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Chromoxx
Here we go, i'll be modding this guy newyams' part here :D

[Chromoyams' Inner Oni]

  • 00:03:069 (5) - change to d, pitch goes up to the next note
    00:04:001 (8,9) - ctrl G, the pitch goes up here, not down
    00:43:794 (224) - change to k, the pitch goes up from the note before, also the d d d sounds a bit too monotone
    00:47:836 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - change to k k k k D for consistency with my later parts, it also adds more impact with less overmap imo
    01:34:468 (8,9,10) - d d k maybe, to emphasize the strong sound on 10 and add diversity to the next triplets
    01:45:038 (21,22) - same
    01:52:810 (44) - rework that pattern somehow so that this is a k, to emphasize the pitch change from this note to the next
    03:57:784 (119,120) - ctrl G, pitch goes up
    04:19:856 - maybe get rid of the SV change in the last kiai, as it's already emphasized enough through the rise in density imo and this makes things complicated with mods like HR
    #justOCDthings: please snap the bookmarks properly :p
    also that stream section is brilliant.... give the guy who mapped that a medal please
Should be it, taht's just a few things i noticed when testplaying etc. :D
Topic Starter
newyams99

Chromoxx wrote:

Here we go, i'll be modding this guy newyams' part here :D

[Chromoyams' Inner Oni]

  • 00:03:069 (5) - change to d, pitch goes up to the next note Wanted to match the instrumentals here.
    00:04:001 (8,9) - ctrl G, the pitch goes up here, not down I'm pretty sure the pitch of these is going down, or they're the same :/ idk
    00:43:794 (224) - change to k, the pitch goes up from the note before, also the d d d sounds a bit too monotone Yeah.
    00:47:836 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - change to k k k k D for consistency with my later parts, it also adds more impact with less overmap imo Well, I'll keep it for now, but it's something to consider.
    01:34:468 (8,9,10) - d d k maybe, to emphasize the strong sound on 10 and add diversity to the next triplets
    01:45:038 (21,22) - same I added quite a bit of stuff in this section.
    01:52:810 (44) - rework that pattern somehow so that this is a k, to emphasize the pitch change from this note to the next Done.
    03:57:784 (119,120) - ctrl G, pitch goes up Uh, that's your part I think :/
    04:19:856 - maybe get rid of the SV change in the last kiai, as it's already emphasized enough through the rise in density imo and this makes things complicated with mods like HR HR IS FOR SCRUBZlol jk
    #justOCDthings: please snap the bookmarks properly :p kk.
    also that stream section is brilliant.... give the guy who mapped that a medal please xD
Should be it, taht's just a few things i noticed when testplaying etc. :D
Thanks :D
Surono

newyams99 wrote:

Chromoxx wrote:

Here we go, i'll be modding this guy newyams' part here :D

[Chromoyams' Inner Oni]

  • 03:57:784 (119,120) - ctrl G, pitch goes up Uh, that's your part I think :/
Should be it, taht's just a few things i noticed when testplaying etc. :D
Thanks :D
give suggestion to self, nice mad,ding,. `L-
kouzuki_karen
[Chromoyam's Inner Oni]



- try increasing the value of this so that you can see the face in the bg more (open the .osu file in Notepad)
- add Chromoxx to tags? at least I don't see it...

00:07:033 (20) - I suggest you to just keep the start bit as 1/2, feels forced to hit this tbh.
00:23:431 (116) - adding finisher overemphasises this note a bit I think..
00:32:447 (157,158) - these could be deleted, I think these are probably unnecessary as this part of the song is notably slower-paced.
00:57:784 - idk if you deliberately left out the notes here but I think they should be added.
00:58:095 - same.
01:14:571 - I think here it sounds a bit strange the high-pitched vocal is left alone. Although I can't suggest anything better so feel free to leave it if you want.
01:27:007 (1) - volume of the spinner could be reduced as you are leading into a quieter part, both in green lines and in the song.
02:06:799 (154) - either add a finisher here or remove them at 02:04:312 (141,147) - as well, this note has same intensity and feels a bit strange if you don't add one here.
02:53:121 (438,439,440,441,442,443) - sounds a bit strange and doesn't fit in with the rest of the rhythm. but idk lol
03:15:115 (608) - add a note here?
04:07:421 (153) - I think slider velocity can be increased here to reflect the increased volume of the song.

