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yuikonnu - Otsukimi Recital [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
Muu-chan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, August 30, 2016 at 10:07:03 PM

Artist: yuikonnu
Title: Otsukimi Recital
Tags: kagepro shikinohollow SReisen Verniy_Chan kagerou mca project mekaku city actors
BPM: 110
Filesize: 10751kb
Play Time: 03:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 4Key (2.89 stars, 1703 notes)
  2. Normal - 4Key (1.76 stars, 1015 notes)
  3. Shiki's Insane - 4Key (4.14 stars, 2539 notes)
  4. Verniy's Easy - 4Key (1.32 stars, 612 notes)
Download: yuikonnu - Otsukimi Recital
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ENJOY :3
Thank you Verniy_Chan and SReisen for the GD x3
Fubukicat
NINJA
Gravey-
Ayyyy lmao! >w<)// Good luck! Go go go! ! ! ' w'
NinjaSM

Eternalie wrote:

NINJAAAAAAAAAA x3
NINJAAAAAAAAAAA
Verniy_Chan
Oh ya~ muu-chan
Ada yang lupa...

menyangkut Normalisasi SV timingnya disini 00:00:208 - green linenya bukan 1,54x melainkan 1,77x (195/110 BPM = 1,77272)
00:18:581 - kalau disini hapus green linenya karena unnecessary

No Kodosu ya~
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Oh ya~ muu-chan
Ada yang lupa...

menyangkut Normalisasi SV timingnya disini 00:00:208 - green linenya bukan 1,54x melainkan 1,77x (195/110 BPM = 1,77272)
00:18:581 - kalau disini hapus green linenya karena unnecessary

No Kodosu ya~
yuuush ><b aku jadiin 1.7x biar ga kecepeten.. soalnya bgm nya calming piano <3
Verniy_Chan

Muu-chan wrote:

yuuush ><b aku jadiin 1.7x biar ga kecepeten.. soalnya bgm nya calming piano <3
hue~ hrusnya 1.77x beda 2 angka dibelakang koma aja gak akurat dibandingkan 1,70x
msih inget Rapid Life Syndrome? kena DQ akibat mslah sperti itu

ya.. itu kmbali lagi kepada muu-chan sih xD
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Muu-chan wrote:

yuuush ><b aku jadiin 1.7x biar ga kecepeten.. soalnya bgm nya calming piano <3
hue~ hrusnya 1.77x beda 2 angka dibelakang koma aja gak akurat dibandingkan 1,70x
msih inget Rapid Life Syndrome? kena DQ akibat mslah sperti itu

ya.. itu kmbali lagi kepada muu-chan sih xD
iyaaa.. tp kugituin karena ngikutin piano nya yg kalem sih. jadi sama aja kaya ngasih sv gitu.
klo semisal dari awal udah mulai 'main instrumen' sama kaya yg atas2nya bakal di samain kok. tp berhubung ini piano yg calm jd kupelanin dikit
SReisen
please put , shikinohollow on tags , is my old name
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

SReisen wrote:

please put , shikinohollow on tags , is my old name
added~ poofs
aNNNo-
Marked M4M
RedBall
Hello~ I'm from RRM mania modding queue!


Here's NM you requested!

+I'm a beginner in modding. So, it may not be helpful to you. Then, feel free to reject and don't give me kudosu!

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

To begin with, I didn't notice aNNNo- marked for M4M ;_; Sorry for this...


