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Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma<Re:Queen'M> [OsuMania]

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Feerum
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Requested Check



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Hello FC!
Sorry that it took so long
Here's my check for ya Hentai Chicken

General


Artist: Right
Title: Wrong. I Talked with some Nominators and we decided this as wrong title. Please add "<>" for the 《》. Also without Space. So Your Romanised Title have to be "Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>"
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Right
Other: -

BASIC

00:28:643 - From here i really don't know what are you follow with your 1/2 Beat Notes.
They play really really really strange, because you do not follow the most audible you can (what you really should do in a Easy difficulty)
I recommand to make following:
00:28:897 - Add here a note on 2.
00:29:533 (29533|2) - Move this up to 00:29:660 - .
00:30:041 - Add here a note on 4.
00:30:423 (30423|3) - Move to 3
00:30:550 (30550|0) - up to 00:30:677 -
Following are Optional, if you think it would make it too hard do not add them:
00:30:868 - Add on 4
00:31:376 - Add on 1.

Yeah this makes it really way better to play because you follow the most audible melody you can. That's really cool for an Easy.

00:55:719 - You could add here a note on 3 to follow the same sound like 00:53:558 (53558|1,53685|2) - .

That's all!

NOVICE

Hmm.. not sure about these 00:22:669 (22669|2,22923|1) - .
I think it would be for a Novice better to follow only the guitar. You followed here only the guitar in this part and these "break" the flow a bit with following the drum suddenly.
I recommend to delete these notes.
00:22:541 (22541|3) - Move this one then to 3 aaand 00:23:304 (23304|1,23431|0) - CTRL + G for Pitch \:D/
Plays really cool, ohh and 00:21:524 (21524|0) - delete this note for consistency. You never had a Single note + LN beginn for the guitar, only at 00:20:508 - but here you have a cymbal so it's okay!

00:55:338 - Add here a note on 1 for the heavy cymbal.

01:22:793 (82793|2,82920|3) - CTRL + G for PR?

Thats all!

ADVANCED

00:31:694 - Are you really sure you want to make this as 1234 rolls only?
The sound is actually perfect for 1243 D:
Maybe consider to 00:31:821 (31821|2,31885|3,32075|2,32139|3,32330|2,32393|3) - ctrl+g these.

00:36:207 - Did you left this empty intentionally?

00:44:914 - I really like this Long stream! Just one/two little suggestion for flow
I think you break the stream at some wrong places.
What i don't like is 00:51:016 (51016|2,51080|1,51143|3) - . You break the flow on a blue tick, what can be really awkward to play,
My suggestion would be to move 00:51:016 (51016|2,51080|1) - one to the right and 00:51:143 (51143|3) - to 2 to make better "flow breaks" which also makes sense!

Thats all. I really like this diff :)

EXHAUST

00:36:207 - same like in Advance, intentionally empty?
I mean you still have here drum :D

woah that's all. Really great diff FC u ET Mapper

GRAVITY

00:36:207 - Again the same thing and slowly i think it's really intentional :D:D
00:46:440 (46440|0) - Remove C hitsound. Double Sampled at this timing.
00:48:982 (48982|2) - Change F to C
01:02:202 - // I liked when here was an LN, i think the LN did appear at 01:04:235 - ? Too bad you removed it :(
But maybe it was a bit to hard to play hum?

01:09:828 - Either you have here a note missing or you have in the EXHAUST a note too much, but it's inconsistent here with the Exhaust!
Please recheck this :D

01:30:547 (90547|3,90674|3,90802|3) - Intentionally? D:

Nothing more to say!

I still love this song. It sound's so god damn epic.
Call me back asap!
Aruel
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Topic Starter
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Feerum wrote:

Requested Check



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello FC!
Sorry that it took so long
Here's my check for ya Hentai Chicken

General


Artist: Right
Title: Wrong. I Talked with some Nominators and we decided this as wrong title. Please add "<>" for the 《》. Also without Space. So Your Romanised Title have to be "Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>" - da fuk I thought I fixed it already looool
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Right
Other: -

BASIC

00:28:643 - From here i really don't know what are you follow with your 1/2 Beat Notes.
They play really really really strange, because you do not follow the most audible you can (what you really should do in a Easy difficulty)
I recommand to make following:
00:28:897 - Add here a note on 2.
00:29:533 (29533|2) - Move this up to 00:29:660 - .
00:30:041 - Add here a note on 4.
00:30:423 (30423|3) - Move to 3 - Adding is all accepted also re-arranged myself
00:30:550 (30550|0) - up to 00:30:677 -
Following are Optional, if you think it would make it too hard do not add them:
00:30:868 - Add on 4
00:31:376 - Add on 1.

