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Pachiru
EASY

00:11:474 (1) - Maybe you should try a reversed slider here, it could fit better with the music :3
I have nothing else to say maybe this overleap is quite strange because there is not the same over leap on the next pattern here : 00:26:020 (2,1) - for me, it's just a visual thing, if it's okay for you, then just keep it like it ♥

NORMAL

00:07:111 (1) - I don't know if this slider is necessary, maybe you should try to put a spinner, or just a blank here =w=
00:18:020 (3,4) - This part could be a bit hard to play for a Normal I think ;w;
00:14:262 (1) - I'm sure that it's just me, but I think the rhythm on those slider (because there is more sliders mapped on the purple tick) are quite strange ;w;
00:16:444 (2) - Same here
00:25:899 (1) - Here too

It's kinda strange because there is some 1/3 parts that are completly readable, and other that just seems to be quite hard to read :w:

HARD

00:14:262 (4) - I don't really know if this note is necessary here ;w;
00:58:383 (2,3) - This pattern looks a bit strange =w=

I have nothing much to say here because that diff is really great to play, and even if there is some hard pattern, it's very nice ^w^ (i think i'm just bad and i found it hard)

TOMORROW & FOREVER

00:10:383 (2) - On this slider, you should try to do a circular effect to make a blanket :3
00:38:383 (3) - Same here, I don't know if you did it like this to fit with the next slider?

The lyrics font is so so so so so well used >w<
ezek

Hey! As forced requested~

Explain this

General
  1. Note que buscando panda sin 's no aparece en la busqueda, asi que esta bien repetirlo, supongo~
    Tags:
    wbb grizzly panda panpan ice bear love

Easy
  1. 00:18:383 (2) - Damn Gero, this note is going a bit off screen~
  2. 00:23:838 (2,1) - You may wanna get rid of that overlap, perhaps~
  3. 00:30:020 (4) - Y si lo alineas un poco mas con el slider?

Normal
  1. 00:06:020 (2,1) - Que paso Gero? Este overlap es de esos que no se miran bien u.u
  2. 00:18:020 (3,4,1) - No esta algo complejo y comprimido para los que juegan Normal?
  3. 00:23:474 (2) - No se va off screen pero talvez quieras considerar subirlo un poco
  4. 00:37:656 (5) - Olvidaste NC?

Hard
  1. 01:06:747 (1,2) - Se siente algo aburrido que hayas decidido seguir el mismo patron de sliders en este cambio tan grande en la musica~

Well, nada me llamo la atencion en la diff mas alta~

Good luck Geronimo! \:D/
DaxMasterix
:( Here's your mod MAH BOY
Easy:
  1. 00:08:929 (2,4) - Much better like this, IMO the flow is bettah
  2. 00:12:929 (3,4) - This also, looks better like this
  3. 00:14:383 (1) - Why not blanket
  4. 00:17:293 (1) - Hehe I think I'm a bit nazi
  5. 00:31:838 (1,2,3) - In this part, the flow feels a little strange, it must be like this just IMO, if you want, you can do this and ctrl+H the rest.. (00:34:383 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1) -
  6. 00:59:474 (1,2,3) - This too, would be better like this, surely you can Ctrl+J the rest of the objects ... (01:02:020 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1) - )


Normal:
  1. Oh god the CS, I'm not a fan of 3.5 so, 3.6 would be asdhasikasd 3.
  2. 00:06:626 (3) - Why not force pattern like this
  3. 00:07:111 (1) - Remove finish from the end of the slider, Suena sobrepuesto (Dunno how to say it in english)
  4. 00:14:262 (1) - Wrong snap, it must be in 00:14:202
  5. 00:16:444 (2) - This too, must start in then red stick
  6. 00:25:838 (1) - This too, it's ok since you followed another rythm, but this is a normal, the best way to follow the rythm sometimes isn't the correct one
  7. 00:27:353 (4,1) - But sometimes it's good, since there is circles instead of sliders. sounds way better
  8. 00:40:383 (3) - Same, move it to the red stick
  9. 00:42:626 (2) - This is ok, since the drum is strong enought for keep the original timing. but the rest no, I highly recommend to change where I say
  10. 00:46:202 (1) - Move this too
  11. 00:49:171 (1) - This too, also listen it on 25%, the vocal starts in 00:49:111, where must be
  12. 00:52:080 (1) - Move this too
  13. 00:52:747 (3) - And this too
  14. 00:55:111 (1) - Better like this
  15. If you disaggre with what I say about the rhythm in this diff, think about it, it's hard to "Normal" Players to read forced rhythms at all you know.. I hopefully you did what I tell not for the rank at all, but the players


