Osuology wrote:

[Novice]
Also tags are conflicting.
I believe stack leniency cannot be below 3 but maybe it's changed since then. I think it's not an important issue now.
00:05:496 (3,4) - This is fast for easy man that's really hard. I'd just change Novice to Normal...
00:22:213 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is all normal type stuff not easy. ^
Diff seems great, but it is definitely overmapped for an easy, and thus I think you should change it to a normal it is more fitting.

[Hyper]
Stack leniency again. ^
00:41:450 (1,2,3) - Wow that's too hard. Moved closer a bit.
Also the diff is mostly undermapped, try adding more 1/4 using hitcircles to the situation

[Retrospection]
Stack leniency. ^
00:24:846 (5,6) - Doesn't empathize right beats, you should change to a full triple. I think this doesn't really matter..

Other than that you did very well! Some of the things are repeated and I didn't list all of them so look out for those! Sorry I was late.

Hollow Wings wrote:

as ur req

General

1. top diff's tag is conflict to other diffs.
   fixed

Retrospection

1. 00:04:293 i think you can add 1/8 obj here. so as 00:07:041 or other places if you care. i may add if i map an extra.
2. 00:45:114 (1,2,3) - i recommend you do ctrl+g here to follow the higher melody beats' pitch shifting. imo now it follows better
3. 01:01:374 (3) - ctrl+g for consistent ds shifting from 01:00:114 (4,5) - . similar suggestion to 02:14:656 (3) - as well. ok
4. 01:06:412 (3,4) - this jump is a bit large imo, maybe move the note stacked at 01:05:725 (4) - 's head. similar suggestion to 01:21:068 (3,4) - , and also the last kiai's stuff. ..not very big imo
5. 01:58:167 (1,1) - the blanket is still not perfect here, using the app circle to fix that.
   
   SPOILER

   
   ok
6. 02:37:442 (1,2,3) - merge into a repeating slider? whatever... no..
7. generally fine, some of symm copy paste is a bit annoying... lol

Hyper

1. 01:53:129 (3,1) - overlapping the arrow is unrankble, change the pattern pls. this is a must fix. ok
2. 01:57:251 (1,1) - in hard diff a 1/1 gap is required after a spinner. change the rhythm here. k
3. really obvious symm cut, maybe consider some changing among patterns.

Novice

1. 01:24:274 (4,5) - overlap like this is not recommended in lower diffs, maybe move slider 5 to somewhere like 505,134. same to 02:23:816 (5) - as well. both k

i care about the normal as lowest diff, thou it's fine to me. other stuffs are good.

good luck.

Ruish wrote:

Hello!
Played your map a bit and just thought 00:05:954 (2) in hyper is weird because the beat at the end of the slider is a lot stronger. also retrospection ar so high
good luck

Thanks for feedback!