sorry I didn't really find a lot, this map is good already lol

good luck!
Topic Starter
newyams99

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

[Chromoyam's Inner Oni]



- try increasing the value of this so that you can see the face in the bg more (open the .osu file in Notepad)
- add Chromoxx to tags? at least I don't see it... Yeah, I'll do both :P Totally forgot to add his name in the Tags xD

00:07:033 (20) - I suggest you to just keep the start bit as 1/2, feels forced to hit this tbh. Rip, I already removed this. Seems like you didn't get the update :/ Thanks for reinforcing it tho.
00:57:784 - idk if you deliberately left out the notes here but I think they should be added.
00:58:095 - same. Sure, I'll do this for consistency with Chromoxx's part.
01:27:007 (1) - volume of the spinner could be reduced as you are leading into a quieter part, both in green lines and in the song. Not my part, but I did some other things relating to the volume in the next part.
02:06:799 (154) - either add a finisher here or remove them at 02:04:312 (141,147) - as well, this note has same intensity and feels a bit strange if you don't add one here. Nice catch.
02:53:121 (438,439,440,441,442,443) - sounds a bit strange and doesn't fit in with the rest of the rhythm. but idk lol I'll see if I can do something :P

sorry I didn't really find a lot, this map is good already lol All g.

good luck!


Thanks for the mod :D
kouzuki_karen
oh, by the way I should add that the artist is actually "fhána", not fhana.

no kudosu since this is simple :P
Chromoxx

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

[Chromoyam's Inner Oni]



- try increasing the value of this so that you can see the face in the bg more (open the .osu file in Notepad)
- add Chromoxx to tags? at least I don't see it...

00:07:033 (20) - I suggest you to just keep the start bit as 1/2, feels forced to hit this tbh.
00:23:431 (116) - adding finisher overemphasises this note a bit I think.. nah, it's a clear strong beat, and i like the finisher there
00:32:447 (157,158) - these could be deleted, I think these are probably unnecessary as this part of the song is notably slower-paced. i like how they flow
00:57:784 - idk if you deliberately left out the notes here but I think they should be added.
00:58:095 - same.
01:14:571 - I think here it sounds a bit strange the high-pitched vocal is left alone. Although I can't suggest anything better so feel free to leave it if you want. leaving it as the vocal before is higher pitched imo and a color change emphasises the note in it's own way
01:27:007 (1) - volume of the spinner could be reduced as you are leading into a quieter part, both in green lines and in the song. i tried a bit, but i think it's ok as it is now
02:06:799 (154) - either add a finisher here or remove them at 02:04:312 (141,147) - as well, this note has same intensity and feels a bit strange if you don't add one here.
02:53:121 (438,439,440,441,442,443) - sounds a bit strange and doesn't fit in with the rest of the rhythm. but idk lol
03:15:115 (608) - add a note here? i think it's fine as it is
04:07:421 (153) - I think slider velocity can be increased here to reflect the increased volume of the song.

sorry I didn't really find a lot, this map is good already lol

good luck!
well, sorry for denying but it was ok as it is imo, anyway @newyams i think you can add the SV again in the last kiai as it feels boring without :D
love u ---
Topic Starter
newyams99

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

oh, by the way I should add that the artist is actually "fhána", not fhana.

no kudosu since this is simple :P
I TRIED SUBMITTING THIS SO MANY TIMES WITH THAT ARTIST NAME AND IT DOESN'T WORK help someone
kouzuki_karen


you tried that right?
Topic Starter
newyams99

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:



you tried that right?
k I did that like three times before and it didn't work wtf

