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Doormat wrote:

as requested

[Kairos]
  1. 00:49:730 (5) - shouldn't this a circle + slider like 00:39:835 (1,1) - 00:44:704 (5,1) - 00:54:756 (5,1) - etc. for consistency? // eh i like how the slider movement stacks you ontop of the next slider and holds you there for a moment, its kinda nice
  2. 01:41:170 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - the curve of (2,3,4,5) implies an upward cursor movement, so placing the (1,2,3,4) at a lower position results in this awkward downward jerking motion, but maybe that's just me // that's intended
  3. 01:44:233 (5) - i'd put a hitsound on the repeat here, it's begging for emphasis
  4. 02:35:751 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - can you explain the new comboing structure here? it doesn't really fit with the music so i'm having trouble figuring out why you decided to NC the notes you did here. music places emphasis on the kicks, so if anything, the NC structure here should be something like (1,2,3,4) // the little jingles in the background imply a dotted note rhythm, this just follows that
neat map. good luck!!

Kaifin wrote:

hey my mod is 3 months late lol

Crossroads of peace and SAVAGE!!

  1. you already know about the missing sb shit
  2. 00:57:270 (4,1,1,1) - this shaping is uneven (specifically the distance between 00:57:270 (4,1) - and 00:57:270 (4) - + 00:57:741 (1) - isn't even) which i figured matters to you based on your perfect shapes/patterning thus far // this pattern was made by some1 else tbh lo. but i think its not that big of a deal
  3. 00:57:112 (3,4,1) - WTF this line also is not even // ^
  4. 01:47:374 (2,1) - blanket
  5. 02:22:872 (4,5,1) - it's a little odd to me that this stream isn't the same angle as the slider, looks a little off, also the spacing is so tight that one might thing its 1/6 or shitmiss here very easily but maybe thats just me // i think 1/6 is just you
  6. 02:23:657 (2,3) - fix stack
  7. 02:31:510 (3,1) - blanket
  8. 02:35:437 (4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - cool flow
    zoom

good luck! 1 ! ! ! ! ! 1 1 1 !

VINXIS wrote:

general

  1. ctrl shift a
  2. also use modding assistant just in case if ther r more than just those files tht rnt used in the sb

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[list][*]02:20:359 (4,2) - y dont u just stack these
[*]03:10:934 - but y wud u spam jumps Lol
[*]04:21:301 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but y tbh like i remember playing this map and fcing all the way upto here and breaking and it happened like at least 3 times Lol the jumps play intuitively worse than they look // a bunch of ppl said it was fine and felt satisfying to hit so w//e fuck u
Great Map Guys! As You Can See, I Put My Heart And Soul Into This Mod! Didn't Expect Any More Or Less From A Collab From 9 Elite Mappers!

Girl wrote:

hello there bad mod coming thru
this map and storyboard is amazing

00:54:914 (1,1) - need to make that blanket better, unless if you intend to not make it blanket
00:57:427 (1,1) - remove NC?
01:47:374 (2,1) - blanket nazi
02:32:453 (2) - move down a little so it isn't on 02:31:510 (3) - , or you could move it down even further to blanket with 02:31:982 (1) - but it isn't needed // doesn't rly matter
04:18:788 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - increase the spacing a little, feels under-emphasized at the moment
solid map good luck in getting it ranked!

hahaa thanks guys! https://0paste.com/13256.txt
Topic Starter
Sing
^thx, updated
ProfessionalBox

Doormat wrote:

01:04:809 (1) - i'd split this up into a circle + slider like before as well; 3/2 slider is inconsistent with the rest of the rhythm structure, and i don't think you should ignore the sound on 01:04:966 - either
I feel like having this as a single fast slider captures the sound better than trying to map it out with slider + circle

Kaifin wrote:

00:58:840 (1,2,1) - this line is uneven (spacing wise)
fixed

Kaifin wrote:

02:03:081 (1,3) - blanket
fixd

Girl wrote:

03:44:232 (1,2,3,4) - awkward stream shape and the spacing in 03:44:547 (1,2,3,4) - isn't consistent (03:44:625 (2,3) - are closer than the others)
fixed
Hikomori
when
Doormat
hitsounds soft-sliderslide.wav and soft-sliderslide2.wav aren't proper blanks, so replace them.

i'm okay with the rest of the map so get that fixed asap and i can bubble
Doormat
i'd be a lot warmer and a lot happier with a bellyful of mead...
Kibbleru
who the fuk maps with that timeline zoom jeesus

00:23:517 (3) - 00:26:097 (3) - 00:28:915 (5) - are these short sliders really necessary? its up to u but i feel like just using a single circle would be better since the entire section is rather calm. plus i think the short sliders look kinda ugly lol
00:42:662 (1) - all the other times there is an extended slider here. same with toybots part as well
01:02:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing too big for such a calm section imo =w= especially when u compare it to the other streams in the same section here
01:18:160 (2,4) - 01:18:160 (2,1) - spaced a little too close imo. ruins the aesthetics
03:05:437 (4,5,6,1) - ^
01:57:270 (2,3) - its almost touching, space it out a little :o
02:09:050 (1) - idk if its just me but this slider looks so fukn ugly to me LOL
02:20:044 (2,3,4) - i think its a bit awkward to suddenly switch to vocals when u focus on drums 02:19:416 (1) -
03:44:783 (4,1) - u might as well just stack them imo. nazi but the slider looks slightly off from the curve of the stream. overlap a slider through it and check for urself :O
04:29:154 (1,1) - is it possible to not overlap these lol
04:29:154 (1,1) - why not stack?
05:04:023 - tbh it would be pretty cool if you got a clock ticking slider tick sound for this last part :d
byfar
honetsly i'd really prefer if you just extended this 05:03:552 (1) - instead of mapping a ghost note a beat later
Topic Starter
Sing

byfar wrote:

honetsly i'd really prefer if you just extended this 05:03:552 (1) - instead of mapping a ghost note a beat later
???? what ghost note there's literally another note that plays at 05:03:709 (1) - before end at 05:04:023 (1) -
Topic Starter
Sing

Kibbleru wrote:

who the fuk maps with that timeline zoom jeesus get gud
00:42:662 (1) - all the other times there is an extended slider here. same with toybots part as well fixed
01:18:160 (2,4) - 01:18:160 (2,1) - spaced a little too close imo. ruins the aesthetics well when u select them in the editor yeah, but when u look at it when playing its perfectly fine imo
03:05:437 (4,5,6,1) - ^ ^^^^^^^
05:04:023 - tbh it would be pretty cool if you got a clock ticking slider tick sound for this last part :d gud idea, added that
Also changed main NC colors to be a bit more tonal, contrasts more with the NC for piano and Kiai
Topic Starter
Sing
ALSO REPLYING FOR PROBOX

Kibbleru wrote:

01:02:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing too big for such a calm section imo =w= especially when u compare it to the other streams in the same section here descaled abit
02:09:050 (1) - idk if its just me but this slider looks so fukn ugly to me LOL fixed kinda
03:44:783 (4,1) - u might as well just stack them imo. nazi but the slider looks slightly off from the curve of the stream. overlap a slider through it and check for urself :O nah, me and probox both agree with the reasoning to keep this; the slider isn part of the stream due to that overlap so it doesnt break the aesthetic. this overlap is so that the player can sense that the slider will b huge velocity change, going from high spacing stream to extremely slow (0.2x sv) slider. same spacing as 03:44:704 (3,4) - wud increase the likeliehood of the player shtmissing, and stacking wud make it p unreadable
04:29:154 (1,1) - is it possible to not overlap these lol stacked 04:29:154 (1) - with 04:30:097 (1) - , then stacked 04:29:626 (4,5,1) - with 04:28:133 (4,5) -
04:29:154 (1,1) - why not stack? ^^^^^^^^^^
Kibbleru
03:44:861 (1) - wait can u at least put it more in line with the curve of the stream xD
Topic Starter
Sing

