Shiratoi wrote:

hi m4m from your queue

[Normal]
00:02:870 (3,4,1) - fix these blankets
00:03:644 (4,2) - you can overlap these
00:07:128 (1,2) - possible blanket
00:08:677 (5) - i would curve this slider just a tad bit for aesthetics
00:09:451 (6,7,1) - equal spacing
00:10:225 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:12:935 (1,2) - ^ & i would loosen up 1 a bit for a prettier blanket
00:14:483 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:20:677 (3,4) - ^
00:22:225 (1,2) - maybe ctrl+g? your choice. just to emphasize the big white tick
00:24:160 (3,4) - fix blanket or dont overlap these 2 00:23:773 (2,4) -
00:25:322 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:28:418 (1,2) - same thing as last time
00:31:128 (4) - tad bit higher for better blanket
00:31:515 (1,2) - again same thing
00:32:289 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:33:064 (4,5) - same thing
00:43:128 (3) - move to the right a bit
00:46:612 (7,8) - fix blanket
00:51:644 (3,4) - ^
01:00:160 (2,3) - ^
01:02:483 (5,1) - ^
01:05:580 - for this section, i see that you dont use the right side of the screen often? try to fix
01:17:193 (5,6,1,2,1) - these are too hard for normal imo. make some sliders or you can keep. your choice
01:24:160 (1,3) - you can overlap 3 with 1's slider end

[Hard]
00:05:580 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:03:644 (1,2) - fix overlap
00:16:031 (1) - i would change this to a slider & note
00:17:193 (4,1) - possible blanket
00:26:096 (3,4) - kind of ugly imo but you can keep
00:26:870 (1,2) - make similar
00:29:193 (3,4) - ^
00:32:289 (3,1) - possible blanket
00:32:870 (1) - delete nc
00:36:741 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:37:515 (1,2) - make similar
00:37:902 (2,3) - bad flow imo since the slider is pointing up
00:38:870 (5) - i would change this into a note and move the slider 00:39:064 - here then note here 00:39:644 -
00:47:386 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:49:902 (2,3) - ^
00:50:483 (3,1) - ^
00:50:483 (3,1) - spacing change?
00:51:644 (2,1,2) - stack miss
00:53:193 (2,4) - fix blanket
00:55:515 (4,1) - spacing change?
00:57:838 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:59:773 (3) - i would take out the repeat & put a note here 01:00:160 -
00:59:773 (3,4) - make similar
01:00:354 - note here
01:06:935 (1) - put a lil lower
01:07:128 (2,2,2) - make these similar ;(
01:06:935 (1,1) - put the first one under the second to line up
01:16:806 (2,3) - possible blanket
01:16:806 (2,2) - possible overlap

[Insane]
00:31:902 (1,2) - fix blanekt
00:33:451 (3,4) - ^
00:40:806 (2,3) - bad flow imo
00:49:612 (5,6,7,8,9) - move a lil to the left to line up with 00:49:322 (4) -
00:53:967 (3,1) - make similar
00:54:354 (1,2) - possible blanket
00:55:515 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:55:322 (3,3) - stack miss
01:00:741 (5,3) - possible overlap
pretty diff

gl~

Sonnyc wrote:

[Insane]
00:10:031 (2,3,4) - 00:36:354 (2,3,4) - Bad to read. (3,4) needs much more spacing before.
00:22:612 (1) - 00:27:644 (1) - 00:29:193 (1) - No need for nc. Try using a combo when a new stanza starts, instead of adding at random spots. Also aim for having an appropriate length of combo. Currently, several comboes feel too short.
00:25:902 (3) - Weird spacing.

I think the map isn't fine enough for proceeding further. Taking a look on several ranked beatmaps to get a better idea of patterning will help. Having more mapping experience will also benefit.

CookieKivi wrote:

Froм мy мoddιɴɢ qυeυe

αre yoυ ѕeαrcнιɴɢ αɴ eαѕy dιғғ?
ι coυld do тнαт.. ahh no sowy

normal

00:04:031 (1) - make this straight since you did it with 00:01:322 (3) - ok
00:11:773 (3) - maybe make it like this? http://puu.sh/pI37a.jpg i am lazy
00:22:612 (2) - could be straight after 00:22:225 (1) - ok
00:28:806 (2) - ^ ok

Kιмι o мαттα. Boĸυ wα мαттα.
Wαιтed ғor yoυ. I wαιтed ғor yoυ.

PlasticMemor wrote:

from my modding queue

[Hard]
unsnapped object owo yesyesyes
00:11:483 (1) - spinner recovery time fix this yesyesyes
00:37:515 (3) to 00:50:096 (1) have different spacings and the sliders are reversed such as 00:38:677 (3,4), have some flow by putting slider end towards the next circle or slider
01:27:354 (1) - spinner recovery time yesyesyes
i have no problem with rhythm, just spacing issues

[Insane]
00:37:515 (1,2,3,4) - this part is hard to read i kinda fixed it
00:21:451 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same here ahhh
01:02:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this jumping pattern is very hard to read
01:20:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - different spacing to the jump right after 01:22:612 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
01:25:515 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - different spacings and it it very hard to read since you change the jump pattern *slightly* which causes the player to think before that it would be the same and farther apart
spinner recovery time 01:27:354 (1) yesyesyes
i would definitely look at other mapsets to see how they map to spacing or just ask someone to teach you, it would really benefit

Frostt wrote:

Idk if I'm right but I think the offset is wrong

I found that 530 sounds better but idk if thats perfect or not

Basically the offset is too late, so play around with it

• 
  One thing i noticed right off the bat with the intro is that you can still add more to match the drum part instead of having it just be jumps. It's your map by all means but i'd recommend adding in the drum rolls.
  
