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Eir Aoi - Sirius (TV size ver.)

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kricher
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Κυριακή, 13 Μαρτίου 2016 at 12:49:30 μμ

Artist: Eir Aoi
Title: Sirius (TV size ver.)
Source: kill la kill
Tags: kill la kill
BPM: 176
Filesize: 3719kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3,3 stars, 173 notes)
  2. Insane (4,76 stars, 306 notes)
  3. Normal (2,05 stars, 127 notes)
Download: Eir Aoi - Sirius (TV size ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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modders:
DesuNuts
Kagetsu
idealism
october
I cant spin
exile
every mod helps
achyoo
from #modreq
Idk how to mod easys sorry :<


Normal
00:02:167 (4) - This party feels empty, add a note?
00:04:567 (7,1,2,3) - sounds off, change to
00:39:367 (5) - change 1/4 back and forth slider
00:59:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - change to 1/4 back and forth slider or 1/2 sliders, Normal shouldn't have 1/4 notes

Generally, add more notes rather than really long streams, but that's up to you
Also, IIRC you can't have SV changes in Normal , but I don't know for sure

Insane
00:00:420 (1,2,3,4) - make this a stream until 00:00:922 (5)
tbh the entire starting part needs to be fixed, you notes shouldn't be on the blue ticks in this case (unless it's a stream) and sliders shouldn't start or end on blue ticks

00:34:442 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream is very awkward, either make it a full stream or add repeating slider between them

also, you can convert sliders to streams. It's under Compose > Convert Slider to Stream. Do check it out!

This map generally has good structure, but you should attempt to make the streams look better using the function I stated above

Rework the timing on this map, try to avoid placing notes on blue ticks unless it's a stream.

Also, make sure all your notes and snapped. Some of them are not, maybe it's because you adjusted the timing or what not, or you used 1/3 by accident.
Try to keep the beat snap divisor to 1/4

General
This mapset cannot be ranked as of now, I think you need a "Hard" Difficulty. Try to fix the problems I mentioned above and the timing too.

Hope this helped! If you want me to mod this map again after you fixed it, shoot me a PM on the forums! I'll be glad to help.

EDIT: Oh and did you know, you can press Ctrl + Shift + A in the editor to use the AIMod. It checks for problems in your map automatically, try to get those fixed as well!
Kagetsu
your timing settings seems to be wrong... try this:



also, you should have the same timing across all the diffs, currently, easy and normal have 100 which is completely different with insane, so set this in all diffs
Topic Starter
kricher

DesuNuts wrote:

from #modreq
Idk how to mod easys sorry :<


Normal
00:02:167 (4) - This party feels empty, add a note?
00:04:567 (7,1,2,3) - sounds off, change to
00:39:367 (5) - change 1/4 back and forth slider
00:59:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - change to 1/4 back and forth slider or 1/2 sliders, Normal shouldn't have 1/4 notes

Generally, add more notes rather than really long streams, but that's up to you
Also, IIRC you can't have SV changes in Normal , but I don't know for sure

Insane
00:00:420 (1,2,3,4) - make this a stream until 00:00:922 (5)
tbh the entire starting part needs to be fixed, you notes shouldn't be on the blue ticks in this case (unless it's a stream) and sliders shouldn't start or end on blue ticks

00:34:442 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream is very awkward, either make it a full stream or add repeating slider between them

also, you can convert sliders to streams. It's under Compose > Convert Slider to Stream. Do check it out!

This map generally has good structure, but you should attempt to make the streams look better using the function I stated above

Rework the timing on this map, try to avoid placing notes on blue ticks unless it's a stream.

Also, make sure all your notes and snapped. Some of them are not, maybe it's because you adjusted the timing or what not, or you used 1/3 by accident.
Try to keep the beat snap divisor to 1/4

General
This mapset cannot be ranked as of now, I think you need a "Hard" Difficulty. Try to fix the problems I mentioned above and the timing too.

Hope this helped! If you want me to mod this map again after you fixed it, shoot me a PM on the forums! I'll be glad to help.

