Cita Citata - Meriang (Speed Up Ver.) [Taiko]

posted
Total Posts
202
show more
Ardiemerde

Surono wrote:

"kekness" -Ardiemerde

buru cari penanda fine diff buat takonya nish oo when, .
yeeee
Volta
in taiko diffs, it didn't appear in aimod but apparently many notes are unsnapped by less than 0.01 ms. this cause some trouble like at 00:36:885 - and 01:00:885 - in Sur's Oni (notes didn't follow the SV)

also, there is audio preview point conflict with std diffs probably caused by offset change
Topic Starter
Nishizumi
fixed all
Surono
bedug cecede, mending main pb blekskuet
OzzyOzrock
Ok, after checking the diffs, I realized that the problem is that there is no real linear spread. Kantan to Futsuu is really close, Muzukashii has a few spots where it's too complicated compared to Futsuu, and the weird part is that some parts of Muzukashii have good spread with only one of the Onis, because Surono mapped some parts easy, that are mapped harder in the Oni.

Basically, it's hard to see a linear spread, so you should talk with PatZar and make it a little more neat!
PatZar
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Meriang.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49600
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.700002

[Metadata]
Title:Meriang (Speed Up Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Meriang (Speed Up Ver.)
Artist:Cita Citata
ArtistUnicode:Cita Citata
Creator:Nishizumi
Version:Gen's Muzukashii
Source:
Tags:indonesia indonesian dangdut koplo ajep ajep cut short version Surono Genocide PatZar Rizqy Zan_-
BeatmapID:911720
BeatmapSetID:415751

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,75
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1600,352.941176470588,4,1,0,75,1,8
3012,352.941176470588,4,1,0,75,1,0
49600,352.941176470588,4,1,0,75,1,0
49600,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
72188,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0


[HitObjects]
256,192,3012,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,3541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,3718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,4071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,4247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,4424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,5129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,5306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,5482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,5835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,6365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,6541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,6894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,7071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,7247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,7953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,8129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,8306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,8659,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,9188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,9365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,9718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,10071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,10247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,10600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,10776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,11129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,11482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12012,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,13247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,13424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,13600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,13776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,13953,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,14306,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,14482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,14835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,15188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,15365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,15718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,16247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,16600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,16776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,17129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,17659,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,18012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,18188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,18541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,18718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,18806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,18894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,19070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,19247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,19600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,19776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,19953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20659,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,21012,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,21365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,21541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,21894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,22071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,22424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,22776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,22953,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,23306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,23482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,23835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25159,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,26129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,26482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,26835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,27012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,27365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,28071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,28424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,28776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,28953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,29129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,29482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,29835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,30188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,30365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,30718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,30894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,31247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,31600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,31776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,32129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,32482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,32659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,33012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,33718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,34071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,34424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,34600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,34776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,34953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,35041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,35129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,35482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,35835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,36188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,36453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,36541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,36718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,36894,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37953,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,39188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,39365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,39718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,40070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,40159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,40247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,40424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,40600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,40776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,41129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,41306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,41659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,41835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,42188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,42541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43953,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,47129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,47306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,47659,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,47835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,49071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,49247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,49600,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,51011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,51541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,51717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,51894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52070,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56658,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60894,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63364,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65658,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66364,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67070,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68658,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72895,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74659,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78012,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79953,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82071,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Nishizumi
updated

looks like no big changes for muzu and futsuu
patzar said if he reduce 1/4 mostly it would be almost similar as futsuu

hope you understand it :)
Surono
eidt

BCD!11! NGNTTTDD!!!!!!!1
Volta
clearing my list.

