Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs and friendlist :^)

General

1. This SV may be too low but it's up to you - Personal choice for the map. Would require remapping.
2. You're trying to make nice curves but you end up curving them too much, be careful - Noted, I guess.

Fury

1. 00:02:611 (4) - Maybe do something like this http://prntscr.com/a509lm http://prntscr.com/a509r3 - Done (I think?)
2. 00:02:998 (1,2) - Doesn't flow really well, http://prntscr.com/a50ajk - I don't get it.
3. 00:05:127 (2) - ^ http://prntscr.com/a50bjt - I don't get it either.
4. 00:09:192 (1) - Strange curve, http://prntscr.com/a50cc0 - Fixed
5. 00:09:966 (4,6) - Fix blanket and don't make them collide - Not sure how to fix blanket but changed them so they don't collide I guess.
6. 00:12:289 (3,6) - Collides - Fixed
7. 00:14:031 (1,2) - No blanket? - Didn't intend to blanket.
8. 00:16:547 (3,2) - Collides - Fixed
9. 00:19:256 (4,5) - Fix blanket - Not intended to be a blanket.
10. 00:21:385 (7,8,9) - Add a little curve to flow better with the next slider - Done.
11. 00:23:321 (1,2,3,4,5) - Collides/too close from each other, space them more - Done.
12. 00:26:418 (4) - No blanket? Try this http://prntscr.com/a50hmy - Not intended to be a blanket.
13. 00:34:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Maybe space it a bit more, the ending looks a bit weird also no hitcircle stacked with 00:33:773 (4) - ? - Declined. No point in really spacing the stream, not very hard to hit. Also declined the stack because it'll be hard to hit the stacked circle.
14. 00:36:482 (1,2) - Try to make it more symmetrical - Fixed
15. 00:37:257 (1,2) - Stack with 00:36:482 (1,2) - http://prntscr.com/a50k51 - Makes it a bit too confusing to read. Declined.
16. 00:55:837 (1,2) - Weird/not needed shapes imo - Fixed.
17. 00:56:998 (7,1) - Collides - Fixed.
18. 01:00:482 (1) - Maybe a slow slider instead - Might revert this later, but I'll keep it for now.
19. 01:08:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Looks kinda weird, I think you can do better - Tried fixing?
20. 01:09:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^ - Tried fixing as well?
21. 01:20:611 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^ - Damn you're so nitpicky about these.
22. 01:32:999 (1,2) - Collides - Fixed
23. 02:03:966 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - A bit too repetitive, maybe don't stack them - Fixed.
24. 02:10:160 (1,2,1,2) - Weird/not needed shapes - Fixed
25. 02:14:805 (1) - Stack with 02:13:773 (5) - or 02:13:902 (6) - Done
26. 02:26:547 (7) - Fix stack - Fixed
27. 02:28:482 (11) - Add a curve - Done
28. 02:30:031 (10) - ^ - God damn it.
29. 02:31:579 (10) - ^ - REALLY.
30. 02:32:999 (9) - ^ - CHILL.
31. 02:39:579 No note? - Added.
32. 03:19:837 (5,7) - Collides - Fixed.
33. 03:43:063 (1,2,1,2) - More symmetrical - Tried fixing.
34. 03:47:966 (3,1,2) - Collides - 03:47:966 (3) - is supposed to be there. Moved (2) a bit.
35. 04:07:063 (3) - Don't curve too much, http://prntscr.com/a50v2f - Fixed
36. 04:35:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - A bit too close imo - Intentional. Keeping the way it is.
37. 04:41:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ - Same as above.
38. 04:52:741 (1,2,3,4) - More symmetrical/better stack 04:53:128 (2,4) - Fixed simmetry.
39. 04:57:386 (1,2,3,4,5) - Collides/too close - Fixed collision. They're supposed to be close.
40. 05:05:128 (1,2) - Collides - Fixed
41. 05:05:902 (3,4) - ^ - Fixed.
42. 05:07:063 (6) - It's not in the middle like 05:06:676 (5) - Fixed.
43. 05:12:870 (1,2,3,4) - Symmetry again - 1 & 2 were fine. Fixed 3 & 4.
44. 05:20:611 (1,2,3) - You can do better imo, also 3 is more far from 2 than 1 - Tried fixing.
45. 05:46:934 (1) - Why not some circles instead - I like the way it is here.

