M4M here from PM
[Replica]
00:06:774 - 00:06:946 - I felt it really empty if you don't add note to these 2 points, its audible and makes the stream actually reflect the instrument more properly.
00:15:739 - The drum is too small for double note, better to reduce this to single note.
00:18:038 (18038|3) - Wrong snapped, should be 1/8, precisely at 00:18:024 -
00:26:343 - Add another note for drum here, it's audible.
01:35:308 - I think this needs to be double, the drum is big here.
01:38:153 - Prefer you to layer the piano sound with LN here.
01:39:360 (99360|1,99446|2) - I will be honest that this is extremely inaudible, I almost can't hear things here, i don't think you need to layer sound extremely thin like this either.
02:00:567 - Kinda unclear here, i think the LN at 02:00:739 - is ghost note with inaccurate layering sound, the sound here is actually still 1/3 all the way, the correct layering is http://puu.sh/w0L4W/ff2db9185f.jpg
03:04:360 - Too surprising SV, and the sudden slowdown actually don't really match up imo, I suggest 0,9x instead.
03:09:877 (189877|1,190394|1,190739|2,190912|3) - and also other similar place, actually it would be much variation if you try to layer this with 1/2 LN for BG synth.
03:25:049 - I wonder why this place is so undermapped, other places you map the 1/4 sound occured here, and here only have LN, even if you want variation, i believe it doesn't mean you need to ignore all these sounds, especially when we want to reach the climax ending.
03:49:015 (229015|2,229187|3) - Better switch places here, Having this LN at the same column with 03:49:360 - is really odd when they have different pitch.
03:58:325 (238325|0) - Turn this into 1/2 LN, there's still synth left.
03:58:498 (238498|2) - Stop this to 03:59:187 - , the synth already end here, continue the LN kinda take away the emphasis which is not good.
04:01:601 (241601|2,241774|3,241946|1) - Correct PR for synth is 1-2-3 here, it is ascending higher instead of repeating.
04:10:394 - Should be double if following the layering at 04:10:049 -
04:19:446 (259446|1,259532|0) - Completely wrong, should be at 1/8 at 04:19:403 - and 04:19:489 -
You're improved much better compared to the last time I mod this, I can help you push this in one condition.
Confirmed all the snap in the map, because it's extremely hard for me to discern some part of the snap because it got blended too thin between each deeper snap, I'm not even completely sure whether i spot all the issues or not. so i need you to ask QAT/other trustable source regarding the snap.
If you're done, call me back, I will do full check.
[Replica]
00:06:774 - 00:06:946 - I felt it really empty if you don't add note to these 2 points, its audible and makes the stream actually reflect the instrument more properly.
00:15:739 - The drum is too small for double note, better to reduce this to single note.
00:18:038 (18038|3) - Wrong snapped, should be 1/8, precisely at 00:18:024 -
00:26:343 - Add another note for drum here, it's audible.
01:35:308 - I think this needs to be double, the drum is big here.
01:38:153 - Prefer you to layer the piano sound with LN here.
01:39:360 (99360|1,99446|2) - I will be honest that this is extremely inaudible, I almost can't hear things here, i don't think you need to layer sound extremely thin like this either.
02:00:567 - Kinda unclear here, i think the LN at 02:00:739 - is ghost note with inaccurate layering sound, the sound here is actually still 1/3 all the way, the correct layering is http://puu.sh/w0L4W/ff2db9185f.jpg
03:04:360 - Too surprising SV, and the sudden slowdown actually don't really match up imo, I suggest 0,9x instead.
03:09:877 (189877|1,190394|1,190739|2,190912|3) - and also other similar place, actually it would be much variation if you try to layer this with 1/2 LN for BG synth.
03:25:049 - I wonder why this place is so undermapped, other places you map the 1/4 sound occured here, and here only have LN, even if you want variation, i believe it doesn't mean you need to ignore all these sounds, especially when we want to reach the climax ending.
03:49:015 (229015|2,229187|3) - Better switch places here, Having this LN at the same column with 03:49:360 - is really odd when they have different pitch.
03:58:325 (238325|0) - Turn this into 1/2 LN, there's still synth left.
03:58:498 (238498|2) - Stop this to 03:59:187 - , the synth already end here, continue the LN kinda take away the emphasis which is not good.
04:01:601 (241601|2,241774|3,241946|1) - Correct PR for synth is 1-2-3 here, it is ascending higher instead of repeating.
04:10:394 - Should be double if following the layering at 04:10:049 -
04:19:446 (259446|1,259532|0) - Completely wrong, should be at 1/8 at 04:19:403 - and 04:19:489 -
You're improved much better compared to the last time I mod this, I can help you push this in one condition.
Confirmed all the snap in the map, because it's extremely hard for me to discern some part of the snap because it got blended too thin between each deeper snap, I'm not even completely sure whether i spot all the issues or not. so i need you to ask QAT/other trustable source regarding the snap.
If you're done, call me back, I will do full check.