  00:02:096 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - For this jump and the other pairs like it. I think you should have the jump get gradually less spacey, seeing as the guitar part gets quieter as well
  
  00:09:838 (1,2) - I would shorten 1 to the red tick and make 2 a stream, fits the full drum track
  
  00:36:935 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - You can fit in a stream here to match the drum track better.
  
  00:40:225 (7,8,1) - Don't hear what sound this triplet is supposed to be
  
  00:50:096 (1) - For this part you should make it something like...
  
  
  This

  
  
  01:21:644 (5,8) - Fix blanket here
  
  
  Hard
  
  This sounds off time, 00:11:580 (2,3,4) - if you listen you can clearly hear that 3 is off time. I would fix your offset before anything.
  
  00:25:128 (4,5,1) - Take out 5, no need for a triplet here
  
  00:43:515 (5) - Again, if you listen closely, this comes in later than the lyrics.

Agatsu wrote:

Frostt wrote:

Idk if I'm right but I think the offset is wrong

I found that 530 sounds better but idk if thats perfect or not

Basically the offset is too late, so play around with it

i actually dont know about the offset, Hazu- told me it was 548 so i'll just work with that.

[alt][F4] wrote:

Hi! from my mod queue. Also I like this artist and i like this song :3

kind of tired kind of lazy so I'm only doing the insane

Insane

1. first comment: I would like to mention that this is a very clean looking map and it does look like you spent a decent amount of time on it.And the cleanliness helps me find the type of things I want to find. so lets get into it
2. if you want to make sure all your notes are after the white tick and you want to keep your offest, change your red point offset to -1000 (yes that is a negative number and yes it is rankable) i will stay with 548 as my offset
3. also, either change the volume of the red point or add in a green point before your first note with a lower volume -- maybe like 25 or 30 that sounds too quiet for me
4. 00:02:096 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - lets talk about this. The first issue I have with this is its relevance to the music itself. I'm not talking about the rhythms here being bad(because they aren't) but the spacing doesn't really make sense. starting from 00:02:096 - this point in time to 00:03:451 - here, the music is gradually getting softer and softer as a whole. so what I suggest to better represent this is-> as the music gets softer, reduce the spacing. and in some cases you can reduce the rhythms too. fixed
5. the second issue I have with that is your system of using new combos 00:02:096 (1) - look at where this note is placed on the timeline -- a large white tick. For simpler songs(quite like this one) people use NC only for these large white ticks. 00:03:064 (1) - come to this note and you are not on a large white tick, in fact you are on a red tick(which is a little more strange than a regular white tick. so mappers like me will look at possible reasons as to why you may want to NC which include but are not limited to: change in music, down beat. since this really fits neither of them you should remove it. bn told me that i should nc when a new stanza starts and not a white tick
6. I would try and apply the previous two comments to all sections like this which I will try to list here --> 00:04:806 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:07:902 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - i'll fix the jump spacing reduction
7. I'm gonna skip ahead in time a bit 00:36:160 - all I can tell you for this is is the correct rhythm. with your current rhythm you place 3 notes in between two spots they should be at. I would suggest to changing to something like I showed you to better follow the song. fixed
8. 00:43:515 (1) - the issue with this is you miss the large white tick at 00:43:902 - basically you want to make something like the sound at that time clickable so it is more rewarding for the player. i like it like this
9. 00:50:096 - I don't remember this in the original xD ???
10. I would reduce the volume of 01:02:483 - as well because this is a quieter section than slowly increases in volume, you should probably slowly increase your volume as well well the guitar is playing and it's volume is rising
11. also yes I would recommend going back through and then re-doing your NC system. it seems really random as it is. so before you re do it make a rule for when you are going to NC such as "every large white tick" and then experienced mappers should tell you after that if there any exceptions that you should consider.
12. Finally I would like to claim I think your hitsounds make the intro sound like it is not in time. (because that's how it sounds) so I would make sure your hitsounds have no delay in them :/

[Goku] wrote:

Hello, from #modreqs :3

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Insane
-Isn't AR 9 way better? Since the patterns you've chosen are kinda hard to read, also I feel more comfortable playing it AR9 [color=#FF0000it's easier to read with the patterns i put in ][/color]
-00:40:291 (6) - isn't better to delete this note? Using like you did here: 00:45:227 (6,1) - and here: 00:45:808 (2,3) i wouldn't want a difficulty with barely any triples
-01:13:291 (1,2,3,4) - for me this stream doesn't make sense, if you listen to it at 25% speed you will only hear two beats, at the first note and at the third, if you listen to it carefully you will notice that there are a triple (starts at 01:13:678) and a four notes stream/stack (starts at 01:14:356). hmm.. idk, but i'll definetly think about it
-I don't see any other problems in this diff, it is so fun to play and is aesthetically so beautiful.
-Also i love playing this map, good job

Hard
-Put AR 8, since AR 8.3 a bit hard for new players to play, and i don't think is necessary AR 8.3, doesn't change so much for DT or for experienced players.
-I don't know how to map/mod normal/easy/hard diffs, so that's it. sure
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Good luck

kelvinli wrote:

This is a random mod because I would like to know what maps in 2016 look like.

