Icarogue wrote:

The title of the song is "You're On", not "You Are On".

Kami-senpai wrote:

Heyo M4M from my queue!

Will be doing Normal through Insane

Insane

Insane is 3.75* to 5.25*. This is still considered hard. Please increase the difficulty somehow. Working!

00:21:070 (1,2) - These seem too close together. Makes it a bit unpredictable. Fixed
00:22:870 (2,4) - If you listen at 50% speed, the vocals don't end on 1/3 snap like you made it. Please fix because it's weird. Fixed
00:28:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move these farther apart and align them in a nicer curve. It makes no sense how 00:28:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - these can be spaced so far while those five are so close. People might mistake them for a stream. Fixed all errors like this
00:28:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use the alt key to space these evenly Alt is love? xD
00:36:670 (11) - NC here fixed
00:52:420 (5,2) - Stack
01:05:770 (2,4,5,6) - Stack 6 with 2 and evenly space 4 5 and 6 fixeeeddd
01:25:270 (2,3,4) - Weird jump pattern. I was high when i did that pattern okno xD
01:29:770 (7) - NC
should put a note at 01:36:670 Added for more difficulty :3
01:40:870 (5,6) - 01:45:670 (5,6) - You should keep spacing consistent-ish with similar patterns and sounds. There's not a huge change in the music here, so I don't know why it's so close lol my mistake
02:06:520 (6,7,8) - Why space so weirdly xD
02:22:270 (2,4) - Stack
02:22:870 (4,5,6) - Again, weird pattern :'c
02:28:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make an even zig zag pattern done!
02:29:320 (4,5,2) - Stack the slider with one of the notes
02:38:770 (1) - Why the NC? xDDDDDDDD i can't explain It :S
02:39:370 (2,3,7) - Stack
02:40:870 (10,1) - Blanket properly fixed
02:44:770 (1,2,1) - Weird pattern. Also don't NC
02:48:670 (10) - Blanket this 02:48:070 (9) - Thanks

In general, I would say work on your aesthetics of the map. Keep spacing consistent for the most part. If you're going to do big spacing for 1/4 snap, don't mix it with small spacing. Stack objects more and make your sliders blanket more. This will make your map flow more smoothly and look better. The aesthetics can be the difference between a map looking amateur and a map looking professional. I'm noob :c

Hard

00:24:520 (4,5) - Keep spacing consistent
00:31:720 (4) - Align with rest of stream
00:33:070 (3,4,5,6) - Make these a square using ctrl shift D
00:37:270 (3,4) - Way too far apart
00:38:470 (6,7,8) - ^
00:39:670 (1,2,3) - Equally space
00:44:470 (3,5) - Stack properly
00:45:971 (7,4) - Stack
00:56:470 (1) - Start at 00:56:170
01:20:770 (3,4,5) - wtf is this lmao
01:33:670 (3,4,5) - ^ All fixed!

I'm gonna stop there since I think you get the idea. Like the other mods you had say, please please please check AI mod for spacing. Especially for lower difficulties, you're going to want to keep spacing consistent. The alt key is your friend! Please use him!

Also, just as I stated in Insane, please work on the aesthetic portion. In 5+* map, you can get away with not stacking or not blanketing some notes, but hard, normal, and easy difficulties really depend on the aesthetic portion.

Normal

00:25:270 (2,3) - Blanket
00:31:871 (7) - NC
00:28:270 (2,3) - This seems spaced a little too far and 00:27:070 (1,2) - This a little too close
00:35:470 (5,1) - Ugly overlap
00:39:670 (5) - NC
00:41:770 (1) - No NC
00:43:870 (5) - NC
00:48:520 (6,7) - A little too hard for Normal
00:51:070 (1,2) - Spaced a little too close
00:53:770 (1) - NC off
01:00:670 (5,6) - Make these symmetrical using ctrl c then ctrl v then ctrl h
01:07:870 (5,6) - Spaced too close compared to notes before
01:25:870 (5,6) - Blanket
01:43:870 (6,1,2) - Don't stack
01:59:470 (2,3) - Too close
02:07:870 (3,1) - Good blanket, do your other blankets like these
02:09:670 (2,3) - Don't stack
02:16:570 (2,3) - Too close
02:19:870 (2,3) - Align vertically
02:21:070 (4,1) - Blanket
02:28:270 (6,7,1) - Don't stack Fixed this besides of some parts of the beatmap

