joejoe321321 wrote:

Good map.
I have some suggestions, which can be ignored if you think they're not appropriate.

[Easy]
03:13:70 (2) : It is behind (1) and may not be seen clearly by newbies.

[Love]
03:03:11 (8,9): move them to 03:03:27 and set (9) to 3-beat long, add a new circle (10) at 03:04:25
03:03:92 (1,2,3) delete them and set a new starting circle at 03:04:58

03:10:44 (1) set it to 5-beat long
03:13:05 (2) set it to 5-beat long

That's all. Again, good job.

Tonoko wrote:

hi

這幾天考試很多 非常忙 抱歉來晚了

首先

[easy]
這個easy可能被挑太難 說不准 相對節奏還是比較多變的. 建議ar再弄低2格 更像個easy或許不會被挑 還有一些小jump在裏面 這個我就不說了 希望不被挑就好. 一些slider形狀好好調一下 如00:43:069 (7) - 01:14:370 (2) - 02:18:602 (2) -
00:44:373 (1) - 意義不明的new combo?
01:49:583 (1) - ^

至於[love]
基本都在規則以內完成 error倒沒有 但是感覺不太好.

我需要召喚迪西哥.

star

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
When it shows "1.5x spacing" it's look invisible, move it to center
Oh...resize your BG, it must be 800x600 or 1024x768 (but i advise you change it on another BG maybe touhou picture)

I find some..may be it is help you
i'll find accurate BG while i have time, thx for suggestion!

And else. Kiai must be it one time in each diff
add one in EASY

Easy
03:06:205 (1) - new combo why?
03:39:137 (1,2,3,4) - don't do jumps, it's easy fixed

Love
Try circle size = 2 i'll consider this
01:34:253 (1,1,1) - don't do this fixed
01:38:491 (7) - and this (do it how spacing tell you) fixed
01:47:947 (1,1,1) - i think you anderstand fixed
02:39:463 - strange break time..it's stopped the game process this break time is symmetrical to first break time
02:59:352 - add circle
there is a note here originally, i remove it when i receive some feedbacks from test players, anyway, fixed atm, ill still consider removing it in the future. basically i dont want here to be too difficult, and this note is the best to remove (which dont influence the gameplay).

Map looks random, look on sliders, on their evenness, same with circles
It must be beauty and playable

Good luck, star~

yongtw123 wrote:

哈囉
我把字體弄大一點好讀

整體
Offset 偏掉了,但是這首歌本身很慢,所以很難測.
BPM修正成92.000, offset 5227
記得勾選snap to new timing
已修正
fixed

整體節奏有待接強
Easy先不說 Love就實在不怎麼好
很多地方不用放1/16的卻放了
記得一點: 不要為了增加難度而放很多1/16連打
要跟背景鼓聲就好好跟
要跟歌詞也好好跟
兩個都跟那就跟著耳朵走
我真的會建議你重新map一次試試

音效部分除非有特別強調
不然soft-whistle要有規則的放
例如00:29:357 (2,4) - 這就放對了
簡單說是放在每小節的第2.4白線
把不規則的地方整理一下吧

最近比較忙，有時間時我會慎重考慮你的提議，基本上Love這個難度沒有特別跟著樂器或歌詞而是照著自己聽這首歌的感覺下去擺note，我已經請很多認識的人試玩過(包含排名高也有排名低的)，大多數的意見表示還能接受，但如果這樣照感覺擺會影響這個圖是否被rank，我會想辦法去改正的。
I'm a bit busy these days and will considered your suggestion once I have time. Basically, I dont sync with instrument and/or lyrics in LOVE but place notes with my feeling to this song instead, I have found many players (including high ranker and newbies) to test play this and most of them think this diff is acceptable, but if my notes placement will make this map not being ranked, ill try to fix it.

