Done~~Xgor wrote:
Hej Hej Igen.
[General]
Preview point is awfulI suggest you use 00:45:235 as the preview point.
[Zakuro]
Maybe raise the OD a bit? It's quite low considering that it has AD 8 and is the hardest difficulty OD increased and removed the first spinner
Pretty nice, just some rhythms that I felt was a bit weird
00:17:335 (4) - Rhythm feels a bit weird here. I suggest you remove a repeat, move this forward 1/2 on the timeline and add circles at 00:17:335 and 00:18:235 done
00:18:385 (1,2,3) - I suggest you remove these circles and make a 1/1 long slider here instead. alright
And more suggestion prettiness stuff
00:32:335 (5,7) - Can you please use copy-paste so (5) and (7) looks exatly like each other expect for that (7) has a repeat arrow. copy no problem, just a bit strange when I Reversed it, but it's fixed now
00:47:335 (6) - I think it looks prettier like this but that might be just me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48239 :3
00:52:135 (6) - Pretty much the same thing as above.mhm
Nice map, I probably bubble this later as pretty much all this is things that would make this map much better an prettier and I would say that they are rankible (I still want you to do them though)
Well here's a star for now
*star*
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Xgor wrote:
Hej Hej Igen.
[General]
Preview point is awful
[Easy]
Why not map the part where you placed a break too, doesn't make much sense
00:16:435 (1,2) - (Suggestion) To make this more readable for newcomers I suggest you make the slider start into a circle and a slider from where the old slider ended before to where the circle is
00:26:035 (1,2) - ^Same thing as above^
Also I suggest you make the ending slider a bit shorter more like the other difficulties.I don't get this
Pretty nice easy and the 1/2 worked for a easy and that's not you see usually in a fast BPM song like this.
[Normal]
Raise the stacking letency
Kinda nazied on the spacing here but it felt like the spacing was aligned unintentionally here and some part that could have better symmetry
These is far from important but will make your map look a lot prettier (Unless you want them that way of course)
00:15:235 (2) - Move one grid down.
00:20:485 (2) - Move two grids up.
00:21:835 (2,3) - Move one grid to the right
00:23:335 (4,5) - Move one grid to the left (Two if you don't do the thing above)
00:42:835 (7,8,9) - Move two grids up and two grids to the left.
00:51:085 (4) - Move the last slider point two grids up.
00:51:835 (5,6,1,2) - Move up two grids.
00:53:185 (3) - Move up one grid (Or one down if you didn't the one above)
00:39:085 (4) - This looks much much better if you do something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48226 (Might wanna change the spacing after it so that doesn't get screwed.
[Hard]
00:01:435 (1) - (Suggestion) Remove two repeats and add a 1/2 long slider at 00:02:035
00:02:335 (1) - Remove new combo if you did my suggestion above.
00:12:835 (3) - Why isn't this distance snapped? (2) is so why shouldn't this then.
Also more prettiness modding 00:15:535 (4) - Move down two grids
00:33:235 (3) - (Suggestion) Move the two last slider points down a grid.
00:43:735 (3) - (Suggestion) Move this so it's looks like an triangle like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48232
[Zakuro]
Maybe raise the OD a bit? It's quite low considering that it has AD 8 and is the hardest difficulty
Pretty nice, just some rhythms that I felt was a bit weird
00:17:335 (4) - Rhythm feels a bit weird here. I suggest you remove a repeat, move this forward 1/2 on the timeline and add circles at 00:17:335 and 00:18:235
00:18:385 (1,2,3) - I suggest you remove these circles and make a 1/1 long slider here instead.
And more suggestion prettiness stuff
00:32:335 (5,7) - Can you please use copy-paste so (5) and (7) looks exatly like each other expect for that (7) has a repeat arrow.
00:47:335 (6) - I think it looks prettier like this but that might be just me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48239
00:52:135 (6) - Pretty much the same thing as above.
Nice map, I probably bubble this later as pretty much all this is things that would make this map much better an prettier and I would say that they are rankible (I still want you to do them though)
Well here's a star for now
*star*
General
- The playtime is 1:00, kinda short. Make sure this play time is ok for ranking.
