Mami Kawada - Contrail ~Kiseki~ · forum

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2016-02-24T21:05:31+00:00

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Title:Contrail ~Kiseki~
TitleUnicode:Contrail～軌跡～
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Yuria
Version:Moeka's Insane
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:ao no kanata four rhythm beyond the sky into the firmament sprite op opening tv size
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14:51 Moeka: `zzz
14:51 Moeka: 넵
14:51 Sylphi: 점프가 좀 크네요
14:52 Moeka: ㅠㅠ
14:52 Sylphi: 하드 난이도가 어느정도인지는 모르겠는데
14:52 Sylphi: 아래쪽에 하위 인센 하나 더두는거 아니면
14:52 Sylphi: 이건 좀..
14:52 Moeka: 인센 2개
14:52 Moeka: 있어욥 ㅋㅋ
14:52 Sylphi: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
14:52 Moeka: 제꺼가 상위
14:53 Sylphi: 00:09:745 (4,1,2,3) - 일단 이거말인데요
14:53 Sylphi: 저부분은 신나거나 뭔가 고조된다고 해야하나
14:53 Moeka: 내
14:53 Sylphi: 그런건 아니니까
14:53 Sylphi: 저런 점프는 좀 크게 느껴진다고 해야하나
14:53 Sylphi: 아 선택을 잘못했네
14:53 Sylphi: 00:09:923 (1,2,3,4) - 
14:53 Moeka: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
14:54 Moeka: 00:10:459 (4) - 여기에
14:54 Moeka: 딱 소리
14:54 Moeka: 강조하려고 크게했는데
14:54 Moeka: 넘 큰가
14:54 Sylphi: 그부분은 강조할만 해요
14:54 Sylphi: 근데 좀 커요...
14:55 Sylphi: 그냥 전체적으로 점점 늘어나는 식으로 했으면 그나마 하긴 편할것 같은데
14:55 Sylphi: 00:09:745 (4,1) - 중간에 여기서 한번 거리가 많이 줄잖음
14:55 Moeka: 흠
14:55 Moeka: 낮춰야겠군요
14:56 Sylphi: 00:23:495 (1,2,3) - 이 파트내에서는 제일 많이 비운듯한 느낌이 드네요
14:56 Moeka: 처음엔 보컬이 없어서
14:56 Moeka: 뿅뾰요ㅃㅇ소리만 조금 매핑했어요
14:56 Sylphi: 그럼 그냥 초반 슬라이더 2개를
14:57 Sylphi: 1/2 슬라 3개로 둬도 되지 않음?
14:57 Sylphi: 00:57:780 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - 잼
14:58 Moeka: 그럼 잔잔한 부부인데
14:58 Moeka: 1/2 슬라가 넘 많아서..
14:58 Moeka: 저거 바꿔야되요
14:58 Moeka: 원래 가로로 할려고했는데
14:58 Moeka: wik이 패턴 이미 써버렸음;
14:58 Sylphi: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
14:58 Sylphi: 중복된다고 문제되지는 않을거라 생각하는데
14:59 Moeka: 별로 안좋아하셔서 바꿧음
14:59 Moeka: 맵셋 주인분께서
14:59 Moeka: 원래 걍 신경 안써서 똑가이헀는데
14:59 Sylphi: 매핑 오랜만에 하신거죠?
15:00 Moeka: 네
15:00 Moeka: 거의 3~4달?
15:01 Sylphi: 평소보다 모딩 좀 올수도 있을것 같음
15:02 Moeka: 굿
15:02 Moeka: 자 빨리 포스팅 하시죠
15:02 Moeka: 쿠도스
15:02 Moeka: ㄱ
15:02 Sylphi: 이런
15:02 Moeka: 제맵셋도 아니지만

Tenseki

803 posts

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Tenseki 2016-02-25T07:39:36+00:00

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Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2016-02-25T14:03:29+00:00

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Moa

453 posts

Joined December 2012

Moa 2016-02-29T02:30:25+00:00

From In-game PM
[general]
프리뷰 포인트
01:01:347 (5) - 여기로 맞춰주세요 전부
[Easy]
00:07:597 (3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/npd4r/42011009d9.jpg 이 머리부분들을 삼각형으로 만드시는건 어떻습니까
00:19:204 (3) - ctrl+h 로 끝부분이 4번을 향하게 하시면 좋을거같습니다 지금은 1번을향해서 이지하는 초보들이 4번을 못칠수도있음 http://puu.sh/npdgc/13ff7f1be7.jpg 이렇게
00:30:632 (3,1) - 이런 텀이 꽤많네여? 이지러들은 좀 헷갈려할수잇음
이부분은 http://puu.sh/npdoD/b63f16e10d.jpg 이렇게도 할수있겠네여 참고 하시길
00:50:454 (3,4) - 블랭킷 고치세여
01:07:775 (1,3) - 블랭킷 노리신거면 약간 비뚤어졌습니다
01:10:632 (1,2) - ^
전체적으로 텀 1/1 맞춰주시는걸 '추천'드립니다 추천일뿐 뭐 그건 개인 스타일이져
[노말]
전체적으로 괜찮은거같네여? (~~사실노말잘못봄~~)
[빠른 하-드]
잘찌것당

뭐 01:05:275 - 이런부분은 클릭하게 하는게 어떻나? 정도?
[인센]
00:36:704 - 이런 강력한 비트는 클릭하게 하는게 어떤가엿!
00:38:132 - ^ 등등 이제이런건 안잡 (꽤 있네여 이런부분)(~~사실잡을게없어서 넣은거라함~~)
01:19:740 (2) - 넘나 갑작스럽게 ds가 좁아져땅
잘만드렀땅
[모에카's 인센]
좋은 맵이당

오옝 이지만 모딩한거같당 역시나는 이지러인거같다

Last edited by Moa 2016-02-29T04:31:08+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ecdonald

336 posts

Joined January 2012

ecdonald 2016-02-29T02:34:18+00:00

Hello, from my queue. sorry I could fine just a few points ;_; they are almost perfetctly fine for me xD

[Easy]
fine for me owo

[Normal]

00:56:168 (3) - how about making blanket to 00:55:454 (2) - ?

[Len's Hard]
00:59:025 (1) - - how about moving 00:59:025 (1) - to x:120 y:296 to make 00:58:490 (3) - 's end and 00:58:847 (4) - and 00:59:025 (1) - 's end perfect equilateral triangle?

and I found some circles are a bit too low (touching scoremeter@2.0x) in Normal(01:19:204 (1) -) and Len's Hard(00:26:347 (1) - and 00:44:740 (1) - ), but I think it's ok so just saying

[Insane]
00:08:847 (4) - moving to x:270 y:251 would looks nicer http://puu.sh/npdt0/aa4182d94b.jpg
00:42:954 (4) - how about like this shape? http://puu.sh/npdBN/1a3c128d1c.jpg

[Moeka's Insane]
00:27:418 (3) - make straight to 00:26:882 (2) - or same distance to 00:26:882 (2,4) - ?
00:49:382 (2) - move to x:346 y:297 (same cordinate of 00:47:418 (3) - )? it would looks nicer
01:27:418 (4) - how about 20~30% volume?

really nice mapset! good luck

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Tenseki 2016-02-29T04:27:34+00:00

Placeholder
I will mod these BGs

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2016-02-29T06:14:40+00:00

ecdonald wrote:
[Moeka's Insane]
00:27:418 (3) - make straight to 00:26:882 (2) - or same distance to 00:26:882 (2,4) - ? good idea
00:49:382 (2) - move to x:346 y:297 (same cordinate of 00:47:418 (3) - )? it would looks nicer i don't think i need to stack these two. it's not noticeable imo
01:27:418 (4) - how about 20~30% volume? sure

ty

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Last edited by Ozato Fumika 2016-02-29T06:36:00+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Len

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Joined June 2012

Len 2016-02-29T06:23:02+00:00

Moa wrote:

From In-game PM
[빠른 하-드]
잘찌것당
뭐 01:05:275 - 이런부분은 클릭하게 하는게 어떻나? 정도? 나중에 고려해보겠써요

오옝 이지만 모딩한거같당 역시나는 이지러인거같다

ecdonald wrote:
Hello, from my queue. sorry I could fine just a few points ;_; they are almost perfetctly fine for me xD
[Len's Hard]
00:59:025 (1) - - how about moving 00:59:025 (1) - to x:120 y:296 to make 00:58:490 (3) - 's end and 00:58:847 (4) - and 00:59:025 (1) - 's end perfect equilateral triangle? sorry i think its fine

and I found some circles are a bit too low (touching scoremeter@2.0x) in Normal(01:19:204 (1) -) and Len's Hard(00:26:347 (1) - and 00:44:740 (1) - ), but I think it's ok so just saying what do you mean? sorry i can't understand

really nice mapset! good luck

http://puu.sh/npqtG/4bd18a96f5.zip 힛사 수정 했어요

Cellina

1,004 posts

Joined March 2013

Cellina 2016-02-29T08:03:04+00:00

18:30 Reana: 인센부터가겠음
18:30 Reana: 00:01:168 (2) - 
18:31 Reana: 여기 슬라머리에도
18:31 Reana: 휘슬 넣는게
18:31 Reana: 좋다고생각
18:31 Reana: 00:01:168 (2) - 
18:31 Reana: 마찬가지
18:31 Yuria: 음이 높았다 낮아지는거라 안넣기로
18:32 Reana: 00:36:882 (2) - 이부분이 쎈데
18:32 Reana: 왜 디스턴스는 00:36:882 (2,3) - 이게 더넓음
18:32 Yuria: 드럼소리
18:32 Reana: 흠
18:32 Reana: 님 지금까지 보컬 따라간거같은데
18:33 Yuria: 보컬도
18:33 Yuria: 그냥 이어지는느낌이라
18:33 Reana: 저기서 무리하게 드럼 안따라가도 될거같은데요
18:33 Reana: 00:57:954 (2) - 슬라끝이랑 안닿게 좀 오른쪽으로 옮겨보셈
18:34 Yuria: 모양맞추려고한건데 살짝 아래로 내리겟음
18:34 Reana: 그리고
18:34 Reana: 맵 전체에
18:34 Reana: 휘슬 어디갔죠
18:34 Reana: 제가 추천드리는건
18:34 Reana: 소프트휘슬을
18:34 Reana: 드럼 클랩으로 하고
18:34 Yuria: 소프트위슬넣는거 말하시는거죵
18:34 Reana: 휘슬로 힛사질하는걸
18:34 Reana: 추천
18:35 Reana: 그리고
18:35 Reana: 태그 통일좀...
18:35 Reana: 아 아니구나
18:35 Yuria: 엥
18:35 Reana: 업뎃을 안했
18:35 Reana: ㅋㅋ;
18:35 Yuria: 태그 통일해놧을텐데
18:35 Yuria: zz
18:36 *Reana is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/746736 Lia - Bravely You (TV Size)]
18:36 Reana: 이맵 참고해서
18:36 Reana: 힛사질해보셈
18:36 Reana: 지금 휘슬은
18:36 Reana: 살짝 지루해서
18:36 Reana: 가끔 1/2박씩 휘슬넣으신다던지 하면
18:36 Reana: 바꿀필요도 없을듯
18:36 Yuria: 저 힛사는 소프트휘슬은 그냥 조용한구간에서 쓰는 경향있어서
18:37 *Reana is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/837569 Lia - Bravely You (TV Size) [Taeyang's Insane]]
18:37 Reana: 태양님도
18:37 Reana: 님처럼 쓰셨는데
18:37 Reana: 저런식으로 하면 꽤 재밌을듯
18:39 Reana: 별로 잡을게없네
18:40 Yuria: 그냥 살짝 아쉬운거같은거 그런거 잡아주셈
18:40 Reana: 흠
18:40 Reana: 01:13:132 (4) - 디스턴스 더 벌려줄수 있을듯
18:41 Yuria: ㅇㅋ 그런거
18:41 Reana: 슬라틱 힛사
18:41 Reana: 안쓰심?
18:41 Reana: 01:27:418 (4) - 
18:41 Yuria: 네 안쓰는게 나은느낌
18:41 Reana: 상위난이도에도 1/8진동썼는데
18:42 Reana: 쓰는걸 권장합니다
18:42 Yuria: 저는 좀 다르게하기위해서 그냥 슬라로 끌었음
18:42 Reana: 통일시키는것도 나쁘지않음
18:42 Reana: 01:01:704 (1) - 217/336정도 어떰
18:43 Yuria: ㄴㄴ
18:43 Reana: 01:16:347 (1,2,3,4,1) - 계속 커스텀쓰다 여기서만 노말쓰니깐 개이상해요
18:44 Yuria: 저거
18:44 Yuria: 소프트휘슬소리만 따로 강조한것
18:44 Reana: 저렇게 강조할부분 생각보다 많았어요
18:45 Yuria: 힛사는한번 전체적으로 한번 생각해보겟음
19:01 Yuria: 님 모딩하셧으면 로그를 스레드에 남겨주십시오
19:01 Reana: dk
19:02 Reana: 까먹

Elasia

160 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Elasia 2016-02-29T08:31:20+00:00

Moa

Moa wrote:

From In-game PM
[general]
프리뷰 포인트
01:01:347 (5) - 여기로 맞춰주세요 전부 일부러 보컬흘러나오는부분보다 살짝 앞에 프리뷰 잡았어용
[Easy]
00:07:597 (3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/npd4r/42011009d9.jpg 이 머리부분들을 삼각형으로 만드시는건 어떻습니까 헉 삼각형 안되있었네용 ㄳ
00:19:204 (3) - ctrl+h 로 끝부분이 4번을 향하게 하시면 좋을거같습니다 지금은 1번을향해서 이지하는 초보들이 4번을 못칠수도있음 http://puu.sh/npdgc/13ff7f1be7.jpg 이렇게 ㅇㅋ
00:30:632 (3,1) - 이런 텀이 꽤많네여? 이지러들은 좀 헷갈려할수잇음
이부분은 http://puu.sh/npdoD/b63f16e10d.jpg 이렇게도 할수있겠네여 참고 하시길 저는 지금도 괜찮은거같음
00:50:454 (3,4) - 블랭킷 고치세여 ㅇㅋ
01:07:775 (1,3) - 블랭킷 노리신거면 약간 비뚤어졌습니다 블랭킷 노린건 아니였는데 괜찮아서 함
01:10:632 (1,2) - ^ 이건좀 별로인듯
전체적으로 텀 1/1 맞춰주시는걸 '추천'드립니다 추천일뿐 뭐 그건 개인 스타일이져 취향존중 ㄳ
[노말]
전체적으로 괜찮은거같네여? (~~사실노말잘못봄~~)
[인센]
00:36:704 - 이런 강력한 비트는 클릭하게 하는게 어떤가엿! 보컬도 같이 신경쓴다고 끌어주는식으로 넣은거라
00:38:132 - ^ 등등 이제이런건 안잡 (꽤 있네여 이런부분)(~~사실잡을게없어서 넣은거라함~~) ^
01:19:740 (2) - 넘나 갑작스럽게 ds가 좁아져땅 음이 약해서 낮게잡은건데 살~짝 아래로 내렸음
잘만드렀땅

오옝 이지만 모딩한거같당 역시나는 이지러인거같다

ecdonald

ecdonald wrote:
Hello, from my queue. sorry I could fine just a few points ;_; they are almost perfetctly fine for me xD

[Easy]
fine for me owo

[Normal]

00:56:168 (3) - how about making blanket to 00:55:454 (2) - ? current is fine imo

[Insane]
00:08:847 (4) - moving to x:270 y:251 would looks nicer http://puu.sh/npdt0/aa4182d94b.jpg fixed a bit
00:42:954 (4) - how about like this shape? http://puu.sh/npdBN/1a3c128d1c.jpg current flow better imo

really nice mapset! good luck

thanks modding~

Moa

453 posts

Joined December 2012

Moa 2016-02-29T22:55:57+00:00

일부러 보컬흘러나오는부분보다 살짝 앞에 프리뷰 잡았어용
우움.. 프리뷰포인트 초록선 빨간선 중 하나라도 틱에 안맞으면 안되는거아닌감..
모르게따 헤헤 오스나해야징

그나저나맵셋 완전 了从人巨大口久? 口口久己口立巨己口了从人巨大己口了从口匚ヲヲヲ

Last edited by Moa 2016-02-29T22:57:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Moa

453 posts

Joined December 2012

Moa 2016-02-29T22:56:36+00:00

뭐냐 오류로 두개써졋음.. 지울수도없는거 그냥 잡담하다갈게여 빼애애애앵애ㅐㄱ

Elasia

160 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Elasia 2016-03-01T01:24:52+00:00

