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anna apple
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Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
anna apple
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by anna apple , edited 54 times in total.
UndeadCapulet
1,100 posts
Joined April 2013
UndeadCapulet
i taught him how to use editor and not be totally new xd, no chatlog because it's been like a month or so
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
2,106 posts
Joined April 2013
SnowNiNo_
From my queue( for M4M
try offset 556
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:12:290 (4,5,6) - make the spacing increasing instead of all the same, since the pitch is getting higher and higher
  2. 00:11:945 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:12:807 (1,2,3) - ^, but decreasing
  4. 00:14:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:12:290 (4,5,6) -
  5. 00:22:290 (5,1) - make the spacing smaller, the vocal 00:22:462 (1) - doesnt need to be emphasized that much
  6. 00:33:152 (5,6) - 1/2 slider here
  7. 00:49:359 (1) - NC off
  8. 01:08:497 (1) - ^
  9. 01:22:462 (3,4) - weird imo, change it?
  10. 01:25:221 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing
  • [X]
  1. dont overuse 3/4 slider , change the kiai part
  2. 00:26:772 - map sth here, is the hardest diff
  3. 00:59:359 (3) - NC
well seriously idk how to mod this map lol
i think i will just quote what Kibbleru mention in his userpage, maybe you should have a look, i think is helpful
GL~
How to start out as a new mapper

Kibbleru wrote:

How to start out as a new mapper
  1. If you're new and want to start out mapping, but have no idea what to do, you can follow these 3 main steps.
  2. First of all, learn the basics to mapping. What i mean is like timing your map, putting hitobjects, beatsnap divisor, etc. Just basically getting used to all the tools in editor. there are some videos on youtube that can help you get started. There is also a sub-forum that contains tons of guides which you can also ask questions there.link . Or you can check out Garven's userpage which i think has some useful tips. After you think you're comfortable with your knowledge of mapping, you can start out to creating your first beatmap! Do not expect to get it ranked without a few remaps.
  3. After you've made your first beatmap, your next step is to finds mods for it. Mods will basically tell you what you are doing wrong, further expanding your knowledge of mapping. Now you're asking yourself; "how on earth do find mods?". Well personally i would recommend you checking out the modding queues sub-forum. Be sure to read the queue's rules and only post when the modding queue is open. But unless you're some kind of ninja, the chances of getting a slot for NM (Normal Mod) is quite low as people will swarm them in less than 10 minutes. Luckily, there are almost always M4M (Mod for Mod) queues open at all times. Where quite literally, you mod their map and they mod yours. This is the most beneficial for you. Not only do you get to practice your own modding, you also get to learn off analyzing other people's maps, and study their patterns. Not to mention how you get a mod for your own mapset too!. This process should take up to months, but after that, you should have a good enough understanding of mapping to make rankable maps, and, hopefully by the end of this you would have your first ranked map!
  4. The last step is to refine your knowledge of mapping into your own style. Usually this step comes when you find out that no matter what you do, you yourself do not like your own mapping. That is good because that means you are trying to improve. Hopefully by now you've found yourself a mapper that you absolutely look up to. The mapper who inspires you to map. Or maybe even just some maps you really really like. Now what you do is just spend periods studying their maps, and try to copy their patterns and styles. You will know that you have gotten past this stage once you realize that you no longer hate your own maps.
  5. Congratulations, you have now came from a complete beginner to a unique mapper with your own unique style. Note that step 3 may happen more than once, but that is just you trying to improve your own mapping! From now on what you should to is focus on expressing the song further and better than you have ever before. Every new map should be better than the old one.
  6. To all you mappers; Good luck, and don't forget to have fun.
Naxess
Nomination Assessment Team
390 posts
Joined March 2016
Naxess
From Queue

General
SPOILER
  1. You might want to add "Rabu Kome" to the tags, since those are other words for "Love Comedy" which the series also uses.
  2. I feel like the timing may be off at some parts, but nothing I do seems to fix it, so I may be wrong. Either way, it's difficult to mod because of the downbeat inconsistency this song has. Just look at all these downbeats (large white ticks) that don't have notes:

Normal
SPOILER
  1. 00:11:600 (1) - These types of sliders are generally not suitable for either easy nor normal, since the player probably doesn't know how many times they repeat. Especially when they're short.
    Perhaps you could do something like this instead (or if that is too dense you could just remove the circle and keep a space in between:

    00:44:703 (3) - ^
  2. 00:35:738 (5) - I'd say this slider is too long, it should end at 00:35:910
  3. 00:01:600 - Add note
    00:37:979 - ^
    00:02:979 - ^
    00:07:290 - ^
    00:07:634 - ^
    00:07:979 - ^
    00:07:979 - ^
    00:10:738 - ^
    00:21:428 - ^
    01:05:221 - ^
  4. 00:07:290 (3) - Should be clickable, consider doing something like this to also increase consistency:

    Also applies to easy.
  5. 00:21:600 (5,2) - You could make this a slider beginning from here.
    00:29:876 (3) - ^
  6. 00:47:634 (4,5) - Plays strangely, do something like this instead:

  7. 00:58:497 (4) - Remove note
    01:02:462 (6) - ^
  8. 01:09:703 (4) - I feel like the end should be clickable:
anna apple
1,245 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
anna apple
SnowNiNo_'s quote

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue( for M4M
try offset 556
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:12:290 (4,5,6) - make the spacing increasing instead of all the same, since the pitch is getting higher and higher
  2. 00:11:945 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:12:807 (1,2,3) - ^, but decreasing
  4. 00:14:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:12:290 (4,5,6) -
  5. 00:22:290 (5,1) - make the spacing smaller, the vocal 00:22:462 (1) - doesnt need to be emphasized that much
  6. 00:33:152 (5,6) - 1/2 slider here
  7. 00:49:359 (1) - NC off
  8. 01:08:497 (1) - ^
  9. 01:22:462 (3,4) - weird imo, change it?
  10. 01:25:221 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing
  • [X]
  1. dont overuse 3/4 slider , change the kiai part
  2. 00:26:772 - map sth here, is the hardest diff
  3. 00:59:359 (3) - NC
well seriously idk how to mod this map lol
i think i will just quote what Kibbleru mention in his userpage, maybe you should have a look, i think is helpful
GL~

Kibbleru wrote:

How to start out as a new mapper
  1. If you're new and want to start out mapping, but have no idea what to do, you can follow these 3 main steps.
  2. First of all, learn the basics to mapping. What i mean is like timing your map, putting hitobjects, beatsnap divisor, etc. Just basically getting used to all the tools in editor. there are some videos on youtube that can help you get started. There is also a sub-forum that contains tons of guides which you can also ask questions there.link . Or you can check out Garven's userpage which i think has some useful tips. After you think you're comfortable with your knowledge of mapping, you can start out to creating your first beatmap! Do not expect to get it ranked without a few remaps.
  3. After you've made your first beatmap, your next step is to finds mods for it. Mods will basically tell you what you are doing wrong, further expanding your knowledge of mapping. Now you're asking yourself; "how on earth do find mods?". Well personally i would recommend you checking out the modding queues sub-forum. Be sure to read the queue's rules and only post when the modding queue is open. But unless you're some kind of ninja, the chances of getting a slot for NM (Normal Mod) is quite low as people will swarm them in less than 10 minutes. Luckily, there are almost always M4M (Mod for Mod) queues open at all times. Where quite literally, you mod their map and they mod yours. This is the most beneficial for you. Not only do you get to practice your own modding, you also get to learn off analyzing other people's maps, and study their patterns. Not to mention how you get a mod for your own mapset too!. This process should take up to months, but after that, you should have a good enough understanding of mapping to make rankable maps, and, hopefully by the end of this you would have your first ranked map!
  4. The last step is to refine your knowledge of mapping into your own style. Usually this step comes when you find out that no matter what you do, you yourself do not like your own mapping. That is good because that means you are trying to improve. Hopefully by now you've found yourself a mapper that you absolutely look up to. The mapper who inspires you to map. Or maybe even just some maps you really really like. Now what you do is just spend periods studying their maps, and try to copy their patterns and styles. You will know that you have gotten past this stage once you realize that you no longer hate your own maps.
  5. Congratulations, you have now came from a complete beginner to a unique mapper with your own unique style. Note that step 3 may happen more than once, but that is just you trying to improve your own mapping! From now on what you should to is focus on expressing the song further and better than you have ever before. Every new map should be better than the old one.
  6. To all you mappers; Good luck, and don't forget to have fun.

What I did
On all Diffs. Offset is now 556 and everything is re-snapped. Each object is now 10 milliseconds off
Insane:
  1. Not sure what you wanted me to do exactly with 00:12:280 (4,5,6) - , but I scaled the spacing by 1.4
  2. 00:11:935 (2,3) - , scaled by 1.2
  3. 00:12:797 (1,2,3) - kept the same because already smaller with prior changes
  4. 00:22:452 (1) - repositioned(closer to 00:22:280 (5) - ) and 00:22:969 (3) - also repositioned.
  5. 00:33:142 (5,6) - is now 00:33:142 (5) -
  6. It seems there we NC's on accident, the ones you mentioned an others were removed/fixed
X:
  1. 00:59:349 (1) - NC'd
  2. 00:26:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - exists now
  3. all of these are now 1/2(they were 3/4) ,01:00:211 (2) - ,01:00:900 (4) - ,01:01:590 (2) - ,01:17:107 (4) - ,01:18:142 (3) -

Thanks a bunch!
Last edited by anna apple , edited 1 time in total.
anna apple
1,245 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
anna apple

Naxess wrote:

From Queue

General
SPOILER
  1. You might want to add "Rabu Kome" to the tags, since those are other words for "Love Comedy" which the series also uses.
  2. I feel like the timing may be off at some parts, but nothing I do seems to fix it, so I may be wrong. Either way, it's difficult to mod because of the downbeat inconsistency this song has. Just look at all these downbeats (large white ticks) that don't have notes:

Normal
SPOILER
  1. 00:11:600 (1) - These types of sliders are generally not suitable for either easy nor normal, since the player probably doesn't know how many times they repeat. Especially when they're short.
    Perhaps you could do something like this instead (or if that is too dense you could just remove the circle and keep a space in between:

