1. The background image aspect ratio looks weird. Maybe try to find a better picture?
2. If you can help it, don't use a white combo color if you have a kiai. Don't think many like this, myself included. Either remove the white combo color, change it to a darker shade, or just manually adjust colors during kiai so the white isn't present. Also, maybe you should remove green completely as well, since you're already using yellow (also I don't really see any green colors in your bg, but maybe I'm just blind ;x;) and it's just another really bright color which flashes like mad during kiai.
3. Maybe add HTT to tags on all diffs? It's a short name for HO-KAGO TEA TIME.
4. 03:58:964 - 04:26:107 - Consider adding kiai time between these 2 spots as well. I see you like kiai and you used it throughout the map often, so why not here as well?

1. 00:00:928 (5,6) - These are a big problem. It's unreadable that they are snapped to 1/8. What you could do it just put them to red and white ticks (even though it doesn't follow the drum 100%) or you could remove them completely along with the other notes in the intro. I suggest snapping to red and white tick because you already started the main part of the song with 00:01:250 (1), which means you missed a drum beat at 00:01:214 (which is good I guess, 1/8s are annoying in stuff like this), and since they are quite loud, I don't think anyone will really notice them being slightly late at all.
   Another reason to snap them to red and white ticks is the guitar, that guitar can be heard far better than those drums that are slightly early, and these would follow that then.
2. 00:10:392 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider.
3. 00:10:964 (2) - ^
4. 00:13:249 (3) - Clap on the second arrow.
5. 00:16:107 (4) - Slightly nazi, but this note is kinda too far from the slider, it makes the rest of the combo look awkward. Move it 2 grids up (which means moving the rest of the combo(s) as well ;_;).
6. 00:21:249 (1) - Remove this new combo.
7. 00:21:821 (3) - I don't really like this slider. It's not really wrong but I have to suggest you something else. You could end it at 00:22:107 and then add another note at 00:22:392. This way those notes would follow the organ in the background which adds a nice touch. After you do that, put a whistle on the end of the slider and on that note, so you have whistles when organ is playing and I think this sounds nice. After all the put the new combo on that slider. It would look like this on the timeline.
8. 00:22:678 (1) - Remove new combo.
9. 00:22:678 (3) - Whistle on the end of the slider.
10. 00:22:964 (4) - ^
11. 00:23:535 (6) - Whistle on the start of the slider.
12. 00:33:250 (6) - Add a finish as well, you can hear it in the music.
13. 01:09:821 (5) - Add a whistle to the start of the slider as well.
14. 01:17:535 (6) - Add whistle to the slider end.
15. 01:17:535 - This timing section is unnecessary, remove it.
16. 01:23:249 (1) - Remove this whistle, you didn't use in around this spot much and that makes this sound off.
17. 01:27:821 (3) - Remove finish from this note.
18. 01:28:107 - Add a circle on top of those other circles and place a finish on it.
19. 01:41:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,etc) - Use whistles like you used just after these.
20. 01:48:678 (6) - Same deal as 00:21:821.
21. 01:49:535 (1) - Remove new combo. Also put a whistle at the end of the slider.
22. 01:49:821 (2) - Whistle at the end.
23. 01:50:107 (3) - Whistle at the end (not the arrow).
24. 02:08:107 (5) - Whistle.
25. 02:08:678 (1) - Don't think this new combo is really necessary, you could remove it.
26. 02:10:964 (1) - Remove this new combo and place it on 02:11:535 (2) instead.
27. 02:12:107 (3) - Whistle at start?
28. 02:18:392 (1) - Use a whistle at start too. Remove whistle from the slider itself though.
29. 02:36:678 (5) - ^
30. 02:50:107 (1) - Remove the whistle from the start, it kinda sounds wrong.
31. 02:54:678 (4) - Remove finish.
32. 02:54:964 - Add a note and place a finish.
33. 03:36:107 (1) - Whistle on start as well, also remove it from the slider.
34. 04:26:107 (4) - Finish on that note as well.

1. 00:18:392 (5) - Add a clap here, or remove the clap from 00:16:107 (4).
2. 00:33:535 (1) - Remove finish from the slider end, it doesn't fit at all and is not in the music.
3. 00:41:250 (4) - Add whistle.
4. 00:48:107 (4,5) - This isn't a good idea for hard (and lower) diffs imo. You can keep it if you wish, but I suggest that you make a different pattern.
5. 00:49:250 (1) - Extend this spinner to 00:50:964, it sounds wrong as it is now.
6. 01:27:821 (3) - Remove finish.
7. 01:28:107 - Add a note and place a finish on it.
8. 01:44:107 (1,2) - This felt kinda weird. Everything is 1/1 and then suddenly a longer slider which ends on red. Try this: end the slider on 01:44:392 and add a circle on 01:44:535. Stack the 2 circles (2 and 3 in the combo now) on top of the slider end for a triplet. Just reposition stuff a little so you don't get silly spacings. (you did it almost like this here: 01:46:392 (1,2))
9. 02:18:392 (1) - Whistle at the start.
10. 02:36:392 (1,1) - These 2 new combos are really unnecessary.
11. 02:40:107 (6) - Remove finish from the slider end.
12. 02:45:249 (5) - Remove this finish.
13. 02:54:964 - Add a note and place a finish on it.
14. 03:35:250 (3) - This doesn't look right. It may be trying to follow the piano, but it doesn't sound nice at all. Also it's disorienting a little, especially since it's not following the whole piano. Just make notes at 03:35:250 and 03:35:392 instead.
15. 03:35:535 (4) - Another one of those really weird sliders. End it at 03:35:821 and add a note where it ends currently.
16. 03:39:821 (4) - Maybe remove this whistle?
17. 03:54:392 (1) - Remove this NC.
18. 04:03:535 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing in this combo is really weird. Either distance snap them or make it more consistent.
19. 04:03:964 (2) - Clap at the end.
20. 04:16:678 (5) - Clap on the 2nd arrow.
21. 04:26:107 (4) - Finish on this circle as well.