EDIT: Oh and did you know, you can press Ctrl + Shift + A in the editor to use the AIMod. It checks for problems in your map automatically, try to get those fixed as well!
tnx for the help
Topic Starter
kricher

Kagetsu wrote:

your timing settings seems to be wrong... try this:



also, you should have the same timing across all the diffs, currently, easy and normal have 100 which is completely different with insane, so set this in all diffs
tnx for the info think i fixxed timing problem
Ideal
modding from #modreqs
Insane
00:01:534 (8) - remove this slider so you can expand the previous repeatslider from 00:01:534 (8) - to 00:01:534
00:01:870 (8) - move to 00:01:702 and nc it
00:02:289 (9) - move to the white tick right after it
00:03:127 (1) - remove this slider and replace with 2 circles
00:03:629 (2) - move to the red tick at 00:03:881 (will look like this with the changes:
00:04:970 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - move all of this 1 tick after and remove 00:05:976 (1)
00:06:898 (5) - ends at 00:07:233
00:10:082 (5,6,7,8,9) - rearrange the pattern to fit the suggestion below this
00:10:920 - add a kickslider here
00:11:646 (2) - remove this to increase the length of the previous slider until 00:12:093
00:12:344 (1) - starts 1 tick earlier and ends at 00:12:428
00:12:931 (2) - should start at 00:12:596 -
00:13:099 - could fit a slider here
00:13:601 (4) - circle followed by a slider
00:14:607 (1) - smaller slider
00:15:194 (3) - ^ and circle at 00:15:780 - to make up for it
ran out of time for today, will resume the mod tomorrow
october
All of these are my opinions, don't take them too deeply :P I'm really bad at testing and modding easy, I'd rather give you on my opinions on something I can do.

Normal
00:00:326 - Nothing here? it feels a bit empty
00:03:226 (6) - delete this note, its a bit hard for this difficulty
00:50:426 (4) - series of touching sliders
00:02:526 (5) - move this back a tick?
00:04:426 (7) - make this end on the white tick
00:15:926 (5) - try making a linear slider heare by clicking ctrl shift + left click, it makes the player move in a different direction as the drum hits
00:24:726 (2) - end on the white tick
00:31:026 (1) - move this back onto the red tick

Insane
00:05:221 (1) - Sliders are touching, there is no need for it
00:06:143 (3) - CTRL + G and smooth the slider out a bit + space it out
00:07:400 (6) - Touching again :(
00:08:629 (1) - note not snapped
00:15:194 (3) - beat missed here, maybe add a reverse slider
00:17:875 (1) - that note is too late by 1 tick
00:18:294 (3) - another beat missed on the white tick
00:18:797 - add something here? or move the note after it
00:17:875 (1) - notes touching
00:18:462 - note missing
00:19:467 - again
00:20:808 - reverse slider since there is a beat in the middle of that slider and its kind of empty
00:20:808 - note
00:26:255 - note or make a new slider
00:33:881 - try to make the stream smoother, the pattern seems kind of wobbly(its hard to explain)
00:50:976 - note on drum hit please
01:03:964 (9) - move the note to the left a bit to prevent it from overlapping :(
01:08:490 - missing note on beat
01:08:909 - nothing here? you can still map to the drums, tv size maps are a bit too short to have breaks in them ;)
nayumi
The timing of this map needs quite a lot of rework. The BPM in Easy and Normal is different to Insane, the BPM and Offset should be the same in all diffs. Try changing the offset to 326 and the BPM to 176 in all diffs.
The rest of this post is all my own opinion, so you don't have to take all of them into account :).
This is the first time I've tried modding Easy so not all of my opinions might work.
Easy
I think that the approach rate shouldn't be 5. It seems too quick for an easy map, I think you should lower it to 3 or 2. Also, the layout of the map needs a bit of rework as the overlapping sliders can be quite difficult to read for beginners so the layout should be tweaked a little to make it slightly easier for newer players to be able to see where the next note is with ease and to stop them from getting confused.
00:00:326 - There should be a note here, feels empty without it.
00:12:026 (3) - I think the slider should be moved from the white tick back to the red tick before it and a single note should be placed on the white tick instead.
00:15:326 (8) - Remove this reverse slider, add a normal slider instead and make it end at 00:15:626
00:15:926 - Place a slider here
00:24:026 (4) - Move this slider to 00:23:576 and it should end at 00:24:626
00:25:376 (5) - Move this slider back, it should start at 00:24:926
00:27:026 (6) - Should start at 00:26:126 and should end at 00:26:726
00:27:026 - Add a new slider here and make it end at 00:27:926
00:28:226 - A circle should be placed here
00:28:526 - Again
00:28:826 - Slider should go here and end at 00:29:126
00:31:226 (5) - Should end at 00:31:526
00:32:126 (6) - Should start at 00:31:826 and end at 00:32:426
00:33:626 - Nothing here? Maybe place a circle or extend one of the sliders, but it shouldn't be left empty
00:37:526 - Note here
00:37:826 (2) - Use a reverse slider and make it shorter so it ends at 00:38:126
00:38:426 - Start a new slider here and make it end at 00:38:726
00:41:726 (2) - Remove this slider and place a single note.
00:42:026 - Start a new slider here.
00:43:226 (2) - Make this end at 00:43:526
00:43:826 - New slider here and make it end at 00:45:026
00:44:426 (3) - Remove this slider, doesn't really work in the map.
00:45:326 - Start a new slider here and make it end at 00:45:926
00:45:926 (4) - Remove this slider and place a note at 00:46:226
00:46:526 - Start a slider here and make it end at 00:48:626
00:48:926 - Hit circle here maybe?
00:53:126 (1) - Remove this slider and place two hit circles on the red and white ticks.
00:53:726 (2) - Should end at 00:54:326
00:54:626 - Maybe place a note here?
00:57:626 (5) - Delete this note and make the slider start here.
00:57:926 (6) - Move this slider to 00:57:626
01:03:026 (5) - Delete this note and make the slider start here.
01:04:826 (1) - Place these 3 single notes so that they are closer and make sure that 01:05:126 doesn't overlap the slider because this can be difficult for newer players to read.
01:07:226 - Nothing here?
01:07:526 (6) - Should end at 01:07:826
01:08:126 - Place single note here.
01:08:426 - Start a new slider here.
01:11:426 - Nothing here?
01:11:726 (1) - Layout of these 4 single notes should be tweaked a bit.
01:16:226 - Needs a note here
01:22:226 (2) - Try making this end at 01:22:526
01:23:426 (1) - Maybe move the spinner to 01:22:826 and make it end at 01:27:926.
Topic Starter
kricher