Yeah this makes it really way better to play because you follow the most audible melody you can. That's really cool for an Easy.

00:55:719 - You could add here a note on 3 to follow the same sound like 00:53:558 (53558|1,53685|2) - .

That's all!

NOVICE

Hmm.. not sure about these 00:22:669 (22669|2,22923|1) - .
I think it would be for a Novice better to follow only the guitar. You followed here only the guitar in this part and these "break" the flow a bit with following the drum suddenly.
I recommend to delete these notes.
00:22:541 (22541|3) - Move this one then to 3 aaand 00:23:304 (23304|1,23431|0) - CTRL + G for Pitch \:D/
Plays really cool, ohh and 00:21:524 (21524|0) - delete this note for consistency. You never had a Single note + LN beginn for the guitar, only at 00:20:508 - but here you have a cymbal so it's okay!

00:55:338 - Add here a note on 1 for the heavy cymbal.

01:22:793 (82793|2,82920|3) - CTRL + G for PR?

Thats all!

ADVANCED

00:31:694 - Are you really sure you want to make this as 1234 rolls only?
The sound is actually perfect for 1243 D:
Maybe consider to 00:31:821 (31821|2,31885|3,32075|2,32139|3,32330|2,32393|3) - ctrl+g these.

00:36:207 - Did you left this empty intentionally? - Yup it's intentional. There's drum is kinda hard to feel

00:44:914 - I really like this Long stream! Just one/two little suggestion for flow
I think you break the stream at some wrong places.
What i don't like is 00:51:016 (51016|2,51080|1,51143|3) - . You break the flow on a blue tick, what can be really awkward to play,
My suggestion would be to move 00:51:016 (51016|2,51080|1) - one to the right and 00:51:143 (51143|3) - to 2 to make better "flow breaks" which also makes sense! - Re-arranged something

Thats all. I really like this diff :)

EXHAUST

00:36:207 - same like in Advance, intentionally empty? - Yup
I mean you still have here drum :D

woah that's all. Really great diff FC u ET Mapper - Call my lawyer Jin plz

GRAVITY

00:36:207 - Again the same thing and slowly i think it's really intentional :D:D
00:46:440 (46440|0) - Remove C hitsound. Double Sampled at this timing.
00:48:982 (48982|2) - Change F to C - I'm so pro at HS
01:02:202 - // I liked when here was an LN, i think the LN did appear at 01:04:235 - ? Too bad you removed it :( - Sorry but I have a lot of complaining about here from a lot of ET players ;w;
But maybe it was a bit to hard to play hum?

01:09:828 - Either you have here a note missing or you have in the EXHAUST a note too much, but it's inconsistent here with the Exhaust!
Please recheck this :D

01:30:547 (90547|3,90674|3,90802|3) - Intentionally? D: - No D:

Nothing more to say!

I still love this song. It sound's so god damn epic.
Call me back asap!
Fixed without Red things!

Thanks for checking Fee!
Feerum
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That's cool
Finally we can move dis

Bubbled
Aruel
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Feerum wrote:

That's cool
Finally we can move dis

Bubbled
Thanks for bubble Fee! :>
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wth you really write me as Zanor Rizqy there lmfao
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Rizqy wrote:

wth you really write me as Zanor Rizqy there lmfao
Identity compromised xD
Aruel
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Rizqy wrote:

wth you really write me as Zanor Rizqy there lmfao
At least it's better than Hentai Zan. Isn't it? kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Jinjin
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Sexy chicken ~~
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iJinjin wrote:

Sexy chicken ~~
ET
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mod

1234

[All diffs]
Split the kiai time may gave another better feeling for this map
1st: 01:36:268 - ends on here
2nd: begins on 01:38:302 - (use red timing to add kiai time here) / ends on 01:50:505 -
3rd: begins on 01:55:081 - (use red timing) ends on 01:58:131 -

