thanks! :)
Momoka
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귯토 치가츠이타
츠마사키데 노조이타 미라이니~~
솟토 히쿠 콘트레일~ 유메노 라이은~~~~
Topic Starter
Yuria
;ㅅ;
Kibbleru
hi! m4m. here's my map --> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/381644

general
tbh u should copy shioi's hitsounds, they're alot better lol

easy
00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm feels a bit weird, its probably better to focus on white ticks more, try this
00:13:490 (3) - i dont think 3/2 is necessary here, just stay consistent with 00:16:347 (3,4) -
00:30:454 (3,4) - this works better.
00:41:882 (3,4) - ^
00:36:347 (3,4) - 3/2 gap doesn't work that well here since 00:37:418 - isn't that strong of a beat, try something else.
01:14:918 (3) - weird place to use 3/2 slider imo.. doesn't really fit anything. rework pls.

hard
wow ur rhythm choice is even weirder than mine ww
01:24:918 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe u can do what the other diffs do and use 1/1 circles.

insane
01:06:168 - whistle doesn't fit with the drums here. same with normal diff i think. check that too

mom
00:42:775 (3,4) - think u can try ctrl g here
00:45:632 (1) - this doesn't fit tbh. don't hear anything here that is worth mapping out.
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