- 00:52:435 (4) - This slider is placed like under the last slider, use a vertical flip to fix this.Also you can improve that slider like it's showed in the pic.
- 00:12:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - In compare with the whole diff, This combo is too long, use new combo on (5).
- 00:12:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - This whole pattern is not following the rhythm correctly, fix the following things.
- 00:13:435 (2) - This must start here: 00:13:585 and end here 00:14:035.then:
- 00:14:635 (3) - start this one here: 00:14:335 - and finish it here: 00:15:235.
- 00:15:535 (4) - The rhythm for this slider should end here: 00:15:985.
- AR -1 (High BPM)
- 00:26:635 (1) - Move this closer to the center. (Due to the last spinner)
- 00:33:835 - This break is unnecessary, continue mapping here like you did with the other diffs.
- I find this difficulty very hard for a Normal it's probably because the BPM is high so 1.30 slider-speed is kinda fast for Normal.
- 00:23:335 (7,8) - (8) breaks all the flow, place it on the opposite side. (horizontal flip)
- 00:59:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't look good also it's not easy to read it, try this (Basically stack some notes)
- 00:11:785 - This break is not necessary at all, the song is just 1 min long, Continue mapping please!
- I find this difficult quite nice (nice flow, correct spacing, etc).
- 00:19:885 (1,2,3) - Oh While playing I noticed this ugly overlap (1 and 3), Please fix it.
This is fine and 1 minute+ has always been fine, just sayin'Gonzvlo wrote:
General
- The playtime is 1:00, kinda short. Make sure this play time is ok for ranking.
Gonzvlo wrote:
ZakuroGood Luck =D =D
- 00:11:785 - This break is not necessary at all, the song is just 1 min long, Continue mapping please! hmm ok then
- I find this difficult quite nice (nice flow, correct spacing, etc). :3
- 00:19:885 (1,2,3) - Oh While playing I noticed this ugly overlap (1 and 3), Please fix it. Likely fixed
Thanks for pointing that out :3Xgor wrote:
This is fine and 1 minute+ has always been fine, just sayin'Gonzvlo wrote:
General
- The playtime is 1:00, kinda short. Make sure this play time is ok for ranking.
Tada~
Xgor wrote:
This is fine and 1 minute+ has always been fine, just sayin'Gonzvlo wrote:
General
- The playtime is 1:00, kinda short. Make sure this play time is ok for ranking.
Just making sure~ , Thanks for clarifying :3
Just some little more stuff i discovered of came up after I modded the map.
[Easy]
00:59:635 (1) - Make 1/4 shorter.
[Normal]
(Very minor suggestion) lower HP drain or OD so the map shows as 4 stars.
00:21:835 (2,3) - I suggest you just remove all the repeats on (2), move (3) 1/2 back on the timeline make it 1/2 longer and remove the repeat and add a circle at 00:23:035.
00:23:635 (6,1) - (Minor suggestion) Remove (6) and move the spinner 1/2 back on the timeline and make it 1/2 longer.
[Zakuro]
Maybe lower the HP drain one tick.
00:01:435 - I just realized that a slider could work pretty well instead of the spinner you had before.
Otherwise please add a circle at 00:02:035.
00:15:835 (3,4) - It sounds much better if you remove these add a circle at 00:15:835 and a 1/1 long slider at 00:15:985.
00:41:035 (3,4,5) - I think this would sound much better if you moved (3) 1/2 forward on the timeline and removed all repeats and move (4) to 00:41:485 and make it a 3/2 long slider, no big deal but makes far more sense to the song.
The Easy thing is the only thing I would say that you must fix but I suggest you at least check the rest and see if you think they make more sense.
Fix and I will bubble
[Easy]
00:59:635 (1) - Make 1/4 shorter.
[Normal]
(Very minor suggestion) lower HP drain or OD so the map shows as 4 stars.
00:21:835 (2,3) - I suggest you just remove all the repeats on (2), move (3) 1/2 back on the timeline make it 1/2 longer and remove the repeat and add a circle at 00:23:035.