    00:44:703 (3) - ^
  2. 00:35:738 (5) - I'd say this slider is too long, it should end at 00:35:910
  3. 00:01:600 - Add note
    00:37:979 - ^
    00:02:979 - ^
    00:07:290 - ^
    00:07:634 - ^
    00:07:979 - ^
    00:07:979 - ^
    00:10:738 - ^
    00:21:428 - ^
    01:05:221 - ^
  4. 00:07:290 (3) - Should be clickable, consider doing something like this to also increase consistency:

    Also applies to easy.
  5. 00:21:600 (5,2) - You could make this a slider beginning from here.
    00:29:876 (3) - ^
  6. 00:47:634 (4,5) - Plays strangely, do something like this instead:

  7. 00:58:497 (4) - Remove note
    01:02:462 (6) - ^
  8. 01:09:703 (4) - I feel like the end should be clickable:

What I did
  1. added "Rabu Kome"
  2. I just changed the timing with the previous mod. :D
  3. 00:11:590 (1) - changed the rhythm to what you suggested AND added the circle.
  4. 00:44:693 (3) - " "
  5. 00:35:728 (5) - is now 00:35:728 (5,6) -
  6. Added notes 00:01:590 (2) - 00:02:969 (4) - 00:07:280 (3,4) - - 00:10:728 (4) - 00:21:418 (5) -
  7. Can you send the individual objects I don't know if I understand what you want here 00:21:600 (5,2) :shock:
  8. 00:29:866 (3) - changed?
  9. 00:47:452 (3,4,5) - changed
  10. 01:09:176 (3) - changed
Thanks a bunch!
Bluekrait
202 posts
Joined March 2014
Bluekrait
[alt][F4]'s M4M request

[General]
  1. Easy, Normal, and most Hard diffs you should focus on blankets. Since a lower AR is used, blankets are much more noticeable (the good and bad).
  2. Hitsounds. Your clap and whistle hitsounds are very loud in all diffs. I recommend not to use whistle at all since it's just annoying imo.
  3. Check this flow guide out t/86329
[Easy]
  1. 00:03:314 (1,2) - Blanket
  2. 00:04:693 (3,4,1) - For easy diff, don't make it so players need to change cursor direction in the air. Try to make it so that the cursor follows a smooth flowing path. Here is your path.Green is fine, orange is coming back from the reverse, red is bad flow, and blue is the path I'm guessing you want players to take. Easy players are very new to the game and need you to guide them through the map. If you want them to follow the blue path (preferable), then you want to angle the reverse slider up more making the curve a bit sharper and/or make the yellow slider look like it's an extension of the reverse slider. Example of extension and good flow. Notice the start of the yellow slider is parallel to the reverse slider. If you wanted, you can make the reverse slider curved. As long as you make the beginning of the next slider look like it's an extension or coming off the reverse slider's slider end.
  3. 00:06:762 (2,3) - Blanket
  4. 00:16:073 (1,2) - Bad overlap
  5. 00:20:556 (4,1) - Blanket, ok try to spot the rest yourself
  6. 00:37:624 (3,4) - Too much movement for an easy player. Remember what I said earlier about next slider extension? Easy players are not familiar with slider leniency, so they tend to follow through the WHOLE slider. With what you have now, they will get to the end of 3 and snap right to 4, but 4 goes down and to the left. This forces them to snap back really fast because easy players are still learning to read.
  7. 00:46:762 (4,1) - This is a good example. After 4, they snap right and 1 also goes right, so it catches their momentum.
  8. 00:55:728 (1,2) - Delete these two and extend spinner start to where 1 is.
  9. 01:02:624 (1,2) - This example is not bad (because it's a reverse), but can be improved. Angle 2 down a bit more.
  10. 01:04:693 (4,1) - Wow that blanket, please fix.
  11. Relook the entire diff over taking into consideration what I said about flow and slider extension.
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:314 (1,2,3,4) - Couple things here. I know you have the reverse arrows pointing to the next note, but that isn't enough for a normal. Generally, you want the whole slider body pointing to the next note. Also the sliders don't blanket.
  2. 00:07:969 (4) - Check your spacing (previous is .97 and next is 1.22!) Try to keep spacing on normal within .03 error max. So if previous is .97, next should be no more than 1.00
  3. 00:09:521 (2) - Spacing
  4. 00:13:659 (5,1,2) - Blankets
  5. 00:22:797 (1,3) - Good blanket
  6. 00:25:211 (1,3) - ^
  7. 00:34:521 (3,4) - Super weird flow for normal diff. Slider 3 is telling me the next note will be somewhere up above, but it's on the left >.<
  8. 00:45:383 (5,6) - Unsnapped
  9. 01:01:590 (4) - Weird flow again.
  10. 01:02:280 (5,1) - Blanket
  11. 01:17:107 (3,4) - The way you have this section mapped makes me want to click something in between these two.
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:556 (3,4,5) - , 00:23:314 (2,3,4) - , 00:26:073 (2,3,4) - Let's compare these 3 combos. One of them flows better than the other two, can you guess which one? The third one is the best one, but can still be improved. The slider is poorly spaced in relation to the notes next to it. Apply what I said about your easy diff to this hard diff. You can be a little more lenient since it's hard, but I'm seeing a lot of similar things here (flow, blankets, spacing)
  2. 00:31:590 (3,4) - Forget something here?
  3. 00:42:969 (5,1,2) - If you're going to do this, at least blanket them nicely. Here's a tip, turn grid snap off.
  4. 01:04:176 (2,3) - Bad overlap
  5. 01:19:176 (1,2,3,1) - What are you doing here? The claps are so loud it ruins the song. I can't even hear the buildups where these first 3 reverse sliders are.
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:762 (3,4,5) - Slider extension thing still applies to Insanes. 00:06:418 (2) points down to the left a bit while 3 is all the way on the right. rotate 3,4,5 ~45 degrees playfield center.
  2. 00:26:073 (4,5) - Things like these are pretty cool.
  3. 00:44:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing, make it even or use convert slider to stream tool.
  4. 00:48:487 (4) - If you're following her voice, it actually starts on the slider end.
  5. 01:02:280 (5,6) - What does this represent?
  6. 01:10:556 (5,6) - Spacing a little big for Insane (4.43 and 6.43 for slider 6)
  7. 01:19:176 (1,2) - Claps ruin the song.
  8. This is the best looking diff out of all of them. Most things that I didn't highlight were blankets.
[X]
  1. 00:09:521 (5) - If you're going to do quads, make this NC. Since the previous quads represent same part of music, make 00:09:176 (1,2,3,4) a bundled quad and 00:09:521 (5,6,7,8,9,10) can be a group of 6 like you did here 00:15:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
  2. 00:15:900 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - Incredibly hard to read for someone who hasn't heard the song.
  3. 00:17:969 (2) - Silence slider end.
  4. 00:20:728 (5) - ^
  5. 00:23:487 (6) - ^ find the rest.
  6. 00:19:349 (4,5) - NC 5 since it's spaced different (timeline wise) than 4.
  7. 00:39:521 (2,3) - ^ same deal here except with 2 and 3.
  8. 00:40:555 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - So hard to read >.< Because spacing and the voids you left. One of many possible solutions is to delete 1, put 1/2 slider here 00:41:935 , and put circle here 00:42:280 .
  9. 00:46:590 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Same with this section. Just try mapping with the vocals for these parts.
  10. 00:52:280 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Spacing man. You alternate stacked 1/2s followed by 1/2s you need to snap to with little indication for it in the music. If you want to do this, make a NC for every 1/2 you have to snap to.
  11. 00:58:487 (1) - Shorten this to 00:58:918 and move 00:59:176 (2) back to 00:59:004
  12. 01:17:107 (4) - Sliders like these are ok to use if you're consistent with them. To me it seems like you put them in random places.
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anna apple
1,245 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
anna apple
Bluekrait quote
[quote="Bluekrait"][alt][F4]'s M4M request

