Hi!
but nobody came
- 00:08:036 (6) - Nc here not 00:08:189 (1) -
- 00:09:107 (5,6,7) - overlap with 00:08:495 (2) -
- 00:12:781 (3,4,5,6,7) - Looks like a deformed star, CTRL SHIFT D and make a proper one
- 00:20:893 (1,2) - copy (1) and replace it with (2)
- 00:22:117 (1,3) - if this was a blanket you can do it better
- 00:23:495 (2,4) - overlap (4) on (2)
- You have no NC pattern it's just random nc's here and there, always NC on big white tick unless you have something else planned!
- 00:30:077 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:31:301 (1) - ^
- 00:32:525 (1) - ^
- 00:34:056 (1) - ^
- 00:34:974 (1) - ^
- 00:36:505 (1) - ^
- 00:39:872 (1) - ^
- 00:40:485 (5) - Add NC
- 00:41:097 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:42:321 (1) - ^
- 00:42:934 (6) - Add NC
- 00:43:087 (1) - Remove NC, Alright I'm sure you understand now so I wont tell write any more just make sure to always NC on big white tick you dont want inconsistant NC's
- 00:31:913 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'm really bothered about these jumps, they are close to being good but they aren't quite. Right now they just look like a random cluster of notes, try to put more thought into making good looking patterns, this applies for most patterns I wont point out all of them.
- 00:38:036 (6) - extend this to 00:38:495 -
- The rhythm you follow is also very questionable, I guess you were going for vocals but this whole map feels pretty grossly overmapped.
- Hitsounds feels very lacking but thats mostly due to that you mapped a mostly vocal map which is harder to hitsound good, but just a few random claps here and there doesnt sound good.
- 02:08:036 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part is mapped differently from the other ah,ah,ah,ah,ah parts why? try to be consistent
- I'm only going to mod this diff but same stuff I wrote here applies to that diff as well (at least most of it patterns looked a bit better there though) anyways cool song, good luck with your map!