Okay it seems that you have modded my map while not being updated so I'll put "U" for every mod that is already fixed
Loony wrote:
Hello, from your modding queue, but I decided to do M4M.
Sorry for such a late reply but I've just been busy ;-;[FoREVer]
Generally, this map has a potential. Just develop it and make it better and better and you'll get the approval for sure Thank you!
- Generally most of problems I found are only estethical. I don't want to ruin your mapstyle, but I think decent quality is smth we all need
- I would change the white combo colour because it's kinda blinding the player I'll keep it atleast for now
- 00:23:555 (3,4) - You could make this pattern better. Just catch the moment when the Approach Circle is precisely matching with a slider border and then play with slider points to make pattern perfect. Fixed something
- 00:23:797 (4,1) - Also a blanket could be fixed. I reccomend you to ctrl + g this 00:23:797 (4) and then move 00:27:426 (1) back in time to see the approach circle of a previous slider. Then the blanket will be easy to fix. ^
- 00:28:394 (3,4) - The same as the previous exception, fix in need ^
- 00:31:645 (5,7) - Is it a blanket or what? If so, you should fix it Not an intentional "blanketing", took curve off slider
- 00:36:646 (6,8,6) - It's overlapping with these two notes so maybe change the slider a little bit or move the notes to stack them? Made them overlap symmetrically
- 00:41:926 (5,6,7) - I would make here a triangle, but not parallel to the bottom of the screen. I would just move this note 00:42:886 (7) to x:180 y:272 Sure
- 00:43:606 (2) - Imo patterns parallel to the borders of the screen don't look nice. Maybe just rotate it a little bit? For variety y'know Umm.. I don't get this? Which notes are out of borders?
- 00:44:326 (3,4,5,6) - Make it a beautiful parallelogram. I mean the distance between 3rd and 4th notes is not consistant with the distance between 5th and 6th notes. So for example better move 00:44:566 (4) to x:432 y:48 Fixed, but little different
- 00:52:006 (1,3) - Ugly overlapp. Better fix it somehow in your way U
- 00:58:486 (4,5) - ^ U
- 01:04:246 (1,2) - It just doesn't look right. I mean, this distance-snap exception and the whole pattern feels a little to simple, predictible and tbh amateur. Maybe just change the 2nd slider and play with it a little? Fixed
- 01:10:390 (1) - Ctrl + H and rotate it using Ctrl + Shift + R . Imo it will look better. Maybe also make a blanket with 01:09:452 (3,1) ? This is better imo
- 01:11:796 (1,2) - These sliders also look a little bit amateur. I reccomend you to play more with both curving and making it straightly, sharply curved. Made a little curve
- 01:22:812 (9,1) - Fix this blanket pls U
- 01:35:234 (3) - Curve this straight part of the slider, just to make it look prettier. Yup
- 01:35:234 (3,4,1) - I think a triangle would be really good here. Ummm then stream would be too close to 1
- 01:46:952 (2,4) - Blanket again. For estetical reasons. U
- 01:52:812 (5,7) - Overlap again U
- 01:56:327 (6) - I believe you can make this S-curved slider much better and more professional U
- 02:09:921 (1,3) - I don't reccomend you to make any kind of slider patterns directly parallel to the borders of the screen. It's just predictible and imo it doesn't look well. You could fix it then, f.e. only by moving a little end of the 1st slider to make it non-parallel to the border of the screen. I didn't really get this..
- 02:12:968 (4,2) - Small, but ugly overlap. Reccomend to fix Made little space between notes
- 02:19:296 (1) - It looks a lot better than a previous S-Shaped slider, but it can be also touched up a little. Did something
- 02:21:171 (1) - A bit ugly. You could change the last slider point to a white one, to make it gently curved, not sharply. Imo it will look better then True
- 02:30:546 (1,4) - Sliders that look the same? It doesn't look good I think. Play with it little more and see what you can make better. okay
- 02:38:046 (1,4) - ^ Minor changes to other one
- 02:46:952 (1,2,3,4,1) - Parallel pattern again. I really reccomend you to avoid them, they are making your map looking old, y'know. What are you driving behind here?
- 02:55:155 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - It looks really nice! But if you just rotate it a bit or make it curved imo it will look a lot better! Thanks! but I'll keep this for now
- 03:07:811 (5,2) - Overlap again, just fix it U
- 03:23:280 (3) - I think you know what to do with it Yup
- 03:46:014 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
- 03:50:467 (6,7,8,9) - Maybe a part of a pentagram? Just an estethical fix Not a bad idea
- 03:51:405 (1) - ^^^^
- 03:53:280 (9,1) - Maybe a blanket? Think about it, it will look better imo. Just a suggestion though Yup
- 03:54:217 (2,3) - ^ I'll keep this for now
- 04:13:202 (3) - Good job! I can't say anything wrong about it. Maybe just move the end slider point to the left to make it perfect Sure
- 04:21:405 (1,6,7,1) - You know what to do with them. Just to make it looking more proffesional Sure
- 05:04:061 (4) - Make it milder, it's too curved I guess. Just for estethical reasons Fixed
Good luck with it then!