[BASIC]
i think move 00:02:966 (2966|1) - to 1st 00:03:220 (3220|2) - to 4th and 00:03:474 (3474|3) - to 2nd will let it more balance and fun to play
00:04:491 (4491|2,4745|1,5000|0) - same with this (4-1-3)
00:13:644 (13644|3) - to 1st and 00:13:898 (13898|0) - to 2nd for the pitch flow
00:18:220 (18220|1) - maybe if you're following bell sound for earlier, on here doesn't have bell imo
00:21:270 (21270|3) - move to 3rd for balance
00:23:495 (23495|0) - move to 2nd, which will be more balance here
00:27:308 (27308|2) - maybe remove this, if you gonna follow main melody, on 00:27:499 - also have; but if you're gonna follow drum sound; 00:27:118 (27118|1) - is already enough
00:32:711 (32711|0) - move to 4th for balance from being blank too much
00:39:830 (39830|2,40084|2,40338|3,40592|3) - switch columns of them (4 -> 3 and 3 -> 4) due to pitchy
00:44:406 (44406|3,44660|1) - you can make a mini jack here for the pitch flow
00:48:728 - on here have drum too, depend on you want to add a note on 1st or not
00:51:524 (51524|3) - i think move it to three will help it more balance (http://puu.sh/poJDV/152304d543.jpg) if you keep it's a little weird on here imo (http://puu.sh/poJFK/5da4d3fe04.jpg)
00:56:863 (56863|3) - i think this note should be placed on 00:56:736 - ; piano continue start on here and maybe move it to 2rd for balance too
01:11:607 (71607|0) - it would be more better imo if you move this note to 2nd for bass; same on 01:12:116 (72116|1) - which is a little more balance
01:19:743 (79743|2,79997|1) - for two of them; http://puu.sh/poJNn/3a3293be19.jpg which will be more better for rhythm don't you think, and if you applied it, fix the hitsound too if you please; it sound different than 01:21:013 (81013|1) -
01:22:984 (82984|3) - move this to 3rd for balance (http://puu.sh/poJPA/af595d32c6.jpg)
01:35:759 (95759|1,96013|0) - switch it, pitch are going up; 01:36:268 - add a note on here for cymbal may better
01:53:555 (113555|2,113810|2,114064|3,114318|3) - switch them like i told you before

continue
Aruel
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Kuo Kyoka wrote:

mod

1234

[All diffs]
Split the kiai time may gave another better feeling for this map
1st: 01:36:268 - ends on here
2nd: begins on 01:38:302 - (use red timing to add kiai time here) / ends on 01:50:505 -
3rd: begins on 01:55:081 - (use red timing) ends on 01:58:131 -

[BASIC]
i think move 00:02:966 (2966|1) - to 1st 00:03:220 (3220|2) - to 4th and 00:03:474 (3474|3) - to 2nd will let it more balance and fun to play
00:04:491 (4491|2,4745|1,5000|0) - same with this (4-1-3)
00:13:644 (13644|3) - to 1st and 00:13:898 (13898|0) - to 2nd for the pitch flow
00:18:220 (18220|1) - maybe if you're following bell sound for earlier, on here doesn't have bell imo - There's some sound like 'dum'. I followed that
00:21:270 (21270|3) - move to 3rd for balance
00:23:495 (23495|0) - move to 2nd, which will be more balance here
00:27:308 (27308|2) - maybe remove this, if you gonna follow main melody, on 00:27:499 - also have; but if you're gonna follow drum sound; 00:27:118 (27118|1) - is already enough
00:32:711 (32711|0) - move to 4th for balance from being blank too much - hmm but it will kinda hard to play due to short LN, re-arranged
00:39:830 (39830|2,40084|2,40338|3,40592|3) - switch columns of them (4 -> 3 and 3 -> 4) due to pitchy
00:44:406 (44406|3,44660|1) - you can make a mini jack here for the pitch flow - hmm I don't think they have same sound imo
00:48:728 - on here have drum too, depend on you want to add a note on 1st or not
00:51:524 (51524|3) - i think move it to three will help it more balance (http://puu.sh/poJDV/152304d543.jpg) if you keep it's a little weird on here imo (http://puu.sh/poJFK/5da4d3fe04.jpg)
00:56:863 (56863|3) - i think this note should be placed on 00:56:736 - ; piano continue start on here and maybe move it to 2rd for balance too
01:11:607 (71607|0) - it would be more better imo if you move this note to 2nd for bass; same on 01:12:116 (72116|1) - which is a little more balance - hmm Sorry but I'd like to keep it
01:19:743 (79743|2,79997|1) - for two of them; http://puu.sh/poJNn/3a3293be19.jpg which will be more better for rhythm don't you think, and if you applied it, fix the hitsound too if you please; it sound different than 01:21:013 (81013|1) -
01:22:984 (82984|3) - move this to 3rd for balance (http://puu.sh/poJPA/af595d32c6.jpg)
01:35:759 (95759|1,96013|0) - switch it, pitch are going up; 01:36:268 - add a note on here for cymbal may better
01:53:555 (113555|2,113810|2,114064|3,114318|3) - switch them like i told you before

continue
Thanks for checking Kuo!
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Nomination Assessment Team
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Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma<Re:Queen'M> [osu!mania modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Qualified
(Lachryma)

Congratulations!