[Easy]
1. 盡量不要改變slider velocity
2. 節奏偏難

00:41:748 (5) - new combo fixed
01:00:661 (2) - 這鼓聲也太明顯了 選其一1)用soft-whistle就好 2)把鼓聲弄小聲些 fixed
01:39:140 (6) - !!?? 簡單難度不要這樣大幅度的改變slider velocity, 而且這裡何必用x0.5BPM呢?
x1 BPM slider太長我不知道怎麼擺，無論如何，這邊先改回x1了
x1 BPM makes slider too long for me, anyway i'd fixed it atm
02:27:727 (7) - 我覺得repeat一次就好了 fixed
03:00:009 (1) - 何必x0.5BPM咧 as above
03:13:705 (2) - 聽起來怪怪的 不知道是跟著什麼 change to 4 notes
03:30:498 (6) - 簡單難度盡量不用藍線 若不得已請用slider帶過去 fixed
03:33:107 (2) - 同上 fixed
03:35:716 (6) - 同上 fixed

[Love]
為什麼比較難的難度反而slider velocity才x1.2???
East都x1.8了耶?
這兩個設定都是為了圖擺起來比較舒服點
slider velocity setup is for notes position arrangement purpose
01:38:488 (7) - 不要把slider藏起來 fixed

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把節奏好好重新規劃一下吧
倒是有一點不錯
你排列的技巧不算差

加油吧!
屆時我再回來看看

• I don't really like that Background... it feels so "empty"...
  Can You check with AImod if all your beats are snapped correctly? (I can't atm because AImod is mean to me and it makes my PC crash)
  Why is Hakurei Reimu a comboburst? Is this related to touhou? O.o Yes it is (lol)
  SB/orb.png and lyrics/_lyrics.txt seem to be unused. If that's the case, remove them (yeah i know they're small. Do that if you change BG too, you won't have to upload twice).

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  You should add a KIAI from 03:00:009 to 03:15:661.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:14:357 (2) - move a bit closer to (1) and (3)?
  01:47:618 (2) - it's more intuitive if moved a bit more farther (You'll probably need to move other things too)
  03:24:792 (4) - ^
  02:02:756 - uhm, kinda long break. How about a spinner from 02:13:053 to 02:15:661?
  03:33:107 (3) - Really really unsettling. You had a regular flow for 3 minutes, making something like this is, like, totally unexpected while playing. Make it like 03:35:227 (6,7)

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Using Grid Size 2 penalized you for some patterns.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:03:270 (2) - stack correctly? (Just place it on the same spot again and it will allign with the slider). Or move it like 01:04:574 (7,1)
  01:41:748 - awkward KIAI. Start it at 01:31:313 like Easy?
  02:02:756 - as i said in Easy, kinda long break. How about a spinner from 02:13:053 to 02:15:661?
  03:43:053 (3) - new combo

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Hi, sorry for being late ^^"

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• I don't really like that Background... it feels so "empty"...
  in this touhou anime, i think they draw character too rough, and since i want to choose a BG that is relative to this anime but not a rough one, it's a hard choice, anyway since many had mentioned BG problem, ill fix it ASAP
  Can You check with AImod if all your beats are snapped correctly? (I can't atm because AImod is mean to me and it makes my PC crash)
  yes they are all snapped correctly
  Why is Hakurei Reimu a comboburst? Is this related to touhou? O.o Yes it is (lol)
  SB/orb.png and lyrics/_lyrics.txt seem to be unused. If that's the case, remove them (yeah i know they're small. Do that if you change BG too, you won't have to upload twice).

ill full submit again with BG fix in the future

- Easy:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  You should add a KIAI from 03:00:009 to 03:15:661.
  looks nice, added.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:14:357 (2) - move a bit closer to (1) and (3)?
  yes
  01:47:618 (2) - it's more intuitive if moved a bit more farther (You'll probably need to move other things too)
  yes
  03:24:792 (4) - ^
  yes
  02:02:756 - uhm, kinda long break. How about a spinner from 02:13:053 to 02:15:661?
  ok
  03:33:107 (3) - Really really unsettling. You had a regular flow for 3 minutes, making something like this is, like, totally unexpected while playing. Make it like 03:35:227 (6,7)

ok

- Love:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Using Grid Size 2 penalized you for some patterns.
  most of the notes is not snapped to the grid in this diff
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:03:270 (2) - stack correctly? (Just place it on the same spot again and it will allign with the slider). Or move it like 01:04:574 (7,1)
  change both of them to stacking
  01:41:748 - awkward KIAI. Start it at 01:31:313 like Easy?
  ok
  02:02:756 - as i said in Easy, kinda long break. How about a spinner from 02:13:053 to 02:15:661?
  ok
  03:43:053 (3) - new combo

ok

Conider this starred after fixing ^^

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Sorry I didn't get here sooner