[General]
I am not quite familiar with the ranking criteria now, but anyway, this song has a long version
So I suspect you have to put (TV Size) in the title? I could not find a metadata source for "(TV Size)" so I had to remove it :c

[Insane]
A play with low accuracy
00:23:743 (1) - I found this hard to read--- also using the same slider at the same spot feels repetitive. You might want to move it down a bit, for example (294,253) i prefer my current pattern
00:28:195 (1,2) - exchange the location of NC (so the combo starts on a white tick) i don't like follow point to the nc
00:32:840 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:34:388 (1,2) - ^ But I see why you would apply a NC there-- the pattern does look better this i what i mean :3
00:47:937 (2) - *slightly* inconsistent spacing that is visible from naked eye fixed
00:49:291 (6) - flow inconsistent with the following stream-- try this?fixed
01:13:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - I agree with the modder above-- You can choose whether or not to map the streams after 01:13:678 but removing 01:13:388 (2,4) - is highly recommended. This applies to the hard diff as well. hmm..

[Hitsound suggestions(This could be applied to all diffs)]
00:12:517 (4) - add a soft whistle here? sure
01:02:453 (1) - starting from here there is an audible beat every white tick. To emphasize it, what you can do is to adapt the normal-soft-normal-soft hitsounding technique, that is: normal sampleset on white ticks, soft sampleset on red ticks.
Also the intensity of those beats increases over time. You may want to consider gradually turning up the volume of the notes using green lines(e.g. 40%-->45%-->50%, etc) I don't agree or disagree..

[Hard]
00:17:937 (2) - Try flipping the shape vertically? This can make a difference from the previous and the upcoming slider. sure
I suggest you check all the spacing between notes to make them consistent. Of course you could violate this to make some patterns and that's fine. But often the spacing varies from 1.44-1.58x, sometimes the variations are large enough to be spotted by naked eye. To name a few,
00:01:898 (5,1,2) -
00:15:227 (3,4,1) -
00:20:646 (1,2,3) -
00:30:517 (2,3) - make it 2.00x
00:33:807 (3,4,1) -
The list goes on. k

[Normal]
00:03:634 (4,1) - exchange the position of NC (so they are always on a white tick) yee
00:06:721 (6,1) - ^ hai
00:09:808 (7,1) - ^ especially when there is a change in tempo (155.5BPM to 155BPM) gasdgas
00:19:872 (2,4) - You might want to make the ends of these sliders to be at the exactly same spot good, ds doesn't interfere either :3
00:24:904 (4) - this note appears before 00:23:743 (2) disappears and they overlap. Maybe move to (277,195)? did something similiar
00:53:162 (1) - oh yes I like this so much tytytytytytytyty

Overall the map plays smooth and I would absolutely want to see it ranked.
Good luck! :3

1. don't you want to use a related to anime diff name instead of "insane"? ;w; insane looks boring
2. i think ar 8.7 feels like too much for this type of diff, i'd just go with ar 8.5 (personal opinion tho)
   00:18:904 (1,2) - swap nc? the chord change happens on 00:19:098 - if you listen closely
   same stuff happens on

   00:22:001 (1,2) -
   00:25:098 (1,2) -
   00:28:195 (1,2) -
   00:32:840 (1,2) -
   00:34:388 (1,2) -
   etccc
3. 00:26:646 (7,1) - this stack feels really awkward, it isn't intuitive, the strong beat is on 00:26:840 (1) - so i think you should rather use more spacing instead of stacking these notes (like you did in previous patterns)
4. 00:37:678 (1,2) - i was expecting a slider here instead of those two circles, i think it represent the voice in a better way
5. 00:50:066 - from this point you could have changed the sampleset to the soft one, since the music is really calm, normal sampleset doesn't make much sense since there aren't drums
6. 01:02:453 - this part sounds really odd in my view, you're currently using a normal-hitwhistle which sounds exactly the same as normal-hitnormal s:
7. 01:14:356 - missing note here? (same here 01:14:549 - and 01:14:743 - , there's still 1/4 sounds)
8. 01:27:420 (1) - i think the normal sampleset doesn't fit for the spinner, i'd like to change it to soft
9. ok ok

Kagetsu wrote:

queue

[Insane]

1. don't you want to use a related to anime diff name instead of "insane"? ;w; insane looks boring REVIVAL
2. i think ar 8.7 feels like too much for this type of diff, i'd just go with ar 8.5 (personal opinion tho) i agree
   00:18:904 (1,2) - swap nc? the chord change happens on 00:19:098 - if you listen closely
   same stuff happens on

   00:22:001 (1,2) - now that you mention it..
   00:25:098 (1,2) - ^
   00:28:195 (1,2) - ^
   00:32:840 (1,2) - ^
   00:34:388 (1,2) - ^
   etccc
3. 00:26:646 (7,1) - this stack feels really awkward, it isn't intuitive, the strong beat is on 00:26:840 (1) - so i think you should rather use more spacing instead of stacking these notes (like you did in previous patterns) sure, why not
4. 00:37:678 (1,2) - i was expecting a slider here instead of those two circles, i think it represent the voice in a better way k
5. 00:50:066 - from this point you could have changed the sampleset to the soft one, since the music is really calm, normal sampleset doesn't make much sense since there aren't drums k
6. 01:02:453 - this part sounds really odd in my view, you're currently using a normal-hitwhistle which sounds exactly the same as normal-hitnormal s: i dont know what hitsound to use :c
7. 01:14:356 - missing note here? (same here 01:14:549 - and 01:14:743 - , there's still 1/4 sounds) i like it more in it's current position
8. 01:27:420 (1) - i think the normal sampleset doesn't fit for the spinner, i'd like to change it to soft k
9. ok ok

[]

uhh... i think this map could get ranked, the only thing that bugged me alot was the hitsounding around this section 01:02:453 - , i believe you can do a better work

good luck :')

1. Please check the alacat mapset of this song and replace the current offset and song for make it rankable.

captainlatias wrote:

Oy, the remap of insane doesn't look so good, so let me see what can be different

Just saying, the bpm for you map is "155.5", and for all the ranked versions its "155". You don't have to change it, just pointing it out

