BN check
Frst of all, I'm sorry it's been so long and that you haven't been able to find another BN. The truth is I lost a lot of time and motivation for osu ;_; But anyway, I'm here now, so let's do this
Frst of all, I'm sorry it's been so long and that you haven't been able to find another BN. The truth is I lost a lot of time and motivation for osu ;_; But anyway, I'm here now, so let's do this
General
02:27:973 - The measure lines after this point are incorrect ;n; you should add a red line here to fix it (BPM 164, 4/4)
You should take "REOL" out of the tags, since it's in the artist field as well. (Capital letters don't make a difference.) Also, could you explain the source of the "Monstah" tag for me?
How come the OD on EZ is higher than on NM?
EZ needs to be hitsounded before I can bubble ;n;
You should take "REOL" out of the tags, since it's in the artist field as well. (Capital letters don't make a difference.) Also, could you explain the source of the "Monstah" tag for me?
How come the OD on EZ is higher than on NM?
EZ needs to be hitsounded before I can bubble ;n;
Hitsounds
EZ
lol no hitsounds
NM
00:12:973 - missing claps v
00:23:217 -
00:36:387 -
00:51:753 -
00:54:680 -
01:01:265 -
01:03:460 -
01:10:046 -
02:30:534 -
02:33:460 -
02:40:046 -
02:42:241 -
00:22:485 (22485|3) - shouldn't this be a clap
01:36:021 (96021|0) - don't think this should be a clap
02:45:534 (165534|2,165899|2,166265|3) - why whistles?
HD
00:12:973 - missing claps v
00:15:899 -
00:21:753 -
00:23:217 -
00:36:387 -
00:37:851 -
00:42:241 -
01:02:729 -
01:37:119 -
00:57:058 (57058|2) - wrong place for clap, should be at 00:56:875 -
03:03:460 - 03:04:558 - 03:04:924 - 03:08:948 - 03:09:680 - 03:10:412 - 03:12:241 - 03:12:607 - missing whistles
puxtu's MX
00:38:948 (38948|0) - think this is supposed to be soft
01:36:021 (96021|3) - same
01:42:058 (102058|3) - same
Crono's SC
00:19:924 (19924|2) - unneeded clap?
00:37:119 - missing claps v
00:38:582 -
00:53:948 -
02:04:192 -
02:45:899 -
03:01:814 (181814|2) - this should definitely be drum, not soft l0l
soft-hitnormal is used very inconsistently in this diff. I won't point out each inconsistency, but pls try to improve it before I recheck
I would appreciate if you checked each difficulty again for hitsound mistakes! it's a bit sloppy right now
lol no hitsounds
NM
00:12:973 - missing claps v
00:23:217 -
00:36:387 -
00:51:753 -
00:54:680 -
01:01:265 -
01:03:460 -
01:10:046 -
02:30:534 -
02:33:460 -
02:40:046 -
02:42:241 -
00:22:485 (22485|3) - shouldn't this be a clap
01:36:021 (96021|0) - don't think this should be a clap
02:45:534 (165534|2,165899|2,166265|3) - why whistles?
HD
00:12:973 - missing claps v
00:15:899 -
00:21:753 -
00:23:217 -
00:36:387 -
00:37:851 -
00:42:241 -
01:02:729 -
01:37:119 -
00:57:058 (57058|2) - wrong place for clap, should be at 00:56:875 -
03:03:460 - 03:04:558 - 03:04:924 - 03:08:948 - 03:09:680 - 03:10:412 - 03:12:241 - 03:12:607 - missing whistles
puxtu's MX
00:38:948 (38948|0) - think this is supposed to be soft
01:36:021 (96021|3) - same
01:42:058 (102058|3) - same
Crono's SC
00:19:924 (19924|2) - unneeded clap?
00:37:119 - missing claps v
00:38:582 -
00:53:948 -
02:04:192 -
02:45:899 -
03:01:814 (181814|2) - this should definitely be drum, not soft l0l
soft-hitnormal is used very inconsistently in this diff. I won't point out each inconsistency, but pls try to improve it before I recheck
I would appreciate if you checked each difficulty again for hitsound mistakes! it's a bit sloppy right now
Diffs
Awaiting your response There are a few places where it's hard to hear the snare, but I made judgements based on what would make sense for the drum line as well as what I could hear
EZ
00:12:607 - double for crash?