[General]
  1. Easy, Normal, and most Hard diffs you should focus on blankets. Since a lower AR is used, blankets are much more noticeable (the good and bad).
  2. Hitsounds. Your clap and whistle hitsounds are very loud in all diffs. I recommend not to use whistle at all since it's just annoying imo.
  3. Check this flow guide out t/86329
[Easy]
  1. 00:03:314 (1,2) - Blanket
  2. 00:04:693 (3,4,1) - For easy diff, don't make it so players need to change cursor direction in the air. Try to make it so that the cursor follows a smooth flowing path. Here is your path.Green is fine, orange is coming back from the reverse, red is bad flow, and blue is the path I'm guessing you want players to take. Easy players are very new to the game and need you to guide them through the map. If you want them to follow the blue path (preferable), then you want to angle the reverse slider up more making the curve a bit sharper and/or make the yellow slider look like it's an extension of the reverse slider. Example of extension and good flow. Notice the start of the yellow slider is parallel to the reverse slider. If you wanted, you can make the reverse slider curved. As long as you make the beginning of the next slider look like it's an extension or coming off the reverse slider's slider end.
  3. 00:06:762 (2,3) - Blanket
  4. 00:16:073 (1,2) - Bad overlap
  5. 00:20:556 (4,1) - Blanket, ok try to spot the rest yourself
  6. 00:37:624 (3,4) - Too much movement for an easy player. Remember what I said earlier about next slider extension? Easy players are not familiar with slider leniency, so they tend to follow through the WHOLE slider. With what you have now, they will get to the end of 3 and snap right to 4, but 4 goes down and to the left. This forces them to snap back really fast because easy players are still learning to read.
  7. 00:46:762 (4,1) - This is a good example. After 4, they snap right and 1 also goes right, so it catches their momentum.
  8. 00:55:728 (1,2) - Delete these two and extend spinner start to where 1 is.
  9. 01:02:624 (1,2) - This example is not bad (because it's a reverse), but can be improved. Angle 2 down a bit more.
  10. 01:04:693 (4,1) - Wow that blanket, please fix.
  11. Relook the entire diff over taking into consideration what I said about flow and slider extension.
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:314 (1,2,3,4) - Couple things here. I know you have the reverse arrows pointing to the next note, but that isn't enough for a normal. Generally, you want the whole slider body pointing to the next note. Also the sliders don't blanket.
  2. 00:07:969 (4) - Check your spacing (previous is .97 and next is 1.22!) Try to keep spacing on normal within .03 error max. So if previous is .97, next should be no more than 1.00
  3. 00:09:521 (2) - Spacing
  4. 00:13:659 (5,1,2) - Blankets
  5. 00:22:797 (1,3) - Good blanket
  6. 00:25:211 (1,3) - ^
  7. 00:34:521 (3,4) - Super weird flow for normal diff. Slider 3 is telling me the next note will be somewhere up above, but it's on the left >.<
  8. 00:45:383 (5,6) - Unsnapped
  9. 01:01:590 (4) - Weird flow again.
  10. 01:02:280 (5,1) - Blanket
  11. 01:17:107 (3,4) - The way you have this section mapped makes me want to click something in between these two.
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:556 (3,4,5) - , 00:23:314 (2,3,4) - , 00:26:073 (2,3,4) - Let's compare these 3 combos. One of them flows better than the other two, can you guess which one? The third one is the best one, but can still be improved. The slider is poorly spaced in relation to the notes next to it. Apply what I said about your easy diff to this hard diff. You can be a little more lenient since it's hard, but I'm seeing a lot of similar things here (flow, blankets, spacing)
  2. 00:31:590 (3,4) - Forget something here?
  3. 00:42:969 (5,1,2) - If you're going to do this, at least blanket them nicely. Here's a tip, turn grid snap off.
  4. 01:04:176 (2,3) - Bad overlap
  5. 01:19:176 (1,2,3,1) - What are you doing here? The claps are so loud it ruins the song. I can't even hear the buildups where these first 3 reverse sliders are.
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:762 (3,4,5) - Slider extension thing still applies to Insanes. 00:06:418 (2) points down to the left a bit while 3 is all the way on the right. rotate 3,4,5 ~45 degrees playfield center.
  2. 00:26:073 (4,5) - Things like these are pretty cool.
  3. 00:44:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing, make it even or use convert slider to stream tool.
  4. 00:48:487 (4) - If you're following her voice, it actually starts on the slider end.
  5. 01:02:280 (5,6) - What does this represent?
  6. 01:10:556 (5,6) - Spacing a little big for Insane (4.43 and 6.43 for slider 6)
  7. 01:19:176 (1,2) - Claps ruin the song.
  8. This is the best looking diff out of all of them. Most things that I didn't highlight were blankets.
[X]
  1. 00:09:521 (5) - If you're going to do quads, make this NC. Since the previous quads represent same part of music, make 00:09:176 (1,2,3,4) a bundled quad and 00:09:521 (5,6,7,8,9,10) can be a group of 6 like you did here 00:15:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
  2. 00:15:900 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - Incredibly hard to read for someone who hasn't heard the song.
  3. 00:17:969 (2) - Silence slider end.
  4. 00:20:728 (5) - ^
  5. 00:23:487 (6) - ^ find the rest.
  6. 00:19:349 (4,5) - NC 5 since it's spaced different (timeline wise) than 4.
  7. 00:39:521 (2,3) - ^ same deal here except with 2 and 3.
  8. 00:40:555 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - So hard to read >.< Because spacing and the voids you left. One of many possible solutions is to delete 1, put 1/2 slider here 00:41:935 , and put circle here 00:42:280 .
  9. 00:46:590 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Same with this section. Just try mapping with the vocals for these parts.
  10. 00:52:280 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Spacing man. You alternate stacked 1/2s followed by 1/2s you need to snap to with little indication for it in the music. If you want to do this, make a NC for every 1/2 you have to snap to.
  11. 00:58:487 (1) - Shorten this to 00:58:918 and move 00:59:176 (2) back to 00:59:004
  12. 01:17:107 (4) - Sliders like these are ok to use if you're consistent with them. To me it seems like you put them in random places.

What I did
[|General]
yeah first song I worked with hitsounds.

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:314 (1) - now blanketing
  2. 00:05:038 (4) - repositioned(hopefully its better)
  3. 00:07:797 (3) - I blanketed this note? it was unclear to me what you meant
  4. 00:16:073 (1) - repositioned
ya I read everything on this diff and changed stuff up

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:314 (1,2,3) - reverse sliders angle(now are straight)
  2. spacing should be fixed
  3. using the same distance snap as before, it says it is correct, I don't know if i fixed it or not
  4. 00:13:659 (5,1,2) - have blankets
  5. 00:34:521 (3) - flow should have been fixed.
  6. 00:45:383 (5,1) - fixed slider ends
  7. 01:01:590 (4) - flow correction.
  8. 01:02:280 (5) - flow correction make blanket not possible
  9. Not really sure how to resolve, I think I fixed it with this 01:17:797 (4) - , now player will read something different and have to think more about what to press instead of going for instincts?
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:073 (2,3,4) - 00:23:314 (3,4,5) - 00:20:556 (3,4,5) - should have better flow.
  2. now 00:31:590 (3,4,5) - , I remember removing the slider in the middle for variety but I'll put it back in so it's not confusing
  3. 00:42:969 (5,1,2) - changed.
  4. 01:04:521 (3) - adjusted to remove overlap
  5. green point added to change volume of hitsounds
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:762 (3,4,5) - positioned better
  2. yay a compliment
  3. 00:44:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - changed to something different, I don't want it to be "slider to stream" because that is kind of boring.
  4. 00:48:659 (4) - changed to note,
  5. 01:02:280 (5) - I'm hearing violin here. and there is a snare hit right at the slider start.
  6. 01:10:556 (5,6) - friendlier spacing
[X]
  1. I had worse NC mistakes earlier thanks for pointing these out haha
  2. 00:19:607 (5) - I think I want to keep the combo because(even though the note is spaced out) it is still part of the musical phrase.
  3. I don't see the issue with readability in the hardest diff.
  4. For now I'm going to keep slider ends audible because it will make the player hear complex rhythms and there fore will expect strange patters.
  5. nc'd 00:52:624 (1) -
  6. 01:17:107 (4) - changed these because, yeah they were inconsistent.
sahuang
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Joined December 2014
sahuang
Thanks for your mod,it's quite helpful

Expect me to do a short mod.OK

[General]
  1. don't forget soft-sliderslide.wav
  2. disable widescreen support and countdown

[Easy]
  1. 00:55:728 (1) - spinner must have a new cb
  2. 00:31:590 (2,3) - wrong DS
  3. 00:01:935 (2,1) - ^
  4. 00:03:659 (2) - should end 00:04:349 -
  5. 00:03:659 (2,4) - no overlap
  6. 00:14:004 (3,4) - bad shape and almost touch
  7. 00:30:900 (1,2) - ^be careful of blanket throughout your mapset
  8. 00:36:418 (1,2) - ^
  9. 01:09:176 (2) - not a good shape 01:19:176 (1) - ^^
  10. i think u need to increase ds to 1.1 and remap.The main problem is your blanket and overlap,make sure it looks good

[Normal]
  1. 00:05:728 (4,1) - good example of the blanket problem mentioned above.
    check this out: http://puu.sh/oaLXJ/f207aedb20.jpg
  2. 00:06:073 (1,3) - bad overlap and
  3. 00:36:245 (1,2) - ^^
  4. 01:09:349 (4,5) - blanket
  5. 00:16:073 (4,5) - DS
  6. 00:35:211 (4,5) -
  7. 00:44:349 (2,3) -
  8. 00:46:762 (2,3) - all DS stuff

[Hard]
  1. 00:12:624 (5,1,3) - bad overlap
  2. 00:38:487 (3,2) - stack,00:38:487 (3,1) - blanket
  3. ctrl+A,you should use as much space as possible


Still some problems, so gl on remapping~~ :)
anna apple
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Topic Starter
anna apple

sahuang wrote:

Thanks for your mod,it's quite helpful

Expect me to do a short mod.OK

[General]
  1. don't forget soft-sliderslide.wav Done
  2. disable widescreen support and countdown Done

[Easy]
  • REMAPPED
  1. 00:55:728 (1) - spinner must have a new cb Done
  2. 00:31:590 (2,3) - wrong DS Fixed.
  3. 00:01:935 (2,1) - ^ Fixed.
  4. 00:03:659 (2) - should end 00:04:349 -When I'm looking at editor is does end there. Maybe I'm misunderstanding?
  5. 00:03:659 (2,4) - no overlap Fixed.
  6. 00:14:004 (3,4) - bad shape and almost touch
  7. 00:30:900 (1,2) - ^be careful of blanket throughout your mapset
  8. 00:36:418 (1,2) - ^
  9. 01:09:176 (2) - not a good shape 01:19:176 (1) - ^^
  10. i think u need to increase ds to 1.1 and remap.The main problem is your blanket and overlap,make sure it looks good

[Normal]
REMAPPED
  1. 00:05:728 (4,1) - good example of the blanket problem mentioned above.
    check this out: http://puu.sh/oaLXJ/f207aedb20.jpg
  2. 00:06:073 (1,3) - bad overlap and
  3. 00:36:245 (1,2) - ^^
  4. 01:09:349 (4,5) - blanket
  5. 00:16:073 (4,5) - DS
  6. 00:35:211 (4,5) -
  7. 00:44:349 (2,3) -
  8. 00:46:762 (2,3) - all DS stuff

[Hard]
  • REMAPPED
  1. 00:12:624 (5,1,3) - bad overlap
  2. 00:38:487 (3,2) - stack,00:38:487 (3,1) - blanket
  3. ctrl+A,you should use as much space as possible


