No kds.[General]
You lack additional red lines for the piano snapping at the very end, it should be:
04:17:291 - 143 BPM
04:19:493 - 148 BPM
Don't forget to resnap everything within the BPM change range.
[Replica]
00:07:636 - Add clap.
00:35:222 - Add finish.
00:40:890 (40890|3) - I prefer if you don't use this note, it's kinda misleading and a choke material for player. better to delete this, and add one more at 00:40:912 - (this is not simplification, it simply because it has finish sound, you need to make triple chord anyway
00:42:291 - Why Double W?
00:45:394 - Also have F for finish.
00:51:429 - Missing W?
00:51:946 - Should be triple, really strong finish impact.
00:54:705 - Need additional note for finish sound.
00:59:216 (59216|3,59446|1) - Don't think you need these 2 notes, basically i find it more convincing if you just emphasize snare sound instead.
01:02:636 - Delete W hitsound.
01:16:601 (76601|3,76687|2) - Extremely thin to layer.. but imo, better delete note at 01:16:687 (76687|2) - , and move the note at red line to col.3
01:30:394 - Add C to be consistent with HS at 00:15:912 -
01:44:187 - You sure bout this quad? the emphasis isn't strong to begin with, and felt random it just suddennly comes out.
01:46:256 - Add W here, you are being consistent with LN have W hitsound.
01:54:618 - Delete W here, seem to be a mistake.
02:00:682 (120682|2) - Add C here, there's still drum left.
02:05:739 - 02:06:084 - Need to add C here, similar with 01:55:049 - and 01:54:877 -
02:06:256 - Make this single note, no certain emphasis here.
02:22:636 - Missing C hitsound.
02:25:222 (145222|0,145222|1,145265|2,145265|3) - Both double note are wrongly snapped, the double at 02:25:222 (145222|0,145222|1) - Should be 1/16 at 02:25:243 - , and 02:25:265 (145265|2,145265|3) - Should be 1/4 at 02:25:308 -
02:36:623 (156623|2) - Quite sure this is 1/16 at 02:36:644 - , like 00:40:761 (40761|3) -
02:36:752 (156752|1) - Same as 00:40:890 (40890|3) -
02:47:808 (167808|3) - Should be C to follow consistency with 02:50:567 -
02:58:282 (178282|2) - Don't really hear the 1/8 tbh, better delete this, and move 02:58:239 (178239|1) - to col.3
02:58:670 (178670|3) - Delete this C, C only for crash sound, not kick.
03:02:923 (182923|2) - I know there's still small guitar, but basically it will flow better if you just delete this one.
03:35:567 - 03:35:739 - not sure why are these double, basically there's no emphasis there. single stream is better.
03:45:739 (225739|3) - Not F, should be C, there isn't finish sound at all here.
03:48:325 - These should be double if you intend to follow vocal based on your double layering at 03:48:153 - 03:47:808 - 03:47:463 - , if not, better not make them double, because there's literally no other emphasis to support them.
04:05:969 (245969|1) - Please don't layer this, I utterly confused when play this, there isn't any significance of the sound for this to be layered.
Basically , please apply all of the hitsound problem and snap to the other difficulty, to safe time.
[Hard]
00:25:049 (25049|3,25222|3) - pretty awkward the jack being in the same column as 00:22:291 (22291|3,22463|3) - , Try Ctrl+H 00:24:532 (24532|2,24705|1,24705|0,25049|3,25222|3,25480|0,25567|2,25567|3,25912|1,26084|3,26084|0) -
00:40:890 (40890|1) - Same as Replica diff.
01:20:222 (80222|3,80308|2) - Better Ctrl+G this, current pattern makes 01:20:567 (80567|2,80653|3) - awkward.
01:29:015 (89015|1,89187|0,89360|1,89532|0,89705|1,89877|0,90049|1,90136|0,90308|1,90394|0) - Please avoid this, my suggestion is to move 01:29:187 (89187|2,89360|1) - to the right 1x.
01:29:963 (89963|2,90049|1) - Also Ctrl+G this so the flow doesn't get too harsh on the direction.
01:38:153 (98153|1,98325|2) - I know your intention around here, but this is where the piano started, and kinda awkward if you just connect with the pattern before because the piano doesn't get emphasized that way, better to move them to the left 1 time.
01:44:187 (104187|2,104187|3,104705|2,104705|3,105222|3,105567|2,105567|3,106084|2,106084|3,106429|3) - I don't get why you have to make this right hand dominant, not only here, but until 01:52:980 - , This not only makes the pattern awkward to play, but doesn't be coherent with the music as it stands. Better if you sort of balancing the amount of patterning for both hands.
01:55:308 (115308|3,115394|2) - The flow will be better if you Ctrl+G this.
02:10:739 (130739|3,130825|2) - The flow is really awkward here on how the direction and pattern focused at right hand, it's much better make it 1-4.
02:36:752 (156752|1) - Same as replica diff.
02:57:090 (177090|1) - What is this, you don't even use this at replica diff.
02:57:779 (177779|1) - it's 1/6 , not 1/12...
