FCL wrote:
ееее Фейнт
Slayed wrote:
shmi
00:15:061 (4) - х=414 у=243
00:17:503 (5) - нк сюда и отсюда 00:17:852 (1) - убери. чтобы было также, как и тут 00:13:317 (1) -
00:25:177 (3) - звучит как-то рандомно и глупо (учитывая то, что это слово начинается с предыдущего красного тика). лучше убери и начни спиннер тут 00:25:352 -
00:29:014 (1) - конец на красном тике звучит как-то не очень. http://cs622616.vk.me/v622616809/429db/w3QHiaYDAiU.jpg такие слайдеры выглядят лучше и по звучанию, и по ритму (касается всех!! слайдеров до 00:44:363 - ) я об этой беде и говорил
00:44:363 (1) - выглядит очень странно и вообще не подходит под музыку. если хочешь длинный слайдер, начни его там же и закончи 00:47:154 - тут. 00:47:241 - а тут начни спиинер и закончи его 00:49:247 - тут уже говорил
01:03:898 (3) - бланкет http://cs622616.vk.me/v622616809/429f4/Jcz7ZBI9mtI.jpg (не самый удачный пример)
01:34:596 (1) - не нужен он тут. у меня в дифе он есть для того, чтобы было легче в конце джампов. просто 01:34:596 - ноту ткни и норм.
дроп часть хорошо сделана, пофикси немного начало
ВозьмиSlayed wrote:
ваджи
00:06:514 (2) - совсем не обязательно, но может как-то так? http://cs629508.vk.me/v629508809/31f1a/LUbMCudLSYM.jpg ок
и вообще. что если увеличить спейсинг до 1?Фууу, блять фу нахуй 1,0 чтоб тебя с ним 00:08:084 (1,2) - вот здесь, к примеру, тогда не будет оверлапа. да и выглядеть будет лучше
00:10:875 (1,2) - я бы не стал юзать такие формы слайдеров. как-то неаккуратно смотрятся, что ли Мне нравки
00:12:096 (3) - лучше просто серкл поставить ок
00:13:666 (1,2) - какой-то вот такой http://cs629508.vk.me/v629508809/31f21/tqEW3pFZvkA.jpg поток смотрится лучше (уже с 1х спейсингом) Как-то сделано
00:17:852 (2,3,4) - http://cs629508.vk.me/v629508809/31f29/M3Jhe0JcNhA.jpg мне кажется, тут такой ритм А мне нет
00:23:433 (3,4,1) - что-то такое смотрится лучше http://cs629508.vk.me/v629508809/31f30/aqljUeLpq-E.jpg
00:35:294 (1,2,3) - http://cs629508.vk.me/v629508809/31f38/onMNI_MyuRQ.jpg по прямой ноты так себе ставить
00:38:782 (3,4) - опять не оч красивые формы М н е н р а в и т с я
00:41:573 (4) - а тут такой ритм http://cs629508.vk.me/v629508809/31f3f/Wbx7KsRC890.jpg Неа
00:43:840 (2) - сюда бы ноту Ок
00:45:933 (1) - странный слайдер на инструмент, лучше убери. и я бы 00:45:410 - тут начал лонг слайдер (чекни мой инс, поймешь) Чекануто, понято, сделано
00:48:200 (3) - ^ опять бы слайдер ^
остальная часть очень неплоха.
01:33:200 (3,4) - только вот это как-то сомнительно, может, как-нибудь по-другому? Нет
теперь как мне получить мою кудосу? хд
p.s. не забудь своровать хсы у меня из дифы
ой фсе если что я не виновата, применила всеFCL wrote:
- [важи замапала фейнта PogChamp]
- 00:16:282 (5) - конец овермапнут, там нет нихера, замени на ноту лучше
- 00:16:282 (5) - начни его с 00:25:700 лучше
- 00:29:538 (2) - тоже овермапнуто, убирай
- 00:33:200 (3) - вокал на красном тике заканчивается. Заменить на 1.5/1 репит будет неплохо
- 00:35:991 (3,4) - тоже
- 00:39:305 (4) - нет ничего на красном тике. только на белом
- 00:40:875 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - то ты мапаешь все в 1/2 при этом жутко овермпапая, то меняешь политику на 1/1, бред. Ты уже определись
- Чет так себе. В киае ты то мапашь под вокал, то непонятно под что. Советую все таки выбрать вокал и ремапнуть несколько фрагментов
even i'm not able to make a 7* diff for a dnb songSlayed wrote:
oo moekkeli seems like u want to map 7* pp diff right
FCL wrote:
- [шпаклиак]
- че там по комбо колорам?