Moa wrote:
일부러 보컬흘러나오는부분보다 살짝 앞에 프리뷰 잡았어용
우움.. 프리뷰포인트 초록선 빨간선 중 하나라도 틱에 안맞으면 안되는거아닌감..
모르게따 헤헤 오스나해야징

그나저나맵셋 완전 了从人巨大口久? 口口久己口立巨己口了从人巨大己口了从口匚ヲヲヲ

랭맵들중에 언스냅된 프리뷰포인트도 있고 크게 상관 없을듯합니다

Moa

453 posts

Joined December 2012

Moa 2016-03-01T15:48:13+00:00

Yuria wrote:
Moa wrote:
일부러 보컬흘러나오는부분보다 살짝 앞에 프리뷰 잡았어용
우움.. 프리뷰포인트 초록선 빨간선 중 하나라도 틱에 안맞으면 안되는거아닌감..
모르게따 헤헤 오스나해야징

그나저나맵셋 완전 了从人巨大口久? 口口久己口立巨己口了从人巨大己口了从口匚ヲヲヲ
랭맵들중에 언스냅된 프리뷰포인트도 있고 크게 상관 없을듯합니다

ok GL 랭크되길바래여 ^^ 그런의미로 별쏴드림

Elasia

160 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Elasia 2016-03-01T16:26:26+00:00

Moa wrote:
ok GL 랭크되길바래여 ^^ 그런의미로 별쏴드림

앙 모아띠~~

Lefia

674 posts

Joined August 2014

Lefia 2016-03-01T18:31:10+00:00

NM queue here~

mod

[general]

the preview point, it should be 01:01:347

[easy]

i think it's fine

[normal]

00:18:490 (2) make it blanket
00:36:347 (4) ^

[hard]

00:49:204 (1) make it into x:464 y:128

Nice beatmap
GL~

Elasia

160 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Elasia 2016-03-02T02:26:45+00:00

MadaoX wrote:
NM queue here~

[general]

the preview point, it should be 01:01:347 ok fix

[easy]

i think it's fine

[normal]

00:18:490 (2) make it blanket current is fine imo
00:36:347 (4) ^ what blanket? i can't understand

Nice beatmap
GL~

thanks you~

Len

2,812 posts

Joined June 2012

Len 2016-03-02T05:45:51+00:00

osu file format v14

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16:49 Nara: 모딩해줄라햇는데
16:49 Nara: 지금나가봐야되서
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16:50 Nara: 못칠정도는 아닌데
16:50 Nara: ㅇㅇ
16:51 Nara: 개인적으로 저런건 걍
16:51 Yuria: 다른사람들도 저기가 좀 어렵다고하긴햇는데
16:51 Nara: 엑스트라 더타칠때나
16:51 Nara: 자주 나오는거긴한데
16:51 Nara: 님 난이도 한판 해봤는데
16:51 Nara: 저거틀리고 나머지 1플카
16:51 Yuria: 흠
16:52 Yuria: 근데 그냥 반복슬라로 놓기엔 뭔가 심심해서 저렇게놨는데
16:52 Nara: 재량껏 해보셈
16:52 Nara: ㅋㅋ
16:52 Nara: 00:36:347 (1) - 글고이거 방금본건데
16:52 Nara: 먼가 박자가 어색함
16:52 Nara: 시간이 좀 많았더라면 어캐하라고 추천해줬을텐데 알아서 고민해보셈
16:52 Nara: ㅋㅋ
16:52 Yuria: ㅇㅋ;
16:53 Nara: 00:51:882 (5) -
16:53 Nara: 여기
16:53 Nara: 00:51:704 (4,5) - 이거두개 걍 삭제하고
16:53 Yuria: 슬라로?
16:53 Nara: 00:51:704 (4) - 여기자리에 1/2 두는거도
16:53 Nara: 나쁘지않은거같음
16:55 Yuria: 저도 첨에그냥 그런식으로 슬라놨다가 심심해서 저렇게바꿨는데
16:55 Nara: 님 일단
16:55 Nara: 제가 볼때는
16:55 Nara: 맵셋에 언랭커블은 없는거같은데
16:55 Nara: 모딩을 한다면 박자/배치 지적인데
16:55 Nara: 걍 지적 들어오면
16:56 Nara: 한번 고민해보고 그게 괜찮은거같다 싶으면 바꾸면되는부분임
16:56 Yuria: ㅇㅋ
16:56 Nara: 원래 진짜 초보맵 아니면 모딩이 다 그럼
16:56 Nara: ㅋㅋ
16:56 Nara: 01:01:347 (1) - 이거 뉴콤 각인데
16:56 Yuria: 아니 남들이 다 제맵보는데 맵은 괜찮은데 먼가 부족한거같다그래서
16:56 *Nara is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/911923 Mami Kawada - Contrail ~Kiseki~ [Easy]]
16:57 Yuria: ㅇㅋ
16:57 Nara: 전그럼 나가봐야되서
16:58 Nara: ㅋㅋ
16:58 Yuria: ㄴㅁ아
16:58 Yuria: 스레드에 올려주셈

ToGlette

Global Moderator

422 posts

Joined September 2011

ToGlette 2016-03-03T18:20:49+00:00

IRC modding for Moeka and Yuria's diff

Moeka's diff

02:59 ToGlette: 흐음
02:59 Moeka: 흐음
02:59 ToGlette: 00:13:490 여기 배치가 음
02:59 ToGlette: 뭔가 플레이할때 위화감이 있달까
03:00 Moeka: `거기
03:00 Moeka: 링크가 고장났는데
03:00 ToGlette: 00:13:490
03:00 Moeka: 00:13:490 (1,2,3) - 요부분?
03:00 ToGlette: ㅇㅇ
03:00 ToGlette: 그 부분이 뭐라고 해야할까
03:00 ToGlette: 앞뒤 통틀어서 너무 우측으로만 치우쳐있는것 같기도 하고
03:01 Moeka: 00:13:132 (5,1) - 요기 연결 부분이
03:01 Moeka: 이상한거에요?
03:01 ToGlette: ㅇㅇ
03:01 Moeka: ㅇㅎ
03:01 ToGlette: 맞음 거기임
03:01 Moeka: 인정함
03:01 Moeka: 너무 오른족에만
03:01 Moeka: 패턴 생각나면 리매핑해보죠
03:02 ToGlette: 그 이외에는 괜찮아요
03:02 ToGlette: 점프가 악랄하긴 함 나머지 부분에 비하면
03:02 ToGlette: 그런데 저 비피엠이라 딱히 문제 될것도 없을듯
03:02 Moeka: ㅋㅋㅋ ㄳ

Yuria's diff

03:07 ToGlette: ㅎㅇ
03:07 ToGlette: 00:01:882
03:08 ToGlette: 여기 슬라이더가 앞의 두 슬라이더 진행방향이랑 흐름이 좀 안맞는거 같음 어색함 ㅠ
03:08 ToGlette: 00:04:740
03:08 ToGlette: 여기도
03:09 ToGlette: 앞 뒤 슬라이더 포함해서 배치를 다시 해보시는건 어떰?
03:09 Yuria: 그런가용
03:09 Yuria: 그 반복슬라 말하시는거죵
03:09 ToGlette: ㅇㅇ
03:09 ToGlette: 123 에서 3
03:10 ToGlette: 뭔가 개인적으론 어거지로 꺾어서 들어온다는 느낌을 받음
03:10 Yuria: 그
03:10 Yuria: 00:03:500 (1,2) -
03:10 Yuria: 이거는 괜찮은거같나용
03:10 ToGlette: 요것도 그럼
03:10 ToGlette: 박자자체는 흠잡을곳 없는데
03:10 ToGlette: 배치가 조금 어색함
03:10 Yuria: 그럼 앞부분 쉬는구간은 잘 수정해보겟음
03:11 ToGlette: 키아이 도입부분은
03:11 ToGlette: 매우 맘에듬 ㅋㅋ
03:11 Yuria: ㅋㅋ 그런가여
03:12 ToGlette: 01:04:561
03:12 ToGlette: 요부분 말인데요
03:12 ToGlette: 6을 밑으로 당기거나 7을 밑으로 당기거나 해서
03:12 ToGlette: 45 하고 좀 간격을 맞춰보시는건?
03:12 ToGlette: 아니면 7만 밑으로 잡아당겨서
03:13 ToGlette: 6하고 7 간격을 좀 멀리 떨어트려도
03:13 ToGlette: 괜찮을거같음
03:13 Yuria: 45하고 67간격 맞추는게 좋을거같다 이거죵
03:13 ToGlette: 아니면 아예 456 삼각형 만들고 7을 4와 스택 시키거나
03:13 ToGlette: 배치를 바꿔보시는게 좋을 것 같음
03:14 Yuria: 음
03:14 Yuria: 살짝 별모양만들면서 꼬아본건데
03:15 ToGlette: 그리고 맨 마지막 슬라이더
03:15 ToGlette: 끝 아예 음소거 해보시는건 어떰?
03:15 ToGlette: 노트 소리가 들려서 어색함
03:15 Yuria: 01:27:428 (4) -
03:15 Yuria: 이거요?
03:15 ToGlette: ㅇㅇ
03:16 ToGlette: 곡 자체에 소리가 있으니까
03:16 ToGlette: 그냥 그대로 써먹어도 상관 없을것 같음
03:16 Yuria: 음
03:16 Yuria: 그거도 괜찮은거같네용
03:16 ToGlette: ㅇㅋ 이상임
03:16 ToGlette: 배치는 한번 고려 해봐영
03:16 Yuria: ㄳㄳ

eeezzzeee

979 posts

Joined August 2013

eeezzzeee 2016-03-04T02:02:06+00:00

hi, from my queue

[Moeka's Insane]