Insane

00:02:091(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) this part you heavily remapped, which is no problem, but for one thing. It doesn't work. I like your old map before the remap and this just feels so overmapped with the jumps. I'll attach an image of the previous map part of this and hope you'll change it i did something similiar

http://i.imgur.com/l0JPaWg.png

00:07:709 this part is also one of the parts havily overmapped and suffers from the same point as the last time. I'll attach an image of the previous map part of this and hope you'll change it ^

http://i.imgur.com/70rEy3F.png

00:09:808(1,2,3,4) also overmapped, remove 2 extend slider 1 to where 2 was and it would be fine fiixizief

01:25:872(2) if your going to do hitsounds for the last jumps, pls do it with 2 as well as it starts the chain of jumps and is the first circle welll.. i did put nc on 01:26:453 (1) - to indicate the hitsounds were there

Your old insane

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188,236,14483,2,0,P|136:252|100:228,1,70
256,136,14870,2,0,P|264:92|308:68,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,244,15257,2,0,P|388:248|420:288,1,70
256,264,15644,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,136,15838,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,16031,2,0,L|354:152,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,64,16612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,132,16806,2,0,P|88:172|96:224,1,70
176,192,17193,5,8,0:0:0:0:
196,64,17386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,132,17580,2,0,L|88:228,1,70
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76,104,18354,2,0,L|101:256,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,72,18935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,72,19128,2,0,L|256:64,1,70
324,124,19515,2,0,L|416:132,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,232,19902,6,0,P|416:276|376:308,1,70
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244,164,20483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,164,20677,6,0,L|168:180,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,104,21257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,21451,2,0,B|164:224|164:224|140:248|140:248|124:312,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,104,22031,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,104,22225,2,0,P|76:72|32:64,1,70
152,192,22612,6,0,P|208:224|240:216,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,140,22999,2,0,B|332:132|332:132|212:108,1,140
152,40,23580,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,40,23773,2,0,P|196:48|232:32,1,70
292,140,24160,2,0,P|356:128|388:144,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,40,24547,2,0,L|192:188,1,140
292,140,25128,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,140,25322,2,0,L|316:44,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,236,25902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,252,26096,2,0,B|128:236|128:236|100:212|100:212|32:192,1,140
168,152,26677,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,26870,2,0,P|172:88|192:56,1,70
270,216,27257,2,0,P|270:260|258:300,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,27644,6,0,P|260:184|268:244,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,136,28225,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,136,28418,2,0,L|88:228,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,28999,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,29193,2,0,P|264:136|268:132,1,70
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404,240,29967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,332,30160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,248,30354,6,0,P|252:240|216:252,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,332,30741,2,0,P|440:344|468:328,1,70
404,240,31128,5,8,0:0:0:0:
304,252,31322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,252,31515,2,0,P|256:248|216:216,1,70
260,88,31902,6,0,P|312:104|340:136,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,256,32289,2,0,P|292:180|232:160,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,136,32870,5,0,0:0:0:0:
127,136,33064,2,0,L|139:52,1,70
176,216,33451,2,0,L|168:308,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,156,33838,2,0,P|204:120|112:156,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,216,34418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,216,34612,6,0,L|168:308,1,70
192,368,34999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,352,35193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,308,35386,6,0,P|284:276|284:220,1,70
200,156,35773,2,8,P|212:100|236:72,1,70
336,48,36160,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,48,36354,2,8,L|240:76,1,70
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200,156,36935,2,8,L|196:244,1,70
224,256,37225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,284,37322,2,8,P|336:300|364:288,1,70
440,248,37709,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,88,37902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,300,38096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,136,38289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,160,38483,6,0,P|364:172|320:160,1,70
296,52,38870,2,0,P|240:40|204:60,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,84,39257,5,0,0:0:0:0:
8,176,39451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,39644,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,260,39838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,88,40031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,196,40225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,56,40418,6,0,B|244:52,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,88,40806,2,0,P|372:144|276:136,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,224,41386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,41580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,41967,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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416,84,42354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,42547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,176,42741,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,132,42935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,43128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,224,43322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,48,43515,5,8,0:0:0:0:
110,76,43612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,115,43709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,159,43806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,204,43902,2,8,P|112:260|104:288,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,144,44289,5,8,0:0:0:0:
115,306,44483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,120,44677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,44870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,180,45064,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,216,45257,5,0,0:0:0:0:
408,216,45451,2,0,P|420:144|416:120,1,70
296,180,45838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,184,46031,2,0,P|288:236|296:276,1,70
244,80,46418,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,80,46612,2,0,P|176:64|152:72,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,112,46999,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,113,47193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,208,47386,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,51,47580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,288,47773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,92,47967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,184,48160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,184,48354,2,0,P|96:196|120:184,1,70
256,216,48741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,124,48935,5,8,0:0:0:0:
304,152,49031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,184,49128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,284,49322,2,0,P|404:224|396:188,1,70
408,172,49612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,128,49709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,96,49806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,72,49902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,60,49999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,60,50096,6,0,P|232:104|232:176,1,140
304,256,50677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,171,50870,2,0,P|190:135|98:155,1,140
160,208,51451,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,51644,2,0,L|152:288,2,70
272,256,52225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,184,52418,2,0,B|356:160|356:144|372:116|372:116|352:100|336:84|340:44,1,140
420,52,52999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,132,53193,6,0,L|180:136,2,70
408,176,53773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,276,53967,2,0,B|311:302|319:342|331:342|327:342,1,70
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136,200,54741,2,0,L|56:220,2,70
192,144,55322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,55515,2,0,P|316:64|372:96,1,140
312,156,56096,5,0,0:0:0:0:
235,230,56289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,56483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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116,200,57064,2,0,P|157:239|245:223,1,140
352,208,57644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,208,58225,2,0,P|408:192|436:208,1,70
328,292,58612,2,0,P|276:268|280:172,1,140
168,260,59193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,260,59386,6,0,B|128:248|128:248|100:224,2,70
188,176,59967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,112,60160,2,0,P|268:160|260:200,1,70
356,120,60547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,176,60741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,60935,6,0,P|104:160|120:224,1,105.000004005432
216,256,61515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,203,61709,2,0,L|215:167,1,105.000004005432
223,169,62289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,80,62483,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,88,62677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,62870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,120,63064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,232,63257,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,264,63451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,152,63644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,63838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,308,64031,1,2,0:0:0:0:
261,160,64225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,312,64418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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0,136,64999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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184,248,66741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,64,66935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,136,67128,6,0,P|344:156|388:144,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,160,68870,2,0,L|348:72,1,70
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319,243,70225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,160,70418,6,0,L|428:244,1,70
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184,232,71193,2,0,L|92:256,1,70
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272,104,71967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,184,72160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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300,240,73418,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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200,216,73709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,148,73902,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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280,88,74870,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,75064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
365,248,75257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,88,75451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,75644,6,0,P|195:241|159:241,1,70
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288,280,76418,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,88,76612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,220,76806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,196,76999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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300,256,77386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,68,77580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,200,77773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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408,292,78741,2,0,L|312:256,1,70
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376,80,79322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,263,79515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,80,79709,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,164,79902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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272,80,80483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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406,198,80870,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,241,80967,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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168,88,81451,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,204,81644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,81838,6,0,P|112:104|84:96,1,70
280,40,82225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,204,82418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,212,84741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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92,64,85515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,148,85709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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80,164,86870,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,248,87064,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,87451,12,0,88999,0:0:0:0:

Something I noticed while looking over hard

01:27:227 try to put a "special" hitsound on this last note to make it feel rewarding. Doesn't have to be something out of the normal, but something diffrent than the hitsound you've been using the entire mapset eh.

Hope it helps

Xayler wrote:

Heya, NM from my queue. o/
I'll mod Hard as requested.

General
00:09:808 - just curious why do you have a red line there as nothing changes with this change in terms of offset and BPM
Is BG with intended sizes? Resize it to 1366x768 or find a different image I guess

Hard
00:10:001 (2) - repeat slider fits better here I think fixed
00:12:517 (5) - this slider would play better as 2 circles, you can put the 2nd circle on top of 00:12:904 (1) - fixed
00:23:743 (1,2) - this is with a bad flow, maybe Ctrl+H 00:24:130 (2) - this? yes
00:41:356 (3,4) - maybe space (4) a bit higher? I find it with a good flow this way gasd
00:43:485 (1,3) - I would blanket (3) with (1) instead, or Ctrl+H 00:44:646 (3) - i ctrl + h
00:45:420 (1) - shorten this slider to red tick and add a circle ok
00:54:324 (1,2) - maybe something like this instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5849594 fdsafizxed
01:00:904 (1) - this is very weirdly stacked with the previous slider meh
01:06:904 - add a circle here sure
01:06:711 (4,1) - the spacing is can be bad to play I think, fits well, but with a bad flow fixde
01:19:872 (3) - Ctrl+H seems to be better i prefer my current pattern sry
01:20:840 (5,1) - space (1) further away from (5) k
01:26:840 (4) - would be cool if you make this slider as a 2 circles, so the ending is like a challenge ok
01:27:420 (1) - why don't you start the spinner from 01:27:324 - instead? ill do this for all diffs

Alrighty, that's all, good luck with the set!

1. Enable Widescreen Support because you have video on your map
2. Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768:
   Normal: 684101.jpg (1366x888)
   Hard: 684101.jpg (1366x888)
   Insane: 684101.jpg (1366x888)

Rizen wrote:

[General]

1. Timing is kinda off, it's just a single uninherited timing point of 155bpm at offset 538. Look at alacat's mapset and you can see that it's only one timing point. You will have to resnap timing points and objects after this change though. Also, the mod is based on old timings so apply the mod first before changing the time fixed
2. The current background's dimensions is 1181 x 768, which does not fit ratios 4:3 or 16:9. This would cause letterboxing. I have made two backgrounds you may choose from, a 4:3 version and a 16:9 version. 16:9 ratio or 4:3 ratio used the 16:9

[Normal]

Placement/Rhythm

1. 00:07:879 (3,4,1) - straighten this pattern out? (kinda wonky atm) fixed
2. 00:11:743 (2,3) - I would make these two sliders parallel for neatness fixed
3. 00:23:356 (4,5,1) - same thing about straightening it up fixed
4. 00:38:646 (3,1) - inconsistent spacing oops
5. 00:43:872 (1,1) - not a very good idea to place objects underneath the slider like this as it reduces the amount of time the player has to react to the object. Could rearrange like this but that would mean moving upcoming patterns as well fixed
6. 00:53:162 (1,2,1) - parallel pleaseee fixed
7. 01:25:678 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - probably too difficult for a normal. Can simplify it down to something like this fixed
8. The last third of this diff is a lot neater than the rest of the diff and it kinda sticks out like a sore thumb... just a personal opinion

[Hard]

