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BoatKrab

Oh my heartttt!!!!! <3
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CrystilonZ

BoatKrab wrote:


Oh my heartttt!!!!! <3
<3<3<3

Oh, and guys, I have uploaded the video. Make sure you download it to see those Zootopians moving in the background while you play :D

ZekeyHache
oh.. I wanted to map this song, now this version is too good, I give up~

Good luck! Take my star O/

/me cries
kunka
Hi.
From your Q~
General

  1. I think that kiai time is not appropriate. If a start of kiai time is 01:56:451 - and 02:13:075 - , 00:49:958 - and 01:06:581 - are necessary, too. Because 00:50:087 - and the 01:06:711 - are the lines which are not necessary, you can solve it by deleting it. In addition, I think that kiai time of the 01:23:204 - and 02:29:698 - is not necessary.
100 Yards Dash

  1. 00:24:763 (1,2,3) - The start of the NC thinks that 00:25:023 (3) - is appropriate according to consistency. Such a feeling 00:39:308 (5,1) - Because there are a lot of same points, please examine a change. 01:22:945 (1,2,3) - 01:39:568 (1,2,3) - 02:06:581 (1,2,3) - 02:12:815 (1,2,3) - 02:23:204 (1,2,3) - 02:27:360 (1,2,3) - 02:29:438 (1,2,3) - 02:37:750 (1,2,3) -
  2. 00:35:152 (1,2,3,4) - I kinda felt a sense of incongruity in rhythm. I think that the cause is because probably there is not snap of the 1beat start. try this pls http://puu.sh/nzt4D.jpg
  3. 02:46:191 (1,2) - I think that the start of the NC is reverse. http://puu.sh/nztW2.jpg
  4. 02:46:321 (2,3) - Would you switch to 1/2slider? Because this diff has a lot of vocalist follow, I think that it is suitable at this point. http://puu.sh/nzsBH.jpg
BoatKrab's Hard

  1. Please remove widescreen support.
  2. 00:18:789 (6) - I think that NC is necessary.
  3. 00:27:360 (5) - ^
  4. 00:31:256 (4) - ^
  5. 00:47:880 (6) - Because the 00:49:958 - has a strong sound, I do not recommend that I do it to the end point of slider. try this pls http://puu.sh/nzwIJ.jpg 01:21:256 (1) - 02:11:126 (1) - same
  6. 01:25:672 (7) - I think that NC is effective. It has mark an end to good. In addition, it becomes the prevention of confusion of stack.
  7. 01:29:828 (7) - ^
  8. 01:33:984 (7) - ^
  9. 01:41:906 (5) - I think that NC is necessary.
  10. 01:50:217 (5) - ^
  11. 02:48:919 (1,2,3) - I kinda felt a sense of incongruity in rhythm. Would you change it in ctrl+G? http://puu.sh/nzxCt.jpg
Kitty's Normal

  1. 01:22:165 (4) - Would you change this to the improvement of a flow from 01:21:126 (3) - and the flow to 01:23:204 (1) - ? I recommend that I change the direction. http://puu.sh/nzyZN.jpg
  2. 01:25:282 (4,5) - Because there is much slider in this part, would you add a change? For example http://puu.sh/nzzw1.jpg I think the playing to become fun by performing a change of stack.
  3. 01:29:438 (4,5) - ^
  4. 01:33:594 (4,5) - ^
I think it to be good map overall.
GL ;)
Irreversible
This song is so touching!

[General]

Would you mind mapping the end section? It's saddening to see it left out although the song hasn't stopped.

[Kitty's Normal]

00:16:711 (1,2,3,4) - It would be really cool if you could arrange these in a symmetrical way, so that your map will look more polished. I'm sure you can do that!
00:23:984 (4,1,2,3,4) - Are you sure you want to use so many curves? Please try to use some other shapes, too. So many curves seem inappropriate here. By the way, here a trick how to make good looking curves with less effort: http://puu.sh/nzC3a/9d3e595e77.jpg
00:35:412 (3,4) - Try to improve the curve-parts of the slider.
00:47:880 (3) - Nice!
00:56:191 (3) - Would be really cool if this could symmetric again; it will just give a better feeling by using the playfield evenly.
01:41:906 (3) - Just a quick suggestion, and again, the symmetry aspect is missing imo. http://puu.sh/nzCh5/19dc36daab.jpg
01:43:984 (1,2,3,4) - These could be shifted to the middle too, if you fixed ^.
01:48:139 (1,2,3) - The flow got a bit boring here, because you always go counter clock wise. Try changing the flow by breaking it.

Cute map, even better if you could fix up the stuff above!