00:09:561 (3,4,1,2) - flow is really awkward here imo because the space between 4,1 is so small. try moving 4 down to 292:348 or so
00:12:418 (2,4) - try moving it somewhere in the middle of the next triangle 00:13:490 (1,2,3) - instead of so close to the top to make it look a little neater. maybe like 471:188?
00:19:740 (4,5) - this spacing is very big for no reason really. considering its the same thing as before 00:14:382 (5,6) -
00:24:918 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - hmm the spacing here suddenly becomes really large compared this to the pattern right before it 00:23:490 (1,2,3) - . isnt this supposed to be a slow section anyway? its kinda weird that we have really slow SV but the actual distance between objects is about the same as the faster parts lol.
00:31:525 (5,1) - check blanket
00:35:632 (4,5,6) - try putting them closer, use the same spacing as 00:34:918 (1,2,3) - earlier!
00:42:418 (2,3) - too big and again no reason lol >.<
00:47:775 (1) - uh this rhythm doesnt sound right.. the blue tick that the 3/4 reverse is on is not even strong.. maybe try this? http://puu.sh/ntWYq/93a9630c51.jpg
00:53:311 (1,3) - blanket
00:57:775 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - really? come on the rest of this map is so easy compared to this its way overdone imo
01:09:025 (1) - unnecessary finish

[Insane]

00:52:418 (3,1) - try using the same shape for these two
00:55:454 (3,5) - check blanket
00:59:025 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - missing hitsounds here
01:10:454 (1) - i would recommend mapping the background sounds here instead of the vocal, because it ends up skipping a lot of stuff. unlike previous sections 01:06:168 (1) - and 01:08:311 (3) - where there is almost no background sounds. maybe try a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/ntYeN/f9d13a44d5.jpg
01:16:347 (1) - you should have a whistle at the head of this too for the guitar like 01:16:882 (3,4,1) - you can add a new custom sample soft3 or whatever to achieve this
01:20:811 (2,3) - missing hitsounds

[Len's Hard]

00:09:382 (2,3) - the rhythm doesnt sound so good imo, first we have 2 which is tail on the strong sound and head on the weak sound. then 3 is skipping over a white tick that is also a strong sound. maybe you can try a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/ntYz8/332eed048a.jpg
00:11:168 (3) - change it to just a circle? i think that fits better
00:19:382 (2,3) - its not exactly in the middle, you can use the slider circle to compare http://puu.sh/ntYP1/d22f28f62b.jpg
00:52:775 (2,3,1) - make it same spacing
00:59:025 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - missing hitsounds
01:00:454 (1,2,1,2) - try using larger spacing for this, it looks really cluttered right now and these are stronger sounds so larger spacing would fit
01:18:490 (3) - 1/1 slider is really not fitting for this

That's all from me. Good luck!

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2016-03-04T05:05:42+00:00

eeezzzeee wrote:
[Moeka's Insane]
00:09:561 (3,4,1,2) - flow is really awkward here imo because the space between 4,1 is so small. try moving 4 down to 292:348 or so I was going to remap this part
00:12:418 (2,4) - try moving it somewhere in the middle of the next triangle 00:13:490 (1,2,3) - instead of so close to the top to make it look a little neater. maybe like 471:188? ^
00:19:740 (4,5) - this spacing is very big for no reason really. considering its the same thing as before 00:14:382 (5,6) - its fine imo
00:24:918 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - hmm the spacing here suddenly becomes really large compared this to the pattern right before it 00:23:490 (1,2,3) - . isnt this supposed to be a slow section anyway? its kinda weird that we have really slow SV but the actual distance between objects is about the same as the faster parts lol. its fine imo
00:31:525 (5,1) - check blanket i think its fine
00:35:632 (4,5,6) - try putting them closer, use the same spacing as 00:34:918 (1,2,3) - earlier! nice
00:42:418 (2,3) - too big and again no reason lol >.<fixed somehow
00:47:775 (1) - uh this rhythm doesnt sound right.. the blue tick that the 3/4 reverse is on is not even strong.. maybe try this? i personally dont think triple fits here. so I decided to use 3/4. I think it fits hm...http://puu.sh/ntWYq/93a9630c51.jpg
00:53:311 (1,3) - blanket i think its fine
00:57:775 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - really? come on the rest of this map is so easy compared to this its way overdone imo yeah this is also one of the parts i was going to remap
01:09:025 (1) - unnecessary finish i think it fits

ty for modding~

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Kagetsu

796 posts

Joined March 2015

Kagetsu 2016-03-04T07:25:21+00:00

queue

[Moeka's Insane]

00:36:347 (1,2) - i didn't really like this rhythm, because you're ignoring 00:36:704 - which is an important beat, also it's awkward to play because you were stacking before. try this maybe?
01:01:704 (1) - delete nc? i don't really see a reason to put nc on this
01:04:918 (1) - i was expecting way more emphasis on this, voice is really loud here
01:14:204 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - jumps are just too circular(see in image)... isn't that bad tho, i'm just pointing this out because it kinda breaks your previous style, you were always doing sharp angled jumps so it felt weird when i testplayed xd
circular jumps
01:27:418 (4) - not really fan of those, up to you tho

[Insane]

00:16:704 (2,3) - this looks too close to 00:16:347 (1) - (visually speaking)
00:46:347 (1,2,3) - this combo felt little weird to me.. this 00:47:418 - should be clickable imo, because it's a strong beat, try this maybe?
00:50:275 - should be clickable, because the snare and voice xd, 00:50:097 - isn't that strong.suggestion
01:01:704 (1) - remove nc?
01:04:918 (1) - this felt a bit inconsistent compared to 01:06:168 (1) - or 01:10:454 (1) - where you were ignoring downbeat to map voice... imo, voice is much more strong than that beat so maybe try something like this

good luck

Elasia

160 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Elasia 2016-03-04T07:38:15+00:00

eeezzzeee wrote:
hi, from my queue

[Insane]
00:52:418 (3,1) - try using the same shape for these two fix
00:55:454 (3,5) - check blanket fix
00:59:025 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - missing hitsounds here ok fix
01:10:454 (1) - i would recommend mapping the background sounds here instead of the vocal, because it ends up skipping a lot of stuff. unlike previous sections 01:06:168 (1) - and 01:08:311 (3) - where there is almost no background sounds. maybe try a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/ntYeN/f9d13a44d5.jpg ok
01:16:347 (1) - you should have a whistle at the head of this too for the guitar like 01:16:882 (3,4,1) - you can add a new custom sample soft3 or whatever to achieve this add a custom normal-hitwhistle2
01:20:811 (2,3) - missing hitsounds no missing

That's all from me. Good luck!

thanks modding~

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-03-04T13:23:12+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue~

[Easy]

00:36:347 (3,1,2) - Just my personal preference but how about this rhythm?
01:13:490 (1,2,3) - Could be a bit confusing because the head of 01:13:490 (1) is pointing slightly towards 01:14:918 (3) instead of 01:14:561 (2) .

[Normal]

00:08:132 (4) - I would change this to a 1/2 slider because imo the guitar here 00:08:311 is pretty much audible so it shouldn't be ignored.
00:19:740 (5,6) - Tbh I think just a 1/1 slider starting from 00:19:918 is enough, doesn't really need a circle there, I felt this way gives a better emphasis to the instrument.
00:55:990 - I was expecting a circle here considering that you did that earlier on 00:49:025 (6) .