Placement/Rhythm

1. 00:10:001 (2) - I would make this a circle then 1/2 slider instead. This is because 00:10:195 - should really be clickable due to the drums and guitar at this point fixed
2. 00:14:259 (4) - Consider moving this on top of the head of slider 00:14:453 (1) - then make a nice triangle pattern. creates a continuation of pattern choice seen at 00:12:711 (6,1) - . Also because I find the current cursor movement kinda sharp/awkward. pretty triangle fixed
3. 00:19:872 (3) - curve this the otherway? Would make it much more comfortable to hit after slider 2 (smooth curve) smooth curve. Fine on the insane diff, but hard should be a tad more player friendly fixed
4. 00:23:743 (1,2) - Same thing I mentioned before, kinda awkward coming off slider 1. refer to this. The current (red) after slider 1 creates an anti-clockwise movement then into a clockwise movement. By Flipping slider 2 (with ctrl+h) then repositioning, you can create a continuous anti-clockwise movement (blue) fixed
5. 00:25:678 (2,3) - Make these parallel for neatness? fixed
6. 00:27:227 (2) - ctrl+g for continuation of opposing slider patterns as shown at 00:22:195 (1,2) - , 00:16:775 (3,4) - fixed
7. 00:34:582 (1,3) - consider copying slider 1 and replacing slider 3 with the copy as they are not the same (looks kinda messy) fixed
8. 00:37:678 (1,2) - I would ctrl+g the rhythm as the red tick the current slider sits on has nothing in the music to justify a clickable object at that time while the white tick the slider tail currently sits on does (drums) fixed
9. 00:43:485 (1) - maybe a 1/2 slider then 1/1 slider? The current downbeat (large tick) should really be clickable since it's noticeably audible fixed
10. 00:54:324 (2,1) - again not parallel >_< fixed
11. 01:02:453 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - This part in my opinion should be much more intense than 00:56:259 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - as it is a build up to a more intense part of the music. Although this is just my opinion if it's a build up to the next section then i think it should have a calmer rhythm then that section
12. 01:21:033 (1,2,3) - I would ctrl+g this rhythm as the white ticks (such as the one at 01:21:420- ) should be clickable from the guitar. fixed

[Insane]

Placement/Rhythm

1. 00:01:319 (3) - Would make this two circles instead to follow the rhythm pattern of slider slider circle circle slider you have at this section i.e. 00:04:020 (2,3,4,5,1) - , 00:07:107 (2,3,4,5,1) - fixed
2. 00:24:517 (3,4,5,6) - following the patterns at 00:19:872 (4,5,6) - and 00:21:420 (3,4,5,6) - , the spacing between 3,4 should be smaller than between 5,6 for continuation sake. another example is seen at 00:27:614 (3,4,5,6) - on these patterns, i want to make guitar part with bigger ds since the guitar is kinda ouder than the drums
3. 00:30:711 (3) - I would copy 00:29:937 (1) - and remake the slider to make it neater
4. 00:34:388 (6) - the only time u stack on top of a slider head for this pattern, I suggest moving it to somewhere like the slider head of 00:33:033 (1) - instead.
5. 01:13:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I highly recommend listening to this part of the music and remapping the rhythm, the drums are on different ticks than the ones mapped fixed

Good luck!

Rizen wrote:

can you please answer the two points in 'general' please, those are probably the most important points of the mod in terms of rankability of the mapset (especially the timing) >_<

1. Unused files:
   
   1. Thumbs.db

1. 01:04:796 (3,1) - DS
2. 00:07:118 (2) - There's no need to make a rhythm denser here, a 1/1 slider would work fine.
3. 00:07:892 (3,4,1) - If you're trying to make this variable from 00:02:086 (1,2,2) - 00:04:796 (3,1) then I would say this one doesn't play really well with 3 clickable objects in a row, I suggest using the same rhythm as those two earlier or coming up with a simpler rhythm.
4. 00:23:376 (4,5,1) - Same reasoning as above, there's a few more of this and you should nerf them with simpler rhythms to make this diff easier considering that you don't have Easy in this set.
5. 00:34:602 (1) - A circle plays better here, since you seem to focus mainly on vocals earlier and it's not necessary for 00:34:796 to be mapped cuz vocal isn't there.
6. 00:40:796 (1,2) - This rhythm instead? It's more simple for vocal but if you want to make 00:41:183 clickable then up to you.
7. 00:46:989 - Generally a downbeat should be clickable as it gives a stronger impact than other white ticks.
8. 01:02:473 - Starting from this part, I expect more variable rhythms than this, there are lots of 1/1 sliders which can be bland/boring in gameplay, try spicing things up by either add more 1/2 rhythms or change some of the sliders to circles, you have to make that part more interesting to play.

1. 00:29:957 (1,2) - Personally I prefer the rhythm you did on 00:23:763 (1,2) because vocal is clickable on that one, it feels off when you made 00:30:538 (2) clickable while most of the objects around there are clickable on vocals.
2. 01:04:021 (1,2) - The spacing is pretty much misleading, visually the way it spaced is the same as 01:02:860 (2,3) . And tbh I would recommend using a 1/1 rhythm on 01:04:021 (1,2,3,4) cuz vocal started hyping up at 01:05:570 so if you start using denser rhythm there it will fit better in terms of intensity in gameplay.
3. 01:26:860 (4,5,1) - Would use the same/bigger spacing than 01:25:699 (1,2,3) for a better impact at the end.

1. 00:02:473 - Eh there's a strong guitar here I was expecting a larger spacing on 00:02:279 (2,3) .
2. 00:18:344 (3,4) - Should use a smaller spacing here to make 00:18:925 (6,1) more stand out for a proper emphasis. Moving 00:18:537 (4) up a bit would be nice.
3. 00:24:537 (3,4) - Same reasoning as above, moving 00:24:731 (4) to make a triangle with the heads of 00:23:763 (1,2) would work too.
4. 00:24:925 (5,6,1) - Linear flows are usually used when you're emphasizing strong elements in the music, the flow doesn't really fit for this one, try using a simpler flow here.
5. 01:17:763 (7,1) - 01:19:312 (4,1) - The rhythm on both of these places are very similar so I expect more consistency in terms of spacing.