[BoatCrab's Hard]

00:16:451 (4) - I would not introduce the part with a slider repeat. Please make sure 00:16:711 - is clickable.
00:19:308 (7) - Just something minor, but is the overlap necessary?
00:20:867 (1) - Blanket
00:22:425 (4,1,2) - Again, a rather nitpicking point but your map can benefit so much from it, let me show you a picture to visualize the problem: http://puu.sh/nzCBD/9e30ba2700.jpg If you could manage to make those distances equal, your map will look way cleaner. I might refer to the screen above in the rest of the mod.
00:25:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - The NCing here does not seem flawless, please rework it. I also think that one should be shifted one to the left.
00:31:516 - and 00:32:555 - How about deleting those two circles? I think some rhythm variation would really be cool here, no?
00:47:880 (6) - Having the slider blanket itself seems more reasonable to me. http://puu.sh/nzCP7/d9dd51f555.jpg
01:04:893 (1,2) - Really loving this rhythm strucutre.
01:14:893 (1) - How about ignoring the blanket here and emphasize the voice better? My suggestion is to move it further away.
01:18:789 (5) - You've been following the vocals pretty much; i suggest having a slider here because it will follow the "even though" better. Or at least have a circle 01:19:049 - having this covered, because ignoring the even though is kinda sad.
01:51:516 (1) - I'm feeling like a NC will fit here.
01:54:373 (1) - Looks cool perse but doesn't really compliment 01:53:854 (7) - . Try to blanket it somehow, or make it work with the slider better.
02:16:191 (3,4) - The triangle is not even.

This map is pretty cool to play, it suffers from some unpolished patterns here and there. If you could fix those up that would be great!

[100 Yards Dash]

00:49:178 (5) - Do you also think a NC would help emphasizing the vocals?
00:53:464 (6,7) - One of the problems I see with this map are these patterns, in my opinion they don't play very intuitive. I suggest this: http://puu.sh/nzDkD/0fdcc5cb27.jpg to have a better flow.
01:00:347 (3,4,5) - Same.
01:05:542 (4,5,6) - I dunno, today I feel like suggesting a lot of symmetry. http://puu.sh/nzDnm/a9699903c8.jpg
01:16:971 (3,4,5) - Same as above.
01:51:516 (5) - A NC would also help emphaiszing the outstanding vocals
01:59:958 (6,7) - Same as above.
02:16:581 (6,7) - Now here's the clue, it would be cool to have it a bit more difficult in the last kiai like this... well, it's up to you, maybe it is better to fix it.
02:23:854 (4,5) - Same as aove.
02:46:191 (1,2) - NCing is messed up here.

Really cute map. Not many flaws from my point of view.

Okay, so now here's what I suggest: You check the points (and preferably map the end part :P ) and I will come back. Drop me a pm when you've applied stuff. See you!
_vanity
Hello! I'm here from your M4M queue.

[100 Yards Dash]
  1. 00:21:646 (3) - There's not a whole lot here to support this slider. I guess it's fine, but I think a single hitcircle would play so much better.
  2. The spacing between 01:23:594 (4,5) - is not the best. I think the two should be closer. Something like the spacing you use when doing this 01:23:984 (5,6,7) -
  3. 01:36:062 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:59:308 (4) - I think that you should place this a bit lower. Maybe around x: 160 y: 96
  5. 02:50:347 (7,8) - Stack?
  6. 00:22:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would say to try to keep spacing consistent between this pattern. This song is quite low BPM. Big spacing between these jumps isn't necessary.
  7. 00:42:425 (5,7) - Stack (7) on the slider end of (5) properly. It looks so much neater.
  8. 00:59:049 (4,5,6,7) - Keep consistent spacing between these jumps.
  9. 01:13:594 (4,5,6) - ^
  10. Watch out for unnecessary spacing overall.
[]
Good luck!
Adventure
[100 Yards Dash]
00:21:646 (3,4) - DS
00:39:308 (5) - change circle
00:39:308 (5) - X: 192 Y:320
01:05:542 (4) - X: 32 Y:32
01:05:802 (5) - X: 256 Y:96
01:06:062 (6) - X: 80 Y:32
02:44:503 (2,3,4) - DS
BoatKrab
To ezek

ezek wrote:

oh.. I wanted to map this song, now this version is too good, I give up~

Good luck! Take my star O/

/me cries
Why!? just try everything. You're professional mappers more than us!

"Never give up on your dreams."

kunkakunkakunkakunka's Mod

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

Hi. From your Q ~ ~~~~
BoatKrab's Hard

  1. Please remove widescreen support.
  2. 00:18:789 (6) - I think that NC is necessary.
  3. 00:27:360 (5) - ^
  4. 00:31:256 (4) - ^
  5. 00:47:880 (6) - Because the 00:49:958 - has a strong sound, I do not recommend that I do it to the end point of slider. try this pls http://puu.sh/nzwIJ.jpg 01:21:256 (1) - 02:11:126 (1) - same It is okay, isn't it?
  6. 01:25:672 (7) - I think that NC is effective. It has mark an end to good. In addition, it becomes the prevention of confusion of stack.
  7. 01:29:828 (7) - ^
  8. 01:33:984 (7) - ^
  9. 01:41:906 (5) - I think that NC is necessary.
  10. 01:50:217 (5) - ^
  11. 02:48:919 (1,2,3) - I kinda felt a sense of incongruity in rhythm. Would you change it in ctrl+G? http://puu.sh/nzxCt.jpg
the rhythm like this is too weird for me ._.

I think it to be good map overall. >w<
GL ;)
Thanks a lot >w<


Irre's Mod

Irreversible wrote:

This song is so touching!