Sry for modding only 2 diffs, good luck~

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2016-03-04T14:56:22+00:00

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Elasia

160 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Elasia 2016-03-04T18:26:26+00:00

Kagetsu

Kagetsu wrote:
queue

[Insane]
00:16:704 (2,3) - this looks too close to 00:16:347 (1) - (visually speaking) fix
00:46:347 (1,2,3) - this combo felt little weird to me.. this 00:47:418 - should be clickable imo, because it's a strong beat, try this maybe? fixed another way
00:50:275 - should be clickable, because the snare and voice xd, 00:50:097 - isn't that strong.suggestion ^
01:01:704 (1) - remove nc? no
01:04:918 (1) - this felt a bit inconsistent compared to 01:06:168 (1) - or 01:10:454 (1) - where you were ignoring downbeat to map voice... imo, voice is much more strong than that beat so maybe try something like this current is fine imo
good luck

Electoz

Electoz wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue~

[Easy]

00:36:347 (3,1,2) - Just my personal preference but how about this rhythm?
01:13:490 (1,2,3) - Could be a bit confusing because the head of 01:13:490 (1) is pointing slightly towards 01:14:918 (3) instead of 01:14:561 (2) .
all fix

[Normal]

00:08:132 (4) - I would change this to a 1/2 slider because imo the guitar here 00:08:311 is pretty much audible so it shouldn't be ignored. okay fix
00:19:740 (5,6) - Tbh I think just a 1/1 slider starting from 00:19:918 is enough, doesn't really need a circle there, I felt this way gives a better emphasis to the instrument. it used rhythm like this part 00:13:490 (3,4,5) - and 00:16:347 (3,4,5) -
00:55:990 - I was expecting a circle here considering that you did that earlier on 00:49:025 (6) . ok
Sry for modding only 2 diffs, good luck~

thanks all~

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-03-04T20:26:56+00:00

Hi
[Easy]
00:39:204 (2) - X: 291 Y:235
00:44:204 (2,3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/nuMXV/1981a4c799.png
01:14:918 (3) - try this

[Normal]
Looks fine

[Len's Hard]
00:09:382 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/nuLzk/6bfffa53c6.png?
00:11:168 (7) - change remove it and repeat this 00:10:811 (6) - ? i think that be better
00:52:775 (2) - http://puu.sh/nuLRg/dca59b9fe0.png maybe this?
01:18:490 (3) - Make it 1/2, and add a circle at the big white beat
Yuria forgive me pls for modding only 2 diffs ;w;
good luck~

Elasia

160 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Elasia 2016-03-05T04:11:29+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
Hi
[Easy]
00:39:204 (2) - X: 291 Y:235 good
00:44:204 (2,3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/nuMXV/1981a4c799.png ok~
01:14:918 (3) - try this current is fine imo

[Normal]
Looks fine

Yuria forgive me pls for modding only 2 diffs ;w;
good luck~

thanks you~

Len

2,812 posts

Joined June 2012

Len 2016-03-05T10:59:12+00:00

eeezzzeee wrote:
hi, from my queue

[Len's Hard]
00:09:382 (2,3) - the rhythm doesnt sound so good imo, first we have 2 which is tail on the strong sound and head on the weak sound. then 3 is skipping over a white tick that is also a strong sound. maybe you can try a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/ntYz8/332eed048a.jpg i tried to change
00:11:168 (3) - change it to just a circle? i think that fits better for me, nah.
00:19:382 (2,3) - its not exactly in the middle, you can use the slider circle to compare http://puu.sh/ntYP1/d22f28f62b.jpg i rly dont want to fix nazi things sinc im blind
00:52:775 (2,3,1) - make it same spacing for?
00:59:025 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - missing hitsounds i copied from insane, and already added sampleset normal sound. ~~btw can't you hear the normal sound~~ i will change when i free
01:00:454 (1,2,1,2) - try using larger spacing for this, it looks really cluttered right now and these are stronger sounds so larger spacing would fit i think so, but its hard not hyper or light insane, and i dont want to make harder
01:18:490 (3) - 1/1 slider is really not fitting for this
That's all from me. Good luck!

wajinshu wrote:
Hi

[Len's Hard]
00:09:382 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/nuLzk/6bfffa53c6.png?
00:11:168 (7) - change remove it and repeat this 00:10:811 (6) - ? i think that be better i think its fine
00:52:775 (2) - http://puu.sh/nuLRg/dca59b9fe0.png maybe this? nah
01:18:490 (3) - Make it 1/2, and add a circle at the big white beat
Yuria forgive me pls for modding only 2 diffs ;w;
good luck~

fixed the rest. ty for modding

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Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2016-03-08T00:41:38+00:00

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Title:Contrail ~Kiseki~
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Artist:Mami Kawada
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Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-03-17T21:00:49+00:00

~~Placeholder for 2 kudosu~~

M4M입니다~

[General]
* 맵의 마지막 부분이 스냅이 다르네요. 이지 / 노말은 흰 틱, 하드는 1/8 틱, 인센 2개는 1/16틱에서 끝냈는데 소리가 정확히 어디서 나는지는 모르겠습니다만 아무튼 하나로 통일을 해주셔야 됩니다. 제가 듣기에는 흰 틱 아주 조금 전부터 빠르게 스르륵 훑어서 흰 틱에 끝내는 게 의도로 보여지는데, 판단하시기에 달렸습니다.
* 하드 빼곤 전부 담요 손질 해주면 훨씬 깔끔해 보일 듯합니다.
* AudioLeadIn을 1000~1500 정도 설정해주세요. .osu 파일들을 메모장으로 열고 맨 윗부분에 숫자 수정해주시면 됩니다.

[Easy]
* 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - 따라가는 소리가 좀 혼잡해보입니다. 00:06:347 (1,2) - 에서 했듯이 00:07:597 (3,4) - 도 http://puu.sh/nKbU0/c9f9657200.jpg 처럼 하거나, 그냥 전부 정박을 쓰시는 걸 추천합니다. (전자를 더 추천)
* 00:26:347 (1,2,3) - 이지에서 약간 읽기가 힘들 수 있습니다. 1.5박 뒤에 서클이 있는 것 자체가 이미 뉴비가 좋은 판정을 받기는 어려운데, 지금은 2보다도 3이 시각적으로 더 가까이에 있는 상태기 때문에 순차적으로 리딩이 안 되고 혼란을 느끼기에 충분한 모습입니다. 가능하면 http://puu.sh/nKcac/625863644f.jpg 이쪽 박자를 쓰시길 추천합니다.
* 00:29:918 (2,3) - 00:32:775 (2,3) - 00:41:347 (2,3) - 아무리 이지라지만, 여기서의 흰틱 박자는 매우 안 어울린다고 생각합니다. 다운비트보다 반 박씩 빠른 곳이 훨씬 더 강한 모습이기 떄문에, 모두 http://puu.sh/nKclo/ecbf8ad7bc.jpg 이런 박자로 쓰길 추천합니다.
* 00:32:775 (2,3,4) - 의 경우는 http://puu.sh/nKcsh/5a8750aa8d.jpg 가 뒷 배경음도 살려주고 좋습니다.
* 00:44:740 (3) - 너무 지루합니다. 다음 파트로 넘어가는 징검다리 역할을 하는 부분이라 텐션이 꽤 높기 때문에, 박자를 쪼개어 쓰는 게 좋습니다. 앞에 http://puu.sh/nKcsh/5a8750aa8d.jpg 처럼 해도 됩니다.
나머지는 괜찮아 보이네요.

[Normal]
* 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이지와 마찬가지로 뭘 따라가시는지 좀 혼잡합니다. http://puu.sh/nKd27/d59691d816.jpg 이 정도 박자를 추천하는데 어떻게 생각하시나요?
* 00:12:061 - 슬라 끝에 두기엔 너무나 아쉬운 소리입니다. 00:11:168 - 도 가능하면 클릭이었으면 좋겠네요. http://puu.sh/nKddo/1e5fbf83f0.jpg 를 추천합니다.
* 01:01:347 - 이지/인세인에서는 안 빼셨으니 노말도 채우시는 건 어떨까요?
* 01:06:704 (4,5,6,1,2) - 노트가 매우 위축된 모습입니다. 밝은 분위기이기 때문에 노트를 이렇게 한쪽에 뭉쳐놓는 것보다는 멀리 퍼져나가게 하는 게 좋다고 생각합니다. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4738460 뒤는 조정을 해야겠지만 이런 식으로 이전의 노트들과 거리를 두어주는 것이 깔끔합니다.
* 01:18:490 (6,7) - 여기도 각각을 Ctrl+H,J 한 모양으로 배치하는 것이 위축되지 않고 자연스럽게 돌아들어간다고 생각합니다.
* 01:24:025 (5,6,1) - 매우 불편한 패턴입니다. 완전히 중앙으로부터 멀어지면서 거의 귀퉁이까지 갔는데 그 직후에 스피너가 있다면 중심을 제대로 잡기가 힘들 수 있습니다. 사실 이지에서도 조금 보완을 해줄 수 있는 부분입니다.