Still some problems, so gl on remapping~~ :)
Going to remap done

Thanks for mod <3 Strikes because remapped
sahuang
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Joined December 2014
sahuang
lrc mod short
2016-04-09 10:45 [alt][F4]: what is "soft-slide.wav"
2016-04-09 10:45 sahuang: a hitsound
2016-04-09 10:55 [alt][F4]: Yeah I have no idea what you want me to do wit "soft-sliderslide.wav"
2016-04-09 10:55 [alt][F4]: with*
2016-04-09 11:05 [alt][F4]: nm I got someone to help me ouyt
2016-04-09 11:09 sahuang: ok
2016-04-09 11:09 sahuang: lol
2016-04-09 11:24 [alt][F4]: well I remapped my Hard, Normal, and Easy diffs. So if you want to take another look I would be happy to give out more KD
2016-04-09 11:24 sahuang: oh
2016-04-09 11:24 sahuang: i will have a brief look cuz im quite busy now lol
2016-04-09 11:24 sahuang: np again pls
2016-04-09 11:24 [alt][F4]: gotcha -- and ty :D
2016-04-09 11:24 [alt][F4]: sec
2016-04-09 11:25 [alt][F4]: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/910637 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki]
2016-04-09 11:25 sahuang: so lrc mod is fine?
2016-04-09 11:25 sahuang: i will post lrc to forum
2016-04-09 11:25 [alt][F4]: idk what Irc means
2016-04-09 11:25 sahuang: lyric mod
2016-04-09 11:26 sahuang: means i chat with you and you can edit
2016-04-09 11:26 [alt][F4]: yeah that's fine
2016-04-09 11:26 sahuang: easy
2016-04-09 11:26 sahuang: 00:10:900 (2) -
2016-04-09 11:27 sahuang: you should make the slider better shape
2016-04-09 11:27 sahuang: so curve more to make a blanket
2016-04-09 11:27 sahuang: http://puu.sh/obne4/8474bb7560.jpg
2016-04-09 11:27 sahuang: try this
2016-04-09 11:28 sahuang: 00:10:900 (2,1) - make sure don't overlap
2016-04-09 11:28 [alt][F4]: http://puu.sh/obnht/e7688c3108.jpg
2016-04-09 11:28 sahuang: well it's better
2016-04-09 11:28 sahuang: 00:47:452 (1) -
2016-04-09 11:29 sahuang: move red dot so that it's in the middle
2016-04-09 11:29 sahuang: now it looks bad
2016-04-09 11:29 sahuang: 00:52:969 (1,3) - dont do this in Easy
2016-04-09 11:29 sahuang: the stack is hard to read
2016-04-09 11:29 sahuang: try to make use of more space
2016-04-09 11:29 [alt][F4]: http://puu.sh/obnlU/f96c258e03.jpg
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: yeah
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: u dont need to post to me every change
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: 01:16:073 (4,2) - overlap
2016-04-09 11:30 [alt][F4]: Just making sure
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: yeah
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: it's fine
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: the rest are ok
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: Normal
2016-04-09 11:31 [alt][F4]: ty
2016-04-09 11:31 sahuang: 00:02:969 (4,2) - stack
2016-04-09 11:31 sahuang: 00:24:176 (4) - also red dot
2016-04-09 11:32 sahuang: 01:24:004 (5,1) - make the curve better and blanket
2016-04-09 11:33 sahuang: now it's quite a nice diff
2016-04-09 11:33 sahuang: Hard
2016-04-09 11:33 sahuang: 00:12:624 (5,1) - bad shape
2016-04-09 11:33 sahuang: 00:13:228 - bad blanket
2016-04-09 11:34 sahuang: this shape is bad imo 00:18:659 (1,2) -
2016-04-09 11:34 sahuang: 00:33:142 (3,1) - ^^
2016-04-09 11:35 sahuang: 00:36:245 (1,2) -
2016-04-09 11:35 sahuang: also
2016-04-09 11:35 sahuang: curve too much
2016-04-09 11:35 sahuang: 00:43:314 (1,2) - bad blanket
2016-04-09 11:36 [alt][F4]: question
2016-04-09 11:36 sahuang: http://puu.sh/obnED/158645df38.jpg
2016-04-09 11:36 sahuang: eh?
2016-04-09 11:36 [alt][F4]: how much do blankets matter is diffs hard+
2016-04-09 11:36 sahuang: very important if you intend to use
2016-04-09 11:36 sahuang: you can separate them so it's not a blanket
2016-04-09 11:36 [alt][F4]: Gotcha
2016-04-09 11:36 sahuang: but once you decide to use a blanket you must do it
2016-04-09 11:37 sahuang: 01:16:418 (1,2,3,4) - this is terrible
2016-04-09 11:37 [alt][F4]: ok
2016-04-09 11:37 sahuang: use triangle or square
2016-04-09 11:38 sahuang: 01:17:452 (6,7,1,2) - also
2016-04-09 11:38 sahuang: yes,i think that's it
2016-04-09 11:38 [alt][F4]: ok
2016-04-09 11:38 [alt][F4]: thanks :D
2016-04-09 11:38 sahuang: lol
anna apple
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Topic Starter
anna apple

sahuang wrote:

lrc mod short
2016-04-09 10:45 [alt][F4]: what is "soft-slide.wav"
2016-04-09 10:45 sahuang: a hitsound
2016-04-09 10:55 [alt][F4]: Yeah I have no idea what you want me to do wit "soft-sliderslide.wav"
2016-04-09 10:55 [alt][F4]: with*
2016-04-09 11:05 [alt][F4]: nm I got someone to help me ouyt
2016-04-09 11:09 sahuang: ok
2016-04-09 11:09 sahuang: lol
2016-04-09 11:24 [alt][F4]: well I remapped my Hard, Normal, and Easy diffs. So if you want to take another look I would be happy to give out more KD
2016-04-09 11:24 sahuang: oh
2016-04-09 11:24 sahuang: i will have a brief look cuz im quite busy now lol
2016-04-09 11:24 sahuang: np again pls
2016-04-09 11:24 [alt][F4]: gotcha -- and ty :D
2016-04-09 11:24 [alt][F4]: sec
2016-04-09 11:25 [alt][F4]: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/910637 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki]
2016-04-09 11:25 sahuang: so lrc mod is fine?
2016-04-09 11:25 sahuang: i will post lrc to forum
2016-04-09 11:25 [alt][F4]: idk what Irc means
2016-04-09 11:25 sahuang: lyric mod
2016-04-09 11:26 sahuang: means i chat with you and you can edit
2016-04-09 11:26 [alt][F4]: yeah that's fine
2016-04-09 11:26 sahuang: easy
2016-04-09 11:26 sahuang: 00:10:900 (2) - done.
2016-04-09 11:27 sahuang: you should make the slider better shape
2016-04-09 11:27 sahuang: so curve more to make a blanket
2016-04-09 11:27 sahuang: http://puu.sh/obne4/8474bb7560.jpg
2016-04-09 11:27 sahuang: try this
2016-04-09 11:28 sahuang: 00:10:900 (2,1) - make sure don't overlap done
2016-04-09 11:28 [alt][F4]: http://puu.sh/obnht/e7688c3108.jpg
2016-04-09 11:28 sahuang: well it's better
2016-04-09 11:28 sahuang: 00:47:452 (1) - done
2016-04-09 11:29 sahuang: move red dot so that it's in the middle
2016-04-09 11:29 sahuang: now it looks bad
2016-04-09 11:29 sahuang: 00:52:969 (1,3) - dont do this in Easy fixed
2016-04-09 11:29 sahuang: the stack is hard to read
2016-04-09 11:29 sahuang: try to make use of more space
2016-04-09 11:29 [alt][F4]: http://puu.sh/obnlU/f96c258e03.jpg
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: yeah
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: u dont need to post to me every change
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: 01:16:073 (4,2) - overlap fixed
2016-04-09 11:30 [alt][F4]: Just making sure
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: yeah
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: it's fine
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: the rest are ok
2016-04-09 11:30 sahuang: Normal
2016-04-09 11:31 [alt][F4]: ty
2016-04-09 11:31 sahuang: 00:02:969 (4,2) - stack fixed
2016-04-09 11:31 sahuang: 00:24:176 (4) - also red dot centered
2016-04-09 11:32 sahuang: 01:24:004 (5,1) - make the curve better and blanket done
2016-04-09 11:33 sahuang: now it's quite a nice diff ;))))
2016-04-09 11:33 sahuang: Hard
2016-04-09 11:33 sahuang: 00:12:624 (5,1) - bad shape changed
2016-04-09 11:33 sahuang: 00:13:228 - bad blanket changed
2016-04-09 11:34 sahuang: this shape is bad imo 00:18:659 (1,2) - kept same.
2016-04-09 11:34 sahuang: 00:33:142 (3,1) - ^^ blankets better now
2016-04-09 11:35 sahuang: 00:36:245 (1,2) - blankets better now
2016-04-09 11:35 sahuang: also
2016-04-09 11:35 sahuang: curve too much
2016-04-09 11:35 sahuang: 00:43:314 (1,2) - bad blanket Fixed
2016-04-09 11:36 [alt][F4]: question
2016-04-09 11:36 sahuang: http://puu.sh/obnED/158645df38.jpg
2016-04-09 11:36 sahuang: eh?
2016-04-09 11:36 [alt][F4]: how much do blankets matter is diffs hard+
2016-04-09 11:36 sahuang: very important if you intend to use
2016-04-09 11:36 sahuang: you can separate them so it's not a blanket
2016-04-09 11:36 [alt][F4]: Gotcha
2016-04-09 11:36 sahuang: but once you decide to use a blanket you must do it
2016-04-09 11:37 sahuang: 01:16:418 (1,2,3,4) - this is terrible Square
2016-04-09 11:37 [alt][F4]: ok
2016-04-09 11:37 sahuang: use triangle or square
2016-04-09 11:38 sahuang: 01:17:452 (6,7,1,2) - also Square
2016-04-09 11:38 sahuang: yes,i think that's it
2016-04-09 11:38 [alt][F4]: ok
2016-04-09 11:38 [alt][F4]: thanks :D
2016-04-09 11:38 sahuang: lol
anna apple
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Topic Starter
anna apple
Changing x0.50 sv on 3/4 sliders to x0.70 00:00:00 - 00:48:00 and some x0.50 sv on 1/4 to x0.80
RVMathew
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RVMathew
Hi there. From modhelp.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

Easy
1)00:14:349 (4,5,1) - :idea: Perhaps try some symmetry around the y-axis, as symmetry can make a map look better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4898733 Note that I had to move some of the previous notes to keep the distance snap.

2) 00:26:590 (5) - After this part I assume you were supposed to put a break time here? You did that in the normal but not in this difficulty so it felt a bit strange.

3) 01:20:900 (2,3) - It seems that you were trying to do something close to a blanket, but to me it does not look nice.