- 00:20:294 (4) - запутанно для изика, плиз никогда так не делай. ладно
- 00:29:014 (1,2) - ммм, спейсинг в изике меняешь, ммм кайф тупанул жестко
- 00:35:991 (1) - и так никогда не делай, при низком спейсинге у тебя буду не бланкеты, а дерьмо вроде этого ой все
- 00:44:363 (1) - не предел совершенства по моим меркам, но для тебя сойдет /me душит фцлушку его же носками
- 01:23:433 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - по кайфу наверное 1/1 слайдерами спамить очень
Slayed wrote:
+ шняклак
01:06:340 - тут явно не хватает ноты хоп
rtytytyMaakkeli wrote:
hei
me taek tiket ok take it b0y
i don't like your hitsounds and i don't really get them
lol you like decided to not add proper kiais and just those random little things but idk i guess it's cool
FREEEEEEEDOM AÖHGHDSÖG
HP7 decimal HP is gay im gay
AR9.2 seems like a lot for a 172bpm 5.13* map but this is your choice but it works ok with pp jumpsz
I. 00:08:782 (5,6) - Rythm like this works better cause english vocals and yea ok
II. 00:09:305 (7) - For the everything that is good and kind in this world, pls silence sliderends at least in this calm part ;w;asdsad okkkk
III. 00:13:666 (2) - ass no, it will break some pattern after this sliderr
IV. 00:50:468 (3) - Ctrl+g for nice pleb flow again no, dont want to put some jumps in the vbeggingns
V. 00:51:340 (1) - What is this clap on that sliderend. I also hate that hitfinish sound, it's so annyoing oops fixed
VI. 00:52:735 (1) - You know that slider shapes go hand-to-hand with jump pattern flows so imo this would have flowed a lot better i think that these shapes are pretty k and dont do bad things so ill kepe themm
VII. 00:58:317 (1) - You were so consistent with those hitfinishes and now you just didn't add a finish here ooops
VIII. 00:59:363 (6) - Ctrl+g for derps ye ok
IX. 01:00:410 (4,5,6) - you know you can't hitsound these as the same when only one of these is a snare and the two others are kicks aaaa
X. 01:02:328 (1) - Ye I don't really like how you skip downbeats with these reverse sliders. I think they should be clickable since dnb you know drums are a big part of this genre and ye im following vocals so it shouldd be kk
XI. 01:10:875 (1,2,3) - I don't really understand why you do these. Don't seem to fit the song in my eyes it fits (with histsounds)
XII. 01:27:445 (5) - ye this is 100% not cool ; ;w
XIII. 01:34:596 (1) - Why not give this the biggest spacing? caz spacing here doesnt give anything tio the starrate and i dont want anyone to miss there with x2 spacinggg
yeasdfj
hard
I. 00:09:305 (5) - how bout make this a 1/1 slider and then a 1/2 slider from the white tick http://puu.sh/ntexf/2039a9ff2b.jpg ok
II. 00:51:340 (1) - Give proper emphasis by not stacking this under (4) ok
III. 01:05:294 (1) - ^ ok
seems pretty hard for a hard spacing feels a bit insaney but yes its smth like light ins, and advanced is more like hard lolo
ädvänced
I. 00:51:863 (2,3,4) - I don't think it's really safe to start with clickable 1/4 in an advanced. Tbh you should introduce 1/4 as a repeat slider in this diff imo should be fine
II. 00:59:363 (5) - Stacking this (piano sound and a snare) under (4) doesn't really make sense imo ok
III. 01:20:642 (1) - Ye stacking this under (6) really doesn't make sense why
right
First mod that is not in russian.
Like the biggest thing in this map is those hitsounds so pls fix them. It's not really cool to hitsound kicks and snares as the same thing. cant find any good hitsounds.. these are the best that i have found ;w;
ThanksMaakkeli wrote:
hei
me taek tiket ok
i don't like your hitsounds and i don't really get them
lol you like decided to not add proper kiais and just those random little things but idk i guess it's cool
shmik
I. 01:24:131 (2) - I don't know about this overlap
II. 01:26:921 (2) - Or this overlap. Might be kinda hard for noobs but idk
Otherwise a pretty liquid... I mean solid diff
First mod that is not in russian.