[Len's Hard]
* 00:01:704 (3) - 00:04:561 (3) - 인세인 2개에서도 안 쓴 소리입니다(저건 소리라고 보기도 어렵고 그냥 울림의 한 부분...). 빼고 다른 패턴으로 거리를 맞추시는 게 좋을 듯합니다.
* 01:04:382 (3) - 빨간 틱에 강한 소리가 있는 것도 아닌데 01:04:561 - 를 슬라 끝에다 둔 거랑 대조되서 어색하네요. 몇 가지 제안해보자면... 3, 4를 올서클로 쓰거나, 서클 - 슬라로 바꾸고 대신에 다음 다운비트 사이에 점프를 넣거나( 01:15:811 (3,4) - 처럼), 01:03:847 (2) - 부터 1/2 슬라 - 1/2 슬라 - 서클 - 서클 조합을 써도... 키아이니까 서클 비중이 좀 많아지는 건 괜찮다고 봅니다.
* 01:24:918 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 표현은 좋습니다만 역시 인세인 2개에서는 나누지 않은 1/2 비트를 전부 사용하고 있습니다. 슬라이더 끝들이 명확한 소리들이 아니기 때문에 굳이 이렇게 쪼개 쓸 필요도 없다고 생각합니다.

[Insane]
* 00:23:668 - 명확하게 소리가 들리는데 노트 넣어주셨으면 좋겠습니다.
* 00:28:490 (1,2,3) - 여기는 디스턴스를 좀 더 줄이고, 00:28:847 (3,1) - 만 확실한 점프로 했으면 좋겠네요.
* 00:41:525 (4,1) - 이렇게 살짝 건드리는 건 외관상 별로라고 느껴지네요. 지금의 경우라면 완전히 피해서 가는 게 낫지 않을까요.
* 00:42:954 (4) - 너무 아래로 내리는 것보단 http://puu.sh/nKf4x/7056519d97.jpg 정도로 하는 게 더 안정감 있어보입니다.
* 01:03:847 (3) - http://puu.sh/nKfrP/feea252172.jpg 이쪽이 더 안정감 있어보입니다.
* 01:10:454 (7,1) - 개인적으로 저기 보컬은 다운비트를 약화시켜서라도 강하게 표현해 줄 필요가 있다고 생각합니다. 01:10:097 (5,6,7,1) - 를 보면 저 보컬이 연속점프의 그냥 일부로서 들어있는데, 이렇게 해서는 저 특정음이 강조가 안 됩니다. 모에카님 인센처럼 박자를 써보시는 걸 추천합니다.
* 01:16:168 (6) - 음이 특별히 높아지기 때문에 점프의 중앙으로 모아서 내리는 것보다는 특출나게 보이게끔 (284,16) 정도로 올려주시는 것도 좋아 보입니다.
* 01:20:097 (4,5) - 노트 순서를 바꾼 게 더 어울린다고 봅니다. 물론 보컬 강조를 위한 것입니다.

[Moeka's Insane]
* OD 8.5라... 거의 5성 중반은 되는 엑라급이군요. 조금 낮추는 걸 고려해보시지 않겠습니까
* 00:36:347 (1,2) - 이렇게 강조하고자 하는 음에 뒤로 점프를 넣는 것이 정말 통하는 것인지 여쭙고 싶습니다. 예전에 제가 제 맵에 그렇게 했다가 손닉님한테 혼났었거든요. (물론 그 때는 일관성 문제도 있었지만)
* 00:42:954 (4,5,6) - 1/4 소리가 명확하지도 않고 드럼 소리가 1/2로 또렷하게 들리는데 그냥 점프가 더 나은 곳이 아닌가 싶습니다.

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2016-03-18T01:57:47+00:00

Doyak wrote:
[Moeka's Insane]
* OD 8.5라... 거의 5성 중반은 되는 엑라급이군요. 조금 낮추는 걸 고려해보시지 않겠습니까 생각중
* 00:36:347 (1,2) - 이렇게 강조하고자 하는 음에 뒤로 점프를 넣는 것이 정말 통하는 것인지 여쭙고 싶습니다. 예전에 제가 제 맵에 그렇게 했다가 손닉님한테 혼났었거든요. (물론 그 때는 일관성 문제도 있었지만) ㄱㅊ음
* 00:42:954 (4,5,6) - 1/4 소리가 명확하지도 않고 드럼 소리가 1/2로 또렷하게 들리는데 그냥 점프가 더 나은 곳이 아닌가 싶습니다. 네

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371,51,84561,1,10,0:0:0:0:
193,120,84740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,256,84918,5,12,0:1:0:0:
146,207,85275,1,8,0:1:0:0:
279,30,85632,1,8,0:1:0:0:
364,256,85990,1,8,0:1:0:0:
167,316,86347,5,8,0:1:0:0:
396,184,86704,1,8,0:1:0:0:
205,86,87061,1,8,0:1:0:0:
269,309,87418,2,0,P|323:308|284:271,1,135,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Elasia

160 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Elasia 2016-03-18T08:34:40+00:00

Doyak wrote:
~~Placeholder for 2 kudosu~~

M4M입니다~

[General]
* 맵의 마지막 부분이 스냅이 다르네요. 이지 / 노말은 흰 틱, 하드는 1/8 틱, 인센 2개는 1/16틱에서 끝냈는데 소리가 정확히 어디서 나는지는 모르겠습니다만 아무튼 하나로 통일을 해주셔야 됩니다. 제가 듣기에는 흰 틱 아주 조금 전부터 빠르게 스르륵 훑어서 흰 틱에 끝내는 게 의도로 보여지는데, 판단하시기에 달렸습니다. 이거는 다른분들에게도 한번 물어보고 하나로 통일하도록 하겠습니다
* 하드 빼곤 전부 담요 손질 해주면 훨씬 깔끔해 보일 듯합니다. 넵
* AudioLeadIn을 1000~1500 정도 설정해주세요. .osu 파일들을 메모장으로 열고 맨 윗부분에 숫자 수정해주시면 됩니다. 일단은 1000으로 설정해놨습니다.

[Easy]
* 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - 따라가는 소리가 좀 혼잡해보입니다. 00:06:347 (1,2) - 에서 했듯이 00:07:597 (3,4) - 도 http://puu.sh/nKbU0/c9f9657200.jpg 처럼 하거나, 그냥 전부 정박을 쓰시는 걸 추천합니다. (전자를 더 추천)
* 00:26:347 (1,2,3) - 이지에서 약간 읽기가 힘들 수 있습니다. 1.5박 뒤에 서클이 있는 것 자체가 이미 뉴비가 좋은 판정을 받기는 어려운데, 지금은 2보다도 3이 시각적으로 더 가까이에 있는 상태기 때문에 순차적으로 리딩이 안 되고 혼란을 느끼기에 충분한 모습입니다. 가능하면 http://puu.sh/nKcac/625863644f.jpg 이쪽 박자를 쓰시길 추천합니다.
* 00:29:918 (2,3) - 00:32:775 (2,3) - 00:41:347 (2,3) - 아무리 이지라지만, 여기서의 흰틱 박자는 매우 안 어울린다고 생각합니다. 다운비트보다 반 박씩 빠른 곳이 훨씬 더 강한 모습이기 떄문에, 모두 http://puu.sh/nKclo/ecbf8ad7bc.jpg 이런 박자로 쓰길 추천합니다.
* 00:32:775 (2,3,4) - 의 경우는 http://puu.sh/nKcsh/5a8750aa8d.jpg 가 뒷 배경음도 살려주고 좋습니다.
* 00:44:740 (3) - 너무 지루합니다. 다음 파트로 넘어가는 징검다리 역할을 하는 부분이라 텐션이 꽤 높기 때문에, 박자를 쪼개어 쓰는 게 좋습니다. 앞에 http://puu.sh/nKcsh/5a8750aa8d.jpg 처럼 해도 됩니다.
나머지는 괜찮아 보이네요. 모두 수정했습니다

