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Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma<Re:Queen'M> [OsuMania]

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Aruel
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 6월 11일 토요일 at 오후 10:29:11

Artist: Kaneko Chiharu
Title: Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>
Source: SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags: SDVX Grace The 5th KAC original song contest KONAMI BEMANI
BPM: 236
Filesize: 5919kb
Play Time: 01:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED - 4Key (3.5 stars, 1121 notes)
  2. BASIC - 4Key (1.34 stars, 336 notes)
  3. EXHAUST - 4Key (4.24 stars, 1421 notes)
  4. GRAVITY - 4Key (5.28 stars, 1845 notes)
  5. NOVICE - 4Key (2.21 stars, 654 notes)
Download: Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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There was a country, and a village, and a street, and there was a castle.
There was life, and mind, and wisdom, and there was a management.
There was everything, but there was nothing.
Let's talk about "if". There is a one of ruined kingdom, if there was a light ...

ㅡㅡYes, this is another story of one of the country.
The other side of the secret that shows a great fortune tellingㅡㅡ
Bough is extending.
Next page is... in your hand.


――And, The illusion of queen reachs the hand for taking a crown.

The illusion? The real? I do not care about them.
I am the only one who desreves the crown, a Queen!

- "Malchut" - The Queen of Ruined Empire Grace

Thanks for awesome BG and banner Vampir!!

Here's another Lachryma made by Zanor Rizqy

BASIC - For beginner players. No has any comment about this difficulty.

NOVICE - This is a for novice players but it should be hard difficulty for novice players. Be careful the piano stream!

ADVANCED - For now, we can get more closer to feel this song! The 236BPM with 16 beat stair stream will visit you.

EXHAUST - Do you think the ADVANCED difficulty is too easy or lack for satisfy? Here is the EXHAUST then! This is an upgrade version of ADVANCED. Keeping the directional of ADVANCED and make it more harder! from this difficulty is for real players. Be careful the streams in the middle and last! Do you wonder what it is? Play it!

GRAVITY - The hardest difficulty of this mapset. The complex patterns will ruin your hands. Poly rhythm, Long note with a stream, Jump hand stream And a delay stream! The endless hardest chart will defeat you.
Last edited by Aruel , edited 97 times in total.
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wow.. fast xD
Muzaka_old
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so fast xD
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[ A v a l o n ]
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[ A v a l o n ]
awww yessssssssssss
Aruel
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Hello guys o/
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Fresh Chicken wrote:

Hello guys o/
o/
just 1 day after submitted and this beatmap is got 20 favs
wow so HYPE
i think i will slap your ass now ╭( ･ㅂ･)و
Aruel
1,891 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Aruel

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

o/
just 1 day after submitted and this beatmap is got 20 favs
wow so HYPE
i think i will slap your ass now ╭( ･ㅂ･)و
OH YES HIT ME MASTER AHHHHHH YES!!!!!!♥♥!♥!♥!♥!♥♥
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Fresh Chicken wrote:

OH YES HIT ME MASTER AHHHHHH YES!!!!!!♥♥!♥!♥!♥!♥♥
ㅁㅊ.

절대 할거 없어서 모딩하는거 아님
아이 아니라고 아니야 아닐거야

그리고 모딩 폼 잃어버려서 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ

☆★개같은 타이밍★☆


  1. 668,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    20498,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    59142,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    62192,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    66259,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    79987,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    80371,-100,4,2,0,0,0,1
    98292,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,1
    110495,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,1
    115071,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,1
    118125,-100,4,2,0,0,0,0
    이거 [TimingPoints]에 복붙 ㄱ
    왠진 모르겠는데 이거 적용한 다음 12스냅으로 맞추고 전체 노트 리스냅 해야됨
    개같은 버그
  2. kiai time 01:20:241 - 여기서 시작하는거 어떰? 01:36:258 - 여기서 끝내고
    이것만 적용한다면 이걸 베끼삼
    668,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    20498,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    59142,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    62192,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    66259,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    79987,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    80241,-100,4,2,0,0,0,1
    96258,-100,4,2,0,0,0,0
    98292,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    110495,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    115071,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    118125,-100,4,2,0,0,0,0
  3. kiai time 01:44:393 - 여기서 시작하고 01:50:495 - 여기서 끝내는것도 괜찮을듯
    이것도 적용하려면 이걸 베끼삼
    668,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    20498,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    59142,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    62192,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    66259,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    79987,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    80241,-100,4,2,0,0,0,1
    96258,-100,4,2,0,0,0,0
    98292,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    104393,-100,3,2,0,0,0,1
    110495,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    115071,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    118125,-100,4,2,0,0,0,0
  4. 개친절


위에 타이밍 먼저 적용하고 아래 모딩들을 받는것이 멘탈에 좋을수도?