1. Maybe use circle size 1, looks much better and closer to a normal considering the timeline density? Just try to position certain notes a little better in any case, the spacings are inconsistent at times. Also watch out for the screen borders, some notes maybe dangerously close offscreen.
2. 00:36:678 (7,8) - Reverse the whistle and the clap. They sound weird like this.
3. 00:51:535 (3) - Whistle on the slider start.
4. 00:53:821 (6) - ^
5. 01:10:107 (2,3) - Fix the positions of these, 1 grid up and 2 to the left.
6. 01:41:535 (4) - Remove finish.
7. 01:41:821 (1) - Finish at the start.
8. 01:43:821 - Add a note here, it sounds too empty without it.
9. 01:48:392 - ^
10. 01:50:964 (1) - Finish at the start. Also from this point onward you weren't using any hitsounds, you should probably use some.
11. 02:18:392 (3) - Whistle at start.
12. 02:20:678 (3) - ^
13. 02:22:963 (3) - ^
14. 02:25:249 (3) - ^
15. 02:54:964 - The break that starts here is really really long. It's not unrankable but a break this big is not a good thing especially since you can map stuff in it.
16. 03:20:107 (3) - Some nazi again, this slider really doesn't need that first white point (before the red one).
17. 03:32:678 (2) - I would say this slider is too quiet. Raise the volume.
18. 04:05:821 (2) - Clap at the end.
19. 04:06:964 (4) - ^

1. AR-1, OD-1.
2. 00:14:964 (1) - Finish on this circle.
3. 00:24:107 (1,2,3) - Fix the spacing. 2 is slightly off.
4. 01:22:964 (1) - Remove finish.
5. 01:44:107 (4,5) - Some nazi: 1 grid left.
6. 02:35:250 (4) - Remove finish from the slider start.
7. 02:54:964 - Same stuff like in Normal, this break feels kinda too long. Consider mapping some stuff here.
8. 03:32:678 - The volume of this timing section feels too quiet, just like in other diff(s). Raise the volume.
9. 03:51:535 (3) - Remove whistle from start and place it on the end instead.

gina91189 wrote:

Hi, from my queue.

My Mod

[General]
-Your kiai and combo colors are not consistent (including Taiko), please recheck them (by look at the code). I don't fix taiko because it's a guest diff. They can have different kiai or break. Fixed normal kiai though.

[Easy]
-HP, AR -1 ? -1 AR
03:54:964 – raise this volume to 60% ?
03:55:535 – to 30% ?
^ They sound good in this way imo
04:17:230 – this timing section is not snapped, move to 04:17:250
04:22:964 (3) – stack this perfectly

[Normal]
00:15:821 (2,3,4,5,6) – they look better this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114326
00:17:249 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114328 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114330
00:36:678 (7) – move this 2 grid left, then 1 grid up
00:59:250 (4) – stack this perfectly
02:01:250 (2) - ^
02:10:392 (2) - ^
So many notes (not sliders) that aren’t really stack together perfectly in this diff (especially these parts: 02:20:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3), 03:35:535 (1,2,3)), please recheck all of them at this point, slaps me if my nazi make you feel bad . Changed
03:24:678 (6) – touch the HP bar

[Hard]
00:49:250 (1) – end this spinner at 00:50:392
02:36:107 (1,1) – I don’t see the point to NC them.
03:35:535 (4) – shorten this to 03:35:821, sounds better imo

[Insane]
00:06:250 (2,3) – stack, 0.01x …
00:15:392 (2,3) - ^ 0.01x and 0.02x
00:17:678 (2) - ^ 0.02x
01:50:801 – this green line is not snapped, move to 01:50:821

Okay, that’s all
My brain is dying, sorry for most of my nazi mod ;__;
Star ~

lolcubes wrote:

Hey Raging Bull, here's my mod as promised.

[General]:

1. The background image aspect ratio looks weird. Maybe try to find a better picture? Not sure about the new BG. I liked the old one better
2. If you can help it, don't use a white combo color if you have a kiai. Don't think many like this, myself included. Either remove the white combo color, change it to a darker shade, or just manually adjust colors during kiai so the white isn't present. Also, maybe you should remove green completely as well, since you're already using yellow (also I don't really see any green colors in your bg, but maybe I'm just blind ;x;) and it's just another really bright color which flashes like mad during kiai.
3. Maybe add HTT to tags on all diffs? It's a short name for HO-KAGO TEA TIME.
4. 03:58:964 - 04:26:107 - Consider adding kiai time between these 2 spots as well. I see you like kiai and you used it throughout the map often, so why not here as well?

I only added kiai to chorus.

[Insane]:

1. 00:00:928 (5,6) - These are a big problem. It's unreadable that they are snapped to 1/8. What you could do it just put them to red and white ticks (even though it doesn't follow the drum 100%) or you could remove them completely along with the other notes in the intro. I suggest snapping to red and white tick because you already started the main part of the song with 00:01:250 (1), which means you missed a drum beat at 00:01:214 (which is good I guess, 1/8s are annoying in stuff like this), and since they are quite loud, I don't think anyone will really notice them being slightly late at all.
   Another reason to snap them to red and white ticks is the guitar, that guitar can be heard far better than those drums that are slightly early, and these would follow that then.
2. 00:10:392 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider.
3. 00:10:964 (2) - ^
4. 00:13:249 (3) - Clap on the second arrow.
5. 00:16:107 (4) - Slightly nazi, but this note is kinda too far from the slider, it makes the rest of the combo look awkward. Move it 2 grids up (which means moving the rest of the combo(s) as well ;_;).
6. 00:21:249 (1) - Remove this new combo. Combo is too long for my taste and I think NC at 1 is a good choice.
7. 00:21:821 (3) - I don't really like this slider. It's not really wrong but I have to suggest you something else. You could end it at 00:22:107 and then add another note at 00:22:392. This way those notes would follow the organ in the background which adds a nice touch. After you do that, put a whistle on the end of the slider and on that note, so you have whistles when organ is playing and I think this sounds nice. After all the put the new combo on that slider. It would look like this on the timeline. Sounds pretty good actually. I'll add it.
8. 00:22:678 (1) - Remove new combo.
9. 00:22:678 (3) - Whistle on the end of the slider.
10. 00:22:964 (4) - ^
11. 00:23:535 (6) - Whistle on the start of the slider.
12. 00:33:250 (6) - Add a finish as well, you can hear it in the music.
13. 01:09:821 (5) - Add a whistle to the start of the slider as well.
14. 01:17:535 (6) - Add whistle to the slider end.
15. 01:17:535 - This timing section is unnecessary, remove it.
16. 01:23:249 (1) - Remove this whistle, you didn't use in around this spot much and that makes this sound off.
17. 01:27:821 (3) - Remove finish from this note.
18. 01:28:107 - Add a circle on top of those other circles and place a finish on it.
19. 01:41:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,etc) - Use whistles like you used just after these.
20. 01:48:678 (6) - Same deal as 00:21:821.
21. 01:49:535 (1) - Remove new combo. Also put a whistle at the end of the slider.
22. 01:49:821 (2) - Whistle at the end.
23. 01:50:107 (3) - Whistle at the end (not the arrow).
24. 02:08:107 (5) - Whistle.
25. 02:08:678 (1) - Don't think this new combo is really necessary, you could remove it.
26. 02:10:964 (1) - Remove this new combo and place it on 02:11:535 (2) instead.
27. 02:12:107 (3) - Whistle at start?
28. 02:18:392 (1) - Use a whistle at start too. Remove whistle from the slider itself though.
29. 02:36:678 (5) - ^
30. 02:50:107 (1) - Remove the whistle from the start, it kinda sounds wrong.
31. 02:54:678 (4) - Remove finish.
32. 02:54:964 - Add a note and place a finish.
33. 03:36:107 (1) - Whistle on start as well, also remove it from the slider.
34. 04:26:107 (4) - Finish on that note as well.

[Hard]:

1. 00:18:392 (5) - Add a clap here, or remove the clap from 00:16:107 (4).
2. 00:33:535 (1) - Remove finish from the slider end, it doesn't fit at all and is not in the music.
3. 00:41:250 (4) - Add whistle.
4. 00:48:107 (4,5) - This isn't a good idea for hard (and lower) diffs imo. You can keep it if you wish, but I suggest that you make a different pattern.
5. 00:49:250 (1) - Extend this spinner to 00:50:964, it sounds wrong as it is now. It sounds okay to me. No change.
6. 01:27:821 (3) - Remove finish.
7. 01:28:107 - Add a note and place a finish on it.
8. 01:44:107 (1,2) - This felt kinda weird. Everything is 1/1 and then suddenly a longer slider which ends on red. Try this: end the slider on 01:44:392 and add a circle on 01:44:535. Stack the 2 circles (2 and 3 in the combo now) on top of the slider end for a triplet. Just reposition stuff a little so you don't get silly spacings. (you did it almost like this here: 01:46:392 (1,2)) Did it slightly different.
9. 02:18:392 (1) - Whistle at the start.
10. 02:36:392 (1,1) - These 2 new combos are really unnecessary.
11. 02:40:107 (6) - Remove finish from the slider end.
12. 02:45:249 (5) - Remove this finish. No thanks
13. 02:54:964 - Add a note and place a finish on it.
14. 03:35:250 (3) - This doesn't look right. It may be trying to follow the piano, but it doesn't sound nice at all. Also it's disorienting a little, especially since it's not following the whole piano. Just make notes at 03:35:250 and 03:35:392 instead.
15. 03:35:535 (4) - Another one of those really weird sliders. End it at 03:35:821 and add a note where it ends currently.
16. 03:39:821 (4) - Maybe remove this whistle?
17. 03:54:392 (1) - Remove this NC.
18. 04:03:535 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing in this combo is really weird. Either distance snap them or make it more consistent.
19. 04:03:964 (2) - Clap at the end.
20. 04:16:678 (5) - Clap on the 2nd arrow.
21. 04:26:107 (4) - Finish on this circle as well.

[Normal]:

1. Maybe use circle size 1, looks much better and closer to a normal considering the timeline density? Just try to position certain notes a little better in any case, the spacings are inconsistent at times. Also watch out for the screen borders, some notes maybe dangerously close offscreen. I think circle size is fine.
2. 00:36:678 (7,8) - Reverse the whistle and the clap. They sound weird like this.
3. 00:51:535 (3) - Whistle on the slider start.
4. 00:53:821 (6) - ^
5. 01:10:107 (2,3) - Fix the positions of these, 1 grid up and 2 to the left.
6. 01:41:535 (4) - Remove finish.
7. 01:41:821 (1) - Finish at the start.
8. 01:43:821 - Add a note here, it sounds too empty without it.
9. 01:48:392 - ^
10. 01:50:964 (1) - Finish at the start. Also from this point onward you weren't using any hitsounds, you should probably use some.
11. 02:18:392 (3) - Whistle at start.
12. 02:20:678 (3) - ^
13. 02:22:963 (3) - ^
14. 02:25:249 (3) - ^
15. 02:54:964 - The break that starts here is really really long. It's not unrankable but a break this big is not a good thing especially since you can map stuff in it.
16. 03:20:107 (3) - Some nazi again, this slider really doesn't need that first white point (before the red one).
17. 03:32:678 (2) - I would say this slider is too quiet. Raise the volume.
18. 04:05:821 (2) - Clap at the end.
19. 04:06:964 (4) - ^

[Easy]:

1. AR-1, OD-1. Seems okay to me.
2. 00:14:964 (1) - Finish on this circle.
3. 00:24:107 (1,2,3) - Fix the spacing. 2 is slightly off.
4. 01:22:964 (1) - Remove finish.
5. 01:44:107 (4,5) - Some nazi: 1 grid left.
6. 02:35:250 (4) - Remove finish from the slider start.
7. 02:54:964 - Same stuff like in Normal, this break feels kinda too long. Consider mapping some stuff here. I want consistent break
8. 03:32:678 - The volume of this timing section feels too quiet, just like in other diff(s). Raise the volume.
9. 03:51:535 (3) - Remove whistle from start and place it on the end instead.