4) 01:26:504 (3) - I think it sounds better if you move the slider to 01:26:418.

Normal
1) 00:03:314 (1), I would split this slider into a 1x note and then a 1/2 slider. The reason is that the note will follow the music, and then the 1/2 slider will follow the vocal bit. With the repeat slider you ignore 00:03:659 as a strong beat, and strong beats should be clickable.

The pattern I suggested will be in the difficulty level of a normal.

- Applies to 00:04:693 (3) -

2) 00:07:969 (4) - I think it will feel better if you removed this note and instead use a 1/2 slider that starts at 00:07:797.

3) 00:32:452 (5) - I think you should add a note here and stack it on 6.
- Applies to 00:37:969 (5), create a note and stack on 6.

4) 01:17:107 (3) - I would split that into 2 separate notes. 01:17:452 is the start of a new vocal, so a new note should be present.

5) 01:26:504 (3) - I think it sounds better if you move the slider to 01:26:418.

Hard
1) 00:11:590 (1,2,3,4) - Imo, because 1 is such a small slider, you cannot do a proper blanket with 2. As a result, the current pattern does not look nice and the movement is ok. Try something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4898833

2) 00:07:797 (2,5), 00:10:556 (2,4), 00:13:314 (2,4) - Add whistles to spice this part up. For sliders, apply them to the slider heads only.

3) 00:17:797 (3,4) - Ctrl+g the rhythm and delete the single note. It sounds a lot better imo.

4) 00:21:418 (1,2) - Here you use the drum sampleset, but for other difficulties you do not do that. I assume this was a mistake, so you should change the sampleset to auto.

5) 00:22:969 (2) - It sounds better with a 1/2 slider instead of a single note, as with this you can follow 2 vocal bits instead of 1.

6) 00:40:556 - 00:51:590 During this part, the music becomes a bit calmer and slows down in pace (not talking about a bpm change) so to reflect that I would use a slower slider velocity. Try 0.8x.

7) 00:54:349 (1) - I think you can map some stuff here instead of having a spinner, but currently it is fine for me.

8) 01:26:504 (1,2,3) - Shift it to the left by 1/4.

Insane
1) 00:17:797 (3) - Why go for a 1/4 slider here? I think just having a single note will suffice because the 1/4 feels unnecessary to me.
I think that the way you positioned the notes with the 1/4 sliders looked a bit cool, but then in terms of the music, it does not seem right. However you did silence it so I guess it is ok?

If someone else does pick up on that then I recommend just sticking with a single note instead of a 1/4 slider.

2) 00:42:969 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Why the sudden decrease in volume; there was no feedback from the notes due to the very low hitsound volume. I think the change in volume is not necessary.

3) :idea: 00:45:038 (3,4) - If you want to give a little bit of a challenge, then ctrl+g these notes so the player has to do a zig zag like motion.

4) :idea: 00:57:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps arrange them in a pentagonal pattern if you wish to. The triangular pattern is fine though.

5) 00:58:659 You map this area on hard, but not on insane? I find it a little strange.

6) 01:20:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - That stream is cool. :)

7) 01:26:504 (2,3,4) - Again shift these notes to the left by 1/4.

Final thoughts:
This map does have potential; just get some more testplays and let your creative juices start flowing. The hard was a nice difficulty.

Good luck,
RVMathew.
anna apple
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Topic Starter
anna apple

RVMathew wrote:

Hi there. From modhelp.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

Easy
1)00:14:349 (4,5,1) - :idea: Perhaps try some symmetry around the y-axis, as symmetry can make a map look better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4898733 Note that I had to move some of the previous notes to keep the distance snap. Did something along those lines.

2) 00:26:590 (5) - After this part I assume you were supposed to put a break time here? You did that in the normal but not in this difficulty so it felt a bit strange. "There isn't enough room here..."client pls

3) 01:20:900 (2,3) - It seems that you were trying to do something close to a blanket, but to me it does not look nice. I did stuff to 1 to make it seem like 3 blankets better. Not sure if you meant something else though.

4) 01:26:504 (3) - I think it sounds better if you move the slider to 01:26:418. I changed to 1/6

Normal
1) 00:03:314 (1), I would split this slider into a 1x note and then a 1/2 slider. The reason is that the note will follow the music, and then the 1/2 slider will follow the vocal bit. With the repeat slider you ignore 00:03:659 as a strong beat, and strong beats should be clickable.

The pattern I suggested will be in the difficulty level of a normal.

- Applies to 00:04:693 (3) - this and the above to what you mentioned.

2) 00:07:969 (4) - I think it will feel better if you removed this note and instead use a 1/2 slider that starts at 00:07:797.changed

3) 00:32:452 (5) - I think you should add a note here and stack it on 6.
- Applies to 00:37:969 (5), create a note and stack on 6. not stacked because of DS but note added

4) 01:17:107 (3) - I would split that into 2 separate notes. 01:17:452 is the start of a new vocal, so a new note should be present. done.

5) 01:26:504 (3) - I think it sounds better if you move the slider to 01:26:418. noted previously

Hard
1) 00:11:590 (1,2,3,4) - Imo, because 1 is such a small slider, you cannot do a proper blanket with 2. As a result, the current pattern does not look nice and the movement is ok. Try something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4898833 oops lmao, fixed

2) 00:07:797 (2,5), 00:10:556 (2,4), 00:13:314 (2,4) - Add whistles to spice this part up. For sliders, apply them to the slider heads only.

3) 00:17:797 (3,4) - Ctrl+g the rhythm and delete the single note. It sounds a lot better imo.1: which single note, 2: I kept same.

4) 00:21:418 (1,2) - Here you use the drum sampleset, but for other difficulties you do not do that. I assume this was a mistake, so you should change the sampleset to auto. A lot of things somehow happen by mistake on here -- noted and fixed.

5) 00:22:969 (2) - It sounds better with a 1/2 slider instead of a single note, as with this you can follow 2 vocal bits instead of 1. Trying to follow set more than vocals. kept same for now.

6) 00:40:556 - 00:51:590 During this part, the music becomes a bit calmer and slows down in pace (not talking about a bpm change) so to reflect that I would use a slower slider velocity. Try 0.8x. I know what you mean, but I left this section a bit more open and emphasized more on the vocals(the primary focus of this section imo) so I am going to leave this as is. I also don't want to mess with sv in hard and below.

7) 00:54:349 (1) - I think you can map some stuff here instead of having a spinner, but currently it is fine for me.kept same.

8) 01:26:504 (1,2,3) - Shift it to the left by 1/4. previously noted.

Insane
1) 00:17:797 (3) - Why go for a 1/4 slider here? I think just having a single note will suffice because the 1/4 feels unnecessary to me.
I think that the way you positioned the notes with the 1/4 sliders looked a bit cool, but then in terms of the music, it does not seem right. However you did silence it so I guess it is ok?

If someone else does pick up on that then I recommend just sticking with a single note instead of a 1/4 slider.I'm keeping it the same because I think the slider puts more emphasis on the note and other people have complimented me for this pattern

2) 00:42:969 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Why the sudden decrease in volume; there was no feedback from the notes due to the very low hitsound volume. I think the change in volume is not necessary. Green point @ 00:44:349 changed from 25%V to 35%V

3) :idea: 00:45:038 (3,4) - If you want to give a little bit of a challenge, then ctrl+g these notes so the player has to do a zig zag like motion. kept same

4) :idea: 00:57:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps arrange them in a pentagonal pattern if you wish to. The triangular pattern is fine though. kept same -- but I did check it out and didn't quite like it because the song isn't as active as the pattern you suggested imo

5) 00:58:659 You map this area on hard, but not on insane? I find it a little strange. I thought it would give the hands a little break after the stream.

6) 01:20:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - That stream is cool. :) thanks!

7) 01:26:504 (2,3,4) - Again shift these notes to the left by 1/4. previously noted.

Final thoughts:
This map does have potential; just get some more testplays and let your creative juices start flowing. The hard was a nice difficulty. Fixed ;) lmao

Good luck,
RVMathew.
Your examples are hard to see very well because of custom skin but I got it eventually lol


Thanks for the mod!! and for the compliments :)
_Hou
391 posts
Joined November 2014
_Hou
H-hello,
from my queue
Blue is an advice or smth
Pink is for things I strongly recommend to pay attention on
Black is my thoughts
H-here we go~

Insane


  1. 00:06:073 (1,2) - Don't really follows the music. :/ Remake it.
  2. 00:26:590 (1) - Slider 1/2 instead
  3. Also i think this slider 00:18:314 (1) - 00:21:073 (1) - 00:23:831 (1) - better had higher velocity.
  4. Note miss in the centre of slider (it is okay actually)
  5. If u ignore everything since this moment 00:58:487 - it is reasonable to ignore these also 00:59:349 (1,2,3) -
  6. 01:10:900 - 01:18:142 - for these part, according to yuor mapping style you can use more sliders and make them with different slider velocity, slowly increasing it. Smth like that.
Short mod :(
anna apple
1,245 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
anna apple

Hou Rearu wrote:

H-hello,
from my queue
Blue is an advice or smth
Pink is for things I strongly recommend to pay attention on
Black is my thoughts
H-here we go~