[Kantan]
00:16:414 - tambah k supaya konsisten dengan outro? (01:14:297 - )
00:22:061 - tambah d ^

00:36:179 - tambah k sebenernya masih bisa biar konsisten sama sebelum2nya (e.g: 00:33:355 - ) dan transisi ke section selanjutnya lebih mulus

[Futsuu]
00:19:944 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - ini gak diinvert warnanya?
01:19:944 (187,188,189) - d d k

[Oni]
00:01:591 (1) - ada suara sih tp rasanya spinner ini gak perlu. hapus? atau suara spinner bisa dikecilin sekitar 20%
00:08:297 (14,15,16,17) - gw sbnernya masih gak suka sama SV di 1/3 ini :c lebih mudah dilihat kalau dihapus


itu aja sih, maap telat.
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

Volta wrote:

clearing my list.

[Kantan]
00:16:414 - tambah k supaya konsisten dengan outro? (01:14:297 - ) sengaja gw bikin kosong karena buat di part akhir aja biar "sedikit" lebih susah
00:22:061 - tambah d ^ ^

00:36:179 - tambah k sebenernya masih bisa biar konsisten sama sebelum2nya (e.g: 00:33:355 - ) dan transisi ke section selanjutnya lebih mulus oh well

[Futsuu]
00:19:944 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - ini gak diinvert warnanya? oiya
01:19:944 (187,188,189) - d d k sure

[Oni]
00:01:591 (1) - ada suara sih tp rasanya spinner ini gak perlu. hapus? atau suara spinner bisa dikecilin sekitar 20% nah gw dari awal juga mau ngurangin itu volume spinnernya, tapi bingung gimana `-`deleted for best choice
00:08:297 (14,15,16,17) - gw sbnernya masih gak suka sama SV di 1/3 ini :c lebih mudah dilihat kalau dihapus tbh emang susah diliat sih kalo bagi orang awam :< but this looks more aesthetic


itu aja sih, maap telat.
thank you volta

selfmod : decreased volume to 70% in quiet part and sv kantan to 1.30
Volta
taiko diffs are fine. Muzu has a bit different style but i'm okay with it. but idk about standard, so putting don icon for now

Don'd!
Topic Starter
Nishizumi
thanks volta :)

MR OZZY WHERE ARE YOU
Ayyri
yoyoyoyoyoyoyoyoyo

Fix this so I can mod the Standard set. Thank you!

No guest mapper should have more difficulties in the mapset than the creator, all modes together.
Topic Starter
Nishizumi
hmmmmmmmmmm ok

will change oni to inner oni, and make an oni (easier than surono's)

dem ;;

edit : YE IT'S DONE :<
Volta
lol. call me again after std diffs are checked
Ayyri
hi tank and volta

[General]
  1. I know that, I personally had no idea what the difficulty names meant until I asked Nishizumi. So it possibly would be good if you changed the difficulties to English, like you have in your other set. But keep the last difficulty name as Greget.
  2. The kiai could be turned off at 00:59:473 - and turned back on at 01:00:885 - if you wanted a small break in it.


[Biasa]
  1. 00:46:061 - and 00:46:767 - This could be a nice blanket.


Relatively solid difficulty.

[Sulit]
  1. Rather than a normal, this difficulty feels a bit like an Advanced. Considering that you have jumps like 00:11:120 - and 00:11:473 - / 00:46:414 - and 00:46:591 - / 00:54:355 - and 00:54:532 - . These seem a bit big for a Normal difficulty, like I said. As well as the density is quite a bit more than in the Biasa difficulty.


Please correct me if I'm wrong about what was intended here. ;;

[Gila]
  1. 00:07:591 - This reverse slider feels a bit out of place with how you previously mapped this rhythm at 00:04:767 -.
  2. 00:19:238 - and 00:19:591 - For a Hard, this jump is a bit big, make it a somewhat smaller.
  3. 00:24:708 -, 00:25:061 -, and 00:25:591 - Same issue as above.
  4. 01:11:120 - and 01:11:297 - ^
  5. 01:11:826 - and 01:12:179 - ^
  6. 01:13:238 - and 01:13:591 - ^
  7. 01:14:297 - and 01:14:473 - ^
  8. 01:15:708 - and 01:15:885 - ^
  9. 01:18:532 - and 01:18:885 - ^
  10. 01:20:297 - and 01:20:650 - ^
  11. 01:21:708 - and 01:22:061 - ^
  12. 01:23:120 - and 01:23:297 - ^


My main issue with this difficulty was that it felt too hard for the difficulty that it was aimed at being. In which case, this felt more like an Insane in some parts, like I pointed out.