GRAVITY


  1. 개인적으로 글씨 크기 큰게 보기 좋아서 이렇게 함
  2. 보기 불편하다면 ㅈㅅ 내가 편했음
  4. 힛사 볼륨 0%네 이건 뭐 넣으면서 고치겠지
  6. 00:05:244 (5244|3,5244|0) - 얘 둘 중 하나 00:06:006 - 까지 늘리는거 어떰? 뒤에 웅장한 클래식이 여기까지 들리는 거 같은디
  7. 여기 아래에 나온 타이밍은 다 떠블로 만들기 (ㅇㅇ 내가 패턴모딩은 개못하고 이런것만 골라냄)
    (아마도)라고 표시한거는 아마도임
    00:06:769 (6769|2) -
    00:08:549 (8549|2) - (아마도)
    00:08:930 (8930|2) -
    00:09:693 (9693|1) -
    00:09:820 (9820|3,9820|2) - (여기는 트리플로 만드는건 너무 오버매핑인가? 몰러 결정해보쇼)
    00:10:074 (10074|2) - (아마도)
    00:10:456 (10456|2) -
    00:11:600 (11600|2) - (아마도)
    00:11:981 (11981|2) -
    00:13:125 (13125|0) - (아마도)
    00:13:506 (13506|3) -
    00:14:015 (14015|3) -
  8. 00:17:193 (17193|3) - 얘 지워도 될듯함 (00:15:667 - 여기엔 없으)
  9. 00:20:498 - ~ 범위는 정확히 모르겠는데 더블로 만든거는 멜로디 따라간겨?
    만약 그렇다면 무시하고 아니라면 드럼에 더블 넣어주셔
  10. 00:23:548 (23548|0) - 이거 사실 00:23:485 - 여기임
  11. 00:24:565 (24565|0,24565|1,24947|1,24947|0) - 트리플? Finish가 들어갈만한 자리인데
    00:25:582 (25582|2,25582|3,25964|1,25964|2) - 여기도
    00:32:701 (32701|0,32701|3,33082|1) - 여기도 (특히 00:33:082 - 는 최소한 더블로 부탁)
    00:33:718 (33718|3,33718|0,34099|2) - 여기도 (특히 00:34:099 - 는 최소한 더블로 부탁)
  12. 00:35:180 - 여기 노트 빠짐
    00:36:197 - ^
  13. 00:53:930 (53930|3,53930|2) - 트리플
  14. 00:55:328 (55328|1) - 더블/트리플
  15. 00:57:997 (57997|0,57997|1) - 트리플
  16. 00:58:824 - 00:58:951 - 00:59:078 - 여기 노트 빠졌으
  17. 00:59:904 (59904|0,60667|2) - 여기 더블
  18. 01:02:192 (62192|2) - 더블
  19. 01:04:225 - ~ 01:06:196 - 치기 개힘듬 ㄹㅇ
    01:55:071 - ~ 01:58:058 - ^
  20. 01:09:309 (69309|2,69309|0) - 트리플
  21. 01:12:106 (72106|3,72233|2) - 더블?
  22. 01:12:360 (72360|3,72360|1) - 트리플
  23. 01:13:886 (73886|0,74394|1) - 00:14:396 (14396|1,14778|0,15032|1) - 여기랑 박자 똑같게 해야될듯
    01:15:411 (75411|1,75920|0) - ^
  24. 01:25:071 (85071|1,85071|0,85453|2,85453|1) - 트리플
  25. 01:30:410 - 여기 노트?
    01:30:919 - ^
  26. 01:32:190 (92190|3,92190|0,92571|3,92571|2) - 트리플
    01:33:207 (93207|3,93207|0,93588|0,93588|1) - ^
  27. 01:35:241 (95241|0,95241|3,95304|2,95325|1,95368|3,95410|2,95431|1,95495|0,95495|3,95559|2,95580|1,95622|0,95664|2,95686|1,95749|3,95749|0,95813|1,95834|2,95876|0,95919|1,95940|2,96003|0,96003|3,96067|1,96088|2,96131|3,96173|1,96194|2) - 이거 ㄹㅇ 첫플 때 공포감 느꼈었엌ㅋㅋ 딱 내려오는데
    아직도 공포감 느낌
  28. 01:44:393 (104393|3,104393|2) - 트리플?
  29. 01:47:020 (107020|1,107105|1,107275|2,107359|2) - 이거 애매하게 연타인데 치기가 살짝 이상했으
  30. 01:48:969 (108969|3,108969|0,108969|2,109097|3,109097|1,109224|3,109224|1,109224|0,109351|0,109351|2,109478|2,109478|0,109478|1,109605|3,109605|1) - 여기 3스냅
  31. 01:54:944 (114944|2) - 01:55:007 - 여기로 옮기라


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Aruel
1,891 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Aruel

jakads wrote:

Fresh Chicken wrote:

OH YES HIT ME MASTER AHHHHHH YES!!!!!!♥♥!♥!♥!♥!♥♥
ㅁㅊ.

절대 할거 없어서 모딩하는거 아님
아이 아니라고 아니야 아닐거야

그리고 모딩 폼 잃어버려서 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ

☆★개같은 타이밍★☆


  1. 668,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    20498,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    59142,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    62192,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    66259,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    79987,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    80371,-100,4,2,0,0,0,1
    98292,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,1
    110495,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,1
    115071,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,1
    118125,-100,4,2,0,0,0,0
    이거 [TimingPoints]에 복붙 ㄱ
    왠진 모르겠는데 이거 적용한 다음 12스냅으로 맞추고 전체 노트 리스냅 해야됨
    개같은 버그 - 이게 슬라이더틱 맞출려고 그런거같은데 이게 사볼내에서는 문제가 안되는 타이밍이라 이건 퀫한테 물어보고 고쳐야할듯
  2. kiai time 01:20:241 - 여기서 시작하는거 어떰? 01:36:258 - 여기서 끝내고 -ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 아 존나귀찮다 나중에 고쳐야지 근데 괜찮네
    이것만 적용한다면 이걸 베끼삼 
    668,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    20498,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    59142,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    62192,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    66259,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    79987,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    80241,-100,4,2,0,0,0,1
    96258,-100,4,2,0,0,0,0
    98292,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    110495,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    115071,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    118125,-100,4,2,0,0,0,0
  3. kiai time 01:44:393 - 여기서 시작하고 01:50:495 - 여기서 끝내는것도 괜찮을듯
    이것도 적용하려면 이걸 베끼삼
    668,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    20498,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    59142,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    62192,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    66259,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    79987,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    80241,-100,4,2,0,0,0,1
    96258,-100,4,2,0,0,0,0
    98292,254.237288135593,3,2,0,0,1,0
    104393,-100,3,2,0,0,0,1
    110495,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    115071,254.237288135593,4,2,0,0,1,0
    118125,-100,4,2,0,0,0,0
  4. 개친절


위에 타이밍 먼저 적용하고 아래 모딩들을 받는것이 멘탈에 좋을수도?