Insane


  1. 00:06:073 (1,2) - Don't really follows the music. :/ Remake it. changed to 1 slider
  2. 00:26:590 (1) - Slider 1/2 instead unchanged.
  3. Also i think this slider 00:18:314 (1) - 00:21:073 (1) - 00:23:831 (1) - better had higher velocity. unchanged.
  4. Note miss in the centre of slider (it is okay actually) you didn't give slider :(
  5. If u ignore everything since this moment 00:58:487 - it is reasonable to ignore these also 00:59:349 (1,2,3) - unchanged
  6. 01:10:900 - 01:18:142 - for these part, according to yuor mapping style you can use more sliders and make them with different slider velocity, slowly increasing it. Smth like that. "If it ain't broke don't fix it" also I'm not really sure how I would want to re map this tbh
Short mod :(
anna apple
1,245 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
anna apple
Anyone else having an "Update to latest version" bug on this map? Guess client just had to wait a bit.
-Lemons
219 posts
Joined July 2012
-Lemons
chat
19:18 -Lemons: d i s g u s t i n g t v s i z e m a p p e r
19:19 [alt][F4]: SORRY
19:20 [alt][F4]: i m s o r r y d a d
19:20 -Lemons: can I just irc mod
19:20 [alt][F4]: ya\
19:20 -Lemons: since there's a lot of stuff to say about the insane but they're just fundamental stuffs
19:20 -Lemons: so highlighting the same thing 40 times is dum
19:21 -Lemons: k hi I'm the slow part 00:01:935 (1,2,3) -
19:21 -Lemons: do something like this for me http://puu.sh/odKqD/8ea18d32a1.jpg because having movement that isn't a straight line is fancy
19:21 -Lemons: or if you are gonna do a straight like make it actually straight
19:21 -Lemons: 00:03:314 (1,2,3) - like here
19:22 -Lemons: or
19:22 -Lemons: if you wanna be
19:22 -Lemons: ppmonstrata-sama
19:22 [alt][F4]: lmao
19:22 -Lemons: ya do this
19:23 -Lemons: puush please
19:23 [alt][F4]: same
19:23 -Lemons: http://puu.sh/odKx8/c898760d1f.jpg
19:23 -Lemons: 00:06:762 (2,3,4,1) - so anyway lemme explain somehting about aesthetics
19:23 -Lemons: something kappaulette will never teach u
19:23 -Lemons: cuz he hates things looking nice
19:24 -Lemons: having 2-4 stacked like that is okay
19:24 -Lemons: but notice how 00:06:935 (3,1) -
19:24 -Lemons: these are different?
19:24 -Lemons: It makes it actually look jarring
19:24 -Lemons: I would personally put the stack differently but it's your map stack how you like
19:25 -Lemons: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4908075
19:25 -Lemons: I'd do it like this if it were me
19:26 [alt][F4]: I mean, other mappers not liking when sliders over eachother like that tho :/
19:26 [alt][F4]: I'm getting crap for this because of readability 00:20:556 (4,5) -
19:26 -Lemons: yeah but they're dumb
19:26 -Lemons: ignore people who yell about that in particular
19:26 -Lemons: because they're just shit at reading
19:26 [alt][F4]: lmao
19:26 -Lemons: you're consistant with it
19:26 -Lemons: don't change that
19:27 [alt][F4]: yay
19:27 -Lemons: you can maybe polish it up a bit
19:27 -Lemons: to make it easier
19:27 -Lemons: but don't change it much
19:27 -Lemons: because it changes the whole idea of the map
19:27 [alt][F4]: pls tell me more
19:27 -Lemons: anyway welcome to lemons' school of angles
19:27 [alt][F4]: hi
19:27 -Lemons: http://puu.sh/odKPD/0013840ffa.jpg00:08:831 (1,2,3,4,5) -
19:27 -Lemons: http://puu.sh/odKPD/0013840ffa.jpg 00:08:831 (1,2,3,4,5) -
19:28 -Lemons: links split now
19:28 -Lemons: lol
19:28 -Lemons: so
19:28 -Lemons: The black is what it currently is
19:28 -Lemons: notice how from 2-3-4 it's basically like a
19:28 -Lemons: 175 degree angle
19:28 [alt][F4]: ya
19:28 -Lemons: those play like trash
19:28 [alt][F4]: I can fix
19:28 -Lemons: so make 4 go down
19:28 -Lemons: and 5 be below it
19:28 -Lemons: like what I did with the red
19:28 -Lemons: you do this particular thing a lot
19:28 -Lemons: where the angles are like
19:29 -Lemons: basically straight lines
19:29 -Lemons: but not quite
19:29 -Lemons: So believe it or not (10 things you won't want to miss) (gone sexual)
19:29 -Lemons: It actually plays better to just make it literally a straight line, or to completely change it to an acute angle
19:30 -Lemons: btw in editor settings do you use hit animations
19:30 -Lemons: ?
19:30 [alt][F4]: ?
19:30 -Lemons: btw in editor settings do you use hit animations
19:30 [alt][F4]: hit animations
19:30 -Lemons: check it for me
19:30 -Lemons: it helps me explain the next part
19:30 -Lemons: or rather, check if its enabled
19:31 [alt][F4]: I don't
19:31 [alt][F4]: should I?
19:31 -Lemons: no
19:31 -Lemons: you shouldn't
19:31 [alt][F4]: ok good
19:31 -Lemons: in most cases
19:31 [alt][F4]: they are ugly af
19:31 -Lemons: it's up to you
19:31 -Lemons: because
19:31 -Lemons: 00:10:038 (1,4) -
19:31 -Lemons: see how these overlap
19:32 -Lemons: yeah you gotta like not do that it makes my eyeballs vomit pls
19:32 -Lemons: Like, that super super super slight overlap
19:32 -Lemons: it's just AKLJSH;ASD
19:32 [alt][F4]: LMAO
19:32 -Lemons: 00:12:280 (4,2) - btw this is what I meant for hit animations being off
19:32 -Lemons: it makes things like this easier to see
19:32 [alt][F4]: those memes about how close you are to doing something
19:32 -Lemons: either stack em or make em seperate
19:32 -Lemons: thats a meme idk and that triggers me
19:33 -Lemons: brb researching it
19:33 -Lemons: okay research done
19:33 [alt][F4]: it has a car near a wall and it zooms in and its SUPER close
19:33 -Lemons: yer
19:33 -Lemons: i seent it
19:33 -Lemons: anyway mapping
19:33 -Lemons: 00:12:107 (3,4,5) - hi my name is poor angle
19:34 [alt][F4]: so basically my map has std and is a drug abuser so it needs to git cleand
19:34 -Lemons: yes
19:34 -Lemons: needs cleaning
19:34 -Lemons: def
19:34 -Lemons: rhythms were cool tho
19:34 -Lemons: I liked em
19:34 -Lemons: just needs a haircut and a shower really
19:34 [alt][F4]: yay
19:34 -Lemons: and a new wardrobe
19:34 -Lemons: because angles
19:34 [alt][F4]: and less stds
19:34 -Lemons: alright so
19:35 -Lemons: this one is gonna be tricky
19:35 -Lemons: so lemme draw in paint
19:35 -Lemons: to assplain
19:36 -Lemons: http://puu.sh/odLji/06ebacdaec.jpg k
19:36 -Lemons: so basically
19:36 -Lemons: 00:12:280 (4,5,6,1) -
19:36 -Lemons: The thing with this is since 4-5-6 is pretty aim intensive
19:36 [alt][F4]: it back tracks in a not gicci way
19:36 -Lemons: wow ur gud
19:36 [alt][F4]: gucci
19:36 -Lemons: yeah
19:36 -Lemons: the blue is like
19:36 -Lemons: the best possible for play
19:37 -Lemons: but you don't need to follow that completely obv
19:37 -Lemons: 00:14:866 (3,4,5,6) - for this part you kind of made it like
19:37 -Lemons: more intensive
19:37 [alt][F4]: its ok bush did 9/11 I promis
19:37 -Lemons: 7/11 was a part time job
19:38 -Lemons: that part
19:38 -Lemons: 00:12:280 (4,5,6) -
19:38 -Lemons: vs this part
19:38 -Lemons: yeah it's more intense
19:38 -Lemons: but I don't think it needs to be that much more