• [Insane]

1. 00:05:570 (2,5) - for intentional?
2. 00:05:570 (2,3) - spacing is rly inconsistent
3. 00:49:312 (6) - NC for emphasis is better
4. 01:14:086 (5) - ^
5. 01:26:667 (2,3) - high spacing at lower pitch makes no sense tho lol

• [Hard]

1. this diff need a lot of polish imo, lots of inconsistent spacing like 00:01:312 (3,4,1) - 00:11:763 (3,4,5) - etc =w=, polish this diff plz xd

Electoz wrote:

[General]

1. Unused files:
   
   1. Thumbs.db

aaaaa i dont have this file

[Normal]

1. 01:04:796 (3,1) - DS fixed
2. 00:07:118 (2) - There's no need to make a rhythm denser here, a 1/1 slider would work fine. fixed
3. 00:07:892 (3,4,1) - If you're trying to make this variable from 00:02:086 (1,2,2) - 00:04:796 (3,1) then I would say this one doesn't play really well with 3 clickable objects in a row, I suggest using the same rhythm as those two earlier or coming up with a simpler rhythm. fixed
4. 00:23:376 (4,5,1) - Same reasoning as above, there's a few more of this and you should nerf them with simpler rhythms to make this diff easier considering that you don't have Easy in this set. fixed
5. 00:34:602 (1) - A circle plays better here, since you seem to focus mainly on vocals earlier and it's not necessary for 00:34:796 to be mapped cuz vocal isn't there. fixed
6. 00:40:796 (1,2) - This rhythm instead? It's more simple for vocal but if you want to make 00:41:183 clickable then up to you. fixed
7. 00:46:989 - Generally a downbeat should be clickable as it gives a stronger impact than other white ticks. i'll just stay with it for now until it becomes a major problem
8. 01:02:473 - Starting from this part, I expect more variable rhythms than this, there are lots of 1/1 sliders which can be bland/boring in gameplay, try spicing things up by either add more 1/2 rhythms or change some of the sliders to circles, you have to make that part more interesting to play. fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:29:957 (1,2) - Personally I prefer the rhythm you did on 00:23:763 (1,2) because vocal is clickable on that one, it feels off when you made 00:30:538 (2) clickable while most of the objects around there are clickable on vocals. fixed
2. 01:04:021 (1,2) - The spacing is pretty much misleading, visually the way it spaced is the same as 01:02:860 (2,3) . And tbh I would recommend using a 1/1 rhythm on 01:04:021 (1,2,3,4) cuz vocal started hyping up at 01:05:570 so if you start using denser rhythm there it will fit better in terms of intensity in gameplay. fixed
3. 01:26:860 (4,5,1) - Would use the same/bigger spacing than 01:25:699 (1,2,3) for a better impact at the end. fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:02:473 - Eh there's a strong guitar here I was expecting a larger spacing on 00:02:279 (2,3) . made the spacing a bit larger
2. 00:18:344 (3,4) - Should use a smaller spacing here to make 00:18:925 (6,1) more stand out for a proper emphasis. Moving 00:18:537 (4) up a bit would be nice. fixed
3. 00:24:537 (3,4) - Same reasoning as above, moving 00:24:731 (4) to make a triangle with the heads of 00:23:763 (1,2) would work too. fixed
4. 00:24:925 (5,6,1) - Linear flows are usually used when you're emphasizing strong elements in the music, the flow doesn't really fit for this one, try using a simpler flow here. fixed
5. 01:17:763 (7,1) - 01:19:312 (4,1) - The rhythm on both of these places are very similar so I expect more consistency in terms of spacing. fixed

Just a quick skim so my mod is a bit short, the thing that really needs to improve in this set is hitsounding, Hard looks fine but there are rooms for improvement on Normal and Insane, good luck~ thanks electoz

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

from my q

• [Insane]

1. 00:05:570 (2,5) - for intentional? yep
2. 00:05:570 (2,3) - spacing is rly inconsistent fixed
3. 00:49:312 (6) - NC for emphasis is better fixed
4. 01:14:086 (5) - ^ fixed
5. 01:26:667 (2,3) - high spacing at lower pitch makes no sense tho lol fixed

• [Hard]

1. this diff need a lot of polish imo, lots of inconsistent spacing like 00:01:312 (3,4,1) - 00:11:763 (3,4,5) - etc =w=, polish this diff plz xd
   ya ill work on fixing ds
   thanks nino

Pentori wrote:

hellooo! hoi

[General]
timing seems late by about ~8ms. could you try 530? sure
widescreen support should be off fixed
two .jpg files? delete the unused one i dont see the second one

[Insane]
00:06:150 (4,5) - this song is very dependent on its claps. here the clap seems to be under-emphasised in comparison to its next note 00:06:537 (6) - see if you can make 00:06:150 (4,5) - bigger than 00:06:537 (6) fixed
00:09:828 (1) - this slider passes through an important clap 00:10:021 - since this is insane, i reckon it'd be better to include this clap for the players experience fixed
00:10:602 (4,5) - also, following this, the clap 00:10:602 (4) - has a lot less ds than the note that isn't as important 00:10:796 (5) i removed the clap on 00:10:312 (3,4) -
00:20:473 (6) - here is another example, where it appears for a lot of emphasis to be placed on this note. but, the note only reflects an entrance into the downbeat 00:20:667 (1) - which is stronger than this beat but has less ds. furthermore, the clap before it on 00:20:279 (5) - has the lowest ds of all fixed
00:21:054 (2,3,4) - im not a big fan on this linear flow here, as it looks unintentional and isn't consistent in ds fixed
00:33:441 (2,3,4) - ^ fixed
00:57:634 (2,1) - this needs more distance. like you had with 00:57:828 (1,2) fixed
00:59:376 (1,2) - ^ you should turn on distance snap for these parts fixed
01:00:925 (1,2,3) - i dont think its good to start normal hitsounding yet. music only picks up at 01:02:473 (1) - and its like you are hitsounding the vocalists notes like you would hitsound drums fixed
01:02:473 (1) - hm, do you use editor with default skin? try turning it on and listening to the way you've hitsounded this section. 01:03:247 (5) - these whistles sound like hitnormals with increased volume and it is very jarring to listen to yeah i'll change the hitsounds for that section

good luck!

baysman wrote:

Hi

Hard
01:02:465 (1) - try put slider to red tick instead that circle i like the way it is currently


Sorry but I can't help you more. Good luck with your map.

