1. Easy (2.11 stars, 96 notes)
2. Hard (4.44 stars, 190 notes)
3. Insane (4.83 stars, 294 notes)

wmfchris wrote:

[Normal+]
0:39:107 (1,2)stack properly
1:11:738 (1) down 1 grid to make it symmetrical

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Normal+

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00:20:159 (2,3,4) - Move these sliders around. I can't see which direction 2 goes in first. I was just reading up on how much these suck. Fixed
01:15:774 (3,4,5,6) - These jumps would be too confusing for a normal. That's why it's a normal+. If it's too hard for a hard, then I can change it/spread them out a little.

Insane

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00:36:651 - Make a Kiai time start here. End it at 00:46:300. I like it, but I just realized Kiai doesn't scale with 2x BPM. I'll see about doubling the time to bring out the kiai more.
00:48:581 (2) - This rent slider is too damn high. I hate paying rent. Fixed in 3 spots.

Great map

IceBeam wrote:

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Hi,sorry for delay.

What's sliderfollowcircle.png file for? I can't see any other slider skin files.
Remove this file if you won't skin sliders as well. Okay.

[Easy]
Normal hitsounds are a bit loud. It's the same volume for the rest of the maps. Are you sure? I can barely hear them.
00:35:247 (1) - Nooo,remove it or continue to 00:36:651. I was just waiting for someone to comment. I extended it a beat on both ends.
Also,remove unused timing sections. Left over from other difficulties. They're gone.

[Normal +]
00:43:317 (5) - Stack it properly. done. However, it's being moved due to the stack leniency down and right now, instead of up and right.
01:09:458 (2) - It may be confusing to average players. Curse you Kurosaki Maon for singing everything on the offbeat! Normal+ is for above average, is it not? I'll move it to hard.

[Insane]
Pretty nice.

The main problem is hitsounds.
You must add them. I was planning on not using hitsounds as I did not think they worked in the map. Clearly I am mistaken and will fix these post haste. I was not aware they were that necessary when each beat does have audible feedback.
Good luck,star~

Licnect wrote:

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Are you sure you have finished this map ? Yes. I hit a wall where I could do nothing else, and I care more about beat placement than aesthetics. There are some deaf players who could care less what each note sounds like. On my next map I'll wait longer in WIP.
Why i can not hear hitsound If by finishes, whistles and claps, there are none. I explained earlier that I did not like them. I will add them now. If you mean the hit sounds are too soft in the Normal sound sections, then I will have to disagree.
and sorry can't mod this map. If it's because of the hitsounds I hope you will mod when I finish them all off.

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

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[general]

all sound-changing timing points must be at least 1/4 beat before the note meant to be changed (excluding slider repeats, slider ends and spinner ends) I did not know this. Thanks. Do you know the reason?

[easy]
rename [normal], this is too hard to be an [easy] That's certainly an option, but I'd like to make this easy. I have revamped easy tremendously, taking out most of the offbeat notes which require hits and replaced them with either something onbeat or a slider which ends on the half beat. If it's still too hard it's going to be normal.

[normal+]

yes, just make this [hard] It's looking that way.

00:22:966 (2,3) - stack endings properly? This is impossible without making the distance incorrect. I've fixed it (hopefully) but that introduces a distance problem.
00:43:317 (5) - stack on the end of (4) if you want I snaked the slider because it's not snapping to the grid properly.
01:09:458 (2) - i dont think you're allowed to have a slider almost completely overlap another one. I thought it was okay just so long as you knew where it was supposed to go. I'm unsure enough to fix it though.
01:14:545 (1,2) - ^ see ^

[insane]

01:21:390 (1,2,1) - im not sure if this is allowed either...I really liked this when testing. It's lost it's touch now. I won't fix it yet, but I might get rid of it.

the rest is good, starring

dksslqj wrote:

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[Easy]
00:29:458 (7) - this is confusing me
01:21:388 (3) - add new combo

This map has many 1/2 beat;;;;

This is Normal!!

[Normal+]
00:10:510 (4) - Please don't use this style in Normal. Fixed.
00:43:317 (5) - ?? You can know why I mention it Fixed.
01:14:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Please don't use this style in Normal I think I'll change it to hard, and I did something slightly different there.

[Insane]
00:09:458 (6) - add new combo done.
00:17:352 (2,3,4) - ............. how did that happen? Fixed.