19:38 -Lemons: wanna kno how to be a nitpicky lil bitch?
19:38 -Lemons: ofc u do
19:38 -Lemons: 00:15:556 (1,2,3,4) -
19:38 -Lemons: these aren't the same distance between
19:38 -Lemons: 1-2 is slightly bigger
19:39 -Lemons: 00:17:107 (1,2) - tiny overlap ayy
19:39 [alt][F4]: slow down pls
19:39 -Lemons: it's k i'm giving a lot
19:39 [alt][F4]: wot do with 00:15:556 -
19:39 -Lemons: cuz i gotta take the trash out
19:39 -Lemons: make 4-5-6 less jump spacing
19:39 -Lemons: especially 3-4
19:39 -Lemons: that's so big
19:40 -Lemons: 00:12:280 (4,5,6) - this is for reference
19:40 -Lemons: of the "increased spacing for intense bell things" that you did
19:40 -Lemons: brb tho trash
19:41 [alt][F4]: I did some stuffs hopefully not cancer
19:45 -Lemons: cancer can be good
19:45 -Lemons: look at everything kappaulat makes
19:45 [alt][F4]: I know right
19:45 [alt][F4]: I mean hopefully not bad cancer sorry
19:45 -Lemons: also
19:45 -Lemons: lemme show u dis thing
19:46 *-Lemons is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/295985 PESS vs t.A.T.u. - All The Things She Said (DnB Remix) [Stressboxer]]
19:46 -Lemons: 00:21:948 (2,3) -
19:46 -Lemons: if you want to make your thing not as hard to read
19:46 -Lemons: nobody gives this map shit for it and it's basically the same thing
19:47 [alt][F4]: but uh
19:47 [alt][F4]: will bns poop on me if I don't?
19:47 -Lemons: prolly not
19:47 [alt][F4]: sorry
19:47 [alt][F4]: poop on me in a bad way* is what I meant
19:47 -Lemons: maybe they'll complain but
19:48 -Lemons: if you have a good enough reasoning you can get away with anything
19:48 [alt][F4]: hm
19:49 [alt][F4]: http://puu.sh/odLZj/9662c07796.jpg
19:49 [alt][F4]: I think this is best fix obv
19:49 -Lemons: perf
19:49 [alt][F4]: it just doesn't seem too original to take from the other map, plus corndogs
19:50 -Lemons: Everything has already been done before
19:50 -Lemons: xd
19:50 [alt][F4]: but not everything has gotten ranked ;)
19:50 -Lemons: tru
19:50 -Lemons: let me do the ol
19:50 -Lemons: attempt to play with mouse
19:50 -Lemons: before I complain about more things
19:52 -Lemons: my cat jumped on my arm
19:52 -Lemons: send help
19:52 [alt][F4]: nice FC
19:52 -Lemons: mouse buttons enabled + cat = NICE FC
19:53 -Lemons: anyway your overlapping triggers me to no end
19:53 -Lemons: 00:29:349 (1,2,3,4,5) -
19:53 -Lemons: so messy
19:53 [alt][F4]: even the 3 over 5?
19:54 [alt][F4]: 00:29:866 (3,5) - ?
19:54 -Lemons: 3 over 5 is fine but you don't really need to
19:54 [alt][F4]: naw it has to be done
19:54 -Lemons: then like
19:54 [alt][F4]: its in the prophecy
19:54 -Lemons: be a twat and stack the slider ends
19:54 [alt][F4]: ew no
19:54 [alt][F4]: pls no
19:54 -Lemons: that's the shit that'll make people upset and I love it
19:55 -Lemons: 00:38:142 (3,4) - these curves upset me cuz they'
19:55 -Lemons: re
19:55 -Lemons: curvier than 00:36:245 (6) -
19:55 -Lemons: and you use that slider curve on errythang else
19:55 [alt][F4]: lmao
19:55 -Lemons: 00:46:762 (3) -
19:55 -Lemons: hi triggerd
19:56 [alt][F4]: fixed ;) http://puu.sh/odMna/b55f56de0d.jpg
19:56 -Lemons: thnx
19:56 -Lemons: i'd rather it be that
19:56 [alt][F4]: but actually those are so troll and swag
19:56 -Lemons: trust me i use it all the time
19:56 -Lemons: 00:56:418 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hello my name is not use slider > stream tool
19:57 [alt][F4]: oh yeha
19:57 -Lemons: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4908216
19:57 [alt][F4]: I mapped this thing before I knew about it sorry dad
19:57 -Lemons: it's okay
19:57 -Lemons: 00:58:487 (1) - delte
19:58 -Lemons: and then the rest is just all the stuff we've talked about for the rest of the parts
19:58 -Lemons: what with overlapping stuff that looks like a skingraft
19:58 -Lemons: and various other make these the saem things
19:59 -Lemons: so i won't bother pointing them out cuz you're a reformed mapper now who learns things and you'll do it urself
19:59 -Lemons: Said noone ever
19:59 [alt][F4]: but skingraft is SOOOO HOTTTT
19:59 [alt][F4]: :3 c
19:59 *-Lemons is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/913968 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Hard]]
20:00 -Lemons: 00:22:452 (1) -
20:00 -Lemons: hory shit
20:00 -Lemons: slider design of the year
20:00 [alt][F4]: OH MY LORD
20:00 [alt][F4]: LOLOLOL
20:01 [alt][F4]: I fixed the sliders on the insane not this diff yet hahahahaha
20:01 -Lemons: you should see mazzivs early sliders
20:01 [alt][F4]: if they are anything like mine
20:01 -Lemons: >open map
20:01 -Lemons: >first thing I see is this
20:01 -Lemons: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4908238
20:01 [alt][F4]: I would rather throw computer into my pool
20:02 [alt][F4]: zzzzzzz
20:02 -Lemons: so anyway yeah angles and whatnot
20:02 -Lemons: just basically take all that shit I said for insane and make sure the hard has the same nice stuffs
20:02 -Lemons: it looks alright from what I've seen some polishing needed but w/e
20:03 -Lemons: once again no specifics because yolo and it's just general stuff
20:03 -Lemons: now then onto my favorite
20:03 -Lemons: low diffs
20:05 -Lemons: t/208596 heres this
20:05 -Lemons: it's your bible for low level diffs
20:05 -Lemons: since it's literally just sliders and aesthetics
20:05 [alt][F4]: oh lord
20:05 [alt][F4]: 3rd time I've seen this hahaha
20:05 -Lemons: gud
20:05 -Lemons: read it more
20:05 -Lemons: 00:01:590 (2,3) - because this
20:06 -Lemons: anyway other than that again angles and aesthetics
20:07 -Lemons: as for easy same as normal
20:07 -Lemons: now then fix them as you see fit
20:07 [alt][F4]: uh
20:07 [alt][F4]: how to fix angles when ds op
20:07 -Lemons: remap
20:07 -Lemons: and keep angles in mind
20:07 -Lemons: try to not have super linear flow
20:08 [alt][F4]: but lines are SOOO HOOTTT
20:08 [alt][F4]: like jet fuel
20:08 -Lemons: the normal is actually pretty nice angle wise
20:08 -Lemons: 00:33:487 (1,2) - except things like this
20:09 -Lemons: and what I mean by linear
20:09 -Lemons: 00:41:935 (1,2,1) - is stuff like this
20:09 *-Lemons is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/940331 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Normal]]
20:09 -Lemons: btw
20:10 -Lemons: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4908274
20:10 -Lemons: you can make fancier by doing things like this
20:11 [alt][F4]: but linear isn't too bad for easy diffs amirite?
20:11 -Lemons: fosho
20:11 -Lemons: linear is how you make easy tbh
20:11 -Lemons: or rather
20:11 -Lemons: you want it to be relativelyt linear
20:12 -Lemons: having too many curves and shit is confusing for newbies
20:12 [alt][F4]: so deconstruction star linear
20:12 -Lemons: no that's it's own beast
20:13 -Lemons: tl'dr get gud
anna apple
1,245 posts
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Topic Starter
anna apple