The problem with all your difficulties is spacing. I can't stress this enough. For normal difficulty, spacing is imperative to allow predictability for new players. Those who just start out might panic when they see a note super close to another one. Even though AI mod doesn't say anything for this diff, do fix all spacing.

Aesthetics again! use more fancy sliders and blankets. Stack notes that are 2 beats apart. well

That's it from me! Good luck!

Regraz wrote:

M4M from your queue!
My Map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/404283

[General]
Background should be 1024X768 for 4:3 or 1366X768 for 16:9

The video's audio track must be removed from the video file. This is according to the ranking criteria. Fixed!



[Easy]
00:16:870 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time after the spinner. In easy it has to be over 2 beats.

00:23:470 (6) - Normally three points are enough to form a slider to prevent making its shape weird like this.

According to ranking criteria, spacing in Easy should be consistent for the entire diff. So 00:29:470 (1) - this is not nice with 0.8x from previous note and 1.0x to latter note. i'm working in Fixing errors like this

[Normal]
00:21:670 (4,2) - This overlap is not visibly nice. http://puu.sh/oAQle/00b285a797.jpg You could avoid that.

00:25:270 (2,3) - Making blanket will make your map looks neat: http://puu.sh/oAQnT/277e872470.jpg Working about It

00:27:070 (1,2,3) - Spacing should be placed according to the rhythm. the empty between 1 and 2 in rhythm is longer than 2 and 3 yet they are closer in the screen, that would cause confusion. fixed!

[Hard]
00:24:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you want to use stream pattern here, make them in the same spacing. Actually you dont have to place notes one by one, just place a slider first at where you want to create a stream and then click "Compose" and then "Convert Slider to Stream" I didn't know about that lol

You could also create polygon jump patterns by "Compose" "Create Polygon Circles" This very convenient and could save your time a lot!

Also I recommend you to read the article regarding flow here: t/86329
It could help you a lot in pattern organizing!

Good Luck!

100bit wrote:

Hey, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.

Song and beatmaps

Fix hitsounds: if you want Soft, make all map in Soft
If you don't use this song starting from 02:58:270 , you can cut mp3

Easy

I see a lot of mistakes with Distance Spacing. Set right DS (hold Alt and change in the upper right corner) and fix all mistakes in AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+Alt -> Check distance snap) FIXED!
00:30:670 (3,1) - make normal blanket fixed
00:31:870 (1) - remove nc why?
00:33:070 (3,1) - make identical sliders fixed
00:39:670 (6) - set nc here and remove nc in 00:40:870 (1) fixed
00:48:070 (3,1) - don't stack fixed
00:52:270 (5) - nc f i x e d
00:53:470 (7,8) - make identical sliders done
00:59:470 (2,2) - it's stack, but it's overlap at the same time paradox okno fixed
01:04:270 (2,3,4) - strange pattern fixed (?)
01:12:670 (1,3) - don't overlap
01:21:670 (5,6) - make identical sliders
01:24:070 (1,3) - don't overlap and fix 3
01:25:870 (3,2) - ^
01:30:670 (5,6) - swap, because it's not corresponds to music
01:31:270 (6,2) - blanket
01:36:070 (1) - remove nc here and set nc in 01:37:270 (2)
01:50:470 (6,7) - don't stack
01:55:870 (1) - you don't need nc here
02:06:070 (2,4) - it's stack, but it's overlap at the same time
02:09:070 (5) - nc
02:17:470 (3,4) - align or normal-curved sliders
02:26:470 (3,1,2) - strange pattern again All fixed
02:28:870 (2,2) - don't overlap
02:36:670 (5,1) - ^

