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Cita Citata - Sakitnya Tuh Disini (Speed Up Ver.) [Taiko]

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PatZar
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, May 01, 2016 at 9:39:28 AM

Artist: Cita Citata
Title: Sakitnya Tuh Disini (Speed Up Ver.)
Tags: Genocide dangdut pop indonesia cut short version top2014
BPM: 170
Filesize: 2257kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.22 stars, 202 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.42 stars, 126 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (3.25 stars, 355 notes)
  4. Oni (4.07 stars, 524 notes)
Download: Cita Citata - Sakitnya Tuh Disini (Speed Up Ver.)
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cacat
[ A v a l o n ]
saaaakit nya tuh disini . . . . sambil nunjuk titit
Rido
kudos wkwkwkwk
Nishizumi
sampah
LigerZero
Ajjjiiiirrrr sampah

Dpt kds

Intelli
From q 8-)

General:
  1. Change title to "Sakitnya Tuh Disini (Speed Up Ver.)"

  2. Add a kiai from 00:46:695 to 00:57:989 ?
Kantan:
  1. 00:12:107 (10) - d to match vocals

  2. 00:45:989 (51) - It's pretty dense at the beginning, but then even though the musical density doesn't change until 00:57:989, the density just plummets to consistent 2/1s. Add more notes pls :D

  3. 01:09:283 (77) - I would use only 1 color for the "Saki, Saki, Saki" part]
Futsuu:
  1. 01:09:283 (122) - Same as Kantan, only I would use the kd pattern for all
Diff is basically fine imo

Muzu:
  1. 00:12:460 (57) - Remove finish on 57/58

  2. 00:12:813 (59) - More of a general thing about this diff, the triples here seems kinda inconsistent. Like how in the first grouping there are no triples (granted there was a Finisher to start it), but 2 in the next one. I would try to avoid this for consistency's sake.
Oni:
  1. 00:12:460 (71) - Same as Muzu

  2. 00:19:518 (120) - k ddd kkd d k

  3. 00:43:871 (286) - You could totally do something cool with doubles here, maybe this?

  4. 01:09:283 (445) - You could also add in some cool doubles things here too
Fun map, however be careful because the spread is even, but the gaps are quite large between all 4. GL :D
Topic Starter
PatZar
almost fixed thanks intellie :^)
Skylish
Hi, from my temporarily open M4M modding queue.

[General]

> I think the diff. spreads between Kantan and Futsuu are not so ideal. Futsuu can be harder and Muzu can be easier.

> There is no kiai session. Is this an effect you want?

> You did not change HP/OD at all lol.
[Muzukashii]

> 00:02:930 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The pattern sounds odd and blend, and may not match the vocal imo. Try this: dkkdkdk ?

> 00:05:401 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - ^ same reason, try this: kdkdkkd ?

> 00:09:636 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - The structure sounds weird because your previous patterns shape complete moulds of matching the vocal. If I were you, I would follow the previous structures and make some minor changes here. You may shift this note at 00:10:871 - to 00:10:518 - , and add k at 00:11:754 - . It sounds more concrete.

> 00:15:107 - delete this one because you did not put a note and the similar position at 00:20:754 - . Also, I think this note is not necessary.

> 00:22:518 - add k?

> 00:27:813 - shift it to 00:28:518 (137) - , the structure becomes better imo. This situation is similar to the previous one (00:09:636 - onwards) which I have mentioned.

> 00:31:342 - add d ? When the vocal becomes slurred, you map the slurred voices with notes packed. So here, I think you missed one note.

> 00:50:401 - shift it to 00:50:048 - because of similar structure at 00:47:754 (221,222,223,224,225,226,227) - . Pay attention to 00:47:401 (220) - , it is similar to 00:50:224 (234) - , so the pattern there and the surroundings should also be similar.

> 01:10:695 (312) - why not a Finish here? It is as same as 01:09:283 (305) - .

> 01:16:166 - add d here to make emphasize 01:16:342 (341) - ?