02:57:894 (177894|3) - This should be 1/3..
03:00:797 (180797|2) - why different with replica diff.. use 1/4..
03:02:923 (182923|3) - Don't follow weird snap, white line also has guitar, just use it for this diff.
03:42:118 (222118|1,222463|3) - This is not even at the same pitch with 03:41:601 (221601|1,221774|3) - , idk, why they are in same column. use
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8232993 instead.
03:46:429 - This is really odd, like this stream pattern is literally first time using 03:46:601 (226601|1,226687|0,226774|1) - and it's at the latter part of the song. better Ctrl+G 03:46:515 (226515|2,226601|1,226687|0) -
03:48:670 (228670|2,229015|2,229360|2) - Please no. they aren't same pitch anymore, not makes sense to make them in same column.
try
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/823302203:56:601 (236601|3,236687|1,236774|2) - make it 1-2-3, i don't think flow at 03:56:687 (236687|1,236774|2,236774|0) - is coherent with the overall current pattern either.
03:58:325 - Don't understand why no LN here. you use it at 04:09:360 -
03:58:498 (238498|2) - End this LN at 03:59:187 - , it's where the synth sound also dissapear.
04:07:463 (247463|1,247549|0) - Make this at col 1 and col 4 to avoid that mini trill.
04:09:532 (249532|2) - The same as 03:58:498 (238498|2) -
04:17:032 (257032|0,257118|2,257205|1) - Don't make the stream at one direction, you kinda conflicting yourself with 03:51:946 - , try make 04:17:032 (257032|0,257118|2,257205|1) - at col 4 , 2 and 3.
The snap is unstable with the other diff, please recheck it all, this is really vital, don't careless with this.
[Normal]
00:18:153 (18153|1,18325|1,19532|1,19705|1,20912|1,21084|1) - Don't get it why they are all at same column, you do realize if jack in novice diff needs to be spreaded properly for diff literally for learning.
00:22:291 (22291|0,22463|0,23670|2,23843|2,25049|0,25222|0,26429|2,26601|2) - Don't get too why suddenly it change to "trill jack", i felt the jack were arranged unstructurically..
00:29:015 (29015|1,29187|2,29360|2) - Much better if you Ctrl+H this, the way pattern flows at 00:29:705 (29705|3,30049|2,30222|3,30567|2,30912|3) - makes it too heavy.
00:43:670 (43670|1,44187|2) - Literally just Ctrl+H this to avoid 00:44:187 (44187|2,44360|3,44705|2,44877|2) - .
01:09:532 - Need to be double if following layering at 01:06:774 -
01:16:429 (76429|1,76774|1) - The flow really went abruptly here, you should use
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8233095 instead.
01:21:256 (81256|3,81256|2) - You do realize the emphasis this instrument uphold is completely different with 01:20:739 - . better make 01:20:739 (80739|2,81084|0,81601|1) - at col 1-2-1.
01:22:291 (82291|3,82291|2,82636|2,82980|3,83153|2,83325|3) - too heavy, move 01:22:636 (82636|2) - to col 2.
01:24:360 - If you want to make one hand trill from here, it's better to have it at right hand, because the next chord double you're going to hit is the one at 01:25:394 (85394|0,85394|1) - , if you trilling at left hand , it makes it needlessly unbalanced. i mean something like
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/823311101:40:049 (100049|0,100394|1,100567|0,100912|1,101429|1) - This is not good by any means. move 01:40:394 (100394|1) - to col.3
01:50:567 (110567|3,110739|3) - Random jack appear. it will be alright if you do this consistently, the problem is that this is just suddenly appear out of nowhere.
01:54:360 (114360|1) - move to col 3, no reason to make it same column with 01:53:843 (113843|1,113843|3) -
02:01:946 (121946|2,122118|2) - Random jack.
02:20:912 (140912|2,141084|3,141429|2,141429|3,141946|3,142463|3,142636|2,142980|3) - that col 4 is not good, try lighten it up with
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/823313302:29:877 (149877|2,150222|3,150394|2,150912|3,151256|2,151601|3,151946|2,152118|3) - This is a big no. you can easily makes it balanced with
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/823314002:36:084 - i wonder why use notes here when you only use LN at 00:40:222 (40222|1) - , and FYI , 02:36:752 (156752|2) - is strictly unrankable in normal diff.
02:37:980 (157980|0) - Move to col 2 for balance.
02:40:567 - Also unbalanced, use
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/823315602:44:360 - make this double, crash sound.
02:58:843 (178843|1,179187|0) - Switch column to make stair flow with 02:59:532 (179532|2,179877|1,180222|0) -
03:04:360 - Finish and crash sound, makes this double.
04:06:774 (246774|2) - If you follow drum, this note should be at blue line in 04:06:687 -
04:08:498 - This is literally just copy pasted pattern, at least makes the pattern different.
Kinda dissapointed with hard and normal diff... Felt like those 2 diffs doesn't really got polished properly in patterning. And the HS-ing in the map kinda messy..
Please recheck all of the diffs properly, you are the one that responsible for your map afterall.