xi - Ascension to Heaven [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
Jinjin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, July 2, 2016 at 3:23:55 PM

Artist: xi
Title: Ascension to Heaven
Source: BMS
Tags: parousia artcore bms of fighters 2009 100sec records piano
BPM: 200
Filesize: 9272kb
Play Time: 05:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Elysium - 7Key (7.24 stars, 5062 notes)


Download: xi - Ascension to Heaven
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Elysium

7K marathon (★7.31)
HP 9.0, OD 9.5


Experience the journey to the heavens above. The structural variety / density of the chart comes in waves, getting increasingly difficult as you progress through the music.
Can you survive the ascension? Good luck!

pp will only come if you're skilled enough to pass the map ;)

1st Bubble: Fresh Chicken
2nd Bubble: Kawawa
Approval: Blocko

Relatively high HP (9.0) and OD (9.5) are set in place to discourage passing by mashing through some patterns.
This is a very technical map. Strict following of pitch relevancy and layering.

For those who like a bit of a twist...
Fresh Chicken
헐 이거 4키짤려고했는데
Topic Starter
Jinjin
히익
Amethyst507
Well ur one lucky guy...

I was working on the same song too , 7K too, so.....

Wanna do a mod???
Vulkin
is this map gonna be full spread
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Amethyst507 wrote:

Well ur one lucky guy...

I was working on the same song too , 7K too, so.....

Wanna do a mod???
Don't really have the time to mod stuff these days ;_;

Vulkin wrote:

is this map gonna be full spread
I doubt it :p
Jakads
스타 뿅뿅
Topic Starter
Jinjin

jakads wrote:

스타 뿅뿅
감사감사요~ >_<
Amethyst507

iJinjin wrote:

Don't really have the time to mod stuff these days ;_;
Dont worry, no need for a M4M. I'll mod yours , you don't need to do anything on mine :)
Just tell me what to do and I'll try to help. However, I'll only be on on Fridays and weekends most of the time.

Btw, I said I was working on a map with the same song before I found yours right? So how about I make a GD?? :D
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Amethyst507 wrote:

iJinjin wrote:

Don't really have the time to mod stuff these days ;_;
Dont worry, no need for a M4M. I'll mod yours , you don't need to do anything on mine :)
Just tell me what to do and I'll try to help. However, I'll only be on on Fridays and weekends most of the time.

Btw, I said I was working on a map with the same song before I found yours right? So how about I make a GD?? :D
I think I'd rather keep this set as one single diff, sorry :( thanks for the offer tho. If you'd like to mod it however, it would be greatly appreciated!
NlHIL
[Elysium]
7K=|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
00:33:592 (33592|0,33592|3,33592|2,33667|5,33667|4) - eh (not 1/8 stairs?)
00:38:917 (38917|1,38992|2,39142|1,39217|2,39367|1,39442|2) - swap?
00:43:342 (43342|0) - hmm...I can't hear
00:43:942 - add?
00:52:117 - 00:52:267 - 01:05:542 - 01:08:017 - add?
01:16:867 - add to 3
02:16:792 (136792|1) - remove?
02:26:017 - add?
02:39:742 - add?
02:43:529 (163529|4,163604|6) - ...I can't hear
04:00:142 (240142|0,240142|2) - change to notes?
04:39:104 - 04:39:142 - add to 4?
04:57:265 - add a LN as 04:44:542 (284542|4) - ?
Topic Starter
Jinjin

NlHIL wrote:

[Elysium]
7K=|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
00:33:592 (33592|0,33592|3,33592|2,33667|5,33667|4) - eh (not 1/8 stairs?) fixed
00:38:917 (38917|1,38992|2,39142|1,39217|2,39367|1,39442|2) - swap? good idea
00:43:342 (43342|0) - hmm...I can't hear The purpose of this is to subdivide the speedup
00:43:942 - add? I think the fast SV release is just as effective as pressing a note
00:52:117 - 00:52:267 - 01:05:542 - 01:08:017 - add? Some were added, some were left out intentionally
01:16:867 - add to 3 fixed
02:16:792 (136792|1) - remove? for the drum
02:26:017 - add? added
02:39:742 - add? added
02:43:529 (163529|4,163604|6) - ...I can't hear there's a snare roll
04:00:142 (240142|0,240142|2) - change to notes? ?_?
04:39:104 - 04:39:142 - add to 4? kkk
04:57:265 - add a LN as 04:44:542 (284542|4) - ? I think the ending should be fine
Thanks!
Amethyst507
Okay basically I'm just gonna do general suggestions and timing checks or whatever, kinda lazy to repeat over and over to check the notes one by one, so...
Don't give kudosus if you don't approve mods that doesn't have to do anything with the notes :\

