00:19:114 (1,2,3,4) - This crescendo feels flat, maybe increase slider speed per slider or incrementally up spacing?
00:24:932 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - To me this spacing feels out of place, it's as large as some of the parts approaching the chorus. Possibly shorten it up a little bit so the buildup to the chorus feels like it goes somewhere?
00:56:294 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I personally play a lot of streamy maps and for some reason these streams like this feel really dull already. Possibly throw in 8th note sliders for 7,8,9,10 since there is the start of a vocal part to break it up a little?
01:21:659 (1) - I think this note is missing a clap. Personally I'd like this note to be a slider to continue with the pattern you had right before it, might feel more powerful to play since you're adding those snare hits/claps into the music. The other ones are fine because there are guitar notes that there should be jumps on and having a slider leading into those wouldn't work.
01:26:023 (1) - For one of the short guitar solos in the song this was really, really dull to play. Possibly consider mixing it up at this 01:27:477 (1) since that is when the guitar changes to a different rhythm, right now this just falls flat to me. It might just be because of the BPM of the song being more on the lax side, but something else needs to happen here in my opinion.
01:29:477 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This rhythm feels very isolated, it fits with the song but it doesn't repeat itself for a very long time, feels kind of stuck in there. One-off rhythms are fine but I personally like this rhythm for this part of the song, maybe incorporate it more?
01:39:841 (1) - Same issue with the stream here, definitely continue the stream but maybe add a stream jump or 8th sliders when she changes notes.
01:50:750 (1) - This stream feels fine though, maybe because of the shape.
02:14:568 (4) - I don't care for where this stream starts, since a BIG downbeat happens on note 6 of the stream. I think if you start the stream on note 6 and take it to the next 1 downbeat it will fit a lot better.
02:18:932 (3) - I like the stream spacing here, it's finally different from the other spacings.
02:34:386 (1) - For being the guitar solo of the song this section seems too slow moving, it's just more of the same jumps. Possibly use the rhythm I said before with 01:29:477 (3,4,5,6,7,8) , I think it fits really well here.
02:40:023 (7) - The clap on this note sounds really off to me.
02:22:023 (4,5) - I would personally make these two into a slider like the previous two rhythms, it feels strange to play this when the prior slider into double tap worked so well.
02:44:568 (1) - Starting here the spacing seems too overdone, it kind of overshadows the guitar solo which, in my opinion, should be a step up in difficulty and spacing to a verse/bridge before the chorus. Even some of the spacing in the Kiai chorus doesn't compare to this. It flows well for what it is but I'm just trying to nitpick possible changes.
03:28:205 (1) - Maybe try to crescendo this into the break somehow, either start with lower spacing and build up or force higher spacing at the end. The song is already difficult enough that the player can handle one of these kinds of streams.
03:32:568 (1) - As a whole really enjoyed this slow part.
04:29:295 (2) - Possibly have these notes going down instead of curving up since the piano notes are descending.
04:41:659 (2) - This NEEDS to be crescendo'd. I got really disappointed when this was the buildup to the big climax of the entire slow part haha, more incremental spacing as it goes or something.
05:29:659 (1) - Chill out on the spacing of this stream.
Overall pretty fun. I'm not a fan of big jumps so there's some bias in there, but if you have any questions about what I'm trying to say feel free to ask me, I get a little long winded sometimes.
I didn't write this with Mod 4 Mod in mind because I'm still tweaking stuff/new to mod forums but if you want to help a guy out here you go, it's not necessary though.
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/437630Thanks.