why would you ask me to mod something that's already good o.o
01:21:534 01:21:849 - add beats here?
01:23:533 (4) - move this 1/4 earlier and make 1/4 longer?
01:51:942 (3,4,5) - I'd place this where (7) was (spacing) (and a bit respace next beats)
02:00:780 (3) - this'd look better symmetrical
02:01:727 (5) - make this a single beat and add more beats synched to drums (02:01:938)?
02:02:674 (6) - this beat needs a hitsound, at least a finish
02:09:934 (5) - remove this and make (4) a slider ending on (6)? At least remove whistle from (6), I dunno, it stands out too much.
02:26:349 (6) - moving this to (4) at timeline and adding a repeat suits music better
02:27:296 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48716 or something like this, well, space this please
02:49:076 (2,3,4) - okay, I'll just say that I didn't like that you add a beat synched to nothing when singer is singing only two syllables, so I won't have to repeat this over the whole map. Move (4) to (3) and make longer >:|
02:51:128 (8) - add a beat?
also, 02:48:760 - 02:58:230 this part lack softwhistle usage, they could accent the vocals and make the map more lively
03:32:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - ????? suddenly not following vocals, better something like http://puu.sh/IDf
03:45:263 (4,5) - while I actually like this and support rhythm patterns like this, but it's hard to tell that it's going to be 1/4 with AR 7
03:47:788 (4) - some hitsound on the end (again the same)
04:08:306 (3,4) - can you synch this to vocals?
04:09:568 (1) - make it end on 04:10:515 and add beats synched to vocals? (Map follows a lot of vocal so it feels a bit out of place when it suddenly does not. And Kotoko songs are accented on vocal, music at most is just a background here, after all, so..)
04:52:182 (6,1,2) - suddenly very loud
05:16:803 (4,1) - I'd like it more as 1/2 repeat slider, but I might be complaining too much..
05:36:058 - 1/2 sliders, especially repeat ones, feel too much slowed with 0,5. Try 0,7 sections for them?
05:42:687 - and now I noticed that you had the names storyboarded :D Silly editor blocking my sight.
05:45:528 (1) - yeah, this is surely sudden after 0,5 section. Really, try 0,7 and you might like it.
06:04:467 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals
07:04:285 (1) - start it 1/4 later and add a beat to where it's starting now. It's also fine if the beat remains silenced.
07:04:285 (1) - also, even if volume is moved to zero at timesection, you can still hear spinning, bonus and a softhitnormal sounds at the end. I'd add blank hitsounds just to silence this slider completely.
Whew, this was tiring to mod since it's already good and it's 7 minutes long. Ok, maybe some of my opinions would make you change something, I'm done here.
01:21:534 01:21:849 - add beats here?
01:23:533 (4) - move this 1/4 earlier and make 1/4 longer?
01:51:942 (3,4,5) - I'd place this where (7) was (spacing) (and a bit respace next beats)
02:00:780 (3) - this'd look better symmetrical
02:01:727 (5) - make this a single beat and add more beats synched to drums (02:01:938)?
02:02:674 (6) - this beat needs a hitsound, at least a finish
02:09:934 (5) - remove this and make (4) a slider ending on (6)? At least remove whistle from (6), I dunno, it stands out too much.
02:26:349 (6) - moving this to (4) at timeline and adding a repeat suits music better
02:27:296 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48716 or something like this, well, space this please
02:49:076 (2,3,4) - okay, I'll just say that I didn't like that you add a beat synched to nothing when singer is singing only two syllables, so I won't have to repeat this over the whole map. Move (4) to (3) and make longer >:|
02:51:128 (8) - add a beat?
also, 02:48:760 - 02:58:230 this part lack softwhistle usage, they could accent the vocals and make the map more lively
03:32:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - ????? suddenly not following vocals, better something like http://puu.sh/IDf
03:45:263 (4,5) - while I actually like this and support rhythm patterns like this, but it's hard to tell that it's going to be 1/4 with AR 7
03:47:788 (4) - some hitsound on the end (again the same)
04:08:306 (3,4) - can you synch this to vocals?
04:09:568 (1) - make it end on 04:10:515 and add beats synched to vocals? (Map follows a lot of vocal so it feels a bit out of place when it suddenly does not. And Kotoko songs are accented on vocal, music at most is just a background here, after all, so..)
04:52:182 (6,1,2) - suddenly very loud
05:16:803 (4,1) - I'd like it more as 1/2 repeat slider, but I might be complaining too much..
05:36:058 - 1/2 sliders, especially repeat ones, feel too much slowed with 0,5. Try 0,7 sections for them?
05:42:687 - and now I noticed that you had the names storyboarded :D Silly editor blocking my sight.
05:45:528 (1) - yeah, this is surely sudden after 0,5 section. Really, try 0,7 and you might like it.
06:04:467 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals vocals
07:04:285 (1) - start it 1/4 later and add a beat to where it's starting now. It's also fine if the beat remains silenced.
07:04:285 (1) - also, even if volume is moved to zero at timesection, you can still hear spinning, bonus and a softhitnormal sounds at the end. I'd add blank hitsounds just to silence this slider completely.
Whew, this was tiring to mod since it's already good and it's 7 minutes long. Ok, maybe some of my opinions would make you change something, I'm done here.
gratz <3