[General]
[Sulit]
[Gila]
- I can't really understand what your diff names mean and this is unrankable as it doesnt seems to have none relation to the song (Maybe those are indonesian difficulty names?). Anyways, it should be changed to something that can be recognized like the default difficulty names, with the exception of Greget diff, of course.
- 01:00:179 (6) - Why you didnt remove the kiai here and added here 01:00:885 (1) - again?
- 00:25:591 (4) - Is there any reason for letting the break extended like that in all diffs?
- As the lowest diff of the set, I would recommend you nerfing your 1/1's in kiai, as they would be more friendly to beginners, thus, they would fit with the rest of the map.
00:49:591 (1) - You could turn all those 3/2 sliders in 1/1 and remove the 1/2 so the rhythm would still be intuitive and easier, or you could remove 00:50:826 (2) - 00:52:238 (4) - and keep (6), and do that to all the other patterns like that. - 00:24:179 (1,2) - Swap NC's between them to follow your 2 downbeats comboing pattern. So NC would be on (2) instead of (1).
- 00:35:473 (1) - Can be a little tricky to beginners so I would recommend you thinking in something more appropriate like a 1/1 with reverse and then a note.
- 00:46:061 (2,3) - Would be cleaner if you do a blanket of (2) and (3), something like that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6026482
- 00:49:591 (1) - Your comboing starts to get pretty weird here! You were following something like 2 downbeats to NC which means a 2 stanzas pattern but on kiai you let your NCs pretty inconsistent through the notes. 00:52:414 (1) - You'd have to add a NC here then here 00:58:061 (5) - and so on...
- 00:55:238 (1,2,3,4,5) - This flow seems unfriendly to beginners though, the way they have to move their cursor makes a weird and a hard gameplay for they, I would recommend doing some more natural movements there, or follow my suggestion above of nerfing the 1/2's, so you would delete (2) and (4).
[Sulit]
- I would like to express myself about your jumps in the kiai, they feels to overdone for a Hard diff and you should really nerf some of them. Gila diff is already doing the work of the jumps and you have to keep in mind that you need to make a great gap with Normal. You don't need to remove all the jumps but for sure replacing some of them to sliders jumps or making them smaller would help a lot.
- 00:07:237 (1) - This NC seems unexpected here, as you didnt make the same here 00:04:414 (5).
- 00:48:179 (1,2,3) - You could try doing something that would flow greater here, maybe something like that: http://puu.sh/r1k5k/8cd984c2a9.jpg
- 00:52:414 (4) - There should be a NC here to keep a consistency with your whole diff, also you added here too 00:49:591 (1). NOTE: 00:56:650 (4) - same here.
- 01:00:532 (5) - Why is the SV different here? I don't see any reasons in the song for you do that.
[Gila]
- 00:52:061 (4) - I would make (4) look like (3) just for a great aesthetic.
- 00:53:826 (1) - How about making this slider 1/2 and then add a note at 00:54:091 (2)? It would make a greater pattern imo!
- 01:00:532 (6) - Why is the SV different here? I don't see any reasons in the song for you do that.