GRAVITY


  1. 개인적으로 글씨 크기 큰게 보기 좋아서 이렇게 함
  2. 보기 불편하다면 ㅈㅅ 내가 편했음
  4. 힛사 볼륨 0%네 이건 뭐 넣으면서 고치겠지
  6. 00:05:244 (5244|3,5244|0) - 얘 둘 중 하나 00:06:006 - 까지 늘리는거 어떰? 뒤에 웅장한 클래식이 여기까지 들리는 거 같은디 - 이건 고려를 해봐야할듯 이게 너무 이쁨 ㅋㅋ
  7. 여기 아래에 나온 타이밍은 다 떠블로 만들기 (ㅇㅇ 내가 패턴모딩은 개못하고 이런것만 골라냄)
    (아마도)라고 표시한거는 아마도임
    00:06:769 (6769|2) -
    00:08:549 (8549|2) - (아마도)
    00:08:930 (8930|2) -
    00:09:693 (9693|1) - 수정
    00:09:820 (9820|3,9820|2) - (여기는 트리플로 만드는건 너무 오버매핑인가? 몰러 결정해보쇼) - 수정
    00:10:074 (10074|2) - (아마도)
    00:10:456 (10456|2) -
    00:11:600 (11600|2) - (아마도)
    00:11:981 (11981|2) -
    00:13:125 (13125|0) - (아마도)
    00:13:506 (13506|3) -
    00:14:015 (14015|3) -
  8. 00:17:193 (17193|3) - 얘 지워도 될듯함 (00:15:667 - 여기엔 없으 여기다가 추가함)
  9. 00:20:498 - ~ 범위는 정확히 모르겠는데 더블로 만든거는 멜로디 따라간겨? - ㅇㅇ 맞음
    만약 그렇다면 무시하고 아니라면 드럼에 더블 넣어주셔
  10. 00:23:548 (23548|0) - 이거 사실 00:23:485 - 여기임 - 이게 멜로디가 2개인데 저기다가 넣으면 조잡해져서 일부러 안넣음 ㅋㅋ
  11. 00:24:565 (24565|0,24565|1,24947|1,24947|0) - 트리플? Finish가 들어갈만한 자리인데
    00:25:582 (25582|2,25582|3,25964|1,25964|2) - 여기도
    00:32:701 (32701|0,32701|3,33082|1) - 여기도 (특히 00:33:082 - 는 최소한 더블로 부탁)
    00:33:718 (33718|3,33718|0,34099|2) - 여기도 (특히 00:34:099 - 는 최소한 더블로 부탁)
  12. 00:35:180 - 여기 노트 빠짐
    00:36:197 - ^ - 거긴 멜로디가 너무작음 ㅋㅋ
  13. 00:53:930 (53930|3,53930|2) - 트리플
  14. 00:55:328 (55328|1) - 더블/트리플
  15. 00:57:997 (57997|0,57997|1) - 트리플
  16. 00:58:824 - 00:58:951 - 00:59:078 - 여기 노트 빠졌으
  17. 00:59:904 (59904|0,60667|2) - 여기 더블
  18. 01:02:192 (62192|2) - 더블 - 여기는 거절
  19. 01:04:225 - ~ 01:06:196 - 치기 개힘듬 ㄹㅇ - 응 나두알아 ㅎ
    01:55:071 - ~ 01:58:058 - ^
  20. 01:09:309 (69309|2,69309|0) - 트리플
  21. 01:12:106 (72106|3,72233|2) - 더블?
  22. 01:12:360 (72360|3,72360|1) - 트리플
  23. 01:13:886 (73886|0,74394|1) - 00:14:396 (14396|1,14778|0,15032|1) - 여기랑 박자 똑같게 해야될듯
    01:15:411 (75411|1,75920|0) - ^
  24. 01:25:071 (85071|1,85071|0,85453|2,85453|1) - 트리플
  25. 01:30:410 - 여기 노트?
    01:30:919 - ^
  26. 01:32:190 (92190|3,92190|0,92571|3,92571|2) - 트리플
    01:33:207 (93207|3,93207|0,93588|0,93588|1) - ^
  27. 01:35:241 (95241|0,95241|3,95304|2,95325|1,95368|3,95410|2,95431|1,95495|0,95495|3,95559|2,95580|1,95622|0,95664|2,95686|1,95749|3,95749|0,95813|1,95834|2,95876|0,95919|1,95940|2,96003|0,96003|3,96067|1,96088|2,96131|3,96173|1,96194|2) - 이거 ㄹㅇ 첫플 때 공포감 느꼈었엌ㅋㅋ 딱 내려오는데 - 이스냅 킵하면서 그나마 나은 패턴이 저거임 ㅅㅂ ㅋㅋ
    아직도 공포감 느낌
  28. 01:44:393 (104393|3,104393|2) - 트리플?
  29. 01:47:020 (107020|1,107105|1,107275|2,107359|2) - 이거 애매하게 연타인데 치기가 살짝 이상했으
  30. 01:48:969 (108969|3,108969|0,108969|2,109097|3,109097|1,109224|3,109224|1,109224|0,109351|0,109351|2,109478|2,109478|0,109478|1,109605|3,109605|1) - 여기 3스냅 - 3스냅은 01:49:481 - 여기밖에없음
  31. 01:54:944 (114944|2) - 01:55:007 - 여기로 옮기라 - 멜로디가 2개인데 거따옮기면 치기 훨힘들어짐ㅋㅋ


그래비티 하고 귀찮아짐
모딩 ㄳㄳ <3
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That stairs =w=
Is it just me or this is kinda similiar with INF-B L-aste-R
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모딩 일단 쿠돋 2개발사

BASIC
00:01:303 (1303|1,1430|2) - 이 노트 두개 삭제하시고 노빅처럼 000:1:430 줄 부터 4비트 간격으로 노트 3개를 배치해주시는게 어때요? 난이도 면에서도 괜찮을꺼 같은데 (하실껌 다른곳도 모두)
ex)


00:06:769 (6769|0) - 여기부터 쭉 4비트 1 2 3 4 반복인데 이거 보다 드럼음(?)을 이용해서 패턴 짜는게 더 나을꺼 같아요.
ex)


00:38:803 (38803|0,39057|0,39311|1,39565|1,39820|2,40074|2,40328|3,40582|3) - 이 부분들 약간 어색한 느낌이 있으니 노트를 1개씩만 배치하는게 좋을것 같아요.

01:26:597 (86597|0) - 롱노트가 별로 안어울리는거 같은데 위에 4비트 4 3 2 1을 없애고 여기에 1 2 3 형식으로 배치하고 윗부분을 롱노트로 하는게 더 어울릴꺼 같아요.
ex)


01:44:393 (104393|3) - 이 구간부터 계단음을 그냥 난이도상 단놋으로 표현한거 같은데 뒤에 베이스음(?)을 따라 노트 높낮이를 조절하는게 더 좋을것 같네요.
01:44:393 (104393|3,104647|2,104902|1) - 를 2 3 2 01:45:156 (105156|0,105410|1,105664|2) - 를 4 3 2
01:47:444 (107444|3,107698|2,107953|1) - 이 구간을 위와 같이 1 3 1로 하는게 좋을것 같아요.

위 모딩을 받아 들이셨으면 01:49:732 (109732|0,109986|1,110241|2) - 노트를 삭제하고 롱노트로 해주는게 좋을것 같네요.
ex)


01:52:528 (112528|0,112783|0,113037|1,113291|1,113545|2,113800|2,114054|3,114308|3) - 여기도 왠만하면 노트 1나씩만 배치하는걸 춫천

NOVIC
00:06:769 (6769|3) - 베이직과 마찬가지로 이구간 드럼 배치를 이용하는게 더 어울릴꺼같아요.
ex)


00:22:531 (22531|3,22659|2,22786|0,22913|1) - 이 구간을 롱노트 배치로 해주는게 좋을꺼 같아요. 4 - 2 번라인순으로..?

00:24:311 (24311|1) - 무슨음인지 잘 모르겠는데 고스트 노트다 싶으면 빼주세요.