[Normal]
* 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이지와 마찬가지로 뭘 따라가시는지 좀 혼잡합니다. http://puu.sh/nKd27/d59691d816.jpg 이 정도 박자를 추천하는데 어떻게 생각하시나요? 이건 메인 기타소리를 따라간것이기때문에 그냥 두겠습니다
* 00:12:061 - 슬라 끝에 두기엔 너무나 아쉬운 소리입니다. 00:11:168 - 도 가능하면 클릭이었으면 좋겠네요. http://puu.sh/nKddo/1e5fbf83f0.jpg 를 추천합니다. 고쳤습니다 00:11:168 - 는 그대로 할게요
* 01:01:347 - 이지/인세인에서는 안 빼셨으니 노말도 채우시는 건 어떨까요? 지금 박자에 넣기에는 조금 애매하다 생각됩니다
* 01:06:704 (4,5,6,1,2) - 노트가 매우 위축된 모습입니다. 밝은 분위기이기 때문에 노트를 이렇게 한쪽에 뭉쳐놓는 것보다는 멀리 퍼져나가게 하는 게 좋다고 생각합니다. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4738460 뒤는 조정을 해야겠지만 이런 식으로 이전의 노트들과 거리를 두어주는 것이 깔끔합니다. 이쪽부터 마지막까지 노트배치를 바꿔봤습니다.
* 01:18:490 (6,7) - 여기도 각각을 Ctrl+H,J 한 모양으로 배치하는 것이 위축되지 않고 자연스럽게 돌아들어간다고 생각합니다. ^
* 01:24:025 (5,6,1) - 매우 불편한 패턴입니다. 완전히 중앙으로부터 멀어지면서 거의 귀퉁이까지 갔는데 그 직후에 스피너가 있다면 중심을 제대로 잡기가 힘들 수 있습니다. 사실 이지에서도 조금 보완을 해줄 수 있는 부분입니다. ^ 이지쪽은 괜찮다고 생각됩니다.

[Insane]
* 00:23:668 - 명확하게 소리가 들리는데 노트 넣어주셨으면 좋겠습니다. 네
* 00:28:490 (1,2,3) - 여기는 디스턴스를 좀 더 줄이고, 00:28:847 (3,1) - 만 확실한 점프로 했으면 좋겠네요. 저는 지금모양이 좋은거같습니다
* 00:41:525 (4,1) - 이렇게 살짝 건드리는 건 외관상 별로라고 느껴지네요. 지금의 경우라면 완전히 피해서 가는 게 낫지 않을까요. 수정했습니다
* 00:42:954 (4) - 너무 아래로 내리는 것보단 http://puu.sh/nKf4x/7056519d97.jpg 정도로 하는 게 더 안정감 있어보입니다. 이것도 수정했습니다
* 01:03:847 (3) - http://puu.sh/nKfrP/feea252172.jpg 이쪽이 더 안정감 있어보입니다. 저는 지금이 괜찮은거 같아요
* 01:10:454 (7,1) - 개인적으로 저기 보컬은 다운비트를 약화시켜서라도 강하게 표현해 줄 필요가 있다고 생각합니다. 01:10:097 (5,6,7,1) - 를 보면 저 보컬이 연속점프의 그냥 일부로서 들어있는데, 이렇게 해서는 저 특정음이 강조가 안 됩니다. 모에카님 인센처럼 박자를 써보시는 걸 추천합니다. 이거는 생각좀 더 해보겠습니다
* 01:16:168 (6) - 음이 특별히 높아지기 때문에 점프의 중앙으로 모아서 내리는 것보다는 특출나게 보이게끔 (284,16) 정도로 올려주시는 것도 좋아 보입니다. 괜찮네요
* 01:20:097 (4,5) - 노트 순서를 바꾼 게 더 어울린다고 봅니다. 물론 보컬 강조를 위한 것입니다. 넵

모딩 감사합니다

Inversal

508 posts

Joined November 2014

Inversal 2016-03-19T09:38:00+00:00

NM as requested from my Queue!

[Easy]
You should add a circle at. 00:01:525 - and 00:04:382 - to make the rhythm like 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - . Even this part 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - Has a bass sound but you still follow the guitar sound. So make it the same.

Looks fine here.

[Normal]

I think it's fine.

[Len's Hard]
00:09:561 - Try this rhythm? Since 00:09:561 - is a strong beat http://puu.sh/nLXNk/1ef128dd5e.jpg
00:11:525 (4,5) - Stack 4 on 5 and add one circle between 4 and 5? Like This?
00:38:847 (3) - Try Ctrl+G?

[Insane]

Really well mapped1

[Moeka's Insane]

Really well mapped!

And this diff is really fun to play since it's a long jump but it didn't too difficult to play.

And That's all! Really nice mapset! Sorry for couldn't find anything much. And here's STAR Maki-Chan Feels really goooodd

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2016-03-19T12:59:48+00:00

딩모

[General]

앞에서 잘집어줘서 엄쯤

[Easy]

■ 00:14:025 (3) 박자 몇군데와 힛사 나오는부분을 몇개 빼먹으신거같은데.. 이지같은경우는 박자 리딩이 애매하거나, 엉성하게해놓으면 리딩하기 어려워져요 이부분이랑 똑같은게 00:14:918 (1,2,3,4) 여기인데 여기랑 일관성있게 해주시는게 더 좋을듯 해요
■ 00:21:525 (1,2) 박자를 좀 애매하게 끊으셨네요. (1)번같은경우는 드럼소리가 끝나는게 00:21:347 여기인데 그 앞부분에 끊으셔서 헷갈릴듯해요 (2)번도 마찬가지구요
■ 00:26:347 (3,1,2,3) 앞에서부턴 가사따라가셧는데 왜 이부분은 갑자기 뒷 휘슬부분을 따라가셧는지 약간 이해가 안되네요.. 박자도 애매하게 읽기 힘들고.. 여기도 가사를 따라서 매핑하는게 앞에나오는 부분과 자연스럽게 이어질거같아요

SPOILER

■ 00:30:454 (3,4) 어떤 소리를 따라간건지 구별하기 힘든 박자네요.. 엉성하게 (4)번노트가 무거운 드럼에 맞춰서 놓으신것 같기도하고.. 여기는 앞에
■ 00:29:740 (1,2) 여기랑 똑같은 부분인데 일관성이 없는 것 같구요.. 앞에 부분이랑 똑같이 해주시는게 박자 읽는면에서 더 쉬울 것 같아요
■ 00:41:882 (3,4) ^

[Normal]

■ 00:00:633 (1,2,3) 여기 힛사가 좀 밋밋한 것 같아요.. 약간 지루한 느낌인데 (1)번 슬라이더 끝에 휘슬 넣어주시고 (2)번에도 마찬가지로 슬라이더 끝에 넣어주시고 (3)번은 머리부분 휘슬 빼주시고 가운데에다가 휘슬 넣어주시면 소리가 괜찮아질 것 같아요
■ 00:04:740 (1,2,3) ^
■ 00:07:240 (1,2,3,4,5) 뭔가 이어지는 느낌이없고 단조롭고 딱딱한 느낌이 드는데.. 소리 몇개 무시한것도 보이구요.. 여기는 이렇게 바꾸시는게 리딩면에서 더 좋을 것 같아요

SPOILER

■ 00:18:490 (2,3) 앞에와 동일하게 리핏슬라로 해주시는게 일관성있고 쉬울 것 같네요
■ 00:46:882 (2) 노말샘플 힛사소리보단 커스텀 휘슬 힛사 소리가 더 강조되네요.. 노말샘플 지우시고 휘슬 넣어주세요
■ 00:47:418 (3) 중간에 노말 샘플 지워주세요, 노말 소리도 안나고 곡이랑 안맞아요
■ 00:49:740 (2) 위에 말한 00:46:882 (2) 랑 같아요
■ 00:50:275 (3) 위에 말한 00:47:418 (3) 과 같습니다

[Len's Hard]

■ 00:00:990 (1,2) 여기 슬라이더 힛사 좀 밋밋한 거 같은데.. (1)번이랑 (2)번뒤에 휘슬넣어주는게 더 나아보임
■ 00:04:025 (1,2) ^
■ 00:12:240 (1,2,3) 이런 애매한 점프 넣는것 보단.. 초반 부분이니까 리딩면에서 신경을 써주는게 플레이 할 때 더 좋을 것 같은데..