Hard:
  1. 00:07:111 (1) - Yeah remove finish from the end of the slider
  2. 00:31:315 (1,2) - I think this looks better
  3. 00:49:535 (7) - Overmapped, remove this


Tomorrow & Forever:
  1. 00:44:202 (3,4) - Change this like this
  2. 00:50:262 (5) - Why not stack with (6)


That's all! Buena suerte con el mapa! No te costara rankearlo :)
Topic Starter
Gero
EASY

00:11:474 (1) - Maybe you should try a reversed slider here, it could fit better with the music :3 I really prefer to keep it as is.
I have nothing else to say maybe this overleap is quite strange because there is not the same over leap on the next pattern here : 00:26:020 (2,1) - for me, it's just a visual thing, if it's okay for you, then just keep it like it ♥

NORMAL

00:07:111 (1) - I don't know if this slider is necessary, maybe you should try to put a spinner, or just a blank here =w= I don't think so because a slider also works well here.
00:18:020 (3,4) - This part could be a bit hard to play for a Normal I think ;w; Just a little bit but is not that difficult to read.
00:14:262 (1) - I'm sure that it's just me, but I think the rhythm on those slider (because there is more sliders mapped on the purple tick) are quite strange ;w; Some of them are in red ticks but others are in 1/3, so I wanted to keep it easier that's why I used all of them in 1/3.
00:16:444 (2) - Same here Same as above.
00:25:899 (1) - Here too Same as above.

It's kinda strange because there is some 1/3 parts that are completly readable, and other that just seems to be quite hard to read :w:

HARD

00:14:262 (4) - I don't really know if this note is necessary here ;w; Yes it is.
00:58:383 (2,3) - This pattern looks a bit strange =w= Why?

I have nothing much to say here because that diff is really great to play, and even if there is some hard pattern, it's very nice ^w^ (i think i'm just bad and i found it hard)

TOMORROW & FOREVER

00:10:383 (2) - On this slider, you should try to do a circular effect to make a blanket :3 Moved a bit.
00:38:383 (3) - Same here, I don't know if you did it like this to fit with the next slider? Same as above.

The lyrics font is so so so so so well used >w<

Hey! As forced requested~

Explain this

General
  1. Note que buscando panda sin 's no aparece en la busqueda, asi que esta bien repetirlo, supongo~ Arreglado.
    Tags:
    wbb grizzly panda panpan ice bear love

Easy
  1. 00:18:383 (2) - Damn Gero, this note is going a bit off screen~ Cierto.
  2. 00:23:838 (2,1) - You may wanna get rid of that overlap, perhaps~ Listo.
  3. 00:30:020 (4) - Y si lo alineas un poco mas con el slider? Prefiero mantener simétrico el patrón.

Normal
  1. 00:06:020 (2,1) - Que paso Gero? Este overlap es de esos que no se miran bien u.u Arreglado.
  2. 00:18:020 (3,4,1) - No esta algo complejo y comprimido para los que juegan Normal? Es perfectamente rankeable.
  3. 00:23:474 (2) - No se va off screen pero talvez quieras considerar subirlo un poco Cierto.
  4. 00:37:656 (5) - Olvidaste NC? Se ve mal si añado el NC ahí, en realidad es intencional.

Hard
  1. 01:06:747 (1,2) - Se siente algo aburrido que hayas decidido seguir el mismo patron de sliders en este cambio tan grande en la musica~ Quería dar un efecto de sobre-posición es por eso que se ve así.

