Rokkea wrote:

ohello

Beginner

1. 00:54:725 (1,2) - Try to space the red nodes further apart, the music doesn't sound that powerful. (same applies to 02:22:675 (3,4) - ) Fixed~
2. 01:26:029 (1,2) - The hook shape plays out just like a typical cane shaped slider. Also, there's no blanket that warrants that hook shape, so might as well change it to a cane for cleanliness sake. Fixed~
3. 01:46:899 (3,4) - Move this to x:348 y:336 for a nice triangle spacing. Fixed~
4. 03:04:042 - Maybe add a circle here, as there's where the last vocal is. I lengthened the previous slider instead.

Easy

1. 00:45:781 (1) - Another one of those weird-moving sliders. Fixed~
2. 00:47:644 (2) - The reverse part of this slider sounds like a strong note, maybe try to make it clickable? Fixed~
3. 01:00:688 (1) - A lil pointless, but move it to x:312 y:192 for a perfect blanket. Fixed~
4. Your patterns in kiai mode (the 1st part at least) feels so empty.. I mean, isn't kiai mode like the hypest part of the song? I really recommend adding for beats, for example parts similar to : 01:14:104 (1,2) - could be a 1/1 reverse slider, 01:19:694 could have an extra note added in, 01:23:048 (1) - screams 1/1 slider instead. I didn't do exactly those things, but I did add more notes in both kiais.
5. 01:30:129 (5) - Strong beat is at slider end, similarly, try to make it clickable. Fixed~
6. 01:39:446 (1) - No point in the NC imo. (also you didn't do it at 01:43:918 (1,2) - ) Fixed~
7. 01:55:843 (1) - End spinner at 01:58:824 ? (just like how you did it at Beginner) Fixed~

Normal

1. 00:24:911 (1,2,3,4) - Why curve the sliders if the movement is a straight line? Fixed~
2. 00:31:992 (2) - Remove this note if possible as the sound here is the same as 00:24:911 (1,2,3,4) - . Fixed~
3. 00:57:334 - I feel like having a note here feels better. Fixed~
4. 01:10:936 (4,5) - This rhythm/circle order has been repeated twice already, I feel this could be more interesting if it's a slider instead of 2 circles. Fixed~
5. 02:07:396 (6) - Is that not a 1/2 rhythm, just like at 02:08:887 (2) - ? I think it's fine as it is. If I were to add it, it would look messy.

Hard

1. 00:17:458 (5,6,1) - Yoooooo, obey distance spacing please, try to keep everything at 1.0x (which is what you normally use). Fixed~
2. 01:11:682 (5,6,7,1) - Confusing spacing again, 4->5 and 5->6 has same spacing but one is 1/1 while the other is 1/2. 6->7 and 7->1 is 1/1 but with different spacing too. Also 01:12:241 (7) - can be a 1/4 buzz slider too if you want. Fixed, but what's a buzz slider?
3. 01:12:986 (1,2,1,1,2) - NC makes the pattern look a lot more confusing that it should be. Also this pattern suffers the same spacing issues, so perhaps this might be better. Fixed~
4. 01:34:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is definitely too hard for a 2.9 star map. Like legit, this is Insane-tier with it's full screen jumps and everything. Fixed by switching some objects around.
5. 01:37:769 - Sounds like a piano key to me. Fixed~
6. 01:42:427 (4,5,6,7) - Gah, this is the same thing as ^. Fixed~
7. 02:27:893 (1) - Over here, the NC is pretty okay, except for this one which I feel can be removed. Fixed~
8. 02:34:228 (6) - There's no 1/4 rhythm here I believe, just keep it at 1/2 and it should be fine. Fixed~