Ok.. where is hit sound? soon

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

The "Easy" is a bit "Normal" ... but you can consider it Easy.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Create the "Normal" difficulty to complete the set and have a more full difficulty curve?
and if you want i can create the normal ^.^

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
Streams at 01:03:317 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:08:931 (1,2,3,4) - or like this(it should be more like your mapping style.. i think)

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HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Hard]
00:05:598 (8) - You can consider to make the spinner start from here and delete this note
00:20:159 (2) - Consider to horizontal flip this ^.^, i didn't read that the start is from left almost all the time
01:28:054 (5) - You can substitute this with a spinner... if you want ^.^

MoonShade wrote:

Insane
00:11:914 (5,6) - i would suggest a distance space of 0,6 for those fast circles, also at 00:12:177 (7,8) and the following

MoonShade wrote:

Easy
00:09:809 (3) - i would put this more to the bottom left, looks nicer there
00:15:949 - cou could add a circle
01:08:230 (5,1,2) - maybe those can be moved more to the bottom

MoonShade wrote:

I hope this could help you. Very nice map, star :3

Jagang wrote:

01:21:212 (2,1,2,1,2) - don't like this overlapping

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

ended the diff .. but should mod it some more ^.^

Weezy wrote:

General
- bg2.jpg and bg3.jpg should be 800*600 (like bg1.jpg) A little letterboxing never hurt anyone. To make them 800x600 without stretching I'd have to crop it.
- The first Kiai Time placement seems like it doesn't belong. The second one is perfect alone. I can't even tell Kiai's on.
- Disable "Letterbox during breaks" not being used It's on by default, and it doesn't change anything since there are no breaks. The only reason to disable it is if you DO use breaks and you want to disable letterboxing.

Easy
- IMO this diff should start at the same time as Hard and Insane Having the song start immediately is a bit hard, so I wanted break time on the easy one
00:48:230 (5) New combo done and MANY others

Hard
01:08:581 (7) up one grid It's up 2 grids, but I don't want it to be in the middle

Insane
- For the second kiai time, snap it Went through and resnapped them all
01:22:089 (1,2) Flip horizontally (ctrl+h) looks better Thanks for the tip.

Wiinter wrote:

ohi ^.^

• ● Delete 00:36:475 ~ 00:46:300 this green line
  ● 01:00:335 - start kiai at 01:00:510

• ● Delete Audio Lead-In
  ● 00:16:300 (2,3,1,2,3) - 1 grid up
  ● 00:19:809 (1) - add finish
  ● 00:22:616 (1) - ^
  ● 00:33:142 (3) - add whistle to 2nd note?
  ● 00:36:651 (1) - 2 grid right
  ● 00:56:300 (1) - I don't like this slider.
  ● 01:22:791 (1) - end at 01:25:072 , 01:25:774 ~ 01:29:282 - add note

• ● 00:04:545 (5,6,7,8) - 2 grid up 2 grid left
  ● 00:09:107 (5) - 1grid left
  ● 00:29:458 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/47587
  ● 00:58:405 (9) - end at 00:59:107
  ● 01:19:984 (4) - 1 grid down
  ● 01:20:510 (1) - remove new combo
  ● 01:21:037 (1) - ^

• ● 00:09:107 (5,6) - spacing miss

1. You need to add the files: "Hitcircleoverlay.png" and "approachcircle.png" and full submit (It doesn't matter if you add the default one, but you need to add them)
2. Preview time is different on Insane
3. Make kiai time the same for all the mapset.

1. AR +1
2. 00:11:388 - This break is unecesary, so continue mapping here, I suggest to add a spinner here: 00:11:388 - and finish it here: 00:13:668 -
3. 01:06:124 (1,2,3,4) - This looks messy and confusing, change it for something like [url]this[/url].

1. 00:52:265 (6,7,8,9,10) - This doesn't play good, move (9) and (10) anywhere else but not on the same line.
2. 01:21:388 (1) - Remove this New Combo

1. Ok no problems but this pattern is not ok:
2. 01:21:037 (1,2,1,2,1) - I suggest to move the last (6) and (7) away and move the next notes here

Muya wrote:

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hi

General

• ● Delete 00:36:475 ~ 00:46:300 this green line no
  ● 01:00:335 - start kiai at 01:00:510 I went ahead an made all timing points identical in all difficulties.