00:23:635 (6,1) - (Minor suggestion) Remove (6) and move the spinner 1/2 back on the timeline and make it 1/2 longer.
[Zakuro]
Maybe lower the HP drain one tick.
00:01:435 - I just realized that a slider could work pretty well instead of the spinner you had before.
Otherwise please add a circle at 00:02:035.
00:15:835 (3,4) - It sounds much better if you remove these add a circle at 00:15:835 and a 1/1 long slider at 00:15:985.
00:41:035 (3,4,5) - I think this would sound much better if you moved (3) 1/2 forward on the timeline and removed all repeats and move (4) to 00:41:485 and make it a 3/2 long slider, no big deal but makes far more sense to the song.
The Easy thing is the only thing I would say that you must fix but I suggest you at least check the rest and see if you think they make more sense.
Fix and I will bubble
Xgor wrote:
[Zakuro]
Maybe lower the HP drain one tick. okay :3
00:01:435 - I just realized that a slider could work pretty well instead of the spinner you had before. Slider added~
Otherwise please add a circle at 00:02:035.
00:15:835 (3,4) - It sounds much better if you remove these add a circle at 00:15:835 and a 1/1 long slider at 00:15:985. done
00:41:035 (3,4,5) - I think this would sound much better if you moved (3) 1/2 forward on the timeline and removed all repeats and move (4) to 00:41:485 and make it a 3/2 long slider, no big deal but makes far more sense to the song. hope it went well
Done
**** still some stuff I missed.
[Easy]
00:17:035 (2,3) - Keep the spacing the same as the rest of the combo please
[Normal]
00:17:035 (2,3) - Keep the spacing the same as the rest of the combo please
00:18:235 (4,5,6) - ^
[Hard]
00:04:735 (1,2,3,4) - Please use the same spacing inside the combo here.
No kd for this please, I should had posted this in my last post.
[Easy]
00:17:035 (2,3) - Keep the spacing the same as the rest of the combo please
[Normal]
00:17:035 (2,3) - Keep the spacing the same as the rest of the combo please
00:18:235 (4,5,6) - ^
[Hard]
00:04:735 (1,2,3,4) - Please use the same spacing inside the combo here.
No kd for this please, I should had posted this in my last post.
Ok, done I guess :3
Ta-da.
Hard:
00:40:435 (5) - Add a new combo here?
Yeah, yeah, I know what you think. I'll rank your map right after you fixed that.
Also, this was quite a good first mapset! The only stuff I didn't like was that there were so many spinners on all difficulties. They felt a bit overused. Also, Hard had a few ugly sliders =P
00:40:435 (5) - Add a new combo here?
Yeah, yeah, I know what you think. I'll rank your map right after you fixed that.
Also, this was quite a good first mapset! The only stuff I didn't like was that there were so many spinners on all difficulties. They felt a bit overused. Also, Hard had a few ugly sliders =P
Topic Starter
NC on Hard done, I can't really tell what's ugly but I changed some.
Fewer spinners on Normal & Hard now.
Fewer spinners on Normal & Hard now.
Uh, I only expected you to change the new combo. Oh well. It's nice to see someone listen for once! =P
Wow, this a great for a first map.
Easy:
Visual Appeance/ Nazi mod:
00:38:785 (2) - I think a continuous looking curve looks better (the 2 curves together look like one smooth curve (no small hump in the curve)
Normal:
Increase Approach Rate by 1 for cleanliness?
Visual Appeance/ Nazi mod:
00:19:885 (1,1) - It would look nicer if these 2 did not overlap each other.
00:27:085 (3,1) - ^
00:30:835 (1,3) - ^
00:33:235 (1) - the slider's edges are very sharp, which is not aesthetically pleasing, so I advise you make this slider look a little nicer
00:43:735 (9,2,4) - It would look nicer if these 2 did not overlap each other.
Hard:
Normal mod:
01:01:135 (1) - when listening to this section, the latest I would want the spinner to start is here 01:01:285 because the current position doesn't really follow anything imo, so I would recommend changing this note into a beat. Alternatively, I have seen people put the spinner directly after the end of the note that denotes the start of a spinner, so make the spinner start at 01:01:360 and end where it currently does.
