Nice map! I like symmetry in maps especially when it's done well. This was, in general, quite a fun map to play as well. You could even say I ENJOYed it.
The only thing I found really weird was the spinner in the end, because there's not much happening with the song at that point anymore to justify such a long spinner without any audible sounds. I can see why you included it because otherwise this wouldn't be approval-length, but I'm not sure if BNs will consider it rankable.
Mainly some rhythmical stuff could be improved, I think.
1) There are no tags. You should add some, like "electronic", "japanese", or "from ten wonderland" (name of the album).
2) For correct Metadata, the title of the song should be: Enjoy This Time(feat. yukacco) so you should remove the space between Time and (feat...). Source:
http://fromtenwonderland.com/ (official site of the album that this song is on)
3) 00:06:784 (1,2,3,4,5) - The rhythm you use here doesn't really make sense to me and feels weird to play. 00:07:313 (3) - Having this slider here makes 00:07:489 - unclickable even though there's a pretty strong kick on it, and generally strong sounds should be made clickable. The rhythm you use here would imply that there is a similar sound on 00:06:784 -, 00:07:313 - and 00:07:842 - sliderstarts to click on, but there is not. This is why I would suggest using a rhythm like slider + circle + circle and repeat that, rather than slider circle slider circle, as it would allow you to emphasize the kicks and would make the pattern feel much better and intuitive to play.
4) 00:42:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could perfect this line by raising (3) a tiny bit, since it's a little bit off from the line. Same at 00:44:019 (3) - except lower it a tiny bit. lol
5) 00:44:725 - There's a vocal sound you could emphasize here. I don't think this slider 00:44:548 (6) - works very well, because the vocal isn't stretched here unlike the previous sections such as 00:43:136 (6) -. Therefore I would recommend replacing 00:44:548 (6) - with two circles on 00:44:548 - and 00:44:725 - or then ending the slider on 00:44:725 - instead.
6) 00:51:078 (4,5) - This rhythm feels really weird to me as well, mainly because both the sliders are offbeat, and I could really notice it while playing as well, because otherwise the rhythm is pretty good during this part. There's a strong high pitch vocal on 00:51:254 - because that's when she begins a new word, so I think it should be clickable. You can, for example, delete 00:50:901 (3) -, move 00:51:078 (4) - on its spot so that it starts on 00:50:901 - and ends on 00:51:078 - and then move 00:51:431 (5) - back a tick and place a circle on 00:51:784 -. I think this rhythm would feel a lot better to play and emphasize the song better as well. You can try a different kind of rhythm that accomplishes the same thing if you want, of course.
7) 00:55:842 (6) - You could replace this slider with circles instead to emphasize the vocals like you've done before in this part of the song. Or you could at least end the slider earlier and put a circle on 00:56:195 - to emphasize big kick sound, like you did at 01:18:784 (1) -, which would make it more consistent as well.
8) 00:56:284 (1) - You could end this spinner at 00:57:078 - instead to emphasize the kick heard in the song, and then place a circle on 00:57:254 - that's stacked on the sliderstart of 00:57:607 (1) - to emphasize the clap and short pause in the song. You did the same at 01:41:460 (1,1) -
9) 01:23:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel like the spacing in this pattern is a bit too high. It really differs a lot from 01:20:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - even though the song is doing the same thing in both sections, so the huge spacing change is quite unexpected. I would somewhat lower the spacing. It makes sense at 01:28:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - to have this high spacing because you can hear a background sound increasing here, so the pattern matches the intensity in this case.
10) 01:34:313 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 3). I don't think this rhythm makes sense and I don't think it emphasizes the song very well either, for the same reasons. I would recommend a slider + circle + circle rhythm instead.
11) 01:44:195 (1,2) - I would switch places with these rhythmically, because starting 01:44:372 (2) - on the half beat feels weird and unfitting, since you're not able to click the kick on 01:44:548 -, and strong sounds should generally be clickable. You could try rearranging the pattern like this, which feels better imo:
http://puu.sh/upW2F/95fae2bbb2.jpg12) 01:57:078 (2,3) - These sliders start on half beats and don't emphasize any strong sounds. Both 01:57:254 - and 01:57:607 - have strong sounds on them but they're not clickable because the sliders end on them, so I would remake the rhythm here. For example, you could make 01:57:078 (2) - a reverse slider instead and add a circle on 01:57:607 - which would feel a lot better.
