Why so fast? Something this calm should not be even half this speed..
And then you proceed to speed up the kiai.. ugh.
Anyways mod time.
[Simple]
The first problem is that your notes are at a DS where they other slightly overlap or don't overlap at all and this severely kills the aesthetics in the map. This would have been better mapped at 0.9 or 1.1 so all the notes are either slightly overlapped or not overlapped at all. This really sucks because you have some nicely designed sliders in this map.
- 00:25:565 (3) - you shouldn't alter DS here, especially on the easiest difficulty.
- 00:37:056 (2,3) - having all this jammed up in the corner as well isn't that appealing either. Try to end the (1)'s tail a bit lower so you have more room for these.
- 00:54:447 (2,2) - I don't really hear any sound on these. This would play better deleted imo.
- 01:31:404 (1,2) - would play better swapped so the slider catches the held vocals and the circle starts the new vocals.
- 01:35:131 (1,2) - ^
- 01:38:857 (1) - Make this a bit wider so you can see a hole in the circle. http://puu.sh/nXuyY.jpg
- Speed up in the kiai is uh, a bit much. This song is so relaxing so having these fast sliders counters against it.
[Advanced]
Again... feels way too fast
- 00:17:801 (2,3) - Would make more sense vocal wise if swapped.
- 00:28:981 (2,3) - ^ again.
- 01:52:522 (3,4) - Jump here is too big imo. Could be reduced some. maybe stack it where the previous (1) is.
- 02:07:739 (3,1) - Symmetry with these would be cool.
- 02:42:211 (1) - These sliders are umm, a bit sharp compared to the rest of them in your diff if that makes sense? They just stick out and not really in a good way. A smoother more symmetrical slider would suit better here.
Anyways, These are nice diffs but I just can't agree with the fast SV choice. Regardless, good luck o/