Hmm that's it! I hope I don't sound rude or something lol
Good luck!

iamVill wrote:

Great map, but here is my mod:

00:32:611 (1,2,3,4) - I think it would be better as single taps? - I would personally disagree.
00:52:741 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - It doesn't quiet fit the music. - Yet you're not proposing a way to help me fix?
00:58:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ - Same as above.
01:03:192 (12) - Faster (1/6) - Done.
01:06:289 (12) - ^ - Done.
01:09:386 (12) - ^ - Done.
01:11:321 (1) - Maybe not? xD Would say there should be circles in stead of spinner. - Tried mapping before. Didn't work out. I'll experiment later.
01:15:579 (12) - These 12 doesnt fit the music, the speed is 1/6 the bpm. - Done.
01:21:773 (16) - ^ - Done.
01:27:966 (11) - ^ - Done.
01:40:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe stream jumps, Or... http://i.imgur.com/bX6PXMb.png - I will think about this.
01:42:870 (6) - Fast slider instead of 1 circle. - Map not intended to have any fast sliders and it would make hitting the slider afterwards too difficult.
02:23:579 (3,4) - They r long away from the middle ( a bit too long away, if it was up to me ) - Changed.
02:56:224 (10) - 1/6 - Fixed.
02:59:321 (5) - ^ - Fixed.
03:02:418 (4) - ^ - Fixed.
03:08:611 (10) - ^ - Fixed.
03:21:386 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - Big ass stream jumps, im not sure if its good enough - These aren't exactly what I'd class as "streams" but I can see where you're coming from. Changed.

Way to go :p - Thanks?

04:01:450 (7) - A double instead of single. - Doesn't make sense. Will keep it as is.
04:06:289 (1,2,3) - i dont think it fits the music. - And again, you're not proposing a way to fix.

I'll try to mod more later :p
But these was what i just noticed :p nice map and choose of song :3

ayygurl wrote:

Hey, Just some quick things:

Sliders are very slow, increase a lot the speed. - Declined. I intend to keep this map with slow sliders, that was the original plan to even before I started mapping.

00:30:869 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is 1/3. - Fixed.
00:41:902 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Maybe remove the reverse arrows on these because the rythme doesn't sound correct with them. - Might revert this change later.
00:46:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Try something like that, it sounds again weird with the red tick. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4577651 - That's much better than I had it, haha. Thanks.
00:53:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's 1/3 again. - Fixed.
00:59:708 (6) - ^ - Fixed.
04:18:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ - Fixed.
04:25:837 (4,5,6) - Every triples like this one are 1/6 notes. (Actually 4 of them.) - Done. (let me know if I missed any)
04:36:870 (7) - Same here, every triples like that are 1/6 spam. - Done. (let me know if I missed any)

There is sadly a lot of rythme errors, try to listen to the whole song in 25% speed so that you can hear if *for exemple* the streams you've put sounds correct with the melody speed. I did mentionned a bit of them just before, but try to make them all correct!

Beh, far too lazy for that. x_x

Now a bit of aesthetic:

If you wanna make streams, try using DS (Distance Spacing) so that you can make streams with a consistent distance, then try to make cool shapes with them, if you wanna make some other cool shit you can still go to Compose > Create Polygon Circles or Convert Slider into Stream, that is some great stuff. - I'm really tired of hearing this when "Convert Slider into Stream" is what I used in this map's streams, haha... I will try to experiment with DS in the future though, noted.

00:26:418 (3) - Instead of making these sometimes try double-clicking at the same place while making a slider so that you can make cool angles. - Just a beginner's way of trying to make a slider, haha. Noted.

Instead of making *most of the time* random jumps, you can try to do some triangles or stars, but not too much ^^. - Noted.

04:14:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try making this part more intense! - Not sure how.



I let you with that, but yeah the most important things are that you should try to do some nice streams, correct rythmes with 1/3 and 1/4 and be aware sometimes of the red tick! - ...so now I should avoid red tick? I thought blue tick was the evil one. x_x

That's it, bye :3 !

