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Hitorie - one-Me two-Hearts (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Hueon
26 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Hueon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 01 de mayo de 2016 at 20:52:57

Artist: Hitorie
Title: one-Me two-Hearts (TV Size)
Source: Divine Gate
Tags: anime divine gate
BPM: 191,05
Filesize: 9053kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Adrian's Hard (3,85 stars, 326 notes)
  2. DarkJr's Insane (5,01 stars, 360 notes)
  3. DarkRT's Insane (4,49 stars, 339 notes)
  4. hyouri's Extra (6,23 stars, 416 notes)
  5. Insane (4,36 stars, 354 notes)
  6. Kirtash's Muzukashii (3 stars, 403 notes)
  7. Kirtash's Oni (4,35 stars, 532 notes)
  8. Normal (2,26 stars, 167 notes)
Download: Hitorie - one-Me two-Hearts (TV Size)
Download: Hitorie - one-Me two-Hearts (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 01 de mayo de 2016 at 20:49:45

Artist: Hitorie
Title: one-Me two-Hearts (TV Size)
Source: Divine Gate
Tags: anime divine gate
BPM: 191,05
Filesize: 9053kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Adrian's Hard (3,85 stars, 326 notes)
  2. DarkJr's Insane (5,01 stars, 360 notes)
  3. DarkRT's Insane (4,49 stars, 339 notes)
  4. hyouri's Extra (6,23 stars, 416 notes)
  5. Insane (4,36 stars, 354 notes)
  6. Kirtash's Muzukashii (3 stars, 403 notes)
  7. Kirtash's Oni (4,35 stars, 532 notes)
  8. Normal (2,26 stars, 167 notes)
Download: Hitorie - one-Me two-Hearts (TV Size)
Download: Hitorie - one-Me two-Hearts (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Hueon , edited 20 times in total.
TomArrow
42 posts
Joined March 2014
TomArrow
[Normal]
00:00:516 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Due to BPM changes, SV are very inconsitent (and i think SV are too fast)
Lots of inconsistent spacing and rhythms (please use distance snap in easy/normal difficultiies) (00:16:191 (3,4) - 00:26:249 (2,3,4) - 00:31:274 (7,1,2) - 00:34:101 (7,1,2) - ,etc ...)
00:43:366 (1) - This should be on a beat (00:43:837)
01:13:360 (5,6) - This is too hard for a normal diff.

[Insane]
Again the spacing is inconsistent.
CS3 ? Are you sure to do that ?
SV is the same as in the normal difficulty ? SV is too slow imo
00:22:794 (10) - 00:33:002 (6) - those SV changes are way too sudden
In the kiai, you should make some jump to emphase stuff (this is too flat)

[DarkRT's Insane]
01:04:252 (4,5,6,7) - Hard to read
Again, in the kiai, you should make some jump to emphase stuff (this is too flat)
Hueon
26 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Hueon

TomArrow wrote:

[Normal] I'm having much to fix that diff
00:00:516 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Due to BPM changes, SV are very inconsitent (and i think SV are too fast)
Lots of inconsistent spacing and rhythms (please use distance snap in easy/normal difficultiies) (00:16:191 (3,4) - 00:26:249 (2,3,4) - 00:31:274 (7,1,2) - 00:34:101 (7,1,2) - ,etc ...)
00:43:366 (1) - This should be on a beat (00:43:837)
01:13:360 (5,6) - This is too hard for a normal diff.

[Insane]
Again the spacing is inconsistent.
CS3 ? Are you sure to do that ? I changed the CS 4
SV is the same as in the normal difficulty ? SV is too slow imo
00:22:794 (10) - 00:33:002 (6) - those SV changes are way too sudden SV changed to normal
In the kiai, you should make some jump to emphase stuff (this is too flat) :(

[DarkRT's Insane]
01:04:252 (4,5,6,7) - Hard to read Slider elongated
Again, in the kiai, you should make some jump to emphase stuff (this is too flat)
:(


Thanks you
hyouri
390 posts
Joined June 2012
hyouri
[DarkRT's Insane]00:08:524 (5) - NC
00:11:471 (7) - NC
00:12:257 (4) - NC
00:14:145 (6) - NC
00:14:460 (1) - goes with previous combo
00:14:932 (2) - NC
00:24:522 (4) - NC
00:27:034 (6) - NC
00:28:133 (3) - This slider is missing out lots of beats, make it start from here: 00:27:976 (2) -, and let it end here: 00:28:133 (3) -

NC = New combo

lots of NC missing lol
hyouri
390 posts
Joined June 2012
hyouri
[ALL DIFFS]

Beatmap offset 505
BPM 191,05


I knew something was wrong, please fix!
Hueon
26 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Hueon

hyouri wrote:

[DarkRT's Insane]00:08:524 (5) - NC
00:11:471 (7) - NC
00:12:257 (4) - NC
00:14:145 (6) - NC
00:14:460 (1) - goes with previous combo
00:14:932 (2) - NC
00:24:522 (4) - NC
00:27:034 (6) - NC
00:28:133 (3) - This slider is missing out lots of beats, make it start from here: 00:27:976 (2) -, and let it end here: 00:28:133 (3) -

NC = New combo

lots of NC missing lol
Thanks for you GD
hyouri
390 posts
Joined June 2012
hyouri
[DarkRT's Insane]
00:09:309 (5,6,7) - CTRL+G
00:12:257 (1,2) - CTRL + G (The kickslider is in wrong tick)
00:01:458 (5) - move this here and turn it sideways like this http://puu.sh/nI0Wr/78d917a666.png
00:03:136 (2,5,1) - CTRL + G here
00:21:852 (7) - there is no beat here, move it one tick to the right and remove this slider 00:22:009 (1) - and move this slider two ticks to the left 00:22:323 (8) -

00:22:951 (11,12) - CTRL + G
00:23:579 - missing beat
00:24:365 - missing beat, so make 00:24:208 (3) - into a slider
00:27:819 - should be a slider here
00:25:935 (2,4) - CTRL + G
00:38:969 (1) - ctrl + H and move down a little bit
missing beat
Ireiisu
90 posts
Joined November 2014
Ireiisu
Hi from #modreqs

hyouri's Extra:





00:18:955 (2,3) - be like 00:17:699 (3,4) , directly below the slider
00:31:125 (3,4) - should be further apart like 00:31:281 (5,6,7)
01:13:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - you should switch directions or something , having 2 same patterns seems a bit ..plain..?
01:14:935 (7,8,9,10) - different spacing as the rest
hyouri
390 posts
Joined June 2012
hyouri
:oops:

shadowneko_1 wrote:

Hi from #modreqs hello

hyouri's Extra:


lol this is for Hueon to fix


00:18:955 (2,3) - be like 00:17:699 (3,4) , directly below the slider fixed
00:31:125 (3,4) - should be further apart like 00:31:281 (5,6,7) fixed
01:13:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - you should switch directions or something , having 2 same patterns seems a bit ..plain..? hmm.. i try CTRL+H there now
01:14:935 (7,8,9,10) - different spacing as the rest fixed
thanks for modding http://puu.sh/nIqZV/995cbd31ba.zip
Hueon
26 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Hueon

shadowneko_1 wrote:

Hi from #modreqs

hyouri's Extra:




BPM not changed because I was lazzy :P FIXED


00:18:955 (2,3) - be like 00:17:699 (3,4) , directly below the slider
00:31:125 (3,4) - should be further apart like 00:31:281 (5,6,7)
01:13:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - you should switch directions or something , having 2 same patterns seems a bit ..plain..?
01:14:935 (7,8,9,10) - different spacing as the rest
Lukshart
Lukshart
[Normal]

Corrige eso

00:01:290 (2,3) - Cámbialo por un slider

Y eso, lo demás lo dijeron arriba. Voy a estar haciéndote una GD Easy :)
Hueon
26 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Hueon

DarkRitual Jr wrote:

[Normal]

Corrige eso Corregido, gracias

00:01:290 (2,3) - Cámbialo por un slider Listo :P

Y eso, lo demás lo dijeron arriba. Voy a estar haciéndote una GD Easy :)
TheLeviathan
271 posts
Joined December 2014
TheLeviathan
From Your modding Q

Before mentionin anything.... add combo colors (Dark -> Light -> Dark -> Light)

hyuouri's Extra

00:03:488 (3) - change the angle so it is in same line with 2
00:04:901 (1) - i don't see any reason this being NC
00:05:843 (2) - you might stack this with 00:04:744 (3)
00:08:042 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - so i am HUGE fan of triangles, and this triangles SUCC ... mhm... let me see, ok so they don't fit by angle with previous slider. So what i recommend, change a bit angle of precious slider, and remake your triangles, you may make them constantly growing in size with each combo. Oh yeah and also you need to make notes go clockwise to fit pattern. Something like this is nice
SPOILER
SPOILER
And after that, the followup 1,2,3,1,2,3 you can make with same pattern but this time make notes flow counterclockwise, you go the idea i hope
I do recommend to remake this pattern, if not in my way then in some different, cos those are kinda .... bad ....
00:19:505 (1,2,3) - Cntr + G would be better imo
00:31:125 (3) - this note overlaps too much