Insane

1. At the beginning, I think you can keep the rhythm consistent with the one you had at the start, 00:12:986 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (maybe remove 00:14:663 (2) - ). The reason is that those sounds are the strongest at this time, where's no lyrics. That really causes rhythm/patterns like 00:15:967 (1,2,3,4) - to make no sense. From 00:18:949 (1) - onwards the rhythm is pretty good though, no need to change that. Fixed a bit.
2. 00:24:166 (2) - A 1/1 slider fits this part better. Fixed~
3. 00:27:893 (1,2) - Same spacing issue I mention in Hard. Fixed~
4. 00:29:197 (5) - Maybe move this to x:264 y:20 for a nice straight line. This got changed.
5. 00:33:483 (3) - Same issue as mentioned ^. This might also cause the player to mistake 00:33:856 (1,2,3,4) - as a 1/1 rhythm, not 1/2. Fixed~
6. 00:38:700 (2) - Consider ctrl+g'ing this for a nice circular flow. Fixed~
7. 00:42:520 (4,5) - God this triplet makes me uncomfortable.. I feel like even stacking them under the slider end will be better. (or at least reduce the distance spacing) Fixed~
8. 00:49:135 (2,3) - SAME ISSUE. (i'll stop pointing these out now, i do hope you understand how important this issue really is) Fixed, I looked through the map and couldn't find any others.
9. 01:01:060 (2) - imo placing this under circle 3 plays out better. tooo many circles
10. 01:03:576 (1) - This sounds like 1/4, but a kickslider does not fit I feel. In fact, I don't think kicksliders fit this map at all. It doesn't sound like it to me anyway. (maybe i'm just dumb owell) Fixed, you're not dumb, my map is just really strange...
11. 01:13:917 (1) - IT'S TOO HIGH. Stacked with 01:14:104 (1) - this.
12. 01:36:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Triplets over here play out so much fun than this.. thing, I don't know what to call it. (same applies to every other similar pattern) Fixed~
13. 01:37:769 - Sounds like a piano key to me. Fixed~
14. 02:27:893 (1) - Maybe remove NC here, just like in Hard. Fixed~

One more thing I'd like to point out, the simple additions for the storyboard just makes the map feel so much more unique to me, good job on that.
With that said, good luck! Thank youuu~!!

-NikoNiko- wrote:

Hi from my modding queue

General

I don't care what all others say, blankets are my favorite patterns <3 That's why I like this map already Yesss! Thank you! this map is like 90% blankets!

Insane

It's really rare that I find maps with this cs, but I love smaller circles ^.^
I would also suggest you open AI mod with ctrl+shift+A, it will tell you 3 things I fixed the unsnapped note, but I don't think the kiai is a really a problem.
00:27:893 (1) - I would suggest putting this circle over the start of 00:28:265 (2) - mainly because it's more readable. Not necessary though. Fixed, I totally agree with that ^_^
00:42:520 (4) - Same here, but that might just be my contempt of this pattern since it has messed me up too many times already. Changed a bit~
00:44:663 (2,4) - Since those 2 sliders are exactly the opposite, I would 00:45:222 (3) - in the middle of them to make it look a lot cleaner It doesn't really make it look cleaner. The pattern is still readable. I want to give 00:45:408 (4) - this emphasis, so I'll make it the bigger jump.
00:47:644 (1) - Could also be placed a circle There's no reason. Besides, I love this slider ;_;
01:03:576 (5) - THE HATE, alright I will stop with that Fixed~
01:05:160 (1) - I don't quite get the NC here I used a NC every measure. So I'm pretty certain about them.
01:18:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really confusing, I would suggest you to replace it Fixed, even though I liked that pattern ;_;
01:30:501 (1,2,3) - The angle here differs from the angle right afterwards 01:30:874 (3,4,5) - Is that bad?
01:41:682 (3,4,5,6) - I would suggest making it more bent that it flows a lot better Fixed, I think~
01:44:663 (3,4,5,6) - I would suggest using DS here that the distance between 4 and 5 is the same as 3-4 and 5-6 for the flow I don't think that will really help flow, and I like the emphasis on (5).
01:55:843 (1) - I would make the spinner a little bit shorter that it's easier to catch the next circle Fixed~
02:21:930 (3) - Move this one closer to 2 and the 4 a tiny bit to the right Fixed~
02:33:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really really confusing, I would suggest using more common patterns for this or go with the vocals with sliders Fixed~
03:03:855 (9) - I don't understand the purpose of this 9 here, but you can leave it there There's a piano note there. I made the pattern there a bit more neat too.