00:07:023 (7023|2,35752|3,35879|2,36006|1,36133|0,36260|3,36387|2,36514|1,36642|0) - 드럼 배치에 맞춰서 하신건진 잘모르겠는데 패턴을 메인음 맞춰서 새로 짜는게 좋을듯 싶어요. (근데 난이도 면에서 문제가 될 수도..)
ex)


00:44:904 (44904|0) - 이 구간부터 메인음 스트림패턴을 8비트로 표현하신거 같은데 이거보다 롱노트에 하나씩 나오는 드럼음 정도로 배치해주시는게 더 어울릴듯 싶어요. (밑에사진은 제가 저 구간에서 썼던 패턴입니다. 저런식으로 비슷하게 참고하셔서 만드시면 괜찮을듯 싶어요.)
ex)


01:43:630 (103630|0,103758|1,103885|3,104012|2,104139|0,104266|1) - 배치를 조금 바꿔주시는게 좋을듯 싶네요
ex)

ADVANCED
00:12:871 (12871|0,12934|1,12998|3,13062|2,13125|0,13189|1,13252|3,13316|2) - 메인 계단음에 맞게 배치를 좀 바꿔주시는게 좋을것 같아요. 칠 때 느낌이 덜 살듯 싶습니다.
00:13:697 (13697|1,13761|0,13824|1,13888|3,13951|2,14015|0,14079|1) - 여기도

00:22:659 (22659|0,22913|1) - 이 두개는 빼주셔도 될 것 같아요.

00:50:752 (50752|3,50815|2,50879|3,50942|0,51006|1,51070|0) - 이 구간 손배치가 좀 어려운데 이렇게 바꿔주시는것도 괜찮을듯 싶어요.
ex)


01:02:192 (62192|3) - 이 구간 음이 같긴한데 너무 단조로운거 같으니 01:04:226 구간부터 역으로 바꿔주시는게 더 나을것 같아요.
ex)


01:18:462 (78462|0,78547|1,78631|2,78716|3,78801|2,78886|1,78970|0,79055|1,79140|2) - 이 구간 굳이 12비트로 배치하시는 이유가 있으신지 ..
난이도 상관없다면 16비트 계단으로 바꿔주는게 좋을것 같아요.

EXHAUST
00:07:532 (7532|3) - 여기 계단구간은 4321 4321 단조로운 배치보다 조금 음 높낮이에 맞는 계단배치가 좋을것 같아요. (바꾸신다면 여기 외에 다른구간도 손봐주세요.)
ex)


00:40:836 (40836|1) - 이 구간 이런식으로 바꾸시는건 어떠세요?
ex)


01:18:462 (78462|3,78547|2,78631|3,78716|0,78801|1,78886|0,78970|3,79055|2,79140|3) - 배치를 이렇게 하는거보다 계단형식으로 바꿔보시는걸 추천해요.

GRAVITY
00:10:583 (10583|3,10583|2,10646|1,10710|0,10773|3,10837|2,10837|1,10901|0,10964|3,11028|2,11091|1,11091|0,11155|3,11218|2,11282|1) -
이 구간 컨트롤 h 해주시는게 더 나은것 같아요.

그리고 이게 끝

윗난이도들은 플레이 하면서 딱히 이상항 점을 못느껴서 모딩이 없어욬ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ


그리고 그래빗 넘 어려움
Chocobuk
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Aruel
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alsdudrj wrote:

모딩 일단 쿠돋 2개발사

BASIC
00:01:303 (1303|1,1430|2) - 이 노트 두개 삭제하시고 노빅처럼 000:1:430 줄 부터 4비트 간격으로 노트 3개를 배치해주시는게 어때요? 난이도 면에서도 괜찮을꺼 같은데 (하실껌 다른곳도 모두) - 오 괜찮네요 수정!
ex)


00:06:769 (6769|0) - 여기부터 쭉 4비트 1 2 3 4 반복인데 이거 보다 드럼음(?)을 이용해서 패턴 짜는게 더 나을꺼 같아요. - 이거는 고려를 살짝 해봐야겠네요 중간중간 8비트가 나와서 치다가 확 틀려버릴수도있어서 초보자분들 의견을 들어보고 수정하겠습니다
ex)


00:38:803 (38803|0,39057|0,39311|1,39565|1,39820|2,40074|2,40328|3,40582|3) - 이 부분들 약간 어색한 느낌이 있으니 노트를 1개씩만 배치하는게 좋을것 같아요. - 음 이거는 일단 킵해두겠습니다

01:26:597 (86597|0) - 롱노트가 별로 안어울리는거 같은데 위에 4비트 4 3 2 1을 없애고 여기에 1 2 3 형식으로 배치하고 윗부분을 롱노트로 하는게 더 어울릴꺼 같아요. - 롱노트부분만 고쳤습니다!
ex)


01:44:393 (104393|3) - 이 구간부터 계단음을 그냥 난이도상 단놋으로 표현한거 같은데 뒤에 베이스음(?)을 따라 노트 높낮이를 조절하는게 더 좋을것 같네요.
01:44:393 (104393|3,104647|2,104902|1) - 를 2 3 2 01:45:156 (105156|0,105410|1,105664|2) - 를 4 3 2
01:47:444 (107444|3,107698|2,107953|1) - 이 구간을 위와 같이 1 3 1로 하는게 좋을것 같아요.

위 모딩을 받아 들이셨으면 01:49:732 (109732|0,109986|1,110241|2) - 노트를 삭제하고 롱노트로 해주는게 좋을것 같네요. - 요거들은 제가 일단 나중에 제 재량으로 수정하도록 하ㅣ곘습니당
ex)


01:52:528 (112528|0,112783|0,113037|1,113291|1,113545|2,113800|2,114054|3,114308|3) - 여기도 왠만하면 노트 1나씩만 배치하는걸 춫천 - 위와같은 이유로 거절하겠습니다 ㅠㅠ

NOVIC
00:06:769 (6769|3) - 베이직과 마찬가지로 이구간 드럼 배치를 이용하는게 더 어울릴꺼같아요. - 베이직과 같은 이유로 거절..ㅠㅠ
ex)


00:22:531 (22531|3,22659|2,22786|0,22913|1) - 이 구간을 롱노트 배치로 해주는게 좋을꺼 같아요. 4 - 2 번라인순으로..? - 이거는 난이도간의 거리를 두기위한..ㅠㅠ

00:24:311 (24311|1) - 무슨음인지 잘 모르겠는데 고스트 노트다 싶으면 빼주세요. - 이거는 드럼을 따라가는건데 노비스에서는 확실히 뒤에드럼을 안넣으니 어색하네요 삭제!

00:07:023 (7023|2,35752|3,35879|2,36006|1,36133|0,36260|3,36387|2,36514|1,36642|0) - 드럼 배치에 맞춰서 하신건진 잘모르겠는데 패턴을 메인음 맞춰서 새로 짜는게 좋을듯 싶어요. (근데 난이도 면에서 문제가 될 수도..)
ex)


00:44:904 (44904|0) - 이 구간부터 메인음 스트림패턴을 8비트로 표현하신거 같은데 이거보다 롱노트에 하나씩 나오는 드럼음 정도로 배치해주시는게 더 어울릴듯 싶어요. (밑에사진은 제가 저 구간에서 썼던 패턴입니다. 저런식으로 비슷하게 참고하셔서 만드시면 괜찮을듯 싶어요.) - 아 예전에 그패턴을 사용했었는데 그래도 낮은 난이도에서도 재미를 살리고싶어서...
ex)


01:43:630 (103630|0,103758|1,103885|3,104012|2,104139|0,104266|1) - 배치를 조금 바꿔주시는게 좋을듯 싶네요 - 재량으로 수정했습니다1
ex)

ADVANCED
00:12:871 (12871|0,12934|1,12998|3,13062|2,13125|0,13189|1,13252|3,13316|2) - 메인 계단음에 맞게 배치를 좀 바꿔주시는게 좋을것 같아요. 칠 때 느낌이 덜 살듯 싶습니다.
00:13:697 (13697|1,13761|0,13824|1,13888|3,13951|2,14015|0,14079|1) - 여기도 - 둘다 수정완료!