-Vert- wrote:

ayygurl wrote:

...so now I should avoid red tick? I thought blue tick was the evil one. x_x

TurtleStuffs wrote:

Finally a furioso melodia map that's not extreme! Thanks for making it! These improvements are totally opinion based, so you can chose to change them or not:

Fury

Something I thought here was that the streams had some awkward shapes. Whether this is intentional or not, I would look over those and change the shapes to look rounder or cleaner. - I will look over them the coming days, thanks.

Also, the start seemed a bit harder than it should be. The map should be mapped according to the music. Have a more intense part in the music, make it harder than the less intense/ soft parts. - I intended the start to be a sort of warm-up to the pain part of the song, but I can see where you're coming from. I'll have a look later, thanks!

Ok, lets start the mod:

00:21:385 (7,8,9) - Maybe make (7) in a new combo? - Done.
00:25:450 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe instead of (1) being the new combo (remove it), make (3) the new combo? - Done.
00:53:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe do this? - Keeping this for now, but I might change it back later, should I hear complaints about this part.

Suggestion

And do the same on 00:56:611 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9)? - Same as above.
01:20:611 (5) - New Combo? - Done.
01:40:353 (1,2,3,4) - This part shouldn't really belong in a stream. Put something different there - Added a reverse slider that ends on blue tick (so the timing doesn't feel empty), but might change this.
Don't put New Combo on 02:04:353 (1); 02:04:740 (1); 02:05:128 (1); 02:05:515 (1); 02:05:902 (1); 02:06:289 (1); 02:06:676 (1); 02:07:450 (1); 02:07:837 (1); 02:08:224 (1). The music does not imply a new combo - Split them up into 4 for each so the combo number wouldn't go above 16.
02:14:031 (1) - Remove 2 "reverse" off this reverse slider - Done.
02:22:805 (7,8) - 02:23:579 (3,4) - Why are these not sliders if these (02:21:257 (1);02:22:031 (4)) are sliders? - Fixed.
02:34:934 (1,2,3,4); 02:37:257 (1,2); 02:38:805 (1,2) - It gets boring if there are only reverse sliders. Try replacing these with a different pattern. - Well, I tried?
02:39:579 (3) - New Combo? - No point, really.
02:50:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream shape is good but 3, 4, 5 and 6 are further away from each other than 1,2 and 7,8,9,10. Put 3,4,5 and 6 closer to each other - I tried.
03:04:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same here with 1,2,3,4,5 and 6 - Nice catch! Didn't even notice!
03:22:160 (8) - New Combo here - Done.
03:22:547 (1) - Remove New Combo here - Done.
03:22:934 (4) - New Combo here - Done.
03:53:127 - Put a hit circle here and remove the break, it seems too short and random. - Done.
04:45:773 (9) - New Combo here. The part before that was good in intensifying (it was good) - Done. (thanks)
04:49:644 (5) - New Combo here - Done.
04:55:837 (5) - New Combo here - Done.
05:49:257 (1) - End the spinner here 05:53:127 - Fixed.

The end got really good. I hope this mod helped. Good luck, it has potential! - It helped. Thanks! Enjoy your well-earned Kudosu! :>

TurtleStuffs wrote:

Just want to point out at the "I tried" with the stream shapes:

You can use distance snap with streams, it makes it much easier. If you scroll with your mouse, you should move to the next tick/beat. If you hold alt then, you should activate distance snap. Distance snap sets a specific point for the next object according to the distance in the timeline. If you need more explanation on this, you can look it up on osu! academy (youtube)

Seynar wrote:

First of all i'm happy to see an easier version of Furioso
(First time i try to mod so i'll tell what i would have changed if it was my map, i think it's the way it works ^^)

00:05:514 (3,1,2,3) - I feel a bit weird to put some triplets here at the begining, i would prefere sliders or cicles instead, like the rest of the intro (reverse sliders would be better at least) - Declined for now. Reverse sliders would be too repetitive but I might still change this in the future.

00:10:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Same - ^

00:34:934 (9) - NC - Done.

00:46:547 (1) - 1/6 Would be better since this part is faster than the sliders just after - Done.