This is my first mod:

General
-No big deal increasing the HP Drain to 9, but I suggest reducing the OD to 8~8.5 because of LNs and hold streams.
-Consider placing the notes from 02:04:642 - to 02:05:542 - similar to the pattern like 03:59:842 - to 04:00:742 - or the opposite
-Add kiai points 02:44:242 - ~ 03:02:242 - and 04:01:042 - ~ 04:19:042 - ? Because these parts of the song are also very strong.
-Have someone to make a 4K GD, MORE KEYS MORE PLAYERS!!! huehuehue

Timings
-Points 00:43:942 - and 02:05:542 - reduce the speed from x10.00 to x1.5?
Because speed x10.00 seems very hard to catch, notes appeared too suddenly. Consider nerfing the speed so players can be more awared for the next notes.
-Points 02:05:579 - and 02:05:579 - move to 00:44:092 - and 02:05:692 - (Only apply this when you decided to apply the timing changes above)


This is my mod for now, hope it helps out. Anyway, before applying the SV changes, be sure to Export the whole mapset, to prevent the map getting "destroyed" bt the mod.
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Amethyst507 wrote:

Okay basically I'm just gonna do general suggestions and timing checks or whatever, kinda lazy to repeat over and over to check the notes one by one, so...
Don't give kudosus if you don't approve mods that doesn't have to do anything with the notes :\

This is my first mod:

General
-No big deal increasing the HP Drain to 9, but I suggest reducing the OD to 8~8.5 because of LNs and hold streams. Not a lot of LNs so I think it should be fine ^^ I have testplayed it quite a lot myself
-Consider placing the notes from 02:04:642 - to 02:05:542 - similar to the pattern like 03:59:842 - to 04:00:742 - or the opposite No audible notes on the first section tho
-Add kiai points 02:44:242 - ~ 03:02:242 - and 04:01:042 - ~ 04:19:042 - ? Because these parts of the song are also very strong. Thought about it but the kiai time would be too long, so I just decided to highlight the second half of each chorus
-Have someone to make a 4K GD, MORE KEYS MORE PLAYERS!!! huehuehue

Timings
-Points 00:43:942 - and 02:05:542 - reduce the speed from x10.00 to x1.5?
Because speed x10.00 seems very hard to catch, notes appeared too suddenly. Consider nerfing the speed so players can be more awared for the next notes.
Made it more readable
-Points 02:05:579 - and 02:05:579 - move to 00:44:092 - and 02:05:692 - (Only apply this when you decided to apply the timing changes above)


This is my mod for now, hope it helps out. Anyway, before applying the SV changes, be sure to Export the whole mapset, to prevent the map getting "destroyed" bt the mod.
Thanks for your time!
stryver12
...wow... my favorite song is going to be approved... again (just like std version)!?

00:44:242 - ... add note for cymbal? (just like 01:03:442 - )
01:52:642 - I'm not sure... but I think you should add another note for the piano (unless you have the score)
02:05:542 - uhh... this feels overmapped imo, 2 notes should be fine I think
02:35:092 - there's piano here... add notes probably? (just like the rest of this particular part)
03:36:892 - add LN for beep?
04:00:743 - similar problem to 02:05:542 (remove 2 normal notes?)

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Jinjin

stryver12 wrote:

...wow... my favorite song is going to be approved... again (just like std version)!?

00:44:242 - ... add note for cymbal? (just like 01:03:442 - ) sure!
01:52:642 - I'm not sure... but I think you should add another note for the piano (unless you have the score) i think it works well
02:05:542 - uhh... this feels overmapped imo, 2 notes should be fine I think okie
02:35:092 - there's piano here... add notes probably? (just like the rest of this particular part) whoops
03:36:892 - add LN for beep? good idea
04:00:743 - similar problem to 02:05:542 (remove 2 normal notes?) alright

Good luck!
thanks~
Kawawa
00:25:867 - 00:30:667 - 이 두 부분의 노트 수를 동일하게 유지하고, 같은 패턴 구성으로 주는게 어떨까요? 음악구조상 동일하여 다시 생각해볼 여지는 있을듯 해요.
그러나 이 후 파트에서도 00:35:467 - 이런식으로 2코드를 사용하신걸로 보아, 맨 처음 파트를 변경하시는게 나을듯 하네요.