[Greget]
  1. 00:07:502 - Change the sampleset from soft, to normal on this slider tail. Sounds weird that it's not the same as the first time this rhythm happens at 00:04:679 - .
  2. 00:08:120 - Why leave this unmapped? It sounds empty without a beat here when you mapped it at 00:05:473 - .
  3. If you're going to have 00:18:532 - and 00:18:797 - so far apart, I'd recommend Ctrl+G'ing 00:18:532 - so it's easier to read that it's a 1/4 pattern, rather than a 1/2 pattern.
  4. 00:20:120 - and 00:20:297 - I'd move these closer together, based on the above point.
  5. 00:21:532 - and 00:21:708 - Same as above.
  6. 00:22:944 - and 00:23:120 - ^
  7. 00:36:885 - , 00:37:150 - , and 00:37:238 - ^
  8. 00:38:297 - , 00:38:561 - , and 00:38:650 - ^
  9. 00:55:238 - and 00:55:591 - Move 00:55:591 - closer to the tail of 00:55:238 - to stay more consistent with this type of pattern 00:08:826 - and 00:09:179 - .
  10. 00:56:650 - and 00:57:002 - ^
  11. 01:16:414 - , 01:16:679 - , and 01:16:767 - Similar issue as 00:18:532 -.


This difficulty feels like the jumps are too wide in some areas, based on what the song gives you. But the rhythm itself is pretty good.

[Oni]
  1. Change the HP/OD to fix a bit better between the Muzukashii and other Oni.
  2. 00:07:591 - / 00:07:767 - / 00:07:944 - One of these should be k. d d d sounds a bit too monotone for what is being given in the background here.
  3. 00:31:150 - A note could be added here so the 1/4 rhythm here stands out over the 1/2 in this section.
  4. 00:55:414 - Change to d. Has relatively the same pitch as 00:55:238 - .
  5. 01:11:297 - Could be changed to k to be more consistent with 00:48:708 - .
  6. 01:22:855 - Add a note to follow the melody a bit better here.


Good luck. ;w;7
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

Ayyri wrote:

hi tank and volta

[General]
  1. I know that, I personally had no idea what the difficulty names meant until I asked Nishizumi. So it possibly would be good if you changed the difficulties to English, like you have in your other set. But keep the last difficulty name as Greget. i leave it up to u fort
  2. The kiai could be turned off at 00:59:473 - and turned back on at 01:00:885 - if you wanted a small break in it. i'll consider it, but it seem well. keep this for a while


[Oni]
  1. Change the HP/OD to fix a bit better between the Muzukashii and other Oni. that's not problem by similar hp/od with muzu since this is easier oni. maybe i'll change the hp to 5.5 but let's see it later x_x
  2. 00:07:591 - / 00:07:767 - / 00:07:944 - One of these should be k. d d d sounds a bit too monotone for what is being given in the background here. b-but...the background says monotone, it's like what i did in inner
  3. 00:31:150 - A note could be added here so the 1/4 rhythm here stands out over the 1/2 in this section. it's unnecessary to put 1/4 in slowest part, even inner didn't do it
  4. 00:55:414 - Change to d. Has relatively the same pitch as 00:55:238 - . i'm focusing on structured pattern here
  5. 01:11:297 - Could be changed to k to be more consistent with 00:48:708 - . 01:11:120 (327,328) - i put k d to repeat these 1/2 with 01:11:650 (329,330) - they're sounds similar as (329,330)
  6. 01:22:855 - Add a note to follow the melody a bit better here. i think it didn't need :/