00:11:875 - it might be better if this LN ends here at the beginning of the next sound
00:33:095 (33095|0,33095|3,33460|2,33460|1,33826|3) - i'm not sure what the purpose of this section is. Maybe you could just follow the previous pattern?
00:50:656 - how come you only use two lanes here?
01:36:021 - it's probably best not to repeat this pattern so many times here. http://puu.sh/uxc2l.png
02:29:345 (149345|3) - this should be on 1/1 snap.
02:33:278 (153278|0) - same
02:51:387 (171387|0) - 03:01:631 (181631|3) - these LNs are inconsistent in length with the other LNs. You should end them on the 1/1 snap
02:57:058 (177058|0) - should be on 1/1 snap
03:14:710 (194710|0,194802|1) - you need to make these snaps consistent with HD, MX, and SC ;n;
NM
00:36:021 - there should probably be two note here, it's a very strong beat. Or at least one ;n;
00:36:387 - 00:42:241 - 00:51:753 - 00:54:680 - 01:10:046 - 02:40:778 - double for snare?
00:56:875 - 01:53:948 - 02:35:656 - suggest double to follow the pattern
01:52:119 - again, double for the crash (also to follow the pattern)
02:02:729 - this double is inconsistent with the rest of the section, should be a single
02:03:826 - what an omission! I suggest adding a LN
02:11:387 (131387|1) - should be on 1/4 snap
02:23:491 (143491|0,143674|2,143857|0,144040|2) - this rhythm is ill-advised; the strong beats are on the 1/2 snap. I might suggest something like this http://puu.sh/uxdis.jpg (remember to mind the hitsounds)
02:34:009 - missing note? also 02:33:826 - should be a double to follow the pattern and for the crash
02:42:424 - missing note again
03:00:534 - 03:01:265 - 03:02:363 - 03:02:729 - these doubles just seem to be randomly placed. you should either use a regular pattern or only use singles until 03:03:095 -
03:14:802 (194802|2,194848|1) - make consistent with HD, MX, and SC pls
the crashes in this diff are inconsistent. some of them are doubles and some of them are singles. I would really appreciate if you tried to make them more consistent ;n;
HD
00:12:973 -00:15:899 - 00:22:119 - these should be double for consistency
00:19:924 - same, but you might also want to move 00:20:107 (20107|3) - to the first lane to avoid a three-note jack
00:21:021 - 00:21:387 - no reason for triples, i think. May be better to stick with doubles.
00:27:241 - add a single note for consistency with the other chords in the section
00:44:070 (44070|2,44253|3) - these should both be doubles for the kicks
01:09:589 - it's a bit weird that there's no notes here. Can I suggest this? http://puu.sh/uxeg8.jpg (make sure to replace hitsounds)
01:11:143 - this should be a double (for the kick), not 01:11:326 -
01:21:021 - 1/4 doesn't quite fit here. I suggest using one LN instead ;n;
01:25:412 - 01:27:607 - 01:28:339 - possibly triples for consistency with earlier triples?
01:29:070 - missing note i believe
01:30:534 - double for snare? also might want to add a note at 01:30:442 -
02:03:735 - I'm not sure if this jack is appropriate for this level. It seems to be the only 1/4 jack in the whole map ;n;
02:06:753 - to 02:08:582 - looks a bit strange to me that the fourth lane is empty for so long
02:23:765 - I think the double should be here for the snare, not at 02:23:674 -
03:00:899 - should be a double to follow the pattern, i think
03:02:637 - 03:08:674 - 03:12:607 - 03:13:979 - might be better to add notes here for the drums
puxtu's MX
no suggestions
Crono's SC
00:02:546 - missing note on guitar (compare with 00:08:399 -)
00:33:095 - missing LN for guitar?
00:36:021 - suggest changing to short LN on third lane for electric guitar
01:10:046 - 01:15:899 - add notes for snare?
