Annadine wrote:

You asked for a NM, but *unfortunately* your map is too OP for me to mod, and I'm afraid to destroy such a beautiful masterpiece so here's a star instead :"D 🌠 Along with it my most sincere good luck wish to you!

Kaori umg.
Please, please rank this ><//

Hello! NM from modding queue~!
I found some flaws so here's my mod xD

1. 00:44:655 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - not a perfect....triangle? :"D move 00:45:682 (1) - and 00:46:093 (3) - and 00:44:860 (5) -
2. 00:54:929 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - eeh not a perfect hexagon. Move 00:55:750 (2) -
3. 01:12:497 (3,4,5,1) - Stack? It's just like... uncomfortable? I don't even know =^=
4. 01:29:244 (4) - this sider could be nicer
5. 02:11:983 (1) - I think this slider needs to be moved a bit to the left.
6. This is just my opinion, but since you already put a back-and-forth kind of jump here 02:17:737 (1,2,3) - , I think jangan bikin jump kayak gitu lagi di 02:19:997 (4,1,2,3) - . Agak aneh juga itu rasanya, suggestion gue sih gimana kalo itu 02:19:997 (4,1,2,3) - jadiin zigzag pattern aja ato gimana kek =w=
7. Also, I think there should be a NC here 02:19:997 (4) - and here 02:21:641 (4) -
8. 02:26:572 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - pattern yang ini kesannya kayak random begini sengaja kah? o.O Keliatannya kayak random soalnya 02:27:805 (2,4) - gak pas diantara 02:27:189 (3,4) - dan 02:27:189 (3) - agak menceng angle nya imo. Wkwkwk.
9. 02:29:860 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Ini pattern nya gak gimana gitu menurut gue. Kan awalnya arah nge jump nya ke kiri, eh trs ke kanan. Tadi gue udah redeh pengen cursor dance bikin buletan eh keok berubah arah wkkwkwk.
10. 02:34:175 (1,2,3,4) - kalo back n forth yg model kayak gini gue suka :/
11. 04:09:107 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ujuk2 strim horizontal kayak gini itu agak gimana ya =w= bikin curve ke arah bawah di 04:10:031 (4,5,6) - ?

BEAUTIFUL

1. 01:33:764 (3,4,5) - Is this just me or is this an inconsistent spacing
2. 03:12:394 (3,1,2) - betulkan start slidernya si 03:13:011 (2) - , menurut gue lebih bagus kalo lebih condong ke atas.
3. 04:04:586 (3) - add more curve?
4. Gimana kalo ini dibikin kayak gini aja:
   img

   ih ga rapih banget versi gue wkwk.
5. 04:34:997 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - look closely and see it's not a perfect hexagon ><

- Frontier - wrote:

[Easy]
01:11:161 (3) - Ctrl+J Nope, sorry ;w; I still prefer that shape
04:11:572 (2) - 284|60 Sorry, I still prefer my placement ;w;
04:36:435 (4) - isnt its too hard for newbie imo I guess that's alright, since I placed it at the end of the song and it only happens once >w<
i know this song is slow. but it kind too fast for newbie. you can muv to the white line

good map good luck
lazy now lol

Yahuri wrote:

From queue~

General
-really nice skin! Thanks~! >/////<

Last Wish
00:55:956 (3,2,3) - blanket Fixed~!
01:33:353 (2,4) - ^ I guess that indirect blanket is fine....
01:48:970 (1,3) - ^ curve the head of 3 around 1 a little more I guess that blanket is also fine....
-really nothing else I could find except a few blankets that dont disturb gameplay

Good luck!

mulraf wrote:

It's just sooooo beautifull. i really love this one :3 Thanks ^^. Glad to hear that <3
i'll try my best to find some points to improve let's see....

Easy:
01:55:545 (5) - NC Nope, sorry ;w;
04:26:778 (3) - maybe NC? (i can see this working as it is as this section gets slower though. your decision i guess) Fixed~!
04:33:353 (3) - NC here instead of the next slider Fixed~!