General
Toggle down 'Widescreen Support' on Normal and Shiki's Insane unless you use storyboard

Verniy's Easy
00:22:888 - add one note on column 2 (missing note. If you didn't put note on there because of difficulty, 00:36:427 (36427|0,36581|2,36581|3) consider changing that part)
00:55:965 (55965|0) - delete (This would be hard for Easy because of unexpected note I think)
01:56:581 (116581|3) - delete (following mood)

Normal
01:03:811 (63811|2) - move to 01:03:657 (missing note + Also, if that part is double, 00:58:119 here also should be double I think because of big drum sound)
01:09:042 - How about this? http://puu.sh/ok7We/80d7631aed.jpg (following the drum sounds)
01:20:581 (80581|2) - How about changing it to short note And 01:20:734 - add one LN which ends on 01:21:042 on column 2 And 01:21:042 (81042|1) - move to column 3 ? (following the clap sound)
01:21:350 - add one note on column 4 (in order to emphasize the wind instrument)
01:35:734 - add one note on column 3 (you put note like 00:24:273 (24273|3,24350|2,24427|1) following 1/4 drum sound)
01:40:427 - How about adding a LN which ends on 01:40:734 on column3 and 01:40:734 (100734|2) - move to column 4? (just a suggestion)
02:05:350 (125350|2) - move to 02:05:196 (same reason as 01:03:811 part)
02:22:119 (142119|2,142581|1) - same suggestion as 01:20:581
02:22:888 - add one note on column 4 (same reason as 01:21:350 part)
02:27:811 - add one note (you emphasized 01:26:273 (86273|0,86273|2) this part (same sound and mood))
02:43:350 (163350|1) - if this is following elec sound, I think this LN should end on 02:43:504 And add one LN which starts from 02:43:504 and ends on 02:43:657 on column 1
02:52:581 (172581|1) - How about starting this LN from 02:52:581 ? (just a suggestion)
03:01:504 - try this http://puu.sh/ok9rB/943d0f9a19.jpg (same suggestion and same reason as 01:20:581 and 01:21:350 those parts)
03:14:504 - add one note (same reason as 01:35:734 )
03:15:350 - add one note on column 2 (in order to emphasize the finish hitsound)
03:17:504 - add one note (missing note?)
03:19:042 - add one note (in order to emphasize the finish hitsound)
03:19:427 - add one note (same reason as 01:35:734 )
03:28:581 - add one note on column 4 (missing note?)
03:32:581 (212581|0) - delete (ghost note?)

Hard
00:58:119 - add one note on column 1 (in order to emphasize the wind instrument)
02:43:350 (163350|3) - if this is following elec sound, I think this LN should end on 02:43:504 And add one LN which starts from 02:43:504 and ends on 02:43:657 on column 3

too short kek

Shiki's Insane
01:05:965 (65965|3,65965|0,65965|1) - add one note on column 3 (I think this should be same as 01:04:734 (64734|3,64734|2,64734|0,64734|1) )
01:17:811 (77811|1,77811|0,77811|3) - add one note on column 3 (I think this should be same as 01:17:196 (77196|3,77196|0,77196|2,77196|1) )
01:19:657 (79657|0,79657|3,79657|2) - add one note on column 3 (^)
02:07:504 (127504|3,127504|2,127504|0) - add one note on column 2 (I think this should be same as 02:06:273 (126273|3,126273|0,126273|1,126273|2) )
02:19:350 (139350|2,139350|3,139350|0) - add one note on column 2 (I think this should be same as 02:18:734 (138734|2,138734|1,138734|3,138734|0) )
02:21:196 (141196|3,141196|0,141196|1) - add one note on column 3 (^)

lol, this diff is quite massive.

Nice song and Nice hitsound! :D

Good luck on your map! Go Go~
Verniy_Chan

RedBall wrote:

Verniy's Easy
00:22:888 - add one note on column 2 (missing note. If you didn't put note on there because of difficulty, 00:36:427 (36427|0,36581|2,36581|3) consider changing that part) added & fixed
00:55:965 (55965|0) - delete (This would be hard for Easy because of unexpected note I think) it's fine
01:56:581 (116581|3) - delete (following mood) nope, but i'll considering later
Thank you again RedBall.. for mod

Update disini
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

RedBall wrote:

Hello~ I'm from RRM mania modding queue!


Here's NM you requested!

