1. Reduce hitsounds volume to 60% ! It's way too loud now.
2. 00:36:235 - It feels really weird you put a break where the beats starts, it's usually where you should start mapping
3. 00:44:417 (1) - The sttronger note of this slider is the end. It's a bit awkward we don't have to hit it then! Try something like this http://puu.sh/nmV0j/ec7c95d922.jpg or if you really want a slider to go with this is another possibility: http://puu.sh/nmV2r/e74049ebee.jpg Don't abuse of this technique though (the second screenshot), now it works because it's the really first note but don't do it each time
   After that, Same goes for 00:46:599 (4) - and 00:48:781 (7) - (the idea on this one was good but try this http://puu.sh/nmVb9/db1f2bd06e.jpg might sounds more natural right? same goes for 00:53:145 (1) - 00:57:781 (4) - 01:00:781 (6) - (the really end is really really strong here!). I let you find more of those! (Ok, last one; 01:36:235 (3) - the end is really strong and mark a changement in the rhythm, you'd better place a circle, or the beginning of a sldier at this position instead of then end) Once you get that, you can add NCs on those positions
4. Hitsounds are something really, really important in mapping you should try to put some whistless and finsh on a first time!

Yales wrote:

Offset 36.236 seems better.
Also if you want to map the beginning (which might be hard as there's no beat, you need another timing, not sure which one though).
Then, you gotta respect distance snap on Normal and Easy as much as possible (always) !
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1. Reduce hitsounds volume to 60% ! It's way too loud now.
2. 00:36:235 - It feels really weird you put a break where the beats starts, it's usually where you should start mapping
3. 00:44:417 (1) - The sttronger note of this slider is the end. It's a bit awkward we don't have to hit it then! Try something like this http://puu.sh/nmV0j/ec7c95d922.jpg or if you really want a slider to go with this is another possibility: http://puu.sh/nmV2r/e74049ebee.jpg Don't abuse of this technique though (the second screenshot), now it works because it's the really first note but don't do it each time
   After that, Same goes for 00:46:599 (4) - and 00:48:781 (7) - (the idea on this one was good but try this http://puu.sh/nmVb9/db1f2bd06e.jpg might sounds more natural right? same goes for 00:53:145 (1) - 00:57:781 (4) - 01:00:781 (6) - (the really end is really really strong here!). I let you find more of those! (Ok, last one; 01:36:235 (3) - the end is really strong and mark a changement in the rhythm, you'd better place a circle, or the beginning of a sldier at this position instead of then end) Once you get that, you can add NCs on those positions
4. Hitsounds are something really, really important in mapping you should try to put some whistless and finsh on a first time!

Here's just a few tips, you didn't chose a music easy to map tbh as the timing changes quite a lot!

Think about ginving a kudosu if you found it helpful!
If you have any question feel free to PM me!