Well, nada me llamo la atencion en la diff mas alta~

Good luck Geronimo! \:D/
:( Here's your mod MAH BOY
Easy:
  1. 00:08:929 (2,4) - Much better like this, IMO the flow is bettah Right.
  2. 00:12:929 (3,4) - This also, looks better like this Yes, changed.
  3. 00:14:383 (1) - Why not blanket Changed.
  4. 00:17:293 (1) - Hehe I think I'm a bit nazi This is so nazi, I wont change that, sorry.
  5. 00:31:838 (1,2,3) - In this part, the flow feels a little strange, it must be like this just IMO, if you want, you can do this and ctrl+H the rest.. (00:34:383 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1) - This is intentional, that's why the flow is like this.
  6. 00:59:474 (1,2,3) - This too, would be better like this, surely you can Ctrl+J the rest of the objects ... (01:02:020 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1) - ) Same as above.


Normal:
  1. Oh god the CS, I'm not a fan of 3.5 so, 3.6 would be asdhasikasd 3. I like it.
  2. 00:06:626 (3) - Why not force pattern like this Changed.
  3. 00:07:111 (1) - Remove finish from the end of the slider, Suena sobrepuesto (Dunno how to say it in english) Es consistente con todas las dificultades, no hay cambios.
  4. 00:14:262 (1) - Wrong snap, it must be in 00:14:202 As I explained, some beats are in 1/6 and some in 1/3, so I decided to go with an easier rhythm here.
  5. 00:16:444 (2) - This too, must start in then red stick ^
  6. 00:25:838 (1) - This too, it's ok since you followed another rythm, but this is a normal, the best way to follow the rythm sometimes isn't the correct one
  7. 00:27:353 (4,1) - But sometimes it's good, since there is circles instead of sliders. sounds way better ^
  8. 00:40:383 (3) - Same, move it to the red stick ^
  9. 00:42:626 (2) - This is ok, since the drum is strong enought for keep the original timing. but the rest no, I highly recommend to change where I say ^
  10. 00:46:202 (1) - Move this too ^
  11. 00:49:171 (1) - This too, also listen it on 25%, the vocal starts in 00:49:111, where must be ^
  12. 00:52:080 (1) - Move this too ^
  13. 00:52:747 (3) - And this too ^
  14. 00:55:111 (1) - Better like this Applied.
  15. If you disaggre with what I say about the rhythm in this diff, think about it, it's hard to "Normal" Players to read forced rhythms at all you know.. I hopefully you did what I tell not for the rank at all, but the players


Hard:
  1. 00:07:111 (1) - Yeah remove finish from the end of the slider What I've said in Normal.
  2. 00:31:315 (1,2) - I think this looks better Applied.
  3. 00:49:535 (7) - Overmapped, remove this Is not overmapped at all, listen it carefully and you'll see.


Tomorrow & Forever:
  1. 00:44:202 (3,4) - Change this like this It looks really awful, no changes.
  2. 00:50:262 (5) - Why not stack with (6) I did this cause the previous pattern is symmetrycal, that's why.


That's all! Buena suerte con el mapa! No te costara rankearlo :)

Thanks a lot.

Updated~
Euny

as your request!


  • easy❤normal

  1. nothing special just last spin on easy normal. i'm 200% sure newbie will get 100 or 50. i think better to fix with long slider
  • Hard

  1. 00:19:474 (3,1) - hope you avoid those overlap will improve your current flow.
  2. 00:49:293 (6,1) - seems need to swap those NC for follow your tomorrow & forever diff? unless like 01:15:474 (4,1) - this specific reason
  3. 01:08:202 (4) - add new combo on here. the reason same as above
  • Tomorrow & Forever

  1. 00:09:899 (6,1,2) - try to avoid those overlap will be looks better when play c:
  2. 00:19:111 (2,3) - feels too far for me. how about move this around 00:18:747 (1) - this tail? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5433891
  3. 00:22:747 (6) - if you change tail direction, will be more nice flow i guess http://puu.sh/pztdX/a94f9203cf.jpg


wdf..3perfect5me take my star gerosito


Topic Starter
Gero

as your request!