Mod
2016-06-11 19:13 Fresh Chicken: yo Kuo I applied your mods on BASIC, do I update it?
2016-06-11 19:13 Kuo Kyoka: lol so fast
2016-06-11 19:14 Kuo Kyoka: maybe update first
2016-06-11 19:14 Kuo Kyoka: we can irc the rest
2016-06-11 19:14 Fresh Chicken: I'm so fast like cumming of rabbit
2016-06-11 19:14 Fresh Chicken: Oki
2016-06-11 19:14 Fresh Chicken: Oh and
2016-06-11 19:14 Fresh Chicken: I changed BG
2016-06-11 19:14 Fresh Chicken: :^)
2016-06-11 19:14 Kuo Kyoka: cumming of rabbit
2016-06-11 19:14 Kuo Kyoka: lol hh
2016-06-11 19:14 Kuo Kyoka: oh yea cool
2016-06-11 19:15 Kuo Kyoka: i have to say your current bg now is a little low quality
2016-06-11 19:15 Fresh Chicken: Yup, but
2016-06-11 19:15 Fresh Chicken: This BG (Updated) will make us cum
2016-06-11 19:17 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/908252 3R2 - Opening]
2016-06-11 19:17 Kuo Kyoka:  /np me the map again
2016-06-11 19:17 Kuo Kyoka: damn code
2016-06-11 19:17 Fresh Chicken: Oh what's it o.o
2016-06-11 19:17 Kuo Kyoka: np me your queen
2016-06-11 19:18 Fresh Chicken: lol oki
2016-06-11 19:18 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/901050 Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>]
2016-06-11 19:18 Fresh Chicken: Here's my queen
2016-06-11 19:19 Kuo Kyoka: gay
2016-06-11 19:19 Kuo Kyoka: okay better quality
2016-06-11 19:19 Kuo Kyoka: teach me how to pts too pls
2016-06-11 19:19 Fresh Chicken: :^0
2016-06-11 19:19 Fresh Chicken: Oh
2016-06-11 19:19 Fresh Chicken: wait
2016-06-11 19:19 Fresh Chicken: Oh it's okay
2016-06-11 19:19 Fresh Chicken: First
2016-06-11 19:20 Fresh Chicken: Call your friend who is really good at photoshop
2016-06-11 19:20 Fresh Chicken: Second
2016-06-11 19:20 Fresh Chicken: Wait
2016-06-11 19:20 Fresh Chicken: Your BG will come automaticly
2016-06-11 19:20 Fresh Chicken: Third
2016-06-11 19:20 Fresh Chicken: This is how to make BG :^)
2016-06-11 19:21 Kuo Kyoka: but ure ptser
2016-06-11 19:21 Kuo Kyoka: okay i'm checking easy mod
2016-06-11 19:22 Kuo Kyoka: 00:44:406 (44406|3,44660|1) - lol i mistake with bg piano and "eh-eh sound"
2016-06-11 19:23 Fresh Chicken: hhh yeah
2016-06-11 19:24 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/901051 Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma<Re:Queen'M> [NOVICE]]
2016-06-11 19:24 Fresh Chicken: I'm in
2016-06-11 19:24 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:313 (1313|0,1949|1) - switch them maybe better for balance
2016-06-11 19:24 Kuo Kyoka: well depend on you
2016-06-11 19:25 Fresh Chicken: Sure, also 00:02:839 - 00:03:474 - changed here too
2016-06-11 19:25 Kuo Kyoka: because this hammer is around till next too
2016-06-11 19:25 Kuo Kyoka: yeah nice
2016-06-11 19:26 Kuo Kyoka: 00:09:322 (9322|0,9576|2) - move to 3 - 2? it should be better for pitch
2016-06-11 19:26 Fresh Chicken: Surex
2016-06-11 19:27 Kuo Kyoka: 00:13:644 (13644|0,13898|3,14152|1) - move to 4 - 2 - 3 will help for pitch too
2016-06-11 19:27 Fresh Chicken: Okay
2016-06-11 19:28 Kuo Kyoka: 00:14:152 (14152|2,34745|3,34745|0) - this i can accecpt because it have ligh cymbal here but not 00:35:253 (35253|1,35253|0) - 
2016-06-11 19:28 Kuo Kyoka: remove a note
2016-06-11 19:28 Fresh Chicken: Oh ya nice one
2016-06-11 19:28 Fresh Chicken: Removex
2016-06-11 19:28 Kuo Kyoka: 00:36:524 (36524|1,36652|0) - instrument is different than earlier, maybe switch column for them
2016-06-11 19:29 Fresh Chicken: Yup
2016-06-11 19:30 Kuo Kyoka: 00:40:338 (40338|3,40465|1,40592|3,40719|1) - this one is quite a good patterns combined with earlier too but pitch on here is different from other, how about change 00:40:465 (40465|1,40592|3) - to 3 - 1 ?
2016-06-11 19:31 Fresh Chicken: Re-arrangex like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5363944
2016-06-11 19:32 Kuo Kyoka: 01:04:235 - on here; maybe for make it both easier for new players and also get it more balance; i would suggest this http://puu.sh/poMkb/23a0e356e4.jpg
2016-06-11 19:33 Kuo Kyoka: may need to rearrage the next up too
2016-06-11 19:33 Fresh Chicken: Oh that's the pattern what I like
2016-06-11 19:33 Fresh Chicken: Sure
