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Fabi
Star!
Heatherfield
nice ;)
loli_milk
fun :)
Lalarun
:oops:
Cat
Nyan
Vendemmia
Star ~
m i z u k i
:oops:
Melancholy
いえい
PeaChick
god !!!!
NanBu
;) star
vivicat
☆ミ
eMJaReL
nice^^
Sure
[General]
- Almost timing points aren't snapped. Please fix them.
- I couldn't find any hitfinish sound. Adding some finishes would be nice.


[Hard]
00:13:720 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - In this stream, 8+4+4 is more making sense than 6+4+6.
00:30:083 (3,4) - combine to a slider


[Normal]
00:01:026 (1) - (bug) add new combo or make it again.
00:40:652 (1) - ^


[Easy]
00:01:026 (1) - (bug) add new combo or make it again.
01:58:940 (1,2,1) - chage them to like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87608


Star :D
Shiro
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fgix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
  1. Okay, that's extremely nazi, but make the audio lead-in 2,000 exactly in all diffs ?
  2. I'm not sure this background is rankable. If you can, change it.
  3. I have an offset of 4471.
Easy
  1. The first spinner hardly makes sense to me. I think it would be better to start the map at 00:04:716 (1) -
  2. There is a whole part of the map that has no hitsounds (or none that I could hear, it only seemed to be normal hit all way long).
  3. 01:24:288 - This break is really long - can't you map something in it ?
Normal
  1. The first spinner hardly makes sense to me. I think it would be better to start the map at 00:04:716 (1) -
  2. 01:53:165 (2,3,4) - Confusing spacing: I was absolutely sure these were 1/4s. Spaced them normally.
  3. 01:24:288 - This break is really long - can't you map something in it ?
Hard
  1. The offset is not the same in this diff. Fix it.
  2. This doesn't play like a Hard at all. Name it Insane.
  3. 00:01:046 (1,2,3,1) - This beginning really doesn't make sense to me. You should start the map at 00:04:736 - imo.
  4. 00:14:361 (1,2) - I didn't see these two repeat sliders when playing, so I combobroke here and didn't even understand why. I think you should make them circles.
  5. 01:24:308 - This break is really long - can't you map something in it ?
    I like a lot - really - your anti-jumps, like 00:25:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it plays really fine, has a great flow, and fits the song.
Hard - which is actually Insane - has some very good stuff in it. The two other diffs are okay. Good job.
Remember to resnap all notes and all timing sections.
Alace
OnosakiHito
Love the Taiko diff..
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Thanks for Taiko and Mod ;D
Jerry
awesome map :)

star~
Alace
Timing is a bit off
i suggest +10 ms to your offset,
you need to move all of your timing lines and resnap all notes

i used some 1/3 divisors, so i resnapped my diff

Download: HIDEKI - CurriculuMachine (Kiiwa) [Alace's Taiko].osu
Aenna
yeah
taNa
:P
neryu_old
star~~
S o r d a
hi

[overall]:
  1. osb delete?
  2. BG800*600 I'll resize use this~
  3. Where do you use this BG for? BG name White
[Hard]:
Fine

[Normal]:
  1. AR-1
  2. 00:13:710 (1) - Green Line Volume 20%?
  3. 00:52:854 (1) - remove New combo 00:53:175 (2) - Newcombo
  4. 00:53:817 (1) - Remove New combo
  5. 01:03:763 (1) - add finish?
  6. 01:24:458 - unused timing section
  7. 01:53:496 (4,1) - Spacing
  8. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/89952Suggestion
[Easy]:
  1. You must not change spacing in Easy
  2. HP,AR,OD+1
  3. 00:17:560 (4,1,2) - Why does this spacing change?
+star
Fight~

arien666
[Easy]
:3

[Normal]
00:19:164 (5) - [Suggestion] It covers next slider so why don't you move this like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/90189 :3?
01:19:485 (1,2,3) - [Nazi] Spacing orz

[Hard]
00:23:175 (3,4,5) - Intended spacing miss ;_;?
00:46:277 (3,4,5) - ^

[Alace's Taiko]
@.@



:3
Topic Starter
Kiiwa

S o r d a wrote:

hi

[overall]:
  1. osb delete? ok
  2. BG800*600 I'll resize use this~ thanks!
  3. Where do you use this BG for? BG name White
...for kiai