00:33:592 (33592|3,33629|4,33667|5,33704|6) - 00:33:892 (33892|1,33929|2,33967|3,34004|4,34042|5) - 이 두 8스냅을 서로 다른 방향으로 바꿔보면,
서로 다른 악기를 표현한게 더 부각 될거 같기도한데, 어떠세요? 샘플:: http://puu.sh/p3kPf/76470ffeb1.jpg

00:38:842 (38842|0,38917|1,38992|2,39067|3,39142|4,39217|5,39292|6,39367|4) - 이건 제 개인적인 의견입니다. 이게 비프음들을 표현한 숏롱이나,
오히려 숏롱을 넓게 퍼뜨리다보니 칠때 무슨 사운드를 치는지 느낌이 와닿질 않았네요. 트릴식으로 써보시는 것도 나쁘진 않을듯해요.

00:43:942 - 음 전 여기 개인적으로 노트가 없다보니까, 뒤 SV에서 더 틀리는 기분인데. 갠적으로 너무 명확히 들리는 사운드보니까 리듬 감각을 유지하는데도 중요하게 작용한다고 생각해요. 참고 02:05:542 -

01:02:242 - 4코드로 넣기에는 조금 많은 느낌? 01:03:442 - 01:07:042 - 이 두부분을 비교해보시면, 3코드가 나을듯하네요.

01:13:042 - ~ 01:13:342 - 이러한 몇 부분들. 01:07:042 - ~ 01:07:342 - 이런식으로 텀을 한번 주면 좋지 않을까요?
앞부분에서는 텀을 둔 파트가 많았고, 굳이 다시 텀을 살리자면 메인 피아노 흐름이 한번 끊기는 여기가 나을듯 하네요. 단지 피드백을 제공하기 위해 다시 이러한 텀을 준 파트들을 눈여겨 보실 필요는 있을듯 해요.

02:39:742 (159742|3,159742|6,159742|5) - 여기와는 다르게
02:27:592 (147592|4,147592|3,147592|6) - 롱놋을 의도적으로 3마디로 쓰시는경우 패턴 제안. http://puu.sh/p3lt3/0eadb234a5.jpg 뭔가 더 깔끔해보이기도 하네요.

02:43:042 (163042|4) - 한번쯤은 고려해보셨을듯 한데, 2로 이동시키면 패턴이 보여주는 시각적인 효과로 음이 더 고조되는 느낌이 더 와닿지 않을까요?

02:43:717 (163717|1,163792|2) - 갠적으로 col서로 뒤바꾸면 편할듯하지만 ㅠㅠ

02:56:842 (176842|0,177442|1,178042|0) - 이 롱놋들을 조금 더 넓게 퍼뜨리는게 어떤가요? 아래파트 부터, 왼손에 밀집하다보니깐,
02:57:742 (177742|0,177892|0) - 이 해머들은 의도시겠지만, 저는 더 자연스럽게 변경할 수 있다고 생각해요.

Good Luck! 훌륭한 맵! :D
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Kawawa wrote:

00:25:867 - 00:30:667 - 이 두 부분의 노트 수를 동일하게 유지하고, 같은 패턴 구성으로 주는게 어떨까요? 음악구조상 동일하여 다시 생각해볼 여지는 있을듯 해요.
그러나 이 후 파트에서도 00:35:467 - 이런식으로 2코드를 사용하신걸로 보아, 맨 처음 파트를 변경하시는게 나을듯 하네요. 좋아요!

00:33:592 (33592|3,33629|4,33667|5,33704|6) - 00:33:892 (33892|1,33929|2,33967|3,34004|4,34042|5) - 이 두 8스냅을 서로 다른 방향으로 바꿔보면,
서로 다른 악기를 표현한게 더 부각 될거 같기도한데, 어떠세요? 샘플:: http://puu.sh/p3kPf/76470ffeb1.jpg 좋은것 같아요!

00:38:842 (38842|0,38917|1,38992|2,39067|3,39142|4,39217|5,39292|6,39367|4) - 이건 제 개인적인 의견입니다. 이게 비프음들을 표현한 숏롱이나,
오히려 숏롱을 넓게 퍼뜨리다보니 칠때 무슨 사운드를 치는지 느낌이 와닿질 않았네요. 트릴식으로 써보시는 것도 나쁘진 않을듯해요. 넵!

00:43:942 - 음 전 여기 개인적으로 노트가 없다보니까, 뒤 SV에서 더 틀리는 기분인데. 갠적으로 너무 명확히 들리는 사운드보니까 리듬 감각을 유지하는데도 중요하게 작용한다고 생각해요. 참고 02:05:542 - 노트를 추가했습니다!

