-Bumblebee- wrote:

Hi there! M4M As requested in #modreqs ^^
You're completely free to ignore this no way would I ever completely ignore a mod because I've been doing this for a short time doing it more is the only way to get better, so let's start

[General]

I think that HP drain would be better to 6/6.5 I just want it low because marathon, and I don't like the stats making it harder than the map itself already does

Righteousness and Sin

1. 00:00:548 (2,3) - increase the distance between them This is just the opening the spacing doesn't really matter that much
2. 00:18:548 (1,2,3) - theese are too distanced, man reduced
3. 00:18:548 (1,2,3) - do overlap here not sure why
4. 00:22:730 (1,2,3,4) - too distanced :/ reduced
5. 00:28:912 (3,4,5) - ^ this is for emphasis
6. 00:35:821 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^ this is meant to get larger spacing as her vocals are more intense
7. 00:44:639 (7) - NC here changed but not this note
8. 01:09:457 (6) - here too I think this one's fine
9. 01:16:548 (9) - and here ^
10. 01:26:730 (9) - ^ All these NC aren't necessary in the middle of a stream like this because each combo in these examples are still only 1 measure long
11. 01:28:185 (9) - ^ ^
12. 01:39:821 (9) - ^ ^
13. 01:51:457 (9) - ^ lol ^
14. 01:57:518 (6) - the note is not snapped It is snapped with 1/3
15. 02:06:730 - you can also add here a spinner I don't much care for spinners that are for buildup after a break
16. 02:30:730 (9) - new combo here same as earlier
17. 02:46:730 (6,7,8) - there's an extreme jump here reduced
18. 02:47:457 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
19. 03:28:912 (9) - NC I think you get this one by now
20. 03:34:003 (2,1) - approach them...too far, man reduced
21. 04:01:457 - a note is missing here That vocal mapped weirdly when I tried it, so I omitted it since this part is meant to be very slow
22. 04:01:548 - and here ^
23. 04:21:275 (2,3) - too far...the song is calm here, so let's get them close reduced
24. 04:53:275 (9) - NC
25. 05:04:427 (2) - move this to x:248 y:112 this is to stack them with 05:05:639 (1)
26. 05:04:669 (3) - ^ x:104 y:336 ^
27. 05:04:427 (2,3,5,6) - theese are not snapped, fix them Quick tip for modding: if you think notes are unsnapped, go to AIMod (ctrl+shift+A). If AIMod doesn't mention them as unsnapped, then they are snapped with a different divisor (in this case 1/3)
28. 05:10:185 (2,3) - too faaar reduced
29. 05:11:094 (7,8) - ^ this is for emphasis on the snare
30. 05:16:548 (9) - NC here
31. 05:17:276 (1) - you can do a slider here...not leave all that break during the Kiai time I just like the way you freeze for a measure. used sparingly I think it works
32. 05:18:730 (1,2) - ^ plus I don't want a slider tick in there
33. 05:25:639 (7,8) - too far :/ reduced
34. 05:48:548 (5,6) - ^ reduced
35. 05:54:185 (5,9) - NC here NC is in this stream only at the big white tick
36. 05:56:548 - break too long...add a break or a spinner added break
37. 06:08:912 (9,9) - NC here

That's a nice map, good like for ranking

Hpocks wrote:

I really suck at modding hard maps like this.

Mod

00:06:185 - Spinner should start here imo I think it's good where it is
00:19:094 - A bit hard to read? This doesn't seem hard to read at all, it follows about the same clicking pattern
01:11:457 - Is a mirrored version of 03:23:821 - No bad, go back and be original ok plox. Copying off of yourself is bad last time I checked (in mapping anyways) Usually I don't think this is a problem (plenty of ranked maps have the entire second half just flipped from the first) but I did change it
03:34:003 - is in the same place and is the same size as 03:38:366 - Make smth more original again. same as above

I really couldnt find too much wrong with it at all. It seems to be a beautifully well made map from my perspective (I cant play it so what do I know anyways). Good luck with rank!

squirrelpascals wrote:

ayy mods

mods

generally, check your jump sizes between combos in this first part before kiai. they seem kind of far doing that currently