There you go. Normal and easy diffs lack some hitsounds at certain points, so you should take a closer look where to put some so it doesn't feel "dry".
I might have missed some combo mods and maybe a few hitsounds but it took very long time to mod this map. Hopefully this was of any assistance and good luck.

Magical Pokie wrote:

Yeah Good Map
But，
【Insane】
00:00:535 (1,2,3) - spacing It's correct actually.
00:50:964 (1,2,3,4,5) - why 1/2 Should Use 1/1 I want a little stream. :L
00:56:678 (4,5) - New Combo Doesn't seem to fit.
【easy】
00:12:678 (2) - New combo Ahh no need.
Very Goodmap
but why no hitsound

and↓
Insane Diff 00:00:535 1,2,3 are different than 4,5 That's why spacing is little different

CDFA wrote:

Ponycanyon deleted every video off of youtube for the full version if this song ;~;. It made me sad panda. orz I know. I can't link it to my friends anymore :L

But anyway.

Overall:
Remove (Full Ver.) from the title. Yes okay. Full ver seems out of place.
It'd be cool if you had a snare drum hitsound or something, to replace the claps. If you want some, feel free to use the ones in this map (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24610) No thanks. It sounds rather repetitive to me though. :L
I'd like it if you could put claps on the 2nd and 4th beat, to go with the drum. Yeah.

Other then that, the map is pretty solid >w<. Thanks.

. . . also Tsumugi's "i came" face >w<~. >_>

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
-You used too many angle snapped patterns I don't see what's wrong with that.
00:10:392 (1,2) - Change this pattern to this
00:14:964 (1,2) - Make a slider that start in (1) and and in (2) No thanks
00:17:249 (3,4) - Make a slider that start in (3) and and in (4) No thanks
00:14:964 (1) - Fix like this maybe? Used your pattern suggestion so I didn't follow this.
00:21:821 (3) - An arch was better Slightly different slider. Good idea though.
00:24:107 (1,2,3) - Use this Slider? ( Start on (1), repeat on (2), end on (3) )
So this was boring, continue like this the rest of the map:
-Try to use Sliders when there are distant notes ( like 00:14:964 (1,2), 00:14:964 (1,2), 0:24:107 (1,2,3) )
-Try to not use linear and to long slider( like 00:21:821 (3) )... as they're not funny.

[Normal]
Could you try using only one Distance Snap? Used 1.0x

(will continue in this post after you answer the question under [Normal] )

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
fine

[Easy]
00:10:392 (1) - ugly , make it around circle better
00:20:392 (2) - confusing , start at 00:20:678 and repeat 1 time less Seems okay. Following lyrics.
00:55:535 (1,2) - change to a slider No.
04:16:107 (3,1) - spacing , use 1.0x not 0.75x plz

[Normal]
I think it is Normal+ Gah! No + ._.
00:49:250 (1,1) - spinner is short , then circle is far , too hard to play here
01:04:964 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - this is [Hard] not [Normal+] Made easier.
01:21:821 (1,2,3,4,5) - kinda hard I think they can follow the beat from the previous combo.
02:33:249 (1,2,3,4,5) - pentagon Made nicer
02:51:535 (3,4,5) - out of screen It should be okay since my points are still inside grid.
03:20:107 (3) - ^ Same thing
04:11:535 (3,4,1) - spacing 0.8x change to 1.2x is confusing
04:20:678 (1,2,3,4,5) - confusing

I chose this 2 diffs
good luck

[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,64,64
Combo2 : 255,255,89
Combo3 : 128,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,192

Equivalent wrote:

Hi, sorry for delay and such:

General:
This map remind me of Djpop's map
Im suggesting to delete 3rd kiai time as it not on chorus of the song. It sounds like it is so I'm keeping it.
I found 2 SB, maybe delete 1 and do full submit? -.- Pretty sure I deleted both osb and full submitted.
Maybe try this color? I prefer my current colors.

[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,64,64
Combo2 : 255,255,89
Combo3 : 128,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,192

There is some inconsistency in kiai time (second kiai time):
Easy, Normal, Taiko end at 02:54:964 while Insane and Hard end at 02:54:678 maybe make them equal


Easy:
AR-1? Seems fine

Normal:
I dont see the need for stack leniency 4 here as I, though it still rankable with the setup I don't recall changing this....>_>
AR6 feel more comfortable for me here Okay
New combo is a bit messed up here, but I'm not really good at new combos mod
01:25:821 (5) New combo here Okay

Hard:
Same comment about stack leniency
01:41:821 (1) - Unsnapped slider end They are snapped. o.o
01:42:678 (3) - ^
01:44:107 (1) - ^
01:44:964 (3) - ^
01:46:392 (1) - ^
01:47:821 (5) - ^
01:48:678 (7) - ^
03:54:678 (T) I see the lower diff got mapped for this part, why not map in hard diff too? Wanted to make hard under 11m :/

Insane:
I feel a bit easy on this insane, feel like hard diff Yea, I'm making small changes to insane.
Same like hard, the combos is a bit messy
03:54:678 (T) I see the lower diff got mapped for this part, why not map in insane diff too? Wanted to make it below 15m.

That all from me <3

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-Offset: 107

Easy:

00:50:107 (4,5) - Move 1 level 3 grid down?
01:22:964 (6) - Remove new combo?
01:23:535 (1) - New combo? (nazi) Also, this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127332
01:48:678 (5) - New combo?
01:49:821 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:50:964 (1) - Move 1 level 3 grid down? (then fix spacing)
02:22:964 (3) - New combo
02:52:107 (4,5) - (nazi) move 1 level 3 grid right
03:17:821 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Remove the whistle from the body of these sliders
Fixed all easy
Normal:

-circle size +1?