00:46:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - They have not the same space between them, would be more beautiful if u make perfect space :p - Tried.

00:53:515 (1,2,3) - Shouldn't be stacked like 00:52:934 (2,3,4) , it's very hard to see the difference when reading the map, maybe unstack them both and put more spacing for the 1/3 triplet, or unstack the 1/3 and keep the 1/4 as it is - I don't understand.

00:57:126 (9,1) - Why are they no notes between those 2 ? Maybe reverse slider, but i think something is missing according to the music - Can't really place anything here because of the 1/6 quad.

01:02:998 (11,13) - Many time i saw that while playing your map and i feel that you shoud put one more circle at the end of the stream and an 1/8 reverse slider close to it like that, would fit better the music (1) - I've only looked over the first kiai for now, but I'll look over the other kiais as well as the time passes on.

SPOILER

01:04:353 (3,5) - Maybe a circle between them, i can hear a 1/6 triple but i'm not sur if it's good to put it since we don't want a 7* map ^^ - Added. Might remove if I hear complaints.

SPOILER

01:06:095 (11,12) - See (1) - What?

01:07:644 (5) - This is a 1/6 rhythm, make the reverse slider like this and it will perfectly fit the rhythm - Fixed.

SPOILER

01:09:191 (11,12) - See (1) - Again, what?

01:10:547 (9) - NC and maybe one more circle at the end of the stream - Done.

01:13:837 (6) - This is 1/6 rhythm, get 4 circles at 1/6 or a reverse slider // the best thing would be 2 circles and a 1/6 slider, it sound 4 hits and it's played like a triplet, i though about this just before posting - Done.

01:14:224 (10) - Maybe closer to the stream, like at half distance between the note after and before, i feel that it's a pretty long jump just before a stream for a 5* - Moved.

SPOILER

01:15:386 (11,12) - See (1) - Yet again, what?

01:17:708 (2,7) - Thoses are 1/6 too - Done.

Something like that would be good i think

01:21:385 (9) - NC and see (1) for the end - Added NC. I still don't get the "see (1)" that you post.

01:23:128 (6,7,8) - This is 1/6 rhythm - Fixed.

01:24:482 (9) - NC and see (1) for the end - Same as 01:21:385 (9)

01:33:966 (6,8) - see (1) - What?


Sorry i don't have time to finish the song, maybe later but the things i underlined are the same things in many parts of the song, i can help you to find them all if you want.
I think that part like this 04:29:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6) should be more present in the first part of the song, it's so much better to play compare to low bpm stream ^^ - I'll think about that.

Hope this little mod will help.

sullywally wrote:

From #Modreqs ~~

Im not a very experienced modder, so feel free to reject, as this is all just a suggestion

General

1. Some of your slider has a, um.. weird shape, sometime just a simple curve is better
2. Your stream also encounter the same problem, tho not all of it some have quite weird shape, if you want those stream to curve make sure you make them curve smoothly (or just make slider then Ctrl+Shift+F to convert it to stream, for an easier alternative)
3. Hitsound?
4. I dont think youve succeed in emphasizing the intensity of the song, some part of the map that slow, are instead getting a wider and difficult jump, and another part that have more intensity are, instead, given a smaller jump