[BoatCrab's Hard]


*stap*

00:16:451 (4) - I would not introduce the part with a slider repeat. Please make sure 00:16:711 - is clickable.
00:19:308 (7) - Just something minor, but is the overlap necessary? I don't understand.... .-.
00:20:867 (1) - Blanket
00:22:425 (4,1,2) - Again, a rather nitpicking point but your map can benefit so much from it, let me show you a picture to visualize the problem: http://puu.sh/nzCBD/9e30ba2700.jpg If you could manage to make those distances equal, your map will look way cleaner. I might refer to the screen above in the rest of the mod.
00:25:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - The NCing here does not seem flawless, please rework it. I also think that one should be shifted one to the left. I don't understand like above suggestion .3.
00:31:516 - and 00:32:555 - How about deleting those two circles? I think some rhythm variation would really be cool here, no? maybe cool x3
00:47:880 (6) - Having the slider blanket itself seems more reasonable to me. http://puu.sh/nzCP7/d9dd51f555.jpg
01:04:893 (1,2) - Really loving this rhythm strucutre. Thanks :3
01:14:893 (1) - How about ignoring the blanket here and emphasize the voice better? My suggestion is to move it further away. Like above again :cry:
01:18:789 (5) - You've been following the vocals pretty much; i suggest having a slider here because it will follow the "even though" better. Or at least have a circle 01:19:049 - having this covered, because ignoring the even though is kinda sad.
01:51:516 (1) - I'm feeling like a NC will fit here.
01:54:373 (1) - Looks cool perse but doesn't really compliment 01:53:854 (7) - . Try to blanket it somehow, or make it work with the slider better.
02:16:191 (3,4) - The triangle is not even.

This map is pretty cool to play, it suffers from some unpolished patterns here and there. If you could fix those up that would be great! Thanks :D

Okay, so now here's what I suggest: You check the points (and preferably map the end part :P ) and I will come back. Drop me a pm when you've applied stuff. See you! xD
See ya x3
Thanks a lot for modding xD

Updated! xD
Kyouren

Irreversible wrote:

This song is so touching!

[General]

Would you mind mapping the end section? It's saddening to see it left out although the song hasn't stopped. It's harder because we're not only following voice sound, but background sound

[Kitty's Normal]

00:16:711 (1,2,3,4) - It would be really cool if you could arrange these in a symmetrical way, so that your map will look more polished. I'm sure you can do that! Let think about that because i trying to blanket!
00:23:984 (4,1,2,3,4) - Are you sure you want to use so many curves? Please try to use some other shapes, too. So many curves seem inappropriate here. By the way, here a trick how to make good looking curves with less effort: http://puu.sh/nzC3a/9d3e595e77.jpg
00:35:412 (3,4) - Try to improve the curve-parts of the slider.
00:47:880 (3) - Nice! Thank you >w<
00:56:191 (3) - Would be really cool if this could symmetric again; it will just give a better feeling by using the playfield evenly.
01:41:906 (3) - Just a quick suggestion, and again, the symmetry aspect is missing imo. http://puu.sh/nzCh5/19dc36daab.jpg
01:43:984 (1,2,3,4) - These could be shifted to the middle too, if you fixed ^.
01:48:139 (1,2,3) - The flow got a bit boring here, because you always go counter clock wise. Try changing the flow by breaking it.

Cute map, even better if you could fix up the stuff above!

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

Kitty's Normal

  1. 01:22:165 (4) - Would you change this to the improvement of a flow from 01:21:126 (3) - and the flow to 01:23:204 (1) - ? I recommend that I change the direction. http://puu.sh/nzyZN.jpg
  2. 01:25:282 (4,5) - Because there is much slider in this part, would you add a change? For example http://puu.sh/nzzw1.jpg I think the playing to become fun by performing a change of stack. Nah, i following background sound :3
  3. 01:29:438 (4,5) - ^ ^
  4. 01:33:594 (4,5) - ^ ^
I think it to be good map overall.
GL ;)
Thank you for mod, Irreversible + kunkakunkakunkakunka~ <3
@CrystilonZ: Please ranked this >w< (Free adding my old nickname: "gokugohan12468" in tags :3)
Upgrade! :3

Kitty's Slider Normal
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For CrystilonZ (It's important):
  • Unused hitsounds:
    drum-hitfinish.wav
    soft-hitwhistle.wav
Fixed that!
- Frontier -
ช่วยมอด :v
[Kitty's Normal]
02:05:802 (2,3) - Looks wierd
02:50:477 (4) - Finish Here?
No comment ;w;
[BoatKrab's Hard]
00:47:880 (6) - ไม่สวย :v
00:52:295 - น่าจะเพิ่มโน๊ตตรงนี้นะ
01:54:373 (1) - เหมือนอันแรก
02:27:100 (6) - ลอง Ctrl+J แล้วหมุนไปซัก 30 องศาน่าจะดีนะ
[100 Yards Dash]
เป็น insane ก็ได้ม้างงง
โดดไกลมากกก ;w; เรา DT ไม่ได้แหง
01:16:191 (6,7) - Ctrl+G ได้หมายย

แมพดีไป ม็อดไม่ได้ ;w;
This map is so good. I can't mod ;w;
BoatKrab

- Frontier - wrote:

ช่วยมอด :v
[BoatKrab's Hard]
00:47:880 (6) - ไม่สวย :v สวยแล้ว :3
00:52:295 - น่าจะเพิ่มโน๊ตตรงนี้นะ เราเอาตามจังหวะเพลงนะ อืมมมมม
01:54:373 (1) - เหมือนอันแรก เราแก้ใหม่แล้ว อัน
ล่าสุดอ่ะ ออกจะสวย
02:27:100 (6) - ลอง Ctrl+J แล้วหมุนไปซัก 30 องศาน่าจะดีนะ ไม่เอา ไม่สวย

แมพดีไป ม็อดไม่ได้ ;w; แต้ง :3
- Frontier -

CrystilonZ wrote:

BoatKrab wrote:


Oh my heartttt!!!!! <3
<3<3<3

- Frontier - wrote:

อะไรอ่าาา :v อะไรกันอ่าาาา สองคนนี้ เราส่ง <3 ให้ GIF เฟ้ยยยยย
I tried everything to stop imagine about them. ..... แอร๊ยยยย คู่นี้ คู่ไหนห๊ะ!?
ห้ามเปิด เปิดแล้วเดี๋ยวลั่น อีช็อคคคมึมตายยยยยยยยย

แต้ง :roll:
- Frontier -
:v
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ

ezek wrote:

oh.. I wanted to map this song, now this version is too good, I give up~

Good luck! Take my star O/

/me cries
That kds is for the help with the video~ (pm)

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

Hi.
From your Q~
General

  1. I think that kiai time is not appropriate. If a start of kiai time is 01:56:451 - and 02:13:075 - , 00:49:958 - and 01:06:581 - are necessary, too. Because 00:50:087 - and the 01:06:711 - are the lines which are not necessary, you can solve it by deleting it. In addition, I think that kiai time of the 01:23:204 - and 02:29:698 - is not necessary. I think that it looks weird too! Thanks for clearing my mind up
100 Yards Dash

  1. 00:24:763 (1,2,3) - The start of the NC thinks that 00:25:023 (3) - is appropriate according to consistency. Such a feeling 00:39:308 (5,1) - Because there are a lot of same points, please examine a change. 01:22:945 (1,2,3) - 01:39:568 (1,2,3) - 02:06:581 (1,2,3) - 02:12:815 (1,2,3) - 02:23:204 (1,2,3) - 02:27:360 (1,2,3) - 02:29:438 (1,2,3) - 02:37:750 (1,2,3) - I put ncs on note on the white ticks OR there's a triplet or double before them
  2. 00:35:152 (1,2,3,4) - I kinda felt a sense of incongruity in rhythm. I think that the cause is because probably there is not snap of the 1beat start. try this pls http://puu.sh/nzt4D.jpg vocal emphasis
  3. 02:46:191 (1,2) - I think that the start of the NC is reverse. http://puu.sh/nztW2.jpg it's correct :)
  4. 02:46:321 (2,3) - Would you switch to 1/2slider? Because this diff has a lot of vocalist follow, I think that it is suitable at this point. http://puu.sh/nzsBH.jpg Will that be too easy? I mean, I tried to make this section the hardest in this diff (which, obviously, I failed to do so lol)
I think it to be good map overall.
GL ;)

Irreversible wrote:

This song is so touching! ikr~

[General]

Would you mind mapping the end section? It's saddening to see it left out although the song hasn't stopped. As kitty said. But I can map it tho. I will just be hell of 1/2 sliders with 1/4 gaps and huge jumps lol which really don't fit the attitude of the song much.

[100 Yards Dash]

00:49:178 (5) - Do you also think a NC would help emphasizing the vocals? yep it does! applied to other identical spots in the song
00:53:464 (6,7) - One of the problems I see with this map are these patterns, in my opinion they don't play very intuitive. I suggest this: http://puu.sh/nzDkD/0fdcc5cb27.jpg to have a better flow. I really love this kind of pattern tho orz. It gives player a bit of jumpy feeling without being too hard. Furthermore, they're used to emphasize stuff like dragging "the" and "thing" without omitting anything~
01:00:347 (3,4,5) - Same.
01:05:542 (4,5,6) - I dunno, today I feel like suggesting a lot of symmetry. http://puu.sh/nzDnm/a9699903c8.jpg haha-- It's fine. I put the circle there so as to make them give the feeling like playing these 01:02:945 (3,4,5,6,7) -
01:16:971 (3,4,5) - Same as above.
01:51:516 (5) - A NC would also help emphaiszing the outstanding vocals not here tho. The vocal is undisputedly eminent but it's kind of weird putting a nc at that spot imo
01:59:958 (6,7) - Same as above.
02:16:581 (6,7) - Now here's the clue, it would be cool to have it a bit more difficult in the last kiai like this... well, it's up to you, maybe it is better to fix it. I tried really hard to do so but I also failed really hard lol
02:23:854 (4,5) - Same as aove.
02:46:191 (1,2) - NCing is messed up here. what's so weird about this spot? It looks just fine imo

Really cute map. Not many flaws from my point of view.