SPOILER

■ 00:14:561 (4,5,1) 점프를 넣을거면 약간 동선면적인 부분도 생각을 해줘야 할 것같은데, 여긴 좀 불편한느낌이 있음.. 오른쪽이 아니라 왼쪽부분에 노트를 넣었다면 괜찮았을텐데.. 4번에다가 5번을 스택시켜주는게 오히려 괜찮지 않을까 생각함
■ 00:17:775 (1) 애매한 점프보단 Ctrl+G 로해서 약간 대칭적인 면으로 만들어주는게 flow 면에서도 좋다고 생각함
■ 00:20:275 (4) 마찬가지로 Ctrl+G 해주는게 동선면에서 더좋음
■ 00:22:775 (1,2,3) 그냥 디스턴스에 맞춰주셈, 하드라고해도 티가나게 디스턴스 무작위로 하는건 아니라고봄
■ 00:38:847 (3) 직선 슬라보단 곡선으로 동그랗게 해주는게 동선이 부드럽게 될거같음
■ 00:43:847 (2) Ctrl+G 하는게 더나아보임
■ 00:52:775 (2) ^
■ 00:53:847 (2) 직선슬라로 놓으니까 뒤에 나오는 3,4 노트들 치기에 약간 딱딱하고 불편해보이는데 곡선으로 하는게 더 좋을듯
■ 01:02:775 (3) 직선성애자가 아니시면 곡선으로 해주셈 제발 ㅋㅋ 딱딱해보임
■ 01:21:704 (4,5) 음.. 4번과 5번 위치를 바꿔주는게 동선이 좋아보임

인세인들은 플레이랑 맵을 본 결과 손볼게 별로 없어서 한 나지나 모양모딩 1~2개만 받으면 될 듯해요

Elasia

160 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Elasia 2016-03-19T14:50:52+00:00

Inversal wrote:
NM as requested from my Queue!

[Easy]
You should add a circle at. 00:01:525 - and 00:04:382 - to make the rhythm like 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - . Even this part 00:06:347 (1,2,3,4) - Has a bass sound but you still follow the guitar sound. So make it the same. this part is quiet. so i think it is fine.

Looks fine here.

[Normal]

I think it's fine.

[Insane]

Really well mapped1

And That's all! Really nice mapset! Sorry for couldn't find anything much. And here's STAR Maki-Chan Feels really goooodd
thanks star and modding~

Gloria Guard wrote:
딩모

[General]

앞에서 잘집어줘서 엄쯤

[Easy]

■ 00:14:025 (3) 박자 몇군데와 힛사 나오는부분을 몇개 빼먹으신거같은데.. 이지같은경우는 박자 리딩이 애매하거나, 엉성하게해놓으면 리딩하기 어려워져요 이부분이랑 똑같은게 00:14:918 (1,2,3,4) 여기인데 여기랑 일관성있게 해주시는게 더 좋을듯 해요 저는 지금 박자가 길게 흐르는듯한 배경음과 기타소리도 같이 따라간거라 괜찮다고 생각됩니다
■ 00:21:525 (1,2) 박자를 좀 애매하게 끊으셨네요. (1)번같은경우는 드럼소리가 끝나는게 00:21:347 여기인데 그 앞부분에 끊으셔서 헷갈릴듯해요 (2)번도 마찬가지구요 이거는 지금 되있는 박자 쪽이 더 강하기 때문에 이곳에서 끊은것입니다
■ 00:26:347 (3,1,2,3) 앞에서부턴 가사따라가셧는데 왜 이부분은 갑자기 뒷 휘슬부분을 따라가셧는지 약간 이해가 안되네요.. 박자도 애매하게 읽기 힘들고.. 여기도 가사를 따라서 매핑하는게 앞에나오는 부분과 자연스럽게 이어질거같아요 가사 따라간것 맞습니다. 00:37:775 (1,2) - 이쪽과 같은 박자라고 보시면 될거같네요
SPOILER
■ 00:30:454 (3,4) 어떤 소리를 따라간건지 구별하기 힘든 박자네요.. 엉성하게 (4)번노트가 무거운 드럼에 맞춰서 놓으신것 같기도하고.. 여기는 앞에가사를 따라간겁니다 4번부분은 기타나 드럼소리 같이 들리는 큰 박자기때문에 넣어준것이구요
■ 00:29:740 (1,2) 여기랑 똑같은 부분인데 일관성이 없는 것 같구요.. 앞에 부분이랑 똑같이 해주시는게 박자 읽는면에서 더 쉬울 것 같아요
■ 00:41:882 (3,4) ^ ^

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■ 00:00:633 (1,2,3) 여기 힛사가 좀 밋밋한 것 같아요.. 약간 지루한 느낌인데 (1)번 슬라이더 끝에 휘슬 넣어주시고 (2)번에도 마찬가지로 슬라이더 끝에 넣어주시고 (3)번은 머리부분 휘슬 빼주시고 가운데에다가 휘슬 넣어주시면 소리가 괜찮아질 것 같아요 기타 음의 높낮이에 따라서 휘슬을 넣어준겁니다
■ 00:04:740 (1,2,3) ^ ^
■ 00:07:240 (1,2,3,4,5) 뭔가 이어지는 느낌이없고 단조롭고 딱딱한 느낌이 드는데.. 소리 몇개 무시한것도 보이구요.. 여기는 이렇게 바꾸시는게 리딩면에서 더 좋을 것 같아요 메인 기타소리를 따라간 박자입니다. 저는 지금도 괜찮다고 생각됩니다
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■ 00:18:490 (2,3) 앞에와 동일하게 리핏슬라로 해주시는게 일관성있고 쉬울 것 같네요 수정했습니다
■ 00:46:882 (2) 노말샘플 힛사소리보단 커스텀 휘슬 힛사 소리가 더 강조되네요.. 노말샘플 지우시고 휘슬 넣어주세요 저는 지금 힛사가 더 좋게 들리는거 같습니다 커스텀 휘슬소리만 넣으니 너무 쿵쿵거리기만해서 재미없는것 같구요
■ 00:47:418 (3) 중간에 노말 샘플 지워주세요, 노말 소리도 안나고 곡이랑 안맞아요 음이 높아지는것이 있어서 그것을 노말샘플로 표현해본겁니다
■ 00:49:740 (2) 위에 말한 00:46:882 (2) 랑 같아요 ^
■ 00:50:275 (3) 위에 말한 00:47:418 (3) 과 같습니다 ^

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Ujimatsu Chiya

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Ujimatsu Chiya 2016-03-19T18:50:21+00:00

ㄹㅇ 매핑 가르쳐주세요 갓갓님...;;

유리아님 인센중에 00:51:882 (5) - 이놈 리폿으로 바꿔서 리핏슬라로 해도 괜찮을거 같네요. 완전히 소리가 꺼지는 타이밍은 00:52:061 - 여기가 맞긴한데 그렇다고 늘리면 역시 어색하니 저거 리핏으로 바꿔도 괜찮아보임. 플레이 할때 저는 00:51:882 (5,1) - 이거 공백이 1/4인줄알았어요 순간..

노멀에선 01:05:632 (2,3,4,5,6) - 이거 열차 좀 심한거 같으니 http://puu.sh/nMnVF/af46170dea.jpg 이런식으로 뛰어놓는편이 더 좋아요
하나 더 말한다면 01:10:454 (1) - 이놈도 분명 피니쉬 자리는 아닌데 뉴콤오는데다가 잘 들어보시면 드럼 소리는 있어요. 그니까 클럽은 무리더라도 휘슬로 보컬 한번 잡아주시면 개꿀 ( 분명히 다른곳에도 이런식으로 열차나오는곳있으니 바꿔보시영 )

크흑... 노래 개 꿀... 마미 목소리에 취한다..... 아 저도 만들꺼임 비기너 만들어 드림 ㄱㄷ...

Elasia

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Elasia 2016-03-20T01:07:24+00:00

@eINess 좋은의견 감사합니다 인센은 수정했구요
노말 01:05:632 (2,3,4,5,6) - 이정도 열차는 저는 괜찮다고 생각됩니다. 앞이나 뒤에도 이런구간은 충분히 있었구용
01:10:454 (1) - 이건 가사를 따라간건데 흰틱에서 드럼소리가 나서 힛사를 안넣은겁니당

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