01:48:678 (7) - New combo?
02:11:535 (6,7) - (nazi) move up 1 level 3 grid? Also, put a new combo on (6)?
02:33:249 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uneven, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127340 How did I not notice that? haha
02:36:392 (2) - Move up 1 level 3 grid? And this...
02:38:964 (6) - New combo?
02:43:535 (6) - ^
02:52:678 (5) - ^
03:20:107 (3) ~ 03:30:107 (3) - Remove all whistles from the body of all sliders in this time period
03:35:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing from (1) to (5) is too high, and (6) is too close to (5)
Fixed all normal
Ozzy's TaiK-On!!: Fine

Hard:

00:52:107 (3) - Too far from (2)
01:44:964 (3) - Too close to (2)
01:47:821 (5) - Move 1 level 3 grid up
01:53:249 (1) - Too far from (6) Intentional
02:20:392 (6) - Move 1 level 3 grid down
03:20:107 (5) ~ 03:25:821 (5) - Remove all whistles from the body of all sliders in this time period
Used all but mentioned one.
Insane:

-This diff feels a bit easy for an Insane...I'm not sure what to do to fix it though Yea, trying to make it harder. :L

00:00:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps lower the volume a bit on these notes?
00:25:535 (7,8,9,10,11) - This pattern looks odd, perhaps try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127345
00:26:821 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:47:249 (3) - Too far from (2)
02:18:392 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing here is too close
02:20:392 (6) - Too far
02:26:678 (6) - Too far
03:44:964 (1) - Way too close to (8)
04:18:107 (3,4) - Make this the same as 04:18:535 (5,6)? Didn't notice :L
Used all.
I couldn't really find anything major, just a bunch of spacing/alignment issues. Nice map~ *star*

Index-San wrote:

general:
maybe you need UI, you, and ( some people(me) usually search this song using U and I rather than U&I ..), Afterschool(no need to add Tea Time), Houkago in Tags

okay, time to mod

oh just reminding... if my first 5 nazi in insane annoys you please ignore my other nazi in insane, it looks like some accelerated spacing though,
Insane:
00:16:392 (5) - 1 grid left Intentional
00:16:678 (6) - ^ Intentional
00:16:964 (7) - 2grid left Intentional
00:17:249 (1) - 1grid left Intentional
00:18:249 (4) - 1grid right Intentional
00:18:392 (5,6,7) - make it like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127358? Got it!
00:25:250 (6) - umm... looks like the spacing seems little off here, Fixed
00:39:250 (4) - 2grids left (if you want a little bit closer) or 2grids down (if you want a bit farther) 1 left 1 down :L
00:44:107 (4) - 1grid left Intentional
00:44:392 (5) - 1grid left Intentional
01:02:107 (6) - umm... spacing? (don't mind this if this is accelerated spacing) Yes
01:14:392 (3) - umm...make it 0.89 spacing too? Fixed
01:23:249 (1) - spacing? Moved it.
01:43:821 (7) - 3grids left? (to make the spacing same like (3) Fixed!
02:26:678 (6) - spacing? Changed into accelerated spacing instead.
02:41:821 (4,5,6) - make it consistent spacing? Looks like it is..


Hard:
01:43:535 (4,5) - make it in same line as (3)? or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127372 ?? or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127377 ? It's a small blanket :L
01:44:678 (2,3) - keep the old spacing?Seems fine

01:44:678 (2,3) - 1grid left ,if you use this, then ^
01:44:678 (2,3) - 1grid up and 1 grid left to keep the 1.00 ^
01:57:249 (5) - 1grid right to keep 1.00 spacing?^

Normal:
00:16:964 (6) - this looks like a bit off Fixed it I think :L
02:36:107 (1) - 1grid down Little different
03:37:821 (5) - make it consistent since this is normal XD I don't want to make it too repetitive :L

Easy:
-err.. didn't find anyting

sorry for my "dominated-by-nazi-modding" It's okay.

• try offset = 100
  Here is a osb file in your beatmap floder that is not useful. Delete it.
  You could try the silent custom sliderslide sound, I think now the sliderslide is kinda noisy.
  Remove "Ritsu Tainaka", "Tsumugi Kotobuki" and "Azusa Nakano" in the Tags field. This song are only sung by Yui and Mio. And change "you and" to "you and I". (Do it on each diff)
  The volume is a bit loud. Try 75% while using normal hitsound.

• 00:10:392 (1) - add normal-finish on the first circle
  00:13:250 (2) - new combo?
  00:23:535 (5) - remove the finish
  00:24:107 (1) - add normal-finish
  00:27:535 (4) - add normal-finish on the last circle
  00:29:821 (2,4) - remove the whistle, it sounds noisy
  00:46:964 (1,2,3,4,5) - move one grid up
  00:50:392 (5,1) - the distance is wrong. I don't suggest you to use jump in Easy diff
  00:56:678 (3) - new combo?
  00:57:821 (5) - new combo?
  01:08:392 (6) - move one grid right
  01:09:821 (1) - the distance is wrong
  01:13:250 (4) - remove the clap
  01:17:821 (4) - remove the clap
  01:21:249 (3) - new combo
  01:55:535 (1) - add normal-finish on the first circle
  02:09:250 (1) - remove the whistle on the first circle
  02:27:535 (1) - the distance is wrong
  02:29:821 (2) - new combo
  02:44:678 (4) - remove the clap
  02:44:678 (4,1) - the distance is wrong
  03:20:107 (2) - move one grid right
  03:24:678 (2,1) - though the stack looks good, the distance is wrong
  03:29:250 (2) - new combo
  03:33:821 (2) - new combo
  03:44:107 (4) - move one grid right
  03:44:107 (4,1) - the distance is wrong
  04:03:535 (3) - new combo
  04:08:107 (1) - add normal-finish
  04:11:535 (4) - new combo
  04:16:107 (3) - new combo

• 00:10:392 (1) - add normal-finish on the first circle
  00:26:392 (4) - new combo
  00:28:678 (1,2) - these two sliders aren't stack well. Try to disable the Grid Snap and Distance Snap to restack them
  00:40:107 (2) - new combo and add normal-finish
  00:53:250 (4) - new combo?
  00:56:678 (4) - new combo
  01:20:679 (5) - new combo
  01:21:821 (1) - remove new combo
  01:23:249 (1) - add normal-finish on the last circle
  01:27:249 (2,3,4,5) - disable the Grid Snap to arrange them for putting in order
  01:57:821 (3,1) - stack them
  02:18:392 (3,1) - the distance is wrong
  02:22:963 (3,1) - the distance is wrong
  02:33:249 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uhnnn.. isn't a good-looking
  03:13:250 (1) - add soft-finish
  03:37:821 (5) - new combo
  03:42:107 - add a circle?