Okay, so now here's what I suggest: You check the points (and preferably map the end part :P ) and I will come back. Drop me a pm when you've applied stuff. See you!

_vanity wrote:

Hello! I'm here from your M4M queue.

[100 Yards Dash]
  1. 00:21:646 (3) - There's not a whole lot here to support this slider. I guess it's fine, but I think a single hitcircle would play so much better. idk, imo it emphasize that "just" really well
  2. The spacing between 01:23:594 (4,5) - is not the best. I think the two should be closer. Something like the spacing you use when doing this 01:23:984 (5,6,7) - hey, the former is 1/2 but the latter is 1/4.
  3. 01:36:062 (2,3) - ^ same
  4. 01:59:308 (4) - I think that you should place this a bit lower. Maybe around x: 160 y: 96 tail stack
  5. 02:50:347 (7,8) - Stack? nope, this is more fun to play
  6. 00:22:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would say to try to keep spacing consistent between this pattern. This song is quite low BPM. Big spacing between these jumps isn't necessary. emphasis on vocals.
  7. 00:42:425 (5,7) - Stack (7) on the slider end of (5) properly. It looks so much neater. oops
  8. 00:59:049 (4,5,6,7) - Keep consistent spacing between these jumps. vocal emphasis
  9. 01:13:594 (4,5,6) - ^ same
  10. Watch out for unnecessary spacing overall.
[]
Good luck!

arnoldusj wrote:

[100 Yards Dash]
00:21:646 (3,4) - DS what?
00:39:308 (5) - change circle I think the slider fits better with the "up~" there
00:39:308 (5) - X: 192 Y:320 omg this is so nazi
01:05:542 (4) - X: 32 Y:32
01:05:802 (5) - X: 256 Y:96
01:06:062 (6) - X: 80 Y:32
02:44:503 (2,3,4) - DS they're stacked orz

KittyAdventure wrote:

For CrystilonZ (It's important):
  • Unused hitsounds:
    drum-hitfinish.wav
    soft-hitwhistle.wav
Thanks for the check! all of them is used, I'm sure of that~
Big oops, yes it's unused lol

Fixed that!

- Frontier - wrote:

ช่วยมอด :v
[100 Yards Dash]
เป็น insane ก็ได้ม้างงง บอกระบบดาวสิ 5555
โดดไกลมากกก ;w; เรา DT ไม่ได้แหง
01:16:191 (6,7) - Ctrl+G ได้หมายย ไม่ :b

แมพดีไป ม็อดไม่ได้ ;w;
This map is so good. I can't mod ;w;
Thanks for the mod everyone!~
and thanks for the help with the video, ezek

guys, new video, new kiai time, new video offset.
redownload it~ thanks!
Can't upload orz. I guess the BSS is down again.
Will upload tmr!

The BSS is fine; my connection sucks
Updated~
Kyouren
Not change for - Frontier - mod. It's don't weird and if i put finsih in end it's weird X_X

No comment = fixed
Thank you for mod and midunderstand me! ;__; (I forget adding not comment = fixed)
Irreversible
well, lol. I'll repost my mod

[Kitty's Normal]

00:16:711 (1,2,3,4,1) - You can still blanket those while having them symmetric; move them to the left so they are centered, you will use the playfield better like this.
00:23:984 (4,1,2,3,4) - Are you sure you want to use so many curves? Please try to use some other shapes, too. So many curves seem inappropriate here.
00:56:191 (3) - Please make it centered and symmetric, because now it looks really off.
01:41:906 (3) - Same.
01:43:984 (1,2,3,4) - Move them to the left so they are centered, you will use the playfield better like this.
DatBurger
I love the song and the map was cool! But i felt like the stamina/health fell down a bit too quick. But awesome map Keep up the good work!!
Janpai
M4M from BoatKrab's Queue

General
  1. Why not map the ending part? O_O

Kitty's Normal
  1. The beats sounds monotonous, It's like most of the time you were following background music instead of vocals that needed much emphasis, nah just my opinion not a big deal for the normal
  2. 00:17:750 (2) - Vocals need emphasis here, make (2) a 1/2 reverse slider then add a circle on the red tick
  3. 00:19:828 (4) - Here also ^
  4. 00:21:906 (2) - A 1/2 slider then 1/1 slider on the red tick fits more and again vocals need more attention XD
  5. 00:43:724 (3) - Blanket is a bit off
  6. 00:52:555 (4) - Why not make this into 1/2 ? cuz the vocals "till I reach again" are strong here
  7. 01:09:178 (4) - ^
  8. 01:24:763 (3) - 1/2 doesn't make any sense to me XDD maybe replace it with a circle?
  9. 01:28:919 (3) - ^
  10. 01:33:075 (3) - ^
  11. 02:32:555 - Missing beat, could put (5) on the red tick

BoatKrab's Hard
  1. 00:18:789 (1,2,3) - Beat is kinda mislead, Make (1) circle then put 2 (which is a slider) on the red tick then add a note after that
  2. 00:24:763 (5,1) - A slider-circle fits more than a circle slider
  3. 00:53:075 (3) - There's a beat on the blue tick, extend the slider there
  4. 01:09:698 (3) - ^
  5. 01:50:477 (2,3) - Switch them (Ctrl+G) then arranged them properly cuz vocals here
  6. 01:59:568 (3) - y'know what to do XD
  7. 02:16:191 (3) - ^

Flash
  1. 00:28:659 (5,6,7) - I don't hear anything or see any reason why you put triple here or just to spice up the map?
  2. 00:33:724 (2,3) - Stack there below the tail of (1) ?
All diffs are very clean, hope this get ranked soon!
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ

DatBurger wrote:

I love the song and the map was cool! But i felt like the stamina/health fell down a bit too quick. But awesome map Keep up the good work!!
Thanks!~
but I think the HP is fine tho. I can pass it without much effort.