• 00:15:457 (5,6,1) - This flow feels really choppy fixed

• 00:19:094 (1,2,3,4) - feels like sv should go faster here, imo My reasoning for this is basically that it leads into a part that isn't really more intense than the previous

• 00:30:003 (3,4) - blanket? (move 4 a bit to the right) wasn't intending that but sure

• 00:31:821 (4,1) - move closer together. this gap is different from the flow that you set from the slider portion should have caught that myself

• 00:32:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this whole part feels utterly repetitive. maybe replace some of the triples with a kickslider + circle? yeah, same problem I had earlier with the large part after the first break (longer than 1 second)

• 00:37:639 (8,9,1) - small change, but move 1 to the left of 9? done

• 00:40:003 (4,5,6) - flow is weirdd changed

• 01:05:094 (4) - ctrl+g? This part feels slower than the maps current speed done

• 01:22:366 (4,5) - move farther apart? I think it's fine personally

• 01:28:094 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - small change, but maybe make this curve less sharp to make stream more flowy tried to do that as best as I could, I'm not a master of the art of making streams

• 01:43:457 (1) - ctrl+g and 01:43:821 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g? uh this I wanted a drop-down jump, then after the triple to cross over the slider

• 02:26:185 (2,3,4) - space evenly? didnt feel right during tp done

• 02:53:730 (4,5,1) - jump feels far fetched reduced

love the slow part thanks!

• 04:47:821 (6,7,1) - ^ this one I actually think is fine

• 04:51:094 (1,2,3,4) - feel like this breaks the flow, if this isn't just me well, really I think the whole thing except the jump to the new combo retains the flow, and the jump to new combo doesn't break it too much, just enough to make you think about it

Beautiful map!!

Itasha_S13 wrote:

I love this map, is one of the best maps I've played and the song its soooo goood


but the offset its wrong, its like ~205 not 185

SeaRasp wrote:

Hi, here's my mod for M4M from your modding queue:

Mod

1. 00:10:932 (2) - Place this circle on this slider 00:11:114 (3) - the flow feels choppy. this may be just me, but I think that this pattern maked sense
   
2. 00:31:477 (3) - Press Control+G on this slider it would flow much better even if the slider-end is further away from the next slider. due to the music, I kinda like this part being like that in between these sliders (goes for every time I make sv 1.33x)
   
3. 01:20:205 (1) - Same for this slider press Control+G for the flow. this kind of jump is doing what is was meant to
   
4. 00:32:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Honestly for this part i liked it better with only triples instead of kick sliders but i guess it's just my opinion. I was hesitant to put kick sliders in the first place (though I do like the repeat sliders), so I removed them
   
5. 05:28:750 (8,9) - These two circles are really distanced, maybe you should reduce it. reduced
   
6. 02:09:477 (5,6,1) - Make this triple kind of arched towards the following circle or slider, like this 02:18:205 (7,8,1) - . done
   - 02:10:205 (3,4,5) - Same for this one done
   - 02:13:841 (7,8,1) - And this one done
   
7. 05:10:568 (4,5,6,7,8) - Very distanced, reduce it a little. done
   
8. 06:10:841 (1) - This is a very little thing but make this spinner end on the red tick just before, when the sound starts. ah, of course, changed

Overall this is probably your best map so far,it's really fun but there are just some problems with the flow.
Good luck!

Black Emptiness wrote:

so...i'm here finally...

* remove Namine Ritsu from tags, it's already in a title done

Righteousness and Sin
* 00:06:023 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time between these two notes. I think it's a hard enough diff that anyone who can play the map can do that
* 01:06:386 (6,7) - Put them in a same DS like you did at 01:05:659 (1,2) - . done
* 01:37:841 (2,3) - Ctrl + G & after that 01:38:205 (4,5) - Ctrl+G, it would create a star pattern. (You could also redesign it a bit later) I prefer them the way they are personally
* 01:57:538 (6,1) - Hard to read (1). Better to put it somewhere else. done
* About the sliders at pipe organ part, you should make this sliders shorter a bit. (They should end on a red line). I just like them to be like that since there isn't any time in between the notes in the music
* 04:46:023 (2,3) - There isn't any specific reason for this jump. Make a DS constant. done
* 05:28:932 (9) - Remove this note. It doesn't follow anything. done

Good luck, Spiral527!