Normal

Same - you have mistakes with Distance Spacing. Fix it.
00:25:270 (2,3) - make normal blanket
00:33:371 (3,5) - strange stack
00:35:470 (6,1) - don't overlap
00:58:271 (3) - nc
01:03:070 (7,1) - strange flow
01:05:470 (2,3) - ^
01:08:470 (6) - set nc here and remove nc in 01:10:870 (1)
01:11:470 (2,4) - don't overlap and fix 4
01:21:070 (5,6,7) - make one reversed slider
01:24:670 (4,5) - make identical sliders
01:27:070 (6) - set nc here and remove nc in 01:28:270 (1)
01:33:070 (2,3,4) - make one reversed slider
i can't mod starting from 01:37:270 (1)
01:57:070 (3,1) - stack? seriously?
01:58:270 (4,1) - set ncs right
02:01:870 (4) - end in 02:02:470
02:06:670 (2,3) - make identical sliders
02:14:770 (2,3) - set ncs right
02:17:470 (3,1) - ^
02:24:670 (5,1) - ^
02:28:870 (1) - fix
02:47:470 (6) - align
02:46:870 (5) - nc
02:53:470 (1) - end in 02:55:870

sorry... i can't mod Hard and Insane, because... if i mod this, i'll get very big mod... and i can't mod this for some reasons...
Good luck!
{end of mod}

Regraz wrote:

Send your code of Normal via pm.

1. 00:43:270(6)
2. 00:55:270(5)
   If my ears do not let me down, this two sliders must be just a little longer.

polunochnik wrote:

Hi! M4M
General: don't make combos so long. You can brave to put new combo when vocal becomes stronger, for example Easy 02:48:670(6) and 02:46:270(4).

Easy
01:25:870(9) - make this slider shorter twice and add reverse arrow. This should looks great because the singer emphasizes the words "your heart". Done!

Normal
Put slider from 00:24:070 to 00:24:370 and add reverse arrow. You'll be need delete 2 circles because of that but result should looks nice! in my opinion it's fine

1. 00:43:270(6) Fixed
2. 00:55:270(5) Fixed
   If my ears do not let me down, this two sliders must be just a little longer.

Insane
All previous difficulties started from 00:16:870 and that was right decision! Make the same for insane. Between downloading of map and starting of gameplay should be space at least 2-3 seconds.

All the way i felt some discomfort because of slow sliders. You should increase speed for insane difficulty from 1,4 to at least 1.7. Because of that you'll need replace a lot of object, but map will will be felt much better.

There are problems with health bar. Make smaller HP drain rate or better replace positions of new combo (look general). Successful completion of the combo increases the health bar because it's very important to put them correct.

I will probably make It again because of the stars and some ugly patterns

Thank you for modding

I hope my mod will be useful!
Good luck!

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~ M4M from my modding Queue

[Easy]
00:19:870 - add circle here didn't add because It's an easy diff
00:36:070 (6) - NC
01:24:070 (6) - ^
01:34:870 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:51:670 - 01:55:270 - why insert break here? i preffer you add circles and sliders here I like as It is :c
02:15:070 - add circle here the same
02:33:670 (1) - remove NC and put NC here 02:34:270

[Normal]
00:29:470 (4) - NC
00:58:270 (3) - ^
01:05:470 (9) - ^
01:08:470 (13) - ^ all fixed
02:30:670 (9) - ^
02:52:870 (5) - ^

[Hard]
00:34:570 (7,1) - dont stack them fixed
01:46:570 - 01:55:270 - because this is hard diff so i preffer dont insert break time here i will consider It
01:57:070 - dont start kiai time here lol fixed
02:15:070 - kiai time must start here yes
02:49:570 - add something around here added

GL ~

Kinshara wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue!