Like the biggest thing in this map is those hitsounds so pls fix them. It's not really cool to hitsound kicks and snares as the same thing.
Maakkeli wrote:
fcl hi mkl
I. 00:06:514 (4) - I would've liked to see some emphasis on vocals with this (unstacking) you are right tbh
II. 00:07:910 (5) - Ctrl+down once so it blends perfectly in the slider it is not there alrea
III. 00:12:096 (5) - Emphasis by unstacking it's my the best slider which i created ever, nah
IV. 00:38:782 (4) - This seemed kinda unfitting. I think the extended sliders would fit better. Like you did before this is fine since the song gets one more extra vocal line
V. 00:51:514 (2) - remove dat clap lol
VI. 01:00:584 (5,6,7) - You know you can't hitsound these as the same since only one of them is a snare and the two others are kicks but I'm just gonna assume that Slayed copied these for you since they sound so same won't change , i like it
VII. 01:03:898 (1) - Unstack for proper emphasis em, okay
VIII. 01:28:491 (4,5,6) - These just seem so unfitting since they don't really give good emphasis on things idk, i think emphasis is pretty fine, but well, i has increased the spacing
ok bye mkl
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thxMaakkeli wrote:
waji
To me it's kinda random that you use so much 1/2 rythms in the calm intro where you just map the vocals and then so little 1/2 rythms in the actual chorus or verse whatever. You could change like a lot of those 1/2 sliders in the intro to just circles
I. 00:10:526 (6,1,2,3) - How about a rythm like this ok
II. 00:18:724 (3,4) - I don't know but this rythm seems kinda unfitting. I couldn't come up with a better one sorry I changed the rhythm
III. 01:09:480 (1) - Where did the hitsounds disappear?
yea
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Feb wrote:
[General]
[fcl]
sup meinen Respekt
00:14:887 (5) - idk if im okay that you have strong vocals on the sliderend :/. Can you maybe try sth else uhhhhh maybbbbeee I feel that repeat 1/1 slider at this moment look perfect, change is not needed
00:56:224 (3) - would be cool if you stack this as well underneath 00:55:526 (1) - since you do it in the whole map but not there for some raisonss :^D overlap is looks perfect in my option imoo
00:56:224 (3,5) - why is this so close ;WW/// why not, it's fine if I have used 1/1 gap xD
01:33:200 (1) - i think the flow could be a bit better here. So maybe try this: 1 and 2 Idk, flow is fine imo
@shurito1saoDeppyforce wrote:
[insane]
yo fcl เคารพของฉัน
00:07:561 - end slider here, the sound here is better be mapped imo I have tried make it before, but every time when i done it i have felt that the end has overmap :<
00:25:003 (4) - make this a long slider dat ends on 00:25:700 - and start spinner after it would be more interesting imo not so intrested imo
00:52:387 (6,7) - mayb merge to 1/2 slider bcuz the sound on red tick there is obviously weaker than this tick 00:55:352
^ fix the rest of these if u agree, lazy to mention all of them It's pretty fine at least because the song has strong vocal here
01:25:352 (3,4) - shouldnt this be triple oups
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Namki wrote:
GeneralHard
- Моддинг асситант говорит —
Unused hitsounds:
soft-hitclap.wav да- У тебя есть СБ? Если нет, отрубай Вайдскрин саппорт. да
- Ну для красоты найди четвертый комбоколор. не хоц
Hyper
- 01:02:503 (1,2,3,4) - не нравится, что визуально находятся близко, поставь триплет чуть выше, выглядит лучше, да и флоу красивее. мне нраф
- К середине ты начал ставить спейсовые триплы, а под конец стакнутых вообще не было, поставь хоть один спейсовый вначале, например, 00:57:445 (2,3,4) - заместо этого стакнутого. ок
- 01:03:898 (1,2) - такое чувство, будто у тебя была идея сделать такие паттерны, но что-то пошло не так. Убери этот паттерн, он вообще не вписывается в общий ритм и картину паттернов, обилие 1/2 и 1/1 а тут 1/4 слайдер рандомный. разнообразим ритм, хотя мб удалю
В инсы и экстры я не умею, извините.
- 00:41:573 (3) - флоу не нравится, может сделать бланкет? Тогда и переход к 00:42:096 (4) - этому слайдеру будет хорошим, как думаешь? бланкеты для наутралов
Удачки. спасибо