Hard

02:52:303 (11) - I would remove this note because it can be really confusing if there is a triple and a double straight afterwards It may be hard to hear, but there is a piano note there, so I can't really remove it. Instead, I can unstack it.
01:12:986 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern might lead to confusion Fixed a bit~

Normal

01:42:427 (4,5,6,7) - Might go with something simpler than that to not confuse the newbs :^) It's just 4 circles, what makes that confusing?
02:18:949 (5,6,1) - This difficulty has a lot of times where you mapped a lot on red and white ticks, I would suggest keeping it only on the white ticks or once white tick-red tick since it's easier to press, it's alright if you want to keep it though This actually happens a lot in Normal. If it didn't, it would be too similar to Easy.
For parts like 02:34:601 (1,2,3) - It's alright to map like this Good to know.

Easy

00:26:029 (2) - You should make a circle here Fixed, I think~
00:32:179 (2) - Vocal already begins on the red tick, I would suggest something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4794717 and don't forget underworld monarchy :^) Fixed, but not not like that.
01:14:104 (4) - NC here I forgot XD Fixed~
01:18:576 (3) - Also weird since you don't map to the vocals (if you set playback to 50% or 25%) Fixed~
01:29:011 (1) - I would suggest back and forth slider because of vocals But it's okay how it is, and I like the way it looks.
01:55:843 (1) - Not sure about easy slider times but I think this one might be too short I'll see if someone else mentions it. I'm sure it'll be fine though.

Beginner

00:45:781 (3) - I would suggest a back and forth slider here Fixed~

Good luck for ranked ~ It's a neat song and quite a good map already

[C u r i] wrote:

[insane]
01:29:383 (2,4) - how about ctrl + g ? Fixed~

no kds
i can't mod this map.. it's too perfect ;w; sorry, i'll shoot a star for you

Silverboxer wrote:

from my modding queue. decided to mod this mapset instead of your other one because that one is pretty perfect

Easy

00:26:775 (3) - bad blanket Fixed~
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know why but this pattern feels too cramped. maybe move sliders 3 and 4 to the left and rotate. also I think sliders 3 and 4 should touch a bit further apart: http://puu.sh/nYOOJ/5c0e9792c5.jpg Fixed~
02:32:924 (3,4) - this could look a bit cleaner. either ctrl+j slider 4 or move it to x:296 y:296 I moved it.
02:48:017 (3,4) - fix this blanket. the sliders curve too much for it to work Fixed a bit. This is hard to notice.

Normal

01:28:452 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is really cluttered for a normal diff, especially one on the easier side as far as normal diffs go. maybe ctrl+h notes 3, 4 and 5 so everything isn't so close together. Fixed differently~
01:31:060 (6,7) - I don't think this is good in a normal diff either. maybe if they were only 1/2 apart it wouldn't be confusing Fixed by making the previous slider repeat~

Hard

00:17:085 (4,5) - much larger spacing than anything else in this section Fixed~
01:02:551 (6,1) - spacing too small here. seems awkward Fixed~
01:13:545 (3,4,5,1) - maybe distance snap here is too big as well? goes from 1.0 most of the map to 2.0 all of the sudden here. I know why this spacing is larger but this might be too much (especially after a stack of notes) Would unstacking fix the problem? I'll unstack it. It also makes the jump smaller.
01:21:557 (5,6,7) - this shouldn't be symmetrical because of the timing difference on these notes Fixed~
01:23:793 (3,4,5,6) - make these a tiny bit further apart. although ds is 1.0 here it looks much smaller than the rest of the section's notes http://puu.sh/nYPT6/461d0041c7.jpg Fixed~
01:42:427 (4,5,6,7) - when you have patterns like this it feels like it should be its own combo. most of the map has a nc every 2 measures or whatever but I don't know. maybe consider it for other patterns like this Or I could make the pattern less dramatic.
02:03:297 (5,6) - circle should not be here if it's 1/1 apart from the slider Fixed~
02:08:887 (2,3) - fix blanket Fixed~
02:14:477 (4,5) - too close together Fixed~
02:19:508 (8,1) - fix blanket Fixed~
02:32:738 (3,4) - maybe too large of a jump in ds here Fixed~

Insane

00:12:986 (1,2) - I think this rhythm could also be mapped like this: http://puu.sh/nYRak/0aa39d912e.jpg maybe replace some of these patterns with a rhythm like this? I think it fits the music better and can be good in some spots It kinda sounds strange, but I guess so...