• 00:33:250 (3) - add normal-finish
  00:59:250 (1,2) - the distance is wrong
  01:12:107 (1,2) - the distance is wrong
  01:13:821 (5) - new combo
  01:14:392 (1) - remove new combo
  01:14:392 (1,2) - the distance is wrong
  01:50:964 (1) - move one grid down
  02:21:535 (2) - move one grid down
  02:32:678 (1) - remove new combo
  02:33:535 (1) - remove new combo
  02:38:964 (3) - move one grid right
  02:47:964 - add a circle?
  02:50:107 (1,2,3,4,5) - these sliders aren't stack well. Try to disable the Grid Snap and Distance Snap to restack them
  03:34:678 (1) - remove new combo
  03:35:250 (3) - new combo
  03:36:107 (1) - remove new combo
  03:54:392 (5) - new combo

• Sorry I really don't know how to mod taiko diff.

• 00:10:107 (7,1) - don't use this pattern, it is unrankedable now!
  00:21:250 (9,10) - Emnn..not a good idea lol
  00:51:535 (1) - remove new combo
  00:53:249 (5) - new combo for keep pace with the later part
  01:09:821 (1) - remove new combo
  01:11:535 (5) - new combo for keep pace with the later part
  01:53:964 (4,5,6,7) - Emnn..not a good idea lol
  02:18:392 (1) - remove new combo
  02:20:107 (5) - new combo for keep pace with the later part
  02:36:678 (1) - remove new combo
  02:38:392 (5) - new combo
  03:19:535 (1,3) - these sliders aren't stack well. Try to disable the Grid Snap and Distance Snap to restack them
  03:20:107 (2,4) - these sliders aren't stack well. Try to disable the Grid Snap and Distance Snap to restack them
  03:36:107 (1) - remove new combo
  04:10:820 (2,4) - these sliders aren't stack well. Try to disable the Grid Snap and Distance Snap to restack them
  Nice diff

Weiren wrote:

General

• try offset = 100 Not sure.
  Here is a osb file in your beatmap floder that is not useful. Delete it. Nooooo! Unless it is 2 .osb I will.
  You could try the silent custom sliderslide sound, I think now the sliderslide is kinda noisy. Don't know how orz
  Remove "Ritsu Tainaka", "Tsumugi Kotobuki" and "Azusa Nakano" in the Tags field. This song are only sung by Yui and Mio. And change "you and" to "you and I". (Do it on each diff)
  The volume is a bit loud. Try 75% while using normal hitsound.

I find volume okay unless more would point it out.

Easy

• 00:10:392 (1) - add normal-finish on the first circle
  00:13:250 (2) - new combo? No
  00:23:535 (5) - remove the finish
  00:24:107 (1) - add normal-finish
  00:27:535 (4) - add normal-finish on the last circle
  00:29:821 (2,4) - remove the whistle, it sounds noisy
  00:46:964 (1,2,3,4,5) - move one grid up
  00:50:392 (5,1) - the distance is wrong. I don't suggest you to use jump in Easy diff I wouldn't say it's a jump. There's a big recovery time between 5,1.
  00:56:678 (3) - new combo? No
  00:57:821 (5) - new combo?
  01:08:392 (6) - move one grid right
  01:09:821 (1) - the distance is wrong No change
  01:13:250 (4) - remove the clap
  01:17:821 (4) - remove the clap
  01:21:249 (3) - new combo
  01:55:535 (1) - add normal-finish on the first circle
  02:09:250 (1) - remove the whistle on the first circle
  02:27:535 (1) - the distance is wrong No change
  02:29:821 (2) - new comboDon't think it's needed
  02:44:678 (4) - remove the clap
  02:44:678 (4,1) - the distance is wrong No change
  03:20:107 (2) - move one grid right
  03:24:678 (2,1) - though the stack looks good, the distance is wrong This one I'm not entirely sure. I'll leave it for now until more says it's not good.
  03:29:250 (2) - new combo No
  03:33:821 (2) - new combo No
  03:44:107 (4) - move one grid right
  03:44:107 (4,1) - the distance is wrong Okay this one is super wrong XD
  04:03:535 (3) - new combo
  04:08:107 (1) - add normal-finish
  04:11:535 (4) - new combo
  04:16:107 (3) - new combo

Normal

• 00:10:392 (1) - add normal-finish on the first circle
  00:26:392 (4) - new combo
  00:28:678 (1,2) - these two sliders aren't stack well. Try to disable the Grid Snap and Distance Snap to restack them
  00:40:107 (2) - new combo and add normal-finish No to both
  00:53:250 (4) - new combo?
  00:56:678 (4) - new combo
  01:20:679 (5) - new combo
  01:21:821 (1) - remove new combo
  01:23:249 (1) - add normal-finish on the last circle
  01:27:249 (2,3,4,5) - disable the Grid Snap to arrange them for putting in order
  01:57:821 (3,1) - stack them Seems okay to me.
  02:18:392 (3,1) - the distance is wrong I think it's okay. I'll leave it for now.
  02:22:963 (3,1) - the distance is wrong I think it's okay. I'll leave it for now.
  02:33:249 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uhnnn.. isn't a good-looking
  03:13:250 (1) - add soft-finish
  03:37:821 (5) - new combo
  03:42:107 - add a circle?

