Hitomi Sato - Hodomoe City

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Shmiklak

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Hello~ M4M

Map to mod : t/431074

Plz make a 4 star AR < 8.5 diff of this , DTing that would be alot of free pp ..... jkjk

Easy :
  1. 00:21:897 (3) - curve the slider a bit more to blanket it around (2) more properly
  2. 00:39:688 (1) - suggestion : http://puu.sh/oj8aJ/749ce510ae.jpg

Shmik's Normal :
  1. u need to lower the use of 1/2 beats cuz its just a "normal" Using of 1/2 in normal is fully allowing
  2. 01:20:384 (4,2) - stack these Stack is perfect


The Rest is up to u.. Good luck!~
No update file
Betsuto
random mod from #modreq :)

[Easy]
00:34:350 - make it fit the sound ,1/2 note ,and 00:34:795 - add finish ?
00:41:467 (3) - ^ same
01:13:490 (5) - ^ same
01:20:162 (2) - add finish hitsound
[Normal]
1.1x distance spacing is too far for Normal ... actually 0.8 - 1.0x
00:02:771 - add finish hitsound
00:13:001 (5) - why this note is so easy than 00:11:222 (1,2,3,4) - ? make it more difficult
00:18:338 (4) - move it to the right... in to grid ? (sorry I'm not good at English) http://puu.sh/otKaY/33b829024c.jpg
00:19:673 (6) - add finish hitsound
00:19:673 - ^ same
good luck
Topic Starter
Imakuri
Thanks for your mod !
Shmiklak

Betsuto wrote:

random mod from #modreq :)

[Normal]
1.1x distance spacing is too far for Normal ... actually 0.8 - 1.0x U r not right :/
00:02:771 - add finish hitsound
00:13:001 (5) - why this note is so easy than 00:11:222 (1,2,3,4) - ? make it more difficult First: it's not note. It's slider. Second: For make rythm more interesting
00:18:338 (4) - move it to the right... in to grid ? (sorry I'm not good at English) http://puu.sh/otKaY/33b829024c.jpg it's not critic and fully rankable
00:19:673 (6) - add finish hitsound no
00:19:673 - ^ same
good luck
Thanks
UPD
Synk1337
First mod

00:06:552 (2) - Reverse ?

00:13:001 (5) - a bit boring ? Do the same than 00:11:222 (1,2) -

00:41:911 (3) - Finish ?

01:03:483 (2) - Circle ? Then slider 01:03:928 -

01:21:274 (2) - Curve it like this ? http://puu.sh/otNYN/2c172c6e73.jpg
Shmiklak

Synk1337 wrote:

First mod

00:06:552 (2) - Reverse ?

00:13:001 (5) - a bit boring ? Do the same than 00:11:222 (1,2) -

00:41:911 (3) - Finish ?

01:03:483 (2) - Circle ? Then slider 01:03:928 -

01:21:274 (2) - Curve it like this ? http://puu.sh/otNYN/2c172c6e73.jpg
Which diff lol?
Synk1337

Shmiklak wrote:

Synk1337 wrote:

First mod

00:06:552 (2) - Reverse ?

00:13:001 (5) - a bit boring ? Do the same than 00:11:222 (1,2) -

00:41:911 (3) - Finish ?

01:03:483 (2) - Circle ? Then slider 01:03:928 -

01:21:274 (2) - Curve it like this ? http://puu.sh/otNYN/2c172c6e73.jpg
Which diff lol?
Normal sorry :)
Ameyy
free mod:

KIAI TIME DES LE DEBUT DE LA MAP ??? MDR NO
Parachute
Hey, heres the mod from m4m :3



General
Timing is wrong for sure.
I would say offset=558 and bpm=134,98
But im not 100% sure about this and you should ask someone whos really good at this.




Easy
00:23:668 (1) - This blanket is a bit weird and you should put the sliderpoint a bit more away to make it look better

Hitsounds:
00:15:671 (1) - Add clap at sliderbeginning
00:54:788 (1) - ^ at sliderend
01:21:903 (4,5) - Would do finish on the 4 only, whistle on 5 only. but thats not that much the other 2 things i mentioned in this diff are, because theres kinda no hitsounds in these areas. this mention is just a suggestion although its okay just as you have it right now.




Normal (Why is there a duck..I mean goose.. xD)
00:12:993 (5) - Hm i think this slider is kinda weird and you could make better objects instead of this repeatslider
01:20:599 (1) - I think you should make this repeat slider go down because it looks really weird right now and it would make a better flow like that also
01:20:599 (1,2,1) - Also at this section i would kinda change the hitsounds and make a finish at end of 1 and 2
and remove the other hitsound at 2 and then remove finish at 3 and add whistle.