[General]

- Have Kiai the same for all diffs

[Easy]

00:31:313 (1) - Remove new combo to match 00:41:748
(OR MAYBE: 00:41:748 (5) - Add new combo to match 00:31:313) OK

01:45:661 (1,2) - This part seems awkward. You should change up the pattern and add a note on 01:46:966. OK
01:52:183 - End Kiai here? OK
02:28:705 (8) - New combo
02:29:357 (1) - Remove new combo NO
03:11:096 - End this slider at the same place, but move it so it's 1/4 before the (1). Like so http://puu.sh/Akr
Since this is EASY, ill do but fix it to 1/2
03:15:661 (1) - End Kiai here OK


[Love]

00:42:563 (2) - Remove finish, sounds weird. NO

RS~AT

^ Unscramble that

a0178042 wrote:

歌很不錯:3
我可以做個guest diff嗎~ 雖然我對長歌會有點不耐煩
如果可以的話...暫定Hard好了

Snowy Dream wrote:

[General]
slider的形狀試著弄得更好點。 會把一些直的改彎orz

[Normal]
03:09:140 (x) - 聲音和後面不搭調，這裡很響 fixed
01:44:357 (3) - 聲音效果和前面2個slider一樣 ok :3
01:45:661 (4) - ^ ok :3

[Love]
02:25:118 (4) - use two slider instead of it. 我發現的確排太滿, 所以第一個slider少repeat一次, 否則太多slider
03:15:661 (3) - delete whistle.add finish fixed, 順帶改了(5)和後面的綠線
03:35:226 (4) - 好吵的聲音。。重改了這區的音效
04:13:216 (2) - delete . fixed
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圖不錯~:3 音效上面有點怪怪的感覺。。
然後主要slider再美觀些就行了~
Star~☆

AngelHoney wrote:

Snowy Dream wrote:

其實我想說乃那些彎的slider上的點弄的更有規律些。。可能會好看點。

y u c a wrote:

加油ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ゛

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Heya,

General
00:47:618 - Map this break? D:
02:39:466 - Map this break! D:
this is a painful choice..because the map will have too few breaktime but i want some
anyway, i'll map those if more modders point out this

Love
01:41:748 (8) - too many whistles. remove them on the white and red ticks, so that there are only 2 whitsles left on the blue ticks. you're right, but i remove whistle on blue ticks instead
01:44:357 (3) - ^ yes
02:50:553 (4) - don't let the repeat arrow overlap the slider yes
02:53:161 (4) - ^ yes
03:36:531 (1) - this spinner doesn't fit D: it's a sign of laziness for me. it's intentional, but i'll consider your suggestion
03:56:096 (3) - 2 grids down yes

Normal
01:11:096 - where did the notes go? mapped
01:50:226 (1) - make this start and end at the same position as in love? you'd have to place some extra notes if you do so. ok :3
02:57:400 (5) - I guess bad spacing? yes
03:16:313 (1) - start at 03:15:987 - i think it's ok now..

That's all from me. Star'd >w<

ouranhshc wrote:

Overall
make kiai times the same on both diffs?
done, also rearrange combo colors and remap a bit in normal

Love
04:14:194 (2,3) - these look weird ingame. maybe place them under the slider end? oops, done

Normal
03:33:596 (5) - new combo? ok :3

good map

Kana Anaberal wrote:

路过star O.O

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

About the breaks, of course you don't HAVE to map them.
I just think the break at 01:56:096 - is more than enough for the entire map.

/me runs away

DarkRingSystem wrote:

!

a0178042 wrote:

Finish＼(′ ▽ ‘)／