[Hard]:
Fine

[Normal]:
  1. AR-1 ok
  2. 00:13:710 (1) - Green Line Volume 20%? ok
  3. 00:52:854 (1) - remove New combo 00:53:175 (2) - Newcombo ok
  4. 00:53:817 (1) - Remove New combo ok
  5. 01:03:763 (1) - add finish? ok
  6. 01:24:458 - unused timing section ...for kiai
  7. 01:53:496 (4,1) - Spacing no
  8. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/89952Suggestionno
[Easy]:
  1. You must not change spacing in Easy
  2. HP,AR,OD+1 ok AR+1
  3. 00:17:560 (4,1,2) - Why does this spacing change?it plays better
+star
Fight~
Thanks ^_^

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
:3

[Normal]
00:19:164 (5) - [Suggestion] It covers next slider so why don't you move this like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/90189 :3? ok
01:19:485 (1,2,3) - [Nazi] Spacing orz ok

[Hard]
00:23:175 (3,4,5) - Intended spacing miss ;_;? Yup~
00:46:277 (3,4,5) - ^ no...

[Alace's Taiko]
@.@



:3
Thanks ^_^
SS_Kanzaki
good map ><
taka1235
star for goodmap :)
Lizbeth
ETERNAL BAKA!!

delete file: white.png and full submitt >.> then i ll bubble~~
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Done ;D
Hinacle
very good :)

star~!!
_Kiva
:D :D :D
Lizbeth
ok~ here we go~
jericho2442
your song ends at 02:17:881 yet your mp3 is 03:16:360 long, this is pushing empty space abit too far and it needs cutting shorter, if you need a hand cutting it just pm me

Hard
00:07:293 (1,2,3) - move these a lil closer so they have the same spacing as the combo before

Hard
i would like to suggest one thing for you to think over, i would advise to give the 1/4 streams a visible spacing difference to the antijump streams, its really confusing to know which is which when they both have identical spacing


and here is a taiko BG for you, the taiko looks abit odd without it xD

Alace
hey
do you check that i map the whole song lol
rofl

plz use the old mp3~ or you need to delete my taiko diff www
jericho2442
O_o then some crrrazy thing must of happened to my pc, im sure they was all 2:15 O_o since i even doubled checked everyone of them

well my deepest apology( guess i just sucked bad >_>), up the old mp3 back and i will rebubble this

EDIT: all looks fine now Rebubbled
Starrodkirby86
Maaan, this is sexy. Not talking about the guy too.

I was first expecting something a little insane and overmapped (saying that in a negative manner), but I found it instead very creative and clean! It's wonderful. There's a sort of evil jump in star rating from [Easy] to [Normal], but that's not a problem because they do fit their names. It's probably just because of the BPM.

Those anti-jumps in [Hard] really defined the map. For people who would need to better themselves against this type of technique, this map is perfect for them.

Alace, your Taiko difficulty was pretty neat as well. I'm not very good at Taiko, but I really loved some of the patterns you put there. They weren't the usual sort of Taiko patterns I would generally see. Props to you.

BAMMMMMMMM CONGRATS ON YOUR FIRST RANKED MAP BRO
eveless

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Maaan, this is sexy. Not talking about the guy too.

I was first expecting something a little insane and overmapped (saying that in a negative manner), but I found it instead very creative and clean! It's wonderful. There's a sort of evil jump in star rating from [Easy] to [Normal], but that's not a problem because they do fit their names. It's probably just because of the BPM.

Those anti-jumps in [Hard] really defined the map. For people who would need to better themselves against this type of technique, this map is perfect for them.

Alace, your Taiko difficulty was pretty neat as well. I'm not very good at Taiko, but I really loved some of the patterns you put there. They weren't the usual sort of Taiko patterns I would generally see. Props to you.

BAMMMMMMMM CONGRATS ON YOUR FIRST RANKED MAP BRO

Hard is better than others tho...

yeah i've FCed it...i guess it's not too hard...and the anti-jumps really fit the music...not overmapped :3

congrats moe kiiwa
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Thanks everyone~
bakabye too
Lizbeth
Congratz baka, good job<33 =D ilu
NatsumeRin
congrats~!
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