Hitsounds:
00:02:319 (4) - Would add something at sliderstart
00:14:772 (1,2) - Finish at both things maybe
00:19:665 (6,1) - Also here at 6 and sliderstart at 1 finish. (its like that in the song and i think its always good to make hitsounds that are in the song already)
00:23:668 (1) - Finish at start
00:27:226 (1) - ^
00:30:117 (3) - ^
00:30:784 (1) - ^
00:34:787 (2) - ^
00:35:454 (3) - ^at sliderend
00:36:121 (1) - ^at sliderstart
00:39:680 (1) - ^
00:41:903 (3) - ^
00:59:250 (1) - ^
01:02:808 (1) - ^
01:06:366 (1) - ^
01:08:812 (2) - ^ at end
01:09:924 (1) - ^at start
01:13:482 (1) - ^ at sliderend
01:15:262 (1) - ^at start
01:18:820 (1) - ^
01:20:599 (1,2) - ^ both at the end


Overall i think this is already a good beatmap. But besides this and the timing i dont really have concerns about this map.
[Haruka-Chan]
M4M

00:00:540 (1) - I would change the position of that slider like that:

00:10:102 (2,3) - right here the order is: circle - slider, and i would also give the slider a corner and stack both like this:

00:23:668 (1) - u only need 4 points for this slider:

00:25:002 (4) - let this circle be a slider
00:35:454 (3,1) - between those u need another circle
00:43:905 (2) - dont let this slider have a corner
00:54:580 (2) - change the direction of that slider, that both sliders show into the same direction like that:

I cant mod songs with less then 3 stars, so i am sorry 4 the shortish mod :/
And i couldn't find any issues at the Easy one :^)

All in all i would use the start of the second refrain as showpoint

good luck with the map :p
Shmiklak

Parachute wrote:

Hey, heres the mod from m4m :3

Normal (Why is there a duck..I mean goose.. xD) Because I'm goose :D
00:12:993 (5) - Hm i think this slider is kinda weird and you could make better objects instead of this repeatslider imo it's nice
01:20:599 (1) - I think you should make this repeat slider go down because it looks really weird right now and it would make a better flow like that also not really
01:20:599 (1,2,1) - Also at this section i would kinda change the hitsounds and make a finish at end of 1 and 2
and remove the other hitsound at 2 and then remove finish at 3 and add whistle.


Hitsounds:
00:02:319 (4) - Would add something at sliderstart
00:14:772 (1,2) - Finish at both things maybe
00:19:665 (6,1) - Also here at 6 and sliderstart at 1 finish. (its like that in the song and i think its always good to make hitsounds that are in the song already)
00:23:668 (1) - Finish at start
00:27:226 (1) - ^
00:30:117 (3) - ^
00:30:784 (1) - ^
00:34:787 (2) - ^
00:35:454 (3) - ^at sliderend
00:36:121 (1) - ^at sliderstart
00:39:680 (1) - ^
00:41:903 (3) - ^
00:59:250 (1) - ^
01:02:808 (1) - ^
01:06:366 (1) - ^
01:08:812 (2) - ^ at end
01:09:924 (1) - ^at start
01:13:482 (1) - ^ at sliderend
01:15:262 (1) - ^at start
01:18:820 (1) - ^
01:20:599 (1,2) - ^ both at the end


Overall i think this is already a good beatmap. But besides this and the timing i dont really have concerns about this map.
Thank u. @Imakuri pls fix hitsounds self.

girleyz-desu wrote:

M4M

00:00:540 (1) - I would change the position of that slider like that: ehm no, plus it breaks my ds :/

00:10:102 (2,3) - right here the order is: circle - slider, and i would also give the slider a corner and stack both like this: doesn't need

00:23:668 (1) - u only need 4 points for this slider: nice catched

00:25:002 (4) - let this circle be a slider doesn't need
00:35:454 (3,1) - between those u need another circle same
00:43:905 (2) - dont let this slider have a corner why?
00:54:580 (2) - change the direction of that slider, that both sliders show into the same direction like that: well fixed a bit

I cant mod songs with less then 3 stars, so i am sorry 4 the shortish mod :/
And i couldn't find any issues at the Easy one :^)

All in all i would use the start of the second refrain as showpoint

good luck with the map :p
Thank u
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: mp3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 2986
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 540,4098,82378
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Hodomoe City Theme
TitleUnicode:Hodomoe City Theme
Artist:Hitomi Sato
ArtistUnicode:Hitomi Sato
Creator:Imakuri
Version:Shmik's Normal
Source:ポケットモンスターブラック&ホワイト
Tags:pokemon, black, and, white, gamefreaks, nintendo, hodomoe, city, champion
BeatmapID:952686
BeatmapSetID:414438

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3.3
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4.1
ApproachRate:4.4
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"shlak.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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15662,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
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43238,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
54802,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
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Affirmation
ok. request in-game

[Easy]
00:04:096 (1,3) - blanket
00:11:208 (1,3) - sliders are too messy.
00:12:986 (3,4) - blanket.
00:23:654 (1,2) - Why this is flowbreak? don't break flow.
00:30:766 (1,2) - ^

[normal]
00:06:540 (2,3) - It is very hard to read. Don't make this flow.
00:08:318 (2,1) - I think this stack in normal is difficult for beginners.
00:21:876 (1,2) - too overlapped.
00:32:544 (1) - too long. make it short.
00:45:880 (3,1) - why you stacked them?
00:50:325 (1,2) - flowbreak too. don't make them.