00:22:659 (22659|0,22913|1) - 이 두개는 빼주셔도 될 것 같아요. - 난이도간의 갭을 두기위해 이건 킵하겠습니다 ㅠㅠ

00:50:752 (50752|3,50815|2,50879|3,50942|0,51006|1,51070|0) - 이 구간 손배치가 좀 어려운데 이렇게 바꿔주시는것도 괜찮을듯 싶어요. - 재량으로 수정했습니당
ex)


01:02:192 (62192|3) - 이 구간 음이 같긴한데 너무 단조로운거 같으니 01:04:226 구간부터 역으로 바꿔주시는게 더 나을것 같아요. - 오 좋네요! 수정!
ex)


01:18:462 (78462|0,78547|1,78631|2,78716|3,78801|2,78886|1,78970|0,79055|1,79140|2) - 이 구간 굳이 12비트로 배치하시는 이유가 있으신지 ..
난이도 상관없다면 16비트 계단으로 바꿔주는게 좋을것 같아요.- 어 거기는 16비트가 없어요...ㅜㅜ

EXHAUST
00:07:532 (7532|3) - 여기 계단구간은 4321 4321 단조로운 배치보다 조금 음 높낮이에 맞는 계단배치가 좋을것 같아요. (바꾸신다면 여기 외에 다른구간도 손봐주세요.) - 음 그쪽은 뱀처럼 이어지다가 1234 1234 이런식으로 가는 패턴중 하나라서 킵해두겠습니다
ex)


00:40:836 (40836|1) - 이 구간 이런식으로 바꾸시는건 어떠세요? - 비슷하게수정했습니다!
ex)


01:18:462 (78462|3,78547|2,78631|3,78716|0,78801|1,78886|0,78970|3,79055|2,79140|3) - 배치를 이렇게 하는거보다 계단형식으로 바꿔보시는걸 추천해요. - 음 이것도 난이도간의 갭문제로..ㅜㅠ

GRAVITY
00:10:583 (10583|3,10583|2,10646|1,10710|0,10773|3,10837|2,10837|1,10901|0,10964|3,11028|2,11091|1,11091|0,11155|3,11218|2,11282|1) -
이 구간 컨트롤 h 해주시는게 더 나은것 같아요. - 음 이거는 뭔가 좀 단조로워서...

그리고 이게 끝

윗난이도들은 플레이 하면서 딱히 이상항 점을 못느껴서 모딩이 없어욬ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ


그리고 그래빗 넘 어려움
모딩 감사합니다!!! >w<
Aruel
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Aruel

Chocobuk wrote:

앙 기모띠
꺆
HeyItsChael
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HeyItsChael
Woah... It is very hard core yet fun... Especially when it comes to Advanced since it's not like other Advanced leveled beatmaps. Niceuh ! ;)
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
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Akasha-
I'm your queen
Aruel
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Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Aruel

HeyItsChael wrote:

Woah... It is very hard core yet fun... Especially when it comes to Advanced since it's not like other Advanced leveled beatmaps. Niceuh ! ;)
Because this BPM is too high ;w;

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

I'm your queen
SLAP ME MRS. QUEEN!!!!!!!!!!!! AHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FailureFormula
1 post
Joined April 2015
FailureFormula
00:06:769 - ~ 00:14:396 - 여기 손좀꼬이는데 바꿔주셈
00:44:904 - 미쳤냐
01:08:038 (68038|2,68165|1) - 2-3 으로 바꿔주셈

소ㅓㄴ가락빠지는줄ㅡㅡ;
Aruel
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Aruel

FailureFormula wrote:

00:06:769 - ~ 00:14:396 - 여기 손좀꼬이는데 바꿔주셈
00:44:904 - 미쳤냐
01:08:038 (68038|2,68165|1) - 2-3 으로 바꿔주셈

소ㅓㄴ가락빠지는줄ㅡㅡ;
모딩 ㄳ
Ortlinde
255 posts
Joined January 2015
Ortlinde
Hope this doesn't destroy the map

EXHAUST
  1. 00:12:871 - Add 1 note for missing cymbal.
  2. 00:24:565 - Change note [0] into LN to emphasize the guitar.
  3. 00:25:709 - Put note [2] into 00:25:741 - since it's 1/8.
  4. 00:27:616 - Add 1 note to emphasize the stop.
  5. 00:53:803 - Put note [0] into 00:53:930 - since it has a finish.
  6. 00:57:870 - Put note [3] into 00:57:997 - since it has a finish too.
  7. 01:09:691 - Add 1 note for missing snare (?).
  8. 01:24:054 - Change either note [0] or [1] into LN to emphasize the guitar.
  9. 01:30:664 - Consider move 1 note into another column since the sound is different.
  10. 01:50:495 - Consider add 1 note for the cymbal.