Fury

1. 00:05:514 (3) - 00:05:902 (1,2,3) - Both of these triplet feels weird, change to slider instead - Done, but might change this back in the future if I see fit.
2. 00:07:837 (1,2,3,4,5) - The jump from (4) to (5) feels really weird, when in doubt, use triangle pattern (or star pattern, which one you prefer) - A hard jump like a triangle or star I feel would be overkill for a slow part of a song. Declined.
3. 00:14:031 - 00:17:708 - this part confuse me as which part of the song you map? Better stick to the more audible music - I'm trying to experiment with this part by adding to the rhythm, not follow it. Some other maps do it too, I've noticed.
4. 00:26:418 - 00:32:224 - i dont like the idea of splitting this into slider-spinner-break, put circle on 00:26:418 (2) - then choose whether to put spinner (stop at 00:32:224 - i think?), or break - I'll keep this the way it is right now, sorry.
5. 00:38:805 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remember when i said you dont succeed on emphasizing song intensity. This jump is one of the example, put slider (with occasional circle or reverse, if it feels very monotone) - Well, I tried, I guess.
6. 00:52:934 (2,3,4) - the triplet is in 00:52:740 - Fixed, thanks. Didn't spot that.
7. 00:55:837 (1,2) - make the reverse of (1) to 00:56:224 - and put circle on 00:56:418 - Don't quite like this yet, so I might change it later, but accepted for now.
8. 00:59:128 (2,3,4) - same as 00:52:934 (2,3,4) - Fixed.
9. 01:00:482 - 01:50:031 - Im starting to think that this part is better if you use 1.5x slider multiplier like the middle-last part - I'll change this later when I'll have more time.
10. 01:53:902 (3,4,5) - change to 1/2 slider - Done.
11. 01:59:321 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - im starting to think youre overmapping purposely? change to 1/2 slider - I'm not? Changed triples to 1/2 sliders, kept the 1/4 reverse sliders though.
12. 02:33:386 (1,2,3,4) - make all the distance snap the same? - Well, I tried at least.
13. 03:55:450 - 04:20:224 - another part where you should've used 1.5x slider instead of 1x slider - That's on my to-do-list as well, just like the one you mentioned previously, just that it doesn't start at 03:55:450, but rather 04:07:837
14. 04:29:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - are this kickslider really necessary? sure the idea of this map is the longer the map goes, the harder itll get, but i think the kick slider in this part is a bit too much - I'd disagree, sorry.
15. 05:05:127 (1,2,3,4) - The order should be (1),(4),(2),(3) - Done.

Some of the rhythm are wrong (or they are probably not mapped like what I imagined?), cause this song is very challenging to map (with all of the 1/3, 1/4, and 1/6..) - I'd love for you to give an example though.

Good Luck ranking~ - Not really going for rank, but thanks.

1. 00:02:611 (4) - use a 1/2 reverse slider here
2. 00:08:805 (6) - ^
3. 00:10:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - the triples dont even match the song ;w; 1/2 jumps work here
4. 00:18:095 - no object here or a random pause like this makes no sense
5. 00:18:676 (3) - 1/6 repeat slider
6. 00:25:643 (2) - ^
7. 00:27:579 - random finish?