I think this is not ready for rank. Sorry.
Perklone
Easy
00:57:881 (4) - this note is unnecesary, there's no beat to it. ( and NC the note after. )
01:13:439 (5) - http://puu.sh/oSuCR.jpg ( shorten the slider. )


Normal
00:41:657 (2,3) - i prefer this become a slider.
01:00:771 - shorten the slider by one tick and instead place a note?
01:16:995 (1) - http://puu.sh/oSum4.jpg this will match the beat better IMO.
love your map :D good luck for ranking btw
Topic Starter
Imakuri

Neoskylove wrote:

ok. request in-game

[Easy]
00:04:096 (1,3) - blanket fixed
00:11:208 (1,3) - sliders are too messy. anyone told me that, i asked it to BNs
00:12:986 (3,4) - blanket. fixed
00:23:654 (1,2) - Why this is flowbreak? don't break flow. fixed
00:30:766 (1,2) - ^ fixed too

[normal]
00:06:540 (2,3) - It is very hard to read. Don't make this flow.
00:08:318 (2,1) - I think this stack in normal is difficult for beginners.
00:21:876 (1,2) - too overlapped.
00:32:544 (1) - too long. make it short.
00:45:880 (3,1) - why you stacked them?
00:50:325 (1,2) - flowbreak too. don't make them.

I think this is not ready for rank. Sorry.
Topic Starter
Imakuri

[-R1] wrote:

Easy
00:57:881 (4) - this note is unnecesary, there's no beat to it. ( and NC the note after. ) no
01:13:439 (5) - http://puu.sh/oSuCR.jpg ( shorten the slider. ) nope, not necessary. but thanks for your mod ù!


Normal
00:41:657 (2,3) - i prefer this become a slider.
01:00:771 - shorten the slider by one tick and instead place a note?
01:16:995 (1) - http://puu.sh/oSum4.jpg this will match the beat better IMO.
love your map :D good luck for ranking btw
Shmiklak

Neoskylove wrote:

ok. request in-game

[normal]
00:06:540 (2,3) - It is very hard to read. Don't make this flow. and why? This diff is last in this mapset, so it should be a bit hard, I guess.
00:08:318 (2,1) - I think this stack in normal is difficult for beginners. i will think
00:21:876 (1,2) - too overlapped. and what?
00:32:544 (1) - too long. make it short.
00:45:880 (3,1) - why you stacked them? idk. Will think
00:50:325 (1,2) - flowbreak too. don't make them. will think

I think this is not ready for rank. Sorry. Ok :roll:
thx

[-R1] wrote:

Normal
00:41:657 (2,3) - i prefer this become a slider. I'm not u
01:00:771 - shorten the slider by one tick and instead place a note? not sure
01:16:995 (1) - http://puu.sh/oSum4.jpg this will match the beat better IMO.
love your map :D good luck for ranking btw
thx
osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 2984
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
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TitleUnicode:Hodomoe City Theme
Artist:Hitomi Sato
ArtistUnicode:Hitomi Sato
Creator:Imakuri
Version:Shmik's Normal
Source:ポケットモンスターブラック&ホワイト
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wajinshu
Hi Imakuri Shmiklak
Good map!
Bara-
Some small things I noticed when seeing this thread
What's the English name of the town? Please add that to tags (FYI, it's Driftveil)

While I'm at it, Hodomoe city should be removed fromtags as it's already in the title. And there is no need for commas, remove them. Also, Champion is irrelevant, it's not tha champion battle theme. Also add Pocket Monsters Pokémon to tags

Looking on the BW ost, the song is called
ホドモエシティ
Hodomoe City

Remove 'theme' from the title
Artist: 佐藤仁美
Hitomi Sato

I'll likely check this some day.
#osuneedsmorepokemonOST
Shmiklak

wajinshu wrote:

Hi Imakuri Shmiklak
Good map!
I knew it hehehe

Bara- wrote:

I'll likely check this some day.
Oh yeah :D
Topic Starter
Imakuri

wajinshu wrote:

Hi Imakuri Shmiklak
Good map!
Thanks <3

Bara- wrote:

I'll likely check this some day.
Cool :3
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