13) 02:11:195 (2,7) - The stack between these is a tiny bit off, just needs to be snapped in place.
14) 02:19:136 (4,1) - I think these sliders would look better together if you curved 02:19:489 (1) - a bit less.
15) 02:20:901 (1,2,3,4) - Nice pattern!
16) 02:58:136 (2,3) - It would feel better if you switched places between these notes rhythmically, like you did at 02:55:313 (2,3,4) -. This would also make it more consistent and allow you to make the sound at 02:58:313 - clickable.
17) 03:55:666 (2,4) - Visual spacing between these two circles seems higher than between 03:56:019 (4,6,8) - so you could even the visual spacing out between these.
18) 03:57:078 (1,2,3) - Again I feel like these sliders don't make sense rhythmically, because they start on the half beats, and all the strong sounds are on the slider ends, which feels weird and unfitting. You could try using reverse sliders or circles here instead. If you're not going to change the rhythm, at least move 03:57:431 (2) - more to the right so that the three slider ends form a proper triangle shape.
19) 04:07:666 (5,6) - These sliders feel rhythmically weird as well. If you moved them back a tick, they'd feel a lot better and have the important sounds clickable. However I think I'd just replace them with circles instead to make some better-looking patterns and a nice ending jump section before the spinner pause. It would also be important to have 04:08:195 - clickable since it's basically a finish to this kiai part.
20) 04:08:284 (1) - Could also end this spinner on 04:09:078 - to emphasize the kick and add a circle on 04:09:254 - stacked on top of the next slider.
21) 04:17:195 (2) - I don't feel like this reverse slider emphasizes the vocals very well, and feels kind of out of place. I'd try something else here, like replacing it with a circle and then a slider, which would emphasize the correct beats in the song.
22) 04:20:195 (3,4) - Maybe curve these a little bit less for better blankets with 04:19:489 (1,2) -
23) 04:21:431 (4) - Same as before, it feels weird to me because it starts on a half beat and ignores the kick on the slider end. I would rhythmically switch places between 04:21:254 (3,4) - or maybe just remake this pattern to make it feel better.
24) 04:22:842 (3,4) - ^Same for these.
25) 04:27:431 (6,8) - You could make this pattern flow and play better if you switch places (Ctrl+G) between these two circles.
26) 04:44:019 (4,5) - Same here as before, would make the rhythm more intuitive if you had a circle on 04:44:019 - and have the slider start from 04:44:195 - instead.
27) 04:46:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks kinda weird to me compared to all your other smooth patterns. 04:46:490 (2,4,6) - Maybe make these circles have the same visual spacing as 04:46:313 (1,3,5,7) - ? Or you could try something else, whatever works for you.
28) 04:49:313 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move this pattern a bit to the right so that 04:49:136 (1) - is right in the center between 04:48:078 (2,4) - ?
1) 00:10:666 (5) - Maybe make this a Normal clap instead of a whistle to keep up the snare claps? Feels a bit weird for them to stop here already.
2) 01:01:842 (1) - Seems like this is missing a soft hitwhistle.
3) 02:39:254 (1) - Is this supposed to be a soft hitwhistle? Feels like it should be a normal one. 02:42:078 (1) - This one uses a normal one at least, so it's kind of inconsistent.
4) 03:01:842 (1) - Feels like this is missing a finish because you use one at 03:04:666 (1) - and onwards.
5) 03:41:372 (1) - I think this sliderstart could use a clap since you start using it on every other beat from here on out.
6) 03:43:489 (5) - Sounds like this is supposed to use soft sampleset like at 03:42:784 (1) - etc.?
7) 03:45:607 (1) - Could add a soft hitfinish here like at 01:41:372 (1) -
