shabi-rizqy
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[Zan's 5K Normal]
00:01:354 (1354|1) - move it to 3rd for pitch (according to 00:04:097 (4097|2) - )
00:08:897 (8897|1) - why not move to 3rd for balanced
00:13:011 (13011|1) - maybe move this to another collumn due to pitch: 00:12:497 (12497|1) -
00:34:097 - add a note here for snare so does 00:34:782 -
00:34:440 (34440|3,34782|1) - add kick for them
00:59:811 (59811|2) - add crash here
01:01:182 (61182|2) - this too
01:02:554 (62554|0,63925|4) -
01:04:440 (64440|1,65811|2) - they're same pitch together, maybe let 01:04:440 (64440|1) - to 3rd column
01:08:040 (68040|4) - add crash
01:09:411 (69411|1) - add crash
01:09:411 (69411|4,69754|0,70097|3,70440|1,71125|0,71468|3,71811|2,71982|3) - add kick and 01:10:782 (70782|4) - add crash
01:11:982 (71982|3) - move to 5th for balance but also for pitch
01:15:240 (75240|3,75582|1,75925|3,76954|4,77297|1,77640|3,77982|1,78325|3,78668|1,79697|3,80040|1,80382|2,80725|0,81068|2,81411|4,82440|3,82782|1,83125|4,83468|1,83811|3) - add kick for them
[Zan's 5K Hard]
00:17:640 (17640|3,18325|1,19354|4,19697|2,20382|3,21068|2,22097|3,22440|4,22782|4,23125|3,23468|2,23811|1,24154|0,25182|1,25868|0) - add kick for them like you did for normal
00:29:982 - missed a note here for snare
00:32:725 - same here
00:33:754 (33754|4) - add crash here
00:34:097 (34097|4) - 00:34:782 (34782|0) - snare
01:01:697 (61697|4) - maybe move it to somewhere else than 5th, because pitch here is lower than 01:02:040 (62040|4) -
01:12:325 (72325|2) - to 4th and 01:12:497 (72497|1) - to 1st will show how snare work well
[Zan's 5K Insane]
00:10:954 (10954|3) - remove whistle
00:40:782 (40782|0) - two kickes
00:41:640 (41640|0) - move to 2rd for balance and pitch
00:47:468 (47468|4) - add crash here
great diff as always, no problems found
[7K Normal]
00:03:240 (3240|5) - move to 5th for pitch, it's different than 00:02:211 (2211|5) -
00:34:440 (34440|4) - add kick, 00:34:782 (34782|0) - snare
00:37:868 (37868|2,37868|0,38211|6,38211|4,38554|2,38554|0) - maybe rearrange them because on 00:36:840 (36840|6,36840|4,37525|6,37525|4) - are kick snare and for them is kick cymbal (maybe move some to 2 4 6)
00:53:468 (53468|2) - to 1st and 00:53:982 (53982|4) - to 4th, that could work this pitch flow well,but also, make it more balance too
00:52:954 - add a note here for cymbal? like you did for 00:58:440 -
00:59:811 - here too
01:01:182 -
01:02:382 (62382|1,62554|3) - switch them, the patterns follow that maybe give a better feeling: 01:01:525 (61525|1,61697|3) - and also 01:01:525 (61525|1,62382|1) - are different pitch
01:03:925 - add a note for cymbal on 1st
01:09:068 - and 01:09:240 - you can add note for them for the main melody
00:16:611 (16611|2,16611|6) - maybe just Ctrl + H this, it's a little weird for instrument if you still keep it here, i mean pitch, it's different than 00:15:754 (15754|6,15754|2,16097|6,16097|2,16440|2,16440|6) -
[7K Hard]
00:29:982 - you missed a note here for snare sound
00:32:725 - seem this too
00:34:097 (34097|6) - sound add snare here and remove this kick on 00:34:097 (34097|4) -
00:34:782 (34782|1) - same way to this too
00:50:897 (50897|6,50982|4,51240|6,51325|4) - maybe if you keep this snare 1/4 with the patterns you used on 00:50:211 (50211|6,50382|4,50554|6,50725|4) - is much more better imo, my suggestion: http://puu.sh/pnDIl/ed475d6b8e.png
00:57:411 (57411|1) - add kick here
01:07:868 - add a note here for kick sound
[7K Insane]
00:10:954 (10954|6) - remove whistle, sound random
00:11:725 (11725|3,11768|4,11811|3) - i never passed this with fc but for rhythm and flow itself, it seem fine already
00:26:811 (26811|3) - patterns maybe feel better if you move this to 5th http://puu.sh/pnDVf/831d7a102b.png / http://puu.sh/pnDW1/48651a3bd6.png / http://puu.sh/pnDWy/4d04fe520b.png
00:28:268 - add a note for cymbal, like you did for 00:17:297 -
00:37:011 (37011|5) - lost hihat
00:37:182 (37182|0) - remove this whistle
00:51:068 - and 00:51:411 - add a note on here for snare sound? because you used one note for main melody here already
01:07:525 (67525|1) - move to 6th feel better to me, also it have no reason to put on here and make a mini-jack, but 01:07:697 (67697|2,67868|2) - is can
01:09:411 (69411|2,69411|3) - two crashes
[Tags]
Remove " - " from Rabi-Ribi
because if you keep it, it's already in title name
Because remove it so ppl can type both Rabi or Ribi to sreach it more easier
Good map as always, i love it
take my bubble after you done applied, call me later then