Normal:
01:55:545 (6) - NC Um nope, sorry ;w;
03:44:038 (2) - NC (i know, a bit fast right after the first slider but that's just how your other scheme so far worked :/) Um, yeah, but since this diff is also for the beginner players, and there's no SV change in this diff (while I use SV change at this part in Hard and Insane), I guess I shouldn't add NC here :3

Hard:
03:07:874 (2) - NC here instead of the note before and undo the NC at 03:08:696 (1) - . Nope, sorry ;w; Cuz the beat at 03:07:052 (1) feels stronger than the beat at 03:07:874 (2)

Last Wish:
Idk, HP 8 might be a bit much. i guess it's fine but HP 7 or at least 7.5 would be a bit more appropriate in my opinion Um, I'll look at the other modder opinions then :3

Well, sorry for the NC mod, i really tried my best to find any mistakes. may it be mapping, video, skin, audio.
This is probably the best pending map i've got to mod so far, really loving it x3 and that with so few mods. wow. eh.. 6 nc's and a difficulty suggestion. don't know whether you should shoot a star for that You're so kind >////<. Thank you very much~

CyberX wrote:

Omg.. I love this song so much Me too <3333
kidda disappointed that you only take a NM request,i would love to GD this actually

well here my mod
Note that everythings here is just my opinions

Last Wish

00:02:120 (2) - delete this first and then move this 00:00:477 (1) to X:212 y:216 . and then block that slider and press ctrl + c , move the timing section to here 00:02:120 then press ctrl + v , flip that slider horizontally and press q Nice <3 Very nice indeed, but I still prefer my placement, sorry ;w;
00:07:874 there is something here,try to shorten the slider and reverse the slider or place a hitcirle there Yup, there's a piano sound that could be mapped over there, but I prefer making some slider art and skipping that one beat instead, sorry ;w;
00:11:161 same as above ^ Same reason as above ^
00:17:737 (3) - this should be at x:189 y:183 in shake of tidiness Um, nice but then that would make the jump to the next note -> 00:18:353 (4) a bit larger than any other jumps around this part, so I'm gonna keep it, sorry ;w;
00:29:244 (3) - NC There's no strong beat at that part, sorry ;w;
00:41:572 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - make them closer to each other a bit, too overdo I guess the distance in each notes are fine, since I gradually make the distance larger only little by little and I followed the music rhythm, which support me to make jumps like that :3
00:44:655 (4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - lowerd a bit Nope, sorry ;w;
00:47:120 (2) - move this to x:406 y:291.and 00:47:326 (3) this to x:282 y:163 Nice <3, but I prefer to put this note above, sorry ;w;
01:36:641 (2) - this slider should be at x:209 y:32 Sorry, I prefer to put that slider at x:328 y:112 so that it would be parallel with this slider -> 01:35:819 (1)
01:43:216 (2) - delete this,and then copy this slider 01:42:394 (1) here 01:43:216 "rotate by" 180* Oh wow, how did you know that they weren't twin sliders? XP. Okay, fixed~!
02:15:271 (1) - this slider 1st tick should be at x:181 y:343 Sorry ;w;. No change
02:37:052 (1,1,1) - NC Um, nope sorry ;w;
02:46:504 (1) - this really looks weird,try changeing the pattern Well, I'm sort of...... Didn't have any creative idea to make another slider pattern to replace that slider, so, that's why....
02:49:792 (4) - this shouldnt be a slider instead of Hitcircle Well, I still prefer slider, sorry ;w;
03:28:216 (2) - this should be at x:295 y:298 Sorry, I prefer to put that slider at x:236 y: 236 ;w;
03:29:038 (3,4) - if you do things as above ^ then reposition this,to make it tidy ^
04:17:737 (1) - NC That's too early so nope, sorry ;w;
04:20:203 (1,1) - the pattern looks weird,and it doesnt semmetry Yeah, I made them manually, so....

thats all from me,Thanks in advance for chooesing my ModQ \:D/
come again next time

Domi200 wrote:

Hey here is my mod \:D/

[General]

1. I dont really like the difficulty spread in the mapset - e.g. 2.54* Hard is too easy and make me think Last Wish is the Insane diff but its only 4,02* Well, yeah, since the BPM is low, I couldn't make the Insane harder than 4,02. And if I made Hard diffs suddenly having 3*, it could be done in the low BPM song if I add streams and jumps in that diffs, and that's too suddenly since the Normal diffs was just mapped normally, that's why I asked for GD to CBH for Hard+ which is slightly Light Insane, and that would make the spread better :3 for me, since I usually didn't judge the spread by its Star Dfficulty, but I judge it by each diffs game play :3

[Easy]

1. 00:54:312 (2) - I would replace this slider with 2 singles since its offvocal and might confues beginners and get them out of the rythm Sorry, I'm gonna keep that slider, since in my opinion, it would be easier for the beginner player to catch up a slider than the notes :3
2. 00:57:600 (2) - ^ ^
3. 01:45:682 (1,2,3) - (3) falls a bit off I would just place a single at 01:48:148 Um, same reason as above
4. 01:50:613 (3) - this one is placed right - since it has 2 sounds its working on the one above feels weird I guess, I still gonna keep it, sorry ;w;
5. 02:20:203 (3,4) - would prefer one 1/1 slider here or a reversed 1/2 slider I guess it's fine to have 1/4 slider once in awhile in Easy diff, since the flow wasn't hard at all, and her vocal at that part told me so :3
6. 02:29:655 (2) - rather two singles or just one at the white tick since the slider is ending on a strong beat you want to click that Um, same reason as before
7. 04:35:819 (3) - Might repeat this once and remove 04:36:435 (4) - Oh wow, nice <3 Fixed~!

[Normal]

1. 00:48:148 (3) - remove the repeat and let (3) follow by a 1/2 slider and remove (4) Sorry, I'm gonna keep it ;w;
2. 01:29:244 (1,2,3,4) - You should map this completely on the vocal Um, yeah, but I also feel like to map the music, so....
3. 03:05:819 (2,3,4,5) - gotta change here something either on vocals or the piano (2,3) starting good on the vocals but (4) drops out and (5) is a weird transition to the paino? idk You could try removing (4,5) and continue (3) with another 1/4 slider and one 1/4 repeated slider - Sounds better too~ Um, okay, I'll think about it :3
4. 04:08:285 (2,3) - If this is on the vocals you have to move it 1/4 to the left since its off vocal
   -> If you do so fix DS from (1) to (2) and add a note at 04:09:107 () - Um, I want to map the piano over there, so I guess, I'll keep it :3

[Hard]

1. 00:59:655 (1) - You could make a jump here to emphasize the vocal a bit (In case you want to make it a bit harder :3) Nope, sorry >w<. I will make some jump at another parts owo/
2. 01:55:545 (1) - I would prefer this part mapped instead of a filler spinner Well, nothing much to map here other than her vocal, and the little piano sounds, that's why I prefer putting a spinner over there >w</
3. 02:52:257 (3,4,1) - You mixed mapping the vocals and beat together again would be a different story if you contiue with the beat when you swap from vocals>beat but you go instantly back to the vocals so (1) falls off here - I would short (3) to a 1/4 slider, remove (4,1) and add a 1/2 slider where (3) ended at 02:52:678 Um, nice. But I prefer mapping vocal and the beat gradually like that for the rest of the map, that's why I guess I'm gonna keep it :3
4. 04:35:613 (4) - Overmapped imo - maybe on the violin but pls you never did that before so why now Um, I'll think about it :3

[Last Wish]

1. 00:07:052 (1,1) - never was a fan of sliderart~ You skip two beats in the middle of each slider Yup. I did it in purpose owo
2. 01:55:545 (1) - Map this please Well, nothing much to map here other than her vocal, and the little piano sounds, that's why I prefer putting a spinner over there >w</
3. 03:30:887 (2) - You dont really need a break in an insane (if this is supposed to be one) Well, adding a break in Insane even if it's the shortest one would let the player relax their fingers for awhile XP
4. 04:35:613 (4) - meh still overmapped imo imao

Good luck with your map

Annadine wrote:

Hello! NM from modding queue~!
I found some flaws so here's my mod xD

Last Wish[]
Aduh ini mod nya bahasanya campur2 wkwkw. Hebat, bisa bahasa Indonesia owowowowowo/

1. 00:44:655 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - not a perfect....triangle? :"D move 00:45:682 (1) - and 00:46:093 (3) - and 00:44:860 (5) - Fixed~!
2. 00:54:929 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - eeh not a perfect hexagon. Move 00:55:750 (2) - Sorry, I'm gonna keep it ;w;
3. 01:12:497 (3,4,5,1) - Stack? It's just like... uncomfortable? I don't even know =^= Nice, but I'm gonna keep it, sorry ;w;
4. 01:29:244 (4) - this sider could be nicer Well, I'm not very creative
5. 02:11:983 (1) - I think this slider needs to be moved a bit to the left. I guess it's fine that way ^^
6. This is just my opinion, but since you already put a back-and-forth kind of jump here 02:17:737 (1,2,3) - , I think jangan bikin jump kayak gitu lagi di 02:19:997 (4,1,2,3) - . Agak aneh juga itu rasanya, suggestion gue sih gimana kalo itu 02:19:997 (4,1,2,3) - jadiin zigzag pattern aja ato gimana kek =w= Ahaha . Maybe, soalnya biar patternnya konsisten aja, makanya jadinya kayak gitu
7. Also, I think there should be a NC here 02:19:997 (4) - and here 02:21:641 (4) - Um that objects were placed not at the red/big white tick, that's why I'm afraid to add NC there ;w;
8. 02:26:572 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - pattern yang ini kesannya kayak random begini sengaja kah? o.O Keliatannya kayak random soalnya 02:27:805 (2,4) - gak pas diantara 02:27:189 (3,4) - dan 02:27:189 (3) - agak menceng angle nya imo. Wkwkwk. owo maybe I'll consider to change it >w<
9. 02:29:860 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Ini pattern nya gak gimana gitu menurut gue. Kan awalnya arah nge jump nya ke kiri, eh trs ke kanan. Tadi gue udah redeh pengen cursor dance bikin buletan eh keok berubah arah wkkwkwk. Itu element of surprisenya >w</
10. 02:34:175 (1,2,3,4) - kalo back n forth yg model kayak gini gue suka :/ Banzai~! \owo/
11. 04:09:107 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ujuk2 strim horizontal kayak gini itu agak gimana ya =w= bikin curve ke arah bawah di 04:10:031 (4,5,6) - ? Um, I'll wait for another modder opinions :3

BEAUTIFUL

Thanks >////<. Indeed Kaori-chan is so gorgeous <333333333333

Hard[]

1. 01:33:764 (3,4,5) - Is this just me or is this an inconsistent spacing Whoopsie, Fixed~! >w</
2. 03:12:394 (3,1,2) - betulkan start slidernya si 03:13:011 (2) - , menurut gue lebih bagus kalo lebih condong ke atas. Fixed~!
3. 04:04:586 (3) - add more curve? Nope, sorry ;w;
4. Gimana kalo ini dibikin kayak gini aja:
   img

   ih ga rapih banget versi gue wkwk.
   Kawaii >///<. Tapi kayaknya mau tetep ditumpuk aja deh. Soalnya triple clicknya lebih gampang ngecatch owo/
5. 04:34:997 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - look closely and see it's not a perfect hexagon >< Lol, I never plan to make a pefect hexagon anyway XP /me runs

[]

I'm starving so that's all from me :"D The song is veryy nice, and I luv the bell hitsonds. Umg. [/color]
One word for this map: Beautiful. Good luck~ >w</ Y-you're a very nice person ;w;. I- I feel like hugging you <33333

Domi200 wrote:

Hey here is my mod

[General]

1. I dont really like the difficulty spread in the mapset - e.g. 2.54* Hard is too easy and make me think Last Wish is the Insane diff but its only 4,02* The spread is perfect

[CBH'S Hard]

1. I would start it at the same time as the other hard too - Skipping the beginning while the other diffs mapped it seems lazy~ The beginning seemed kinda boring for me to map.
2. 01:12:394 (4) - why did you use a reverseslider during the kiai but mapped streams during the normal time? either both streams or the other way around streams during kiai and the reverese's during normal time So the Map wont be the same all the time.
3. 01:55:545 (1,2,1,2) - the DS from 1>2 is shorter than usual Thats because of the sv used there
4. 02:25:134 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Keep it to the vocal here (1,2) -> 1/4 slider I think i do already, will fix if more point something out
5. This diff is ending earlier than the other ones too maybe add the ending part too

Good luck with your map

Annadine wrote:

Hello! NM from modding queue~!
I found some flaws so here's my mod xD

CBH's Hard+[]

00:33:353 (1) - Make this a curve? Just like00:32:120 (2) - okay01:19:381 (1) - add whistle why?01:17:531 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - please take a second look and hear the hitsounds, idk =w= ?01:25:545 (4,5,6,7,1) - curve? I wont use curved streams since this is a Hard+. Streams should be easy to follow, so straight streams are the best to use here.02:51:024 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^04:14:860 (3,4) - #HowCloseAreYouFromHpBar
[]

I'm starving so that's all from me :"D The song is veryy nice, and I luv the bell hitsonds. Umg.
One word for this map: Beautiful. Good luck~ >w</

Kanari wrote:

no need to post 8 times in a row Modem xD you can just put them all into one post and edit it if needed

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Found nothing wrong. Good luck.

Kanari wrote:

more dots like you asked, just open up the .osb file and replace with this http://puu.sh/nW7zr.osb

Chocox wrote:

Favorite Kana song + Favorite anime = ??

PureCreamy wrote:

omg omg crying bucket of tears while playing this map ;w; (that last scene....)

This map is so beautiful. Thanks for making such a perfect map Modem nee-san. You're officially one of my favourite mapper now

Modem wrote:

Ahaha, I just want to increase the post count in this map's thread Xd *cough*

CyberX wrote:

Modem wrote:

Ahaha, I just want to increase the post count in this map's thread Xd *cough*

i'm helping you in this hahaha

well i actually forgot to tell you this

Good Luck on this map

• [Last Wish]

1. try AR8.5 ~AR8 since its a low BPM song, ar9 seems to fast, but if you are keeping ar9 i think it would be nice to the beginner who was trying to read 10.3
2. try offset 485, well in my test play i always hit to fast and need to set offset -7 ingame tho
3. 00:44:038 (3,4) - well i think the spacing here is a little bit to big then the previous parttern
4. 01:11:778 - this beat shouldnt be ignored
5. 02:02:942 (3) - move a little bit downward to make sliderend stick with 02:02:120 (1) -
6. 02:24:312 (5,6,7) - this is a bit weird when i played, maybe map them as same as 00:52:257 (1,2,3,4,5) - ?
7. 02:25:750 - add a note? you do it at the previous part 00:53:696 (2) - and i think is perfect tho why not here XD?
8. 02:29:038 - ^
9. 02:32:326 - ^^
10. 04:02:326 - this beat shouldnt be ignored
11. 00:16:915 (1) - miss a finish or whistle
12. 01:22:463 (3,1) - the whistle sound a little unnecessary
13. 02:11:367 - ^
14. 02:27:600 (1) - miss a normal additions clap

1. Missing video in CBH's Hard+.
2. While we're at it, the name Hard+ is rarely used nowadays, as you can see, here is one of the cases on my map.
3. Hitsound file is not 100 ms length :
   drum-hitwhistle.wav 55ms.
4. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms :
   soft-hitfinish.wav, well my pc can't use Audacity to check hitsounds stuff so it's better if you do a recheck there.

1. 01:53:901 (3,4) - 02:03:764 (3,4) - I thought you're going to use the same shape here? Especially the latter one.
2. 03:15:682 (2) - Soo why you made this snare with no vocal clickable while you're trying to get away from those snares on 03:15:682 (2) ? nvm just realized you sacrificed it for that 1/1 finish slider.
3. Absolutely flawless.

1. 00:10:340 (1,2) - Soo why didn't you do something symmetric here like you used to do before? Something like this.
2. 00:15:271 (4,1) - You can try taking this advantage to do some blankets/symmetric stuff here, also it felt weird to play this thing 00:18:148 (2,3,4) because the vocals+drums were only on the last 2 circles but not the first one. Well I can see that you're trying to make a different rhythm from the previous stanza here but this is really hard to play.
3. 00:38:696 - The sound here is a lot stronger than 00:38:901 (4) yet you made the latter one clickable, imo if you're worrying about the rhythm being too repetitive then I think it's better to leave the snare empty than making them clickable.
4. 00:59:449 (5,1) - 02:31:504 (5,1) - Just sth random but I prefer the same kind of stack on both of these.
5. 03:13:216 (4,5) - Fix blanket pls.
6. 03:22:874 (5) - Dunno tho, kinda uncomfortable when there's a beat spacing followed by a slider on the bluetick which make it's kinda awkward to play on 03:22:463 (4,5) . If you were trying to make a diffferent rhythm from 03:15:887 (3,4,5) then how about this?
7. 03:59:655 (3,4) - You overlapped this thing a bit much imo, well it's just something minor anyway.

1. 00:44:449 (3,4,5) - Well it's a bit uncomfortable to play because these beats are kinda similar in terms of vocal, the movement is required on 00:44:655 (4,5) yet it isn't required at all on 00:44:449 (3,4) .
2. 02:26:367 (2,3) - These two shouldn't be the same pattern with 02:27:189 (4,5,6) . The rhythm on both of them are slightly different imo.
3. 04:09:929 (4,5) - A 1/8 kickslider is better here, at least I'm the one who completely misinterpreted 04:10:237 (5,1) as 1/4.
4. 04:20:203 (1,2) - Feels awkward for some reason and I don't even know why.
5. 04:35:819 (1,2,3,4) - Just something random but how about 2 1/2 sliders instead? That way the heads will be on the piano sound as well.

1. 00:15:682 (2,3) - Isn't this supposed to have 2.00 DS to be consistent with the pattern?
2. 02:26:778 (1,2) - The stack plays weird when the drum is on the first circle, unlike most stacks in this diff.
3. 02:54:312 (4,5) - Stack?
4. 03:18:559 (3,1) - The spacing here really tripped me up, I prefer a consistent spacing here. Same applies to 03:22:463 (1,2) .

Lami wrote:

##easy

02:50:203 (3) - make blanket with 02:51:435 (1) - ? Um, that's already a blanket actually o3o
04:34:997 (1) - remove NC, you didn't use NC here in normal diff. Ah right. Fixed~!

##normal

00:26:161 - this drum sound is so empact.. consider http://puu.sh/nVGL1.jpg Sorry, I wanna map only her voice at that part >w<
01:06:230 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - so long train.. ;w; Em, yep :3. But I guess that's still fine since this is Normal diff, and I set the HP Drain Rate to be low to balance this difficulty
01:12:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:49:381 (5,6) - consider to make one slider Well, I've already used too much 1/2 slider, so I guess I keep that 2 circle instead to follow the rhythm ^^
because 00:49:586 (6) - don't have worthly beat on normal diff. Yep, but it follows her voice quite nicely in my opinion :3
01:07:874 (1) - ,02:39:929 (3) - inconsistent NC setting Fixed~!

##hard

01:30:887 (5) - obviously offscreen in 1024x768 resolution. Oh wow, I didn't notice it XP. Fixed~!
02:43:627 (5) - add NC as 01:11:161 (1) - Nope, sorry ;w;
03:27:600 (1,2,3,4) - in slow sv part, 03:29:038 (3,4) - this singletap is kinda excessive partten Um, I guess it was fine since it's only two circles right after that slider. And, that two circles are to emphasize her vocal, since if I only put one circle, I feel like, something is.... a bit off

##Last wish

AR 9, OD 8 is so high as consider to overall diffculty I guess it's fine. Since CBH was using 6.5 OD and 7.4 AR in his diff, so it should be fine to use AR 9, OD 8 to make two gap difference with the previous diff

00:25:134 (4) - NC Fixed~!
01:19:997 (2,3) - according to consider flow, 01:20:203 (3) - make left vectors?
kinda feel awkward flow as 01:19:381 (1) - with same vector in same NC partten. No change, sorry ;w;
02:41:572 (3) - inconsistent NC with first kiai time I guess, it's fine
02:42:394 (1,2,3,4) - recommend to make more hard here as 01:10:340 (1,2,3,4) I wanna make some patterns and flows variations. That's why -

good luck

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue

• [Last Wish]

1. try AR8.5 ~AR8 since its a low BPM song, ar9 seems to fast, but if you are keeping ar9 i think it would be nice to the beginner who was trying to read 10.3 Um, so I guess I'll keep AR 9 :3
2. try offset 485, well in my test play i always hit to fast and need to set offset -7 ingame tho The offset have already been checked by BN, and he said, the offset was fine :3
3. 00:44:038 (3,4) - well i think the spacing here is a little bit to big then the previous parttern Well, actually, I made the spacing in each objects gradually getting bigger as the song goes on :3
4. 01:11:778 - this beat shouldnt be ignored Um, but there's nothing over there other than her voice in which has already been mapped at the red tick (01:11:572)
5. 02:02:942 (3) - move a little bit downward to make sliderend stick with 02:02:120 (1) - Um, no change about this placement, sorry ;w;. 'Cuz this slider 02:02:942 (3) was blanketing this note -> 02:02:737 (2) -
6. 02:24:312 (5,6,7) - this is a bit weird when i played, maybe map them as same as 00:52:257 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? In my opinion, that rhythm was fine, since I wanna make some patterns and flows variations, plus, there's no stream in this part so I couldn't map it in the same way like at 00:52:257 (1,2,3,4,5)
7. 02:25:750 - add a note? you do it at the previous part 00:53:696 (2) - and i think is perfect tho why not here XD? 'Cuz her vocal has already been mapped at the red tick (02:25:545) >w<
8. 02:29:038 - ^ Exactly the same reason as above >w<
9. 02:32:326 - ^^ ^^
10. 04:02:326 - this beat shouldnt be ignored Sorry. My main focus is mapping that part was the drum, not her vocal ;w;
11. 00:16:915 (1) - miss a finish or whistle Wow, I didn't recognize it XP. Fixed~!
12. 01:22:463 (3,1) - the whistle sound a little unnecessary It was necessary for the main beat o3o
13. 02:11:367 - ^ ^
14. 02:27:600 (1) - miss a normal additions clap Fixed~! >w<

sry i only can mod one diff :\ It's fine. Thanks for modding >w</
anyway i like the song and the HS <3 Thanks <333
have a star Uwah, thank you >////<
GL~

Silverboxer wrote:

from my modding queue

Hard

01:21:024 (1,2) - slider ends don't line up properly (anchor points are on the same spot but the slider ends don't match with them, so it's still the tiniest bit off) Yeah, it always happen when I tried to make stacking slider tails ;-;
01:22:463 (3,1) - these notes being so close together looks a bit weird. the ds also isn't consistent so maybe find a better way to do this pattern? Yeah, I do that in order to make this diff harder, and many mappers also doing that, so I guess it was fine >w<
01:23:490 (3,4) - same here ^
01:24:723 (5,1) - slider 1 is very slightly too close to slider 5. the blanket size seems to be a bit bigger for most of the other sections Yeah, since there's 1/2 beat gap between 01:24:723 (5) and 01:25:956 (1), it's fine to make a larger indirect blanket like that. The other sections was having 1/4 beat gap. That's why their DS for the blanket was smaller than this part :3
01:30:887 (5) - this goes waaaay off the grid but I assume someone else has mentioned it already? playing on widescreen and it's fine but on standard resolution the leaderboard covers it. not sure if this is actually a problem Fixed~!
02:24:312 (5,6) - ds here maybe a bit too high looked through more of the map and saw the reason why. I like this Thank you >////<
02:57:189 (6) - ctrl + g then adjust this pattern Sorry, I wanna make a reverse jump over there to make the kiai time part harder than the other part, so no change ;w;

looks amazing though. really great job with this entire mapset, almost everything looks perfect and I love the sliders in all the diffs I checked too. good luck with this, you definitely don't need to change much before this can be qualified.