october wrote:

All of these are my opinions, don't take them too deeply :P I'm really bad at testing and modding easy, I'd rather give you on my opinions on something I can do.

Normal
00:00:326 - Nothing here? it feels a bit empty
00:03:226 (6) - delete this note, its a bit hard for this difficulty
00:50:426 (4) - series of touching sliders
00:02:526 (5) - move this back a tick?
00:04:426 (7) - make this end on the white tick
00:15:926 (5) - try making a linear slider heare by clicking ctrl shift + left click, it makes the player move in a different direction as the drum hits
00:24:726 (2) - end on the white tick
00:31:026 (1) - move this back onto the red tick

Insane
00:05:221 (1) - Sliders are touching, there is no need for it
00:06:143 (3) - CTRL + G and smooth the slider out a bit + space it out
00:07:400 (6) - Touching again :(
00:08:629 (1) - note not snapped
00:15:194 (3) - beat missed here, maybe add a reverse slider
00:17:875 (1) - that note is too late by 1 tick
00:18:294 (3) - another beat missed on the white tick
00:18:797 - add something here? or move the note after it
00:17:875 (1) - notes touching
00:18:462 - note missing
00:19:467 - again
00:20:808 - reverse slider since there is a beat in the middle of that slider and its kind of empty
00:20:808 - note
00:26:255 - note or make a new slider
00:33:881 - try to make the stream smoother, the pattern seems kind of wobbly(its hard to explain)
00:50:976 - note on drum hit please
01:03:964 (9) - move the note to the left a bit to prevent it from overlapping :(
01:08:490 - missing note on beat
01:08:909 - nothing here? you can still map to the drums, tv size maps are a bit too short to have breaks in them ;)
tnx for the help
Topic Starter
kricher

I Cant Spin wrote:

The timing of this map needs quite a lot of rework. The BPM in Easy and Normal is different to Insane, the BPM and Offset should be the same in all diffs. Try changing the offset to 326 and the BPM to 176 in all diffs.
The rest of this post is all my own opinion, so you don't have to take all of them into account :).
This is the time I've tried modding Easy so not all of my opinions might work.
Easy
I think that the approach rate shouldn't be 5. It seems too quick for an easy map, I think you should lower it to 3 or 2. Also, the layout of the map needs a bit of rework as the overlapping sliders can be quite difficult to read for beginners so the layout should be tweaked a little to make it slightly easier for newer players to be able to see where the next note is with ease and to stop them from getting confused.
00:00:326 - There should be a note here, feels empty without it.
00:12:026 (3) - I think the slider should be moved from the white tick back to the red tick before it and a single note should be placed on the white tick instead.
00:15:326 (8) - Remove this reverse slider, add a normal slider instead and make it end at 00:15:626
00:15:926 - Place a slider here
00:24:026 (4) - Move this slider to 00:23:576 and it should end at 00:24:626
00:25:376 (5) - Move this slider back, it should start at 00:24:926
00:27:026 (6) - Should start at 00:26:126 and should end at 00:26:726
00:27:026 - Add a new slider here and make it end at 00:27:926
00:28:226 - A circle should be placed here
00:28:526 - Again
00:28:826 - Slider should go here and end at 00:29:126
00:31:226 (5) - Should end at 00:31:526
00:32:126 (6) - Should start at 00:31:826 and end at 00:32:426
00:33:626 - Nothing here? Maybe place a circle or extend one of the sliders, but it shouldn't be left empty
00:37:526 - Note here
00:37:826 (2) - Use a reverse slider and make it shorter so it ends at 00:38:126
00:38:426 - Start a new slider here and make it end at 00:38:726
00:41:726 (2) - Remove this slider and place a single note.
00:42:026 - Start a new slider here.
00:43:226 (2) - Make this end at 00:43:526
00:43:826 - New slider here and make it end at 00:45:026
00:44:426 (3) - Remove this slider, doesn't really work in the map.
00:45:326 - Start a new slider here and make it end at 00:45:926
00:45:926 (4) - Remove this slider and place a note at 00:46:226
00:46:526 - Start a slider here and make it end at 00:48:626
00:48:926 - Hit circle here maybe?
00:53:126 (1) - Remove this slider and place two hit circles on the red and white ticks.
00:53:726 (2) - Should end at 00:54:326
00:54:626 - Maybe place a note here?
00:57:626 (5) - Delete this note and make the slider start here.
00:57:926 (6) - Move this slider to 00:57:626
01:03:026 (5) - Delete this note and make the slider start here.
01:04:826 (1) - Place these 3 single notes so that they are closer and make sure that 01:05:126 doesn't overlap the slider because this can be difficult for newer players to read.
01:07:226 - Nothing here?
01:07:526 (6) - Should end at 01:07:826
01:08:126 - Place single note here.
01:08:426 - Start a new slider here.
01:11:426 - Nothing here?
01:11:726 (1) - Layout of these 4 single notes should be tweaked a bit.
01:16:226 - Needs a note here
01:22:226 (2) - Try making this end at 01:22:526
01:23:426 (1) - Maybe move the spinner to 01:22:826 and make it end at 01:27:926.
tnx for the info i will try to see if i can fix timing
Topic Starter
kricher

I Cant Spin wrote:

The timing of this map needs quite a lot of rework. The BPM in Easy and Normal is different to Insane, the BPM and Offset should be the same in all diffs. Try changing the offset to 326 and the BPM to 176 in all diffs.
The rest of this post is all my own opinion, so you don't have to take all of them into account :).
This is the first time I've tried modding Easy so not all of my opinions might work.
Easy
I think that the approach rate shouldn't be 5. It seems too quick for an easy map, I think you should lower it to 3 or 2. Also, the layout of the map needs a bit of rework as the overlapping sliders can be quite difficult to read for beginners so the layout should be tweaked a little to make it slightly easier for newer players to be able to see where the next note is with ease and to stop them from getting confused.
00:00:326 - There should be a note here, feels empty without it.
00:12:026 (3) - I think the slider should be moved from the white tick back to the red tick before it and a single note should be placed on the white tick instead.
00:15:326 (8) - Remove this reverse slider, add a normal slider instead and make it end at 00:15:626
00:15:926 - Place a slider here
00:24:026 (4) - Move this slider to 00:23:576 and it should end at 00:24:626
00:25:376 (5) - Move this slider back, it should start at 00:24:926
00:27:026 (6) - Should start at 00:26:126 and should end at 00:26:726
00:27:026 - Add a new slider here and make it end at 00:27:926
00:28:226 - A circle should be placed here
00:28:526 - Again
00:28:826 - Slider should go here and end at 00:29:126
00:31:226 (5) - Should end at 00:31:526
00:32:126 (6) - Should start at 00:31:826 and end at 00:32:426
00:33:626 - Nothing here? Maybe place a circle or extend one of the sliders, but it shouldn't be left empty
00:37:526 - Note here
00:37:826 (2) - Use a reverse slider and make it shorter so it ends at 00:38:126
00:38:426 - Start a new slider here and make it end at 00:38:726
00:41:726 (2) - Remove this slider and place a single note.
00:42:026 - Start a new slider here.
00:43:226 (2) - Make this end at 00:43:526
00:43:826 - New slider here and make it end at 00:45:026
00:44:426 (3) - Remove this slider, doesn't really work in the map.
00:45:326 - Start a new slider here and make it end at 00:45:926
00:45:926 (4) - Remove this slider and place a note at 00:46:226
00:46:526 - Start a slider here and make it end at 00:48:626
00:48:926 - Hit circle here maybe?
00:53:126 (1) - Remove this slider and place two hit circles on the red and white ticks.
00:53:726 (2) - Should end at 00:54:326
00:54:626 - Maybe place a note here?
00:57:626 (5) - Delete this note and make the slider start here.
00:57:926 (6) - Move this slider to 00:57:626
01:03:026 (5) - Delete this note and make the slider start here.
01:04:826 (1) - Place these 3 single notes so that they are closer and make sure that 01:05:126 doesn't overlap the slider because this can be difficult for newer players to read.
01:07:226 - Nothing here?
01:07:526 (6) - Should end at 01:07:826
01:08:126 - Place single note here.
01:08:426 - Start a new slider here.
01:11:426 - Nothing here?
01:11:726 (1) - Layout of these 4 single notes should be tweaked a bit.
01:16:226 - Needs a note here
01:22:226 (2) - Try making this end at 01:22:526
01:23:426 (1) - Maybe move the spinner to 01:22:826 and make it end at 01:27:926.
fixed and timing tnx for the mod
Exile-
[General]