Janpai wrote:

M4M from BoatKrab's Queue

General
  1. Why not map the ending part? O_O mentinoed in irre's mod

Flash
  1. 00:28:659 (5,6,7) - I don't hear anything or see any reason why you put triple here or just to spice up the map? It fits with the vocal there
  2. 00:33:724 (2,3) - Stack there below the tail of (1) ? no, I want this diff to be flowy XD
All diffs are very clean, hope this get ranked soon!
Thanks!~
BoatKrab

Janpai wrote:

M4M from BoatKrab's Queue


BoatKrab's Hard
  1. 00:18:789 (1,2,3) - Beat is kinda mislead, Make (1) circle then put 2 (which is a slider) on the red tick then add a note after that
  2. 00:24:763 (5,1) - A slider-circle fits more than a circle slider it isn't fit :o
  3. 00:53:075 (3) - There's a beat on the blue tick, extend the slider there It's look like Flash diff :o
  4. 01:09:698 (3) - ^ ^
  5. 01:50:477 (2,3) - Switch them (Ctrl+G) then arranged them properly cuz vocals here Nope :3
  6. 01:59:568 (3) - y'know what to do XD ^^
  7. 02:16:191 (3) - ^
^

All diffs are very clean, hope this get ranked soon!
Thanks :D

[]
Updated! :)
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ
Kitty asked me to fix his diff
So, here goes

Irreversible wrote:

well, lol. I'll repost my mod

[Kitty's Normal]

00:16:711 (1,2,3,4,1) - You can still blanket those while having them symmetric; move them to the left so they are centered, you will use the playfield better like this.
00:23:984 (4,1,2,3,4) - Are you sure you want to use so many curves? Please try to use some other shapes, too. So many curves seem inappropriate here.
00:56:191 (3) - Please make it centered and symmetric, because now it looks really off.
01:41:906 (3) - Same.
01:43:984 (1,2,3,4) - Move them to the left so they are centered, you will use the playfield better like this.
^^ fixed all of that, I guess

Janpai wrote:

M4M from BoatKrab's Queue

General

[notice]Kitty's Normal
  1. The beats sounds monotonous, It's like most of the time you were following background music instead of vocals that needed much emphasis, nah just my opinion not a big deal for the normal
  2. 00:17:750 (2) - Vocals need emphasis here, make (2) a 1/2 reverse slider then add a circle on the red tick no circles because of reasons :P
  3. 00:19:828 (4) - Here also ^
  4. 00:21:906 (2) - A 1/2 slider then 1/1 slider on the red tick fits more and again vocals need more attention XD The music is kinda slow here, so it'd make more sense to map only the white ticks here
  5. 00:43:724 (3) - Blanket is a bit off fixed
  6. 00:52:555 (4) - Why not make this into 1/2 ? cuz the vocals "till I reach again" are strong here I think this fits too. The vocal is kinda dragged so it feels like it's one chunk.
  7. 01:09:178 (4) - ^
  8. 01:24:763 (3) - 1/2 doesn't make any sense to me XDD maybe replace it with a circle? I think it emphasizes "oh" sound quite well
  9. 01:28:919 (3) - ^
  10. 01:33:075 (3) - ^
  11. 02:32:555 - Missing beat, could put (5) on the red tick I think kitty's intention here is to give players a break? Idk, I didn't map this diff orz
All diffs are very clean, hope this get ranked soon!
Updated~
lovhin456
Hello, m4m for your queue.

Kitty's Normal
00:15:672 - Why not start mapping when she starts singing?
00:48:841 (2,3) - You could move (2) so it doesn't touch (3). I think it will look better.
01:33:075 - Make the slider straight, no curve.
02:06:321 - Move a little bit lower, x=148 y=228.
02:31:256 - It looks bad how this is overlapping the previous slider, move it.
I really think that the last part with the continous sliders will be hard for the new players. I understand that because this is a normal it's supposed to be more difficult than an easy difficulty, but you have to keep in mind that because this is the easiest difficulty in the mapset, new players will be playing this.

BoatKrab's Hard
00:47:880 - This looks weird...I think it would be better to put a spinner here.
01:25:672 - Maybe don't stack under previous slider?
02:50:347 - Add a note?
Nice difficulty.


Flash
00:12:555 - It doesn't make sense that you keep it going for so long. Shorten it until 00:14:633 and start mapping when she starts singing.
00:56:191 - Make the curve go the opposite side.
02:49:958 (6,7,8) - This spacing looks really weird and might be confusing.