Worked now, thx :D
Lost The Lights
Hi, late but better late than never... just kill me

d=don
k=kat
D=Big Don
K=Big Kat
r=remove
(?)=Suggestion

[Chromoyams' Inner Oni]
  1. Chromoxx
  2. 00:27:939 - You're missing a note here, which is a really clear sound. Consider adding a k here. Might as well consider changing this pattern like this starting from 00:26:229 - :
  3. 00:33:224 - Try adding a note here and changing 00:33:380 - into k. Also add a d here 00:33:691 - , these little breaks flow really bad imo.
  4. 01:04:312 - 01:04:468 - Swap these to notes (would end being d K). Suggesting this because I think it sounds better this way.
  5. 01:05:090 - Change this triplet into kkd, will fit vocals much better since the tone is descending.
  6. 01:06:799 - 01:06:955 - Same suggestion as before. d K.
  7. 02:15:349 - Change to d, k sounds really bad here.
  8. 02:16:281 - Come on Chromoxx, make it more interesting, change this one to d.
  9. 02:42:551 - Same suggestion as before, k fits better the vocal.
  10. 03:57:473 - Mind if i suggest to make this part less dense? It's really calm and only vocals are here. Also you map all the vocals but not this 04:06:644 - ? I'm disappointed friend. Those drums need to be mapped.
  1. newyams99
  2. 00:58:095 - Would suggest you to change this to k. Fits vocal better.
  3. 01:51:255 - Change to k, if you listen carefully you'll know why.
  4. 01:54:675 - This pattern sounds better as dkddkkd imo, try it.
  5. 02:43:639 - 02:43:794 - k and d respectively, they play and follow better the vocal.
That's all from me, a really nice map. Good luck!
Chromoxx

Lost The Lights wrote:

Hi, late but better late than never... just kill me

d=don
k=kat
D=Big Don
K=Big Kat
r=remove
(?)=Suggestion

[Chromoyams' Inner Oni]
  1. Chromoxx
  2. 00:27:939 - You're missing a note here, which is a really clear sound. Consider adding a k here. Might as well consider changing this pattern like this starting from 00:26:229 - : there isn't really a distinct sound here and the break is good
  3. 00:33:224 - Try adding a note here and changing 00:33:380 - into k. Also add a d here 00:33:691 - , these little breaks flow really bad imo. the breaks add for a nice flow variation and go pretty well imo
  4. 01:04:312 - 01:04:468 - Swap these to notes (would end being d K). Suggesting this because I think it sounds better this way. i like the k D tbh
  5. 01:05:090 - Change this triplet into kkd, will fit vocals much better since the tone is descending. the tone isn't really descending. If anything, it goes down from 347 to 348, that's why the triplet starts with a d
  6. 01:06:799 - 01:06:955 - Same suggestion as before. d K. same answer
  7. 02:15:349 - Change to d, k sounds really bad here. i think it's fine here tbh
  8. 02:16:281 - Come on Chromoxx, make it more interesting, change this one to d. it's ok as it is, since it's all higher pitched notes. also some mono doesn't always hurt
  9. 02:42:551 - Same suggestion as before, k fits better the vocal. i'll leave this up to newyams, depending on what he is doing he can change this one too
  10. 03:57:473 - Mind if i suggest to make this part less dense? It's really calm and only vocals are here. Also you map all the vocals but not this 04:06:644 - ? I'm disappointed friend. Those drums need to be mapped. also staying as it is, i think it's not that dense tbh... also gonna leave out those drums, since i'm only starting the more densely mapped part which incorporates the drums at 04:07:421 (155) -
That's all from me, a really nice map. Good luck!
thx for modding :D
Topic Starter
newyams99

Lost The Lights wrote:

Hi, late but better late than never... just kill me

d=don
k=kat
D=Big Don
K=Big Kat
r=remove
(?)=Suggestion

[Chromoyams' Inner Oni]


  1. newyams99
  2. 00:58:095 - Would suggest you to change this to k. Fits vocal better. Changed in Chromoxx's part too.
  3. 01:51:255 - Change to k, if you listen carefully you'll know why. Sure.
  4. 01:54:675 - This pattern sounds better as dkddkkd imo, try it. Was thinking about that when I was listening to it, changed.
  5. 02:43:639 - 02:43:794 - k and d respectively, they play and follow better the vocal. I'd prefer not to miss the drum sound.
That's all from me, a really nice map. Good luck!
Thanks for the mod, and sorry for the late response :/
Surono
Hi naxyimyam and google chrome, just idk here