> OMG, after my mod, SR increases by 0.02 ~_~ RIP SR sys.

[Futsuu]

> Don't forget that I try to make it become harder, so there may be lots of advice of adding notes

> 00:02:224 (3) - add a note (d) here? There is a concern on the structure here, similar case in Muzu and Futsuu.

> If you do the above change, you may see that the first mono 5 1/2 chain (00:01:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) is too blend. Changing it into ddkkd can form a mirror of kkddk and makes the patterns not so boring.

> 00:12:460 - add d?

> 00:13:518 - really need a d here, due to similar pattern in 00:18:460 (37,38,39) -

> 00:17:048 change it to d?

> 00:17:401 - add d?

> 00:22:342 - / 00:22:518 - add d and k respectively. It is a need because you have done so in 00:16:695 (33,34,35) - . Please consider the consistency :)

> 00:44:577 (84) - change to k?

> The notes of the part between 00:24:107 (50) - and 00:45:636 (86) - are too scatterd. Although it is fine and also able to create a trend of more difficult to the climax part, the SR sys. is stupid and it keeps the SR too low. You may want to add some more complicated patterns in this part and I do not have clue for it right now.

> 00:49:871 - / 00:51:107 - / 00:54:283 - add d for these timings.

> The consistency of this climax is not so good. If you can fix that, I think the SR can increase.

> From 00:57:989 (118) - to 01:00:107 - , you may try to increase the density of the notes, the current one tastes blend.


By the same token, fix the similar parts later on.

> 01:14:224 (143) - delete this, it is outstanding and not good here.

> 01:12:460 - add k ?

> 01:18:107 - add k

> 01:18:813 - add d

These fixes can only make the SR become 1.8, so the gap of SR is still a bit wide. Please add more complicated patterns to narrow the gap.

[Kantan]

> Check the consistency of notes distribution. I am tired enough to mention it lol.

> 01:14:577 - add d.

[Oni]
I am not good at modding Oni here, because I do not know what you are going to change in the easier diff.s. However, I would like to leave some comments here because I had testplayed it. It did not run so smooth due to too many dkd / kdk patterns tgt at the same time. Also, some cymbal crashes are not matched properly with k in ordinary circumstances. Please check them.

That's it. I hope my modding is helpful. (but somehow I will destroy your patterns completely ~_~) :)
Prophecy
From Prophecy Modding Queue v2
Mod Number : 27 / 500
[]

[Genocideral]
Just suggestion of Setting
Kantan : HP 8 / OD 3
Futsuu : HP 7 / OD 4
Muzu : HP 6 / OD 5
Oni : HP 5 / OD 6

[Futsuu]
00:02:224 (3) - k, higher pitch and avoiding the boring d d d d d structure.
00:02:930 (5) - k, better beat here for me *suggestion.
00:07:518 (12,13,14,15) - you missing a notes , it's same music(vocal) with 00:01:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - please follow back ;P, that mean you should adding a "d" here 00:07:518 (13) - .
00:22:695 (44) - the music sudden stop here, add a finish here would be awesome to emphasize.
00:46:695 - adding a kiai part star there , Although it's repeating back the vocal before.
00:45:989 (82,83,84,85) - same situation, the sounds match with before. 00:01:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:07:166 (12,13,14,15,16) - that mean you should changed the pattern become d d k d k.
00:57:283 - kiai may stop here.
00:59:401 (110,111) - I can see your points, but you should following back the repeated pattern
01:10:695 (125) - D, it's same as 01:08:930 (122,123) -
01:14:577 (132,133) - this D too, following 00:59:401 (110,111)
01:16:342 (135) - d, check the consistency of your map please.
01:19:166 (139) - add finisher! nice effect if last notes is a big notes ;)

Generally, Please check the consistency of your map.
[]

Good Luck! Nice map lololol
You know it's short mod :>
Surono

LigerZero wrote:

Ajjjiiiirrrr sampah

Dpt kds

udah diremove xd ayy
Topic Starter
PatZar
almost fixed, and many changes in this map.
this shit map is too old that i want to remap some parts thanks updated
- Frontier -
From #thai
All of my mods are imo and follow a song :v
d | k
D | K

[Kantan]
00:01:519 (1) - k
00:08:577 (8,9) - ctrl+g
00:15:636 (17) - k
00:16:695 (19,20) - ctrl+g
00:18:813 (23) - delet or ctrl+g with 00:19:166 (24)
00:22:342 (29) - k
00:24:107 (31,32) - ^
00:25:518 (33) - d
00:27:989 (38) - k
00:30:107 (42) - delete
00:30:460 - k
00:35:401 (51) - K
00:41:754 (63,64) - ctrl+g
00:51:636 (82) - no sound here lolololol
01:00:813 (96) - k
01:02:930 (98) - delete
01:14:577 (116,117) - ctrl+g
01:15:989 (118,119) - ^
01:17:401 (120) - k

[Futsuu]
00:04:342 (7) - k
00:17:754 (40) - deleet
00:20:048 (44,45) - ctrl+g
00:22:518 (51) - k
00:31:695 (70) - ^
00:32:048 (72,73) - ctrl+g
00:43:342 (99) - d
00:44:930 (103,104) - k
00:48:460 (116) - k
00:48:636 - d
00:48:813 (117) - k
00:55:518 (138,139) - ctrl+g
00:56:930 (143,145) - ^
00:59:401 (150) - k
01:00:460 (151,152) - ^
01:07:518 (167,168) - ctrl+g
01:09:636 (172,174) - k
01:11:048 (177,179) - ^
01:12:636 (183) - ^
01:13:871 (187) - ^
01:14:577 (190,191) - ctrl+g
01:15:283 (192) - k
01:16:342 (196) - d
01:16:695 (197,199) - k
01:16:871 (198) - d

[Muzukashiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii]
00:12:989 (62,63) - k
00:14:136 (69) - deleet
00:17:048 (84) - d
00:17:577 (86) - delete
00:17:754 (86) - d
00:18:107 (87) - ^
00:18:636 (90,91,92) - k
00:21:371 (106) - deleet
00:21:548 - k
00:21:636 (107) - ^
00:21:989 (110) - d
00:33:989 (161) - ^
00:53:577 (249) - ^
00:54:106 (251,253) - ctrl+g
00:54:813 (254) - d
00:55:518 (257) - k
00:56:577 (261,262) - ctrl+g
00:57:107 (264,265) - ^
00:59:401 (272,273) - k

[Oni-chan~]
00:14:136 (84) - deleet
00:14:224 (85,86) - ctrl+g
it's too hard to mod oni diff cuz im newby :v

that's a good map good luck patzar
สวัสดีครับ
Nishizumi
Hi, this is mod as you requested via pm

  1. CHANGE WIP TO PENDING PLEASE SINCE YOUR MAP IS NOT MARATHON, THIS MAP IS CUT VERSION LIKE THOSE SHIT TV SIZES
that's all, hope it would help you. good luck :)


kudoz plz
Annadine


gila

bilqiscutee
cacat
Topic Starter
PatZar

- Frontier - wrote:

From #thai
All of my mods are imo and follow a song :v
d | k
D | K

[Kantan]
00:01:519 (1) - k
00:08:577 (8,9) - ctrl+g
00:15:636 (17) - k
00:16:695 (19,20) - ctrl+g
00:18:813 (23) - delet or ctrl+g with 00:19:166 (24)
00:22:342 (29) - k
00:24:107 (31,32) - ^
00:25:518 (33) - d
00:27:989 (38) - k
00:30:107 (42) - delete
00:30:460 - k
00:35:401 (51) - K
00:41:754 (63,64) - ctrl+g
00:51:636 (82) - no sound here lolololol
01:00:813 (96) - k
01:02:930 (98) - delete
01:14:577 (116,117) - ctrl+g
01:15:989 (118,119) - ^
01:17:401 (120) - k