2016-06-11 19:34 Fresh Chicken: *Surex
2016-06-11 19:35 Kuo Kyoka:  01:28:641 (88641|2) - move to 1st, i think pitch for these bass are different but 1/4 and 3/4 are same; same with 2/4 and 4/4 too
2016-06-11 19:35 Kuo Kyoka: 01:29:149 (89149|1,89403|1,89658|1) - but this one is same pitch, yet
2016-06-11 19:35 Kuo Kyoka: yes*
2016-06-11 19:36 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/poMuI/e8d25e3593.jpg 01:37:285 - for pitch on here
2016-06-11 19:36 Fresh Chicken: hmm made like this with reference your suggeSITON https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5363972
2016-06-11 19:37 Fresh Chicken: hmm Sorry I want to keep  01:37:285 - here
2016-06-11 19:38 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2016-06-11 19:38 Kuo Kyoka: 01:55:081 - how about change like i suggested you before
2016-06-11 19:38 Kuo Kyoka: for normal players with this bpm they may get easily miss i think
2016-06-11 19:38 Fresh Chicken: Sure
2016-06-11 19:39 Fresh Chicken: Yeah that was my intention lol but fixed
2016-06-11 19:40 Kuo Kyoka: 00:11:991 (11991|3) - maybe move to 3rd
2016-06-11 19:40 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/901047 Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma<Re:Queen'M> [ADVANCED]]
2016-06-11 19:40 Kuo Kyoka: 00:12:754 (12754|0,12881|0) - this minijack i can accecpt because bass right here
2016-06-11 19:42 Fresh Chicken: hmm But I'd like to make some mirror with that
2016-06-11 19:42 Kuo Kyoka: 00:28:516 (28516|3,28580|0) - to 2 -3 for pitch; it's different but a little similar with 00:28:389 (28389|1,28452|2) - 
2016-06-11 19:42 Kuo Kyoka: i see
2016-06-11 19:43 Fresh Chicken: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5364013How about this
2016-06-11 19:43 Fresh Chicken: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5364013 How about this
2016-06-11 19:44 Kuo Kyoka: nice
2016-06-11 19:44 Kuo Kyoka: work better
2016-06-11 19:44 Fresh Chicken: bettex
2016-06-11 19:45 Kuo Kyoka: 00:38:813 (38813|3,38940|3,39067|2,39194|1,39321|0,39448|0,39575|1,39702|2,39830|1,39957|1,40084|2,40211|0,40338|2,40465|2,40592|1,40719|3) - eeh
2016-06-11 19:45 Fresh Chicken: o.o
2016-06-11 19:45 Kuo Kyoka: its good
2016-06-11 19:45 Kuo Kyoka: but
2016-06-11 19:45 Kuo Kyoka: dat jack is wrong pitch
2016-06-11 19:46 Kuo Kyoka: you want to keep?
2016-06-11 19:46 Kuo Kyoka: i can give you suggestion
2016-06-11 19:46 Fresh Chicken: hmm yeah but I'd like to keep I think this pattern is not awkward to play enough
2016-06-11 19:46 Fresh Chicken: yup
2016-06-11 19:46 Fresh Chicken: I want to keep ;w;
2016-06-11 19:46 Kuo Kyoka: sure
2016-06-11 19:48 Kuo Kyoka: 01:25:272 (85272|1) - maybe move to 3rd for the mirror of 01:24:064 (84064|3,84064|2,84255|1,84446|3,84446|0) - 
2016-06-11 19:48 Kuo Kyoka: but idk where to put 01:25:208 (85208|2) - 
2016-06-11 19:49 Kuo Kyoka: 01:35:335 (95335|1,95420|2,95505|3,95505|0,95590|2,95674|1,95759|3,95759|0,95844|1,95929|2,96013|0,96013|3,96098|2,96183|1) - ctrl + h for better pitch
2016-06-11 19:50 Fresh Chicken: 01:25:272 - I have no idea for this part lol
2016-06-11 19:50 Fresh Chicken: 01:35:335 (95335|2,95420|1,95505|3,95505|0,95590|1,95674|2,95759|3,95759|0,95844|2,95929|1,96013|0,96013|3,96098|1,96183|2) - Acceptex
2016-06-11 19:51 Kuo Kyoka: 01:38:047 (98047|1) - move to 4th which make it a little different than 01:38:174 (98174|2,98302|1,98429|2) - 
2016-06-11 19:52 Fresh Chicken: Yup, appliex
2016-06-11 19:54 Kuo Kyoka: 01:52:538 (112538|1,112666|1,112793|1,112920|2,113047|3,113174|3,113301|3,113428|2,113555|0,113682|0,113810|0,113937|1,114064|2,114191|2,114318|2,114445|1) - kek this
2016-06-11 19:54 Kuo Kyoka: well nvm
2016-06-11 19:54 Fresh Chicken: Sex
2016-06-11 19:54 Fresh Chicken: :^)
2016-06-11 19:54 Kuo Kyoka: lel
2016-06-11 19:55 Kuo Kyoka: actually i suggest you to change it like before part
2016-06-11 19:55 Kuo Kyoka: with mini 1/2 jack
2016-06-11 19:55 Fresh Chicken: oh I see
2016-06-11 19:55 Fresh Chicken: Sure
2016-06-11 19:55 Kuo Kyoka: players may complain shit
2016-06-11 19:55 Fresh Chicken: Changex
2016-06-11 19:56 Kuo Kyoka: okay move on
2016-06-11 19:57 Fresh Chicken: Yup captain