/ 0 v 0 \=3
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Shinzo-
shh
17:00 *Shinzo- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/901047 Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma Re:Queen'M]
17:00 Fresh Chicken: yup?
17:00 Fresh Chicken: Which diff?
17:01 Shinzo-: .np
17:01 Shinzo-: eey
17:01 *Shinzo- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/901050 Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma Re:Queen'M [GRAVITY]]
17:01 Fresh Chicken: yup I'm in
17:01 Shinzo-: 00:07:023 (7023|0,7023|3) -  ummm delete one ?
17:02 Fresh Chicken: There is some hithat sound so I used two notes
17:02 Shinzo-: oh yaa
17:05 Shinzo-: 00:44:650 -  too overnote ?
17:05 Shinzo-: it just a little sound owo
17:06 Fresh Chicken: I'll change that if some other modders pick it again, because I think that is fine
17:06 Fresh Chicken: XD
17:06 Shinzo-: hmmm okk
17:06 Shinzo-: 00:53:040 (53040|3,53040|2) -  delete one of it ? or even both ? since it just like an echo :D
17:06 Fresh Chicken: Yup that is why I added hitsound on there XD
17:06 Fresh Chicken: For make consistency with 12-34
17:07 Shinzo-: eeh, so you delete one of it ?
17:07 Fresh Chicken: Sorry but keep it
17:07 Fresh Chicken: owo
17:07 Shinzo-: k
17:07 Fresh Chicken: kk
17:07 Shinzo-: 01:06:767 -  sorry but i almost hear nothing :(
17:08 Fresh Chicken: ehh
17:08 Fresh Chicken: oki removed
17:08 Fresh Chicken: lool
17:08 Shinzo-: xD
17:10 Shinzo-: 01:37:465 (97465|3,97465|2,97656|0,97656|1,97847|2,97847|1,98037|3,98037|2,98164|0,98164|1) -  what about 3 note ?
17:11 Shinzo-: tbh it almost louder than 01:52:656 (112656|0,112656|3,112656|2,112783|3,112783|0,112783|1,112910|0,112910|3,112910|2,113037|0,113037|1,113037|2,113164|3,113164|0,113164|1,113291|0,113291|3,113291|2,113418|3,113418|2,113418|1,113545|0,113545|1,113545|2,113672|0,113672|1,113672|3,113800|2,113800|0,113800|3,113927|3,113927|2,113927|1,114054|3,114054|2,114054|1,114181|0,114181|3,114181|2,114308|3,114308|0,114308|1,114435|0,114435|1,114435|2) - 
17:11 Fresh Chicken: ehh I don't know I was used three notes old days a go
17:11 Shinzo-: oooh
17:11 Fresh Chicken: I don't follow pitch you know
17:11 Fresh Chicken: XD
17:11 Shinzo-: it's not a pitch brrr
17:11 Shinzo-: nvm
17:11 *Shinzo- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/901049 Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma Re:Queen'M [EXHAUST]]
17:12 Fresh Chicken: yup I'm in
17:12 Fresh Chicken: And I removed your point (01:06:767 - ) already
17:12 Fresh Chicken: XD
17:12 Shinzo-: ohhh hahah yeayea xD
17:13 Shinzo-: 00:27:108 - 00:27:298 - 00:27:489 - 00:27:616 -  why not make it 2 note for the guitar ?
17:14 Fresh Chicken: Because that will be hard on that part but this part doesn't need to make hard
17:14 Fresh Chicken: owo
17:14 Shinzo-: hmm really ? ok then
17:14 Shinzo-: 00:28:379 (28379|1,28442|2,28506|0,28570|3) -  pattern like GRV is better
17:14 Fresh Chicken: oh
17:14 Fresh Chicken: I didn't update
17:14 Fresh Chicken: loool
17:15 Fresh Chicken: yup
17:15 Shinzo-: ok
17:15 Shinzo-: 00:34:989 -  this part 1/3 ... fix on GRV xD ye  not exh i think
17:16 Fresh Chicken: owo? I don't get it
17:16 Shinzo-: hear the drum and guitar carefully
17:16 Shinzo-: it's 1/3 snap
17:17 Shinzo-: if yes then you should fix it on GRV xD
17:17 Fresh Chicken: hmm
17:17 Fresh Chicken: I think the guitar sound doesn't start on 00:35:159 - here
17:17 Fresh Chicken: kinda slow
17:18 Shinzo-: yea at least it should be fixed 
17:18 Shinzo-: maybe soon
17:19 Fresh Chicken: I'm really confuse now lool
17:19 Fresh Chicken: Where is pro
17:19 Fresh Chicken: =w=
17:19 Fresh Chicken: Maybe I will ask to Blocko or Kawawa or etc
17:19 Shinzo-: yea ask them later
17:19 Shinzo-: 00:44:904 -  add 1 more note ? or 2 ? maybe 
17:20 Shinzo-: for consistency with 00:48:972 - 
17:20 Fresh Chicken: yup added
17:20 Shinzo-: okok
17:21 Shinzo-: add 00:53:930 -  here too ? for consistency with 00:55:964 - 00:56:472 - 
17:21 Fresh Chicken: wow nice catch
17:21 Fresh Chicken: Added!
17:21 Shinzo-: 00:57:997 -  here too
17:21 Shinzo-: :3
17:21 Fresh Chicken: omg I'm so stupid
17:21 Fresh Chicken: Added
17:21 Shinzo-: noooo your ET
17:22 Shinzo-: btw just realize there's your name on the BG hahaha xD
17:22 Fresh Chicken: I'm not ET ;w;
17:22 Shinzo-: it really sync with the picture >w<
17:23 Fresh Chicken: >w<
17:24 Shinzo-: 01:27:105 -  hmmm yea the gap is too big with GRV xD maybe make those 01:27:105 (87105|3,87190|1,87275|3,87359|0,87444|2,87529|0,87614|3,87698|2,87783|3,87868|0,87953|1,88037|0) -  to 2 note  or if not, make it jacky :3 ?
17:25 Fresh Chicken: I'm not using two notes with 1/3 at other difficulties ;w;
17:25 Shinzo-: well it's ok xD
17:25 Shinzo-: 01:34:160 -  add note for the guitar ? xD 
17:26 Fresh Chicken: hmm I'll consider about that owo
17:26 Shinzo-: 01:58:122 (118122|2) -  move to 1 ? so the 1 4 1 4 pattern is continue
17:27 Fresh Chicken: I like mirror
17:27 Fresh Chicken: \o/
17:27 Shinzo-: yay
17:28 Shinzo-: that's all maybe ?
17:28 Fresh Chicken: okii
17:29 Fresh Chicken: Finally I can take a shit
17:29 Fresh Chicken: After test playing
17:29 Fresh Chicken: loool
17:29 Shinzo-: hahahaha xD
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
erlinadewi-
Hi chicken-san >w<)/

Mod inside

4K Coloum 1|2|3|4

[BASIC]
00:20:244 - add LN for guitar?
00:44:396 (44396|1,44650|2) - maybe this SN change to LN?

[NOVICE]
00:18:464 (18464|1,18718|0) - swap coloum?
00:44:396 - add LN for cover guitar sound?
01:31:427 (91427|2) - how about move this note to coloum 4 then 01:31:554 (91554|1) - move to 1 owo

[ADVANCED]
00:16:303 (16303|2) - to 1?

sorry can mod 3 diff :( Nice song, nice map >w<)b

Goodluck chicken-san! owo)/
Aras
827 posts
Joined September 2014
Aras

Fresh Chicken wrote:

SLAP ME MRS. QUEEN!!!!!!!!!!!! AHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
--a
so FC- san is an "M"

|1|2|3|4|
about our talk last day =w= or last night? ahh... whatever
Let's see

BASIC
- 00:01:430 (1430|3,1684|2,1939|1) - ctrl + j ?
- 00:05:244 (5244|1) - to 4

NOVICE
- 00:03:210 (3210|1,3464|2) - ctrl + right
- 00:35:752 (35752|3) - not double? if yes add 1 to 1 and ctrl + right this 00:35:752 (35752|3) -
if not? still ctrl + right this 00:35:752 (35752|3) -
- I will avoid this in NOVICE 01:25:198 (85198|1) -