good luck
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[Zan's 5K Normal]
00:01:354 (1354|1) - move it to 3rd for pitch (according to 00:04:097 (4097|2) - )
00:08:897 (8897|1) - why not move to 3rd for balanced
00:13:011 (13011|1) - maybe move this to another collumn due to pitch: 00:12:497 (12497|1) -
00:34:097 - add a note here for snare so does 00:34:782 -
00:34:440 (34440|3,34782|1) - add kick for them
00:59:811 (59811|2) - add crash here
01:01:182 (61182|2) - this too
01:02:554 (62554|0,63925|4) -
01:04:440 (64440|1,65811|2) - they're same pitch together, maybe let 01:04:440 (64440|1) - to 3rd column
01:08:040 (68040|4) - add crash
01:09:411 (69411|1) - add crash
01:09:411 (69411|4,69754|0,70097|3,70440|1,71125|0,71468|3,71811|2,71982|3) - add kick and 01:10:782 (70782|4) - add crash
01:11:982 (71982|3) - move to 5th for balance but also for pitch
01:15:240 (75240|3,75582|1,75925|3,76954|4,77297|1,77640|3,77982|1,78325|3,78668|1,79697|3,80040|1,80382|2,80725|0,81068|2,81411|4,82440|3,82782|1,83125|4,83468|1,83811|3) - add kick for them
[Zan's 5K Hard]
00:17:640 (17640|3,18325|1,19354|4,19697|2,20382|3,21068|2,22097|3,22440|4,22782|4,23125|3,23468|2,23811|1,24154|0,25182|1,25868|0) - add kick for them like you did for normal
00:29:982 - missed a note here for snare
00:32:725 - same here
00:33:754 (33754|4) - add crash here
00:34:097 (34097|4) - 00:34:782 (34782|0) - snare
01:01:697 (61697|4) - maybe move it to somewhere else than 5th, because pitch here is lower than 01:02:040 (62040|4) -
01:12:325 (72325|2) - to 4th and 01:12:497 (72497|1) - to 1st will show how snare work well
[Zan's 5K Insane]
00:10:954 (10954|3) - remove whistle
00:40:782 (40782|0) - two kickes
00:41:640 (41640|0) - move to 2rd for balance and pitch
00:47:468 (47468|4) - add crash here
great diff as always, no problems found
[7K Normal]
00:03:240 (3240|5) - move to 5th for pitch, it's different than 00:02:211 (2211|5) -
00:34:440 (34440|4) - add kick, 00:34:782 (34782|0) - snare
00:37:868 (37868|2,37868|0,38211|6,38211|4,38554|2,38554|0) - maybe rearrange them because on 00:36:840 (36840|6,36840|4,37525|6,37525|4) - are kick snare and for them is kick cymbal (maybe move some to 2 4 6)
00:53:468 (53468|2) - to 1st and 00:53:982 (53982|4) - to 4th, that could work this pitch flow well,but also, make it more balance too
00:52:954 - add a note here for cymbal? like you did for 00:58:440 -
00:59:811 - here too
01:01:182 -
01:02:382 (62382|1,62554|3) - switch them, the patterns follow that maybe give a better feeling: 01:01:525 (61525|1,61697|3) - and also 01:01:525 (61525|1,62382|1) - are different pitch
01:03:925 - add a note for cymbal on 1st
01:09:068 - and 01:09:240 - you can add note for them for the main melody
00:16:611 (16611|2,16611|6) - maybe just Ctrl + H this, it's a little weird for instrument if you still keep it here, i mean pitch, it's different than 00:15:754 (15754|6,15754|2,16097|6,16097|2,16440|2,16440|6) -
[7K Hard]
00:29:982 - you missed a note here for snare sound
00:32:725 - seem this too
00:34:097 (34097|6) - sound add snare here and remove this kick on 00:34:097 (34097|4) -
00:34:782 (34782|1) - same way to this too
00:50:897 (50897|6,50982|4,51240|6,51325|4) - maybe if you keep this snare 1/4 with the patterns you used on 00:50:211 (50211|6,50382|4,50554|6,50725|4) - is much more better imo, my suggestion: http://puu.sh/pnDIl/ed475d6b8e.png
00:57:411 (57411|1) - add kick here
01:07:868 - add a note here for kick sound
[7K Insane]
00:10:954 (10954|6) - remove whistle, sound random
00:11:725 (11725|3,11768|4,11811|3) - i never passed this with fc but for rhythm and flow itself, it seem fine already
00:26:811 (26811|3) - patterns maybe feel better if you move this to 5th http://puu.sh/pnDVf/831d7a102b.png / http://puu.sh/pnDW1/48651a3bd6.png / http://puu.sh/pnDWy/4d04fe520b.png
00:28:268 - add a note for cymbal, like you did for 00:17:297 -
00:37:011 (37011|5) - lost hihat
00:37:182 (37182|0) - remove this whistle
00:51:068 - and 00:51:411 - add a note on here for snare sound? because you used one note for main melody here already
01:07:525 (67525|1) - move to 6th feel better to me, also it have no reason to put on here and make a mini-jack, but 01:07:697 (67697|2,67868|2) - is can
01:09:411 (69411|2,69411|3) - two crashes
[Tags]
Remove " - " from Rabi-Ribi
because if you keep it, it's already in title name
Because remove it so ppl can type both Rabi or Ribi to sreach it more easier
Good map as always, i love it
take my bubble after you done applied, call me later then
good luck