I can't help much with the placement of notes on this difficulty because this mapping style is hard for me to give advice on. but certain parts are not mapped to the actual music very well. for example: 01:18:203 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is just a bunch of circles even though the music doesn't sound like 8 separate notes being played: http://puu.sh/nYRwr/89ff2973eb.jpg
in my opinion this part should be changed to something like this: http://puu.sh/nYRuB/43b2cd7ca2.jpg
make some random notes in the rhythm I showed and see if you like how it matches the music more. Okay, I fixed this one. I see what you mean. I looked through both kiais and improved the rhythm wherever I could.

this is the only real advice I can give on insane. hope you understand my point

nice mapset, good luck with it

6th wrote:

Hey, interesting style ! m4m.

SPOILER

[Beginner]
00:30:874 (1) - Move it a bit up ? For flow, right? Fixed~
02:12:241 (4) - Too far away from previous object Fixed~

Nice diff. Try adding more breaks. I don't think it's necessary.

[Easy]
Try adding more breaks I still don't think it's necessary.
00:21:930 (1) - Repeat this and add a circle on next white tick instead That doesn't really change the rhythm. Besides, I don't think I could without ruining flow or DS.
00:30:874 (1) - CTRL+H Fixed~
00:32:179 (2,3) - Doesn't fit to easy Fixed~
01:18:390 (3,4) - ^ Fixed~
02:32:924 (3,4) - ^ Fixed~
00:54:725 (1) - Place it under 00:51:744 (1) - I did the opposite. I placed the other over it.
01:49:880 - Add a circle here ? I wanna keep this part consistent. Adding a circle here would be inconsistent.
02:56:961 (2,3) - 4 circles instead I don't want to remove these blankets. Besides, that would be a bit hard for Easy.
03:03:297 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4843434 Fixed~

[Normal]
00:24:911 (1,2,3,4) - What do you follow here ? The lyrics, but only emphasized lyrics. I'll add some stuff to make it make it more clear.
00:56:216 - Use same pattern as at 00:54:725 - I changed it a bit.
01:12:241 (6) - Convert to 2 circles I don't want emphasis 01:12:613 - here.
01:19:135 (5) - Move it up Fixed~
01:47:831 (3,4) - CTRL+G I don't see how this improves the map.
01:55:843 (1) - Considering that there is only 1 break I think this spinner is too tiring Shortened~
02:05:160 (2) - CTRL+H I'd rather have it point at the next object.
02:23:048 (2,3,4,5) - Hard to follow Fixed~
03:04:228 - Add a circle here Fixed~
02:34:601 (1,2) - Why does it look so familiar... :/ I see what you mean, fixed~
02:37:582 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:13:545 - Slider here I want the rhythm in Hard to be relatively simple and easy to understand.
00:15:036 - ^ ^
00:16:526 - etc ^
00:17:458 (5,6) - 4 circles instead ? Fixed~
00:39:446 - You should map this too Fixed~
02:27:147 - ^ I don't think it's necessary.
03:03:297 - ^ Fixed~
00:57:334 - ^ Fixed~
01:14:104 (1) - It is too sudden I think I fixed it.
01:23:048 (1) - Move to (216;192) That ruins the blanket.
01:28:452 (6) - Spacing issue Fixed~
01:37:396 (7,8,9) - CTRL+G I don't think that helps.
02:27:520 (1) - Make it parallel to next sliders ? ^

Good luck !

Nephroid wrote:

M4M

SPOILER

Insane Diff

Replay: http://puu.sh/ocJrd/427b36c033.osr
General Thoughts: A bit slower than what I'm used to playing, but it was fun. It might be cool to have a few more combo colors that you use only when background changes color.