+I'm a beginner in modding. So, it may not be helpful to you. Then, feel free to reject and don't give me kudosu!

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

To begin with, I didn't notice aNNNo- marked for M4M ;_; Sorry for this...


General
Toggle down 'Widescreen Support' on Normal and Shiki's Insane unless you use storyboard

Normal
01:03:811 (63811|2) - move to 01:03:657 (missing note + Also, if that part is double, 00:58:119 here also should be double I think because of big drum sound)
01:09:042 - How about this? http://puu.sh/ok7We/80d7631aed.jpg (following the drum sounds)
01:20:581 (80581|2) - How about changing it to short note And 01:20:734 - add one LN which ends on 01:21:042 on column 2 And 01:21:042 (81042|1) - move to column 3 ? (following the clap sound)
01:21:350 - add one note on column 4 (in order to emphasize the wind instrument)i'll keep until this point
01:35:734 - add one note on column 3 (you put note like 00:24:273 (24273|3,24350|2,24427|1) following 1/4 drum sound) suree :3
01:40:427 - How about adding a LN which ends on 01:40:734 on column3 and 01:40:734 (100734|2) - move to column 4? (just a suggestion)
02:05:350 (125350|2) - move to 02:05:196 (same reason as 01:03:811 part)
02:22:119 (142119|2,142581|1) - same suggestion as 01:20:581
02:22:888 - add one note on column 4 (same reason as 01:21:350 part) i'll keep until this point
02:27:811 - add one note (you emphasized 01:26:273 (86273|0,86273|2) this part (same sound and mood)) sureee
02:43:350 (163350|1) - if this is following elec sound, I think this LN should end on 02:43:504 And add one LN which starts from 02:43:504 and ends on 02:43:657 on column 1 sureee but with different way
02:52:581 (172581|1) - How about starting this LN from 02:52:581 ? (just a suggestion)
03:01:504 - try this http://puu.sh/ok9rB/943d0f9a19.jpg (same suggestion and same reason as 01:20:581 and 01:21:350 those parts)
03:14:504 - add one note (same reason as 01:35:734 ) keep
03:15:350 - add one note on column 2 (in order to emphasize the finish hitsound)
03:17:504 - add one note (missing note?)
03:19:042 - add one note (in order to emphasize the finish hitsound) sure till this point
03:19:427 - add one note (same reason as 01:35:734 ) keep
03:28:581 - add one note on column 4 (missing note?)
03:32:581 (212581|0) - delete (ghost note?)keep till this point

Hard
00:58:119 - add one note on column 1 (in order to emphasize the wind instrument) keep
02:43:350 (163350|3) - if this is following elec sound, I think this LN should end on 02:43:504 And add one LN which starts from 02:43:504 and ends on 02:43:657 on column 3 sureee but with different way

too short kek

Nice song and Nice hitsound! :D

Good luck on your map! Go Go~
thanks so much redball :D don't worry, i would check both mod from annno and u

SReisen wrote:

please apply for me , i cant open the editor , im buying new PC , so after the new PC come i concentrate on maps

Verniy_Chan wrote:

RedBall wrote:

Verniy's Easy
00:22:888 - add one note on column 2 (missing note. If you didn't put note on there because of difficulty, 00:36:427 (36427|0,36581|2,36581|3) consider changing that part) added & fixed
00:55:965 (55965|0) - delete (This would be hard for Easy because of unexpected note I think) it's fine
01:56:581 (116581|3) - delete (following mood) nope, but i'll considering later
Thank you again RedBall.. for mod

Update disini
makasih verni chan :3

updated
Fubukicat
hOi! dank meme incoming >:3

no need kudos (but you still can if you want a free + 2 )

You can call me sanik now
Key = 1/2/3/4
*Remenber that all this are only Yologgestion , if you don't lik then keep*
[Shiki's Insane]
00:08:662 (8662|2,8798|1) - here you use thoose LNs to make piano and the guitar drop sound effect
then here : 00:14:935 (14935|2) - this LN is also for the guitar drop but is kind of tricky to catch up , it make a kind of stair hun =w=a well
still I'd suggest to extend it until here : 00:15:208 -