2016-06-11 19:57 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/901049 Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma<Re:Queen'M> [EXHAUST]]
2016-06-11 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: 00:46:948 (46948|2) - missed whistle
2016-06-11 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: lol i just realize i need to check hs too
2016-06-11 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: but lol hs so small it hard to notice it well
2016-06-11 19:59 Fresh Chicken: Oh man lol
2016-06-11 19:59 Fresh Chicken: Yup, but added all diff
2016-06-11 20:01 Kuo Kyoka: i like the way you add bass drum here
2016-06-11 20:01 Kuo Kyoka: creative
2016-06-11 20:02 Fresh Chicken: Actually it's really similiar with original song lol
2016-06-11 20:03 Kuo Kyoka: 01:06:269 (66269|1) - move to 1st, no longer jack mania with 01:06:142 (66142|1) - 
2016-06-11 20:03 Kuo Kyoka: i mean piano
2016-06-11 20:03 Fresh Chicken: Surex
2016-06-11 20:04 Kuo Kyoka: 01:17:455 (77455|2,77709|2,77963|3,78218|3) - b4 you have no jack 1/1 but why here
2016-06-11 20:04 Fresh Chicken: I seex
2016-06-11 20:05 Fresh Chicken: Fixex
2016-06-11 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: 01:24:255 -  01:25:272 - similar with00:24:766 -  00:25:783 - 
2016-06-11 20:07 Fresh Chicken: You are so sharp lolol
2016-06-11 20:07 Fresh Chicken: Fixed
2016-06-11 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: lol not fixes? haha
2016-06-11 20:08 Fresh Chicken: !
2016-06-11 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: xes
2016-06-11 20:08 Fresh Chicken: Fixex
2016-06-11 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: sex
2016-06-11 20:08 Fresh Chicken: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2016-06-11 20:09 Kuo Kyoka: 01:48:217 - 
2016-06-11 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: 4th is quite unbalanced with this kind of pattern
2016-06-11 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: left will be painful
2016-06-11 20:10 Fresh Chicken: 01:48:471 (108471|1) - Move to 4
2016-06-11 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: 01:48:471 (108471|1) - move to 4
2016-06-11 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: lol same ideas
2016-06-11 20:10 Fresh Chicken: WOW
2016-06-11 20:10 Fresh Chicken: Appliex
2016-06-11 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: sure
2016-06-11 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: let move the rest
2016-06-11 20:11 Fresh Chicken: hh Sure
2016-06-11 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/901050 Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma<Re:Queen'M> [GRAVITY]]
2016-06-11 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: od hp 8.5 lol
2016-06-11 20:11 Fresh Chicken: hmm Rest?
2016-06-11 20:11 Fresh Chicken: lol
2016-06-11 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: the rest of the map
2016-06-11 20:11 Fresh Chicken: oh lol I see
2016-06-11 20:12 Fresh Chicken: Looks my brother wants to use "my" PC
2016-06-11 20:12 Kuo Kyoka: shit
2016-06-11 20:12 Kuo Kyoka: so what now
2016-06-11 20:13 Fresh Chicken: Please keep to check this one :)
2016-06-11 20:13 Fresh Chicken: I told to my brother I need to use PC now
2016-06-11 20:13 Fresh Chicken: So we can keep it up
2016-06-11 20:13 Kuo Kyoka: nice
2016-06-11 20:14 Fresh Chicken: owo)b
2016-06-11 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:06:016 (6016|3,6016|2,6080|1,6144|0,6207|3,6271|1,6271|0,6334|2,6398|1,6461|3,6525|0,6525|2,6589|1,6652|0,6716|2) - 
2016-06-11 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: maybe single stream here will be better
2016-06-11 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: no other sound would disturb the 1/1 that make you can add 2 notes for 1/1
2016-06-11 20:14 Fresh Chicken: Oki
2016-06-11 20:15 Kuo Kyoka: so remove 1/1 maybe better
2016-06-11 20:15 Fresh Chicken: Sure, appliex
2016-06-11 20:16 Fresh Chicken: Wait
2016-06-11 20:16 Fresh Chicken: Timing point unsnapped lol
2016-06-11 20:16 Fresh Chicken: I mean preview time
2016-06-11 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: lol wut