00:14:663 - 00:15:781 - It feels like there should be circles here. Added in both places~

00:24:166 (2) - 00:48:017 (2) - Just a personal preference, but it feels more satisfying when a clap plays at the same time as you hit something. (Change slider into two circles instead.) I think both claps are important there.

00:32:365 (1) - Move new combo to 00:33:483 (3) and remove new combo at 00:33:856 (1). It would make more sense with the music. (Though keeping symmetric colors might be more important (?). That would be inconsistent with what I have done. I used a NC every measure in Insane.

00:35:346 (1) - Remove clap on end of slider. Add claps to 00:36:092 (2,3,4) instead. Fixed, except there is already a clap on (4), and a clap on (3) would be too much.

00:47:272 (1) - Add clap. I don't think it needs that much emphasis imo.

00:51:744 (1) - 01:03:669 (1) - Add the hitsound from 00:48:762 (1). The finish? There isn't a finish noise (cymbal clash) in the music here, and there's no need to add one.

00:56:216 (1) - 01:08:141 (1) - Add the hitsound from 00:54:725 (1). ^

01:09:632 (1) - 01:10:377 (3) - A personal preference, but the almost-but-not-quite-right angle bothers me. Right angles in mapping bother me. No change.

01:10:377 (3) - 02:16:713 (1) - Not sure if intended, but the background changes size here. I'll fix this later.

01:12:613 (1,2) - I thought these sliders looked weird because they were too close together. I see what you mean, fixed~

01:21:371 (4) - Doesn't quite match up with the next slider. Not sure if intended. Adjusted a bit.

01:21:371 (4) - Feels empty without something here. I see what you mean, but it's intended because of the sudden pause in the lyrics.

01:49:880 - Add a circle with clap. That would make the start of the break inconsistent.

02:07:396 (4) - Clap here. That wouldn't really go with the music imo.

02:09:259 (1) - Add hitsound from 02:07:769 (1). There isn't a finish noise in the music here, and there's no need to add one.

02:16:713 (1) - Feels like it's missing a hitsound.It has a whistle, that should be enough.

02:48:762 (3) - Missing clap (?). Fixed~

02:52:489 (1) - Add clap. I added a finish.

Trent83 wrote:

M4M

Metadata

nothing yay~

[Beginner]

Beginner Diff

*This is a stupid advice but put the circle size in 1 it will be better in a beginner xDD I agree that CS should be as small as possible in Beginner. However, it's too late to change as it would create a loooot of overlaps. (btw, I think most mappers don't change CS unless it's unrankable.)

00:15:967 (3) -Why not create a full blanket? it will be better That is a full blanket. It's just not circular.
00:17:458 (4) - put this a little up for keep the flow The flow looks fine to me.
00:20:439 (2,3) - Fix this blanket The blanket looks fine. I made a slight adjustment.
00:30:874 (1,2) - try to use curve sliders for keep the flow its better (and the rect sliders doesn't look good in an easy or a normal for me xDD) Fixed, although it only helps flow a bit.
00:33:856 (3,4) - I think it will be better O.I.O.I.X.I.- (O= circle, I= a beat with nothing, X= Slider, -=End of the slider if isn't clear here is a puush xDD http://puu.sh/odVk0/1b9565003a.jpg&#41; Fixed~
00:37:955 (2) - Add a note? Not in beginner~
00:40:564 (5) - Add a note? ^
01:12:613 (5) - snap the timing and try to adjust the storyboard, add more scale, try to add pulses or take practice making storyboards I'll fix this later. I'll probably need you to help me in-game with this.
01:55:843 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit with the song Yes it does.
02:36:092 (2,3) - Weird flow This part was changed with another mod.
02:45:036 (4,1) - Fix flow It's not that bad here though.
02:49:508 (3,1) - Overlap I'm too lazy to fix this.