Overall the mapset is really good. Probably a couple more mods can improve it even more, but it looks almost ready for a rank. Keep up the good work.
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello, m4m foryour BoatKrab's queue.

Flash
00:12:555 - It doesn't make sense that you keep it going for so long. Shorten it until 00:14:633 and start mapping when she starts singing. I think using the ukulele's sound to signal the starting point kinda works really well
00:56:191 - Make the curve go the opposite side. nop, it flows right to 00:56:581 (2) -
02:49:958 (6,7,8) - This spacing looks really weird and might be confusing. nah, it's fine

Kitty's Normal
00:15:672 - Why not start mapping when she starts singing? ^
00:48:841 (2,3) - You could move (2) so it doesn't touch (3). I think it will look better. the overlap here looks fine to me
01:33:075 - Make the slider straight, no curve. why?
02:06:321 - Move a little bit lower, x=148 y=228. k
02:31:256 - It looks bad how this is overlapping the previous slider, move it. fixed
I really think that the last part with the continous sliders will be hard for the new players. I understand that because this is a normal it's supposed to be more difficult than an easy difficulty, but you have to keep in mind that because this is the easiest difficulty in the mapset, new players will be playing this.

Overall the mapset is really good. Probably a couple more mods can improve it even more, but it looks almost ready for a rank. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the mod ~! :)
Nwolf
damn is it too late to sneak in taiko difficulties?
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ

Nwolf wrote:

damn is it too late to sneak in taiko difficulties?
probably so :o sry
HappyRocket88
woo this song, have my stars ( ノ^.^)ノ
Battle
shakira's hips don't lie
BoatKrab

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello, m4m for your queue.

BoatKrab's Hard
00:47:880 - This looks weird...I think it would be better to put a spinner here. No ;3;
01:25:672 - Maybe don't stack under previous slider?
02:50:347 - Add a note? not add because to follow the rhythm of the diff
Nice difficulty.

Overall the mapset is really good. Probably a couple more mods can improve it even more, but it looks almost ready for a rank. Keep up the good work.
Thanks :3
Updated!
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ

Battle wrote:

shakira's hips don't lie
BoatKrab

Battle wrote:

shakira's hips don't lie
Move our hips lol
- Frontier -
Let's #dancingwithgazelle
BoatKrab

- Frontier - wrote:

Let's #dancingwithgazelle (Don't click especially, BoatKrab.)
Don't click. I already told you.
fuck you, Frontier ;w;
You tease me x(
Inversal

BoatKrab wrote:

- Frontier - wrote:

Let's #dancingwithgazelle (Don't click especially, BoatKrab.)
Don't click. I already told you.
fuck you, Frontier ;w;
You tease me x(
LOL HAHAHAHA
Irreversible
Recheck!

[Kitty]

00:56:191 (3) - Is still not symmetric.
01:09:178 (4,1) - These kind of look weird, can you make the curves neater?
00:25:023 (1,2,3,4) - What a really uncreative fix. Please put some more effort into that!

Please check the slidershapes yourself, too.

pm me after
Kyouren

Irreversible wrote:

Recheck!

[Kitty]

00:56:191 (3) - Is still not symmetric. I think it's fine, not really disturb/bother :/
01:09:178 (4,1) - These kind of look weird, can you make the curves neater?
00:25:023 (1,2,3,4) - What a really uncreative fix. Please put some more effort into that!

Please check the slidershapes yourself, too.