01:02:242 - 4코드로 넣기에는 조금 많은 느낌? 01:03:442 - 01:07:042 - 이 두부분을 비교해보시면, 3코드가 나을듯하네요. 넵!

01:13:042 - ~ 01:13:342 - 이러한 몇 부분들. 01:07:042 - ~ 01:07:342 - 이런식으로 텀을 한번 주면 좋지 않을까요?
앞부분에서는 텀을 둔 파트가 많았고, 굳이 다시 텀을 살리자면 메인 피아노 흐름이 한번 끊기는 여기가 나을듯 하네요. 단지 피드백을 제공하기 위해 다시 이러한 텀을 준 파트들을 눈여겨 보실 필요는 있을듯 해요. 저도 이게 좋은것 같아요. 수정했습니다!

02:39:742 (159742|3,159742|6,159742|5) - 여기와는 다르게
02:27:592 (147592|4,147592|3,147592|6) - 롱놋을 의도적으로 3마디로 쓰시는경우 패턴 제안. http://puu.sh/p3lt3/0eadb234a5.jpg 뭔가 더 깔끔해보이기도 하네요. 아하! 이게 좋아보이네요

02:43:042 (163042|4) - 한번쯤은 고려해보셨을듯 한데, 2로 이동시키면 패턴이 보여주는 시각적인 효과로 음이 더 고조되는 느낌이 더 와닿지 않을까요? 넵!

02:43:717 (163717|1,163792|2) - 갠적으로 col서로 뒤바꾸면 편할듯하지만 ㅠㅠ 수정했어요!

02:56:842 (176842|0,177442|1,178042|0) - 이 롱놋들을 조금 더 넓게 퍼뜨리는게 어떤가요? 아래파트 부터, 왼손에 밀집하다보니깐,
02:57:742 (177742|0,177892|0) - 이 해머들은 의도시겠지만, 저는 더 자연스럽게 변경할 수 있다고 생각해요.

Good Luck! 훌륭한 맵! :D
훌륭한 모딩 감사합니다!
Niks
히든을 낀상태에서 저배속을해서 그런가 노래가 안익숙해서 그런가
저배속 너프점여 ㅋㅋ

Offset :: perfect!

00:33:929 (33929|4,33967|3,34004|2) - 컨트롤 H해주시면 치기 좀 편할거같아요
00:34:942 - ~00:36:667 - 여기까지 7번 슬롯이 비어있어서 좀 허전했던 느낌이 있었어요
01:22:642 - 여기 저배속 너무 심해서 처리하기 너무 어려웠어요
02:05:542 - x8..보단 x6점.. ㅠㅠㅠ
02:27:442 (147442|0,147442|2,147442|5) - 여기 롱놋으로 해주셔도 괜찮을거같아요 (안하신 이유가 분명히 있으실거같지만..)
03:59:992 (239992|3,239992|1,240142|0,240142|2,240292|3,240292|1) - 없는편이 좋아보여요

재밌게했습니당



ps. 00:52:642 - 여기 꿀잼 ㅋㅋ
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Niks wrote:

히든을 낀상태에서 저배속을해서 그런가 노래가 안익숙해서 그런가
저배속 너프점여 ㅋㅋ

Offset :: perfect!

00:33:929 (33929|4,33967|3,34004|2) - 컨트롤 H해주시면 치기 좀 편할거같아요 사실 원래는 카와님의 의견으로 그 방향으로 바꿨는데 ㅠㅠ 일단 치기 더 편하게 다시 바꿔볼게요 ㅋㅋ
00:34:942 - ~00:36:667 - 여기까지 7번 슬롯이 비어있어서 좀 허전했던 느낌이 있었어요 오홍 그렇군요 이얍!
01:22:642 - 여기 저배속 너무 심해서 처리하기 너무 어려웠어요 음음음;; 조금 올리겠습니다
02:05:542 - x8..보단 x6점.. ㅠㅠㅠ 신비롭게 바꿨습니다 (?)
02:27:442 (147442|0,147442|2,147442|5) - 여기 롱놋으로 해주셔도 괜찮을거같아요 (안하신 이유가 분명히 있으실거같지만..) 그냥 단놋이 더 괜찮은듯 ㅠ
03:59:992 (239992|3,239992|1,240142|0,240142|2,240292|3,240292|1) - 없는편이 좋아보여요 그치만 소리가 있어서 무시하기엔 너무 크네요 ㅠㅠ 대신 재배치를 해봤습니다

재밌게했습니당



ps. 00:52:642 - 여기 꿀잼 ㅋㅋ
감사합니다!
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