2016-06-11 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: holy
2016-06-11 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: i just notice it too
2016-06-11 20:17 Fresh Chicken: We were almost died lolol
2016-06-11 20:17 Fresh Chicken: Fixex
2016-06-11 20:17 Kuo Kyoka: 00:11:864 - actually it's not big change actually
2016-06-11 20:17 Kuo Kyoka: lol wrong timing
2016-06-11 20:17 Kuo Kyoka: i mean that preview time
2016-06-11 20:17 Kuo Kyoka: and 00:11:864 - no drum here, remove a note
2016-06-11 20:18 Fresh Chicken: There's some similiar sound like 00:07:033 - 00:08:559 - those notes
2016-06-11 20:18 Kuo Kyoka:  00:32:457 - 
2016-06-11 20:18 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-06-11 20:18 Kuo Kyoka: 1/4
2016-06-11 20:18 Kuo Kyoka: actually 1/8
2016-06-11 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: but space not allow you to do that
2016-06-11 20:19 Fresh Chicken: Wait
2016-06-11 20:19 Fresh Chicken: I can
2016-06-11 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: wtf
2016-06-11 20:19 Fresh Chicken: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5364281
2016-06-11 20:19 Fresh Chicken: \o/
2016-06-11 20:20 Fresh Chicken: Let me fix all of 1/65
2016-06-11 20:20 Fresh Chicken: I mean same parts
2016-06-11 20:20 Kuo Kyoka: sure nice
2016-06-11 20:20 Kuo Kyoka: alright
2016-06-11 20:21 Kuo Kyoka: 00:42:499 (42499|3,42626|2,42753|3) - swtich these column
2016-06-11 20:21 Kuo Kyoka: 00:42:372 (42372|3,42499|3) - they're not same pitch
2016-06-11 20:21 Fresh Chicken: Sure
2016-06-11 20:22 Kuo Kyoka: 00:46:440 (46440|0) - hmm i argee you can put note here for drum but why the next not add a note for drum like this
2016-06-11 20:22 Kuo Kyoka: 00:46:948 - example
2016-06-11 20:22 Kuo Kyoka: so better remove it
2016-06-11 20:22 Fresh Chicken: Oh man nice catch
2016-06-11 20:26 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-06-11 20:26 Kuo Kyoka: i can't fix the rest
2016-06-11 20:26 Kuo Kyoka: lol
2016-06-11 20:26 Fresh Chicken: lol
2016-06-11 20:27 Kuo Kyoka: udpate
2016-06-11 20:27 Fresh Chicken: Oki
2016-06-11 20:27 Fresh Chicken: Ah wait
2016-06-11 20:27 Fresh Chicken: nvm
2016-06-11 20:27 Kuo Kyoka:  01:49:234 - 
2016-06-11 20:27 Kuo Kyoka: anyway why you not add piano 1/3 here
2016-06-11 20:28 Fresh Chicken: Yes?
2016-06-11 20:28 Fresh Chicken: Oh
2016-06-11 20:28 Fresh Chicken: Shit
2016-06-11 20:28 Fresh Chicken: hmm
2016-06-11 20:28 Fresh Chicken: Seems it's more better isn't it lol
2016-06-11 20:28 Kuo Kyoka: lol
2016-06-11 20:28 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2016-06-11 20:29 Fresh Chicken: wait
2016-06-11 20:29 Fresh Chicken: let me fix here
2016-06-11 20:29 Fresh Chicken: 01:50:251 -
2016-06-11 20:29 Fresh Chicken: Make 12-34
2016-06-11 20:30 Fresh Chicken: Okay updated
2016-06-11 20:30 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2016-06-11 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-06-11 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: maybe nothing to be discussed again
2016-06-11 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: i will qualify it
2016-06-11 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: anymore uodate?
2016-06-11 20:34 Fresh Chicken: Wait
2016-06-11 20:35 Fresh Chicken: Okay, gogo!
2016-06-11 20:35 Kuo Kyoka: wait gogo
2016-06-11 20:35 Kuo Kyoka: lmao
2016-06-11 20:36 Fresh Chicken: stopstop
2016-06-11 20:36 Fresh Chicken: lmao
2016-06-11 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: lol wut
2016-06-11 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: no delay okay nixe
2016-06-11 20:36 Fresh Chicken: Oh HS
2016-06-11 20:36 Fresh Chicken: Don't worry I stole some ranked maps
2016-06-11 20:36 Fresh Chicken: :^0
2016-06-11 20:36 Fresh Chicken: :^)
2016-06-11 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: lmao
2016-06-11 20:37 Kuo Kyoka: and you fixed bpm alright
2016-06-11 20:37 Fresh Chicken: Yup, with your mod
2016-06-11 20:37 Kuo Kyoka: now hoping Harbyter won't make snap mod
2016-06-11 20:38 Kuo Kyoka: again posting
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hi im shinzo, not hater >w<