Visual Appeance/ Nazi mod:
00:11:635 (1,2,3) - sliders with sharp angles don't look that great, but since you repeated this, it is okay... (change it if you want though)
00:22:285 (5,6) - It would look nicer if these 2 did not overlap each other. You can try something like 00:26:035 (1,4) - It would look nicer if these 2 did not overlap each other.
00:35:635 (1,2,3) - Rearrange this combo so the 4 is not completely covered. Not only does it look bad, but these notes make it slightly harder to read (4).
00:38:035 (1,2,3) - ^
00:40:435 (1,3) - Another overlap. You can also try having 3 end at the start of 1 if you like
01:01:135 (1) -if you can, move the note to a location that is not covered by 300s because it is not that easy to see imo.
Zakuro:
Align the kiai with the other diffs?
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As you can probably see, most of the mod is meant for clenliness and appearance, nothing worth popping over. I bolded the ones I would like to see changed if you don't want to change much, but the decision is completely up to you. If you do decide to change something, forum pm me, and I'll remod will a rebubble hopefully. Again, great map. Star.
Easy:
Visual Appeance/ Nazi mod:
00:38:785 (2) - I think a continuous looking curve looks better (the 2 curves together look like one smooth curve (no small hump in the curve)
Normal:
Increase Approach Rate by 1 for cleanliness?
Visual Appeance/ Nazi mod:
00:19:885 (1,1) - It would look nicer if these 2 did not overlap each other.
00:27:085 (3,1) - ^
00:30:835 (1,3) - ^
00:33:235 (1) - the slider's edges are very sharp, which is not aesthetically pleasing, so I advise you make this slider look a little nicer
00:43:735 (9,2,4) - It would look nicer if these 2 did not overlap each other.
Hard:
Normal mod:
01:01:135 (1) - when listening to this section, the latest I would want the spinner to start is here 01:01:285 because the current position doesn't really follow anything imo, so I would recommend changing this note into a beat. Alternatively, I have seen people put the spinner directly after the end of the note that denotes the start of a spinner, so make the spinner start at 01:01:360 and end where it currently does.
Visual Appeance/ Nazi mod:
00:11:635 (1,2,3) - sliders with sharp angles don't look that great, but since you repeated this, it is okay... (change it if you want though)
00:22:285 (5,6) - It would look nicer if these 2 did not overlap each other. You can try something like 00:26:035 (1,4) - It would look nicer if these 2 did not overlap each other.
00:35:635 (1,2,3) - Rearrange this combo so the 4 is not completely covered. Not only does it look bad, but these notes make it slightly harder to read (4).
00:38:035 (1,2,3) - ^
00:40:435 (1,3) - Another overlap. You can also try having 3 end at the start of 1 if you like
01:01:135 (1) -if you can, move the note to a location that is not covered by 300s because it is not that easy to see imo.
Zakuro:
Align the kiai with the other diffs?
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As you can probably see, most of the mod is meant for clenliness and appearance, nothing worth popping over. I bolded the ones I would like to see changed if you don't want to change much, but the decision is completely up to you. If you do decide to change something, forum pm me, and I'll remod will a rebubble hopefully. Again, great map. Star.
m'kay done~ :3blissfulyoshi wrote:
Zakuro:
Align the kiai with the other diffs?
The map looks great now. The only thing I noticed that slightly annoys me is that Hard: 00:35:635 (1,2,3,4) and 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) are exact replicas of each others now, so it feels slightly change. Just tell me if you want to change it or not and I'll rebubble.
(No need for kds if you decide to change it)
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(No need for kds if you decide to change it)
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Topic Starter
Oh I didn't notice that until I test-played it after I submitted itblissfulyoshi wrote:
The map looks great now. The only thing I noticed that slightly annoys me is that Hard: 00:35:635 (1,2,3,4) and 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) are exact replicas of each others now, so it feels slightly change. Just tell me if you want to change it or not and I'll rebubble.
(No need for kds if you decide to change it)
Well it's fixed now anyway~
Hi.
It ranked.
It ranked.
Grattis
Yes! finally!