[Futsuu]
00:04:342 (7) - k
00:17:754 (40) - deleet
00:20:048 (44,45) - ctrl+g
00:22:518 (51) - k
00:31:695 (70) - ^
00:32:048 (72,73) - ctrl+g
00:43:342 (99) - d
00:44:930 (103,104) - k
00:48:460 (116) - k
00:48:636 - d
00:48:813 (117) - k
00:55:518 (138,139) - ctrl+g
00:56:930 (143,145) - ^
00:59:401 (150) - k
01:00:460 (151,152) - ^
01:07:518 (167,168) - ctrl+g
01:09:636 (172,174) - k
01:11:048 (177,179) - ^
01:12:636 (183) - ^
01:13:871 (187) - ^
01:14:577 (190,191) - ctrl+g
01:15:283 (192) - k
01:16:342 (196) - d
01:16:695 (197,199) - k
01:16:871 (198) - d

[Muzukashiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii]
00:12:989 (62,63) - k
00:14:136 (69) - deleet
00:17:048 (84) - d
00:17:577 (86) - delete
00:17:754 (86) - d
00:18:107 (87) - ^
00:18:636 (90,91,92) - k
00:21:371 (106) - deleet
00:21:548 - k
00:21:636 (107) - ^
00:21:989 (110) - d
00:33:989 (161) - ^
00:53:577 (249) - ^
00:54:106 (251,253) - ctrl+g
00:54:813 (254) - d
00:55:518 (257) - k
00:56:577 (261,262) - ctrl+g
00:57:107 (264,265) - ^
00:59:401 (272,273) - k

[Oni-chan~]
00:14:136 (84) - deleet
00:14:224 (85,86) - ctrl+g
it's too hard to mod oni diff cuz im newby :v

that's a good map good luck patzar
สวัสดีครับ
หวัดดีครับ :^)
half of them acceptable
ayomikasa

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi, this is mod as you requested via pm

  1. CHANGE WIP TO PENDING PLEASE SINCE YOUR MAP IS NOT MARATHON, THIS MAP IS CUT VERSION LIKE THOSE SHIT TV SIZES
that's all, hope it would help you. good luck :)


kudoz plz
Same as i though :D
Kudos cepetan
Surono
WKWKOWKWOKWOKWOKWOKWOKWOKWOWKOWKOWKOWK

Otw Patrick Lifetime to jail, Silet 6969hoursh.. double combosss. KWOKWOkkwoKWOKw

map terkutuk. ampas
Shinzo-
wado
Intelli

Ayomi wrote:

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi, this is mod as you requested via pm

  1. CHANGE WIP TO PENDING PLEASE SINCE YOUR MAP IS NOT MARATHON, THIS MAP IS CUT VERSION LIKE THOSE SHIT TV SIZES
that's all, hope it would help you. good luck :)


kudoz plz
Same as i though :D
Kudos cepetan
new mod:

stop giving kudos to random people or its gonna get nuked

kds please
Topic Starter
PatZar
wadooooo

notes for nishizumi, ayomi, both are modded my map thq
Skeuddy
Hey

Muzukashii
  1. 00:12:283 - Some note (disregarded sound)
  2. 00:29:577 - ^
  3. 00:34:871 - ^
  4. 00:53:930 - ^
  5. 00:15:107 (76) to 00:15:460 and here 00:15:901 - add a note (k)
  6. 00:20:754 (105) to 00:21:107
  7. 00:19:783 (99) - d and move to 00:20:136
  8. 01:14:401 (331) - d
  9. 00:17:577 (87) - Delete
Oni
  1. 00:14:666 (88) to 00:14:489
  2. 00:20:489 (129) to 00:20:136
  3. 00:21:901 (139) to 00:21:548
  4. 00:42:813 - Some note (disregarded sound)
  5. 00:45:901 - ^
Topic Starter
PatZar
nice mod, almost fixed, thanks for mod updated
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