8. 00:27:966 - decrease volume
9. 00:35:611 - should be a note here ~ maybe replace 00:35:515 (7) - with a 1/4 slider
10. 00:39:192 (1) - remove nc
11. 00:39:966 (1) - ^
12. 00:46:547 (1) - slider should finish at 00:46:869 -
13. 00:49:063 (4) - 1/6 slider here
14. 00:53:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rework on this pattern
15. 00:54:192 - add circle
16. 00:55:837 (1) - finish the slider at 00:56:127 - and add circle at 00:56:224 -
17. 00:59:708 (6,7) - bring 7 closer to 6
18. 01:03:192 (13) - finish it at 01:03:514 -
19. 01:06:289 (13) - same ~ repeat 2 more times and bring 01:06:676 (1) - closer to it
20. 01:15:579 (13) - move to 112,264
21. 01:18:579 (7,8) - NotLikeThis~ bring 8 next to 7
22. 01:27:579 (9) - replace with 1/4 slider
23. 01:27:773 (10) - same
24. 01:30:676 (1) - remove nc
25. 01:32:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - first four notes are evenly spaced but 5 is a bit close to 4 , fix the spacing
26. 01:35:321 (5) - nc starts from here
27. 01:39:966 (5) - add 1/2 slider here instead
28. 01:43:063 (7,1) - stack these
29. 01:46:160 (3) - finish slider at 01:46:450 - and add circle at 01:46:547 -
30. 01:47:708 (9) - nc
31. 01:59:708 (2,2) - replace both with 1/2 sliders
32. 02:01:643 (5) - nc starts from here
33. 02:14:031 (1) - finish slider at 02:14:289 - and add circle at 02:14:418 -
34. 02:16:741 (6,7) - too much spaced
35. 02:19:063 (6) - add a 1/3 slider here instead
36. 02:19:837 (9,1) - increase DS
37. 02:20:999 (4) - random finish again?
38. 02:34:547 (4,1) - too much spaced
39. 02:34:934 (1,2) - ^
40. 02:35:579 (4,5) - ^^
41. 02:35:708 (5,6) - ^^^
42. 02:36:870 (2,1) - ^^^^
43. 02:37:514 (3,4) - ^^^^^
44. 02:37:514 (3,4) - increase DS
45. 02:46:031 (3,4) - again too much spaced
46. 02:46:934 (6,7,1) - why are there random 1/2 jumps in a part where only 1/3 beats exist ?
47. 02:50:031 (4) - finish at 02:50:289 - and move all these 02:50:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - back in a way that 02:50:547 (1) - starts at 02:50:418 -
48. 02:53:515 (1,2) - too much spaced
49. 02:54:547 (4,5) - increase DS
50. 02:58:547 (2,3) - ^
51. 03:01:128 (7,1) - too much spaced
52. 03:05:644 (11) - replace with 1/3 slider
53. 03:05:902 - 5% volume is too , even 30% is fine
54. 03:09:644 (2,3) - too much spaced
55. 03:10:418 (4,1) - ^
56. 03:10:547 (1,2) - ^^
57. 03:12:095 (1,2) - increase DS
58. 03:14:418 (3,4) - decrease DS
59. 03:15:192 (1,2) - increase DS
60. 03:16:224 (4,5) - decrease DS
61. 03:18:160 (12,1) - ^
62. 03:23:579 (4,5) - ^^
63. 03:32:224 (1,2) - ^^^
64. 03:35:579 (3,4) - increase DS
65. 03:46:547 (1) - remove nc
66. 03:48:482 (2,1) - decrease DS
67. 03:51:063 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - those ncs are not necassory
68. 04:19:450 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - increase DS between all them
69. 04:33:385 (9) - nc
70. 04:36:482 (5,6,7) - move these up to y:36
71. 04:49:257 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - its better if u use nc after 4 notes or 8 notes
72. 04:51:966 (8) - remove this and add a stream instead
73. 04:56:224 (5) - nc
74. 04:56:611 (9) - ^
75. 04:56:999 (13) - ^^
76. 05:04:353 (9) - ^^^
77. 05:49:256 - use a timing point here to decrease the volume