-Lemons wrote:

chat
19:18 -Lemons: d i s g u s t i n g t v s i z e m a p p e r
19:19 [alt][F4]: SORRY
19:20 [alt][F4]: i m s o r r y d a d
19:20 -Lemons: can I just irc mod
19:20 [alt][F4]: ya\
19:20 -Lemons: since there's a lot of stuff to say about the insane but they're just fundamental stuffs
19:20 -Lemons: so highlighting the same thing 40 times is dum
19:21 -Lemons: k hi I'm the slow part 00:01:935 (1,2,3) -
19:21 -Lemons: do something like this for me http://puu.sh/odKqD/8ea18d32a1.jpg because having movement that isn't a straight line is fancy
19:21 -Lemons: or if you are gonna do a straight like make it actually straight
19:21 -Lemons: 00:03:314 (1,2,3) - like here
19:22 -Lemons: or
19:22 -Lemons: if you wanna be
19:22 -Lemons: ppmonstrata-sama
19:22 [alt][F4]: lmao
19:22 -Lemons: ya do this
19:23 -Lemons: puush please
19:23 [alt][F4]: same
19:23 -Lemons: http://puu.sh/odKx8/c898760d1f.jpg
19:23 -Lemons: 00:06:762 (2,3,4,1) - so anyway lemme explain somehting about aesthetics
19:23 -Lemons: something kappaulette will never teach u
19:23 -Lemons: cuz he hates things looking nice
19:24 -Lemons: having 2-4 stacked like that is okay
19:24 -Lemons: but notice how 00:06:935 (3,1) -
19:24 -Lemons: these are different?
19:24 -Lemons: It makes it actually look jarring
19:24 -Lemons: I would personally put the stack differently but it's your map stack how you like
19:25 -Lemons: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4908075
19:25 -Lemons: I'd do it like this if it were me
19:26 [alt][F4]: I mean, other mappers not liking when sliders over eachother like that tho :/
19:26 [alt][F4]: I'm getting crap for this because of readability 00:20:556 (4,5) -
19:26 -Lemons: yeah but they're dumb
19:26 -Lemons: ignore people who yell about that in particular
19:26 -Lemons: because they're just shit at reading
19:26 [alt][F4]: lmao
19:26 -Lemons: you're consistant with it
19:26 -Lemons: don't change that
19:27 [alt][F4]: yay
19:27 -Lemons: you can maybe polish it up a bit
19:27 -Lemons: to make it easier
19:27 -Lemons: but don't change it much
19:27 -Lemons: because it changes the whole idea of the map
19:27 [alt][F4]: pls tell me more
19:27 -Lemons: anyway welcome to lemons' school of angles
19:27 [alt][F4]: hi
19:27 -Lemons: http://puu.sh/odKPD/0013840ffa.jpg00:08:831 (1,2,3,4,5) -
19:27 -Lemons: http://puu.sh/odKPD/0013840ffa.jpg 00:08:831 (1,2,3,4,5) -
19:28 -Lemons: links split now
19:28 -Lemons: lol
19:28 -Lemons: so
19:28 -Lemons: The black is what it currently is
19:28 -Lemons: notice how from 2-3-4 it's basically like a
19:28 -Lemons: 175 degree angle
19:28 [alt][F4]: ya
19:28 -Lemons: those play like trash
19:28 [alt][F4]: I can fix
19:28 -Lemons: so make 4 go down
19:28 -Lemons: and 5 be below it
19:28 -Lemons: like what I did with the red
19:28 -Lemons: you do this particular thing a lot
19:28 -Lemons: where the angles are like
19:29 -Lemons: basically straight lines
19:29 -Lemons: but not quite
19:29 -Lemons: So believe it or not (10 things you won't want to miss) (gone sexual)
19:29 -Lemons: It actually plays better to just make it literally a straight line, or to completely change it to an acute angle
19:30 -Lemons: btw in editor settings do you use hit animations
19:30 -Lemons: ?
19:30 [alt][F4]: ?
19:30 -Lemons: btw in editor settings do you use hit animations
19:30 [alt][F4]: hit animations
19:30 -Lemons: check it for me
19:30 -Lemons: it helps me explain the next part
19:30 -Lemons: or rather, check if its enabled
19:31 [alt][F4]: I don't
19:31 [alt][F4]: should I?
19:31 -Lemons: no
19:31 -Lemons: you shouldn't
19:31 [alt][F4]: ok good
19:31 -Lemons: in most cases
19:31 [alt][F4]: they are ugly af
19:31 -Lemons: it's up to you
19:31 -Lemons: because
19:31 -Lemons: 00:10:038 (1,4) -
19:31 -Lemons: see how these overlap
19:32 -Lemons: yeah you gotta like not do that it makes my eyeballs vomit pls
19:32 -Lemons: Like, that super super super slight overlap
19:32 -Lemons: it's just AKLJSH;ASD
19:32 [alt][F4]: LMAO
19:32 -Lemons: 00:12:280 (4,2) - btw this is what I meant for hit animations being off
19:32 -Lemons: it makes things like this easier to see
19:32 [alt][F4]: those memes about how close you are to doing something
19:32 -Lemons: either stack em or make em seperate
19:32 -Lemons: thats a meme idk and that triggers me
19:33 -Lemons: brb researching it
19:33 -Lemons: okay research done
19:33 [alt][F4]: it has a car near a wall and it zooms in and its SUPER close
19:33 -Lemons: yer
19:33 -Lemons: i seent it
19:33 -Lemons: anyway mapping
19:33 -Lemons: 00:12:107 (3,4,5) - hi my name is poor angle
19:34 [alt][F4]: so basically my map has std and is a drug abuser so it needs to git cleand
19:34 -Lemons: yes
19:34 -Lemons: needs cleaning
19:34 -Lemons: def
19:34 -Lemons: rhythms were cool tho
19:34 -Lemons: I liked em
19:34 -Lemons: just needs a haircut and a shower really
19:34 [alt][F4]: yay
19:34 -Lemons: and a new wardrobe
19:34 -Lemons: because angles
19:34 [alt][F4]: and less stds
19:34 -Lemons: alright so
19:35 -Lemons: this one is gonna be tricky
19:35 -Lemons: so lemme draw in paint
19:35 -Lemons: to assplain
19:36 -Lemons: http://puu.sh/odLji/06ebacdaec.jpg k
19:36 -Lemons: so basically
19:36 -Lemons: 00:12:280 (4,5,6,1) -
19:36 -Lemons: The thing with this is since 4-5-6 is pretty aim intensive
19:36 [alt][F4]: it back tracks in a not gicci way
19:36 -Lemons: wow ur gud
19:36 [alt][F4]: gucci
19:36 -Lemons: yeah
19:36 -Lemons: the blue is like
19:36 -Lemons: the best possible for play
19:37 -Lemons: but you don't need to follow that completely obv
19:37 -Lemons: 00:14:866 (3,4,5,6) - for this part you kind of made it like
19:37 -Lemons: more intensive
19:37 [alt][F4]: its ok bush did 9/11 I promis
19:37 -Lemons: 7/11 was a part time job
19:38 -Lemons: that part
19:38 -Lemons: 00:12:280 (4,5,6) -
19:38 -Lemons: vs this part
19:38 -Lemons: yeah it's more intense
19:38 -Lemons: but I don't think it needs to be that much more
19:38 -Lemons: wanna kno how to be a nitpicky lil bitch?
19:38 -Lemons: ofc u do
19:38 -Lemons: 00:15:556 (1,2,3,4) -
19:38 -Lemons: these aren't the same distance between
19:38 -Lemons: 1-2 is slightly bigger
19:39 -Lemons: 00:17:107 (1,2) - tiny overlap ayy
19:39 [alt][F4]: slow down pls
19:39 -Lemons: it's k i'm giving a lot
19:39 [alt][F4]: wot do with 00:15:556 -
19:39 -Lemons: cuz i gotta take the trash out
19:39 -Lemons: make 4-5-6 less jump spacing
19:39 -Lemons: especially 3-4
19:39 -Lemons: that's so big
19:40 -Lemons: 00:12:280 (4,5,6) - this is for reference
19:40 -Lemons: of the "increased spacing for intense bell things" that you did
19:40 -Lemons: brb tho trash
19:41 [alt][F4]: I did some stuffs hopefully not cancer
19:45 -Lemons: cancer can be good
19:45 -Lemons: look at everything kappaulat makes
19:45 [alt][F4]: I know right
19:45 [alt][F4]: I mean hopefully not bad cancer sorry
19:45 -Lemons: also
19:45 -Lemons: lemme show u dis thing
19:46 *-Lemons is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/295985 PESS vs t.A.T.u. - All The Things She Said (DnB Remix) [Stressboxer]]
19:46 -Lemons: 00:21:948 (2,3) -
19:46 -Lemons: if you want to make your thing not as hard to read
19:46 -Lemons: nobody gives this map shit for it and it's basically the same thing
19:47 [alt][F4]: but uh
19:47 [alt][F4]: will bns poop on me if I don't?
19:47 -Lemons: prolly not
19:47 [alt][F4]: sorry
19:47 [alt][F4]: poop on me in a bad way* is what I meant
19:47 -Lemons: maybe they'll complain but
19:48 -Lemons: if you have a good enough reasoning you can get away with anything
19:48 [alt][F4]: hm
19:49 [alt][F4]: http://puu.sh/odLZj/9662c07796.jpg
19:49 [alt][F4]: I think this is best fix obv
19:49 -Lemons: perf
19:49 [alt][F4]: it just doesn't seem too original to take from the other map, plus corndogs
19:50 -Lemons: Everything has already been done before
19:50 -Lemons: xd
19:50 [alt][F4]: but not everything has gotten ranked ;)
19:50 -Lemons: tru
19:50 -Lemons: let me do the ol
19:50 -Lemons: attempt to play with mouse
19:50 -Lemons: before I complain about more things
19:52 -Lemons: my cat jumped on my arm
19:52 -Lemons: send help
19:52 [alt][F4]: nice FC
19:52 -Lemons: mouse buttons enabled + cat = NICE FC
19:53 -Lemons: anyway your overlapping triggers me to no end
19:53 -Lemons: 00:29:349 (1,2,3,4,5) -
19:53 -Lemons: so messy
19:53 [alt][F4]: even the 3 over 5?
19:54 [alt][F4]: 00:29:866 (3,5) - ?
19:54 -Lemons: 3 over 5 is fine but you don't really need to
19:54 [alt][F4]: naw it has to be done
19:54 -Lemons: then like
19:54 [alt][F4]: its in the prophecy
19:54 -Lemons: be a twat and stack the slider ends
19:54 [alt][F4]: ew no
19:54 [alt][F4]: pls no
19:54 -Lemons: that's the shit that'll make people upset and I love it
19:55 -Lemons: 00:38:142 (3,4) - these curves upset me cuz they'
19:55 -Lemons: re
19:55 -Lemons: curvier than 00:36:245 (6) -
19:55 -Lemons: and you use that slider curve on errythang else
19:55 [alt][F4]: lmao
19:55 -Lemons: 00:46:762 (3) -
19:55 -Lemons: hi triggerd
19:56 [alt][F4]: fixed ;) http://puu.sh/odMna/b55f56de0d.jpg
19:56 -Lemons: thnx
19:56 -Lemons: i'd rather it be that
19:56 [alt][F4]: but actually those are so troll and swag
19:56 -Lemons: trust me i use it all the time
19:56 -Lemons: 00:56:418 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hello my name is not use slider > stream tool
19:57 [alt][F4]: oh yeha
19:57 -Lemons: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4908216
19:57 [alt][F4]: I mapped this thing before I knew about it sorry dad
19:57 -Lemons: it's okay
19:57 -Lemons: 00:58:487 (1) - delte
19:58 -Lemons: and then the rest is just all the stuff we've talked about for the rest of the parts
19:58 -Lemons: what with overlapping stuff that looks like a skingraft
19:58 -Lemons: and various other make these the saem things
19:59 -Lemons: so i won't bother pointing them out cuz you're a reformed mapper now who learns things and you'll do it urself
19:59 -Lemons: Said noone ever
19:59 [alt][F4]: but skingraft is SOOOO HOTTTT
19:59 [alt][F4]: :3 c
19:59 *-Lemons is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/913968 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Hard]]
20:00 -Lemons: 00:22:452 (1) -
20:00 -Lemons: hory shit
20:00 -Lemons: slider design of the year
20:00 [alt][F4]: OH MY LORD
20:00 [alt][F4]: LOLOLOL
20:01 [alt][F4]: I fixed the sliders on the insane not this diff yet hahahahaha
20:01 -Lemons: you should see mazzivs early sliders
20:01 [alt][F4]: if they are anything like mine
20:01 -Lemons: >open map
20:01 -Lemons: >first thing I see is this
20:01 -Lemons: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4908238
20:01 [alt][F4]: I would rather throw computer into my pool
20:02 [alt][F4]: zzzzzzz
20:02 -Lemons: so anyway yeah angles and whatnot
20:02 -Lemons: just basically take all that shit I said for insane and make sure the hard has the same nice stuffs
20:02 -Lemons: it looks alright from what I've seen some polishing needed but w/e
20:03 -Lemons: once again no specifics because yolo and it's just general stuff
20:03 -Lemons: now then onto my favorite
20:03 -Lemons: low diffs
20:05 -Lemons: t/208596 heres this
20:05 -Lemons: it's your bible for low level diffs
20:05 -Lemons: since it's literally just sliders and aesthetics
20:05 [alt][F4]: oh lord
20:05 [alt][F4]: 3rd time I've seen this hahaha
20:05 -Lemons: gud
20:05 -Lemons: read it more
20:05 -Lemons: 00:01:590 (2,3) - because this
20:06 -Lemons: anyway other than that again angles and aesthetics
20:07 -Lemons: as for easy same as normal
20:07 -Lemons: now then fix them as you see fit
20:07 [alt][F4]: uh
20:07 [alt][F4]: how to fix angles when ds op
20:07 -Lemons: remap
20:07 -Lemons: and keep angles in mind
20:07 -Lemons: try to not have super linear flow
20:08 [alt][F4]: but lines are SOOO HOOTTT
20:08 [alt][F4]: like jet fuel
20:08 -Lemons: the normal is actually pretty nice angle wise
20:08 -Lemons: 00:33:487 (1,2) - except things like this
20:09 -Lemons: and what I mean by linear
20:09 -Lemons: 00:41:935 (1,2,1) - is stuff like this
20:09 *-Lemons is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/940331 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Normal]]
20:09 -Lemons: btw
20:10 -Lemons: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4908274
20:10 -Lemons: you can make fancier by doing things like this
20:11 [alt][F4]: but linear isn't too bad for easy diffs amirite?
20:11 -Lemons: fosho
20:11 -Lemons: linear is how you make easy tbh
20:11 -Lemons: or rather
20:11 -Lemons: you want it to be relativelyt linear
20:12 -Lemons: having too many curves and shit is confusing for newbies
20:12 [alt][F4]: so deconstruction star linear
20:12 -Lemons: no that's it's own beast
20:13 -Lemons: tl'dr get gud

ya I did all the stuffs and ty for mod <3
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inb4 graveyards this and moves on? mod forums too strong pls....
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