[GRV]
  1. 00:35:507 (35507|2,35507|3,35592|1,35592|0,35677|2,35677|3) - are you following the guitar ? cuz if yes, you can hear it carefully, it's not constantly 1/3 snap.. well it's diffrent with 00:34:999 (34999|0,34999|2,35084|1,35084|3,35169|2) - this one because it has 1/3 drum but on 00:35:592 (35592|1,35592|0,35677|3,35677|2) - in here there's a guitar (actually there's a kick on 00:35:592 - but not on 00:35:677 (35677|3,35677|2) - )


well actually on ADV & EXH too
ok just that maybe :'v
if im wrong then ok =w=)b it just my ears maybe
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last trill hurts so much
Harbyter
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Shinzo- wrote:

hi im shinzo, not hater >w<

[GRV]
  1. 00:35:507 (35507|2,35507|3,35592|1,35592|0,35677|2,35677|3) - are you following the guitar ? cuz if yes, you can hear it carefully, it's not constantly 1/3 snap.. well it's diffrent with 00:34:999 (34999|0,34999|2,35084|1,35084|3,35169|2) - this one because it has 1/3 drum but on 00:35:592 (35592|1,35592|0,35677|3,35677|2) - in here there's a guitar (actually there's a kick on 00:35:592 - but not on 00:35:677 (35677|3,35677|2) - )


well actually on ADV & EXH too
ok just that maybe :'v
if im wrong then ok =w=)b it just my ears maybe

if we consider that guitar pitch aren't always 100% accurate then i don't see any problem here , and snapping some irregular notes at that point will be ugly xd
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Harbyter wrote:

Shinzo- wrote:

hi im shinzo, not hater >w<

[GRV]
  1. 00:35:507 (35507|2,35507|3,35592|1,35592|0,35677|2,35677|3) - are you following the guitar ? cuz if yes, you can hear it carefully, it's not constantly 1/3 snap.. well it's diffrent with 00:34:999 (34999|0,34999|2,35084|1,35084|3,35169|2) - this one because it has 1/3 drum but on 00:35:592 (35592|1,35592|0,35677|3,35677|2) - in here there's a guitar (actually there's a kick on 00:35:592 - but not on 00:35:677 (35677|3,35677|2) - )


well actually on ADV & EXH too
ok just that maybe :'v
if im wrong then ok =w=)b it just my ears maybe

if we consider that guitar pitch aren't always 100% accurate then i don't see any problem here , and snapping some irregular notes at that point will be ugly xd
Okay then :D
Grats chcken >w<
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i think it's fine enough
a little bit chanllenging is fun
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