from pm req ~
[Hard]
01:44:794 (3,4) - i think remove this would be nice break for player to reposition their mouse/aim for average player
[Insane]
01:05:194 (4,4) - maybe you can nc this because its a special instrument
01:44:794 (3) - if you are highlighting instrument here , this is too inaudible , but if you are highlighting vocal , should be a beat at 01:44:966 - as well (might as well make 3 as slider or something)
01:52:680 (2,3,4) - this movement feel a bit weird , but i dont know how to suggest to fit your pattern > <
[S miao miao :::>m<:::]
00:56:623 (3) - ctrl g this? since the vocal tone is not the same as 00:56:280 (2,4) -
01:06:566 (4,1) - this particular spacing is misleading because of things like 01:03:823 (4,5) - they are happened to be 1/2 spacings
01:25:937 (5,1) - maybe closer the blanket just to make it look uniform with 01:23:537 (1,2) - and 01:27:652 (1,2) -
01:39:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hmm this sound a bit weird to be honest , since its just a rising electronic sound of 1/2 and honestly it would start at 01:39:137 (2) - to be exact , if you were emphasising the same thing. but for this kind of instrument im suggesting 1/4 kickslider instead.
01:43:766 (1,2) - swap nc? since the chance of snap is on 2 and its stronger sound and keeping them uniform with 01:45:480 (1,2,3,4) -
01:44:794 (1) - you can remove this nc as well
[Frey]
00:45:994 (4,5,1) - hmm i dont know how to say but i feel like the rhythm could be better with slider>slider>circle instead of circle>circle>slider
because each of this red tick 00:45:994 - and 00:46:337 - have piano sound that can be emphasis with slider
nothing else , nice to play
nice map !!