Gonna stop here for now :L

Hard

• 00:33:250 (3) - add normal-finish
  00:59:250 (1,2) - the distance is wrong
  01:12:107 (1,2) - the distance is wrong Intentional
  01:13:821 (5) - new combo No
  01:14:392 (1) - remove new combo No
  01:14:392 (1,2) - the distance is wrong
  01:50:964 (1) - move one grid down
  02:21:535 (2) - move one grid down No
  02:32:678 (1) - remove new combo
  02:33:535 (1) - remove new combo
  02:38:964 (3) - move one grid right
  02:47:964 - add a circle? No
  02:50:107 (1,2,3,4,5) - these sliders aren't stack well. Try to disable the Grid Snap and Distance Snap to restack them It looks okay. It will be covered by combo burst too :L
  03:34:678 (1) - remove new combo
  03:35:250 (3) - new combo
  03:36:107 (1) - remove new combo No
  03:54:392 (5) - new combo No

Ozzy's TaiK-On!!

• Sorry I really don't know how to mod taiko diff.

Insane

• 00:10:107 (7,1) - don't use this pattern, it is unrankedable now! It's okay. Combo color can tell that blue is the slider ^^
  00:21:250 (9,10) - Emnn..not a good idea lol Hmm okay. I'll move 10.
  00:51:535 (1) - remove new combo No
  00:53:249 (5) - new combo for keep pace with the later part I like how I did my new combo:L
  01:09:821 (1) - remove new combo ^
  01:11:535 (5) - new combo for keep pace with the later part ^
  01:53:964 (4,5,6,7) - Emnn..not a good idea lol I'll see how it is for now.
  02:18:392 (1) - remove new combo I like how I did my new combo:L
  02:20:107 (5) - new combo for keep pace with the later part
  02:36:678 (1) - remove new combo
  02:38:392 (5) - new combo
  03:19:535 (1,3) - these sliders aren't stack well. Try to disable the Grid Snap and Distance Snap to restack them Seems okay. I'll see if anyone else points it out and don't like it.
  03:20:107 (2,4) - these sliders aren't stack well. Try to disable the Grid Snap and Distance Snap to restack them
  03:36:107 (1) - remove new comboI like how I did my new combo
  04:10:820 (2,4) - these sliders aren't stack well. Try to disable the Grid Snap and Distance Snap to restack them
  Nice diff

Wow such a long work, and STAR
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren

Raging Bull wrote:

You could try the silent custom sliderslide sound, I think now the sliderslide is kinda noisy. Don't know how orz

SapphireGhost wrote:

Here I am. Finally.

[General]
- It would be nice if you could fill in a bit of the 18-second break somehow. Generally, my rule is if it's long enough to eat a good portion of my sandwich then it's too long. Maybe for easy/normal. Dunno for hard/insane.
- http://www.tinyurl.com/delicioussliderguide For your reading pleasure.

[Easy]
03:45:250 (1,2) - It would be nice if these two didn't overlap. But it's not overlapped
03:55:535 (2) - Not sure if this is a good idea in [Easy] but it can pass. It fits for me. The slider velocity isn't fast to begin with so it's not a big reduction :<
04:22:964 (3) - It would be good to move this somewhere else. I can see how the pattern might be confusing for new players. Maybe.

[Normal]
00:16:678 (5,6) - Remove the overlap here. Also the cool way to make stars is by using Ctrl+Shift+R and rotating notes by 72 degrees.Thanks for helpful tip.
01:22:964 (6,1) - Remove overlap again, whee.
01:39:535 - Break end should be dragged to here.
01:40:678 (1,2,3,4,1) - Yeah stuff. >_> I assume you mean overlap.
01:46:107 (2,1) - Mm. I guess
01:49:821 (2,1) - I care about these, I really do! Hi there.
02:03:535 (2,1) - Things look better when they don't overlap in not-very-pretty ways, sir. Just for you, I completely redid the slider.
02:12:678 (2,1) - Actually you know I'm going to stop nazi'ing these, you're in luck. I miss them already.
03:20:107 (3) - A curve would look far nicer here.

[Hard]
01:27:249 (1,2,3,4) - It could be cool to remove these and just drag the break to where (4) is. I guess. No thanks.
02:52:678 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - Hey, now, now. Whatever pattern you decide to do here it should be consistent with the other one.
03:51:821 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - Ohohohohoho! And it's different again! Made it a vertical pattern of above.
04:02:392 (3,4) - Oh dear, sir, this blanket is not very visually appealing.
04:04:678 (3,4) - I am unsure why there are suddenly linear sliders here because curves would look quite nice in this situation.

[Insane]
02:03:535 (7,8,9,10) - Here you're spacing 1/2s and 1/1s in the same way and it upsets me. Err. I'll leave that for now. See if others complain.
03:35:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This is a disaster and an incredible mess. I would really appreciate it if you could space these notes normally.Thank Jarby No he's a nice guy. Okay.
03:54:392 - It would be nice if you could map this break in a cool way. Max score 18m. I'm almost 15m
Take this star, sir, and eat it.

eldnl wrote:

[General]

- The quality of the mp3 is very low, you should change it, I listen this song in better quality. Doesn't sound low quality to me :L
- Put the audio lead-in on 1000. Not sure. I'll stick with 2 for now.
[Easy]