00:25:273 (25273|2,25427|2) - I think thoose are ghosting , or else you forget to do same here :00:20:273 (20273|1,20427|0,20427|3,20581|2) -

01:12:965 (72965|1) - ghosting note imho
01:33:581 (93581|3) - add another note for melody here

01:43:965 (103965|1) - add nother note in 2 for the guitar here
01:46:196 (106196|3) - add pattern like you did here : 01:43:504 (103504|3,103504|2,103657|3,103657|2,103734|0,103811|1) - this is the same flow
01:50:273 (110273|2) - move to 1 for pitch ?
02:24:965 (144965|2) - ghosting I think (- tho there is a drum sound here : 02:24:350 - )
02:33:888 (153888|3) - add note like you did for next patterns

03:34:273 (214273|1,214273|0,214273|2,214273|3) - as for the Last release , it's visually cool but maybe in term of sound and flow it might be unconsistent
eventho I have no idea so nvm

[Hard]
00:45:196 (45196|3) - Imho Remove that one since there is no drum here and you didn't do that for previous and next pattern of the same rythm
00:45:196 (45196|3) - add another note for 3 notes impact just like previous notes ( drum , cymbal , melody instru)
01:10:657 (70657|2) - ghosting , Actually listened closely and the 1/4 stream starts here : 01:10:734 (70734|3) -
02:07:350 (127350|1) - remove clap hitsound this is only a kick

03:33:965 (213965|2) - Earlier in the map you got the same rythm theme and you didn't added that hit hat at the end . it's okay whithout it I think
01:39:504 (99504|0,99581|1,99657|2,99734|3,99811|2,99888|1,99965|0,100042|1,100119|2,100196|3,100273|2) - ^ here this part dosn't have the hit hat

[Normal]
00:31:119 (31119|3,31196|2,31350|1) - people could missunderstand this as a 1/2 stair , just moving the first or second note will fix that ez
00:45:196 (45196|2) - Same as Hard diff, there isn't a drum sound here, unless you mapped it to vocal then nvm

01:20:581 (80581|2) - I suggest starting this ln here : 01:20:734 (80734|0) - , and add a note here : 01:20:581 (80581|1) - ( it's prolly more easy to catch up)
02:21:965 (141965|3) - same suggestion goes here

03:01:196 (181196|0) - what about wis

03:33:965 (213965|0) - I think the instru only is fine to represent this part , as I said in HD, melody is strong enough to ignore drum here

[Verniy's Easy]
00:56:581 (56581|2) - Like NM and HD, i'd suggest starting the LN here : 00:56:734 - instead , and add a note at where the LN initially started
cause tbh a LN starting in a red line for a drum roll is kinda hard to catch up (atleast I find it tricky)
01:10:119 (70119|2) - I think you can replace with simples here 1/2 should be okay for that level
02:11:657 (131657|1) - same suggestion

nice hitsounds .
Good Luck
ask anytime :3/
Verniy_Chan

Eternalie wrote:

[Verniy's Easy]
00:56:581 (56581|2) - Like NM and HD, i'd suggest starting the LN here : 00:56:734 - instead , and add a note at where the LN initially started
cause tbh a LN starting in a red line for a drum roll is kinda hard to catch up (atleast I find it tricky) i was focus the main instrument (high pitch) than drum roll, so is okay to start on red tick
01:10:119 (70119|2) - I think you can replace with simples here 1/2 should be okay for that level i will considering it later
02:11:657 (131657|1) - same suggestion ^
Thank you Etlie-san >w<)b
Update with selfmod : http://puu.sh/ossJF.rar
Topic Starter
Muu-chan
he is best =w=b

thanks verniy chii, gonna check it asap
[ Kan-chan ]
Hi, Muuuuu chan >< same chan lolol.
that btw :3

here is mod as ur requested from Wonki's queue

l 0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l


Shiki's Insane
00:00:208 (208|1,753|0) - move to 0, 1
00:07:298 (7298|0,7844|1) - move to 1, 0
00:13:298 (13298|0,13571|2,13844|3,14117|2) - move to 3, 0, 2, 0