ADVANCED
guess not much to mod here, as it is mainly stair, stair everywhere <3
- 00:02:193 (2193|3) - add 1 on col.1
- 00:05:244 (5244|1,6006|2) - ad 1 on col. 3 and 2 respectively
- 00:13:379 (13379|1,13379|3,13506|0,13634|2) - I will move 00:13:379 (13379|1) - to 1, 00:13:506 (13506|0) - to 2 if followed then same things to do here 00:14:142 (14142|0,14142|2,14269|3,14396|1,14396|3) -
- 00:21:896 (21896|1) - to 3, following the pattern before this
- 00:31:557 (31557|2) - to 4
- 00:39:820 (39820|1,39947|1) - to 4
- in these part 00:59:142 (59142|2,59142|3,59396|1,59396|2,59650|0,59650|1,59904|2,59904|3,60158|1,60158|2,60413|0,60413|1,60667|0,60667|1,60921|2,60921|1,61175|3,61175|2,61430|0,61430|1,61684|2,61684|1,61938|3,61938|2) - how about making these sound 00:59:142 (59142|2,59142|3,59396|1,59396|2,59650|0,59650|1,59904|2,59904|3,60158|1,60158|2,60413|0,60413|1,60667|0,60667|1,60921|2,60921|1,61175|3,61175|2,61430|0,61430|1,61684|2,61684|1,61938|3,61938|2) - something special from the other, for example their placement at the same column i know you are putting 2 of them on 3&4 and 2 others on 1&2
- 01:04:226 (64226|2,64290|3) - ctrl + j? change direction at that voice sample sound
- just kinda weird suddenly jacking at this part 01:38:927 (98927|2,99054|3,99054|2) - more over you are using this pattern 01:38:419 (98419|2,98546|0,98546|1,98673|2,98800|0,98800|1) - keep is fine thou, just saying my thought

Hands up for the other 2 diff :o

"Tell me the truth even if it is the most bitter one, or else I won't improve"
Aruel
1,891 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Aruel
Thanks to you Ortlinde Shinzo- erlinadewi- Aras25 guys for mod!
Sorry for no reply but it was helpful!
RuberusuScarlet
1,476 posts
Joined April 2013
RuberusuScarlet
good map!!!

あ、少しBPM lineのTime Signatureについて…
01:02:192 - add BPM236 Time Signature 4/4
01:55:071 - ^

source : http://www.sdvx.in/03/03242/03242g.htm
(01:02:192 - =69~　. 01:55:071=130~)

good luck ~ ><)/

Edit:AImodの確認を忘れないように～>w<
Aruel
1,891 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Aruel

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

good map!!!

あ、少しBPM lineのTime Signatureについて…
01:02:192 - add BPM236 Time Signature 4/4
01:55:071 - ^

source : http://www.sdvx.in/03/03242/03242g.htm
(01:02:192 - =69~　. 01:55:071=130~)

good luck ~ ><)/

Edit:AImodの確認を忘れないように～>w<
ありがとうございますスカレットさん！役に立てました！<3
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DeletedUser_259972

[ Trash-] wrote:

그리고 그래빗 넘 어려움
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Hotaru-
Sorry For being soo late ;w;
i have to do Exam for one week and i must prepare for scout contest this month
and also i have problem with my Ex GF :"


collum
1|2|3|4


[ADV]
wow man this difficulty was soo hard for 3.5 star that i play so far

00:11:981 (11981|3) - move to 3??
00:12:744 (12744|0) - move to 2???
00:17:447 (17447|2) - i suggest to change this one to focus on Piano like this one 00:18:718 (18718|1,18803|2,18888|3) -
00:40:709 (40709|3) - move to 3??
00:40:836 (40836|3) - too empty right here ._. is that okay??


[Exh]

Overall it's a very good map and also pretty challenging maps for me
not much to say

00:09:884 (9884|2,9947|3,10011|2,10074|1,10138|2,10201|3,10265|2) - i think this part is not balance ._.
00:25:582 (25582|3,25582|2,25709|2,25773|0,25773|1) - re arrange if you want, not feels good for me
00:44:396 (44396|3,44650|0) - you can add LN right there... why not??
01:28:122 (88122|2,88122|3,88249|2,88376|3,88376|2,88503|2,88631|1,88631|0,88758|1,88885|1,88885|0,89012|1) - I dont think this is a good Pattern ._.


okay that's all from me owo
good luck owo /
sorry if it doesn't helpful :"
Aruel
1,891 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Aruel
:?

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

Sorry For being soo late ;w;
i have to do Exam for one week and i must prepare for scout contest this month
and also i have problem with my Ex GF :"


collum
1|2|3|4


[ADV]
wow man this difficulty was soo hard for 3.5 star that i play so far

00:11:981 (11981|3) - move to 3??
00:12:744 (12744|0) - move to 2???
00:17:447 (17447|2) - i suggest to change this one to focus on Piano like this one 00:18:718 (18718|1,18803|2,18888|3) -
00:40:709 (40709|3) - move to 3??
00:40:836 (40836|3) - too empty right here ._. is that okay??


[Exh]

Overall it's a very good map and also pretty challenging maps for me
not much to say

00:09:884 (9884|2,9947|3,10011|2,10074|1,10138|2,10201|3,10265|2) - i think this part is not balance ._.
00:25:582 (25582|3,25582|2,25709|2,25773|0,25773|1) - re arrange if you want, not feels good for me
00:44:396 (44396|3,44650|0) - you can add LN right there... why not??
01:28:122 (88122|2,88122|3,88249|2,88376|3,88376|2,88503|2,88631|1,88631|0,88758|1,88885|1,88885|0,89012|1) - I dont think this is a good Pattern ._.


okay that's all from me owo
good luck owo /
sorry if it doesn't helpful :"
Thanks for mod Hotaru!
mijkolsmith
297 posts
Joined April 2014
mijkolsmith
heyyyy,,thats pretty gud
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Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-
Just a little notice: 01:02:192 - you need to add a BPM timing here with time signature of 4/4

All move everything to +10ms

That's all for offset, good luck
Feerum
osu! Alumni
2,042 posts
Joined August 2014
Feerum
Requested Check



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello FC!
Sorry that it took so long
Here's my check for ya Hentai Chicken

General


Artist: Right
Title: Wrong. I Talked with some Nominators and we decided this as wrong title. Please add "<>" for the 《》. Also without Space. So Your Romanised Title have to be "Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>"
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Right
Other: -

BASIC

00:28:643 - From here i really don't know what are you follow with your 1/2 Beat Notes.
They play really really really strange, because you do not follow the most audible you can (what you really should do in a Easy difficulty)
I recommand to make following:
00:28:897 - Add here a note on 2.
00:29:533 (29533|2) - Move this up to 00:29:660 - .
00:30:041 - Add here a note on 4.
00:30:423 (30423|3) - Move to 3
00:30:550 (30550|0) - up to 00:30:677 -
Following are Optional, if you think it would make it too hard do not add them:
00:30:868 - Add on 4
00:31:376 - Add on 1.