  • easy❤normal

  1. nothing special just last spin on easy normal. i'm 200% sure newbie will get 100 or 50. i think better to fix with long slider I think that four beats are more than enough in my opinion, no changes.
  • Hard

  1. 00:19:474 (3,1) - hope you avoid those overlap will improve your current flow. Moved a little bit.
  2. 00:49:293 (6,1) - seems need to swap those NC for follow your tomorrow & forever diff? unless like 01:15:474 (4,1) - this specific reason Fixed.
  3. 01:08:202 (4) - add new combo on here. the reason same as above Fixed.
  • Tomorrow & Forever

  1. 00:09:899 (6,1,2) - try to avoid those overlap will be looks better when play c: Moved a little bit.
  2. 00:19:111 (2,3) - feels too far for me. how about move this around 00:18:747 (1) - this tail? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5433891 Nice suggestion, changed.
  3. 00:22:747 (6) - if you change tail direction, will be more nice flow i guess http://puu.sh/pztdX/a94f9203cf.jpg I really like my own flow at this part, sorry.


wdf..3perfect5me take my star gerosito



Thanks a lot.

Updated~
Monstrata
Did a quick irc check with Gero. Should be good to go now :D.

13:12 Monstrata: Tomorrow & Forever 00:50:262 (5,6) - this... i think you should stack it because uh
13:12 Monstrata: circle into slider patterns like this that are spaced
13:12 Monstrata: are a loot harder
13:12 Monstrata: than slider > circle
13:12 Monstrata: and this is the only time you ever use this kind of arrangement for circle > slider rhythms
13:13 Gero: but I made this cause the previous slider with circle is symmetrycal and would be weird to have it different ;_;
13:13 Gero: is it really neccesary? xD
13:13 Monstrata: yea... but its really going to affect playability imo
13:14 Gero: alright
13:14 Gero: I'll fix it
13:14 Monstrata: cuz this is like 3 stars, and a rhythm like that forces you to play a spaced 1/3
13:14 Monstrata: ya sry x___x
13:17 Gero: changed
13:18 Monstrata: 00:31:323 (1,2) - snapping here just sounds off to me... hmm
13:18 Monstrata: i think it should be 1/6....
13:18 Gero: try to hear it at 25%
13:18 Gero: it was 1/6 before but alot of people told me to change it like that
13:19 Monstrata: i think its just mp3 being buggy but hmm okay
13:20 Gero: should I keep it or change it? I don't have problems to fix it tbh
13:20 Monstrata: I THINK ITS FINE
13:20 Monstrata: oops caps lol
13:20 Gero: ayyy xD
13:20 Gero: caps
13:21 Monstrata: okay
13:21 Monstrata: On Normal
13:21 Monstrata: 01:17:050 (1) - the spinner is like really short already, but i think it can still be acceptable...
13:21 Monstrata: but on Easy
13:21 Monstrata: 01:17:050 (1) - spinner is too short imo :P
13:21 Gero: can I change it by one slider?
13:21 Monstrata: yea. i think for Easy its better to change it to a slider
13:21 Gero: on easy I mean xD
13:22 Gero: sure
13:22 Gero: I'll fix that
13:22 Monstrata: maybe a 1/1 repeat slider and a circle?
13:22 Monstrata: http://puu.sh/pzOkh.jpg
13:24 Monstrata: oh lastly on Easy
13:24 Monstrata: 00:18:383 (2) - is offscreen
13:25 Gero: changed
13:25 Gero: fixed :D
13:25 Monstrata: hmm
13:26 Monstrata: alright update :D
Topic Starter
Gero
Thanks Mr. Monstrata.
Irreversible
We got rid off the iffy 1/3 thing, so it's now save! Enjoy :3~ Cool map
Topic Starter
Gero
Thanks Irry.
MkGuh
Great! Gero being fast as always XD
ezek
Gratz!
KittyAdventure
I think, i ready to say
I wanna be your du-du-dude today
Tomorrow and Forever
I'll Be your Friend!

Gratzz :3
sahuang
Grats
BoatKrab
So fast O3O, anyways congraz <3
Underforest
gotta go fast o3o
gratz gero
Euny
lol just going to check my mod and it ranked haha gratz gero♥ so nice song and flow
lce Bear
This beatmap is disgusting. Can not do beatmaps? :x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x The circles do not fit the song. I CANT BEAT "SS" IN THE NORMAL PLAY...
Topic Starter
Gero
Do you know that this song is 1/3, right?

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