Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty

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jukkaduei
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jukkaduei

jukkaduei wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 5 กุมภาพันธ์ 2559 at 19:24:17

Artist: Avril Lavigne
Title: Hello Kitty
BPM: 128
Filesize: 4804kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.44 stars, 192 notes)
  2. Hard (2.7 stars, 436 notes)
  3. Normal (1.74 stars, 263 notes)


Download: Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Artist : Avril Lavigne
Title : Hello Kitty

Easy : Done
Normal : Done
Hard : Done



Let's joy.
Topic Starter
jukkaduei

jukkaduei wrote:

jukkaduei wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 5 กุมภาพันธ์ 2559 at 19:24:17

Artist: Avril Lavigne
Title: Hello Kitty
BPM: 128
Filesize: 4804kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.44 stars, 192 notes)
  2. Hard (2.7 stars, 436 notes)
  3. Normal (1.74 stars, 263 notes)


Download: Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Artist : Avril Lavigne
Title : Hello Kitty

Easy : Done
Normal : Done
Hard : Done



Let's joy.
Halozy
Hi, this is my suggestion
00:15:266 (6,7,1) - Spaced http://prntscr.com/a00qkw
00:20:422 (2,3) - Spaced http://prntscr.com/a00rd9
00:44:094 (6,7,8) - Bad center http://prntscr.com/a00rrk
00:51:594 (6,7,8) - Bad center on (7)
01:02:844 (1,2,3) - Bad slider's
01:16:204 (4,5,6) - Not good spaced http://prntscr.com/a00seu
01:18:782 (3,4,5) - Need more space
01:30:969 (7,8) - Separate (8) http://prntscr.com/a00vx4
01:31:907 (10) - Bad slider http://prntscr.com/a00sze
01:47:844 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Insane notes and 01:48:782 (10,11) - spaced, insane jump
01:59:329 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Put new combo
02:15:969 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Put new combo
02:17:844 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Put new combo
02:19:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Put new combo
02:21:594 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Put new combo
02:23:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 16 combo it's much for hard diff
02:31:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - 24 combo? not
02:45:032 (11,12,13,14) - No need to space http://prntscr.com/a00wuj
02:49:719 (1) - Bad slider
02:51:360 (6,7) - Separate a bit http://prntscr.com/a00v9o
02:55:344 (7,8) - Separate a bit http://prntscr.com/a00uqw


Good luck
karmakills
Hi, from my NM queue.

This map needs some major improvements. But don't worry! I was here too.
I'm just going to do easy so you can apply this to the rest of your diffs.

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-Turn off grid snapping. It does absolutely nothing except mess up your distance spacing, and is only used to create patterns. Turn snapping off or to tiny setting. Most of your notes are snapped, but some aren't. The distance spacing issue was fixed when they weren't snapped.

-Your distance spacing is, no offense, severly flawed. You have 1/1 notes and 1/2 notes with the same distance spacing, and with a low AR, new players will think to hit them like 1/2 notes, since that was what your first pattern was. You need to separate 1/2 notes out less, NOT 1/1's out more.I'm not going to point out every time this happens.

Finally, your slider velocity is too fast for an easy. 1.4 is a normal, maybe hard SV. Change to 1.00 or so. Yeah, you will have to redo all sliders. I know, it sucks (unless there is some shortcut I don't know about).

Change:
HP to 2.5/3
OD to 3
AR to 3/3.5


00:49:719 (1,2) - Distance spacing way off.
00:52:532 (5,1) - Break between this.
00:55:344 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This doesn't go with the music. I would take out the circles in between each of the slider pairs, and resnap distances.
01:00:501 (3,4) - Overlap issues. Ties in with the distance spacing problem I mentioned at the beginning.
01:14:094 (1,2,3,4) - This is just an example of the spacing problem, a good one. See how the 1st note after the slider is 1/2, and the others are 1/1? Wouldn't you think that the notes are also 1/2 and hit them early?
01:19:251 (2,3,4) - Spacing is different than the other 3 note groups.
01:23:001 (2,3,4) - This is incredibly confusing, especially b/c of the shape, so I think they are all 1/2 notes, but they aren't. 1/1 and 1/2 mixing is especially not allowed in shapes.
01:25:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - MUCH better distance spacing. Use this as an example for the rest of your map.
01:45:969 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again, doesn't go with the music. Omit the circles in between the slider pairs.
Hathz
Hello, sorry I'm so late with my mod. I'm a bit "inactive" right now, but I promise I'll get to it tomorrow.
Hathz
Hi again,

As Swegmec pointed out, the map needs major improvements.

Spacing is all over the place. In Easy and Normal in particular, you must use consistent spacing. Use Distance Snap for that; choose a value and stick with it throughout the entire map. Spacing needs to make sense, it is essential for reading the map properly. On top of that the approach rate is really low so it's even more important to use proper spacing. My recommendation is also to turn off Grid Snap (or at least use the tiny grid setting). You are only limiting your options on where you can place objects. Combo colors are also too similar to eachother in my opinion. Hitsounding is very very basic and should definitely be improved.

In map options you should also disable "Widescreen Support" as you do not use a storyboard.

Difficulty spread is a bit meh as well, Normal should probably be harder than it is right now.

Here are some other suggestions:
  1. Why not also map the part from 00:00:969 to 00:08:469 ?
  2. Same for this break (02:00:969 to 02:15:969); the music is strong enough to be mapped and the break feels out of place.
  3. In some places you miss strong samples, for example in the Hard difficulty at 00:40:110 - this could easily be a circle to match the vocals.


Really needs more work, I wish you good luck with it.
Topic Starter
jukkaduei

jukkaduei wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 กุมภาพันธ์ 2559 at 10:13:52

Artist: Avril Lavigne
Title: Hello Kitty
BPM: 128
Filesize: 4786kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.58 stars, 434 notes)


Download: Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Artist : Avril Lavigne
Title : Hello Kitty

Easy : By
Normal : By
Hard : By [url=jukkaduei]https://osu.ppy.sh/u/6290674[/url]
Insane : By



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