pm me after
No comment = Fixed!
Upgrade :3

Kitty's Slider Madness Normal
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184,300,62425,6,0,L|264:284,1,70.000000298023,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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332,56,74893,6,0,B|292:40|264:52|264:52|224:68|180:48,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
104,160,75932,2,0,P|96:204|116:248,1,70.000000298023,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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278,286,79049,6,0,P|214:250|194:170,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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278,294,82165,2,0,B|326:282|326:282|414:302,1,140.000000596046,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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232,128,84763,2,0,P|208:100|152:96,1,70.000000298023,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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236,332,86321,2,0,P|312:348|384:324,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
444,212,87360,6,0,P|368:196|296:220,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,180,88139,2,0,P|276:96|224:36,1,140.000000596046,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,48,88919,2,0,B|152:56|152:56|116:48,1,70.000000298023,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,44,89438,2,0,B|36:136|36:136|56:220,1,140.000000596046,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
144,284,90477,2,0,B|156:192|156:192|145:146,1,140.000000596046,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
284,124,91516,6,0,P|304:200|392:232,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
416,264,92295,2,0,P|328:296|304:364,1,140.000000596046,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,348,93075,2,0,P|208:340|168:308,1,70.000000298023,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,328,93594,2,0,P|92:244|128:176,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,94633,2,0,P|241:173|223:240,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95672,12,0,98789,0:0:0:0:
479,88,99828,6,0,P|415:60|351:136,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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459,87,103984,6,0,B|419:63|419:63|315:63,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
187,63,105023,2,0,B|93:63|93:63|53:87,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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327,251,107100,2,0,P|394:261|450:223,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
459,87,108139,6,0,B|363:43|363:43|395:99,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
239,73,109178,2,0,B|256:43|256:43|160:87,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
114,219,110217,2,0,B|213:160|305:248|305:248|406:155|518:235,1,420.000001788138,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
459,87,112295,6,0,P|387:79|327:31,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
288,172,113334,2,0,P|231:212|162:219,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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455,115,116451,6,0,B|423:127|383:111|383:111|339:95|271:119,1,140.000000596046,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,117490,2,0,P|168:156|180:204,1,70.000000298023,8|4,1:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
240,224,118010,2,0,P|248:257|240:291,1,70.000000298023,4|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,340,118529,2,0,B|268:332|268:332|364:356,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
456,288,119568,2,0,B|444:248|460:220|460:220|476:176|452:116,1,140.000000596046,0|4,1:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
356,60,120607,6,0,B|292:72|292:72|216:64,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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220,344,122685,2,0,B|284:332|284:332|360:340,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
480,272,123724,2,0,P|497:205|477:139,1,140.000000596046,0|4,1:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
352,76,124763,6,0,B|320:56|292:72|292:72|260:92|216:76,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,125802,2,0,L|72:240,1,70.000000298023,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
148,228,126321,2,0,L|168:308,1,70.000000298023,4|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,308,126841,2,0,B|264:288|292:304|292:304|324:324|365:308,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
496,360,127880,2,0,B|484:324|496:296|496:296|512:264|496:220,1,140.000000596046,0|4,1:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
408,116,128919,6,0,B|372:124|372:124|332:116,1,70.000000298023,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,76,129438,2,0,L|284:236,2,140.000000596046,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
148,44,130997,2,0,P|76:52|40:128,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,244,132036,2,0,P|79:299|147:304,1,140.000000596046,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,352,133075,6,0,L|280:200,1,140.000000596046,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
384,116,134113,2,0,P|420:120|456:96,1,70.000000298023,8|4,1:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
488,164,134633,2,0,P|480:204|504:252,1,70.000000298023,4|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,296,135152,2,0,L|348:296,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
244,360,136191,2,0,P|216:288|268:216,1,140.000000596046,0|4,1:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
356,152,137230,6,0,P|384:90|359:26,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,48,138269,2,0,P|144:68|116:64,1,70.000000298023,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
84,68,138789,2,0,P|96:140|48:212,1,140.000000596046,4|0,1:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
120,328,139828,2,0,P|196:328|264:364,2,140.000000596046,0|0|4,1:0|1:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
200,212,141386,6,0,P|288:232|352:196,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
464,260,142425,2,0,L|484:184,1,70.000000298023,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
424,156,142945,2,0,L|406:88,1,70.000000298023,4|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,143464,6,0,B|284:68|284:68|196:48,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,136,144503,2,0,P|72:204|80:232,1,70.000000298023,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
140,220,145023,2,0,P|140:292|160:324,1,70.000000298023,4|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,328,145542,6,0,B|304:324|304:324|364:344,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
440,244,146581,2,0,P|448:204|432:164,1,70.000000298023,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,120,147100,2,0,P|320:132|296:112,1,70.000000298023,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,100,147620,2,0,L|276:248,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,336,148659,2,0,P|92:344|36:304,1,140.000000596046,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,176,149698,6,0,P|124:176|180:136,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,108,150477,2,0,P|278:137|347:131,1,140.000000596046,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,112,151256,2,0,P|408:188|416:212,1,70.000000298023,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,151776,2,0,P|480:292|448:364,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
384,352,152555,2,0,P|320:284|200:320,1,210.000000894069,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
224,164,153854,6,0,P|124:180|76:164,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
40,120,154633,2,0,L|36:280,1,140.000000596046,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,316,155412,2,0,P|148:328|184:312,1,70.000000298023,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,320,155932,2,0,P|228:260|324:236,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
436,216,156971,2,0,P|452:148|448:128,1,70.000000298023,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,132,157490,2,0,P|348:68|316:52,1,70.000000298023,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,76,158010,6,0,B|244:88|208:76|208:76|176:64|124:84,1,140.000000596046,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
84,116,158789,2,0,B|72:152|84:188|84:188|100:228|80:284,1,140.000000596046,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,316,159568,2,0,P|184:340|216:328,1,70.000000298023,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,304,160087,6,0,L|256:212,1,70.000000298023,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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364,340,162945,2,0,P|292:316|224:344,1,140.000000596046,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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108,232,164243,6,0,P|40:208|8:216,1,70.000000298023,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,116,165802,2,0,L|310:137,1,70.000000298023,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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448,344,167880,2,0,P|396:320|348:332,1,70.000000298023,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,300,168399,6,0,L|292:200,1,70.000000298023,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,200,168919,2,0,L|252:131,1,70.000000298023,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,88,169438,2,0,P|380:80|408:88,1,70.000000298023,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
CrystilonZ
lol I suck at this

I think it's already symmetric tho, maybe a few pixels off but I tried my best orz




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Irreversible
Try a bubble!
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ

Irreversible wrote:

Try a bubble!
BoatKrab

Irreversible wrote:

Try a bubble!
Try to wait for get rank!
<3


This is us. LoL
Kyouren
Called HappyRocket88 please =w=
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