OK :)

Hard
00:00:208 (208|2,753|0) - move to 0, 2
00:01:298 (1298|3,1571|0) - move to 1, 2
00:02:117 (2117|2,2662|1) - move to 0, 1
00:03:480 (3480|0) - move to 2
00:07:844 (7844|0) - move to 1
00:08:662 (8662|1) - move to 0
00:09:480 (9480|2,9753|2,10026|2,10298|2,10571|0,10844|2) - move to 1, 1, 1, 1, 3, 1
00:13:298 (13298|0,13571|2,13844|1,14117|3) - move to 1, 0, 3, 2
00:38:888 (38888|0) - delet

Normal
00:02:117 (2117|1,2662|2,2935|0,3480|3) - move to 0, 2, 3, 2

wait wut mirror?


I think, do not need to differently than hard

ok. otherwise it is awsome map.

Verniy's easy
00:00:208 ~ 00:14:117 - this piano section. recomend you that after my modded 'hard map', you changed this map


ur view point is awsome
this part lyric is 'だけど信じる、君だから' - 'I believe, because it is you.'
NICE POINT :)

i'll recomend you about background video ! wannyanpuu's video

video made by wannyanpuu. he's twitter

you ask wannyanpuu about used video :)

GOOD LUCK MUUUUUUU CHAN ><
Topic Starter
Muu-chan
Thanks so much kan chan :) going to check it asap.
also about the bg video, i decided not to put any because the file would be so big with hitsound inside :) hehe
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

Eternalie wrote:

hOi! dank meme incoming >:3

no need kudos (but you still can if you want a free + 2 )

You can call me sanik now
Key = 1/2/3/4
*Remenber that all this are only Yologgestion , if you don't lik then keep*

[Hard]
00:45:196 (45196|3) - Imho Remove that one since there is no drum here and you didn't do that for previous and next pattern of the same rythm
00:45:196 (45196|3) - add another note for 3 notes impact just like previous notes ( drum , cymbal , melody instru)
01:10:657 (70657|2) - ghosting , Actually listened closely and the 1/4 stream starts here : 01:10:734 (70734|3) - i'll keep until this point
02:07:350 (127350|1) - remove clap hitsound this is only a kick removed <3

03:33:965 (213965|2) - Earlier in the map you got the same rythm theme and you didn't added that hit hat at the end . it's okay whithout it I think
01:39:504 (99504|0,99581|1,99657|2,99734|3,99811|2,99888|1,99965|0,100042|1,100119|2,100196|3,100273|2) - ^ here this part dosn't have the hit hat added that hithat thingy :)

[Normal]
00:31:119 (31119|3,31196|2,31350|1) - people could missunderstand this as a 1/2 stair , just moving the first or second note will fix that ez
00:45:196 (45196|2) - Same as Hard diff, there isn't a drum sound here, unless you mapped it to vocal then nvm
i'll keep until this
01:20:581 (80581|2) - I suggest starting this ln here : 01:20:734 (80734|0) - , and add a note here : 01:20:581 (80581|1) - ( it's prolly more easy to catch up)
02:21:965 (141965|3) - same suggestion goes here sureee~

03:01:196 (181196|0) - what about wis i did something different :)

03:33:965 (213965|0) - I think the instru only is fine to represent this part , as I said in HD, melody is strong enough to ignore drum here added hithat =w=b

[ Kan-chan ] wrote:

Hi, Muuuuu chan >< same chan lolol.
that btw :3

here is mod as ur requested from Wonki's queue

l 0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l


Hard
00:00:208 (208|2,753|0) - move to 0, 2
00:01:298 (1298|3,1571|0) - move to 1, 2
00:02:117 (2117|2,2662|1) - move to 0, 1
00:03:480 (3480|0) - move to 2
00:07:844 (7844|0) - move to 1
00:08:662 (8662|1) - move to 0
00:09:480 (9480|2,9753|2,10026|2,10298|2,10571|0,10844|2) - move to 1, 1, 1, 1, 3, 1
00:13:298 (13298|0,13571|2,13844|1,14117|3) - move to 1, 0, 3, 2 i'll keep about piano section :)
00:38:888 (38888|0) - delet also this one is for snare~

Normal
00:02:117 (2117|1,2662|2,2935|0,3480|3) - move to 0, 2, 3, 2 same here, i'll keep about piano section ^^

wait wut mirror?


I think, do not need to differently than hard

ok. otherwise it is awsome map.

ur view point is awsome
this part lyric is 'だけど信じる、君だから' - 'I believe, because it is you.'
NICE POINT :)

i'll recomend you about background video ! wannyanpuu's video

video made by wannyanpuu. he's twitter

you ask wannyanpuu about used video :)

GOOD LUCK MUUUUUUU CHAN ><
nice hitsounds .
Good Luck
ask anytime :3/
UPDATED :3
Lude
Interlude's Modding Queue
1|2|3|4


[Shiki's Insane]
01:00:042 (60042|2) - Not sure of this note. Seems ghost for me
01:02:119 - You could add up some notes for bass that goes with it, just like 01:02:734 -
01:04:965 (64965|3) - This seems ghost for me, as well
01:10:811 - These jacks are quite uncomfortable to hit with that speed. You could consider streams that goes 1-4 + 2-3.
01:15:427 (75427|2,75427|3) - Didn't get the meaning of these notes stuck with the LN.
01:16:427 - I think snare part doesn't deserve quads here. Instead, use them 01:16:119 - . Delete one note
01:17:504 (77504|3) - One of these notes could be deleted, just like 01:16:734 - . You emphasized snare with triples, but not bass.
01:17:811 - You could add up a note and make it quad.
01:19:657 - Same here, if you wished to intend the cymbal striking sound with quads.
01:20:273 - Delete one of these notes, probably 4. Its a bass sound, so double could fit
01:22:811 (82811|0,82811|2) - Not sure here too, seems ghost for me.
01:25:273 (85273|2) - Delete, 01:25:350 (85350|3) - Shift to 3. Consecutive and close notes are quite hard to hit, and moreover there's a jack at 4th col.
01:27:350 - Same reason as previous mod. Delete one note
01:30:119 - Delete one note, and instead add a note 01:30:273 -
01:39:504 - Here's my Suggestion.
01:45:657 - You could consider adding a LN
01:59:657 - Add another note, same sound as 01:59:350 -
02:06:504 (126504|0) - Seems ghost for me
02:12:350 - Well, lets leave at least one of these patterns xd

  1. 02:13:042 - This second verse has similar points as previous verse, so I could note several same things out. So if you decide to follow my moddings, make some changes at this verse as well. e.g) 02:21:811 - Same reason as above. Delete one note
  2. 02:53:657 - Same on third and climax verse!
03:14:581 (194581|1) - 03:24:427 (204427|1) - Delete
03:20:273 - Add a note

[Hard]
00:33:965 - Add a note at 4
00:58:119 - Add a note at 1
01:17:196 - 01:17:811 - 01:18:427 - 01:19:657 - These parts could deserve one more note, for cymbal. Hard difficulty could be even harder! xd Same goes off with similar sounds on each verse of the difficulty.
01:47:657 - Add a note for bass

Seems fine the rest of the difficulties. Good luck!
SReisen
Topic Starter
Muu-chan
okie updated thanks shiki :)
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