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Hi~

Fury :

1. 00:02:611 (4) - use a 1/2 reverse slider here - No, sorry.
2. 00:08:805 (6) - ^ - ^
3. 00:10:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - the triples dont even match the song ;w; 1/2 jumps work here - Done.
4. 00:18:095 - no object here or a random pause like this makes no sense - Fixed.
5. 00:18:676 (3) - 1/6 repeat slider - Fixed.
6. 00:25:643 (2) - ^ - ^
7. 00:27:579 - random finish? - Not random. Intended.
8. 00:27:966 - decrease volume - Done.
9. 00:35:611 - should be a note here ~ maybe replace 00:35:515 (7) - with a 1/4 slider - Would make the slider afterwards a bit too hard to hit, declined.
10. 00:39:192 (1) - remove nc - Done.
11. 00:39:966 (1) - ^ - ^
12. 00:46:547 (1) - slider should finish at 00:46:869 - - Done, but might revert back in the future.
13. 00:49:063 (4) - 1/6 slider here - Fixed.
14. 00:53:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rework on this pattern - I tried.
15. 00:54:192 - add circle - No.
16. 00:55:837 (1) - finish the slider at 00:56:127 - and add circle at 00:56:224 - - Done, but might change this later.
17. 00:59:708 (6,7) - bring 7 closer to 6 - Done lol
18. 01:03:192 (13) - finish it at 01:03:514 - - Would make hitting the circle afterwards too hard/sudden, declined.
19. 01:06:289 (13) - same ~ repeat 2 more times and bring 01:06:676 (1) - closer to it - Moved closer, but that's about it.
20. 01:15:579 (13) - move to 112,264 - Done.
21. 01:18:579 (7,8) - NotLikeThis~ bring 8 next to 7 - Done.
22. 01:27:579 (9) - replace with 1/4 slider - Done, but might change if I see fit.
23. 01:27:773 (10) - same - Not here though.
24. 01:30:676 (1) - remove nc - Done.
25. 01:32:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - first four notes are evenly spaced but 5 is a bit close to 4 , fix the spacing - Fixed.
26. 01:35:321 (5) - nc starts from here - Fixed.
27. 01:39:966 (5) - add 1/2 slider here instead - Done.
28. 01:43:063 (7,1) - stack these - Nah, separated them completely.
29. 01:46:160 (3) - finish slider at 01:46:450 - and add circle at 01:46:547 - - Nope.
30. 01:47:708 (9) - nc - Done.
31. 01:59:708 (2,2) - replace both with 1/2 sliders - Done.
32. 02:01:643 (5) - nc starts from here - Done.
33. 02:14:031 (1) - finish slider at 02:14:289 - and add circle at 02:14:418 - - Done.
34. 02:16:741 (6,7) - too much spaced - Moved.
35. 02:19:063 (6) - add a 1/3 slider here instead - Too strange, declined.
36. 02:19:837 (9,1) - increase DS - Done.
37. 02:20:999 (4) - random finish again? - Intended, not random.
38. 02:34:547 (4,1) - too much spaced - Fixed.
39. 02:34:934 (1,2) - ^ - lol
40. 02:35:579 (4,5) - ^^ - ok
41. 02:35:708 (5,6) - ^^^ - sorry
42. 02:36:870 (2,1) - ^^^^ - wow
43. 02:37:514 (3,4) - ^^^^^ - no rest for me
44. 02:37:514 (3,4) - increase DS - Wait, what?
45. 02:46:031 (3,4) - again too much spaced - Fixed.
46. 02:46:934 (6,7,1) - why are there random 1/2 jumps in a part where only 1/3 beats exist ? - That's a leftover from when that part used to be 1/4, thanks for spotting that.
47. 02:50:031 (4) - finish at 02:50:289 - and move all these 02:50:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - back in a way that 02:50:547 (1) - starts at 02:50:418 - - Done.
48. 02:53:515 (1,2) - too much spaced - Fixed.
49. 02:54:547 (4,5) - increase DS - Done.
50. 02:58:547 (2,3) - ^ - ^
51. 03:01:128 (7,1) - too much spaced - Fixed.
52. 03:05:644 (11) - replace with 1/3 slider - Done.
53. 03:05:902 - 5% volume is too , even 30% is fine - Fixed.
54. 03:09:644 (2,3) - too much spaced - Fixed
55. 03:10:418 (4,1) - ^ - Done
56. 03:10:547 (1,2) - ^^ - Done
57. 03:12:095 (1,2) - increase DS - Done
58. 03:14:418 (3,4) - decrease DS - Done
59. 03:15:192 (1,2) - increase DS - Done
60. 03:16:224 (4,5) - decrease DS - Done
61. 03:18:160 (12,1) - ^ - ^
62. 03:23:579 (4,5) - ^^ - ^
63. 03:32:224 (1,2) - ^^^ - ^
64. 03:35:579 (3,4) - increase DS - Done.
65. 03:46:547 (1) - remove nc - Done.
66. 03:48:482 (2,1) - decrease DS - There's nothing to decrease though? They're already rather close together.
67. 03:51:063 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - those ncs are not necassory - Fixed.
68. 04:19:450 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - increase DS between all them - Done.
69. 04:33:385 (9) - nc - Done.
70. 04:36:482 (5,6,7) - move these up to y:36 - Fixed.
71. 04:49:257 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - its better if u use nc after 4 notes or 8 notes - Well, I tried.
72. 04:51:966 (8) - remove this and add a stream instead - I might change this back later, but keeping for now.
73. 04:56:224 (5) - nc - Done.
74. 04:56:611 (9) - ^ - Done.
75. 04:56:999 (13) - ^^ - Unnecessary.
76. 05:04:353 (9) - ^^^ - ^
77. 05:49:256 - use a timing point here to decrease the volume - Done.

You still need alot of practise with 1/3 snaps i would say - Well, this is my first map using 1/3 and 1/6, so that much is a given.