AR -1 This is just an easy difficulty, you must change it. No it's fine. Low AR is really confusing. Play an insane with low AR. :L Timeline isn't that dense.
HP Drain Rate -1 No it seems fine. I'll consider it still though.
00:01:249 (1) Add finish at the start.
00:21:821 (3,4,5) Inconsistent spacing, use the same between (3,4) then between (4,5)
00:24:107 (1) This note is very close to the previous note, I know that you use the distance snap but with the hit-burst this may be confusing. Seems far enough to me
00:42:392 (1) The whistle sounds weird, empty, as if you were to continue with more whistles. I suggest to remove it. Added whistle to 3,4
00:49:249 (3) Add finish at the end, and add finish in the following (5).
00:56:107 (2) Never stack notes under the slider in the easier difficulty, that's very confusing for beginners, I suggest to change it for a slider with repeat.
01:11:535 - Add a note here, sounds empty. Whoops. It was part of me trying to change that part. I must have uploaded it without realizing I didn't finish.
01:12:107 (3) You're following an imaginary rhythm, that's okay for the hard or insane difficulty, but this can be confusing for beginners. Changed
01:14:392 (5) If you add the note put a new combo here. Forgot about this.
01:16:107 - And add a note here. Whoops. It was part of me trying to change that part. I must have uploaded it without realizing I didn't finish.
01:16:678 (7) Don't follow anything ... that's better if you extend the slider 1/2
02:04:678 (1,2,3,4,5) Considering the previous spacing, these notes are too far. (The followings sliders too) Wowwwww. I keep moving notes around unintentionally..... Thanks for finding this.
02:19:535 - Considering that this is the kiai time, this is very, very boring, add more circles and sliders.
03:45:249 (1) Add a repeat? considering the previous sliders like this, the slider need a repeat. No. Don't want a big kick slider one asy.
03:47:535 (1) ^ Same, but there is easy to read, because you use a different pattern. It's okay
03:54:392 - Add a note with new combo? Nah
03:55:535 (2) I'm not really sure about this speeddown, considering the slider ticks the player can miss the combo here, I suggest to change the speeddown to 0,75x
03:58:964 - The clap pattern here is wrong, please follow this pattern: http://i36.tinypic.com/2i7lf9.jpg Yea, I know about claps on tick 2 and 4, but this sounds okay though.
04:24:107 (1,2,3,4) You should unstack these notes. It's confusing for new players. At the end, I just want it little harder. Sort of training map? :L

[Normal]

AR -2 Are you crazy? this AP looks like a hard to me. -1 only.
00:01:249 (1,2,3) Very nice pattern, but (3) is very close to (2). You must change it. (In the following patterns too)
00:20:678 (2,3,4,5) There are a little spacing errors, this is not very important but looks bad when you're playing. http://puu.sh/4icM Lol I knew there was something wrong. Never could tell what :L
00:51:535 (1) This slider isn't snapped.
01:00:678 (1) This note is very close to the previous note, you should change it, considering the actual AP6 this is not confusing, but sooner or later some MAT/BAT will change you. Moved 5.
01:42:678 (2,3,4,5) Little spacing errors again, moving the notes one grid left should be right.
01:47:249 (2,3,4,5) ^ Exactly the same.
01:52:107 (1,2) Spacing.
02:00:107 (1) This is under the previous note, I suggest to change it, maybe you can change the pattern using horizontal flip?
02:11:535 (1) Never put a jump in a normal or easy difficulty, maybe that's just an error, I suggest to use reverse selection. Fuuuu- Thanks for noticing
02:20:107 (1) Spacing, I know this is for symmetry, but this is wrong, If you want to do a symmetric map you need follow the distance snap first, I have a suggestion: lol I try but I can't think anything with the same pattern. Alrighty.
02:29:821 (1,2,3) Little spacing error, maybe you can do a horizontal flip of the previous pattern.
02:33:249 (1,2,3,4,5) yee I really love the star patterns <3
02:40:678 (1,2) Move (2) one grid left, considering the following notes.
03:21:821 (3,1) Spacing.
03:24:107 (4,5,6) Inconsistent spacing.
03:33:821 (2,3) Spacing.
03:35:535 (1,2) ^ Same
03:42:107 (4) Add a clap here, the previous clap sounds empty.
03:48:964 (4) Change this finish for a clap, sounds weird and don't follow the rhythm.
03:54:392 - Change this speeddown to 0,75 for the change is not as sharp. Sliders are so short, it would be hard to combo break. And it's not even a high SV.

[Hard]

00:13:249 (3) That slider feels like just have one repeat (for the previous pattern) If you change the position of the slider this will be more readable. Uh..what? :L
00:18:678 (6) Reduce this slider 1/2 and add a note here. I think sounds better and follow the voice like you. No thanks.
00:19:535 (3,1) Spacing, these notes are too close.
00:51:535 - You can follow this pattern for the kiai time? sounds empty for me. http://i36.tinypic.com/2i7lf9.jpg I'll consider it, but for now no thanks.
01:40:678 (1,2,3,4) A little spacing error between (2,3) to change it you need to use Grid level 4.
01:49:535 (1,2,3,4) Maybe this pattern can be confusing for (3,4) remove the repeat on (3) and add in (4). Looks easily identified.
02:52:678 (1) Very short spin, extend it to 02:53:821 and remove the note here.
03:31:249 (1,2) Add whistle at the end (both sliders) If (3) use soft-hitsounds add a whistle too.
03:34:964 (6,1) Spacing, I don't know how you make these spacing errors, you use the distance spacing ever right? Yes I use it. I'm only human ;_; sometimes I move notes I forget the other notes
03:52:107 (1) Very short spin again, extend it to 03:53:249 and remove the note.
03:54:392 - Remove the break, isn't necessary because there are a blank space of 3 seconds, and is better I think, keeps the suspense. Nah HP drain kinda high.
04:26:392 - Move the inherited section to the white tick.

[Insane]

00:07:535 (5,6,7) Please use the same distance between these three notes. Nah it's a little jump.
00:12:678 (1,2) Stack the slider perfectly. It already was ;_;
00:41:821 (1,2,3) Reduce the distance between (2,3). Is inconsistent. Changed slightly.
00:51:535 - Use the clap pattern for the kiai time: http://i36.tinypic.com/2i7lf9.jpg I'll consider it
01:06:678 (7) New combo, also, the star look really bad. Please fix it. Not sure what to fix on star :/ but I placed NC somewhere else.
02:04:107 (10) Considering the previous spacing this note is too close. Intentional
03:21:821 - I can't feel a pattern like this in this song ... it's a pattern for nightcore or techno songs ...Okay thanks for hint.
In this difficulty are so many spacing errors, really, I skip to mod the rest because this is so far from ranked. You need a remap and use a consistent pattern of hitsounds.Hitsound yes. Spacing error is like 1-2 grid off really >_> Sometimes I even snap it correctly and it claims it is wrong, which is why I don't listen to AiMod for spacing errors.

You have more kodosu than me, I think you can improve the beatmap so much, strive only
Starr.