Pentori wrote:

M4M ^_^

RIGHTEOUSNESS AND SIN
For starters, please don't have finishes at the beginning of every slider like at 00:45:295 (1) I'm hearing more cymbals crashing than the song itself :c Keep finishes for strong upbeats or at the end of a segment. You may enjoy it but I assure you the majority of the osu! community won't well, I always use soft-hitfinish so I'll remove the sound from the folder and leave it up to the player who will likely have a softer sound than that for finish so it's not so annoying

00:10:205 (6) - Move this on top of 3 to create a triangle. It looks cleaner and makes sense at the moment it's still a nice looking shape, retains the same DS, and creates a jump for the downbeat
00:15:114 (3) - Keep the same DS between 3,4,5 here. There is no need to have it vary. done
00:45:750 (2) - This note is too random, you didn't do this before with the strong sliders and shouldn't do it now or else its unexpected. If you want to do this you shouldn't stack it so that players can differentiate it from something like 00:26:205 (4,1) removed circle
02:53:477 (2,3,4,5) - These duplets are unnecessary and will just cause people to break their FC because it's unexpected. Space them out more and make them single taps It mirrors the way it sounds before the first kiai time, and this pattern is a well known one that people use all the time
02:54:386 (3,4,5,6,7) - you have the potential here to make this a stream into a slider that looks like a heart. If you feel like doing it, try it out People always enjoy good looking maps the thing about the song it that it seems (from what I can tell) to be about love that was broken, so this slider was meant to look like an incomplete heart, a broken one maybe
04:01:659 (1) - The music is pretty much asking for a spaced triplet here (honestly it's the mappers choice, so completely up to you, what you have is fine) I tried at first but the timing on it isn't consistent and it's too weird to try to map
04:24:932 (1) - Same here ^
04:44:205 (2,3,4) - Make triangle done
04:50:386 (2,3,5) - Make triangle (not with 4, with 5) I like the way it looks and plays as it is
04:54:750 (2,3) - The line that intersects slider 04:54:023 (1) should be perpendicular. In other words, move 2 a little up. done
05:30:841 (2) - Check 00:45:750 (2) removed circle
05:33:750 (2) - Same story removed circle

hyouri wrote:

I remember you from somewhere
You were going to do a GD for this map but all the maps on your laptop were deleted so I decided I didn't need to get it ranked anyway (it's pretty bad looking back on it)

[Righteousness and Sin]

01:09:477 (6) - NC done
01:16:568 (9) - This stream has 16 combo, you can divide it to 8 done for all 16+ streams
01:26:750 (9) - same goes here and here 01:28:205 (9) - and 01:39:841 (9) - see above
01:42:750 (6,2,3,4,5) - Feels way overmapped, move 01:44:205 (5) - closer to 01:43:477 (1) - 's position done
01:51:478 (9) - NC done

kricher wrote:

im new at modding so i might be wrong on some parts
01:15:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - stream doesnt fit with the music imo it's for the drums in the background
01:40:568 - start slider from here and so remove 01:40:477 (8,1) - and place something here 01:40:932 - to not miss a beat I did change this part and another to better fit the music
03:28:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - doesnt fit with the music same as the first one
03:55:841 (1) - place it closer to the slider's end so it is not a big jump and doesnt fit the music done
at some points dont get slider end at blue ticks

sry for short mod im new at modding that's fine, a short mod is always appreciated (by me, anyway)
m4m https://osu.ppy.sh/s/431604

MikasaSerket wrote:

Hey diddly darn buddy, I came from the land of Mod Requests .w.


M4M, this is my map Usao-Kicks for Liberation 5 Since the map is pretty long, just mod what you want. It does not have to be complete <3

Righteousness and Sin

Nice difficulty name orz Thanks, it's from the translated lyrics. '‘Tis laughable that we should try to give
Names to such things as “righteousness” and “sin” '

06:16:932 (1) - Hey man you can do a even greater slider than a circle slider! You have a huge and long slider, why don't you make some slider art with that?owwwoooooooo Just a suggestion, this is taken from Monstrata's beatmap, maybe do a star so that it matches the theme of righteousness?