1. 00:18:723 (5,6) - You could push 5 slightly further away from 3 like this
   
   
   
   
   
   More places you could do the same

   00:21:433 (3,4,5,6) -
   00:24:529 (3,4,5,6) - except have 5 above 3 rather than below
   00:27:626 (3,4,5,6) -
   00:32:271 (3,4,5,6) -
   00:33:820 (3,4,5,6) -
   
   Just makes the map more fun to play.
   
2. 00:36:529 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - felt kinda weird during gameplay, could stack these

Kujinn wrote:

NM

[Insane]

1. 00:18:723 (5,6) - You could push 5 slightly further away from 3 like this i like it better when they're stacked
   
   
   
   
   
   More places you could do the same

   00:21:433 (3,4,5,6) -
   00:24:529 (3,4,5,6) - except have 5 above 3 rather than below
   00:27:626 (3,4,5,6) -
   00:32:271 (3,4,5,6) -
   00:33:820 (3,4,5,6) -
   same
   
   Just makes the map more fun to play.
   
2. 00:36:529 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - felt kinda weird during gameplay, could stack these tried it but i prefer it when they're not stacked

mod is short, so you don't have to give kudosu

LGV894 wrote:

QUICK CHECK t/485182/start=0

Normal

00:18:336 (3,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6067410 It looks better this way. Make sure to re-arrange the next slider upon application. fixed
00:37:691 (1,2) - Blanket for better aesthetics. fixed
00:42:723 (2,1) - Avoid overlap. It will look messy and clustered. fixed
Not much to say, really. Although it could be improved if you drastically change your style.
It's good. heh, thanks

Hard

00:02:078 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6067430 It looks better this way. (Ignore the direction it's facing. Just pay attention to the placing and rotation. fixed
00:06:336 (4) - ^ You can Ctrl+J this too. fixed
You can also apply the same concept to next patterns. They look better that way.
00:16:013 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/r7ksc/0285e1b192.jpg This arrangement fits the beat better and solves the emphasis problem here. (Remember that louder sounds such as snares and crashes must be given emphasis.) fixed
00:26:078 (3) - Ctrl+J then return to (176, 116) fixed
00:31:497 (1,2) - This is what I was talking about. This is just better than the others. The little variation in it gave it more character. :)
00:43:691 (5,1) - Unstack these because (1) deserves to stand out. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6067472 fixed
01:00:529 (2,1) - This stack gimmick here isn't really that nice. We, hard players would prefer something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6067483 fixed
Good map heh

Insane

00:00:530 (1) - I just don't understand why you mapped it this way when you mapped the next ones as a pause.
00:10:400 (4,6,8) - Try to make an equilateral triangle using these. fixed
00:22:207 (1,2,3) - I think it's a bit off. The way that the sliders faces the opposite direction of where it came from feels weird. Try to Ctrl+H / J every slider and test it out. fixed
00:34:400 (6,1) - I don't understand why you mapped (1) with lower DS when it deserves more emphasis than the previous triangle. Ctrl+J (1), then return to original position. fixed
00:55:110 (2) - Ctrl+J then you know what. fixed
01:02:465 (1,3) - Try to space them like (2,4) For better consistency. fixed
01:03:239 (5,8,2) - Overlapping these three doesn't make a good-looking pattern. fixed
01:04:013 (1,4,6) - Okay, you just ruined it for me. fixed
01:05:562 (1,4,6) - You can make an equilateral triangle with these. fixed
Please, fix the overlaps. It looks messy. Destroying how the previous patterns were mapped, which were clean af.
01:18:723 - 01:19:110 - Don't map these as slider-ends. They need to be emphasized. fixed
01:24:723 (2,3) - ^ FYI, these are major ranking roadblocks. Especially for higher difficulties. fixed
Nice set. Good luck. thanks

William K wrote:

Hi, NM from my queue.

Hard one to mod xd it's fine xd

[Insane]

1. 00:22:594 (2,1) - Copy number 2 and paste it at line 1 to make the aesthetics better. fixed
2. 00:09:046 (3,4,5,6) - This is a pretty odd one. I think this jump is too far since that part is not as intense as 00:37:691 - . Consider making number 4 placed upper. maybe you may make it stacked with 00:09:820 (1,2) - so it feels like a triplet. fixed
3. 00:29:755 (6) - This seems odd if you stack 00:29:562 (5,6) - since the volume doesn't seem to be low or repeating. How about stacking number 6 under the slider end of number 4? fixed
4. 00:43:110 (3) - Consider stacking this with 00:42:336 (1) - for better aesthetics since overlapping here would not be a good one. fixed
5. 01:14:852 - You may add kiai here until the following green point since it sounds much more intense than the other parts. nah, i like it better when kiai is only on 00:37:691 -
6. 01:23:949 (8) - How about making this note more far to keep intensity up. fixed

That's all, I think. Good luck :3