Kibbleru wrote:

03:44:861 (1) - wait can u at least put it more in line with the curve of the stream xD

ok fixed
toybot
not sure what you mean but tried to fix anyway https://0paste.com/14974.txt
Topic Starter
Sing
applied above ^ and also fixed suggestion to byfars piano at the start and changed those sliders to hitcircles

shud b gud now
Doormat
rebub
Lavender
➤Ай-ай-ай-ай-ай, что сейчас произошло!
Pentori
00:25:995 (2,3,1) - same rhythm gaps between these make the jump from 1 -> 2 extremely unintuitive. ppl will play this as click into duplet when its more of a triple
01:17:217 (1) - idk if the last repeat is really necessary, melody ends at 01:17:374 - while the sound at 01:17:427 - is just background stuff
02:09:050 (1,2,3) - should try centre 1 between 2 and 3, looks really uneven visually

Kibbleru wrote:

02:20:044 (2,3,4) - i think its a bit awkward to suddenly switch to vocals when u focus on drums 02:19:416 (1)
pointing this out again cos i dont think it was replied to (?) focusing on the 1/3 drums with 02:19:416 (1) - then abandoning it at 02:20:044 (2,3,4) - seems really strange

02:59:940 (1) - maybe buffer to blue tick? out of fairness since the previous pattern is pretty difficult
04:36:065 - intentional? honestly seems like theres a missing beat here
04:37:322 (1) - doesnt really show the switch to blue tick kicks here in the music since you map it to a slider end, previous patterns like 04:07:400 (1,2) - did this a lot better imo

poke when u replie
Topic Starter
Sing
applied eveyrthing abov^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
NeilPerry

Lavender wrote:

➤Ай-ай-ай-ай-ай, что сейчас произошло!
➤Это. Просто. Нечто.
Pentori
kairosu
Lavender

NeilPerry wrote:

Lavender wrote:

➤Ай-ай-ай-ай-ай, что сейчас произошло!
➤Это. Просто. Нечто.
➤Это ГГ
_MiaoFUuU_
AwEsOmE !!!
Gaia
sex
faygo
00:42:348

rip sb

not sure if its really sth major tho, great map nonetheless~
-Tochi

Faygor wrote:

00:42:348
image
rip sb

not sure if its really sth major tho, great map nonetheless~
have you tried to delete the map, and then download it again? (redownload) as mine doesn't look like that on that part:
faygo
ok my bad, i simply updated the map lol
Will Stetson

Gaia wrote:

sex
[-CeMAqpOP-]kee

Pentori wrote:

kairosu
wAIT THE PROBOX STREAM U HAVE TO FIX THE STREASM WHAT ARE U DOING MAN
YOU COULD HAVE PREVENTED THIS LOOK AT WHAT YOURE CLCIKING MAN
Arrival
02:09:050 (1) - ?

beautiful map nonetheless
Mir

Arrival wrote:

02:09:050 (1) - ?
1/3 snapped slider but where is the 1/3 sound :thonking:
Okoratu
fix broken slider
03:19:730 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - also this is the most awkward rhythm imaginable for what music provides here
Topic Starter
Sing

Okorin wrote:

fix broken slider
03:19:730 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - also this is the most awkward rhythm imaginable for what music provides here
fixed slider and simplified rhythm; i felt it was kinda akward too cuz i was trying to map all of those noises at the same time, so instead i just stuck to the clap hitsounds and made it simple 1/3 rhythm

edit: just waiting for -tochi to fix the sb then well b gud to go again
-Tochi
ok fixed
Topic Starter
Sing
good 2 go now
0x84f
Thanks for mapping this awesome song!
Doormat
I am sworn to carry your burdens.

can confirm changes have been properly addressed and applied, so rebubbled.
Pentori
Arrival
good luck
Halgoh
Finally ! Gratz !
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