I made it a heart since the song seems to be about love

S:C1 Whistle does not really fit well with the music, I would suggest maybe changing the sound to something that sounds like a drum? I will be looking for one that fits. As of typing this, however, no change has been made

00:03:841 (3,4) - The spacing for this is inconsistent because of 00:03:114 (1,2) - They both have the same beets so wai don't you keep the spacing the same ;w; fixed

00:14:750 (2,3,4,5) - Kinda linear pattern? If you highlite that part it looks like a square, why not blanket 00:15:477 (5,6) - the pattern would look coolio I tried to do what I think you meant

00:20:568 (1,2,3) - Waaai not make these further away from 00:20:205 (4) - ? The singer and the tempo change so it would make sense for a jump to emphasize this, it is fine even if it is a blue tick. changed

00:22:750 (1,2,3,4) - back at it again with the straight patterns ;;;;;) make em' more ziggy zaggy if you like the pattern or make a different pattern other than ziggy zaggy I tried to change it

00:24:386 (4) - were you trying to emphasize the singers vocccalls? bcuz this is the only reverse slider that is like this in that general area. It seems a little bit out of place compared to the rest of the map. Use a different rhythm instead of the reverse slider pls done

00:27:841 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - not much wrong with these but I don't really see why they are spaced out so much? It doesn't really emphasize anything so it kind of just drains the players stamina. if you are trying to increase the difficulty I would see why but there are other way of increasing difficulty such as making complex patterns. Make the jumps closer ~~~ done

00:33:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same goes for here done

00:35:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - heres an idea, why not start with smol jumps then gradually increase to larger jumps>? It emphasizes how the singer is increasing their voice done

00:42:386 (1,2,3) - Blanket fam I like it like this as a triangle

I really like your streams doing kiai time <3 thanks

01:11:477 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The jumps seem randomly placed? Why not do a star jump that starts off small then eventually becomes a full screen star jump I think these jumps are fine as they are, plus they aren't really anything to be difficult about

wai not increase HP and OD? they seem very low for an extra, how bout HP 6 and OD 8-8.7 I really don't like to make a map harder through the stats. The map is still difficult with the current stats, while increasing HP and OD will make it harder to play without increasing the difficulty in a fun way.

I really super duper uper like your map <3 Please get ranked

I spilled ice cream while modding Oh no!

I wasted good vanilla ice cream

-Xephyr- wrote:

02:14:568 (4) - I don't care for where this stream starts, since a BIG downbeat happens on note 6 of the stream. I think if you start the stream on note 6 and take it to the next 1 downbeat it will fit a lot better. made it a kick slider into the stream

04:29:295 (2) - Possibly have these notes going down instead of curving up since the piano notes are descending. done

04:41:659 (2) - This NEEDS to be crescendo'd. I got really disappointed when this was the buildup to the big climax of the entire slow part haha, more incremental spacing as it goes or something. done

slandotski wrote:

from #modreq!
I ask for m4m please :3

been a while & forgot how to use those boxes now so i'll just type it in right away:

Rightousness and Sin

Generally, omg how further those 1/2s can get? lol anyways. How you interpret the song was truly great

02:14:568 (2,3) (and the stream) got lost here. the spacing of (3) to the stream is longer than of (2), and to mention that 2 has its 1/2 time gap compared to 1/4 from 4, everything turned into hell here. I highly recommend you to move the stream nearer or do something about it. oh wow this was really bad before, changed

03:55:841 (1) so far away! After you pulled this pleasing section that makes us at ease here, this circle was surprising to me. also at 03:49:568(1) well, this one's my personal suggestion. so it's optional. but what I'm trying to say is that I personally want this section a bit more relaxing. both made closer

can't find more... urgh! welp, i hope this helps!
If you didn't remember me, then I'd only say thanks again for helping me with the storyboarding info months ago. lol I remember your profile picture certainly
here's my map if all goes well:
t/427301
choose either normal or true battle!! difficulty or maybe both!