Why do you use Kill la kill background and you haven't add Kill la Kill to tags or sources?
You got a lot of notes snapped on blue ticks where they should be placed on white/red ticks. Please check all these (that applies to every diff). If you have a problem with them, you can slow down the music to 25%
Add the kiai time
Add hitsounds! A map without any hitsounds is unrankable.

[Insane]

00:00:442 (2) - delete this note, stream starts from 00:00:527 (3) - here
00:01:635 - On the other hand, you missed a beat here
00:02:402 (10) - The first example where you should end a slider on the white tick
00:04:363 (7) - And this one should start from the white tick
00:08:027 (3) - Next one
00:13:056 (3) - ^, I"ll stop pointing them out, I hope you can find them by yourself
00:05:982 -

00:10:925 (1) - The stream starts from 00:11:096 - here
00:16:550 - You missed a pretty strong beat here
00:01:721 (8) - This is the real start of the songs, why did you not place a NC here?
00:22:516 (7) - Listen to this part carefully, there is a stream starting from 00:22:686 -
00:23:539 (1,2,3) - Why don't use Distance Snap here? This is a pretty slow part and It would make it a lot easier to read
00:28:908 - This green line should start from 00:28:823 -
00:36:323 - We need some extreme jumps on 1/2 here! Listen to the drums!
00:41:095 (3) - This slider is called an offbeat slider because it gives an emphasize to the upbeat. In the other words, it starts from a weaker tick and ends on a stronger. You must avoid these.
00:56:905 (7) - Why is this placed on 1/8?
00:53:539 (12) - Why did you start the combo on a read tick instead of the strong white tick? White tick usually should have more emphasize and 00:53:709 (1) - this note is soooo inaudible that doesn't deserve a NC.

I can point out the errors endlessly but that's not the matter. You have to focus to the song more intensely and understand how the music works.
Here is an useful link: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory
This might be also helpful: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria
At the current state, this mapset is unrankable but don't give up yet!

Good luck! ^_^
Topic Starter
kricher

Exile- wrote:

[General]

Why do you use Kill la kill background and you haven't add Kill la Kill to tags or sources?
You got a lot of notes snapped on blue ticks where they should be placed on white/red ticks. Please check all these (that applies to every diff). If you have a problem with them, you can slow down the music to 25%
Add the kiai time
Add hitsounds! A map without any hitsounds is unrankable.