Easy

• ● Delete Audio Lead-In mapped beginning
  ● 00:16:300 (2,3,1,2,3) - 1 grid up redid it
  ● 00:19:809 (1) - add finish
  ● 00:22:616 (1) - ^
  ● 00:33:142 (3) - add whistle to 2nd note? no
  ● 00:36:651 (1) - 2 grid right why doesn't aimod pick these up?
  ● 00:56:300 (1) - I don't like this slider. Unless you have a suggestion, too bad
  ● 01:22:791 (1) - end at 01:25:072 , 01:25:774 ~ 01:29:282 - add note now playtime is exactly the same for all difficulties

Hard

• ● 00:04:545 (5,6,7,8) - 2 grid up 2 grid left
  ● 00:09:107 (5) - 1grid left
  ● 00:29:458 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/47587 I've changed this too many times. Nothing will make everyone happy
  ● 00:58:405 (9) - end at 00:59:107
  ● 01:19:984 (4) - 1 grid down
  ● 01:20:510 (1) - remove new combo
  ● 01:21:037 (1) - ^ moved it around a bit

Insane

• ● 00:09:107 (5,6) - spacing miss

+star~

Gonzvlo wrote:

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General

1. You need to add the files: "Hitcircleoverlay.png" and "approachcircle.png" and full submit (It doesn't matter if you add the default one, but you need to add them) I still can't find that rule, but I know it exists because I remember seeing it now.
2. Preview time is different on Insane
3. Make kiai time the same for all the mapset.

Easy

1. AR +1
2. 00:11:388 - This break is unecesary, so continue mapping here, I suggest to add a spinner here: 00:11:388 - and finish it here: 00:13:668 -
3. 01:06:124 (1,2,3,4) - This looks messy and confusing, change it for something like [url]this[/url]. I can only guess, so I made it a rotated square.

Hardl

1. 00:52:265 (6,7,8,9,10) - This doesn't play good, move (9) and (10) anywhere else but not on the same line. this isn't normal anymore
2. 01:21:388 (1) - Remove this New Combo

Insane

1. Ok no problems but this pattern is not ok:
2. 01:21:037 (1,2,1,2,1) - I suggest to move the last (6) and (7) away and move the next notes here moved 5,6,7, but the infinity is staying

Star and Good Luck.

nante wrote:

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[General]
I'd only leave 2nd kiai time I suppose I could just drop a tiny kiai

[Insane]
00:09:458 (6) - spacing
00:18:581 (1) - delete new combo here and 00:19:282 (1) there since you did it in previous combo which sounds really similar or just split previous one (it's just a suggestion since I'm not really good with combos) made me second guess my combos, there's a lot more now.
00:24:809 (7) - spacing, I know you're changing bmp rate to 1x there, but it still belongs to previous combo and should be spaced like previous You may have modded an old version. 5-6 has 2.4x spacing to compensate for time change.
00:40:861 (5) - spacing
01:04:896 (1) - spacing
01:10:159 (1) - I'm not sure if new combo is needed there(but again I'm not goot with combos) seems fine to me
01:11:388 (x) - maybe a note? it's just a bass drum beat
01:28:054 (5) - shape it better? it's just a hold slider

[Hard]
00:05:686 (1) - maybe silence this whole spinner? nah
00:59:107 (1) - maybe add a spinner which ends at 01:00:159 nah
*fix timing sections so they are on thicks*
01:21:037 (1) - delete combo?
01:21:388 (1) - ^
the part after the last spinner is harder than in [Insane]. I think the way it's in [Hard] fits, so re-map this part in [Insane] I suppose

[Easy]
00:16:300 (2) - distance(if you want to have it curved, try on a smaller grid [ctrl+1])
00:17:703 (2) - ^
00:22:967 (2) - add a note
00:25:423 (1) - I don't like how in this section everything just closes up; consider changing distance snap to 1,6 so it's like in previous section Certainly my next map will be more spaced out and not use such a severe distance change, but it's only for a short while in any case.
and a star ;p

vytalibus wrote:

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Everything seems to have been heavily modded, so forgive me if I don't catch a lot for you to fix.

[Insane]
00:31:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can align everything in this combo if you want; it'll make everything look neater. I'm more referring to (4,5,6,7), since they look like they're leaning to the right.
00:36:300 (9,10) - The jump before these two notes seem awkward.

Good job on the map, though. Even [Easy] looks fun to play.

H-boy wrote:

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here i am

the bg.jpg should be 800x600 unless this is a deal breaker, the size doesn't change

Easy
nice~

suggestions
00:51:738(x) - add a circle
00:51:914(2) - move the slider to next white line(00:52:089) anything to get notes off of red beats. fixed

Hard
00:08:405(4) - remove whistle and clap at the beginning and add a finish hitsound at the beginning

suggestions
00:02:967~00:05:598 that creates an unnecessary jump, and I think 4-8 are fine.

Insane
00:11:914(5) - remove clap Sounds much better, thanks
00:12:002(6) - ^
00:12:177(7) - ^

3star~