[Easy]

Easy Diff

00:15:967 (1) - Stack this on object 1 gives better flow Fixed~
00:15:967 (1,2,3) - Weird flow ^^^
00:20:066 (2,3) - this feels kinda weird It feels fine when I play it.
00:24:911 (1) - i recommend a 4 repeat slider You shouldn't use 4 repeating sliders though. They looks messy. Also, certain beats must not be mapped in Easy to maintain it being Easy, and 00:26:029 - this doesn't need to be mapped. In other words, not in Easy~
00:29:011 (2) - add a note ^
00:32:179 (2) - Snap this to the strong beat The vocal is the strong beat.
00:45:781 (1) - try to use the strong beat and reduce the time of this slider It's fine because it has points on all of the strong vocals.
***After there you must FIX A LOT OF STRONG BEATS I'm going by the vocals though...
01:12:613 (4) - note Fixed (with another mod)
01:18:390 (3,4) - weird flow and put the object 3 in the strong beat part changed with another mod
01:55:843 (1) - doesn't fit Yes it does.
02:10:750 (1,2,3,4,1) - weird flow I see what you mean. It's a circular flow done with linear sliders, which makes no sense at all. Silly me. Fixed~
02:13:732 (1,2) - Weird flow Fixed with previous.
02:25:657 (1) - Spinner I don't want to cover the sb.
02:29:756 (3) - add a note Not in Easy~
02:30:129 (4) - the arrow isn't necessary It feels necessary to me.
02:32:924 (3,4) - weird flow and snap the object 3 to the strong beat Same thing I said about lyrics. It is a strong beat.
02:34:601 (1,2) - Weird flow Adjusted slightly~
03:04:042 (5) - this isn't necessary please snap this to the next beat Emphasis at the end of the song.

[Normal]

Normal Diff

00:12:986 (1) - remember the inherit point Oh, Actually, there isn't supposed to be an inherited point there. I'm not changing the volume, SV, hitsounds, or anything, so it would be pointless. I'll remove it in other difficulties.
00:13:918 (2) - this is unnecesary It's there mostly for polarity.
00:15:408 (4) - Same ^
00:16:899 (2) - same ^
00:19:880 (2) - same ^
00:36:092 (4) - Ctrl+G for a better flow That makes the ds to the next object off. In fact, it points the wrong direction.
00:36:837 (1,2,3) - bad flow I made a slight adjustment. It's not really noticeable though.
00:43:918 (2) - use a combination of 2 circles Fixed~
00:53:234 (4,5) - Weird flow Fixed~
00:58:824 (2) - Add a note I think you meant 00:58:824 - here. Fixed~
01:16:526 (4) - No necessary it is for polarity
01:24:166 (3) - doesn't fit with the music Yes it does. Listen closely.
01:55:843 (1) - same It's a spinner.
02:38:328 (2) - same Adjusted slightly.
03:01:433 (1,2) - Weird flow Fixed~
03:04:228 (4) - try to erase this circle and re-snap the slider because the circle doesn't fit with the music That would be inconsistent. It's fine as it is.

Good luck men!
and remember: adjust the storyboard

Trent83 wrote:

Hello Page 2

Storyboard as Requested

SB Images

Osb txt

I really was trying to create an easy and fast storyboard so there you go!

Cirno-baka9 wrote:

From the worst modding queue. This is probably the first old styled map I actually like.

The reason I am not mapping some of your difficulties is because NM requests on my modding queue have a 9 minute limit, and the map is 3 minutes long, which means only 3 difficulties.

Bold is unrankable.
Red should really be fixed.
Orange should be changed.
Blue is just a suggestion.

That leaves just a few colors:
Green=Fixed
Purple=Not Fixed

Advanced

00:33:856 (1,2,3) - Sort of boring to play. Fixed~
01:20:067 (1,2,3) - These sliders look bad in my opinion. Fixed~
02:22:675 (1,2) - Turns are too sharp in my opinion. Fixed~
02:39:818 (6) - CTRL+G? I don't see why.
02:40:564 (1) - I hate 90 degree or near 90 degree sharp turns. Stretched out a bit.
02:46:154 (6) - I suggest you stack this on the beginning of the next slider. But... It is stacked on the next slider.
02:55:470 (1,2) - Could blanket better. This wasn't intended to be a blanket, but fixed somewhat~
Sorry for the terrible mod on this difficulty.

Hard

00:18:576 (8,9,1) - You shouldn't have 3 hitcircles in a straight line like this, make it a bit like the image below. Why not? It works well with the straight sliders it's around.

00:45:781 (1,2,3) - I dislike three of the exact same sliders going down, so I suggest changing this. Fixed~
01:43:918 (1) - Slider isn't very visually appealing. Maybe not, but it looks infinitely better than the alternative.
01:49:135 (1) - Curve on this could be improved, maybe something like the image below. Not that big of a change, but looks better. Fixed, I think.

Sorry for the terrible mod on this difficulty...again.

Insane

00:17:085 (5) - The only time I ever believe a slider that looks like this ever fits in a song is in a dubstep song, so I recommend changing, but that's only my opinion. I would, but I think the way it is now encourages flow more.
00:29:383 (1,2,3) - I dislike three of the exact same sliders going down, but this one is different than normal so I don't know what to say about it. Fixed~
00:42:800 (1,3) - I don't really like these sliders, but that's only my opinion. I'll see if anyone else says anything.
00:53:980 (3,4) - Again, these kinds of sliders don't really fit the song. Fixed and improved the flow~
00:56:216 (1,2,3) - Not really creative if you repeat the exact same thing two times. Fixed to something much better: a blanket~
01:09:632 (1,2,3) - I dislike sliders with such a sharp turn, but that's only my opinion. Fixed a bit~
01:17:085 (1) - Curve is so small that you can barely make it out, I suggest changing it so it's more like the image below. Fixed~

02:12:986 (3,4) - Sliders could be better. (Yes, it took me almost a whole minute to find another thing.) It's for flow, as mentioned above.
02:24:166 (1,2,3,4) - Could blanket better. Those are nooot blankets.
02:28:638 (1,2,3) - Again, these kinds of sliders don't really fit the song. Fixed, since it's not helping flow.
02:43:545 (1,3) - Sliders could be improved. If you mean that you want them more curved, then fixed~

Good luck getting rank! Here's a star. Thank youuu~

I hope my mod is of some use at least. It was very helpful lol ^^

rs_fadeaway wrote:

Hi,M4M from ur queue
btw, nice song~

[Beginner]
seems clear,sry, i havent mod a diff below Easy

[Easy]
00:30:874 (1,2,3) - rhythm not good here,u can just put 1/1 slider
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4) - same ^
02:31:620 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed all~

[Normal] I think this should have been Advanced...
01:14:849 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm here strange Fixed~
02:46:526 (1,2,3,4) - this is kinda hard to read ,fix it I don't think it is.
02:52:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - remake rhythem here like this? Fixed~

[Hard]
00:29:197 (4,5) - seems better to remake like this Fixed~
02:27:147 - add note or reverse slider to here，coz hard to read a 3/2 space for players Fixed~
02:46:154 (1,2,3,4) - how about put rhythm here like this？ Fixed~
03:03:949 (2) - is this the only 1/4 in diff？Fixed~

[Insane]
00:14:849 (3,4) - this music sounds good to put a anti-jump here, just suggestion. I don't want anti-jumps.
00:23:421 (1,2,1) - fill the space ，it has a lot of sounds to follow Fixed~
00:29:197 (4,1) - its looks a little crooked Fixed, I think~
00:38:700 (2) - need fix a little Fixed~
00:47:644 - i think i can guess why u space here, but u can also reduce the volume,to make it quite. so mb add a note here for the clearly vocal sound? Fixed~
01:25:843 - Can add a drum here( default finish), to connect 2 kiai. Fixed~
01:21:371 (4,1) - these stack? Yes
02:46:154 - here has a moe vocal like “kia”，i'd like to make a curve slider here with a little faster SV. Fixed somewhat
02:50:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - only this part is kinda hard，seems little hard for 4 star diff Fixed~
as a symmetry map, its good
about hit sound,i suggest to use a drum sound instead of whistle in KIAI time. I'll look at hitsounds in more detail later.

GL
Thank you so much! I'll mod your map ASAP.

1. 00:42:800 (1,2,3) - maybe move that to the middle, so 2 is on the y-axis
2. 01:14:104 (1) - this section seems kinda monotone, maybe add some 4/1 sliders/more repeatsliders for variation
3. 02:04:787 (3) - move that to center, stacking with 02:01:806 (1) -
4. 02:28:638 (1) - same as in the prior Kiai, it just feels kinda boring like this, however i may not be able to judge that properly, since i rarely play beginners anymore

1. 00:26:402 (2,3) - i'd remove that and make it a repeatslider, gives Starters more leeway to misstime their clicks
2. 01:15:595 (3,4) - same here, these are killers if you just started
3. 01:17:831 (2) - with this your bound to feel off because you skip the downbeat after - sure, stupid to fix that without 1/2 use, but like this it feels very weird to me ;w;
4. 02:32:365 (2) - uknoukno, same as before

1. 00:27:520 - are you sure about still skipping downbeats when youre already at Normal? - Sure, your decision, but I think you could expect players to be able to hit that by now ;3 - Not gonna mention others, to avoid cluster
2. 02:05:160 (2) - for this one maybe use 02:02:179 (2) - and mirror it? would look kinda sweet :3

1. 00:41:495 (3) - this is kinda unexpected, there should be something on 00:41:309 - for sure, so either move it, add another one, or rework it
2. 02:34:042 - i'd add a note here
3. 03:04:042 (2) - you have that as a clickable object in Advanced, consider making it circles here too

1. 02:39:446 (2,3,4,5,6) - WOAH, now that was kinda unexpected - Expect getting a ton of people failing here, this is quite the diffspike
2. 02:49:135 (3,1) - This is evil, consider ctrl+g'ing on 02:49:508 (1,2) -
3. 03:04:042 (4) - once more, please make that end hittable

1. 00:22:862 (4) - make that 1 repeat maybe

Asonate wrote:

M4M from my queue, totally not late or anything :3:

7 DIFFS, HOLY now no one can call me lazy

[Beginner]

1. 00:42:800 (1,2,3) - maybe move that to the middle, so 2 is on the y-axis Fixed~
2. 01:14:104 (1) - this section seems kinda monotone, maybe add some 4/1 sliders/more repeat sliders for variation I'll think about it. There's nothing that really stands out to me though.
3. 02:04:787 (3) - move that to center, stacking with 02:01:806 (1) - I don't see how is helping, but fixed anyway~
4. 02:28:638 (1) - same as in the prior Kiai, it just feels kinda boring like this, however i may not be able to judge that properly, since i rarely play beginners anymore Same response.

[Easy]

1. 00:26:402 (2,3) - I'd remove that and make it a repeat slider, gives Starters more leeway to mistime their clicks Fixed, I'll miss that pattern though.
2. 01:15:595 (3,4) - same here, these are killers if you just started
3. 01:17:831 (2) - with this your bound to feel off because you skip the downbeat after - sure, stupid to fix that without 1/2 use, but like this it feels very weird to me ;w;
4. 02:32:365 (2) - uknoukno, same as before Fixed all~

[Normal]

1. 00:27:520 - are you sure about still skipping downbeats when you're already at Normal? - Sure, your decision, but I think you could expect players to be able to hit that by now ;3 - Not gonna mention others, to avoid cluster
2. 02:05:160 (2) - for this one maybe use 02:02:179 (2) - and mirror it? would look kinda sweet :3 Fixed all~

[Advanced]
Should be good

[Hard]

1. 00:41:495 (3) - this is kinda unexpected, there should be something on 00:41:309 - for sure, so either move it, add another one, or rework it
2. 02:34:042 - i'd add a note here
3. 03:04:042 (2) - you have that as a clickable object in Advanced, consider making it circles here too Fixed all~

[Light Insane]

• 
  This was mapped yesterday... It'll probably be the worst.

1. 02:39:446 (2,3,4,5,6) - WOAH, now that was kinda unexpected - Expect getting a ton of people failing here, this is quite the diffspike Fixed, I decreased the spacing a tiny bit lol.
2. 02:49:135 (3,1) - This is evil, consider ctrl+g'ing on 02:49:508 (1,2) - I moved (3) instead.
3. 03:04:042 (4) - once more, please make that end hittable Fixed~

[Insane]

1. 00:22:862 (4) - make that 1 repeat maybe Fixed~

That's about it!
Solid map, nice to see some old styled maps again
GL