Good luck. ;w;7
thank you ayyri :)
i'll try to call fort :/ huffff
Surono

Nishizumi wrote:

MR OZZY WHERE ARE YOU

Ayyri wrote:

hi tank and volta
tank u

Nishizumi wrote:

i'll try to call fort :/ huffff
mpus, wait for eternity.tatusjin V:
MkGuh
[General]
  1. I can't really understand what your diff names mean and this is unrankable as it doesnt seems to have none relation to the song (Maybe those are indonesian difficulty names?). Anyways, it should be changed to something that can be recognized like the default difficulty names, with the exception of Greget diff, of course.
  2. 01:00:179 (6) - Why you didnt remove the kiai here and added here 01:00:885 (1) - again?
  3. 00:25:591 (4) - Is there any reason for letting the break extended like that in all diffs?


[Biasa]
  1. As the lowest diff of the set, I would recommend you nerfing your 1/1's in kiai, as they would be more friendly to beginners, thus, they would fit with the rest of the map.
    00:49:591 (1) - You could turn all those 3/2 sliders in 1/1 and remove the 1/2 so the rhythm would still be intuitive and easier, or you could remove 00:50:826 (2) - 00:52:238 (4) - and keep (6), and do that to all the other patterns like that.
  2. 00:24:179 (1,2) - Swap NC's between them to follow your 2 downbeats comboing pattern. So NC would be on (2) instead of (1).
  3. 00:35:473 (1) - Can be a little tricky to beginners so I would recommend you thinking in something more appropriate like a 1/1 with reverse and then a note.
  4. 00:46:061 (2,3) - Would be cleaner if you do a blanket of (2) and (3), something like that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6026482
  5. 00:49:591 (1) - Your comboing starts to get pretty weird here! You were following something like 2 downbeats to NC which means a 2 stanzas pattern but on kiai you let your NCs pretty inconsistent through the notes. 00:52:414 (1) - You'd have to add a NC here then here 00:58:061 (5) - and so on...
  6. 00:55:238 (1,2,3,4,5) - This flow seems unfriendly to beginners though, the way they have to move their cursor makes a weird and a hard gameplay for they, I would recommend doing some more natural movements there, or follow my suggestion above of nerfing the 1/2's, so you would delete (2) and (4).

Doesn't seems bad, but I'd check your comboing after kiai as they are inconsistent and also I'd try to make the diff easier as it is the lowest one.

[Sulit]
  1. I would like to express myself about your jumps in the kiai, they feels to overdone for a Hard diff and you should really nerf some of them. Gila diff is already doing the work of the jumps and you have to keep in mind that you need to make a great gap with Normal. You don't need to remove all the jumps but for sure replacing some of them to sliders jumps or making them smaller would help a lot.
  2. 00:07:237 (1) - This NC seems unexpected here, as you didnt make the same here 00:04:414 (5).
  3. 00:48:179 (1,2,3) - You could try doing something that would flow greater here, maybe something like that: http://puu.sh/r1k5k/8cd984c2a9.jpg
  4. 00:52:414 (4) - There should be a NC here to keep a consistency with your whole diff, also you added here too 00:49:591 (1). NOTE: 00:56:650 (4) - same here.
  5. 01:00:532 (5) - Why is the SV different here? I don't see any reasons in the song for you do that.


Apart from the huge jumps in the kiai, it is a pretty clean and cute diff!

[Gila]
  1. 00:52:061 (4) - I would make (4) look like (3) just for a great aesthetic.
  2. 00:53:826 (1) - How about making this slider 1/2 and then add a note at 00:54:091 (2)? It would make a greater pattern imo!
  3. 01:00:532 (6) - Why is the SV different here? I don't see any reasons in the song for you do that.


Seems good, not modding Greget cause I suck at 5* diffs. Good Luck!
PatZar
orngnya mana wokwaokaw
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply