Electoz
Electoz wrote:
Hi
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:27:467 - Map sth here to follow vocal? You already have a 3/2 spacing on 00:30:291 (4,5) so I think it wouldn't hurt to have another one here. I think it's fine. I like this rhythm better, as it brings out the drum more.
- 00:31:526 (5,1) - Swap NC? Fixed.
- 00:41:056 - 01:40:350 - 01:43:173 - Add whistle? Added.
[Hard]
- 00:42:114 (6,1) - 1.2 DS here but idk if it's intentional so I'm mentioning this just in case. It's the same distance. Lower SV makes the distance spacing number higher.
- 00:53:762 - Add a circle here? To me this beat here is just the same as 00:50:938 . I want to push more emphasis on the syncopated vocal here.
- 01:12:114 (1) - Any reason for putting NC here? Since you put one on every 2 downbeats. Readability, and also because this part feels like a separate idea from the previous four beats.
- 01:17:938 (5) - Add whistle? Added.
Yeah sry for a short mod but hope this helps anyways~
- 00:17:232 - Add a circle here for consistency with 00:17:938 (4) ? No.
Aihuro
Thanks.Aihuro wrote:
Hey Little! NM from my queue.Easy:
- 00:18:467 (3,2) - Mm. . looks kinda messy with this overlap here and I know it's hard to avoid it. Maybe try something like this instead: The overlap is not visible during gameplay.http://puu.sh/pydk2/b8f92073cc.jpg You don't have to change much if you do this if you are lazy like me .
- 00:21:291 (2,2) - Maybe stack them? No.
- 00:25:526 - I don't really get why you leave open spaces like this one and then over here: 00:28:350 - you don't. (Also, only my imo so it doesn't really matter of course) but I think a nice 1/1 slider would fit perfect. This is just how the song feels to me.
- 00:39:644 (1) - I'm trying to figure out something that would fit better, I'm not sure if you would like this but what is he harsh to try. Just do something like this instead:http://puu.sh/pydDX/0aa999ff17.jpg I prefer the current rhythm to emphasize vocals.
- 01:47:409 (1) - This is kinda of a tricky one, eh. I tried my best so that you can end a note on that last beat. So maybe you can try something like this instead: http://puu.sh/pydWs/17e847ac9c.jpg I like my rhythm better.
- Other than that, very decent diff! I really love your mapping style.
Normal:
- 00:32:938 (5) - I strongly suggest still my own opinion to add a note here. At the moment it sounds empty. I'm staying on the offbeat vocals here, and don't want too much rhythmic density since this part is relatively calm.
- 00:40:173 (2) - Maybe end this slider here instead: 00:39:291 (7) - . Since you kinda missed an important beat there with that 1/1 slider. It's just much more fun to play if you don't miss the beats. That beat is weak, and not important.
- 00:41:585 (5) - Okay, see here, there is no important beat, so this time it's okay to use a 1/1. I'm not saying it's wrong what you did, I personally just don't like when you don't map a beat.
- 00:44:938 - Etto. . it's not an easy. . so I don't understand that gaping there. I suggest you add a note there, since you did with all the others. Gap there gives better emphasis to the start of the next phrase, and helps with the half-time feel.
- 00:54:997 (3,4) - Would be nice if you can make them look similar. It's fine.
- 00:58:350 - This really doesn't matter if you change it or not, but I think I hear a noise there. . maybe you can add a note there. Really, I can also just be stupid, lol. Gap to emphasize syncopation.
- 01:28:879 (3) - Why not try something like this instead: http://puu.sh/pyeHT/ceb4579603.jpg My reason is that you missed an important beat again. So I tried finding a better pattern. Prefer to just emphasize vocal here.
- Also a very good diff! Gj.
Hard:
- Very nice diff!
Really nice mapset, wish I could mod Insanes
Good Luck!