02:15:659 (206,207,208,209,210,211,212) - dkddkkk. , `L fit ples son dem ( the current is over emphasize on 02:15:659 (206,207,208,209) - these :U ), 02:18:147 (218,219,220,221,222,223,224) - brah the mirror variation guud :U

03:18:846 (649,650) - swap, 03:19:312 - kat. ez

03:21:022 (675,676) - ^ sweg, but 03:21:955 (687,688) - these you can keep bcus this sound interesting with current color

okey just it? consider that bcus them is really similar repeating. I sure differ just 03:21:955 (687,688) -these bcus guitar more increasing

,. cy ,

edit: fuq yeee lats kiai with fast SV. rip HR
Stefan
´_>´)

[newyams]
00:19:701 (100) - it wouldn't fit to the pattern to make 00:19:545 (99) - as big note, obviously. Instead, I find that (100) works somewhat like an "end" and may be emphasized as big note.
01:28:250 - 02:00:426 - It's a pity you apparently don't want to use SV decreases (?) I can't really tell but I guess since it's an atmospheric addition to the calm nature of this part.
04:18:613 - the SV usage here is really uncomfortable. While I agree with the use of them to emphasize the impact the last refrain has, I disagree that 1.20x is a good choice. For a 193 BPM track it doesn't work so natural like for lower BPMs. instead of 0.05x jumps, do 0.04 jumps. Means 04:18:613 - as 1.04x, 04:18:924 - as 1.08x and so on.

[Chromoxx]
01:14:105 (419,420,421,422,423) - Aus persönlicher Hinsicht fände ich d kkddk besser; die einzelne d note ist eher die Vorbereitung als Teil der Stimme. Während kkddk perfekt mit der Stimme anfängt und folgt.
03:17:680 - 03:22:343 - Uh.. Ich sehe da ehrlich gesagt nicht, wonach du da gehst. 03:22:654 - 03:24:830 - funktioniert wunderbar, wohlmöglich weil der Rhythmus konsistent ist und funktioniert einigermaßen gut mit der Musik hier. Du könntest bei den beiden vorherigen Streams ebenfalls etwas "Konsistenteres" nehmen. Wie wäre es für den ersten Stream kkddkdk..., hab mir das mal angehört und fühlt sich richtig gut an. :D

Except of the last points I am pretty satisfied with the map, collab itself works well. :ok_hand:
Topic Starter
newyams99

Stefan wrote:

´_>´)

[newyams]
00:19:701 (100) - it wouldn't fit to the pattern to make 00:19:545 (99) - as big note, obviously. Instead, I find that (100) works somewhat like an "end" and may be emphasized as big note. I added a hit at 00:19:856 - if that makes it any better.
01:28:250 - 02:00:426 - It's a pity you apparently don't want to use SV decreases (?) I can't really tell but I guess since it's an atmospheric addition to the calm nature of this part. Made some SV changes :D
04:18:613 - the SV usage here is really uncomfortable. While I agree with the use of them to emphasize the impact the last refrain has, I disagree that 1.20x is a good choice. For a 193 BPM track it doesn't work so natural like for lower BPMs. instead of 0.05x jumps, do 0.04 jumps. Means 04:18:613 - as 1.04x, 04:18:924 - as 1.08x and so on. Sure thing.

Except of the last points I am pretty satisfied with the map, collab itself works well. :ok_hand:
Thanks for the mod :D 8-)
Ozu
Topic Starter
newyams99

404 AccNotFound wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7579053
FC !!! xD
tfw when I still can't FC lol
Sotarks
u want me to take this diff to my set ?
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/668202
Chromoxx
@surono fixed the first one, but didn't change the streams since they play better as they are atm imo

@stefan fixed the first one, but not changing the streams. the last one has a lot stronger consistent guitar which is why i made the stream repetitive in a way to make it stand out more

applying these changes to sotarks' set, since the diff is now moved
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