Hard

1. AR + 1 would be really beneficial for this map! Also OD -1 & HP - 1
2. You might want to turn off widescreen support since you don't have a storyboard. Make sure to turn this off in all of your difficulties.
3. Also use a blank slider slide to cancel the rough slider noise. Enable custom hitsounds in song setup under Audio & add http://puu.sh/p9IMf/cfc996ad15.wav to the song folder. Speaking of hitsounds, you need to hitsound your map better! You should start by adding claps where necessary then finishes and whistles.
4. 00:21:520 - you're following vocals but you don't map this vocal sound :< 00:23:920 - same here. Basically figure out what you want to map and be consistent with it.
5. 00:24:070 (5,6,7,8) - this is an ugly overlap with the previous slider. Clean this up.
6. 00:24:520 (8,9) - don't increase the spacing in a stream like this in a hard difficulty.
7. 00:28:870 (5,1) - clean this overlap. 00:30:070 (1,2,1) - here as well. basically make your map neater in terms of overlap. Why not try stacking objects?
8. 00:47:170 (4,5,6,7) - Stay consistent with your spacing. Why do you suddenly change your spacing? Use distance snap, especially in a hard difficulty. You can have more freedom in an Insane but try to be more conservative in hard. Also, your map suffers from weird spacing, so make sure you use that distance snap. Only break distance snap when it makes sense like when there's a strong beat you want to emphasize or you want a specific flow.
9. 01:01:270 (7,1,2) - NOOOOO. Do not increase spacing like this for a 1/4 gap in a hard difficulty. 01:03:670 (1,2,3) - same here. Stuff like this in a hard difficulty does not fly. There are many areas where you do this, fix it.
10. 01:57:070 (3,4) - reason for this gigantic spacing? When you increase spacing, there should be a legitimate reason... what are you trying to emphasize in the music?
11. 01:57:070 - i don't think kiai needs to start this early... (make sure you change this in all your diffs for consistency)
12. 02:12:670 - would make more sense to end the spinner here
13. 00:24:670 - start NC here instead of the next beat. In general, the rule is to start a new NC on every big white tick in insane and hard difficulties and a new NC on every OTHER big white tick on normal and easy difficulties.
14. Now using the rule I've told you, fix these: 00:29:470 (1,2,1) - 00:31:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 00:34:870 (1,2,1) - 00:38:470 (6,7,8,1) - 00:50:470 (5,6,7,1) - and there a lot more, but I'll let you find those.
15. So, in general... you obviously know some basics of mapping and you know how to manipulate rhythm, but you really really need to work on aesthetics and spacing. Once that's outta the way, the map's pretty much done!

Normal

1. OD - 1 & HP -1 please!
2. You shouldn't use the same SV for a normal as you did for a hard... try a lower SV like 1.1 (you will have to remap but that's the cost you'll have to pay)
3. 00:25:270 (2,3) - try blanketing 2 around 3.
4. 00:42:371 (4,5,6) - please no 1/4 sliders in a normal or easy!! Fix these wherever you find them. Basically, do not use 1/4 rhythm in an easy or normal (now this rule doesn't apply if you're mapping "double bpm" but that's a whole different story and you don't need to be concerned with that for now).
5. 00:43:570 (7,8) - it's really difficult for new players to hit 2 circles that are 1/2 gap away. Try making this into a slider.
6. 00:53:470 (1) - you break your 1.0x distance snap here! It's extremely important to keep your distance snap in an easy or normal! You should not break it for these types of difficulties ever. Please fix wherever you find them.
7. 01:03:070 (7,8) - clean this pattern up please, it doesn't overlap nicely.
8. 01:25:870 (5) - there would be a better flow if you ctrl+G this slider... you'll have to rearrange the next few objects though.
9. Remember the NC advice I gave for normal and easy difficulties above? Now apply that info to this normal difficulty and fix your NC issues such as those at 00:21:670 (4,1,2,3,1) - and 00:43:870 (8,1,2,3,4,1) - and continue on. Remember, NC every other major white tick. Start from the beginning of your map and NC along the way.
10. So... I won't be blunt, this normal needs a remap (especially if you change the SV)!!!!