Electoz wrote:

Oh, not often to see both sb and video in the same song. Well, I asked for the storyboard to Kanari in case there are some people who wouldn't want to download this map with the video due to its size. So that, at least, they could enjoy the storyboards >w<

[General]

1. Missing video in CBH's Hard+. Oh God, I forgot. Fixed~!
2. While we're at it, the name Hard+ is rarely used nowadays, as you can see, here is one of the cases on my map. Um, right. But using it now also wasn't a problem, so it's fine :3
3. Hitsound file is not 100 ms length :
   drum-hitwhistle.wav 55ms.
4. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms :
   soft-hitfinish.wav, well my pc can't use Audacity to check hitsounds stuff so it's better if you do a recheck there.
   Okay, I already checked it through the Audacity, and I guess it was fine, and it wasn't affect the game play at all :3

[Easy]

1. 01:53:901 (3,4) - 02:03:764 (3,4) - I thought you're going to use the same shape here? Especially the latter one. Nope. I wanna have some variations in the slider's shape ^w^
2. 03:15:682 (2) - Soo why you made this snare with no vocal clickable while you're trying to get away from those snares on 03:15:682 (2) ? nvm just realized you sacrificed it for that 1/1 finish slider. Hehe :3
3. Absolutely flawless. Wow, thank you >////<

[Normal]

1. 00:10:340 (1,2) - Soo why didn't you do something symmetric here like you used to do before? Something like this. Very nice indeed <3. But I prefer to blanket them, sorry ;w;
2. 00:15:271 (4,1) - You can try taking this advantage to do some blankets/symmetric stuff here, also it felt weird to play this thing 00:18:148 (2,3,4) because the vocals+drums were only on the last 2 circles but not the first one. Well I can see that you're trying to make a different rhythm from the previous stanza here but this is really hard to play. Hm, I guess that two circles wasn't that hard to click since I put plenty of them on the next rhythm repetitively, so that even the beginner players could adapt the rhythm in this diff :3. And it also more challenging in that way >w</
3. 00:38:696 - The sound here is a lot stronger than 00:38:901 (4) yet you made the latter one clickable, imo if you're worrying about the rhythm being too repetitive then I think it's better to leave the snare empty than making them clickable. Um, no. Actually I didn't map the snare over there, but her vocal :3
4. 00:59:449 (5,1) - 02:31:504 (5,1) - Just sth random but I prefer the same kind of stack on both of these. Nope, sorry ;w;
5. 03:13:216 (4,5) - Fix blanket pls. Fixed~!
6. 03:22:874 (5) - Dunno tho, kinda uncomfortable when there's a beat spacing followed by a slider on the bluetick which make it's kinda awkward to play on 03:22:463 (4,5) . If you were trying to make a diffferent rhythm from 03:15:887 (3,4,5) then how about this? Nice <3 but sorry, I prefer two 1/4 sliders to catch up with the rhythm ;w;
7. 03:59:655 (3,4) - You overlapped this thing a bit much imo, well it's just something minor anyway. Whoopsie :3

[Hard]

1. 00:44:449 (3,4,5) - Well it's a bit uncomfortable to play because these beats are kinda similar in terms of vocal, the movement is required on 00:44:655 (4,5) yet it isn't required at all on 00:44:449 (3,4) . Well, I made it based on the DS, so I guess it's fine :3
2. 02:26:367 (2,3) - These two shouldn't be the same pattern with 02:27:189 (4,5,6) . The rhythm on both of them are slightly different imo. Yeah, I sacrificed them in order to make some slider arts so that the length of the song wouldn't be too boring, and the game play itself is also fine, so I'll keep it :3
3. 04:09:929 (4,5) - A 1/8 kickslider is better here, at least I'm the one who completely misinterpreted 04:10:237 (5,1) as 1/4. Um, maybe I'll keep it since I stacked them so that it's easier for the player to recognize that it was 1/8 rhythm :3
4. 04:20:203 (1,2) - Feels awkward for some reason and I don't even know why. Lol. Sorry for my lack of creativity XD
5. 04:35:819 (1,2,3,4) - Just something random but how about 2 1/2 sliders instead? That way the heads will be on the piano sound as well. Sorry, I prefer that part to be more clickable, since the song was almost ended at that part ;w;

Not really comfortable with the rhythm choice after 2nd kiai but whatever, I guess it's fine. \:D/
Maybe I should ask a global moderator to merge all your posts zzz GYAAAAAAAHHH (ʘдʘ)!!!! NO, PLEASE! FOR THE SAKE OF HUMAN RIGHTS, PLEASE DON'T DO THAAAAAAT!!!! >A<