Good Luck!~

HighTec wrote:

if i were you for metadata, I'd steal the tags from Alumetorz's set as well


since you already have the mp3 why not steal tags?? (^:

Phyloukz wrote:

Hi, you were asking in #modreq for HS help, I'm noob at hitsounding, so I wont give advice. Still want to mod it regulary, deal with it!!! - That's fine. I said I primarily would like hitsounding mods, but regular mods are just as fine as well.

Fury

00:14:813 (2,1) - overlap looks random and ugly tbh - Moved.
00:14:039 (1,2,1,2) - also i recommend to use same DS between those sliders (and improve the shapes a little bit, so it looks more structured) - I'm not quite sure how yet, tho with all other ideas that I had in the past, I'm pretty sure a way will just randomly come to me one random night, so I'll take note.
00:17:135 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - especially in slow parts and intros you need to have an eye on your structure and consistency (e.g. DS, same slider shapes, patterns), I made that section e.g. like this http://puu.sh/pOK8z/575c071aea.jpg (not accurate placed), also consider blankets - Same as above, I'll try this in the future.
01:50:039 - to 02:02:426 - kinda same problem like the point above - and again, same as above.
00:21:006 (3,1,2,3,1) - these objects have 0.0 flow to each other, in slow parts there should be even just a bit flow imo, but your map your rules just my opinion - I actually don't get what you're trying to say here, haha.
00:35:716 - to 00:46:555 - that sections is spaced kinda far, i recommend to reduce the spacing and keep far spacing for intense parts of the music (like in kiai time e.g.) - That was actually already on my "to-do list" of sorts, but I left that part out. But you raised a good point though.
00:50:426 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this doesnt really follow the sounds in the music, why not just put a 1/6 reverse slider to fit the music like http://puu.sh/pOKqt/4bce3ae403.jpg ? that feels a lot better imo - You are actually right, can't believe I hadn't noticed that! Good ears!
00:53:426 - place a note there since there's a sound in music - Yet again, good ears man!
00:53:910 (4) - this slider goes regarding to music aswell 2 ticks longer. 00:54:168 - and 00:54:232 - have sounds too - Hm, I left those 2 ticks off because I want to give a small window of time to hit the upcoming slider, but I covered the 2 ticks for now, might have to change this back in the future, who knows.
well.... i see you didnt follow the sounds in the music very much (at least your map has no reference to all or most sounds). I recommend to listen carefully with 25% playback rate to get all beats of the music - that much I already knew, but I left some of them off because in my opinion I think it would make it harder to hit a lot of things if I started to map literally everything and I don't want this to be a 6 star or anything, BUT I will look over it again and maybe change it again.
01:24:684 (11) - also (this is not the only example) make sure to make NC's in your streams (which could be a bit more exciting when it comes to my opinion) too - The slider seems a bit of a random choice for the NC, so I dialed it back 2 notes for the NC. I did know that my stream NC's are inconsistent as hell, but I'll look over them later and try to reach some compromise with how I pick my NCs for streams later.
02:36:490 - to 02:39:587 - this is a intense section, so higher spacing fits here well (instead of a slow section which isnt intense at all) - The intensity is dying down in this part though, hence why I made the low spacing between notes.
03:21:393 (2,3) - 03:22:168 (1,2) - 03:22:942 (1,2) - and so on.... - streams should always follow in the direction of the previous slider, so its the most pleasant way for your cursor to follow... keep that in mind, i'd really recommend to fix that - I don't really see an issue with this, I personally think that your proposed way would articifially increase difficulty, since I believe it'd cause sliderbreaks more often. Then again, I might still change this, so I'll keep it in mind.

well yeah, thats everything that comes firstly in my mind. You should improve on your structure, every beatmap has to be structured either when it comes to pleasant and common slidershapes or emphasizing specific parts of the music (in your case because you do a lower diff of this hard song).

My mod sounds a bit random but I still hope you can get some use of it. I hope you are a bit satisfied with my mod.
GL with your map and happy mapping! (:

Zenar11 wrote:

.....i like to before update ver...

i want to jump map before.....

Celektus wrote:

Bad map +1 star

Celektus wrote:

Subject: gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia

Celektus wrote:

Bad map +1 star

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

you really need to up the quality of the map

TsukiKawi wrote:

this is a good map
why dont you like it?