Yeah this makes it really way better to play because you follow the most audible melody you can. That's really cool for an Easy.

00:55:719 - You could add here a note on 3 to follow the same sound like 00:53:558 (53558|1,53685|2) - .

That's all!

NOVICE

Hmm.. not sure about these 00:22:669 (22669|2,22923|1) - .
I think it would be for a Novice better to follow only the guitar. You followed here only the guitar in this part and these "break" the flow a bit with following the drum suddenly.
I recommend to delete these notes.
00:22:541 (22541|3) - Move this one then to 3 aaand 00:23:304 (23304|1,23431|0) - CTRL + G for Pitch \:D/
Plays really cool, ohh and 00:21:524 (21524|0) - delete this note for consistency. You never had a Single note + LN beginn for the guitar, only at 00:20:508 - but here you have a cymbal so it's okay!

00:55:338 - Add here a note on 1 for the heavy cymbal.

01:22:793 (82793|2,82920|3) - CTRL + G for PR?

Thats all!

ADVANCED

00:31:694 - Are you really sure you want to make this as 1234 rolls only?
The sound is actually perfect for 1243 D:
Maybe consider to 00:31:821 (31821|2,31885|3,32075|2,32139|3,32330|2,32393|3) - ctrl+g these.

00:36:207 - Did you left this empty intentionally?

00:44:914 - I really like this Long stream! Just one/two little suggestion for flow
I think you break the stream at some wrong places.
What i don't like is 00:51:016 (51016|2,51080|1,51143|3) - . You break the flow on a blue tick, what can be really awkward to play,
My suggestion would be to move 00:51:016 (51016|2,51080|1) - one to the right and 00:51:143 (51143|3) - to 2 to make better "flow breaks" which also makes sense!

Thats all. I really like this diff :)

EXHAUST

00:36:207 - same like in Advance, intentionally empty?
I mean you still have here drum :D

woah that's all. Really great diff FC u ET Mapper

GRAVITY

00:36:207 - Again the same thing and slowly i think it's really intentional :D:D
00:46:440 (46440|0) - Remove C hitsound. Double Sampled at this timing.
00:48:982 (48982|2) - Change F to C
01:02:202 - // I liked when here was an LN, i think the LN did appear at 01:04:235 - ? Too bad you removed it :(
But maybe it was a bit to hard to play hum?

01:09:828 - Either you have here a note missing or you have in the EXHAUST a note too much, but it's inconsistent here with the Exhaust!
Please recheck this :D

01:30:547 (90547|3,90674|3,90802|3) - Intentionally? D:

Nothing more to say!

I still love this song. It sound's so god damn epic.
Call me back asap!
Aruel
1,891 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Aruel

Feerum wrote:

Requested Check



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello FC!
Sorry that it took so long
Here's my check for ya Hentai Chicken

General


Artist: Right
Title: Wrong. I Talked with some Nominators and we decided this as wrong title. Please add "<>" for the 《》. Also without Space. So Your Romanised Title have to be "Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>" - da fuk I thought I fixed it already looool
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Right
Other: -

BASIC

00:28:643 - From here i really don't know what are you follow with your 1/2 Beat Notes.
They play really really really strange, because you do not follow the most audible you can (what you really should do in a Easy difficulty)
I recommand to make following:
00:28:897 - Add here a note on 2.
00:29:533 (29533|2) - Move this up to 00:29:660 - .
00:30:041 - Add here a note on 4.
00:30:423 (30423|3) - Move to 3 - Adding is all accepted also re-arranged myself
00:30:550 (30550|0) - up to 00:30:677 -
Following are Optional, if you think it would make it too hard do not add them:
00:30:868 - Add on 4
00:31:376 - Add on 1.

Yeah this makes it really way better to play because you follow the most audible melody you can. That's really cool for an Easy.

00:55:719 - You could add here a note on 3 to follow the same sound like 00:53:558 (53558|1,53685|2) - .

That's all!

NOVICE

Hmm.. not sure about these 00:22:669 (22669|2,22923|1) - .
I think it would be for a Novice better to follow only the guitar. You followed here only the guitar in this part and these "break" the flow a bit with following the drum suddenly.
I recommend to delete these notes.
00:22:541 (22541|3) - Move this one then to 3 aaand 00:23:304 (23304|1,23431|0) - CTRL + G for Pitch \:D/
Plays really cool, ohh and 00:21:524 (21524|0) - delete this note for consistency. You never had a Single note + LN beginn for the guitar, only at 00:20:508 - but here you have a cymbal so it's okay!

00:55:338 - Add here a note on 1 for the heavy cymbal.

01:22:793 (82793|2,82920|3) - CTRL + G for PR?

Thats all!

ADVANCED

00:31:694 - Are you really sure you want to make this as 1234 rolls only?
The sound is actually perfect for 1243 D:
Maybe consider to 00:31:821 (31821|2,31885|3,32075|2,32139|3,32330|2,32393|3) - ctrl+g these.

00:36:207 - Did you left this empty intentionally? - Yup it's intentional. There's drum is kinda hard to feel

00:44:914 - I really like this Long stream! Just one/two little suggestion for flow
I think you break the stream at some wrong places.
What i don't like is 00:51:016 (51016|2,51080|1,51143|3) - . You break the flow on a blue tick, what can be really awkward to play,
My suggestion would be to move 00:51:016 (51016|2,51080|1) - one to the right and 00:51:143 (51143|3) - to 2 to make better "flow breaks" which also makes sense! - Re-arranged something

Thats all. I really like this diff :)

EXHAUST

00:36:207 - same like in Advance, intentionally empty? - Yup
I mean you still have here drum :D

woah that's all. Really great diff FC u ET Mapper - Call my lawyer Jin plz

GRAVITY

00:36:207 - Again the same thing and slowly i think it's really intentional :D:D
00:46:440 (46440|0) - Remove C hitsound. Double Sampled at this timing.
00:48:982 (48982|2) - Change F to C - I'm so pro at HS
01:02:202 - // I liked when here was an LN, i think the LN did appear at 01:04:235 - ? Too bad you removed it :( - Sorry but I have a lot of complaining about here from a lot of ET players ;w;
But maybe it was a bit to hard to play hum?

01:09:828 - Either you have here a note missing or you have in the EXHAUST a note too much, but it's inconsistent here with the Exhaust!
Please recheck this :D

01:30:547 (90547|3,90674|3,90802|3) - Intentionally? D: - No D:

Nothing more to say!

I still love this song. It sound's so god damn epic.
Call me back asap!
Fixed without Red things!

Thanks for checking Fee!
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