01:42:241 - I think this should just be a double 'cus no snare
EZ
00:12:607 - double for crash?
00:11:875 - it might be better if this LN ends here at the beginning of the next sound
00:33:095 (33095|0,33095|3,33460|2,33460|1,33826|3) - i'm not sure what the purpose of this section is. Maybe you could just follow the previous pattern?
00:50:656 - how come you only use two lanes here?
01:36:021 - it's probably best not to repeat this pattern so many times here. http://puu.sh/uxc2l.png
02:29:345 (149345|3) - this should be on 1/1 snap.
02:33:278 (153278|0) - same
02:51:387 (171387|0) - 03:01:631 (181631|3) - these LNs are inconsistent in length with the other LNs. You should end them on the 1/1 snap
02:57:058 (177058|0) - should be on 1/1 snap
03:14:710 (194710|0,194802|1) - you need to make these snaps consistent with HD, MX, and SC ;n;
NM
00:36:021 - there should probably be two note here, it's a very strong beat. Or at least one ;n;
00:36:387 - 00:42:241 - 00:51:753 - 00:54:680 - 01:10:046 - 02:40:778 - double for snare?
00:56:875 - 01:53:948 - 02:35:656 - suggest double to follow the pattern
01:52:119 - again, double for the crash (also to follow the pattern)
02:02:729 - this double is inconsistent with the rest of the section, should be a single
02:03:826 - what an omission! I suggest adding a LN
02:11:387 (131387|1) - should be on 1/4 snap
02:23:491 (143491|0,143674|2,143857|0,144040|2) - this rhythm is ill-advised; the strong beats are on the 1/2 snap. I might suggest something like this http://puu.sh/uxdis.jpg (remember to mind the hitsounds)
02:34:009 - missing note? also 02:33:826 - should be a double to follow the pattern and for the crash
02:42:424 - missing note again
03:00:534 - 03:01:265 - 03:02:363 - 03:02:729 - these doubles just seem to be randomly placed. you should either use a regular pattern or only use singles until 03:03:095 -
03:14:802 (194802|2,194848|1) - make consistent with HD, MX, and SC pls
the crashes in this diff are inconsistent. some of them are doubles and some of them are singles. I would really appreciate if you tried to make them more consistent ;n;
HD
00:12:973 -00:15:899 - 00:22:119 - these should be double for consistency
00:19:924 - same, but you might also want to move 00:20:107 (20107|3) - to the first lane to avoid a three-note jack
00:21:021 - 00:21:387 - no reason for triples, i think. May be better to stick with doubles.
00:27:241 - add a single note for consistency with the other chords in the section
00:44:070 (44070|2,44253|3) - these should both be doubles for the kicks
01:09:589 - it's a bit weird that there's no notes here. Can I suggest this? http://puu.sh/uxeg8.jpg (make sure to replace hitsounds)
01:11:143 - this should be a double (for the kick), not 01:11:326 -
01:21:021 - 1/4 doesn't quite fit here. I suggest using one LN instead ;n;
01:25:412 - 01:27:607 - 01:28:339 - possibly triples for consistency with earlier triples?
01:29:070 - missing note i believe
01:30:534 - double for snare? also might want to add a note at 01:30:442 -
02:03:735 - I'm not sure if this jack is appropriate for this level. It seems to be the only 1/4 jack in the whole map ;n;
02:06:753 - to 02:08:582 - looks a bit strange to me that the fourth lane is empty for so long
02:23:765 - I think the double should be here for the snare, not at 02:23:674 -
03:00:899 - should be a double to follow the pattern, i think
03:02:637 - 03:08:674 - 03:12:607 - 03:13:979 - might be better to add notes here for the drums
puxtu's MX
no suggestions
Crono's SC
00:02:546 - missing note on guitar (compare with 00:08:399 -)
00:33:095 - missing LN for guitar?
00:36:021 - suggest changing to short LN on third lane for electric guitar
01:10:046 - 01:15:899 - add notes for snare?
01:42:241 - I think this should just be a double 'cus no snare