Easy

1. OD - 1 & HP - 1 please!
2. Again, your SV needs to be different for your easy difficulty. Usually people go with a 0.7 or 0.8 for easy difficulties. Again, if you change your SV, you'll need to remap.
3. 00:25:870 (3,5) - try cleaning up the dirty overlap of the slider ends.
4. Easy is not too bad! I would say that you need to clean up some of your patterns and maybe try some new ones. Look at other easy difficulties out there and see if you can incorporate some patterns into your map. Blanketing is pretty common in Easy difficulties, so make sure to use that. It makes the map a lot more pleasing. Rhythm-wise, your easy is fine. You don't go too crazy. NCs need to be fixed, so make sure you use that rule I told you about! Good luck!

Hope this mod was useful!

[ M I N A K O ] wrote:

Hello! Here from M4M!

Easy

00:38:470 (3,4) - Looks like a slider should be better completely yes
00:39:670 (1,2,5,3) - Try to make some circular sliders i will consider
00:46:870 (1,2,3) - Can you make the second one a little up? i will remake the map u.u
00:52:270 (5) - NC for NC i will consider the rule from the mod that is up xD
01:02:470 (3) - Circular slider
01:04:270 (2,3) - More like that *-* working on It :3
01:06:670 (4,1) - Yet this one should be a little down
01:30:670 (5) - NC
01:32:470 (1) - NC off
01:34:870 (4) - NC
01:42:670 (2,3) - Make a slider which is like White-Red-White
01:46:870 (3) - Circular slider

Normal

00:26:770 (15) - A slider should start here and finish at 00:27:670 -
00:36:070 (33,34,35) - That looks bad to hear
01:01:570 (6) - Delete this slider
01:03:370 (9) - Same
01:06:370 (15) - Circular slider
01:15:070 (29,31) - Make a slider who goes from 29 to 31
01:27:370 (52) - Make it from 52 to 01:27:670 -
01:31:270 - Make a circle with a clap here
01:39:070 (67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74) - It looks kinda hard for a Normal almost all fixed :3
02:00:670 (10) - Slider

That's all for me, hope my mod was helpful! It was!

jack5osu wrote:

Background video does not work in Normal difficulty. Check all other difficulties too.

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! M4M from my queue!

Easy

00:46:270 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:270 (1,2,1,2) - Make somethisg like this:
00:54:070 (2) - Make this slider like:
01:11:470 (3) - ^
02:24:070 (3,1) - Blanket improve
02:34:270 (2,4) - Make stack here All Fixed!
02:36:070 (4,1) - Blanket improve

Normal

00:25:570 (2) - Move it to x:220 y:144, make end at x:184 y:120 and move 00:26:170 (3) to x:236 y:220.
00:27:070 (1,3) - Stack??
00:34:270 (1,2,3,4) - Make this pattern like:
00:43:870 (1,2) - Blanket improve
00:48:970 (2,3) - Blanket it??
01:00:070 (3) - Move it to x:140 y:253
01:01:570 (2,3) - Overlap
01:08:470 (2,3) - Blanket improve
01:17:170 (1) - Remove NC
01:17:470 (2) - NC
01:20:170 (2,3,4) - Make this sliders parallel All fixed too
01:27:370 (6) - NC
01:35:770 (3) - Make two 1/2 sliders, cuz it looks old
01:39:070 (1,2,3,4) - Make it like square

Now is like a square jeje

Hard

- DS
This diff is too bad to mod.
Look at this three forums and remap this diff. I've seen the forums and i'm going to remap this today

Flow Tutorial 1

Flow Tutorial 2

blanket guide

END!
GOOD LUCK!