Vivant - Complextro FadeX

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Micha-desu
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Sparkxei
01:08:671 (8) - - Place this on the next beat and put it away a bit farther :^)
Possseidon
You asked, so here my mod for you~

This is standard for a mod, but since you're still kinda new I will tell you anyways...
Everything I tell you is just my opinion, so you don't have to change them

AI mod is complaining a bit btw... most is just unnecesary or stuff you didn't do yet but your audio file has to be at most 192 kb/s... it's too high ^^

Oh and one thing... SYMMETRY! I know there's an awesome song called asymmetry (lol) but if you want it to be symmetric then use the features given by the editor... there are hotkeys for rotating, flipping and all that good stuff! learn using it and your maps will start feeling more smooth and play better!

So here comes the mod, and coz you are inexperienced I will tell you exactly what you should do with this and every other mod:
1) You click on "Quote" in the bottom right of this message and you will be able to post a reply containing this whole mod
2) Now that you've got that you go through every single point and do sth about it (or let it as it is)
3) Everytime you changed one point you either write in green what you changed (or just "fix" or sth similar if you just did straight what the mod said) or you write in red if you didn't change it why you didn't change it (can be sth like you like it more) or blue if you changed sth but not exactly what the mod told you
Those colors are just standards most modders use, you can try your own "style"
4) When your done it's always nice to write a little thanks or sth under it to end it off and if it was helpful of course give the kudosu

00:30:820 (3) - end of that slider doesn't really lie on a beat, make the slider double the size... I know it ruins the pattern but you've gotta make sacrafices :P
00:33:867 (3) - start nc (host for new combo color) here
00:34:335 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - the nc is on the offbeat for all of them shich also results in that single 1 at the end
00:37:617 (1,2,3,4,5) - those sliders also start on the offbeat... make that single circle ar the end or sth to start the sliders on a downbeat
00:41:367 (2) - nc here~ can be really confusing if you don't nc on the downbeat
00:45:117 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - first one looks fine but second one is weirdly stacked... copy it and flip it over!
00:46:992 (3) - would add another nc here since the main beat is here
00:48:398 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - hmmm how to explain... it would sound good if the 3 combos would start on a main beat but they don't. I would make the current 2nd and 3rd combo symmetrical in some way and give the 1st one a different pattern that doesn't relate to the other. You could also replace the 1st combo with a copy of the slider in front of it mirrored either horizontally or or horizontally and vertically
00:49:804 (1,2,3,4) - again... it's not on the main beat... the main beat would start at the current 3... do sth about it T_T
00:53:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You might think I've got problemy ith that one but even though I probably wouldn't map it like that I actually like it xD
00:54:726 (1,2,3,4) - ...apart from the fact, that this is offbeat thanks to that again... ahhh :D
00:56:601 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ...aaaand this too rofl... wow, now that I've listened so often to it, it does fit some sort of off beat... do what you want with this and the last part
01:00:351 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Would add a note inbetween to get a full stream, that one note missing feels anoying
01:03:398 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - That stream oh boy... the stream should start at the current 7 (there's basically in jump in the stream which shouldn't be there and is VERY confusing, you should REALLY change that) and there is no sound on the current 5 (the 5 will change if you change the other thing, keep that in mind)
01:24:257 (7,8) - transition from the 7 to the 8 feels oddly shaped
01:25:663 (1,2) - Thanks for using symmetry but... the 2 has to start a tick earlier and the 1 end 1 earlier... try that without messing up the symmetry too much ^^
01:28:945 (1,2,3) - really only if you want, it's not that bad, make the circle first and then the two sliders instead, so the sliders aren't on the offbeat
01:31:992 (1,2,3,4) - 12 and 34 doesn't really fit together... try more with symmetry/rotation without moving them with the mouse
01:53:320 (3) - would give hat more bend so that it flows along the left side of the 2. Still only use one slider points though, enough ^^
01:54:960 (5,3) - make those two sliders be the same by copying one (and rotating etc. the other one)
02:02:460 (3) - This is the same slider too
02:04:570 (2,3) - Again, slider 2 end one tick earlier and slider 3 start one earlier, even if you think it sounds/feels better... do it. you can even disable
02:34:335 (1) - Start the spinner one whole meassure earlier (on the long white line)
02:49:101 (7) - Theoretically there are some beats in there that the slider "ignores"
02:52:617 (3) - Not really a fan of long multiple reverse sliders, but that's just my opinion ^^
02:58:242 (1) - Distance is a bit short
02:59:179 (4,5) - Pattern is a bit confusing, but don't know...