[Insane]

00:00:442 (2) - delete this note, stream starts from 00:00:527 (3) - here
00:01:635 - On the other hand, you missed a beat here
00:02:402 (10) - The first example where you should end a slider on the white tick
00:04:363 (7) - And this one should start from the white tick
00:08:027 (3) - Next one
00:13:056 (3) - ^, I"ll stop pointing them out, I hope you can find them by yourself
00:05:982 -

00:10:925 (1) - The stream starts from 00:11:096 - here
00:16:550 - You missed a pretty strong beat here
00:01:721 (8) - This is the real start of the songs, why did you not place a NC here?
00:22:516 (7) - Listen to this part carefully, there is a stream starting from 00:22:686 -
00:23:539 (1,2,3) - Why don't use Distance Snap here? This is a pretty slow part and It would make it a lot easier to read
00:28:908 - This green line should start from 00:28:823 -
00:36:323 - We need some extreme jumps on 1/2 here! Listen to the drums!
00:41:095 (3) - This slider is called an offbeat slider because it gives an emphasize to the upbeat. In the other words, it starts from a weaker tick and ends on a stronger. You must avoid these.
00:56:905 (7) - Why is this placed on 1/8?
00:53:539 (12) - Why did you start the combo on a read tick instead of the strong white tick? White tick usually should have more emphasize and 00:53:709 (1) - this note is soooo inaudible that doesn't deserve a NC.

I can point out the errors endlessly but that's not the matter. You have to focus to the song more intensely and understand how the music works.
Here is an useful link: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory
This might be also helpful: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria
At the current state, this mapset is unrankable but don't give up yet!

Good luck! ^_^
tnx for the mod :D :D :D
Pentori
m4m

General
[General]
Check [url=metadata]http://www.lyrical-nonsense.com/lyrics/eir-aoi/sirius/#page=English[/url]
Please make sure you don't use blue ticks incorrectly. Check over all your maps and identify where the hitsound isn't matched to the music
Your spacing also seems all over the place. Please make sure you go over your maps again using the distance snap feature. I can't do this for you as it'll take too much time.

Normal
[Normal]
Your SV is way too high to have this as a normal map. If you are going to rank this map you may have to consider remapping as changing SV ruins the map
00:02:913 (3) - Reverse is on blue tick
00:10:925 (8) - Ends on blue tick
00:17:913 (1) - Dont start sliders on red ticks unless music calls for it in Normal diffs
00:18:766 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing
00:21:493 (3,4,5) - ^
00:28:908 (1,2,3) - Blue ticks??
00:31:209 - Timing points aren't snapped
00:32:232 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - None of this is timed correctly
00:40:413 (5,6) - Spacing
00:45:186 (3) - Not timed
00:46:165 (4) - Note isn't snapped
00:52:175 (1) - Blue tick
01:01:038 (2,3,4,5) - Not timed right, should be on red ticks
01:03:766 (4,5) - Spacing
01:10:073 (1,2,3) - ^

Currently there are a whole heap of timing issues and impatient twats like me won't be willing to mod your map which is why osu! suggests your map is at least timed correctly before asking for mods


I suggest going over your maps again and getting the timing right. Once you've done that I'll be happy to mod your map.
Sorry for being so harsh :( I'm Australian
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kricher

Pentori wrote:

m4m

General
[General]
Check [url=metadata]http://www.lyrical-nonsense.com/lyrics/eir-aoi/sirius/#page=English[/url]
Please make sure you don't use blue ticks incorrectly. Check over all your maps and identify where the hitsound isn't matched to the music
Your spacing also seems all over the place. Please make sure you go over your maps again using the distance snap feature. I can't do this for you as it'll take too much time.

Normal
[Normal]
Your SV is way too high to have this as a normal map. If you are going to rank this map you may have to consider remapping as changing SV ruins the map
00:02:913 (3) - Reverse is on blue tick
00:10:925 (8) - Ends on blue tick
00:17:913 (1) - Dont start sliders on red ticks unless music calls for it in Normal diffs
00:18:766 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing
00:21:493 (3,4,5) - ^
00:28:908 (1,2,3) - Blue ticks??
00:31:209 - Timing points aren't snapped
00:32:232 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - None of this is timed correctly
00:40:413 (5,6) - Spacing
00:45:186 (3) - Not timed
00:46:165 (4) - Note isn't snapped
00:52:175 (1) - Blue tick
01:01:038 (2,3,4,5) - Not timed right, should be on red ticks
01:03:766 (4,5) - Spacing
01:10:073 (1,2,3) - ^

Currently there are a whole heap of timing issues and impatient twats like me won't be willing to mod your map which is why osu! suggests your map is at least timed correctly before asking for mods


I suggest going over your maps again and getting the timing right. Once you've done that I'll be happy to mod your map.
Sorry for being so harsh :( I'm Australian


tnx for the mod :D :D
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