DarkRT's Insane

00:04:116 (6,7) - i think making this a slider instead of two notes is better
00:27:042 (1,2,3,4) - this patter have constantly growing spacing and it should be more spaced in between 2 and 3
00:51:224 - mute the end of slider


Insane

00:08:670 (5) - end of this slider should be whistle too
00:10:397 - make low sound on the end of slider
I know you are mapping in to lyrics here, and not the music, but even then - 00:25:315 - you're missing a note here
00:27:513 - ^
00:34:893 - ^
00:48:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is kinda weird here, it's like you're mapping into lyrics then switched to drum part randomly, even tho there are lyric in this part too, so i recommend either remake this and keep mapping into lyrics, or at least start stream here - 00:48:241 -
00:59:076 - missed note



I guess that's it, good luck further
hyouri
390 posts
Joined June 2012
hyouri
I fixed most of my things, didn't really take too much on your suggestion other than the triangles that were sloppy and lazy when I made them. And wtf 00:31:125 (3) - I swear, I've re-aligned this like 5 times to perfections, but it's gone with each update? I'm sending .osu in PM to creator instead.
Hueon
26 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Hueon

TheLeviathan wrote:

From Your modding Q

Before mentionin anything.... add combo colors (Dark -> Light -> Dark -> Light)

hyuouri's Extra

00:03:488 (3) - change the angle so it is in same line with 2
00:04:901 (1) - i don't see any reason this being NC
00:05:843 (2) - you might stack this with 00:04:744 (3)
00:08:042 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - so i am HUGE fan of triangles, and this triangles SUCC ... mhm... let me see, ok so they don't fit by angle with previous slider. So what i recommend, change a bit angle of precious slider, and remake your triangles, you may make them constantly growing in size with each combo. Oh yeah and also you need to make notes go clockwise to fit pattern. Something like this is nice
SPOILER
SPOILER
And after that, the followup 1,2,3,1,2,3 you can make with same pattern but this time make notes flow counterclockwise, you go the idea i hope
I do recommend to remake this pattern, if not in my way then in some different, cos those are kinda .... bad ....
00:19:505 (1,2,3) - Cntr + G would be better imo
00:31:125 (3) - this note overlaps too much


DarkRT's Insane

00:04:116 (6,7) - i think making this a slider instead of two notes is better
00:27:042 (1,2,3,4) - this patter have constantly growing spacing and it should be more spaced in between 2 and 3
00:51:224 - mute the end of slider


Insane

00:08:670 (5) - end of this slider should be whistle too
00:10:397 - make low sound on the end of slider
I know you are mapping in to lyrics here, and not the music, but even then - 00:25:315 - you're missing a note here
00:27:513 - ^
00:34:893 - ^
00:48:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is kinda weird here, it's like you're mapping into lyrics then switched to drum part randomly, even tho there are lyric in this part too, so i recommend either remake this and keep mapping into lyrics, or at least start stream here - 00:48:241 -
00:59:076 - missed note



I guess that's it, good luck further
Thanks you, fixed :)
Flowey
101 posts
Joined August 2012
Flowey
M4M for your queue.

Insane
Replay: http://puu.sh/oeIE5/b762df16ea.osr
General Feeling: A lot of the rhythms in this map didn't make sense to me when I was playing through it.

00:11:496 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the following rhythm fits the music better. The screenshot starts at 00:11:181 (6).


00:12:282 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - The triples in this section don't match the triples in the music. The following rhythm matches the triples. (Starts at 00:12:124 (5).)


00:14:951 (1) - This feels like it would have more impact if you made the slider tick 1 less time and added a circle at 00:15:579. Or maybe just a hit sound at 00:15:579 would do.

00:26:414 (5) - Slider is half a beat early.

00:27:827 (6,7) - Change 6 into a circle and move 7 half a beat earlier. This matches the vocals.

00:28:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the following rhythm works better:


00:30:340 (1,2,3) - Slider feels early. The alternative below matches the vocals better.


00:31:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Slider (4) feels too long, and 00:33:010 (6) is a better place for a new combo. In the alternative below, I made 4 shorter and added a note. I also removed 00:33:010 (6) and stretched 00:33:167 (1) so that it starts half a beat earlier.


00:41:018 (5,6,7,8,9) - The following fits the vocals better.


00:42:903 (1) - 1/4th of a beat too long.

00:43:531 (2) - The following matches the vocals better.


00:48:162 (4) - Rhythm feels better if you delete this note, which makes the stream start at 00:48:241 (5).

00:49:027 (1) - Doesn't really match anything. The following fits the vocals better.
or


01:10:224 (10,11) - It makes more sense to start the 1/16th notes at 01:10:224 (10). Something like this:


01:17:762 (3) - This slider has a weird shape.
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