Wow I'm through yay, one more thing I would like to mention, which I didn't do yet... You have some parts in your map where you basically want a slider end and the start on the next oe should be on the same tick... Of course you're not allowed (and shouldn't) do it. What you should do instead is, how you mostly did make the first slider end a little bit (normally 1/4 meassure = 1 tick) earlier. This can sound a bit weird, I know, that's why most mappers add a green point at those two places disabling the audio (well setting it to 5%, since disabling isn't allowed) and set it back up at the start of the start of the second one.

Hope I could help and when you need more I'm always there for you for any open question :D

PS:
I was too lazy to read over it again... If you find any typos you can keep them... :P
(mathematicians and programmers are lazy and I like maths and programming roflcopter)
Topic Starter
Micha-desu

Possseidon wrote:

You asked, so here my mod for you~

00:30:820 (3) - end of that slider doesn't really lie on a beat, make the slider double the size... I know it ruins the pattern but you've gotta make sacrafices :PFix
00:33:867 (3) - start nc (host for new combo color) here Fix
00:34:335 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - the nc is on the offbeat for all of them shich also results in that single 1 at the end Fix
00:37:617 (1,2,3,4,5) - those sliders also start on the offbeat... make that single circle ar the end or sth to start the sliders on a downbeat Fix
00:41:367 (2) - nc here~ can be really confusing if you don't nc on the downbeat Fix
00:45:117 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - first one looks fine but second one is weirdly stacked... copy it and flip it over! Fix
00:46:992 (3) - would add another nc here since the main beat is here Fix
00:48:398 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - hmmm how to explain... it would sound good if the 3 combos would start on a main beat but they don't. I would make the current 2nd and 3rd combo symmetrical in some way and give the 1st one a different pattern that doesn't relate to the other. You could also replace the 1st combo with a copy of the slider in front of it mirrored either horizontally or or horizontally and vertically Fix
00:49:804 (1,2,3,4) - again... it's not on the main beat... the main beat would start at the current 3... do sth about it T_T Fix
00:53:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You might think I've got problemy ith that one but even though I probably wouldn't map it like that I actually like it xD i like this pattern
00:54:726 (1,2,3,4) - ...apart from the fact, that this is offbeat thanks to that again... ahhh :DFix
00:56:601 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ...aaaand this too rofl... wow, now that I've listened so often to it, it does fit some sort of off beat... do what you want with this and the last part Fix
01:00:351 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Would add a note inbetween to get a full stream, that one note missing feels anoying Fix
01:03:398 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - That stream oh boy... the stream should start at the current 7 (there's basically in jump in the stream which shouldn't be there and is VERY confusing, you should REALLY change that) and there is no sound on the current 5 (the 5 will change if you change the other thing, keep that in mind) Fix, how i made this mistake xD
01:24:257 (7,8) - transition from the 7 to the 8 feels oddly shaped Fix
01:25:663 (1,2) - Thanks for using symmetry but... the 2 has to start a tick earlier and the 1 end 1 earlier... try that without messing up the symmetry too much ^^ Fix
01:28:945 (1,2,3) - really only if you want, it's not that bad, make the circle first and then the two sliders instead, so the sliders aren't on the offbeat Fix, thanks i was wondering why that part was so weird xD
01:31:992 (1,2,3,4) - 12 and 34 doesn't really fit together... try more with symmetry/rotation without moving them with the mouse Fix
01:53:320 (3) - would give hat more bend so that it flows along the left side of the 2. Still only use one slider points though, enough ^^ Fix
01:54:960 (5,3) - make those two sliders be the same by copying one (and rotating etc. the other one) Fix
02:02:460 (3) - This is the same slider too Fix
02:04:570 (2,3) - Again, slider 2 end one tick earlier and slider 3 start one earlier, even if you think it sounds/feels better... do it. you can even disable Fix
02:34:335 (1) - Start the spinner one whole meassure earlier (on the long white line) Fix
02:49:101 (7) - Theoretically there are some beats in there that the slider "ignores" Fix
02:52:617 (3) - Not really a fan of long multiple reverse sliders, but that's just my opinion ^^ Fix
02:58:242 (1) - Distance is a bit short Fix
02:59:179 (4,5) - Pattern is a bit confusing, but don't know...i like this pattern
Thank you for your mod <3 it really helped me out, I made so stupid mistakes... of course you got a kudosu for your work. Now im prepared :D

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